Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYwAllSync: https://cyoa.allsync.com/s/owWor64yLTngDk3Multiplayer Compilations: https://rentry.org/MCYOA_Comp_Comp (was I supposed to do this?)In Case of Emergency, Break Glass: https://rentry.org/mcyoagCanaryThreadslave Rentry: https://rentry.org/ThreadKeeping2Lazy Fucking Slaves EditionPrevious Thread: >>92565023
RULES: https://rentry.org/b595h6dm>Team 1>Natsuo Uchiha >>92078251>D >>92035734>Himari Miko >>92227101 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/HimariJutsu>Takeru Suzuki >>92037873>Team 2>Osamu >>92030854>Shimabukuro Fumio >>92034456>Kichōna >>92030925 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/NardoKichonaJutsuList>Nodao-Douji >>92130402>Team 3>Kamiko Karatachi >>92474846>Masukuda Rarime >>92226219 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/nbd7ikrf>Ichika Chinoike >>92224854>Kita >>92247657>Team 4>Kiko Inuzuka >>92046953>Remilia Orochimaru >>92067086>Itami Nanae >>92041809>Kazen Uzumaki (No Yin Chakra Affinity) >>92129825 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/5kp2svbp>Team 5>Ezaki Tuto >>92143158>Jin Hyuga >>92067527>Shinrō Kamotai >>92225522 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/ShinroJutsu>Yuma Kouda >>92056996>Team 6>Tsugumi >>92078303>Ghidorah >>92069165 + Jutsus: https://rentry.org/xant7fe2>Junki Takenaga >>92074519>Sen Yamamoto >>92132973 +https://rentry.org/mkyze5fa>Team 7>Kamiizumi Tadafusa >>92443623>Fujiwara Nobutake >>92104939>Kamare Hozuki >>92097216>Daiki Ueno >>92099009>Team 8>Rio Konoki >>92286130>Mitsuteru Chihoshi >>92243134>Kuro Blackshadow >>92091505>Choko Yumiya >>92229037>Team 9>Inaba Hyuga >>92178816>Mojo Nakasendou >>92130059>Kitsumoto Hachirō >>92312525 +https://rentry.org/i94sja>Eiken Shinzo >>92374513>Team 10>Dojuma Takiga >>92435927>Ayuka Hagihara >>92418225>Oishi Teruo >>92424132>Egao >>92425369>Team 11(?)>(Jonin-less)>Rinka Akagi >>92454180>Akaito Tenyo >>92463926>Chosuke-Chosuke Kirabokua >>92469859>Teamless:>Taihō Shiryō. >>92065120>Eiji >>92132327
>>92579924>Loners:>Ahiratsu Ōtsutsuki >>92073651>Darkbone >>92064881>Kijyo-Douji >>92092125>Engetsu Bōfū >>92101140>Insane Wild Boar >>92164715>??? >>92164855>Setsu Suru >>92181406>Sado Mazohisuto >>92181768>Kanami-Douji >>92194017>Barou >>92473683>Sekka Hakobu >>92143990>Gyū >>92157552>Yōki >>92157657>Koroko Kokoroko >>92235539>Mr. Hopo >>92411015>Lizard >>92249477>Aika Yuki >>92251220>Kondai >>92388984>Makura Hachimune >>92445626>Naruto MP Additional Archive but better (Writefags, Art, Relationship Charts, Info Cards, etc.):https://rentry.org/narutogeninversionmcyoag>Chunin Exam Stage 1 Hub Post:>>92135567>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Hub Post:>>92331218>Chunin Exam Stage 2 Logistics Post:https://rentry.org/w78sxh6g + >>92321962New Writefags:>One Step Closer to World Unification and Regaining Manhood (Akaito, Rinka)https://rentry.org/chmoipnh>(Team 1, Team 5, Team 6)https://rentry.org/w7facihhNew Relationship Chart:>Rinkahttps://rentry.org/RinkasRelationsNew Meme/Art?>it's 'nappin time>>92566416Tiermaker: https://tiermaker.com/create/naruto-chunin-mcyoag-template-16244798
>>92579924Holy shit you're alive???
>What is this?Demon Eyes is a modern setting where the make-believe delusions of kids and young adults alike manifest into actual demon hunting powers. How it works is that a demon living inside you can give you powers at the cost of impacting your normal life with sin.>Rules?You can pick other builds as companions rather than choosing from the pre-made list.Ignore uniforms being gender locked.You can use custom hunter's uniform to either ignore aura requirements, or reduce the cost by -2 for a single eye type that's not wrath or lust (i.e. -2 cost to greed, gluttony, sloth, pride, or envy eyes)>DE Rentry: https://rentry.org/Demoneyes3>WrathMari Aozaki, Legion>>91469537Eiyu Isamu>>91483132Emilia Shadowsong, Battousai>>91485490Ikari Michita, The Mad Screamer>>91493870Aino Sasaki, Project Invidia>>91542925Kenji Yamada, Chuunimaxxer Supreme>>91560279>GreedNaoki Arai, Impossibility Tinker>>91483248Hayao Yamamoto>>91623423>GluttonyAkari Ichioka, Crimson Vermilion of the Night>>91457359Lem Amano, Amano Lemon>>91483342Hifumi Ishiku, @H1FVM1>>91485868>LustHinako Shimeki, The Dollmaker>>91458663Yoru Heinard, She Who Thirsts>>91471625Sezāru Ishiku>>91482768Kazuki Asahara, The Messiah>>91494741>SlothAmane Shiozaki; Amaryllis, The Grand Librarian>>91473931Makoto Nagai / Yuki Kazama, The Place-Holder>>91483765Komaru Nishitani, Buddhirupa>>91483956>PrideYoji Ryoshi>>91458024Mithran Kuro, Undefeated Knight>>91485106Haruhi Oohara, Rasalhague>>91482203Yuki Tanaka, Abyssal Sovereign>>91486160Ashton Ramsey>>91495567Yeshua, The Butterfly Man>>91556594>EnvyAki Hitoyoshi>>91481964Jace Abraxon, King of Cards>>91483191
>>92579952>WritefagsChance Encounter (Yoji Ryoshi, Akari Ichioka)https://rentry.org/5uap6He Was Never Booksmart (Aki Hitoyoshi, Amane Shiozaki)https://rentry.org/t38riHifumi Opener (Hifumi Ishiku, Sezāru Ishiku)https://rentry.org/32bs7A Whore in Church (Yoji Ryoshi, Yoru Heinard)https://rentry.org/iusr8Dollmaker's Paradise (Hinako Shimeki)rentry.org/8y8raThe Girl Inside My Head (Makoto Nagai, Yuki Kazama)https://rentry.org/ervx3The Newest Library Patron (Amaryllis, Yoji, Akari, and minor appearances of Aki, Komaru, and Yoru).https://rentry.org/DENewestPatronThese High Times Are Killing Him (Aki Hitoyoshi, Amaryllis, Akari Ichioka, Lemon Amano, Makoto Nagai, Komaru Nishitani, Mithran Kuro, Mari Aozaki)https://rentry.org/snxixus73-0 BTW (Yoji, Ikari, featuring Akari in a cameo)https://rentry.org/DE_BEJITABROBTWMaking Friends (Akari Ichioka, Hinako Shimeki)https://rentry.org/e9uk4mnuENTER (Lucifer, Haruhi, Aki, briefly Makoto)https://rentry.org/LucyHasANormalOneA Makeover and a Mixer(Yoru Heinard, Makoto Nagai, Akari Ichioka)https://rentry.org/eozqs2y3Tsun-Tsun, Dere-Dere (Ikari Michita, Mithran Kuro)https://rentry.org/xkaz4z2aA Cursed Valentines Day(Yoru, Mari, Hinako, Yoji, Mention of Amaryllis)https://rentry.org/kswi9a4iSezāru's Date (Sezāru, Akari, Makoto, Amane, Haruhi, Aki, Yoji, Hifumi, Lucifer; Mentioned Yoru, Maki)https://rentry.org/ndman3rsA response to Sezāru's Date. Happy belated VDhttps://rentry.org/679iyte9Our Dearest Librarian (Amane, Akari, Yoru, Haruhi)https://rentry.org/5b2bq44iJust Dere Now (Ikari Michita, Mithran Kuro, Mari Aozaki, Mentions of Akari Ichioka)https://rentry.org/f74au7v2White Day Blues (Makoto, Haruhi, Yoru)https://rentry.org/4pbm29u4>>92579939Literally just woke up.
>>92579975>Relationship ChartsEmilia Shadowsonghttps://rentry.org/itwvpYoji Ryoshihttps://rentry.org/DEyojichartIkari'shttps://rentry.org/VeryAngryManHaruhi'shttps://rentry.org/HaruhiChartMakoto's Super Special Sugar Selection (Updated!)https://rentry.org/t7quhkMari's relationship chart.https://rentry.org/uvq7iaar>ArtfagsSloth and Gluttony Meetuphttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91495387/Makoto and Kazama Selfiehttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91507831/Makoto and Yoruhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91510355/Messhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91552302/reqshttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91587636/Young love is so beautiful.https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91626998/girlbosses (and haruhi)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91654539/Halloween Requests Ihttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91725633Halloween Requests 2https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91759065impersonation of red cross...https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91759143Halloween Requests 3https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91777059Halloween Requests 4https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91881864Halloween Requests 5https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91881869blind ragehttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91890223tall girlfriend problemshttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/91928738hes_late_as_usual-1https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92242556man knows bad vibes when he sees em.jpghttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92251384PSGDEhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92267192PSG Makotohttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/922672692ndSeasonhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92357836survival not guaranteedhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92364327>Art / Prompt reply hybrid?That One Holocure Promptrentry.org/HijackedDEPrompt>Tiermakerhttps://tiermaker.com/create/demon-eyes-2-16639737
>>92580007
>>92579933In hindsight, threadslaving directly on wake-up may have been a mistake. I forgot to add these in into the list.>New Writefags:>The Number of Death (Remilia, Kazen, Itami, Mojo, Eiken, Choko, Kuro, Mitsuteru, Tomoki, Mentions Kitsumoto)https://rentry.org/az2nk6q8>New Art?>Team 8 Retards>>92578113
>MHA Rentryhttps://rentry.org/uhx77ys6>RULES:> Timeline: Just Another Story> Location: Japan>The Hero Students are at Shiketsu.Instructions + Template for Making Cards: https://pastebin.com/NQ6JNH8r>New Stuff:The beast naps among scraps of SoL>The Archive Link so you can keep using the funny numbers for builds (use this before complaining about dead links)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/92498234/#92498405>CHARACTER PROMPTS (feel free to answer these whenever)Class 1-D Prompts 1-50: https://rentry.org/mhampClass 1-D Prompts 50+: https://rentry.org/mhamp2Everyone else's prompts: https://rentry.org/mhamp3Same password for all of them (mha4)>Older Prompt Links Are in Herehttps://pastebin.com/Qr3TtGa6>Fighting Style Prompt (Leaving this out because it might be useful for anyone writing a fight)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/88693730/#88693888>Class 1-D Timelinehttps://rentry.org/MHATIMELINE>Class 1-D Character Summaryhttps://rentry.org/9bf3g>Newer Version of the CYOA (Both the old and new versions are legal for builds. Use whichever one you want)Version 4.2: https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/92012978
>>92580046>STUDENTS:>Chihiro Mitsurugi HN Ascetic Sword Hero: Yako>>88189202>Soujyuuro Imai HN Wise Eye Hero: Mahoudeva>>88194077>Bobby Samson HN Sunlight Man>>88190591>Sora Tanaka HN Area Denial Hero: Orbit>>88191735>Kaylee Suzuki HN Flying Force>>88438219>Shinkan Sen HN Crazy Train>>88194200>Hifumi Takeda HN Warp Blade Hero: Challenger>>88196397>Minerva Kim HN Spark>>88826766>Hailey Chang HN Recoil>>88826770>Faith Kang HN Drone>>88826774>Maxine Nguyen HN Radius>>88826778>Edith Lee HN Arena>>88826782>Noah Abrams HN Archangel>>88205041>Victor Sigurd HN Hydra>>88209661>Inigo Myoga HN Dragon Hero: Ryu-kishi>>88414797>Christopher Cain HN Mirror Devil>>88217649>Son Jugo HN Aspara>>88239137>Genma Go HN Goldorado>>88353862>Ashleigh Katsuragi HN Blackout>>88268251>Atsushi Orochi HN Hard to Destroy Lizard Hero: Yamata>>88273479>Nyoro Hoge HN Maru(maru)>>88273837 + >>88758766>Yui Sagara HN Binding Hero: Capture Cloth (Held Back)>>88383012>Kyoda Hiro HN Overdose (Held Back)>>88193619+ >>91985145>Sally McCathy HN Last Rite>>88810810>Takara Tame HN Android>>89199766>Nijimura Mahoko HN Cool Boost>>91685518+>>91685973>Class 2-D>Mochi Uranus HN Smelly Hero: Stink Rat>>88196664>Kevin Rool>>88222618>Suzuki Nene HN Ghostly Cat Hero: Bakeneneko>>88707393>Hiroki Asai HN Champion of Negativity: Zetsuboy>>88755823>Class 1-E https://rentry.org/p6dwm>Students (Cont.)>Class 3-D https://rentry.org/vx255>William Dustice HN King Billy>>88192360>Johanna Hilt HN Gauntlet Hero: Weiss Schwarz>>88195437>Ganto Kanzaki HN The Clone Hero, Commander (NPC)>>89284218>Kagami Reina>>89605669>Norman “Norm” Smith HN Whatabout>>91046080>Rumi Aratsuki HN Hysteria>>91363307>Class ???>Kiki HN Yggdrasil>>91707234
>>92580055>Students (Cont.)>Class 1-C (Shiketsu)>Okimoto Chisaka>>91130422 >Isabela Nakahata>>91351414>Lilinah ‘Riri’ Inoue>>91347120>Ysmir Dragonborn>>91349452>Daniel W. Rain>>91352447>Class 3-B (U.A.)>Animata>>90990850>Synthesis>>90992108>Meadow>>90992377>Top Smile>>90992508>Ichimaki>>90994440>Nekiro Nishi>>90997317>Madoka Mikan HN Heartbeathttps://rentry.org/eesb8>Itō Sukemochi HN Warpden>>90973632>Li Yinzhen HN Jiangshi>>90978093>Katsumi Hachizaki:https://rentry.org/HeartMHA>Cormelia Busujima>>91353847>Class 1-F>Suki HN Sukeban>>91670899>Runt HN Dust Devil>>91691942>Rob Williams HN: Velvet Worm>>91728780>Haiiroshi Kinzoku HN Fullmetalhttps://rentry.org/Fullmetal-mha>Igarashi Ryosuke HN Araken>>91807240>Tatsuya Yamashita HN Bad Touch>>91808184>Azuma Hisa HN Beach Day>>91809104>Daigo Ulmeyda HN Fly 1 Million>>91814363>Kiyoura Shidehara HN Icky Hero: Slimenuts>>91782779>Higa Umeko HN Slip-N'-Slideasaurus>>91833690>Nayuki Kyoko>>91834965>??? HN Meteoric Hero: Cube>>91890433>Misato Fukushima>>92006447>PRO HEROES>U.A. Teachers:>Yunikon, the Brilliant Hero>>90998494>Dr. Seto Kawata>>91051432>Shiketsu Teachers:> Anzu Nishima HN Karaburan>>88189414> Aiko Aimi HN Motivational Hero: Rosethorn>>88190438>Pierre Vachon HN The Gentle Way Hero: Ippon>>88205924>Masanori Kitamura HN Hijack>>88219956>Yasashi Koibito HN The Laser Hero - Majestic>>88231509>Junko Hongo HN The Overly-Enthusiastic Tokusatsu Hero, LocaLoca (NPC)>>88745486>Omura Tadao HN Deceptive Hero, Conman>>88754723>Riku Washizawa HN The Steel Talon Hero: Skycarver>>91719484>Takahashi Mako, HN Ersatz>>92011019
>>92580064>PRO HEROES (Cont):>Unaffiliated Heroes>Kenji Shako HN Strongest Shrimp Hero: Magnum Shrimp (and Water Fowl Hero: Flamingal)>>88425908>Yuusei Atsushi HN Spring Dragon Hero: Seiryu>>88194386>Kalianne Sato HN "Flame Strike Hero: Honoken">>88568039>Ryuji Inoue HN Transport Hero: Rescue Ray (Principal - Sunray Troubled Youth Center)>>88195499>Akagi Sanpatchi HN "Popsy">>88204632>??? HN Birdy>>88225549>Edmund Connor HN The Tall Man>>88286518>Ryusei Sugiyama HN Smokin' Sexy>>88301887>Kevin Thompson HN The Purple Man>>88357698>Yuichi Ishida HN Slipstream>>88389419>Roland Walker HN PsyKing (Sandatsu'd)>>88616703>Ernst Hennig HN Impakt>>88616848>Junpei Ozu HN: The Standstill Hero, "Floor">>88820563>Rodion Popo HN Overman>>89015229>Ludolf Raphael Victorius, Hero Name: Fair Marshal>>89006731>Taichi Kyoryu HN Cretaceous King, Saurus>>89508780>Kurogane Keisho HN Yoshizumi>>89507063>Tosuke Jinai HN Compound>>91016593>Yosuke Shirai HN The Lustrous Hero, Wavelength>>91032513>Astra Smalls Aka Size King>>91360064>Richard Wilkins HN The #1 Hydro Hero: "Splash">>91721688>MR. BULLET>>91812743>Shōgeki Heshi HN: Crash>>92012115>Tóu Zhǎng Koie/Phys P>>92017795>Kazuya Ono>>92012443>Alpha Ueno HN: Sylph>>92014322>SUPPORTERS:>Lady Astoria Belmont>>88201576>Rika Eichi>>88209395>Yaju>>88223795>Isaiah Sibylla (Keola Ku)>>88231241>Aura Curie (Student)>>88231609>Just "The Doctor">>88721597>Fransk Brunhilde>>89014208>Endless Horizons Ltd.https://rentry.org/iptpr>Yusaku Kanzaki a.k.a. Clone Cop (NPC)>>89278250>Emilia Busujima>>89349231>Detective Risa Date>>90657164>Holden Deckard>>90913931>Brightly>>91006966>Satoru Tani (Student)>>91149772>Kuji Futoi (Student)>>91363451>Yuko Ozaku (Student)>>92025025
