Jimmy the manchild #1. My new webcomic series, I really want to post this everyday, but I'm afraid I won't fullfill my promises
you can say incest on herealso please expose yourself to something other than this website, you are dulling your sense of self
>>143326333 Is this bait, ironic, or am I just meant to understand that you are autistic?
>>143327042it's not bait, i knew kids in high school who would find this funny
>>143326333Where's the funny?
>>143326333OP is a retarded faggot
>>143327060See, here is the thing; having some friends in the 15 to 18 years range think something is funny is not a parameter by which you should base anything. The art is good for a comedy webcomic, at least. The concept of the joke is not unsalvageable, but be it the delivery, the timing, or the "punch line", it's all over the place. What are we supposed to think? That he took 5 fucking minutes to type "Hey bro, I am into incest" and that then what his "dear friend", rather than saying "what the fuck are you on about?" Or "Is this another of your terrible jokes, that I would normally be aware of being your friend?" he goes "Bye forever". How about you remove the pointless "5 minutes later..", put the last panel as the third, and add a new 4th panel that's just his messages:>Hey bro, I am into incest>Dude, I have told you I am not your friend, stop talking to me. There, a punch line, a change of expectations, and misdirection that leads to the main character being a well known manchild.
>>143327139 This is also miles better.
>>143326333Inaccurate. My friend would just say nice and send me some top tier forbidden romance mom/son material
>>143326333Normies are heavily into incest these days, have you seen the front page of an actual porn site recently?>(step) sister>(step) brother>(step) mom>(step) dad
>>143327139
>>143327473>Please repost without creditkek
>>143326333>>143327060>>143327268 Fuck it, I did it myself.
>>143327268imagine it's five minutes of the friend unloading incest trauma before announcing they're blocking you forever
>>143327537waste of your time but thanks i guess
>>143327594 No, that's really not funny in the sightless. >>143327652 I mean, it took me 20 seconds in paint. The "fake chat" was the first result in google and probably took me another 40 seconds, tops. You wrote the whole thing, that seems like a huge waste of time.
>>143327668did you have your very own personal teacher in class?
>>143327721 Sorry friend, I can't share that experience with you, I am clearly not as special as you are.
>>143327733i don't really understand how me saying >>143327060 lead to you completely misunderstanding what i was saying and sperging out. maybe you should be the main character of this comic
new 'toss?
>>143327756 I find the irony of this hilarious, unlike your comics.
>>143327756 Lets put the situation in order>1 (me).Is this bait, because it seems like bait>2 (you). No, I really think this is funny>3(me). Well, it lacks a punch line and your parameter for what's funny is not up to standard. Here is my attempt>4(you).It's a waste of your time to point this out>5(me). I didn't waste more than a minute>6(you). You are stupid (attempt, pretty bad come back actually)>7(me). Thank you.>8 (you) You are manchild and sperging out. Now, I will leave the thread, I already had my fun, so you can go ahead and pretend you are being completly logical and mature about this.
>>143327834sorry, detective, i'm not the OP>>143327878i was saying that the comic isn't bait and was likely made by someone 15-18 b/c i knew kids in high school whose whole sense of humor was derived from this website. that doesn't equate to me saying it's funny, dumbass. now go watch your slop written by Joss Whedon
banger
>>143327986 Let me get this straight: You decided to point out that it was not bait (not, unlikely to be bait, just certainly not bait) randomly and on the basis that you, supposedly, knew people with that sense of humour? Then when somebody decided to make another version of the comic (as there are many in this very thread) you pointed out how it was a waste of time? Against what?That's pretty strange. Kind of missing the IP right about now, fake m00tHori be dammed, but if that's the case, then whatever man. I don't really care about your take on it nor do I think it's a reasonable logic to imagine this isn't just a bait thread.
>>143328131sorry, i wasn't aware my eight words of indifference would utterly emotionally destroy you
>>143328155 No man, I asure you my reaction is more towards the nonesesical nature of the discussion that the content itself. It's just very stupid. Also, don't play the "I don't care" card like a fucking lame ass, you know what people that don't care or are indifferent do with a situation like this? They walk away, they don't keep going, specially in situations that are specifically not requesting any type of answer. Again, it bother me, if anything, that I addressed OP and in came you adding your unneeded two cents before keeping on going as long as posible.
>>143328225you addressed me, not the OP, with >>143327268. then you addressed me, not the OP, again, with >>143327537. so i said it was a waste of your time because the source comic sucks and your version sucks, which didn't seem unwarranted b/c i was confused as to why you were dragging me into what ever sort of fever dream you were going on about, schizo
>>143327268I wouldn't say that's baseless, it's a good starting point especially if it's a sense of humor you don't see out in a lot of places. It could be novel or simply unspoken to. The only thing is you shouldn't be shocked if it doesn't work and doesn't have a wider audience and should grow accordingly. That's if OP is for real and not some weird shitposter who found a random autismo's comic.
>>143326333damn this is so shit I don't even feel like reposting without credit
>>143326333>that would be a serious top kekDon't write dialogue like this. It makes you look like a faggot.
OP don't let this deter you Take the lessons learned and apply them to the next stripsOnly that way you will improve.What I like to do is have a note-taking app (I use Obsidian) and whenever I have an idea for a strip, I write it down. That way 1. I don't forget it and 2. It gives me time to step away from it and maybe think of better pacing/ dialogue choices
>>143327139Best edit. Gonna do that.
>>143328437Judging by the title, it was probably intentional.
>>143326333I sometimes forget the average person has an aversion to this shit. My sisters showed me gore and fucked up porn when I was a kid and my friends and I send each other really weird shit we're both into.
>>143326333not very funny? but these comics are rarely funny anyways, just keep doing it I guess
