Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYwAllSync: https://cyoaarchive.com/mainMultiplayer Compilations: https://pastebin.com/10QhjhCtMIB vs Disgruntled Teenagers EditionLast Thread: >>88089264
>>88099458>Facility ControlC:https://controlc.com/8cb08486Rules:> Getting out: Mass Breakout, you start with 4 Heat Points + Military Mobilization is a mandatory option but still reduces your Super Heat by 1.> Don't take Breach of Secrecy.> You can take the "Stay" option.> Don't use the points from Potential in the build.> Your build could have been from any Facility, as Mass Breakout means that builds from every Facility have the opportunity to interact. They might also go on missions together if they chose to stay.> You can choose to experience the revelation for your Facility or not.
>>88099465>Facility Recent Events:New Escape Build:>>88092230 - "Puppet">>88097490 - Hailey "Impulse" Chang>>88097465 - Minerva "Firestarter" KimNew Stay Build:>>88091236 - John Q. "Everyman" PublicBuild Update:>>88093802 - BarbararNew Writefag:>Brandon and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good,...https://controlc.com/7e15f7a0
>>88099477Relationship Charts:>Eyespyhttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/87849817>Juggernauthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/87854991>Ghosthttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/87857976>Arditihttps://pastebin.com/yQCKRJ6z>Princesshttps://pastebin.com/wxKcmZui>Kayleehttps://pastebin.com/fstRwMnz>Witchhttps://controlc.com/be0dfcdb>No.Misshttps://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/88027898Writefags:>Facility Postescape 1 (Juggernaut, mentions of Ghost)https://pastebin.com/SSWYTeZs>Debrief over takeout (Juggernaut, Ghost, mentions of Jejune)https://pastebin.com/4nvyVjjB>Skipping Town (Juggernaut, Ghost, Jejune, Princess)https://pastebin.com/MVxs0DMK>Freedom at Last (Nuke)https://pastebin.com/s9zDunnE>Joyride (Eyespy)https://pastebin.com/zDk7hMbn>Matrix post escape, with a temporary car (Matrix)https://pastebin.com/100YfEsd>The Mongoose (Arditi)https://pastebin.com/rR1Z1X2q>The Gospel According to Bob (Barbara)https://controlc.com/08d58523>A Chance Encounter (Arditi, Project C-008001-M-APW/E)https://pastebin.com/kgkhhtS0>Reminiscing (Deep-Dive, Bloodhound, Horseshoe, Soul Eater)https://controlc.com/87dd0ea3>Transcript (Project C-008001-M-AWP/E)https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/88011000>Projecting (Barbara)https://controlc.com/799689b2>Behemoth a day out V2 (Behemoth)https://controlc.com/9012c90b>Matsuda, Major Incident Logs (Including Mentions from Farmhouse, Behemoth, No.Miss, Matrix, Nuke, Nikitai, Hammer, Legion, Juggernaut, Duet, Proxy, Arditi)https://pastebin.com/7LnpP7Ex>Exodus (Barbara)https://controlc.com/21f9a395>Brandon and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good,...https://controlc.com/7e15f7a0
>Demon Eyes Pastebinhttps://pastebin.com/MFPANNai
>>88099545Relationship Charts:> Kaori Hoshino Sage of the Endless Abysshttps://controlc.com/db95d3f1> Kanaye Gushiken, Pursuer of Supremacyhttps://pastebin.com/ABBBXUVw > Charlotte, etc. Kaleidoscopehttps://img.4plebs.org/boards/tg/image/1677/80/1677803597942525.pdf Writefags: > Nina's Weakness (Public Speaking) [Feat. Nina Furio]https://pastebin.com/NU8DMqJU> Wicked Games [Feat. Pride; Lust]https://pastebin.com/Eq7GYk98> A Wave of Darkness Cometh [Feat. Kaori Hoshino]https://controlc.com/62ab91b6> A Pleasant Day [Feat. Setsuko Mishima; Tatsuya Watanabe]https://controlc.com/b7cc25d9> Demon Empress' Dark Descent [Feat. Bellatrix Tenebrae Drusus Maxima]https://pastebin.com/nH9acCdD> <User Command Registered - Initiating "The Day Lise Saved Everyone"> [Feat. Lise Aragami]https://pastebin.com/cKhdtVJC> My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy [Feat. Kanaye Gushiken]https://pastebin.com/zMaSbuwn> An Entertaining Series of Social Interactions [Feat. Setsuko Mishima; Sarah Nakama; Bellatrix Tenebrae Drusus Maxima; Tatsuya Watanabe; Kanaye Gushiken]https://pastebin.com/XTDCY7ex> Arachnophobia [Feat. Kaori Hoshino; Sarah Nakama; Akira Inoue]https://controlc.com/9c59bf35> A Case on the Midnight Children [Feat. Sarah Nakama, Kijima Kii, Kaori Hoshino]https://controlc.com/4d8ad60c> Reina's Mostly Average Evening [Feat. Reina Hisatori]https://controlc.com/cd3c4393> The Thirteen Mysteries of Sakura High [Feat. Kuroko Utsuro; Various Mentions]https://pastebin.com/1hKb6tmM> How The President Of the Paranormal Investigation Club Hunts Demons [Feat. Kuroko Utsuro]https://pastebin.com/dGjB3Yym
>Worm Controlc https://controlc.com/dcd32e9b>Worthless Opponent Scenario>No Drop-In. You are part of this world.>The Endbringers are dormant so Endbringer target can not be chosen as a drawback>The Slaughterhouse 9 do not exist in this AU however the relevant drawback can still be chosen. It simply attracts the attention of the most deadly villain group in the AU instead (TTF).>No Gifts>No 25 pt powers. However, 20 pt powers via the Conspirator path are allowed.>No Second Trigger Unlimited Shard Works>Villains can choose to create a villain group on par with the 9 through the other path option, though they will need to justify why they haven't been taken out in this more deadly world.>Characters with Worst Day Ever x 3 + Humble Beginnings do not survive the first day>Characters with Worst Day Ever x 2 + Humble Beginnings can survive the first day if they take a superpowered Follower or Budding Shard.