>>92580077>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Turncoat Agency:>Keiichi Tano HN Racer V / VN Getaway>>88926925>Tenshi Chisio HN Caduceus / VN Sawbones>>88927453>Jack Dunn HN Three-Sixty / VN The Asset>>88931192>Pax Organization:>Eugene Kurtz VN Pax and Mercy>>88984432>Nightmare>>88984422>Unaffiliated Villains:>Bruno Garcia VN Mauler>>88206714>Karuga Ito (Teacher - Shiketsu)>>88192478>Shiori Shiratora VN Kamigami>>88192913>Recino R. Percutio>>88191385>Nakata Yumiko VN Walpurgis>>88191796 + https://pastebin.com/nMZq81Jt>hina seiyama VN panzer viii>>88226487>Giichi Mikata>>88198856>Miki Ginrei VN Fluegel>>88209242>Ginji Gō VN Desperaido>>88278735>Jack Mitchell VN Marshall>>88456239>Kazuma Oomori VN Charlatan>>88669394>Hattori Ume VN Broad Daylight>>88926931>"Blank">>91050726>Kōkishin Yuuki VN Shoggoth>>91050987>"Mammogar">>91051410>Tomiehttps://rentry.org/ddom6m82>TechVision Elite 2023 - 43Vista UltraSmart 4K TV>>91654960>JOHN DOE VN GREEN DOOR>>89018740>Suslik>>91699413>Ryuji Ayanokoji VN Overlord>>91702476>Jack Smithee VN The Gravedigger>>91702656>Zyra Mein VN Braindrain>>91702779>Rudi Brandt VN Sturmtruppe>>91703057>Bonzo Amato VN The Boss>>91703456>The Hospital Killer>>91772420>Paul Crémieux VN De Jais (Jet Black)>>91841242>Jessica Wu VN Surinam Toad Girl>>91851919>Jan Procházka VN Msr. Blanc>>91963570>Gustave Gavial VN Gnash>>92016443>Cosmo Black VN X.T.>>92016885>Kate Everly>>92016986>Sato Yukio VN Gold Man>>92385942>Horrific 5:>Samuel Wilson VN Desolator>>88917340>On Giết Năng VN Tether>>88921198>Erika Murakami VN Nox>>88923183>Maddie Griffiths VN Maddox>>88930575>Edmund Muller VN Mercury>>88923191
>>92580085>VILLAINS (Villain Name):>Revolutionaries:>Momotaro Tachibana VN Nebulous Storm>>88376954>Mark Matuli>>88301910>Junichi Takagi VN Marrow>>88435130>Miriam Slowburn Hakase VN Prologing Evil: Big Hat (NPC)>>88736960>Kester Greenfield>>90921671>Vigilantes:>Helene Lysingen VN Noctiluca>>88197005>Takigawa Shion VN Shapeless Blade: Aquarius>>88209069>Toru Imaishi VN Kampai>>88630353>Rebecca Weber>>88722750>Yushi Taneka VN Blazing Bright>>89012707>Yoshiro>>89338457>Sasha Azanami>>91080404>Rui>>91197187>Kaori Kaoru>>91229075>Choko Yumiya, VN Eye High>>92132153>Night Parade:>Cammy Link VN Karma>>88190537>Haruka Pulch VN Tatarimokke>>88205909>Sebastian Needle VN Greenfinger>>88214481>Okane King VN Midas>>88190217> ??? VN Maw>>88250272> ??? VN Bogey>>88277889> Tomi>>88387913>Luccione>>90146415>Wild Hunt>Sandatsu Owari>>91030425>Mio Katsuragi HN Forget-Me-Not>>89250569>Hiromi Hitomi VN Feral>>88856089>Dr. Isaac Ivanov VN Drekus>>88666462>Ookami Shizukahttps://rentry.org/OokamiShizuka>Ivan Trup VN The Prophet>>91702348
>>92580104Writefags:>Early writefags here (17 Pages)https://rentry.org/noydigbk>”First Test” Comphttps://pastebin.com/66ByP2sD>Questionnaire Comphttps://pastebin.com/Ksn0zJ31Else check the rentry>Lunch Hour (1-F)https://rentry.org/LunchHour>Internship Gossip (Clique)https://rentry.org/igqhcxhy>The Symbol of Death: Part 3 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Ookami Shizuka, Drekus, Hijack, The Boys (kind of))https://rentry.org/55t76vwp>With Open Hearts And Open Minds (Seiryu, Honoken, Hijack)https://rentry.org/2bqb4hiq>I Get Your Number And We Grow From There (Seiryu, Yoshizumi)https://rentry.org/4t3zcu2b>Spring Boy And Summer Girl (Seiryu, Honoken, Kotoba)https://rentry.org/yzbayxk5>Um Tempo Musical (Seiryu, Honoken)https://rentry.org/qxo4wft2>Messages From The Star (Seiryu, Yoshizumi)https://rentry.org/7rw4bbwc>Hearts Afire (Seiryu, Yamata, Blast Burn, Yamamoto)https://rentry.org/ewpc5tz3>A Hero Student's Uncertain Dating Prospects (Beach Day, Slip-n-Slideasaurus, Cube)https://rentry.org/DatingProspects>Frameless (Smokin' Sexy, Ryu-Kishi, Mirror Devil):https://rentry.org/u8snakxr>The Symbol of Death: Part 4 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Feral, Drekus, Ookami Shizuka, The Prophet) https://rentry.org/igwpicub>A Kunoichi's Birthday (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), Marrow, 1-D, Hijack, a bunch of people)https://rentry.org/6zruhinr>Monsters (Last Rite, Yamata)https://rentry.org/ph2rfaai>The Sword of Truth(Last Rite, Archangel, Nox, Localoca, Majestic)https://rentry.org/pop2nnyq>Chase (Kampai, other people)https://rentry.org/KampaiChase>Tooth and Claw, Issue 1 (Saurus):https://rentry.org/qsrvx8>A Friend in Need (Mirror Devil, Drone, Yamamoto, Yamata):https://rentry.org/p7zrib56>How lucky we are for having each other (Yamata, Mirror Devil)https://rentry.org/d4g5buec>The 4:30PM to KIXhttps://rentry.org/qfnavcko>Everything Wrong With the Two of Them 2 (Reaper, Forget-Me-Not, Drekus, Feral and the rest of the Wild Hunt)https://rentry.org/bs79megt
>>92580119>Writefags (Final)>I Shall Not want(Archangel, Last Rite, Rosethorn)https://rentry.org/dr6wyh78>A Dragon's White Day (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), mention of the girls in 1-D)https://rentry.org/o3iji1n>A Multi-Dimensional Valentine's Day (Ryu-kishi, Maru(maru), Last Rite, Mirror Devil, Challenger, Sunlight Man, Android, Cool Boost, Radius, Marrow)https://rentry.org/399yrhts>News (Reaper, mentions of Forget-Me-Not)https://rentry.org/z7vhkv2s>Spectre of Revolution (Maru(maru), Marrow)https://rentry.org/m7o3zsqc>Vigilante Hunt, part 1 (Ryu-kishi, Last Rite, Marrow, Maru(maru), 1-D, 1-E, 1-F, Satoru Tani, Rosethorn, Karaburan)https://rentry.org/7qodqeyc>Rehab (Overdose, Yamata, Ryu-kishi and a cameo from Goldorado)https://rentry.org/rydady6a>Baited (Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/8pes8av2>Serpent (Mahoudeva, Honoken, Seiryu, Yamata)https://rentry.org/4aovibcq>The Plan (Desolator and The Five):https://rentry.org/8ageap3b>Team Wallflower, Assemble! (Yako, Drone, Blackout, Maru(maru), Capture Cloth, Mauler)https://rentry.org/TeamWallFlower_Part1>Conservation of Ninjitsu (Marumaru, Ryu-Kishi, Yako, Aura Curie, Blank): https://rentry.org/maru-blank>(Beach Day, Saurus, Majestic)https://rentry.org/TwitterBeef>Never Have One Last Score (Marumaru, Shoggoth): https://rentry.org/maru-shoggoth>If You Like Piña Coladas (Spark): https://rentry.org/upmhhgcd>The Doomed Plan (Desolator, Maddox, The Golden Age Five):https://rentry.org/akz38hz3>An Attempt in Broad Daylight (Floor, Maddox, Mirror Devil, Smokin' Sexy, Tether, Mercury, Desolator, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Challenger):https://rentry.org/qyd9d4d9>Catsu Curry (Bakeneneko, Yako, Capture Cloth, Overdose, Yamata)https://rentry.org/gmkwouxq>First Day: Ersatz, Rosethorn and a couple 1-D students make cameos.https://rentry.org/yka76xqz>Night of the Reaper prologue (Mahoudeva, Mirror Devil, Blackout, Forget-Me-Not, Reaper, Satoru Tani)https://rentry.org/48a3gma5
>>92580131>Writefags (Final):>Night of the Reaper, Part 1 (Reaper, Flying Force, Saurus, Rosethorn, Ryu-Kishi, Challenger, Cameos of Seiryu, Impakt, Sunlight Man, Mirror Devil, Mahoudeva)https://rentry.org/hb284fea>THE TOURNAMENT PART FIVE! (1-D, Smokin' Sexy, Popsy, Rosethorn, Majestic)https://rentry.org/wy5yord3>RELATIONSHIP CHARTS IN HEREhttps://pastebin.com/rsnEph0bFor Art, Memes, Tierlists, etc. check the rentry
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>>92576999what was Kitsumoto doing through that whole fight? why is he just standing menacingly at the end when his entire team has been defeated?
>>92580533He doesn't need them he's Kage+ tier.
>>92580588jokes aside, you could be madara uchiha himself and you'd still fail the chunin exams if your teammates went and died.
>>92580973I can't believe Tobirama killed himself just to make sure Madara didn't become a chunin
>>92580987Tobirama offing himself and fading into history with Izuna would've done more good than creating a jutsu used exclusively to fuck other the leaf.
>>92580973>kills the entire fucking leaf villageI'm a chunin now, you can't stop me.
>>92576999>"What's this? Weren't you gonna show me how you shined?!">"Rude.">"HA! Looks like I sent him into next week!">"You tricky bastard!"Eiken shouldn't taunt or express being offended in combat so much. When Itami used weight jutsu on him, he might widen his eyes in shock or frown from being in a disadvantage and *think* words like the above, but he wouldn't say them out loud. He might say them during normal, no stakes, situations, but not in actual combat.>"Smashing Fist...">"SEISMIC SHOCK"It seemed like he did, I'm not sure, but he wouldn't say his moves.>take a bite of the rockHe would just absorb it with whatever body part touched the rock, in this case his hand.Plus, this scene kinda just froze for a moment. The action suddenly stopped.>Eiken introduces himself. Immediately after, he eats a rock, killing whatever effect/feeling his introduction is supposed to bring. Itami throws a shuriken to knock it out of his hand. He calls Itami rude.This seems like a bit. In the middle of combat. It really killed the tension.I apologize if I got too nitpicky. Except the bit, that can't be called a nitpick, it really needs fixing.
>>92581121>I'm not sure, but he wouldn't say his moves.Nah, saying your movies is something all ninjas do. Even Sasuke did it.
>>92571493Great work on the writing, Senanon. I like how you used Yuma as an outlet to go crazy and make fun of other builds in a lighthearted way (like having their balls crushed.) However, the overtly bratty attitude might become tiresome if it persists after the timeskip. So post-timeskip, I think she has to be quiet and cunning in how she subtly messes with other people, as opposed to the loud haughtiness she currently has going on.
>>92578113Glad you enjoyed it anon!>Choko is 18 thoughHuh I thought I removed that line, good catchBut does this mean she's ready to be a housewife?>>92578408Thanks anon! Writing for Remilia was pretty fun>>92578629Wanted to ask if you're Kuro's anon what 'Chunni Chants' meant?
>>92581522>what 'Chunni Chants' meant?nta, but it's shit like"Ensnare my foes and bind them to the realm of darkness! Shadow Style: Shadow Whip!"
>Cool perk: say technique names in Japanese>no Cool perk: say technique names in English
>>92581642My build speaks a French-Russian hybrid actually
>>92579385Guess I didn't make it clear enough on why Team 9 split apart, altho I had every team split up a bit so it wasn't just them but I'll try to include more of what went downAs for Kitsumoto, he works best as a stealth assassin, so he's pretty much slinking around waiting for a good moment to take out as many targets at once. It might've made sense for him to join up with Mojo for his trap but I didn't know if at this point Mojo was in the loop on his conspiracy with their Sensei so I Kitsumoto do his Inaba tasks in the shadows>>92579458Itami injures himself in the beginning because he's punching Eiken normally, throughout the fight he picks up Smashing Fist style which hardens his body like stone which allows him to damage him. I'll go back and try to make it more clear that he's using it but whenever there's something about "hardening his fist/leg" that's Smashing Fist. The meta reason on why Eiken got cleaved was because with his regeneration he could continue fighting indefinitely unless he sustained massive damage, as well as the Heaven Scroll being placed inside his body. He's also one of the few genin I could write getting split in two, and it felt like a good finish. In the narrative, Itami learns to combine his Swift Style with his Smashing Fist and Weight Control for massive damage, but I'll go back and make it clear that Itami needs some major attack to actually have any chance of beating Eiken>>92579403>>92579473There's still more in store for Team 9
>>92580533Kitsumoto's gonna be doing a little trolling
>>92581718>I'll try to include more of what went downThat would be good, yes. I don't think the issue is really what happened, as much as the fact that there doesn't seem to be a lot of explanation why it happened. Mojo, being a genius, going off on his own while his team is totally split seems weird if there isn't an specific explanation to back it up.If you could explain more why exactly they split up like that, it wouldn't be much of an issue.
>>92581121>Eiken DialogueI'll adjust the dialogue, although in your description you put Eiken as "more expressive then his master" so I figured he'd have some smack talk. You pretty much want him more stoic in the fight then?>But he wouldn't say his movesI needed Eiken to convey that he had some sort of fighting style that Itami was replicating. And yelling out things like "Leaf Whirlwind" is a time honored Taijutsu tradition>take a bite of the rockI was reading the descriptions of your build's abilities in the mcyoa and thought it was too funny not to throw in there. I also wanted a scene that humanized Eiken a bit but I could see why you think it ruins the tension. Don't know how I'd rework it but I'll try and figure something out
>>92581522>>92581718>>92581798respect for trying to improve your writefag and listening to criticism. i think with just a small changes (mostly clarifying team 9's situation) will be enough to make it good. i'm curious to see how exactly the big battle will happen and what exactly is Kitsumoto's plan.
>>92581822good to go*it's already good, i meant as in it should be 'finished' with just a few changes.
>>92581694Unloved.
>>92581718I really don’t think Itami could have cleaved Eiken in two in that scene, a level 1 Smashing Fist could not have made that much of a difference. That too meta over logic. I suggest that Choko pours lots of chakra in for a shot to Eiken’s chest, then Itami hits the same spot with his strongest attack and gets some level of damage to his foot, so he’s basically bluffing Mojo at the end. That would make it believable.>>92581798I’d say that he would smack talk, but only in non real battles. He’s supposed to be serious when he needs to be, such as in a real fight.The technique yelling, while I don’t like it, seems to be an in universe tradition, so I won’t be against it.About the humanizing, I appreciate it, but doing something dumb is not the way.About the comedy, imo, it’s good to have comedy, but not at the expense of other plot aspects. The tension was quite well done until that moment.
