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Post your current drawing here and give constructive critique to others! Don't take anything personal!
Please make sure your posted image is clear, downsized to around 1000 pixels wide, rotated to the correct orientation, and that any unused space is cropped.
If you want critique on a drawing from the previous thread, you can delete it there and repost in this one.

>dA /ic/ group :
http://4chan-ic.deviantart.com

>/ic/ Resources/Reference/Downloads/Links:

>General resources :
http://sites.google.com/site/4chanic/
http://sites.google.com/site/artandwhatnot/
http://characterdesigns.com/
http://crimsondaggers.com/forum/thread-3.html
http://finaltrinity.tumblr.com/post/13163064364/art-references-tumblr-accounts

>fellowBro's books :
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8

>Figure Drawing Tool:
http://pixelovely.com/gesture/figuredrawing.php
http://posemaniacs.com
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free comic book day next week anons, drawing at the local shop for fun
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I thought it would be cool to color stuff with palettes ripped from album covers and god i hate this one, the original is mostly super light and but i feel like if i make the pants any lighter Its gonna blend in too much with the shoes... what do i do artbros :[
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>>7150839
>palettes ripped from album covers
sounds fun, might try this later.
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>>7149767
Nice sketch bro, would pick up.
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>>7149767
i love you mango mikey. Get a publicist man, get into some magazines. I think you should be very popular.
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Trying to better understand using big/medium/small with more realistically proportionated characters through sketches. How does it work here? Anything I should adjust?
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>>7153879
I like it anon, has a really nice flow.
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>>7154591
Timbo ass pallete
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>>7154775
Shout out Timbo
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gouache item list on kraft paper
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>>7153110
Still wip.
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>>7155198
Love your style and blocky scott pilgrem like shapes. Post blog or more work please.
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>>7149637
Scruffy boy needs his morning coffee look at that frownnnn
>>7153110
Love the colors
>>7155198
AAAHHHHHHH BASED BASED BASED THIS HITS EVERY SPOT HONEST TO GODDD
socials???????
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>>7155215
>>7155482
thank you!!
https://x.com/guesswurk?s=09
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Project 3A keys to drawing,
This is my first time ever drawing a figure as I love to draw still objects as I feel like drawing humans isn't my thing, but I decided to get out of my comfort zone and this went well imo, I expected worse but I really enjoyed this.

I was wondering if you guys can give me a critique of what you can see I did wrong.
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>>7148959
it’s not an amazing drawing but i’m getting back into art and i’m proud of sitting down and doing something
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>>7155866
To be fair, the head pose in the ref is quite tricky. You're doing nothing wrong, on the contrary, you are DOING IT, wich is the only way to DO anything at all.
Start with a grid. Any kinda grid will be good as a start. You need a frame to get the shape and proportions right. That's all. Then you'll have to keep at it, grinding non-stop till things start to click on your head.
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>>7155887
i am having fun
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>>7155887
needs to be rotated
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warm up for the day
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>>7156111
don't focus on a sketch of a tree bro, just draw it again. also it seems your doing smooth sketching for a rough and rigid subject with sharp angles.
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>>7156111
>is it normal to be this bad?
>I'm on my second day
Yes, anon. Don't worry.
I wouldn't be myself if I didn't recommend Keys to Drawing. It helped me a lot when I started. Give it a try.
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>>7156121
>>7156122
I deleted because I noticed that there's a general for beginners but a guy told me to suck it up and said some stuff I don't understand.
I'll check out that Keys to Drawing, I'm currently following "The Art and Science of Drawing - Brent Eviston".
>smooth sketching for a rough and rigid subject with sharp angles.
I don't really know, I think I did both. I started making a bunch of rectangles in order to figure out where to place stuff (helped but as you can see, not much...) and only by the end I started darkening my lines using a smoother movement. During my first draft I tried using straight lines instead of rectangles but I got lost really quick.
I think I should be using lines and treating them as the "middle" of the future trunk but spacing them out gets really hard.
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>>7155898
Oh so I have to do these proportional drawings? It's a lesson from KTD and I was ready to move on, but if you reccomend it then I'll do it.

Sorry for late reply btw I had work
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free comic book day request queue was weak this year but still got some decent stuff
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>>7148959
whats up with the google links not working
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Le batub song.