>>88099615>Worm Recent Events:New Builds?:>>88090361 - House Cat>>88097981 - Clark El CN Ultra ManNew NPC:>>88093798 - Chucky Fowler CN The Human SpiderNew Writefag:>The Wraith Rises from her Grave - Mari Trigger Event (Mari)https://controlc.com/4926c070>First Massacre: Mari Kill Order Incident (Mari)https://controlc.com/7121a666
>>88099633Writefags:>Roach Rider Cleans Up The Streets (Roach Rider):https://pastebin.com/zVbBpjjT>Marcel Trigger (Klepto):https://pastebin.com/Zs6d2B4d>Spiral's No Good, Very Bad Day (Spiral):https://controlc.com/3e74a2dc>Crown and Collar (Doctor Mother, Contessa, Number Man, Sylvie Wood; Reine mentioned):https://controlc.com/6ccc467a1>Walking on Sunshine (Weatherman):https://pastebin.com/yjZVwVGa>Premier Sang (Reine):https://pastebin.com/LrRApcNw>Just Another Day in Brockton Bay (Crush, Mastermind):https://controlc.com/06c31d23>Swirl of Judgement P1 (Spiral, Seraph, Wraith; Ronin mentioned):https://controlc.com/13a722b9>Hector Fudges Up On Patrol (Hector, Marcel):https://pastebin.com/nhS3W7BA>Let it Snow (Weatherman, mentions of Mr Theseus):https://pastebin.com/PKjkLRSM>Roach Rider's Awakening (Roach Rider):https://pastebin.com/jL0WRrLr>It's Just Business WIP (Mr Theseus):https://pastebin.com/LrZkNQgd>Most Justified Kill-Order (Kassandra):https://pastebin.com/yFNMSY1v>Out of the frying pan into the fire (Charles Branden):https://controlc.com/cc0440ec>Worm Build WO Simon Soaloan (Simon Soaloan):https://controlc.com/408474b8>Good Samaritan (Klepto, pre-trigger Typhon):https://pastebin.com/dSQ798dx>A Family Dinner (Occultist):https://controlc.com/ae6cea57>New Scars, Old Beginnings (Typhon, Ronin; appearances by Cyberpunk and Omni):https://controlc.com/12c15512>A WARDerful Morning (Crush, Cyberpunk, Mastermind, Mr. Theseus, Power-Broker, Maester Red; appearance by Lucky Dip; Aswang and Web-Mistress mentioned):https://controlc.com/cf319212>Whole (Klepto, Typhon; appearance by Chaplain):https://controlc.com/f0045a83>Swirl of Judgment, Part 2 (Spiral, Seraph):https://controlc.com/30f67b5b>Riona Introduction (Riona Hoshimiya; Griffin Fring and Rio-Wisp mentioned):https://pastebin.com/Arh6ewWa>Take Your Child to Work Day (Weatherman):https://pastebin.com/cSppY3NQ
>>88099656Writefags (Continued):>Power-Broker Origin (Power-Broker):https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mhbFPV_smr-TD8Xg2n9g29-wJZQ2FdTNWWBFl-cir5M/edit>Under New Management (The Beast):https://controlc.com/c91c6e2c>Roach Rider's Challenge (Roach Rider):https://pastebin.com/wECSV0gb>Strangers Outside, Stories Start To Bloom (Spiral, Roach Rider, Charles Branden [Mentioned], Wraith [Mentioned], Ronin):https://controlc.com/9200ba09>The Night Patrol (Crush, Lucky Dip, Mastermind):https://controlc.com/49e6e33e>Evening Winds, Fresh Blood, New Shapes, Old Locales. (Den):https://pastebin.com/c4WLVHA1>This fine for Simon (Simon Soaloan):https://controlc.com/9f94b518>Crush Relationship Chart (Crush):https://controlc.com/aace5161>Shedding of a Tail (Den):https://controlc.com/6875b5f0>The Day Before Tomorrow (Weatherman, Mr. Theseus; Gustav (Mentioned)https://controlc.com/a095fe7e>Douleurs de Croissance (Maud) https://pastebin.com/H1wwArK9>Botmaster Awakes (Botmaster)https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wDUk2g6i7CsTQgdc6FbYyb3g5oPeofcX9Nw14Hfyn34/edit?usp=sharing>Archival Catalog, an Excerpt pt.I (Den)https://controlc.com/3987ecbb>A Murder at the Bank (Crush, Cyberpunk and ???)https://controlc.com/2b2c914b>An Unabridged Gorging (Den)https://controlc.com/d9fc4713>The Wraith Rises from her Grave - Mari Trigger Event (Mari)https://controlc.com/4926c070>First Massacre: Mari Kill Order Incident (Mari)https://controlc.com/7121a666
>Naruto ControlC:https://controlc.com/45e966d1Naruto MP Rules:>Timeframe - Warring States>Scenario - Co-Op>You can choose your ninja rank (Genin, Chunin, Jonin, Special Jonin, Kage), but you only get the benefits of B Rank no matter what you choose. (7 Basic, 2 Advanced, 30 Points, 3 Perks).>Higher rank ninja are more experienced and capable than lower rank ninja, making them stronger despite the similar point pools.>Global Drawbacks are Time Warp and Bigger Fish. You get the points and perks from them. (18 Points and 2 Perks).>Drawbacks gained from Perks still grant points.>If anything would grant you a companion, gain 5 points. (Alternatively, you and another PC can have each other as companions.)>Villain's Vendetta, Star-Crossed, and Curse of Waifu/Husbando can't grant your PC companion any points. These drawbacks would require another PC to agree to be the target of them.>If you take Curse of the Waifu/Husbando, then you become much weaker in a fight against the PC you targeted with the drawback.