>>92581972> a level 1 Smashing Fist could not have made that much of a differenceI feel like people are forgetting that having 'level 1' in something means you're above average at is as per the rules of the MP.
>>92581972>I suggest that Choko pours lots of chakra in for a shot to Eiken’s chest, then Itami hits the same spot with his strongest attackNta, but Itami using his finisher on Eiken's chest at the same time Choko blasts Eiken in the back with a charged arrow sounds dope and more believable about how he split the stone man in half.
>>92582017Yes, and…? I can easily list off the big amount of maxed defensive skills Eiken has and how far above average he is at them. The one shot cleave is, by all logic, impossible.
>>92582071>Nta, but Itami using his finisher on Eiken's chest at the same time Choko blasts Eiken in the back with a charged arrow sounds dope and more believable about how he split the stone man in half.Also not that anon, but i think that Choko shooting him in the chest with an giga-arrow and then Itami kicking said arrow like a rock chisel sounds cooler.
I think Eiken should trip over Kitsumoto and then they both die.After that, Mojo... shits his pants.And then he dies of dehydration.
Kazen should sweep.
>>92582177Kazen shouls sweep these nuts
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>>92582199I haven't laughed this hard in a long time anon thanks
>>92582199Shinrō be hatin
>>92581522>>92581599This. Its not required but can be used for extra power via ritual arts.
>>92581340That wasn't me and I'm not actually sure who did it, but I appreciate the colour-thing. I'll have to give it a read in a bit, I'm falling behind now that we're really starting to collectively cook.
>>92582366>has hairnot shinro. shinro is BALD.
>>92582474Shenron is one of those disciples actually.
>>92581522>does this mean she's ready to be a housewifeonly for this nigga
>>92582546Be still, my beating heart...
>>92582668>Be still, my beating heart...Wouldn't that kill you?
>>92583116List builds from suicidal to not suicidal
>>92583352you do it
>>92583352>Wyl Dai>everyone else
>>92583364Okay then. If that was too easy, list anons from suicidal to not suicidal.
>>92583470>Hifumi anon>me>everyone else
I need.... more.... ROMANCESLOP
>>92583739You already got like 3 servings.
>>92583484I doubt this tierlist.
>>92583886What's wrong with it? What would you change?
>>92583905>anons>power gap>no-one
>>92583909You must be a wagey.
>>92583965It's not Wednesday yet.
>>92583978Yet only wagies can't fathom that some people aren't constantly thinking about offing themselves.
>>92581822It is indeed rare that someone is so receptive to criticism.
>>92584039Anons are receptive all the time. They just usually get shat on for not responding by calling everyone a fag and get called some variation of push over.
I'm preparing a FoD writefag of Team 11 v Team 7, since they should be next to each other, haven't got Day 1 matches, and have opposite scrolls (Heaven v Earth), and I wanted to ask a few questions.What does Yin/Yang affinity do? I get the elemental ones add said elements to the attacks, but I don't know what yin/yang do.How are physical attributes determined? I know that chakra natures affect it, but which skills should I note?Does Daiki's ninja cancer negatively affect his physicality at this stage?How would Angel Mode work? From >>92580497 it's based off of Divine Arts skill, but can it be used multiple times a day? What determines that?I've previously said I've never watched Naruto, so what else should I keep in mind?
>>92584180>Yin/Yangmakes you better at the things they say you're better at>How are physical attributes determined?unarmed combat, weapon arts, advanced taijutsu, advanced style, advanced weapon style, etc.>Does Daiki's ninja cancer negatively affect his physicality at this stage?yes>How would Angel Mode work?you decide>I've never watched Naruto, so what else should I keep in mind?just keep it feeling shonen and you should be fine.
>>92581522>But does this mean she's ready to be a housewife?NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOShe needs to have her spirit broken first.
>>92584424Sen-anon...
Reminder that 'Peak Human' on strength stuff means you can deadlift 1100 pounds.
>>92581718>Kitsumoto do his Inaba tasks in the shadowsOkay I gotta ask, what the hell is even Inaba's plan with kitsumoto? I know he wants to like, split off from the main branch, but what does that have to do with hiring a random guy to pass the exams?
>>92583739I was promised a shoujo romance MP. Where is it?
>>92579924>>92584180Team 11 and Team 7, what is your strategy for FoD?
>>92584515There was something about wanting to brand genin with dojutsu so he could take their eyes when they've matured. Maybe he's helping with that.
>>92584455N-No, anon, it's Choko. The other genin girl from Shimo
>>92584843Yes, but that doesn't fit my narrative where Sen's schizo personality wants to break Choko.
>>92584870Ah I see. I thought you pushing a different narrative. Carry on.
>>92584180>>92584722Pretty sure team 7 is all dumped builds
>>92585422Fujiwara still shows up and does prompts
>>92585422Fujiwara isn't a dump and Kamiizumi is recent, so maybe he isn't either. The other two are dumps though.
>>92579924Since Kamare is a dump, I can shit on it however I want.Kamare is a boring good for nothing. He isn't a jack all trades, master of none, he's a jack no trades, shitter of all. Utter garbage at everything with no 0 upgrades. His strongest method is a few seconds of paralysis with White Extreme Attack, which he can't even take advantage of much because his main way of attack is taijutsu that is hilariously anti synergistic with White Extreme Attack that must be used at long range.
>>92585580You can shit on build anon, that's allowed.
>>92585580You are not garbage at things you don't have upgrades in. That makes you above average for your rank.
>>92585626Nuh uh anon, everyone knows that unless you take a maxed out rank on something you're utter garbage trash in it. The only thing that matters is Rank 3 skills.
>>92585656TRUESame goes for using elements without yin/yang
I could go for a discount Minato build that teleports everywhere and spams kunai.Or I could create a niche as fuck mathematics build that relies on out-thinking opponents with precognitive level prediction.
>>92584722>>92584180 here, Akaito and Chosuke can add, but my basic plan was as such:Akaito uses his threads as sensors, spreading out and using the foliage as cover, in order to detect any threats. His Yin/Wind Natures should greatly aid in this, along with his mastery over the threads and Concealment Arts to keep them hidden. If need be, he can pull them up and entrap opponents.Chosuke uses shadow clones to mask which one is really him, effectively making opponents waste time dealing with them while he strikes from the shadows.Rinka uses Divine Arts spam, accentuating her melee abilities, and defending from ranged attacks via her Dark Kekkei Genkai, by just sucking them into the mark. If push comes to shove, use Angel Mode, refueling via Dark if need be.
>>92585889They both sound pretty terrible, if Im being fully honest with you.
>>92585889rank?
>>92585920C
>>92585889Become the mathematician, otherwise your build will be boring fodder https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hlLzgUn5tPI&ab_channel=YumiPadilla
>>92565597A bit easier than I expected, but that's probably because Yoru's original outfit is so bare to begin with. I chose this design because it was the first, but I wouldn't mind doing the other casual style.>>92567874 >I'm not against stripping out the teleportWe could keep teleporting for the TV, but only if we don't swap the weapons. General weapons shouldn't have anything tied to skills, as any character can equip them. That also means that a lot of other effects of the TV, such as not counting as movement when close by, wouldn't make it in the general version. Another option would be to have the TV be a skill rather than a weapon, which would free up the general weapon slot, but one of the other skills would need to be removed. I am curious as to the source of these items. I don't recall Makoto using a TV or wielding a bat, but it could just be me misremembering writefags.>>92580749>thus I tried to wait until such a time to reply!I wouldn't limit myself to only then. As long as our conversation doesn't get in the way of more active MPs.>Basically defining resistance by the goal of 'no instagibs' rather than trying to describe exactly how that's supposed to workIn a way, similar to the witch eye prompt, where it's not actually permanent? Or something where everyone has resistance roughly equivalent to 1 10 cost eye regardless of what eye they choose? Maybe resistances can be based on the sum of all eye points spent rather than tiers? So 3 3 cost, or 2 5 cost are roughly equivalent to 1 10 cost eye resistance?>Perhaps it was a goal before that pointIn a way, yes. It was just another route to get to her goal, as delusional as it may be. Non-canon stuff that better explores the character or possibilities is more valuable than a canon piece that barely kicks the story forward, in my opinion. There's always the possibility that it won't be accepted, but creating something meaningful will always have risks.
It seems like people liked the budding romance writefag I did so I'm going full speed ahead on my planned sequel that I was already working on the Forest of Death. This one will have more fighting but still explore some of the relationships I set up in the first writefag, ||and maybe some new ones|| I'm aiming to get it out this weekend
>>92586308Don't give deadlines anon, anons will believe them.
>>92586323I do it so it forces me not to procrastinate for fear of letting anons down
>>92586331Just so long as it doesn't end up like Nurgle's Gambit, you do you.
>>92586308>won't have my buildwhat's the point if you won't make it kino
>>92586308>that spoilerWheres the drill?
>>92586336I... don't know what that is>>92586340Name your build and I'll put it in if I like it >>92586358 my brain is too fried from work to remember the difference spoiler tags from here and discord
>>92586308Sounds cool, anon. I think you have the potential necessary to explore the relationships. For example, Shinro saved Yuma's ass in his writefag, right?
>>92584180>>92584722This >>92585912 is a pretty good strategy for direct combat.For how we're gonna proceed in FoD (I'm assuming we start in Sector 3):We'll go to somewhere around the end of Sectors 11, close to Sectors 18, quickly and stealthily, avoiding confrontation on the way there (unless there's an easy target). The team will set up traps there as directed by Akaito and wait for a team to walk in. See Akaito's rentry for the ambush strat, but change it to fit Chosuke and Rinka in it, of course. Rinka should activate Angel Mode the moment we reveal ourselves to end the battle quickly to press on the ambush advantage. Being relatively close to the center, we can go there quickly after a successful ambush (if we successfully ambush).Rinka and Chosuke, feel free to suggest other ways to proceed.
>>92586378I should be clear, by relationships I don't just mean romantic, I'm also interested in developing the platonic relationships and budding rivalries within teams. I don't want to overload on sappiness.
>>92586391Well, since you said budding romance I assumed it'd be that, but exploring other relationships is interesting too.
>>92586375>I... don't know what that isAn anon in the last Naruto run said he wasn't going to post his character without a writefag. He slow cooked to the point the MP was dead before he finished.
>>92586375remilia, masukuda, ichika, choko
Since we're kindof dead today what're you up to anon? Any prompt ideas?
>>92586471Were we kind of dead? I feel like there was a steady stream of posts.
>>92586336Don't use me as a cautionary tale, what the fucklet me die forgotten
>>92586492I'm mostly asking for prompt ideas.
>>92586471Wage slaving away. Barely enter the thread anymore."That is not dead which can eternal lie, and with strange aeons even death may die."
>>92586494>Don't use me as a cautionary tale, what the fuckDon't be a cautionary tale.>let me die forgottenNever.
>>92586494Nah. I'll forever shame you.
>>92586513>>92586514
>>92586471My build wasn't mentioned at ALL this thread so I've decided to rot and do nothing forever.
>>92586544first time?
>>92586544Kita anon, you know I love you.
>>92586471I feel like natuto prompts have been sorta exhausted.
>>92586470Weird love quadrangle.
>>92586590*square
>>92579924>>92579952>>92580046I don't post beyond shitposting, so I have to do a good deed to earn my isekai after I die.What would be an alternative version/future of your builds? Would your build change drastically?A good deed I have done, now I can be gone.
>>92586590i was shooting my shot with the characters i find cute but i wouldn't complain
>>92586601stay mad
>>92584722I had these for Team 7 >>92364962 >>92385052>>92584180Just a heads up, I do plan on updating Fujiwara. The only changes are gonna be switching Lazy Waterfall Style to Striking Iron Style and dropping Chakra Flow a rank to get Utility Jutsu. I'll try and get my jutsu list done asap if it'll help.
How many points does this cost?
>>92586644can't, i'm very happy that you're a bitch
>>92586700charmingsubterfuge++espionage++special skill (glazing)++
>>92586700Writefag tax
>>92586471rotting rather than writingI swear I'll get to it tomorrow
>>92586642>anon thinks my build is cute
>>92586609Dark timeline Masu joins the Akatsuki after her father is framed for treason (probably by her) and executed. After she joins, she starts developing her Light's Anathema to the point that she can cast jutsu capable of stealing the 'light' from her victim's eyes, rendering them permanently blind.
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>anon doesn't think my build is cuteI'M KILLING ANON
Does all the companion perks still grant 5 points?
>>92586789>Evil Masu>Becomes blackLol.
>>92586822Did they ever? I mean, they should, but I don't think we've formalized that rule.
>>92586790Please no, don't put that pressure on me. I haven't done anything substantial yet.
>>92586826She sacrificed the light of her skin for light in her jutsu
>>92586843she achieved Dark Elemental (Skin) Cloak
>>92586826She probably is black given Kumogakure. The original faceclaim was just the best image I found with bandages and the new one is the best image I've found with scars.>>92586842Why are you like this?
>>92586660>Fujiwara is mostly in close combat, not using bow>Kamare uses White Extreme Attack when Fujiwara is in close-combat>friendly fire>Fujiwara being bait when the Kamare and Daiki aren't all that great at stealthYou need to rethink your plan.
>>92586772wherehd your face go
>>92586713keep crying
>>92586917It's hiding because it's shy
>>92586877>>Fujiwara is mostly in close combat, not using bowThis was already brought up before. He is a close combatant despite using a bow.>but that doesn't make senseNeither are "ninjas" running around using the biggest and flashiest moves in open combat.>>Kamare uses White Extreme Attack when Fujiwara is in close-combat>>friendly fireThe idea is that I'm hoping Tenacious would override the pain WEA causes or if it does incapacitate Fujiwara, at least the enemy is also incapacitated letting Kamare deal the finishing blow.>>Fujiwara being bait when the Kamare and Daiki aren't all that great at stealthThey both have at least a rank in Stealth and then other skills like Subterfuge and Espionage. They're not the best but they're certainly not just average.
>>92586958Should have taken pain to pleasure to outright ignore pain lil bro
>>92586378Will monk baldy be able to resist the temptations of the bratty succubus?
>>92586982Why not just take tough?
>>92586958Hmm, ok. Your plan is decent.Now I'm questioning your build, but I know it's for flavor, so I won't say anything about it.
>>92586920it doesn't suit a square such as yourself to be so livid about squares
>>92586982But instead of being incapacitated from the pain, I'd get incapacitated from the titanic orgasm it would give.>>92586992I have Tough AND Tenacious.>>92587000I'm all ears honestly.
>>92586463Oh that's what I'm doing right now
>>92587009lil bro thought he cooked something devilish here
>>92579924Give me a good soundtrack for the recent writefags we've been getting please
>>92587025the only thing lil is your iq and the only thing devilish is your cheating whore mother
>>92587048no need to make your mommy issues the thread's problem lil bro
>>92587022I don't believe you. You'd never admit it if it were true.
>>92587084actually those are my wife issues you're talking about, sonim gonna have to ask you to put another penny into the "no u" jar
>>92587100>publicly fantasizing about being cuckednice one!
>>92587144im afraid it isn't so nice, kiddoweird that you think it isanyway go read more about your quadgayngles in a corner while I go get a beer and a lottery ticket
>>92587019You took no drawbacks, so you have quite a low amount of points to play around with, especially since the build is a sword/bow hybrid. Add on the Book Smarts 1: Etiquette that you really didn't need to take as everyone would just accept that Fujiwara has good etiquette if you just said so in his description even without buying that, your available points are really low.As of now, the bow is practically decoration because almost everything, especially the perks, are invested in melee. You even got Rupture Slash, my god.To make the hybrid work, as in, make the bow relevant, changing the perks (or at least just one) to things that benefit the bow more is the most important. Optional, but I highly recommend getting a few drawbacks, removing Rupture Slash, and only having 1 Advanced Weapon Style.
>>92587159You're the one that hates women, fag.
>>92587095Believe it or not, I don't care. I just found it amusing that it's the state I'm in
>>92587159>doubling down on the cucked husband fantasykeep it up!
>>92587171And especially remove Book Smarts 1: Etiquette. It's the most unnecessary thing I've seen in a build.
>>92587171Nta but nah Rupture Slash is Samurai kino, just keep studying the blade Fuji anon. The Samura are based
>>92587211I was working under the premise that he wanted to make the bow work. But yes, focusing on the sword is superior to going hybrid from a power standpoint.
>>92587193What a strange non sequitur.>>92587205If I fuck prostitutes it doesn't count. Now go do your homework. I think you're supposed to be learning how to spell "accidentally" today.
>bowsword possibilities ignored
>>92587208I'd argue Tsugumi's book smarts are more useless since she already has knowledge. I doubt anyone would care if anon just said she wrote good.
>Durrrr builds need to have max drawbacks and zero flavorDo statfags really?