>>7155975
Gave a good chuckle. Like how accurate it looks to the orignal piece while standing out on it's own.
>>7156262
Kino lineart, i suggest focusing on hands doe desu.
>>7157956
>google
>2016 + 8.
Use yandex or duckduckgo. Google has aided out their searches ever since 2015 .
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>>7157459
Did a bit of photobashing to smooth things out.
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I've no idea how to start fixing the basic shape design on this guy while keeping him pretty grounded, any help?
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>>7159273
What about this? Link some sections of the drawing together with similar shapes.
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>>7159353
Yeah I guess that could work. Thanks!
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A couple of hours more thrown at this. Now I am stuffing it with cameos from all my works. Just to do it. Up close eyes and far away eyes:how to render them both succinctly and suggest depth, an ongoing challenge. I might try planning out the next one,but I wasn't having any luck with following my own advice, so I plunged in.
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Five days remaining to know if I made it or i'm done for good
I'm sincerely terrified at the thought of having to go back wageslaving
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>>7160192
>self imposed deadlines
>thinking this is healthy at all
brother, you have already made yourself a wageslave via imposing wageslave work ethics into your own self vision of self worth.
just draw mate.
do it for you before you can do it for others.
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>>7160163
Whoa this is nuts. Really cool!
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>>7156096
nice
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>>7158153
I remember years ago /ic/ used to talk about photobashing all the time like if it was some god technique, but I sincerely never understood how and what the hell exactly you do with it
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>>7156096
Still pretty sad that I had to mercy kill the first one I saw in my life.
After seeing them fully functional tho, I would fucking never go near one alive. That thing can probably chew one of your feet off or worse
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got a girl
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>>7161033
>understood how and what the hell exactly you do with it
I don't know how others use it but like i said i only use it to smooth things out.
I took sections from this woth the lasso tool and put it over my existing drawing then lowered opacity to get a more uniform skin texture.
I could've done something similar with just brushes but this saves up time.
It's just a tool, don't think too much about it. Either use it or don't.
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>>7160255
You got it wrong but the reply still holds value. I never had self worth and the worth of my drawing faded away with time. By trying to claw out some "success" out of the only thing I loved so I could shove it in the face of the world i lost all meaning. So I guess I should just start working on myself a bit.
I just wanted to win once man. I wanted to show everyone and myself that it wasn't all for nothing. I should had known better
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>>7162628
you can still do that, you can still get that "win" against life. you just have the wrong mindset.
you woke up one day with a jolt motivation and it made you productive, but then it ran out and you were dissapointed it didn't result in immediate success.
You're thinking that what you need to success is motivation + talent, when what you really need is discipline + committment.
the strenght to do it even in days when you don't feel like doing it, and the mental fortitude to recognize you'll fail many times before you succeed and still soldier on anyway.
and i'm obviously not just talking about art here.
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>>7163014
this man saying the truth.
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>>7163014
>unmotivated and talentless artist with lots of discipline and commitment
Bland and mediocre even at the highest possible skill level
>Talented and motivated artist with no discipline and commitment
Charming, striking and original even when he makes a shitty doodle
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This is the undersketch for a painting.
Does the hand look weird? If so, why?
Should I just erase it and proceed without the hand? Incoming reference photo next for comparison.
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>>7163655
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>>7163014
>and i'm obviously not just talking about art here
I won't go on with blogging and stuff out of respect, but thanks man. This is the reason I can't leave here. It's the only place left on the Internet where I can doompost and get a reply that make me teary eyed. I'll try to do my best mate, I swear.
Thank you for believing in me, wish you all the best
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>>7163655
>>7163657
Imo the hand looks weird because the fingernail is misplaced (one of those cases where you're probably better off not being 100% accurate in copying what you see) and the features and lines are kind of exaggerated, making it look like doesn't belong to the woman
I think you should try redrawing it on a layer on top with cleaner lines and softening the bone structure
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>>7164242
point of diminishing returns
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>>7164242
>>7164639
Have you studied mignola, Timm and 50's stuff purposedly or your style is just like that?
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Just a shitpost
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>>7164677
oh yes of course. specifically i was trying to channel john paul leon when i added thick lines to hef's suit. he studied alex toth so it goes back to those 50s guys. love mignola, love sergio toppi, love thomas fluharty, love jason latour, love ashley wood. all i do is ape those guys
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>>7164799
>Toppi
Every time I hear him being mentioned can't help but have an acid bubble climb my esophagus thinking how hard and fast he got buried and forgotten in my country while shit smearers like Manara and current trend big comics man are held on a pedestal
Anyhow really love your aping man, doing God's will on this forsaken planet
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Out of these head sketches, some in a more advanced stage than others, which ones look the best to you?
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>>7165235
they are all equally bad, go to /beg/
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It's coming along. Stuffed a few more characters into it. And getting a feel for the background.
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I've started taking anatomy recommendations since last week.
Glad I asked.
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>>7165741
Did my drawing killed the thread?
That's rare.
Well. It's finished.
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Can I get some critique on the basic design elements? Like big medium small, shape design, etc.
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>>7167026
i think this is pretty self explainatory, the style i chose may not be what you were going for but its about being intentional with your design decisions and sticking to a style purposefully rather than doing guesswork, you got a good design overall anyways so this are just tweaks and things to keep in mind, hope it helps.
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>>7165595
Well, that's your problem, I would like to hear from anybody else
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wip, deadly sin guess which one
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>>7167275
Somebody else here.
Both are bad.
Try /beg/. Hope this helps.
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Thanks! Tried implementing some of the feed back with some of the ideas I liked originally.
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>>7167280
It's in the filename

pyw0s
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>>7168063
lol i'm dumb
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Alien bastards
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>>7148959
bump
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sketch?
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>>7167253
The gigachad of /ic/
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Watched Dungeon Meshi recently, sketched the characters from memory
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>>7160463
This was the previous project:another constructed of Whimsy and Artifice. I am both searching for a tshirt design and teaching myself to draw landscapes of dripping eyes for when I hit upon the right one.
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usyk/fury
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>>7163650
Eat your pea, professor!



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