>>88099458Mind Defense M3 makes you immune to precog. It says it makes you immune to Mind powers. Meaning a pre-cog can't pre-cog you.
>>88099699Build List:>SHIMIZU CLAN (DISTANT NORTHERN ISLAND):>>87977051 - Junpei Shimizu>SARUTOBI CLAN (UNKNOWN LOCATION):>>87999551 - Ken Sarutobi>HYUGA CLAN (LAND OF FIRE):>>87990351 - Hajime Hyūga--(Chakra Beast) >>88013048 - Cikap-Kamuy, The Old Tempest.>YAMORI CLAN (BORDER OF WIND AND RAIN):>>88060703 - Yoji Yamori>UZUMAKI CLAN (WHIRLPOOL ISLAND OFF THE EAST COAST OF FIRE COUNTRY):>>87993818 - Homura>>87973301 - Uzumaki Kimiko>TAKAHASHI CLAN (LAND OF WATERFALLS):>>87971641 - Dai Takahashi>KANEMARU CLAN (LAND OF WIND):>>88072659 - TSUKA KANEMARU--(CHAKRA BEAST) >>88072672 Arechi-Ri>>88041574 - Taka Kanemaru>TAGAI CLAN (LAND OF WIND):>>87971029 - Yoshiyasu Tāgai>YAMAGUMO CLAN (LAND OF HOT SPRINGS):>>88010048 - Itsumahime>UCHIHA CLAN (UNKNOWN LOCATION):>>88085107 - Taigen Uchiha>>88083959 - Shinji Uchiha (NPC)>>88095888 - Reina Uchiha>WIND COUNTRY:>>87974432 - Yoryo>SENJU CLAN (UNKNOWN LOCATION):>>88041740 - Harema Senju>>87971398 - Hagema Senju (NPC)>AKATSUKI:>>88029779 - Yukiko>>88035522 - Hiro>>88041740 - Kamon>>88002340 - Yahiko (NPC) >CLANLESS:>>87966872 - Arito Daigo>>87975546 - "Ushi-Oni" Rai>>88087819 - Hijiri Taimatsu--(Chakra Beast) >>88087842 - Yōchina Hi>>87966926 - Arisu The Blind Traveller >>87967672 - Kemaru>>87974988 - Donkey B. Loofy.>>87976866 - Zann Ina>>87978077 - Puppet Master Ko>>87988031 - Keiko>>87992804 - El Salvador Relámpago>>88019805 - Mistress Shino, The Rivers of Blood>>88058594 - Inshun>>87975624 - Chobei Nakamoto>>88084726 - Kiko Nakamura>>88085644 - Chiyo Kazama--(Chakra Beast) >>88085671 - Chishiki-Shu, Guardian of the Vault>>88097376 - Wumydee the Nightmare
>>88099701Thanks for making the fucking meatball EVEN WORSE ANON. THANK YOU SO GOD DAMN MUCH FOR THAT.
>>88099714Relationship Chart:>Harema Senjuhttps://pastebin.com/K7e3Nr5nWritefags:>Teahouse boogaloo (Arisu)https://pastebin.com/JMeirugd>Preparations for departure (Harema Senju, Ken Sarutobi, Arisu)https://pastebin.com/C1i4YnjS>Teahouse Fw: Fw: Fw: (Arisu, Harema, Ken)https://pastebin.com/LZRsz2hq>Teahouse Meetup (Homura, Arisu, Harema, Ken, Himiko)https://controlc.com/acbe1e33>Teahouse Meeting: Discussion (Himiko, Harema, Ken)https://controlc.com/cb5eb834>Meeting Amidst the Whirlpools (Homura, Himiko)https://controlc.com/53e7785d>Meeting Amidst the Whirlpools: Confession (Homura, Himiko)https://controlc.com/05204176>Two Paths Cross (Ken, Junpei)https://controlc.com/5733747c>Hiro joins the Akatsuki (Hiro)https://pastebin.com/MsZGRQjN>The test of soup and mettle (El Salvador)https://controlc.com/b4bfd5a9>The Land of the dead (Inshun)https://pastebin.com/hq97ufn2>The Land of Wind (Taka Kanemaru, Yoji Yamori, Yoryu)https://controlc.com/a3eb518d>Gravesite (Yoji, Inshun)https://controlc.com/686a4966>Akatsuki: Calm before the Storm (Hiro, Yukiko, Kamon, Yahiko)https://controlc.com/ecfd0349
>>88099714>Wumydee is includedOh so she's canon then. There's just some random dumbfuck Genin wandering around with a tide of Chakra beasts.
>>88099737I'm writing her death writefaggotry right now
>>88099545Make some more tierlists this thread:https://tiermaker.com/create/demon-eyes-builds-15646246
>>88099783No, do a facility one instead.