>>92586266>In a way, similar to the witch eye prompt, where it's not actually permanent? That's also a good idea, but essentially what I'm saying is that if you try to apply a strict, mechanical ruleset, it might just form a new meta or you might encounter some other new problem as a result of the ruleset not being perfect (a perfect ruleset isn't realistic after all).So, instead of a mechanical solution, I was thinking the rule might be a more narrative one- essentially a disclaimer that no matter how absolute sounding a demon eye is, characters can and should have the ability to fight back against them, even without a demon eye of similar broken-ness. Like a promise that no matter how you build, your general power level won't change much. It'd be like locking us in at 3-4 star threat level. The explanation of how exactly that works can be left up to the anons playing it. Maybe those with more/stronger eyes have more unwieldy powers and lack proficiency. The goal was to narrow the power gap, so going for that directly instead of beating around the bush might be more effective, I guess?>resistance roughly equivalent to 1 10 cost eye regardless of what eye they choose? Hmm... That'd make it so that 3 costs are truly useless. Making it based on sum would probably just make the power gap wider rather than more narrow. If you really wanted to approach it from that angle, you'd probably need to overhaul resistance from the start. Like maybe all demon eye users have a base resistance to all other demon eyes regardless of cost difference, but cost difference increases that resistance further. Could run into an issue of game-ifying things too much though? Not sure.>but creating something meaningful will always have risks.Not wrong. It sounds more intriguing to me- something I'd find more interesting to read and be more motivated to take part in.But anyway, I'm off to bed. Slightly wish I had been watching the thread more closely since we could have chatted more.
>>92587265True. That build hurts my soul to look at.
>>92587208>>92587295Name your build so I can make it job you soulless powergamer
>>92587312D
>not taking useless bullshit = soullessI hope no one falls for this.
>>92587231nta, but I feel like that's one of the issues with how the thread handles this CYOA. We immediately assume that upgrading a skill is linear, or even exponential investment. If upgrades had somewhat diminishing returns, we wouldn't have a meta built around fully upgraded skills and it could be reserved for the autists that are truly devoted to a skillset.
>>92587323>anything that doesnt contribute directly to battle>useless
>>92587323They already did and they always do.
>>92587171>etting a few drawbacks,I'd love to have more points, but none of the drawbacks I'd usually take would fit. And I know, I can take the smaller ones and easily handwave it in my build, but I'm very picky with drawbacks and think that drawbacks should significantly affect the character. The Etiquette thing is fair though, I had plans on also taking Subterfuge and Espionage later on to have an "undercover stealth" approach to some things, but like you said, I'm low on points and I'm already dualspeccing bow and sword.>the bow is practically decorationIt's really hard when Weapon Arts are already starved for any high-tier skills, but ranged Weapon Arts are even more starved. I'll take Talented or Skilled for sure when ranking up though. And yeah, I also assumed Rupture Slash also works on the bow.>only having 1 Advanced Weapon Style.This is a tough deal because I already had the idea of eventually taking more Chakra natures and getting an associated Weapon Style to it.
>>92587325The problem with a system of diminishing returns is that there's no way to determine how diminishing it is (nor do we have any idea how much better exactly we get from upgrades, but positives are met with much less scrutiny than negatives) and any attempts will be met with disagreement. Even if the system is implemented, it would be complicated.Diminishing returns just don't work.
>>92587358just shoot arrows with your sword nigga
>>92579924Which builds would have AMVs made for them?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m9-ZJik7zXk&ab_channel=Release-Topic
>>92587376The edgy ones
Using both a bow and sword and taking stuff like Etiquette to fully commit to the samurai theme is the only interesting thing about Fujiwara's build. Powergaming anon is just trying to turn him into generic sword dude and make a boring build even more boring
>>92587376kuro and d
>>92587405D is the Kiba of our MP.
Itami was really cool in that last writefag.
>>92587415not reallyhe's more like the neji
>>92587420Skinwalkers can do that for you
>>92587438No, he's an overconfident jobber. He's Kiba.
>>92587467>No, he's an overconfident jobberyeah, neji
>>92587490Neji got to be cool tho, D is the type to job to farts
>>92587495D will be cool tootrust the plan
Do things like Homunculi Clay and Kidaichu let you see through their eyes? I can't remember from Naruto. I feel like Shino used to do that.
>>92587531Nope. Shino would have his bugs fly around then report back to him. Deidera would fly around and use his scope to scout out areas.
>>92586471Who wins in a fatal four way match between Sen, Himari, Yuma, and Ichika? No jutsus allowed.
>>92587597D
>Overconfident loser with personal dreams nobody else gives a fuck about or believes in, singlehandedly ruins clan stocksD is Kiba>Hyperfocus build, coolest character of the arc, will get crippled, wacky character designSen is Lee>Joke character, gets wings in the next arc, looks incredibly stupidEiken is Choji>Shitty personality OP eyefaggot with a fanbase because they're hot, will turn evil, needs to get kicked in the head a few timesYuma is Sasuke>useless femaleRinka is 1010>future big honkers housewifeKuro is Hinata>random guy with blatantly overpowered abilities that never does anything importantKazen is Shino>incredibly basic and straightforward set upRemilia is Sakura if she had good writing>supposed to be super overpowered but will job, makes anons engage in public shitflinging over shit like "themes"Shinro is NejiCan't place Ino, Shikamaru, or Naruto.
>>92587625Yeah this is booty cheeks
>>92587666Yeah sure thing satan, I bet you're an Eiken fan
>>92587671I don't even remember who that is
>>92587625>Hot girl who is character development fodder for the Sakura buildHimari is Ino>Smart boring guyKita is Shikamaru>Plucky retard with a gimmickKichona or Taiho is Naruto (maybe Nodao but she seems to cynical)
>>92587666That good, huh?
>>92587597Himari titmogs.
>>92587675I take it back, you're based. >>92587680Checks out.
I don't get the D hate. I think his posts are funny.
>>92587241It's actually "aacciiddeennttaally"
>>92587706Judging by other characters that get hate, it's 60% shitposting.
>>92587706hes too sexually intimidating, i must shitpost to get rid of the gay thoughts
>>92587706D hate is ironic. Kitsumoto/Eiken/Shinro hate is legit.
>>92587714faggot
>>92587717homostuck can break a man
>>92587726actually it's homosuck
>>92587731*holmesduck
I like Kuro and Ichika.
>>92587757They're only 7 years old you sick bastard.
>>92587757No, Kuro is my tsundere chuunibyou jobber housewife.
>>92579924What's every character's best ship.
>>92587778>every characteranon, what the fuck?
Fights are more interesting when you don't give all your characters omniscient knowledge of everyone else's builds.
>>92587797Fights are more interesting when they have strangely sexual tension
You're both objectively correct.
>>92587757Kurochika...the forbidden fruit...
>>92587836*rotten fruit
Rolled 17, 7, 16, 17, 8, 20, 5, 2, 2, 19, 9, 21 = 143 (12d21)>>92587778I don't know, so I'll do random instead and see how awful they are.
>>92587856Kuro can't be that bad.
>>92587862>Eiken x Himari>Jin x Kichona>Kitsumoto x Nodao>Eiken x Masukuda>Shinro x Ichika>Akaito x Remilia>Itami x Yuma>Takeru x Sen>Takeru x Kuro>Egao x Choko>Ghidorah x Ayuka>Chosuke x RinkaYep, these are all fucking trash alright.
>>92587880Why do you hate half the roster so much you've excluded them?
Rolled 9, 7, 1, 5, 10, 2, 10, 6, 4, 6, 12, 5, 11, 8, 8, 10, 11, 11, 3, 12, 4 = 155 (21d12)>>92587892Fine, I'll do it the other way too.
>>92587892same reasoning as this anon >>92587714
>>92587895>D x Kuro>Takeru x Yuma>Shimabukuro x Himari>Kita x Ichika>Itami x Choko>Kazen x Kichona>Jin x Choko>Shinro x Remilia>Ghidorah x Masukuda>Junki x Remilia>Fujiwara x Rinka>Kamare x Ichika>Daiki x Ayuka>Mitsuteru x Sen>Mojo x Sen>Kitsumoto x Choko>Eiken x Ayuka>Oishi x Ayuka>Egao x Nodao>Akaito x Rinka>Chosuke x MasukudaHappy?
>>92587921The reverse harem universe...
>>92587921Who're the biggest sluts according to the dice?
>>92587921Somehow this is even worse
>>92587921>KuroD>YumaTakeru>HimariShimabukuro>IchikaKita. Kamare>KichonaKazen>ChokoItami, Jin. Kitsumoto>RemiliaShinro, Junko>MasuGhidora, Chosuke>RinkaFujiwara, Akaito>AyukaDaiki, Eiken, Oishi>SenMitsuteru, Mojo>NodaoEgao>>92587925Choko and Ayuka tieSomething about five letter names, I think.
Rolled 5, 5, 3, 1, 4, 5 = 23 (6d7)Here's another one for real adults.
Rolled 4, 1, 3, 4, 4, 2, 3 = 21 (7d6)>>92587983And the other way around for fairness.
>>92587983>Inaba x Kamiko>Inaba x Kiko>Ezaki x Tsugumi>Natsuo x Rio>Kamiizumi x Onikage>Inaba x Boobkage>>92587990>Natsuo x Rio>Osamu x Kamiko>Ezaki x Tsugumi (true love)>Kamiizumi x Rio>Inaba x Rio>Dojuma x Kiko>Bofu x Tsugumi
I could write code that would do a much better job of rolling these things.
>>92587880>>92587921>Kid five years younger than her obsessed with marriage>Insane assassin likely to kill her if it would benefit him>Science experiment goo person>A HyugaNot like this...
>>92588109The waifu/husbando factor of the median Nart build is negative. Just be glad you didn't get the absolute worst ones, right?
>>92586609I've feel like I've talked a bunch about the actual build details for Ichika progressing through he ranks. What she'd be like in the future is pretty dependent on what happens before that, but it's safe to say that she'll be more comfortable going full tilt and have some form of ant-war sentiments. Her self-sacrificing will probably go beyond the physical to feeling the need to take on more responsibility/dirty herself for others.Alternative version... Well, good or evil, the build itself wouldn't change much but her applications would (she'd become a lot more comfortable with the idea of brainwashing people then she currently is). Could maybe twist her desire to protect into a desire to control where she believes she knows what's best.
>>92588148Who’s the worst off? Who’s the best?
>>92588148>didn't get the absolute worst oneimagine thinking this
>>92586609>RioI could see her fully snapping if one she failed to keep a student safe and training herself in ways to kill people for revenge. After that she'd not be the same person. No bubbly facade, no cheerful anecdotes. The fact she works without direct bloodshed gives her the courage to her days. She loses her soul if she kills another.>SallyObviously, there's the desolator route where she quite Shiketsu and gets trained as an assassin. She'd probably end up becoming a fem desolator who adopts the children of the people she kills as penance for the act.She couldn't marry Noah here because she can't stick around long enough to be a wife as an assassin, at least not a good one.>YoruA part of me wonders if Yoru would have been received differently if they had a male faceclaim and was more of a chad than a slut.As for the future, what I like best is her managing to get a hold of her demon with the help of Yoji to live a relatively normal life, maybe even choosing to settle down with Hinako and try and help her control her urges.While its a cute idea, I can't see Yoru staying with Yoji forever as a wife: If she learned anything from him, its that she needs to pass on what she learned.Oh, also DE writefag will be released tomorrow. Just have to some editing on it.
>>92586609>ChristopherI’ve talked about the Stranger before, but his bright timeline counterpart will still use the name Mirror Devil. He’s an underground hero that teaches at Shiketsu. He has a habit of slipping into story time when teaching, as such he teaches himself how to tie the story back in with his lesson. The build doesn’t change much.
>>92588413I wonder what he'd think about Sally settling with Noah but still doing underground hero work. Gotta counteract how much Noah donates of the household funds after all.And no, she doesn't need Hoge and Inigo's money, even if they gave her and Noah a house.
>>92586609An alternate version of Bobby might be one where his dad survived his fight with Death. Sun Man wouldn't have ended up so mythologized had he lived, and he would have been able to guide Bobby and help him feel less overwhelmed by the expectations to fill his father's shoes. Bobby would have also learned how to control his quirk a lot earlier, instead of running from it and what he felt it represented. The biggest likely difference would have been him never moving to Japan to attend Shiketsu.Another alternate version might be one where he went down the villain/vigilante route, though things would have needed to have been really fucked for that to have happened. He wasn't on a great path before moving to Japan, but heroics is really in his DNA. If he did somehow go down that route, it might look like that run of Spider Man when he just murdered all his villains while he had the black suit. One where Bobby retained some sense of justice, but it was a warped one where he never pulled his punches.
>>92586609Kaylee's in her good timeline.Had she not had an incident in her youth, she would be much like Feral; a monster rampaging and doing as much damage as possible. I was previously kicking around an idea with her coma that, when she woke up, she'd be in that mindset. Decided against it, but I guess it exists in a parallel timeline.
>>92587921Junki anon here. Don't remember who Remilia is so I don't know how crazy/bad a ship that is.
>>92579924So...what are we cooking in Naruto?
>>92586609>HifumiMost of those have been mentioned in the past, but why not.>Future versions>Number #1The current dream of his. A sort of "bright timeline". Graduate Shiketsu, become a pro hero, marry Hailey, keep grinding at it. Would not become a powerhouse number #1 like the previous ones, but with possible Awakening (multilocation), he can get whole teams on site quickly, highlighting the teamwork advantage of the hero side. Hay's money would help him on the road to the spot, but due to the lacking power, I'd expect it to not be a fast promotion, probably about two decades after graduating Shiketsu, with some slumps on the way, and some other classmates possibly getting to the #1 first. With being less reliant on the personal power, he could probably hog the spot for a long time while he gets there, though.>The Blind SwordsmanPossibly tied to other options, but Hifumi getting blinded might have interesting interactions with his Quirk. Initially, it would disable it, but once he gets used to it, I think it could lead to him sort of removing the close/open eyes mechanic. The closed eyes originally was to enhance the process of building the mental image by cutting out the visual interference. With it permanently out, it could be an impetus to help overcome that. Not being able to see would be a big blow to him, especially considering he's a movie buff. >Revenge RoninDarkest timeline. If a tragedy on a tier of his family and gf getting murdered by a Villain happened, he could go the vigilante/murderer road. Kill enough people, and he could learn to telefrag by blinking his sword into his targets. Still directed by some sort of code and not an indiscriminate Villain, but could also go anti-government if the source of the tragedy were the enforcers for example.
>>92589660>AU>Kendo ChampionAU where his father kept his job in Germany, his family never moved back, and Hifumi kept looking up to his father as his idol. Instead of becoming a hero, he set his eyes on becoming a pro athlete.>Phantom ThiefAU where his family's financial problems got much more severe, and Hifumi gets into thievery. Eventually getting under the care of a more experienced Villain of this type, like Karma. A Thief that can just teleport in and out of the vault would be mighty efficient, but he'd need to know the layout first and ensure there are no Quirk disabling traps inside, so the prep stage of the heists would still be interesting, I believe.>5.1In this one, Hifumi's father definitely passed away, and the loss broke Hifumi quite a bit. His delinquency was much less wholesome and violent as a result. One day, ends up fucking with a wrong person, as in the Desolator, but it ends with the legend taking him under his wing (sort of like what happened with Junichi, and the mentorship offer he extended to Sally). Hifumi gets attached to him as a sort of father figure. Thanks to Desolator's tutelage, he would probably end up quite a terrifying assassin, especially if compared with the telefrag option in the style of Revenge Ronin, but here he doesn't necessarily go for the samurai aesthetics.
>>92589592It's the Orochimaru as a little girl. It's a Snake X Bird pairing.
>>92580046Now that the dust has settled, who do you think is winning the next match of the tournament, and who do you think is going to win it overall?
>>92579924Been murmuring on some custom abilities for Sen for the upgrade and realized a lot of people never read the Fox Clan writeup so thought I might as well put it in the thread and get some ideas on if this sounds balanced, wank, boring, interesting or whatever else.>Dream Viewing (Hell Viewing Alt) - BasicAn unconventional Genjutsu that, instead of senses, attacks the target's mind directly to inflict a single, simple emotional state - the more skilled the practitioner, the more intense the state achievable. Without sensory illusions or any real control of the target's thoughts, this technique is far less effective than Hell Viewing and is incapable of incapacitation even at higher levels - it is, however, far more subtle, difficult to recognize and subsequently escape from.>Dream Dancing (Genjutsu Reversal Alt) - BasicPartner to Dream Viewing, you instead focus your Genjutsu inward, manipulating your own mental state. Beyond the obvious utility, this technique's primary benefit is in resisting others' Genjutsu. Practitioners of Dream Dancing possess a well-developed mindset for detecting illusions and disrupting their own chakra network - while not as directly effective as Reversal or Release, clever applications of this technique allow the user to find or create 'loopholes,' - and thus remain more functional - while in anothers' illusion.>Dream Arts (Illusory Arts Alt, Req. Dream Viewing) - AdvancedAn advanced application of Dream Viewing, you can inflict more complex or even combinations of emotions on the target. Additionally, you can focus these emotions onto a concept - such as an object or person - instead of a generalized feeling. For example, you could make the target fear a specific sword, or all swords, or feel trust towards a cup of potentially poisoned sake while under your Genjutsu. Like Dream Viewing, the technique is less versatile and effective than Illusory Arts, but is more difficult to resist, recognize and escape from.
>>92589889The idea is to make Sen a full Genjutsu specialist but I don't want to lock people into the usual writing pitfalls of Genjutsu either being useless or instant-win illusory worlds. This way her Genjutsu becomes part of a more complicated strategy and can feel dangerous without stalling a fight - as cool as Tsukuyomi & co. are they're really not well-suited for this kind of story as they either instantly hog all the spotlight or are totally forgotten/noselled in every fight.The whole 'Dream Stuff is harder to detect/escape from than normal Genjutsu,' was a brief overlook at balance since it's meant to be way less directly effective than Illusory Arts but if that in particular feels like powergaming feel free to say so.
>>92589858>Orochi vs BobbyThe noon power up has been used on the match with Yui, but it was said that he can hold it for an hour, so if he keeps it, I think he'll win. If not, he'll lose.>Kaylee vs SandyAssuming the fight is allowed to go through, I think it's Sandy's win on paper, but Kaylee wank can be strong, so she's not out of it.>Finals and 3rd placeI'm not sure which fight is for which place, but I think it's Orochi vs Kaylee and Bobby vs Sandy.No idea who'd win in the first one, but I'd lean Kaylee.For the latter, without the noon powerup, I don't see Bobby winning it, and neither do I see him keeping it for two fights after the fight where he first got it. Maybe if they pull some sun grenade gadget or something like they sometimes use in vampire slaying movies. Another possibility of Bobby's win would be some emotional power up over what happened to Minnie, but without going Awakening, I don't know how, and he won't get that based on the timeline. Final, and I feel like the most probable chance for him out of those, is Sandy just sort of giving up and letting Bobby wail on him. Other than that, Sandy stomps.
>>92589889>>92589897I feel like you should give Sen at least *some* way of fighting
>>92589858i dont want sandatsu to wineven if he beats kaylee in the extra matchup she was asking for, i think its best for him to remain disqualifiedother than that, I feel like the victory should go to either kaylee of bobby since both are very straightforward brawlers, and orochi being third
>>92589995Between all her usual skillsets, plenty of Genjutsu and just a plain ol' Kunai she'd definitely be able to fight, just not keep up with anyone invested into combat, which is fine imo.
>>92590023She doesn't have ninja tools, though. She'd be shit at using the Kunai.
>>92590028She doesn't need to be good with it if she can cripple the other guy with a mix of Genjutsu and top-tier environmental shenanigans. She'd still lose to a majority of the cast but it'd still be far more proactive than Sakura.
>>92589607I'm waiting for Shimabukuro anon and Ayuka anon to finish their 5 star meals before doing anything else.
>>92589889>>92589897>basically just changing opponents' emotions and changing their reactions to certain objectsThis seems annoying and a little boring to write.Could you give me a short gameplan for how a fight with her and anyone would go?
>>92590175The purpose of it in combat is to enhance any Shikamaru-style schemes she comes up with. If her other skills like Improvisation, Subterfuge, Espionage etc. are about setting up the arena, making use of the environment or knowing how to feint people with her intelligence, then these would supplement that as a sort of 'combat charisma' and make her mind games significantly more effective. A good example of how this kind of thing would manifest subtly is in the first fight with Kakashi vs Zabuza - where Zabuza completely overestimated the Sharingan and later realized it was because he was partially being hypnotized.Essentially, she'd be the perfect liar and a fight with her would be about trying to figure out which of her bluffs are real. The bluffs could be anything from her making people believe she has some sort of fucked up gigajutsu when she weaves false handsigns, the preparation of basic traps that she could make people blunder into, or simply making people overestimate or underestimate what's going on around them. The key here being almost all of it is literally bluffing - however supernaturally buffed - and once people get past all the layers and mistakes she's making them make she's extremely vulnerable.This also makes her far, far stronger in team fights where she has actual threats from others to obscure or set up and far weaker on her own, which is a pretty core part of her build anyway.
>>92590245>PIS as a tangible skillCan't say I'm a fan.
>>92589858There are 6 possible fights left, with 2 next up.>Orochi v BobbyBobby can hold his charge for an hour, so even if he can't hold the noon state beyond the minute, he should still be strong enough to overpower Orochi, at least enough to get her out of bounds>Sandy v KayleeIf Kaylee got Karaburan to allow the match, then this is a tossup imo. Sandy's not as strong as he is currently, with fewer quirks, which makes it closer than the Night of the Reaper fight. In that one, Kaylee showed that she low-diffs Sandy. There, he focused on using Evolution, Conduit, Bloodthirst, Psychokinesis, Comeback. At the time of the tournament, he had Comeback, Branching Grasp, Blood Puppet, Separate, Psychokinesis, Slow-Mo, and might have had Charge-Up and Bloodthirst. With that load-out, even if he used all of them, I don't see it having the power to overwhelm her. Should be a close fight.These can all be third place or finals.>Orochi v SandyI think Sandy takes this. Slow-Mo plus Branching Grasp will likely be enough to prevent her from biting him, which is how she's won her previous matches. Comeback may also be enough on its own to stop that, now that I think about it. Unless she injects him with so much venom that he keels over, Sandy wins this.>Orochi v KayleeThis is a pretty easy Kaylee dub. She's stronger, faster, can fly, and has powerful ranged options. Kaylee knocks her out of bounds before the venom can do anything.>Bobby v SandyDepends if this is the third or final. If third, then Bobby wins, from having enough charge left. If final, then Sandy will be able to chip him down.>Bobby v KayleeSimilar to the previous, this depends if it is third or final. Bobby's charge is going to be dropping from here on, and he's going to be drained from fighting Orochi in any case.
>>92586609>TsuI've thought about how else I'd build her. Other than pumping basics or elements to represent knowledge gained through hax, paper and ink are the only things that really fit her shtick and there's plenty of dudes rocking those. Slapping on mad science works for an evil version too. There's the custom route but that's it's won can of worms.>Alts1) Actually being a ninja for one, maybe even Shimo's headman. The only thing that changes here is how much time she gets to spend writing and how hard it becomes to pass the academy/exams because of her standards.2) Cranking her distaste for how ninja operate up to outright hate for them. Would be more obviously jaded and probably becomes some background villain that want everyone to wipe themselves out.3. She was secretly an but she doesn't care about sucking up everyone's chakra. She just came here because her eyes told her that her true love was going born and she's waiting to snatch them up. Her groomer skill is maxed and she picks up obsessed.>>92589889Sounds neat. I don't remember if I commented on the fox lore but that seemed neat too. Makes me feel like I should give Tsu a familiar if I did update her for some reason.
>>92590245Ok but like... how would that *work*? Pretend she's fighting some guy with Weapon Art (Shurikens) 3, Poison Style 3, Ninja Tools 3, and nothing else. How would she fight this jabroni?
>>92590270The alternative is Genjutsu being a paralyze where she just stands around. Absolutely up for alternative ideas but she's basically slated to be a Genjutsu Merchant - I just really dislike the Genjutsu 'economy,' as-is because it's the least interesting way to write illusions unless it's specifically about a character like Itachi who is best used rarely.
>>92589889>>Dream ViewingI don't think this is a basic tier. Genjutsu in general affect senses. What this does is affect the emotions. This is one step closer to mind control. It sort of skips a step, where a lot of defences are focused, and also skips a lot of hoops. You don't need to know your target for maximum effectiveness of your technique, nor can they just reason their way through the situation. >Dream Dancing This sounds more like the genjutsu defence aspect of Utility Jutsu than Genjutsu Reversal. The Reversal sends a counter genjutsu back at the target, and this doesn't seem to do that, just defend. Maybe if it was more about hijacking the illusion with subtle twists it would be closer. Overall, I don't think it's imbalanced (it's not an offensive technique, but also doesn't have the restrictions and risks like the Reversal; and it also can be used for some self-manipulation probably, which would be useful), just that it's not really a Genjutsu Reversal Alt.>Dream ArtsFor the same reasons I don't believe Dream Viewing is basic, this being Advanced also seems like underplaying it. A step closer to true mind control over normal genjutsu because it jumps a step ahead in that process.
>>92590317>This is one step closer to mind control.That's a genjustu ability.
>>92590298How about something more like Haze Clone or Bringer of Darkness? Genjutsu focused around affected the environment. That way you can still have the 1 gazillion bluffs and it's not as wacky because the illusions are actually "real".
>>92590331He isn't arguing against that, he's saying that they aren't basics or advanced and that they feel more like hidden or special.>>92590336*affecting
>>92590271 Sandy V KayleeIf anything the quirks he has for the tournament seem more useful against Kaylee than the ones he used in Night of the Reaper
Okay, so, I gotta ask. Am I the only one who can't figure out what some skills being upgraded would do? Like, What exactly would something like Clone 3 be? I don't even know what clone 2 would be, much less 3. With stuff like shadow clones it's easy, but...Clone 3? Or even other clone techniques like Haze Clone. I just don't see how you can improve on those.
>>92590289There isn't really a one-size fits all and it's highly dependant on what lie she's telling depending on her strategy. But for some examples;>Convince the guy that she's researched him and has the antidote to his poisons, doubly effective if she can 'prove,' it by telling him who he is with some espionage preptime>Convince the guy to fight her in an area with more dense forestry where it'd be far harder to use his shuriken by stroking his overconfidence>Either get the guy to waste shuriken on some rustle in the trees by convincing him it's her with a fear response OR get him to conserve shuriken by worrying she's just illusions>Making him believe there's absolutely no way she could hurt him after he breaks through the lies (he's only partially correct, at Rank C she'd technically have Ninja Tools 1 by Genin level, not super dangerous but enough to stab a dude caught off guard)I'm not expecting fifty layers of Tsukuyomi shenanigans at Rank C but essentially during the think-and-talk stage of Naruto battles she'd be incredibly good at thinking and equally good at making the enemy think wrong not because they're stupid but because they're being lied to about their surroundings.It doesn't make her invincible or even all that good in a fight alone but it does make her a menace in a team fight and more proactive than mostly pacifistic roles like Sakura and even Ino who mostly does nothing until someone opens up an avenue for Mind Possession.>>92590317This was my worry too but in terms of power scaling I tried to be clear that it's way less effective at manipulating people than Hell Viewing or Illusory Arts even if it's more 'direct,' mind control. Dream Viewing in particular is extremely blunt and not all that effective in my mind - it has the power to make you mad, sad or whatever but less effective than Orochimaru's Hell Viewing which was good enough to just straight mindbreak people, for example. I do get your point though
>>92590380it makes more clones with less chakra and hand sealswhat else would it be
>>92590380It's kind of vague but we know that as someone masters a jutsu it becomes more effective, cost less and can be used faster, so that at least blanket applies to almost all the abilities.
>>92590331>>92590391I suspected my logic might not get through with the way I tried to explain it, so let me try once more.Usually, genjutsu affect the senses, not directly the target's emotional/mental state, and not the actions.You have sort of three stages of this:1. What the target experiences.2. How the target processes it3. How the target acts.Let's say the end goal is to get the target to kill himself.>Example usual genjutsu way:1. Show the target his family has been murdered. You probably need some knowledge about the target's family to get it going in the first place.2. The target sees it and falls into despair. This is a chance for him to see through the discrepancies in what he sees.3. The target despairs so hard, he decides to kill himself. This relies on this being his answer to this emotion, and also his allies not stopping him etc.>Mind control way (or maybe body control would be more precise now that I think about it)Skip straight to step 3 and make the target kill himself. Usually techniques that are able to do that, are pretty limited and higher level, like Mind Transfer and Shadow Posession. Often they aren't even suitable to killing someone without killing yourself (though I feel like they always underplayed the ways those limitations could be bypassed.)>Direct emotion manipulationYou skip step 1.2. You fill the target with suicide tier despair. You don't need to know much about him. He has much less of a chance to reason his way out of this.3. as in standard, it has to be his reaction to despair and allies can stop himIn pseudo program allegory. Step 1 is input, step 2 is processing, step 3 is output. Pure mind/body control affects output. Usual genjutsu affects input (which is then processed to produce output). Emotion control affects the processing, but you still aren't 100% what the output will be.tl;dr: advanced/hidden rather than basic/advanced
>>92590394>>92590410So then how much would getting level 3 in these kinds of techniques improve? None of them are particularly Chakra consuming or hard to make.
>>92590380Better chakra efficiency if nothing else, but yeah it's hard to say how a basic clone can really get stronger. I think it's pretty easy to say how most get stronger though.Not really related, but it's kinda weird that there's no option for elemental clones. In previous versions I just thought of it as a reasonable assumption that you could make one, but now there's a bunch if other stuff I figured didn't need an actual purchase. Obviously they weren't included because shadow clones are there and just better in every way, but it still seems odd to have basic clones and haze clones buy elementals.
>>92590467I don't know lil bro, this isn't an rpg with mana costs and mana poolsmaybe you could pull off some retarded shit like nart and fill a whole forest/village with clones, but without his uzumaki chakra pool>>92590468>it's kinda weird that there's no option for elemental clones.huh???????
>>92590486Huh. Weird to make them hidden. They really aren't better than shadow clones.
>>92590502All the {Elementals} are in hidden+ which was retarded enough for us to make a rule against that tax.
>>92590502did you even read the optionthey are physical like shadow clones + have extra abilities based on element
QUESTIONIf I have the truth seeking orb element, can I use the {Element} jutsu with it? Like, can I make Truth Clones, Truth Golems, and Truth Dragons?
>>92590462Generally agreed and I can definitely see the logic, to try and explain my perspective of the limitations when designing it.>EffectivenessOne implication of Dream Arts is that the emotions they inflict are far less extreme than those that can be inflicted by cleverly applied normal Genjutsu.Let's say a Dream Viewing 3 and Hell Viewing 3 character attempt to inflict fear. If the Hell Viewing character attempts for a generic fear-inducing hallucination, it would be roughly as effective as the Dream Viewing character. If the Hell Viewing was properly set up, the sensation of fear would be far worse. The advantage of the Dream Viewing in this situation is it's more difficult (but not impossible) to recognize the Genjutsu and thus break out of it. The same weaknesses/strengths transfer over to Dream Arts vs Illusory Arts.>VersatilityA properly applied Genjutsu doesn't only inflict emotional manipulation but can also directly control sensory input and even - to a degree - control mobility at the same time. Dream Arts, subsequently, can only effect the emotional state and are thus reliant on other abilities used in conjunction to become as effective. Importantly, Dream Arts users are also more reliant on the environment as the ranks go up, where Illusory Arts users become far more versatile in the creation of their own world.The advantages of Dream Arts in skipping a step can summarily be argued to balance out disadvantages of both direct effectiveness and an incapability of effecting the previous step, which is just as important a concept in Genjutsu.That's not to say I entirely disagree with you, just that I'm not sure if it warrants an upgrade from Basic/Advanced to Advanced/Hidden due to the equally harsh downsides. If the thread has a general consensus towards your take though I wouldn't have an issue and gladly up the rating.
>>92590529yes
>>92590514I guess the author took some liberties. They'd normally be strictly worse that just using a shadow clones.if you're good enough since they're just weaker and don't info share on despawn.
>>92590529>Truth Spear>BECOME TRUTH
>>92590640Now that's some real shinjutsu.
>>92590640Wait...What would happen if you used elemental spear with Dust?
>>92590529>>92590640The "element" is Truth-Seeking Orb, not Truth.>Truth Clones, Truth Golems, and Truth Dragons>Truth SpearThese create things made out of whatever material Truth-Seeking Orb is.Granted, this is still op, but certainly not as op as the metaphysical concept of Truth.
>>92590640Akshually it's Truth Seeking Orb Spear and you become a Truth Seeking Orb.>>92590682You transform partially into Dust.
>>92590691>>92590701I just shortened it because I'm lazy but I guess all this power discussion in nardo left your fuses too short
>>92590682>DustPeople talk about this like it's the best thing ever, but what about Scathe? Seems sorta the same to me, except the damage happens the instant it hits, so it's better than Dust.
>>92590724>he doesn't know about the dust lasersAlso Scathe is just "hit le hard" so it can still be defended against with enough buffs/skill.
You guys are forgetting that ninjas work in teams. Sen going full sensor genjutsu is a good fit with Ghidorah, especially if he upgrades his stealth
How can I make a build that:>is faster than everyone>can defend against any attack>1 shots everyone>can solo the entire world
>>92590373I agree, which is why it's a tossup rather than just a sweep, but he doesn't have the same base strength that he does later. I can see either of them taking it.