>>88099783No, do a naruto one instead
>>88099783No, do a goblins one instead
>>88099802>>88099812Do a BioVsExo one instead it still lives in my heart, I wish PvP was possible in MP without someone sperging out and killing interest.
>>88099818Did we actually do tierlists for that one? I was there during it, but wasn't particularly interested.
>>88099837Neither was I
>>88099827It is possible, but we need a fair system agreed upon by the group before hand to make it work. We have rolls on this board for a reason.
Can someone pitch me a creative powerset for a big bad to have?Something that isn't "punch hard".
>>88099871For what mp?
>>88099871Turns what he touches to cheese
>>88099876Naruto, but it's an npc so it's not limited to the cyoa choices.
>>88099853What were your criteria when deciding where to place everyone?
>>88099871Yeah again what MP.
>>88099896Exactly what it looks like. If I would give them headpats, then I placed them in the first group. If I would receive headpats from them, then second group. Otherwise the third group.
>>88099871He detects anyone anywhere who thinks about him, and explodes their heads.
>>88099890You could have a villain that hijacks bodies, forcing you to attack an ally or on innocent civilian in order to attack them. Kind of like Orochimaru, except the victim's mind is still in there.
>>88099947>innocent civilianHow many ninja would actually give a fuck about an innocent civilian? With the exception of Homura of course
>>88099915What I meant to ask was why you wanted to receive headpats from some characters in particular. Same applies for the other two choices.>>88099871Being extremely charismatic.
>>88099890Semi-unrelated, but it just occurred to me how evil it would be to use Paper-Style jutsu with Flying Thunder God. Not only can they teleport like a mad man, if they sneak a paper talisman on your back they can now teleport you at will until get it off. Even making large scale portals or teleporting hostile jutsu would become very easy to accomplish.
>>88100008Pretty sure if you want to teleport someone else to you it requires them to be a flying raijin user and cooperative towards you. That's how Minato swapped places with Tobirama during the final arc.
>>88099975>What I meant to ask was why you wanted to receive headpats from some characters in particular. Same applies for the other two choices.I'm really not sure what to say. It's not like there was some exact criteria. I just put them were I felt they belonged. Was there anyone in particular that confused you?
>>88100026That might be how the anime/manga does it but the cyoa says you can do what this guy >>88100008 is thinking of doing.
>>88100041I wasn't confused, I was just asking for the sake of it. There's no need to actually answer.
>>88100026Probably true for actual Naruto lore, but the CYOA says:>"You can also use this defensively, teleporting an oncoming jutsu or opponent to a location where you have placed a seal."
Do you guys generally keep a notepad of lore notes or do you just wing it with what you remember?
Thinking of updating my facility build to not have responsibility cause it retroactively seems entirely useless, atleast two ranks do. One rank to remove a super is kinda alright.
>>88100061*slaps a seal on the back of your head and teleports a black hole to it*
>>88100065Wing it with what I don't remember and assume that if there's a glaring lore problem the in thread lore nerds will tell me how to make it work.
>>88100047>>88100061 you don't need to place a seal on them (you would only unlock the ability to teleport shit into them), you have to be touching their body to teleport, same thing for jutsu, kinda like how Minato took the truth seeking balls and warped with them
Does Flying Raijin also allow the user to forcibly teleport opponents away Bear Bartholomew style?
>>88100076Just don't get slapped with a seal bro. Literally just don't be a jobber and dodge it. All the OP shit in the world doesn't matter if you just dodge it.
>>88099973I think it depends. If the civilian belongs to their clan's sphere of influence (or the sphere of influence of their boss in the case of a mercenary) then most of the nicer ninja would try to avoid letting them die when possible. Same goes for Harema if anyone is watching, since he has a reputation to maintain.
>>88099890>npcFor a writefag, right? Not a build?
>>88099853It seems like you just placed them at random
>>88099890An evil monk that specializes in sealing and summoning techniques. His summons are ghosts.
>>88099714How do you make the ultimate dodge god build with this cyoa?
>>88100096>Does Flying Raijin also allow the user to forcibly teleport opponents away Bear Bartholomew style?If you're currently touching them yeah you can teleport them, but i'm not sure if you can just send the target, or if you have to warp yourself as well
>>88100026The paper style also isn't really a factor in what he's talking about
>>88100066Responsibility is a stat that is most important in writing and interaction, Reps 1 and 2 the Facilities will try worming back in thinking they might still have hooks in them. Compare that to Rep 0 where you're an animal they're gonna try to corral or shoot. Then you get the actual interactions between characters. High Rep characters will probably be at odds with low Rep ones, and they'll have decent reason to. Rep 0 characters are unhelpful idiots to Rep 2s, while Rep 2s are good two-shoes at best and potential plants at worse. Then they both hate tier 1 for being centrists.Choices have manifested consequences. Stick with them.
>>88099853Why'd you put Kaori in the recieve headpats from list? Why is Nina in the get headpat list? She doesn't seem the type to appreciate them.
>>88100140>She doesn't seem the type to appreciate them.Maybe not from you
>>88100128>ultimate dodge god build with this cyoa?Skilled, talented, enhanced body, body flicker, advanced taijutsu, man-beast transformation, elemental chakra cloak, seven heavenly breaths, body revival technique, flying raijin, yang nature, curse mark/natural demon, there's a few other options that boost speed/dodging but i think that's most of them
>>88100140>Why'd you put Kaori in the recieve headpats from list? From what I've seen in her writefags, Kaori seems to actually take charge and is fairly ojou-sama-y. For those types I'd rather receive headpats.>Why is Nina in the get headpat list? She doesn't seem the type to appreciate them.She seems like a ball of nervousness and anxiety. It makes me want to give her headpats.