>>92590880Buy the rinnegan
>>92590880>Light>Dust>Chakra Receiver Creation x2>Light Dust Spear
>>92590880make a weak build (female) and wait for anons to wank you
>>92590880make a weak build (female) and wait for anons to wank
>>92590880Be D
>>925908801. Make a Z-Ranker2. That's it really
>>92591022>Charming>Attractive>Yin>Yang>Water>max Subterfuge, Espionage, Book Smarts: Seduction, Substance Production: Pheromones
>>92591096Do you think we could wank Kamiko as our Attractive Yin Yang Water build? They got pheromones via that smell genjutsu hidden.
>>92591096>Charming>Attractive>Yin>Yang>WaterWait for Rinka to rank up.
>>92590691>>92590529Elemental Chakra Cloak: Truth Seeking Orbs
How many perks do we get after an upgrade?
>>92591274Just 1, unless we allow for drawback perks.
>>925912743 total (chunin base 2 + 1 from our rules (it wasn't genin exclusive, jonins got it too)), so 1 new one.
>>92591220>no Charming and being a Jinchuurikinah>>92591234Now THIS is what I'm talking about.
>>92591307If you have a sex with a Jinchuruuki does it count as a threesome
>>92591370If the chakra beast has partial control over the body while having sex, then yes.
>>92591096>Charming>Attractive>Yin>Yang>WaterWait for Ichika to rank up.
>>92591503>>92591234Why water?
>>92591542sloppiness level
>>92591542It's curvy, fluid and graceful. It's objectively the sexiest element, fire is second.
>>92591542they can't make women wet so they need her to use a nature
>>92591564Fire is hotter though?
>>92591608Fire is hotter, water is sexier. The distinction is too subtle for most mortals to comprehend. Only enlightened sages like the guy who did the Flame Atronach post back in the day can.
>>92591564>>92591608>>92591798Water is feminine (submissive)Fire is feminine (dominant).Earth is masculine (dominant).Lightning is masculine (dominant)Wind is feminine (masculine)I'm sorry, I don't make the rules.
>>92591845Er, Lightning is masculine (submissive) rather.
>>92591845>water>submissivekisame, drown this nigga
>>92591852>Lightning is masculine (submissive)Dbros? What the fuck is this?
>>92591863Kisame is just built different, but he does willingly let his sword drink his juice though.
>>92591883I knew it, he's a fucking fag!
>>92591845>Wind is feminine (masculine)?>>92591852Earth sounds more submissive considering it gets seeded and things grow in it often.
>>92591892Nah only Wind is gay, Lightningfags just want to be pinned by a dominant athletic Fire girl.
>>92591897This Anon does have a point, Lightning does have the highest penetration of the elements after all.
>>92591904>Lightningfags just want to be pinned by a dominant athletic Fire girlSomeone cross-reference this against the ships.
>>92591845>Water is feminine (submissive)The following male builds have water chakra natures. If they don't either submit to having the genderbender drawback stapled onto their build on rankup or drop the water nature, they're officially illegal builds.>Osamu>Shimabukuro>Junki>Kamiizumi>Kamare>Mitsuteru>Mojo>Kitsumoto>Dojuma>Taihō>Eiji
>>92590880Chakra Beast (Kurama had like, 30 points spent total and was twice as strong as the rest combined while your's gets 80 not even counting perks) and then make sure that you keep it inside you so you don't get insta gimped by genjutsu.
>>92591845I think Lightning's a switch.
>>92591370Yes, Kurama tagged in for Naruto many times in order to keep up with the Hyugussy.
>>92591979>Osamu gets pegged by his puppetsWhat the FUCK.
>>92591542Would you rather stick your dick in Fire, Water, Earth, Wind, or Lightning?>Fire/Lightning fries your dick off>Earth gets dirt on your dick, possibly crushes it with rocks>Wind is just streaking>Water is cleansingAnother way to think about it: Which one do most people willingly get naked in?
>>92591979>Mojohe's got all of the natures, he's covered
>>92592019>implying you wouldn't streak during a hurricaneWhere my Florida bros at?!
Retards, you forgot to canonfag.>Hashirama (Earth + Water) dommed Madara (Fire)>Kakashi (Lightning) penetrated Rin (Water) BUT he was forced to by her>Naruto (Wind) needed help from Kurama to fuck HinataEarth = DomWater = Power BottomLightning = Sub (Top)Fire = Sub (Bottom)Wind = Cuck
>>92592036>during a hurricaneHurricanes have rainstorms with them, thereby including the sexiness of water.Further proof that Water is the sexiest. Hurricanes are sexier than tornadoes.
>>92592062Hurricanes also have wind, Lightning, Earth kicked up and if it's a really good one, Fire.
>>92591979I don't know about relationships but this shit cooks itself.
>>92592088>Water most popularbut why?
>>92580036So i was reading this writefag again, and one of the techniques caught my attention - Afterimage Clone. It seems to use body flicker to basically allow you to switch between afterimages by just moving around like crazy.Would it be even possible to do this *without* having literal shisui-tier body flicker skill?
>>92592107Because it's the sexiest, duh.
>>92591979>>Taihōah, shit. at least his faceclaim has the fanart for it
>>92592129RINKA YOU BITCHWHAT DID YOU DOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
>>92592111>Would it be even possible to do this *without* having literal shisui-tier body flicker skill?No, the writefag wanked Itami so hard. Dude doesn't even have upgrades to Body Flicker.
>>92589858>Orochi vs Bobby I don't think the noon power up is relevant here. Even if it wore off, it still being peak sunlight hours means he's a lot physically stronger than her or anyone she's fought in the tournament so far. If ring-outs weren't a thing it'd be different, because she could regen and stall the match while being tossed around. Assuming she can pierce his skin, I expect her poison be a factor, but I think he still takes the W. >Kaylee vs SandyI'm going with Sandy. His extra quirks should be a much bigger factor before the internships since everyone is still pretty green. I think if Kaylee was a bit more strategic it'd be a different story, but I expect the two of them to just rush each other. Then I think he catches her off guard and overwhelms her with stuff she didn't know he could do, with her getting minor victories but never quite getting off the back foot. I think it's also fitting for Karaburan to basically be punished for letting the match happen by having the schizo make it to the finals. It's going to be a PR nightmare. >Orochi vs Kaylee I think this looks a lot like Orochi vs Bobby. Kaylee isn't as strong as early afternoon Bobby, but she's still stronger than Orochi. And her flight and ki blasts give her even more tools to set up a ring-out than Bobby had.>Bobby vs SandyWith the fighters left in the tournament, I expect some really long matches, which doesn't bode well for Bobby's quirk. He should be going into this one weaker than Kaylee did, so any possibility of victory would be due to mental diff. I think Bobby's best case scenario is "winning the story" by continuing to stand up after being outmatched and maybe pulling out a near win right before he gives out. I think Sandy takes this, making his eventual turn to villainy an even bigger disaster for Shiketsu's reputation.
>>92592111>>92592142Retards. He used Swift.
>Feminine Dominant>Masculine Dominant>Feminine Submissive>Masculine SubmissiveWhat's the fucking (literally) difference
>>92592158
>>92592175nta, but read the word right after that
>>92592175It literally says that normal people who move that fast typically only go in straight lines but you're a Swfitie so that doesn't apply to you via wind wrapping.
>>92592180>using body flicker to swap around back and forth>'umm actually this is the exact same as just being able to turn fast'
>>92592175Eiken anon I...
>>92592186>>92592189learn to read what the afterimage clone actually is
>>92592172>Catching (Dom)>Pitching (Dom)>Catching (Sub)>Pitching (Sub)
I'm gonna wank Body Flicker so hard in my next writefag where I post with my build, Body Flicker Bob.Anyone without Body Flicker 3 is FODDER.
>>92592189That's not me.
>>92592201What do YOU think the afterimage clone is?
>>92592172Water girls peg to get you ready to fuck them.
>>92592225What it is literally described to be, spamming body flicker around so fast you literally create afterimages of yourself. That is NOT the same as just being able to go in a line really really fast but being able to turn at will.
>>92592210Who are the current Body Flicker Kings?
>>92592088Yuma-Shinro OTP
>>92592239>allowing the user to dramatically enhance their physical speed>literally says that you move in a single direction at high speeds, (just like Body Flicker) BUT can also turn>is 10 points while Body Flicker is 7
>>92592239Swift is literally just better Body Flicker. It does everything Body Flicker can do.
>>92592270The difference is that it's continuous you retard, Afterimage Clone is spamming a technique a lot of times, Swift is just keeping it going.
>>92592243I think only Kichona and Jin have Body Flicker 3. Therefore, they're the strongest.
>>92592295Shinro also has Body Flicker 3 for some weird reason.
Doesn't doing body flicker and elemental releases need hand signs? How can you do Afterimage Clone while doing hand signs?
>>92592295Jin has Body Flicker 1. D has Body Flicker 3.
>>92592291You know you can STOP it right? So it isn't always continuous? So it's Body Flicker but better and can do everything Body Flicker does, including Afterimage Clones?
>>92592315>You know you can STOP it right?That would be ridiculously harder and less efficient.
>>92592315NTA, but I think the point is that you can't create "clones" with swift because it's continuous, i.e. you don't stop to leave "clones". There would just be a constant stream of afterimages behind you.
>>92592295Remilia blitzes both of them
>>92592136>rinka trying to drag down innocent men with her just to find a way to fob off her genderswap curse like hot potatoshameful. she needs housewife correction IMMEDIATELY.
>>92592303Oops.>>92592314I meant D. I have no idea why I said Jin.
>>92592257>OTP>Isn't even canon
>>92592348Probably because D whooped Jin thanks to that Body Flicker advantage.
>>92592339The fast Remilia meme is never gonna happen, she's a FRAUD and slow as BALLS.
>>92592337Wouldn't Body Flicker and Swift need to be continuous in order to keep up all the afterimages?
>>92592336Says who? If anything it should save chakra and be easier by only using it in short bursts.>>92592337And my point is that's silly.
>>92592303Because he can't handle any chance of loss. See: making team 3 job.
The fact that only one not even funny wankpost got in the genin archive and it was Fast Remilia makes me think that Fast Remilia is a psyop.
>>92592388>If anything it should save chakra and be easier by only using it in short bursts.Suddenly stopping your technique, then covering yourself with an cloak of your element, going a short burst, and then doing that again and again repeatedly several times per second is more efficient than just spamming an D-Rank Jutsu?
>>92592361Give me ships destined to become canon.
>>92592389Notice also how he was the only one to win his individual fight. Jin got a draw and Yuma lost.
>>92591845Isn't fire the most masculine element?
>>92592408>Give me ships destined to become canon.Whatever anons write for. All this talk of 'muh ships' doesn't matter if you don't actually make something with it. You're putting in less effort than a teenage girl from the 2000s put in her ships.
>>92592407>using a less taxing version of the intended purposeYes. It literally saves chakra instead of just constantly keeping it active. It should be even easier than spamming that D rank jutsu.
>>92592434>activating and deactivating an fancy elemental kekkei genkai that requires you to cloak your entire body is more effective than using an Jutsu even genin knowlol
>>92592447Why would a jutsu even genin know be more effective than a fancy kekkai genkai, you goof? It's not like Activating and Deactivating it takes much effort, it probably doesn't even need a hand sign like Body Flicker usually does. Keep in mind that Body Flicker afterimages is interrupting every action to cast it as well btw.
>>92592447Yes. That's literally how kekkei genkai work. It's easier for someone with typhoon to use it than for anyone to use just regular wind. It's easier for a sharingger to break and use genjustu despite everyone knowing the basics.
>>92592447That's why it's 10 points compared to 7 bozo
>>92592476>Why would a jutsu even genin know be more effective than a fancy kekkai genkai, you goof? Because it's ridiculously more simple, thus being able to be learned by genin with shit chakra efficancy>It's not like Activating and Deactivating it takes much effort, it probably doesn't even need a hand sign like Body Flicker usually does.>source: i made it up
>>92592494Yeah, and Nanomachines costs 40 points despite being absolute fucking shit.
>>92592498Where's your source for it taking more effort, then? Seems to me like an innate technique would be more efficient.
>>92592498Genin literally wouldn't be able to use a battle Body Flicker, simple as
>>92592519>Where's your source for it taking more effort, then?You're envelopping your entire body in an advanced elemental chakra, going fast in one direction, then stopping yourself and deactivating it. Body flicker is a simple jutsu that requires a single handsign.
>>92592498>Because it's ridiculously more simpleIt's not. Inborn techniques are as simple can get.
>>92592513>Nanomachines are bad>40 points physical boost>Regen boost>Infinite staminaIt's good.
>>92592488NTA, while I agree that it should be more efficient if it's not significantly more powerful, I don't remember EKG being easier to use for their wielders. Like the wood dude that was the one to explain them didn't make it sound so. He straight up described it as using one element with one hand and the other with the other and then mixing them.
>>92592541Other than Swift being Wind + Yang si it's one element that guy didn't have it innate, he had Secret Power.
>>92592539>40 points physical boostHaving more points doesn't make it stronger, that is something you retards literally made up to justify your wanking faggotry, it just makes you a few times better than the average ninja.
>>92592534>You're envelopping your entire body in an advanced elemental chakra, going fast in one direction, then stopping yourself and deactivating itSo three actionsNow let's break down what happens in body flicker>Make the hand sign/activate body flicker>Aiming>Moving fast in one directionWow, 3 actions. The fact that it's "complex elemental chakra" doesn't matter at all.
>>92592541Yamato wasn't born with Wood. He had it given to him. That's like saying that Kakashi killing himself using kamui is standard.
Does body flicker let you change the direction of your body?
>>92592555>fewActually it's many. You are 100,000,000,000,000,000 times stronger than the average shinobi.
>>92592582>So three actionsIf you count 'aiming' as an action, then this is>Cloaking yourself in elemental chakra and wind to correct that swift chakra>Aiming>Moving fast in one direction>Using swift to stop yourself from moving and deactivate it
>>92592555NTA but if points are the only arbitrating factor between abilities except vibes then they're quite literally the only reliable measurement tool.
>>92592608No, in body flicker you have to preemptively aim where you wanna go because of tunnel vision. Swift lets you aim while moving, so you can roll those two actions into one: "moving fast".
Let us supposed that swift can let you use afterimage clones.At what skill level would you be able to do so? Just buying the EKG as a genin?
>Secret Powerkeks are literally far worse than Bloodline LimitchadsHoly shit this is pathetic.
>>92592622Except with afterimage clone, you have to keep moving back and forth between specific places to create an afterimage. If you just keep going round and round turning, that's not gonna create a bunch of afterimage clones that look like different people because you're literally just running around in a circle.
>>92592644>The process used to imbue this power in you has altered your body so that it can utilize that Kekkei Genkai as if you were a natural possessor of it.
>>92592632Shisui was probably a jonin when he was killed so I'd say B Rank.
>>92592646You can literally just do that with Swift, I'm not sure why this is so hard for you.Let me break it down for you.>Body Flicker can do that because it goes fast>Swift can do that because it goes fastJust stop moving for a second dumbass it's that easy.
>>92592406They seem to have seen through our deception but their efforts are of no matter. The mission of The Rootmelia remains the same: We will have Remilia eventually MOG Jin, I have foreseen it. Now deploy the samefagging unit
>>92592656Great, more fuel for my "our characters are better than canon" wank! Soon I will have the thread believing that a D Rank could beat Kaguya.
>>92592691A power to rival the MHAfia...?!
>>92592710Why go any further? The answer is right in the post.>D wank could beat Kaguya
>>92592710>Soon I will have the thread believing that a D Rank could beat Kaguya.Charming + attractive nodiffs her by romancemaxxing. It was over for her and any other female character before it even began. Can't beat the cock.
>>92592678Are you unable to understand the fundamental difference between a Jutsu that is basically a one-way teleportation and an Elemental Nature that is about going fast IN A LINE and USING A WIND CLOAK TO SPECIFICALLY DIRECT YOURSELF?Afterimage Clone works because you're spamming body flicker so fast you're basically at several different locations at once. SWIFT would NOT be able to do this because it is going in a DIRECT LINE and using WIND to CHANGE YOUR DIRECTION. It is one UNBROKEN line of travel that turns around.
>>92592656But they still lack talent.>>92592710Literally everyone is better than Kiba lil bro. They were alwsy better than canon.
>>92592730I'm gonna take exception to the rule and fuck your ass.
>>92592734>But they still lack talent.They get the same talent as a normal KG possessor.
>>92592710>a D Rank could beat KaguyaLight Dust Spear, anyone?
>>92592750Which is shit unlike a Bloodline CHAD who WORKED for it.
>>92592745Nice try, but all part of my keikaku. I've got all-killing ash bones. The moment you get near my sphincter you're done for.
>>92579952>Family Friendly Nightcrawling(Yoru, Yoji, Mari, Mention of Amaryllis)https://rentry.org/z8hfsh76Finally done, glad this wasn't necro writing.
>>92592770>didn't mention my buildYAWN
>>92592770>DE writefagWE'RE SO BACK
>>92592424It's extra a work and not something I think about much unless it's a prompt question. If someone actually pushed for something with one of my builds then I probably would go along with it if made some sense.
>>92592732...Anon, Body Flicker isn't teleportation. It's not even Space-Time adjacent. It's just moving fast in a straight line. It's fundamentally no different from Swift.
>>92592882BASICALLY teleportation anon. You go from one place to another and STOP there. Nice attempt on ignoring the rest of my point, though.
>>92592678>>92592732>>92592882>>92592895This is a stupid argument. >>92592632 is much more relevant.
>>92592895You can just stop there manually via Swift. You don't have to use the Wind cloak. You can just use the part where you move fast. You're retarded.
>>92592895You have no point. The fact that you can use Swift to to do more than move in a straight line doesn't mean you can't do that.
>>92592910>>92592912>uhm there is no difference between constantly turning and activating an elemental cloak and using a simple jutsu ok>and yes, this SHOULD be doable by a genin because it just should okay
>>92592930Yes, using your kekkei genkai is as easy if not easier than using simple jutsu.
>>92592941like hell it is
>>92592930There is no elemental cloak being activated. You can just move fast.
>>92592941Source?
>>92592948'SWIFT' works by using a cloak of wind to direct yourself. Otherwise you're just using a shittier, more expensive version of body flicker.
>>92592965>shittier, Says who?>more expensive That's because it's better.And you aren't even denying it's possibility anymore, you're saying that it's worse than Body Flicker. And it can't be because it's more expensive.
>>92592930>this SHOULD be doable by a genin because it just should okay>this is ignored
>>92592982It's "shittier" because you would be having to turn an element on and off at the same level that Shisui was able to spam body flicker, which is NOT possible since you cannot upgrade Kekkei Genkai.
>>92593004No reason to upgrade it, it's already at 10 points and has the 3 point Yang boost.It's almost twice as good as Body Flicker which is only 7. And turning an element on and off is easier than using a basic jutsu.
>>92592962You were born with it, your genes are helping you out. They don't do that for basic jutsu. Therefore it's easier.
>>92593025>mu hecking points means my genin can achieve a shisui-level mastery of an element because i just can okay>no there is nothing in the cyoa that says this, i'm just claiming it iswhatever retard, i accept your concession.
>>92593035Your genes are helping you out to do something that would normally be near impossible. Doesn't meant that that suddenly becomes easier than something basic.
>>92592947It is. The prime example of KG is literally just look to cast genjutsu that are better than what most people can produce with setup.
>>92593037I never said that a genin could do it. I just said that it's easier than Body Flicker. Good to know that you're retarded.
>>92593037>A year afterwards, Shisui began drawing attention as a genin, garnering the name "Shisui of the Body Flicker" for his usage of the Body Flicker TechniqueTake it up with Kishimoto little bro
>>92592632Yes. A genin has used it at D rank in a canon writefag so that's how it is now.
>>92593037>>no there is nothing in the cyoa that says this, i'm just claiming it isBut ENOUGH about your entire argument.
>>92593097Oh no no no...
How do you design a tailed beast?>29 points for Bijuu Bomb (Scathe + Elemental Dragon)>18 points for Elemental Chakra CloakI think that's about it. They don't really do anything else.
>>92593139>he thinks the bomb is scathe + dragonIt's actually Chakra Flow 3.>18 points for Elemental Chakra CloakActually it's just Chakra Mode 3.Then you get to use your points for everything else. Kurama had Book Smarts in Nuclear Physics.
Since genin can use afterimage clone with either swift or fully upgraded body flicker, then every other ability naturally must scale to the same level of power by logic of point cost.Discuss.
>>92593103A genin also defeated Kaguya.
>>92593139Espionage T3They're masters of seduction
>>92588430Went to bed after answering so I missed this. Chris wouldn't think much of Sally continuing to do hero work one way or another. He's still a hero. Faith's probably still a hero. It's what they worked for all those years. Though, if he were made aware of Noah's giving tendencies straying into the realm of financial negligence he'd probably try to come up with a moral argument that Noah could hear.
>>92593167And? Not hard. Our characters are Outerversal ++++ at the weakest.
>>92593037>i accept your concession.All of you please stop saying this, it's an irritating way to keep an argument going when you don't have a further point to mak.
>>92593163Wouldn't it also be yin and yang or cursed and divine cause the bomb was a mix of positive and negative energies?
>>92593189>it's irritatingthis is why people will keep saying it
>>92593164I'd rather discuss what's Shisui's build look like
>>92593213>peopleTrolls aren't people.
>>92593192Technically you would be able to do those if you had them but you can't so it's something else only they have.
>>92593244Maybe the Bomb is an EKG then that requires yin and yang? Like Darkness.
>>92593222I accept your concession
>>92593259Do you have hot dogs at this concession?
>>92593252Perhaps. It could also include their amorphous blob qualities? Beast Release?
>>92593266Yes, that's why I accepted it.
>>92593189It originated (or at least I first saw it) on /dbs/ and that should tell you everything you need to know about it.
>>92592361Check the SoL writefag. It's canon.
>my build hasn't been mentioned in 50 postsSomeone fix this
>>92593456All the builds shall get what they deserve.Does this count as a mention?
>>92592361Check my inner thoughts, it's canon.
>>92593456my build hasn't been mentioned in 2 weeks
What’s worse, not being mentioned or only being mentioned to be shit on?
>>92593508the latter
>>92593456THESE BUILDS:>Natsuo Uchiha>Himari Miko>Takeru Suzuki>Osamu>Shimabukuro Fumio>Nodao-Douji>Kamiko Karatachi>Masukuda Rarime>Ichika Chinoike>Kita>Kiko Inuzuka>Kazen Uzumaki >Ezaki Tuto>Tsugumi>Ghidorah>Junki Takenaga>Sen Yamamoto>Kamiizumi Tadafusa >Fujiwara Nobutake >Kamare Hozuki>Daiki Ueno>Rio Konoki>Mitsuteru Chihoshi>Kuro Blackshadow>Choko Yumiya>Inaba Hyuga>Mojo Nakasendou >Kitsumoto Hachirō>Eiken Shinzo>Dojuma Takiga >Ayuka Hagihara >Oishi Teruo >Egao>Rinka Akagi>Akaito Tenyo>Chosuke-Chosuke KirabokuaFUCKING SUCK>>92593508You tell me.
>>925935161/18 of these are actually good btw.
>>92593508The former. Being forgotten is a terrible fate.
>>92593508The former. 99% of shitposting has no valid criticism and easily ignored. Of course ignoring it means that you won't be mentioned since shitposters only bother with people who react.
What builds have we not shit on yet deserve it?
>>92593476I like you, uh, Takeru.
>>92593578Mine
My build currently does 1 thing.Upon rank up, I expect it'll be able to do 2 things.
After my massive amount of (You)s during Faterena I try and reach that high again by making terrible builds.
>>92593614How is it going for you?
>>92593630I love lying on the internet for one.
>>92593647Why?
>>92593767To avoid questions mostly.
I'm surprised more people weren't pissed at the Team 4/8/9 writefag ending on a cliffhanger. It tickled people's taints and still doesn't let them know if they can write for most of the characters involved on day 2.
>>92593921I'm probably just gonna write more SoL so I don't care
>>92593921Good point actually, how much longer will those teams have to wait? Several weeks like the first part? Writing a full battle between 9 people is way harder, too.
>>92593921Is it a big deal if someone else picks up from where it leaves off? They could determine what happens
>>92593921I don't care because those teams all suck and are probably getting BOARd on day 5 anyways
>>925939214/8/9 doesn't have effortfags so it doesn't matter.
>>92593967Remilia, Choko and Kitsu are effortfags
>>92593992I'm also of the opinion that Kazenanon most likely wrote that writefag
>>92593992>[TEXT I WILL IGNORE FOR NOT FITTING MY AGENDA]Nuh uh.
>>92593921Doesn't involve my build, so I did not read it.
>>92594008Probably. He also did a chart.
>page 9Threadfriends?
>>92594168I'm here. Just need a sec.
>>92594186Good deal.
>>92594243>>92594243>>92594243Alright hogs! This way. Roll on out.
>>92587289The discussion eventually rose up after you posted so I mostly stood back for a while.>That'd make it so that 3 costs are truly uselessNot necessarily, as there are 3 and 5 cost eyes that don't have a target like Eye of Overreaching Desire or Master Watchmaker's Eye, but I did forget how resistance to 10 cost also mean immunity to 3 cost. That said, you're probably right in a more hands-off, narrative approach to flattening the power differential. What are you working on, though? Chatting takes up a good amount of time, and I wonder if that's preventing any progress.>>92586609I guess I'm obligated to answer this since it got a DE answer.I think I touched upon this during the individual games prompt, where there are 2 different routes for Akari to go on. Either, she becomes a true creature of the night, or she finally becomes normal. Both would very much change the build. The former going more all in on the impacts and powers, while the latter having none to nearly none.With the full rejection of her humanity, she has gone out of her way to seek more power. Fully embracing the hunger within, it has led her to becoming more dependent on other to sustain herself, yet is even more isolated from the world as a whole. True individuality, but at what cost?In a happier ending, she wouldn't need to be as strong with the friends by her side. Her growth comes not from physical power, but emotional resilience. Though humanity may still reject her, she can confide in the group she found for herself. No longer needing powers to force herself to fit in to whatever ideas others have of her.
>>92594732>The discussion eventually rose up after you posted so I mostly stood back for a while.Gotcha.>Not necessarily, as there are 3 and 5 cost eyes that don't have a target like Eye of Overreaching Desire or Master Watchmaker's EyeYeah, that is fair. Some eyes simply don't have eye resistance as a concern.>What are you working on, though? Chatting takes up a good amount of time, and I wonder if that's preventing any progress.At the moment I'm chatting anyway, just elsewhere. I.E. I'm not likely to get any work done for the rest of the day whether choose to chat or not.
>>92594803>At the moment I'm chatting anyway, just elsewhereNo Chihiro writefags in the works? No OC or projects in progress recently?I guess we can end the conversation here until something gets brought up? Unless you have something in mind?I think the next time an MP catches my interest, I'll try to only make content for it without making a character, unless it's particularly lean.
>>92594855Why wouldn't you make a character?
>>92594855>No Chihiro writefags in the works? No OC or projects in progress recently?Ah, I was talking about right now. If it's in general, then I have things in the works, granted they're slow cook. DE writefag, wallflower writefags, another MHA idea that's a bit sillier, an assortment of minor OC ideas I occasionally revisit.>I guess we can end the conversation here until something gets brought up? Unless you have something in mind?That is also an option. I suppose to be fair, trying to balance two conversations might make for a poor conversation partner anyway.>I think the next time an MP catches my interest, I'll try to only make content for it without making a character, unless it's particularly lean.An interesting way to look at it. Participation is participation though. Perhaps not having a character has its own advantages.
>>92594868Because then I'd have to babysit them with writefags to keep them relevant. I'd rather forego that altogether and just puppet whichever build piques my interest at the time. I wouldn't be working on the holocure prompt, slowly adding other characters, if I still had to breakfastpost Akari.
>>92594908You could just make an NPC.
>>92594908Kinda based, honestly, The best part of writefags is seeing other people's take on your character.Or at least I imagine it is, i can't say from experience.
>>92594888>I have things in the works, granted they're slow cookAre there any you want to talk about, or do you want to keep them under wraps? I mean, there are some people still lurking around, apparently.>Perhaps not having a character has its own advantagesI started out writefagging without a character anyway. Really, I just want to return to an older era where I don't feel like I have to push the plot forward or else the MP dies. A good amount of writefags got scrapped because they didn't add anything plotwise.Always an option to sleep earlier. There's always next time.
>>92594962>Are there any you want to talk about, or do you want to keep them under wraps?Hmm... As long as it isn't an important plot twist, I'm generally pretty open. The DE writefag has a plot twist I'll hold onto, but otherwise it's Amane and Akari meeting up and going around town, ultimately encountering the plot twist and getting some moderate trauma for their trouble.I could probably give more details for my MHA things or OC since I don't have any major plot twists in mind.>I just want to return to an older era where I don't feel like I have to push the plot forward or else the MP dies.I feel that viscerally. Not to say I don't enjoy pushing plot (I do), but the feeling that it's needed to participate can be draining.>Always an option to sleep earlier. There's always next time.I'll be awake for another few hours at the very least.
>>92595084>otherwise it's Amane and Akari meeting up and going around townWasn't Mari and Lucifer going to be included in that? Or is this something entirely new?>I could probably give more details for my MHA things or OC sinceI haven't heard OC ideas in a while, maybe that? I do want to test something out, but it's a bit too crowded right now.
>>92592152>it's also fitting for Karaburan to basically be punished for letting the match happen by having the schizo make it to the finals. It's going to be a PR nightmareShe'd deserve it for going against the word of our KING Majestic.
>>92595186>Wasn't Mari and Lucifer going to be included in that? Or is this something entirely new?It's something new. Mari does show up and play a role though. The writefag you're thinking of was... meant for a lighter tone. Since I wanted to change gears, I ended up doing something different.>I haven't heard OC ideas in a while, maybe that? Let's see then... My most active one is a very simple idea- just a basic western fantasy OC based on reskining Pathfinder. After that is the DE DLC. I'm not the main author there, but I pester said author to make progress and chat about it with him. On the backburner is AR, which you've probably heard at least something about before, but I can summarize the setting if you'd like. Similarly on the back burner is a WIP I call VN Returners. 'VN' because it's based on the tropes and concepts of visual novels. 'Returners' because the twist for the setting is that every PC is intended to have already experienced their own version of the events that unfold. In other words, they're all in NG+.I've had other ideas, but they were fleeting enough not to be counted on. Only other thing could be a potential return to fixing up KtH, but that's on the back of even the backburner.>I do want to test something out, but it's a bit too crowded right now.Intriguing for sure. Do share it with me when you have the chance.
>>92589973>>92590018>>92590271>>92592152From the looks of it, the second semi-final may as well be the final.Orochi's seen as having no chance and Bobby's going to run dry by the final making him a pushover.Whoever wins between Sandy v Kaylee will take the crown.and we all know how that match up will end.
>>92595455>Bobby's going to run dry by the final making him a pushover.the sun of love will power him on.
>>92595455Time to reiterate my bad take.Keep Sandy eliminated and have the three remaining have a full on slobberknocker of a triple threat match. Anything could happen.
>>92595311>Since I wanted to change gears, I ended up doing something differentHuh. I was going to make Akari blind at some point, but she didn't use her eye enough for that to be a significant loss. I'm guessing it's going to be rather edgy?>basic western fantasy OC based on reskining PathfinderI recall this, but didn't follow too closely. There was talk about translating classes and feats, I think?>After that is the DE DLCIt's been some time, and I don't have the link to check. Has each of the angel eyes been given their own identity yet?>AR, which you've probably heard at least something about beforeIt's portal fantasy, right? Kind of like Japan's dragon quest being an interpretation of western fantasy, except it's Korean and more grand scale. Maybe I do remember it, Paimon.>Similarly on the back burner is a WIP I call VN ReturnersThis one I know a bit better. I even asked about how it would work for MP. It'd be really interesting to see a single player version with a whole mystery box page showing how each of the companions would betray you, similar to the Persona CYOA.>fixing up KtHIsn't the only thing missing the images and example techniques? Or was there more to be added?>Do share it with me when you have the chanceI'll have to fix up the changelog. It'll be up until you make a response.
>>92595488If Kaylee were smart, she'd easily win that. Just fly up, wait for Orochi and Bobby to wipe each other, and then snipe the one standing. Of course, she's not that smart, so it'd be closer.
>>92595579>wait for Orochi and Bobby to wipe each otherI don't know about you, but if I saw one person in my match fly away to wait for me to fight another person, I'd easily accept a temporary truce to either wait them out or take them out first.How would they take her out even when working together when she's a mile in the sky? Good question. Maybe she'll get tired flying up there? It's been a long day of fighting.
>>92595579>>92595621>Bobby throws Orochi at Kaylee like a javelin and knocks her out of the sky
>>92595621I doubt either of them have the ability to agree in the prisoner's dilemma, and Kaylee would still have the waiting game on her side, since Bobby's getting weaker by the second. Wait for his battery to run dry and he ceases to be a player.>>92595638>Kaylee dodges in a blink, as she did against Jugo, and Orochi falls out of bounds>Kaylee then waits for Bobby to get weakGG EZ
>>92595662They have no reason not to agree, and Kaylee would be tiring herself out by using her quirk while they're just chilling.
>>92595621>>92595662>>92595689Regardless of if they can even deal with the "stay in the sky for ten hours" strategy, anon is right in that that's totally not Kaylee's style. She wants a fucking fight.
>>92595720>a fucking fightPoor Minnie. First she gets the shit stamped out of her, then she's cucked by her bf.