>>88100162Honestly, I think Dustless Concealment is a big one to add. Being invisible to most forms of detection is pretty big for not getting hit.
>>88100136but mechanically responsibility 2 is giving me nothing anon. And the points are scarce as fuck.Im better off putting one in control.
>>88100194>but mechanicallyI ain't about Raw mechanics when I'm doing write-ups. You do you as you will.
>>88100194>prioritizing 'mechanics' over your character's identitydont be soulless
>>88100047>>88100061Okay I see how you're getting confused. This isn't an easy thing to explain with a small description.The caster can place seals on basically anything including in the air (temporarily). The caster can teleport to those seals at any time. If the caster is touching something or has their chakra linked to something then they can choose to teleport those things with them as well. The caster can intercept an incoming attack by placing a seal in the air which on contact will teleport the attack to a seal in a different location.So no, you can't just put a seal in an underground room filled with poison gas and teleport enemies to it from a distance. You need to grab them first and then you can teleport them to the gas chamber. Actually this is starting to sound really strong.
>>88100249>has their chakra linked to something then they can choose to teleport those things with them as wellSo you need the Chakra reciever Kekkai Genkai to teleport your enemies at range?
>>88100269>So you need the Chakra reciever Kekkai Genkai to teleport your enemies at range?If you throw your black rods into them, you should be able to
>>88100249But what about when Paper Style is added to the equation?
>>88100249>Actually this is starting to sound really strong.Of course it is, it's a jutsu made by Tobirama
>>88100269Sure, but you if you throw a chakra receiver at them and they get hit by it they're already in a serious amount of trouble. They disrupt chakra which is basically like being tazed.>>88100286Then it would be much like adding ink style to the equation. You can place seals on them from a distance.>>88100291>invented shadow clone and edo tensei and flying raijin>also invented a perpetual suicide bombing technique to be used by edo tensei zombiesFucking Tobirama, man. If he really wanted to he could have conquered the world. Just imagine fighting an immortal infinite chakra zombie with his army of kamikazes that can teleport anywhere in the world in an instant.
Othalanon here, I've come to announce that the laptop saga has gotten worse and the phone I was posting from has also died. Luckily I have a 2nd phone but this does mean a decent amount of my work on fire emblem has been lost. I also lost everything aside from the unfinished psd file that I managed to save just before the laptop died for xenoblade, but I'll be able to work off that rough draft I posted in the thread back in December/November for that.
>>88099699Here is the bug man, kind of cheated with Old Wounds as a birth defect though.Name: Aburame Shou>OriginKonohagakure, Land of Fire>TimeframeWarring States Era>ScenarioCo-op>Rank(+30) Chunin, B-Rank [7 Basic Jutsu, 2 Advanced Jutsu, 3 Perks]>PerksNoble Clan [Gain Hidden Jutsu: Kidaichū Symbiosis]Gifted [Upgrade Basic Jutsu: Animal Companionship]Talented(Taijutsu) [Gain Hidden Jutsu: Man-Beast Transformation]Talented(Genjutsu) [Gain Hidden Jutsu: Sound Style]Prodigious [Upgrade Advanced Jutsu: Illusory Arts]>Drawbacks(+7) Old Wounds (Deaf)(+10) Bigger Fish [1 Perk](+8) Time Warp [1 Perk](55)>Basic JutsuAnimal Companionship+Unarmed Combat, Stealth, Subterfuge, Book Smarts (Music), Utility Jutsu, Body Flicker(-3) Hellviewing>Advanced JutsuIllusory Arts+ (Hearing)Sensory Arts (Touch)(-4) Advanced Taijutsu>Hidden Techniques(-7) Kidaichū Symbiosis+Man-Beast Transformation, Sound Style>Special Techniques(-12) Urusaichū (Loud Insects) Symbiosis - Shou's body is host to a unique breed of Kidaichu beetles, larger than normal Kidaichu, each one being as large as an adult's thumb. The Urusaichu use specialized parts similar to cicadas that vibrate against each other and make cries loud enough to cause disorientation or even hearing loss. Multiple Urusaichu can resonate together to deliver even stronger sound waves and not be damaged by each other. However, the colony that Shou is able to host is significantly smaller in number due to the Urusaichu's larger size and higher chakra consumption.>Secret Specials(-7) Urusaichu Gourd (Enchanted Tool - Urusaichu Symbiosis/Sound Style) - A massive gourd that Shou carries around. It is used to house more of his Urusaichu colony and conveniently dampens their sounds. It can also be used to focus their sound through the gourd's opening for a devastating sonic blast.>Chakra Nature(-5) Yin(-5) Lightning, Wind(-10) Vibration
>>88100440A member of the Aburame clan. Born deaf, Shou's defect was a cause of concern throughout the clan though as an Aburame, he was still required to go through their tradition of nesting insects. Despite their worries, he received them with no issue and was even able to nest a unique breed of insect known as the Urusaichu; loud insects which rarely nested due to the distress to the children caused by their cries, an absent problem to Shou thanks to his disability. Throughout his childhood, he would be treated with gentleness the adults perceived was necessary, but would quickly be proven wrong by his talent and hardwork. Although there was a communication barrier between himself and everyone else, Shou was able to become a dependable young member of the Aburame.
>>88100228>>88100221Its also that I feel like its rude to responsibility 2 that stayed behind to be a leave with responsibility 2.
>>88100457Rude is an understatement. That kind of treason is going to be absolutely central with some characters.
>>88100481That does help, but I feel like its unfair to them to still be a favorite of the captors when I fled.2 fits fine for staying, but leaving should really down it by a rank no?
>>88100497You know, Beethoven style. He "listens" to music with his body by feeling the vibrations they make.
>>88100491To clarify, I made my character before we even had to the option to stay.
>>88100435That's some horrible luck. How much of the work is lost for Fire Emblem?
>>88100515Beethoven went deaf.
>>88100491It only has a mechanical effect if you leave. It's not exactly loyalty, it's how much the facility trusts you to not act like a psycho. You can be responsibility 2 without being loyal to the facility if you show you can be trusted to not be a psycho and have them be interested in how you'll act when not in their control.
>>88100445Wait that's a man?DROPPED
>>88100542Yeah, but consistently feeling the cries of his insects eventually gave Shou an idea of music, and rhythmic vibrations gives him a pleasant feeling.
>>88100491No. Theres a division between Stay Actors, Escapees, and the Facilities. Collaboration makes sense and some kids are going to be really good at playing the part of compliant. But actual function has people acting all over the place. Consider Tiger. On the surface Tiger being a belligerent schizo doesn't 'fit' as tier two responsibility, however him being easily manipulated and useful to the Centre, as despite being loyal he without manipulation he could be the type of kid they might 'ship off to the farm.' Juggernaut on the other hand was much more useful in the immediacy, but her compliance hid the fact she was willing to kick off, and even after the Centre would be willing to keep her a lower priority due to her mong-wrangling abilities. Play your cards where they landed anon, and if you're so divorced from it from it make yourself a new character.
>>88100570How would you handle a good guy who believes that both the facility and the other escapees are evil?
>>88099615>WhoThe Omnissiah Old fashioned robot uplifting. Big money, big robots and big women, and also smaller robots. Hasn't figured out how to put others conciousness into machines but hopes his giga brain can solve this. Thinks that if humanity can be uplifted into mechanical form there will be no need for conflict, will be no death etc. Believes he will be able to control and guide humanity in this form to something better whether they want to or not.>ScenarioWorthless Opponent>Path, Origin, IdentityVillainAdultNo Identity>ShardDead Shard>Perks & Flaws Perks: Negentropy, Secret Lair, Power Slot x2 & Second Trigger x2Path Perks: Mooks, Money & ConnectionsFlaws: Case 53 x3, Worst Day Ever x1, Rough Start x1 & Humble BeginningsPath Flaws: Kill Order>Skills & Path SpecificsSkills: Hacking, Mechanics, Tactics, Strategy, Investigation, Stealth & BanterPath: Other "Gang" (Own)>PowerTechnopathy (Second Trigger), Perfect Mind (Second Trigger), Robotics, Machine Spirit & Power RefinementPower Refinement: Mind of the Machine - The mind has become capable of doing complex calculations on the fly like that of a computer. Body of the Machine - Any machine you can control can be posessed. Spirit of the Machine - The machines possessed by the Machine Spirit are powered by it.
Man, Foundation is unpopular as fuck. 2 total builds
>>88100613It's because everyone wants more points.
>>88100604Depends on the character, there's a dozen ways you could probably play that, and make it work pretty well. So long as there's meat on the metaphorical character bone I can probably work with it.>>88100613Obligatory (you), but I prefer a slower MP. It lets me actually get down write-ups than constant low-effort characters getting thrown it.
>>88100613It doesn't really have a unique bonus like the other 2 builds. Everyone wants those sexy +5 Specific from Center or +3 General from Institute.
>the tech nerd has to be a hideous villain that's marked for death just so he can make robotsWorm is in desperate, DESPERATE need for rebalance.
>>88100613There were 2 new bitchy asians added last thread. Guess the anon running the controlc hasnt updated yet.And personally, I just think the center is the coolest out of the three.
>>88100129Considering how Minato did it, just stick a corresponding teleportation tag to the one on your kunai onto whoever and you can send them wherever, he did this with Kakashi and Rin during the third Shinobi war.
>>88100645robotics only costs 7 points, he took all those drawbacks because he wants more than just 'making robots'
>>88100613If there were more abilities that supported weird magic I might have have made one, but as is there isn't much that I'd rather put on a child of an old one other a government agent or a lab rat.
I have a serious suggestion for FacilityCan we make things that give stats instead give one stat point? Since as is theres only Control, Control, Overdrive, Responsibility, Potential, PotentialAnd we said potential was a no-go for getting stronger after escape in MPDoes anyone actually feel like this is a bad idea?
>>88100645Cyberpunk can do exactly what he wants to do anon, all that other stuff is him going extra.
>>88100669Oh also Theseus(That rogue guy)
>>88100669>>88100678>>88100657Lucky Dip and Sylvie both are tinkers too, though they are conspirators so probably don't count.
>Thinks that if humanity can be uplifted into mechanical form there will be no need for conflict, will be no death etc. Believes he will be able to control and guide humanity in this form to something betterThis is very clearly a hero. All the world just mindlessly attacks him because he needed the points to save them.
>>88100666Im gonna make my character trying this out, hopefully people think its a good idea because god I want to have versatility so my two points are spent as is, and I dont want control or Overdrive or responsibility that much.
>>88100666>Does anyone actually feel like this is a bad idea?I don't know. What could be bad about introducing mechanical changes on an MP well after it has started?If you want to edit the damn CYOA to give you stat points you're thirsting for, make an actual argument for them instead of begging the question. I might be inclined if you actually sold it instead of sounding like a stat-point addict.