>>92595662>Kaylee dodges in a blink, as she did against Jugounfortunately for her, javelin Orochi no diffs them both
>>92595498>I'm guessing it's going to be rather edgy?That's the goal, at least. Less on the end of physical trauma though. I suppose we are in secret hours, so if you'd like the spoiler as reference I could offer it.>There was talk about translating classes and featsYep. I planned to break the classes up into smaller components, and to make a perk section based on feats. Otherwise the usual choices- race, stats, equipment.>Has each of the angel eyes been given their own identity yet?Beyond being 7 virtues? Perhaps? The lists are sill incomplete, but we've got a couple eyes in most of them, so they have a loose theme.>Maybe I do remember it, That'd be me~.Yep. Portal Fantasy mixed with Isekai in a way, since the base setting is a fantasy world that's being invaded rather than modern earth.>It'd be really interesting to see a single player version with a whole mystery box page showing how each of the companions would betray you, similar to the Persona CYOA.Not wrong. That would be interesting. Sadly it's built for mp, so specific companions isn't intended. The players are more meant to fill in those roles after all.>Isn't the only thing missing the images and example techniques? Or was there more to be added?More or less, although I do have some desire to refine the scale of the mp. Basically just some worldbuilding.>I'll have to fix up the changelog. It'll be up until you make a response.I can see the edit time, so I believe I'm looking at the right thing, but all the same I'm not sure what exactly I'm looking for. At the very least, the last changelog seems to have things I remember already being there? Essentially I'm not fully sure what you're showing me... My best guess is that it might be complete and you're looking for a full read through, but I figure I should get confirmation on that before I read it that deeply.That said, if you want to change it back, you can since I exported it and made a txt file...
>>92595734Don't worry, Bobby is gonna get disqualified for fighting Sandy outside of a sanctioned match. We're getting a cat fight for the finals where both girls are pissed they didn't get the fights they were prepping for.
>>92595455This late in the tournament everyone has to be dead tired from overusing their quirks all day. I think all the matches will be way closer than people think and way less flashy. Orochi's regen and poison will be dramatically slowed down, but so will Bobby's strength and durability. Kaylee probably won't have the energy to fly around and toss out ki blasts and Sandy won't be able to spam quirks like usual. If Bobby gets to the finals his hour of stored sunlight will probably be more than he can even use without overexerting himself, so that won't matter either. I bet whichever two make it to the finals will quickly resort to swinging at the fences like drunk quirkless hobos out of pure exhaustion.
>>92596012>Orochi's regen and poison will be dramatically slowed downI think her anon said that Orochi regenerates from fatigue itself.
>>92596027Yeah. Her Regen isn't like the one from the healing template. Plus if Sando does have Bloodthirst then he should be fine on that end as well.
>>92596046I don't think quirks can get around the exhaustion that comes from their use.
>>92596057They can. Gigantomachia could turn his will to serve his master into energy to keep going
>>92596077>Look up GigantomachiaNgl, this character seems lame. Can we just ignore it?
>>92596147he doesn't exist without all for one giving him extra quirks so yeah
>>92596174Cool, then I'll ignore the "regenerates from fatigue itself" part of anyone's quirks and hope we see everyone falling over each other in exhaustion in the next part.
>>92595498Hello. Me again. I looked back, saw you unchanged a certain something and realized that I have a negative perception score. I am now looking in the actually correct place/redux. Currently browsing.
>>92595766>if you'd like the spoiler as reference I could offer itNah. It involves my character. As much as I don't care about spoilers since I'll forget about it anyway, it might as well be a surprise.>break the classes up into smaller componentsWith this, it'd be easier to multi-class, correct? Or, in a way, to make your own class. Why the break a way from the more rigorous class system? Stats on the other hand can be a bit worrisome based on ML's track record, or any run with clearly defined stats for the characters themselves.>Beyond being 7 virtues?Like, what they can do uniquely, similar to how lust is all about mind control.>SpoilerYou'd be surprised at how many times we were actually talking. I tend to not want to be recognized. Anyway, I can only recall that progress being made on the race part. Were there any other things to be added?>The players are more meant to fill in those roles after allThat's understandable, though I was thinking of companions being the equivalent to other players outside an MP run. Kind of like playing the scenario with bots.>if you want to change it back, you canI was going to change it regardless of whether you got it or not. >>92596199 I kind of feel more embarrassed that you did.
>>92596190They don't seem quite that tired yet. Remember, they've only had three matches apiece with rest time in between. I could definitely see that happening in the finals though.
>>92596263>As much as I don't care about spoilers since I'll forget about it anyway, it might as well be a surprise.Roger! I'll save the surprise then.>Why the break a way from the more rigorous class system? Probably the most honest answer is 'it felt fun when I thought of it so I just went with it'. I could try to give other justifications, like it being better for build diversity, more flexibility in build creation never hurts, compensation for not including things like archtypes/prestige classes, or even just trying to avoid forcing the player to purchase things they don't want... They'd even be fair arguments. I mostly just liked the idea though and wanted to try it.>Stats on the other hand can be a bit worrisomeNot wrong in the slightest. I don't plan to have anywhere near as wide a powergap as ML though. Honestly, not having the 6 basic attributes at all just feels wrong.>Like, what they can do uniquely, similar to how lust is all about mind control.I'm not sure they all have a unique identity. Justice is sort of shaping up to be like Wrath. Fortitude is mostly defensive in nature. Hope is turning out to be more like Sloth with it having some space/time related stuff.>Were there any other things to be added?I suppose it doesn't hurt that I try not to pry into anon identities... Anyway, I'm not against new sections like equipment or party building, etc. Really it just depends on what happens when I finally clean up the rentry and find co-authors- or rather if there's co-authors who love the idea and are willing to work on those, then I'm willing to do the same and carry some of that load. If everyone decides it's already WAY over bloated, then I'll respect that and stick to the three main sections.>Kind of like playing the scenario with bots.I figure. If I ever finish it and get an mp going, I'd be open to making official companion pages based on the participants.>I kind of feel more embarrassed that you did.I can understand that.
>>92596263Anyway, I have browsed. I'll avoid any specifics, but I like what I see. Perhaps the genre change won't be for everyone- I'm sure some liked the original simply because it was a genre not normally explored, but I'm somewhat unconditionally fond of the genre you changed towards and I personally feel like the setting that frames it keeps it unique enough for my tastes. Overall, much of the original is still in here. At most some things were simplified or condensed- which seems fine to me. Complexity is fun for the type of player that really enjoys the number crunch side of CYOAs and can enjoy spending hours just working on the mechanical aspects of build making... (I'm one such player of course, so I'm a poor source of feedback on that topic- it'd be like asking someone that frequently eats ghost peppers if a meal is too spicy or not.)Anyway, I'm rambling without saying much of anything. The main point is that I enjoy it. If you'd like more specific commentary, I'm happy to do so. Or if preferred, I can drop the topic and let you work in peace now that you have my very vague opinion.
>>92596538>I mostly just liked the ideaI don't recall how it works. Do you just pick which ever combination of skills listed, or would some have prerequisites? Although flexibility in building is important for MP to have a diverse cast, there is the case to be made that too much flexibility can discourage team ups. Why work with another build when I already have all of my weaknesses covered? It's not something that has to be addressed, but it does become a factor when it comes to actually interacting. What kind of scenario will this system be in? Do you have a goal for the characters in mind?>not having the 6 basic attributes at all just feels wrongGranted, Danmachi had stats, but it was mostly ignored due to it being stat potential rather than actual stat strength. An option would be to have super human strength, constitution, wisdom, etc. be a perk of their own. Although I brought it up, I don't remember the stat arguments too well.>I'm not sure they all have a unique identityHopefully the eyes will at the very least be synergistic enough for someone to want to play with angel eyes. It might become similar to envy or greed if it doesn't separate itself enough, and it's already competing with existing eyes.>if there's co-authors who love the ideaAlthough having multiple authors on a CYOA is neat, it's probably not something to be relied upon. Who knows how many just left due to disinterest in /mcyoag/ as a whole. Maybe AR is going to stay in the back burner for a while unless you're willing to go solo on it.>I'd be open to making official companion pagesAuthors used to do that years back. I think one of the biggest examples was Battlemage, or Stardust.>I can understand thatMy only consolation is that at least it isn't the chuuni OC, that one is more disorganized with its notes. So, yeah. I plan on releasing them simultaneously, as bad of an idea as it might seem. The original's run acting as a buffer while I make an image version of the redux.
>>92596829>Anyway, I have browsedKill me, please.>Perhaps the genre change won't be for everyoneI felt like when you think about the name, the redux's style is the one that would come to mind. I somewhat regret not leaning heavily on the spy aspect in the original, and should've purged the latter half of the name to focus more on what makes it unique from the runs we have now.>unconditionally fond of the genre you changed towardsI'm not too sure about what you mean by this. Fluffy SoL. It is a lot more light-hearted, with some serious tones underneath. Quite the opposite of the original, I think.>At most some things were simplified or condensedThat is the goal. Cut down on the choices and math. Basically reduce the barrier of entry as much as possible compared to the original. I remember someone on /cyoag/ talking about complexity and that you should be able to play a CYOA without needing scratch paper. I also felt like the complexity was incongruent to the powers available. All that customization and you're not better than the common rank and file in the grand scheme of things. Moving forward, most of what I'll work on will be of similar complexity.I guess I want to see if it makes sense at first reading, maybe test out balance despite how incomplete it is. I worry that I'm falling into the trap of not providing enough points again, or things being too confusing. As a quick fix for this test, things that don't have cost, cost 1 from their respective category. And psi and pix use TT. I think there's not enough context for others to understand the conversation anyway, so you can be more open about using terms.
>>92596852>Do you just pick which ever combination of skills listedMore or less, although each one would have different tiers of investment. I don't think you could cover all your weaknesses without being a jack-of-all trades type though.>What kind of scenario will this system be in? Do you have a goal for the characters in mind?The setting takes place within a massive seal holding down an evil god. Explorers etc sometimes wander in, but can never wander back out. Thus you have a town of people where talent for combat is high and many kinds of trainings are available and slowly blended together, giving way from the old class system to what's in the CYOA. Characters would generally be looking for a way out since the environment isn't ideal, but would need to debate what lengths they're willing to go to achieve that.>An option would be to have super human strength, constitution, wisdom, etc. be a perk of their own.True, though at that point I could just let stats be implied from the class options.>Hopefully the eyes will at the very least be synergistic enoughIt IS a good angle to approach the topic, so I will try to explore it more.>Although having multiple authors on a CYOA is neat, it's probably not something to be relied upon.I don't disagree. Just as well, even if I were to go at it solo, I'd be a massive project. After KtH, I'd like to do some less ambitious things rather than even more ambitious, so it would indeed just sit on the backburner if that's the case.As for authors leaving... Very possible. I wasn't banking on having the same group as last year. I just figured maybe new anons would also be interested. I think I've said this before, but when I like to make OC, I like to do some kind of experiment in the process. AR to some extent is an experiment on the viability of co-authoring a CYOA.>The original's run acting as a buffer while I make an image version of the redux.Makes me wonder what the thread will ultimately choose to do.
>>92597062>I somewhat regret not leaning heavily on the spy aspect in the original.ngl, I feel more interest in spywork than head-on conflict. So I don't disagree.>I'm not too sure about what you mean by this.I was referring to the magic/psychic powers.>That is the goal. Cut down on the choices and math.Then all is well. It should be pretty simple to play through based on what I've seen. Weapons in particular have become extremely simple to deal with. I no longer look at it and ponder if I should break out the spreadsheets or not.>I guess I want to see if it makes sense at first reading, maybe test out balance despite how incomplete it is. Reading wise it seems good to go. Nothing particularly confused me. Granted, I still generally remember how the original works so that's bound to be a factor. As for a playtest, I can certainly try that out... Tomorrow anyway, I'll be checking out soon-ish. (Say half an hour or so).>As a quick fix for this test, things that don't have cost, cost 1 from their respective category. And psi and pix use TT. Roger.>I think there's not enough context for others to understand the conversation anyway, so you can be more open about using terms.I get you, but I also have a terrible track record if I don't watch myself. Anyway, I'll at least try not to let it get in the way of actually having a discussion.
>MHA has been reduced to almost exclusively Secret Hours discussion for several threads nowThe Dark Ages.
>>92597099>The setting takes place within a massive seal holding down an evil godThe typical dungeon crawling plot, except you already start in the dungeon. I don't imagine it'd be like Fear and Hunger? It might be a bit too open, especially if you don't list out the steps towards actually getting out and leave the method up to the players. Nart seems to be doing well due to the rigidity of the timeline. Though, that option does remove some of the mystery of the dungeon. In a dungeon crawl, having all sorts of mercenaries of different abilities, not just in combat, makes sense. I'll look forward to the progress on that then.>As for authors leaving... Very possible/mcyoag/ has been floating in a rather consistent ~40 or so IPs. That said, I can't imagine any new blood flowing in. I'm not sure how they'd be interested in how MPs work, much less working together on a CYOA. Not to put a damper on the mood. I want to be hopeful that there will be a slow drip of new anons somehow. Experimenting is fun, but there's always the question of should rather than could.>what the thread will ultimately choose to doHopefully the former, though I don't doubt the latter may be more popular if Overlord is anything to go by. It also seems to fit what the thread wants, something more shounen-y>I was referring to the magic/psychic powersAh. I think everyone prefers that over the overly mundane stuff you get to choose from in the original. Magic and guns have always been interesting, especially with how Control looks to play.>Weapons in particular have become extremely simple to deal withThat's good. The original system was supposed to be accessible to those without knowledge of the topic, but that failed very easily>I can certainly try that out... Tomorrow anywayNo rush. It's not like anyone else is waiting for it. Though it is the one occupying my time in terms of writing.I do want this to be independent of the originalI guess this is the last message for now. Good night!
>>92597255Let the cooks cook IMOI plan on writing some MHA stuff after I do some conference stuff.Suprised so few read my Yoru writefag: was it the horny stuff that made it too weird?
>>92597255I'm like a day out from my next writefag being done, but college anons (of which there are at least 3 active) are going to be pretty scarce until at least mid May.
>>92597319It's genuinely just because it's DE that no one read it.I read it and liked it tho, you did a good job.When I realized that writing for DE would only make me disappointed I stopped a while ago. At least I got 1 writefag out.
>>92597319I kind of focused on chatting over reading due to how late it is. I'll check it tomorrow.>was it the horny stuffIt's not my favorite thing in the world. The grammar / spelling / syntax take me out of it more, but horny doesn't help when it's not my cup of tea.
>>92597319You know very well how off-putting your fetish characters are.
>>92597316>I'll look forward to the progress on that then.Sadly I'm not familiar with Fear and Hunger. As for how to get out, I plan to give a few concrete options. Otherwise I will note that while it is like one huge dungeon, there is still outdoors. Hostile outdoors, but outdoors, as well as a somewhat rough town the residents built over the centuries. I guess think of it more like an old, ruined, miniature kingdom overrun by monsters and demons, with the most important places being the dungeons proper.But yeah, it's a pretty classic dungeon crawling plot. I figured something simple and classical would be best for a simple and classical setting like this.>Not to put a damper on the mood. I want to be hopeful that there will be a slow drip of new anons somehow. It really just boils down to me eventually cleaning it up, asking the thread if anyone wants in, and if no one does I accept that the experiment failed and move on, whether to making it a solo project or otherwise.>It also seems to fit what the thread wants, something more shounen-yNot wrong. Shonen is weirdly popular. Could come back around and make people crave something different. I suppose time will tell?>Magic and guns have always been interesting.ngl, I magic and sniper rifles calls to my inner sense of chuuni.>but that failed very easilyDid it? I'll admit I didn't know a lot of terms, but I didn't feel it caused any problems... Eh, perhaps I'm just built funny.>No rush. It's not like anyone else is waiting for it.Noted. I just try to have fun with it, and to try and think of it as it's own separate thing.>Good night!Fare thee well!>>92597319>Suprised so few read my Yoru writefagngl, I was just busy elsewhere. I don't mind chatting while distracted, but I prefer to read without any distractions. So it was just odd timing for me. I promise I'll get you that (You) tomorrow.
>>92597319I'm with the first anon. I don't read DE stuff.
>>92597340Nevermind, I finished. I'm not looking forward to editing this tomorrow, but hopefully it'll end up good.
>>92597973which characters?
>>92597982Mirror Devil, Desolator, Sunlight Man, Challenger, Impakt, Smokin' Sexy.
>>92597990Nice
>>92597990Nice.
>>92597319I got finals bro, I'll read it later
>>92597990nice
>>92597990nice.
These threads have been sooo baaad lately. The only ones doing anything worthwhile are really just American college kids?
>>92598219Who did you expect to invite with naruto? No shade to anyone joining who actually efforts, but it was bad company from the premise alone
>>92598219Iktf bro, I miss pregfag too
>>92598219No, it cannot be. I dislike America, college and kids. It can't be that all those combined are what carries my thread enjoyment.