>>88100694Cyberpunk, a hero, can already do all that if he wanted to. He could even fork himself into a couple bots to do some maintenance work. He just won't cuz no one in Wormverse would try to implement tinkertech in a grand scale.
>>88100709anon PLEASe i just need ONE MORE POINt I swear thats it and then im done PLEASE my super cool build is almost PERFECT PLEASE
>>88100716Omnissiah anon didn't need all of that to uplift humanity into bots. Also auto soulless since he's going admech but doesn't even have the augmentation tinker power.
>>88100718Bah GAWD I remember when I was young and I had to write my build up the hill BOTH WAYS and when I got my point allowance I said THANK YOU
>>88100709It doesn't effect any existing build because they can be assumed to have bought the normal point with it silly.It just increases the ability to actually make a unique character instead of locking everyone to specific paths.
>>88100745how about you just take one of the memories that give stats instead of combat training/Experimentation and games?
What's the point of making a build if you're not gonna writefag for it?
>>88100536Not too much, I should be able to recover most of it today.
>>88100745It retroactively impacts them as it adds an option that wasn't there before. All while you're ignoring the sale. How do you sell the Mentor giving someone Discretion? How do you sell Taking it Easy giving Overdrive?
>>88100793Because i don't want control or responsibility, and potential is useless in our MPAge gives Overdrive Control again or Potential agianSo the only options to get without stat points is Control, Potential, Overdrive, or Responsibility
>>88100810They give you a special invention.While resting you find generate a special storage of excess energy you didn't know you had before.
>>88099699Emono Higaisha, Scion of a Dead Clan>Perks Bloodline Limit, Unbreakable Will, Unique Power, Charming, Attractive (63 pts)>DrawbacksOverconfidence (68 pts)>Basics Subterfuge+ (63)Animal Companionship Book Smarts Book SmartsUtility JutsuHell Viewing Special Skill [Shouting]>Advanced Sensory ArtsIllusory Arts+ [Sound] (57)>Hidden TechniquesSound Style+ (45)>Secret Specials Chakra Beast (10)>Chakra Nature Yang, Wind, Water (0)>Kekkai Genkai Resilient Regeneration+ Ueta Hoshoku-Sha, slavering wild dog Chakra Beast>Perks & DrawbackBloodline Limit, Deep Reserves, Tough, Skilled, Rage (90 pts)>BasicsStealth+ (87 pts) [Skilled]Body Flicker+ (79)>Advanced Advanced Taijutsu+ (69)Sensory Arts [Smell] (65)>Hidden Techniques Corrosion Style (60)>Secret Specials Curse Mark : Stage 3 (20)>Kekkai Genkai Natural Demon+ (0)When Emono Higaisha was young, the first son to the leader of the Higaisha clan, a beast came upon his quiet village. The Ueta Hoshoku-Sha has an eternal hunger, one which can never be slated. When it began to prey upon the people of the clan, their leader met it in open combat, and was devoured. It's corrosive saliva melted him in front of friends and family both. Emono survived not through wit or will, but a quirk of his blood; his vast regenerative properties meant the beast could not properly consume him. But the Ueta Hoshoku-Sha was cunning, and it saw the boy for what he was; an ever flowing bounty, a source of food which would never end. It keeps the boy around on it's travels, and despite it's best efforts they have established a bit of a rapport. After all, now that it did not need to hunt, it needed to entertain itself. Now, the beast wanders, guided vaguely by the shouts of the boy's head. Emono, meanwhile, has grown attached, and wants to make a name for himself and his new friend, and to make sure the memory of his dead clan is never forgotten.
>>88100794for fun, faggot
>>88100794Huh. Have we crossed the threshold where we get people who have never been to /cyoag/ now?
>>88100608>Big money, big robots and big women>big womenWhat could he have meant by this?
Remember that guy who was autistically saying teleport was op or whatever?That shit has a full 1 second cooldown at MINIMUM and consuems massive amounts of energy.If dont think it specifically enables them to teleport INSIDE people either.
>>88100666Just have potential as is, a sign of future growth that can be shown hints of in writefagging.Those who choose potential just indicate which powers are bought with those points.
We need to tie some builds together in narutoMake alliances and stuff
>>8810082>They give you a special invention but still treat you like a kid with a bazooka strapped to his arm>Slacking gives you extended abilities under extreme duressDo you see the problem here?>>88100884Tier 2 literally says you're going to be one of the most powerful freaks out there in a few years. Its the 'bending the rules' option if I ever saw it. I'm pulling out of this because I've got a writeup to finish editing.
>>88100910If it actually gives 5-6 specific and general points then yes you will be one of the most powerful mutants in the world. Getting a 10-12 point infusion will do that.
>>88100905Hmm, the scorpion girl changed her clan to the Yamori clan didn't she? Why is she not with her brother/fellow clanner in the build list?
>>88100926For anyone not getting it. You're getting both 5-6 specific points and 5-6 General points. If it was 5-6 total they wouldn't need to specify you getting both since general points can be spent on anything.
>>88100905Clan builds are already doing that. Funny how the builds that actually gave themselves something to do are the ones writing.
>>88100910"In a few years" is the point, the collective story is what, a couple of weeks, in?
>>88100861It feels strange to realize this thread not just considered an offshoot of /cyoag/ anymore. It still feels like that to me.
>>88100910good luck with your editing anon
>>88100970I miss a lot of our old anons
>>88101031I also miss your old anons.
>Anons want Discretion to be mandatory to not be a jobber>So everyone must spend their 2 stat points on it since theres no other way to get it>Meaning the only other stats you can get is 2 Control, 2 Potential, or 1 Responsibility 1 Overdrive>A whopping total of three build choices
>>88101068Yeah, I remember like 2 fags bringing it up before this thread and talking like it only made sense to gimp every build without Discretion 2. It was such an awful take that I didn't even feel the need to call them fags at the time.
>>88101068What? You have nosebleeds anon, it mentions how they're nothing to worry about unless you heavily overuse your abilities. So just don't overuse them at every opportunity.
>>88101094It was last thread, mostly I was using hyperbole to show how limited we are and how just giving us Any Stat points would enable greater variety. Since being old gives you a useless stat for example we dont have many old people.
>>88099458If potential isnt allowed to give points can I atleast treat that as 1 point of something that can actually impact writing?
The only thing the nosebleeds do is make it obvious that you're using powers.The only people who need to worry about them are mentalfags who want to operate discreetly (as the stat implies).It doesn't give you more stamina. If your headcanon is that powers cause headaches eventually make you pass out then that will happen regardless of whether or not you get nosebleeds. So that's the final word on it. All or nothing. Either everyone's fucked or no one's fucked.
>>88101149At level 2 it stops all bleeding, meaning you're only limited by energy not physical damage.
>>88101120yes. did you think you had to pretend it wasn't a choice? you just can't directly change your build with the points it would otherwise offer.>>88101068anyone who says that you need discretion 2 to not be a jobber is an even bigger faggot than you are, and you one annoying faggot.
>>88101162The stat itself mentions the bleeding isn't enough to actually be dangerous. It's just noticeable and if you try to stealth using your powers then people will notice you bleeding from your nose.
>>88100865> The man made of metal craves the pleasures that can only be provided by a vast, fleshy womanPoetry.
>>88100944Yeah that should be updated>>88100949Some, not allAlso clans should hire some of the mercenary characters to give them something to do
>>88101233It gets worse and worse the more powers you use. Until it starts to risk your life.
>>88101322>mercenaries higher other mercenariesBut for what purpose.
>>88101323It doesn't say that at all.
>>88101323>Until it starts to risk your life.This is your headcanon
>>88101341>Why would you want more soldiers in wartime
>>88100944Fixed. Guess she's Kiko Yamori instead of Kiko Nakamura now>>88101253Someone make the Omnissiah a BBW Nemesis. Death by snu snu
>>88101347>>88101344>The bleeding is barely a drop of blood at first>But the longer and more intensely you use your powers the more noticable your bleedingYou don't have infinite blood anon. You aren't an anime character
>>88101362You also aren't a firehose, faggot. No amount of blood coming out of your nose is going to kill you on it's own. Stop trying to force your shitty headcanon on everyone.
>>88101362Say's you. We're literally a bunch of superpowered teenagers with attitude.
>>88099477>Brandon and the Terrible, Horrible, No Good,...This has triggered my autism, have made a new controlc w a different title that actually fitshttps://controlc.com/522959e7Controlc anon plz take note thx
>>88101362Honestly this is the crux of it. Its only gonna manifest as dangerous if you're spending hours using your active abilities. But clearly some people feel gimped if they can't run your powers like they're a gas generator in your basement. Its like mental powers and resistance. We can plan for it but it isn't a vulnerability you just get erased for free because weaknesses make PP small.
>>88101362Yeah, if there's a bunch of blood on your face it'll be noticeable. Doesn't mean it's enough to cause harm. The stat goes out of its way to say how much the bleeding doesn't matter.
>>88101341From what I've heard about the golden age of mercenary warfare in European history (roughly around the Renaissance I think?), conflicts were like a closed loop of Merc captains bribing/scheming with other Merc captains so they would look good and get bigger payouts from their respective nobles, so Mercs buying up and buying off other Mercs is not too far off base. I haven't studied history or watched Naruto though.
>>88101360Thanks, anon. I'll likely post a tweaked version of Kiko's build once I do my writefagging.
>>88099477> Barbara is "the feminine form of the Greek word barbaros (Greek: βάρβαρος) meaning "stranger" or "foreign""> Bob is literally a foreign entity from outside realityDunno if this was intentional but it's kino anyway
>>88101341>But for what purpose.There's a few reasons for it, maybe you simply need some more bodies to throw at the enemy so you can win a difficult engagement (either a top tier ninja or all out clan war), maybe you need a specific set of skill your clan lacks (for example, sealing or medical ninjutsu), maybe you want to marry one of your clan members and this is a way to screen for powerful/useful shinobi to marry into the family, perhaps you lost members in a fight or they're too busy fighting in other fronts so you're forced to break the bank to pad your numbers for a while
>>88101352If a Clan wants more soldiers they fuck more.
>>88101444Calm down, Uchiha.
>>88101444Anon it takes like atleast a decade for them to be combat capable.Mercs can be hired NOW
>>88101444>12 year prep and training time before a mediocre soldier is ready. They'll get mogged by the guys who just buy mercs.
>>88101444So they'll get soldiers in 13~ ish years, possibly a little bit more depending on how the training regimen for that clan is. If you need the soldiers now, your only choice is to hire them.
>>88100608>>88099615Updated the build >WhoThe Omnissiah Good old fashioned robot uplifting. Big money, big robots and big women, and also smaller robots. Hasn't figured out how to put others conciousness into machines but hopes his giga brain can solve this. Thinks that if humanity can be uplifted into mechanical form there will be no need for conflict, will be no death etc. Believes he will be able to control and guide humanity in this form using his powers of absolute control of electronics within 1km of him. Because of his newfound genious he can see that this is the true and proper way and you will all become living machines whether you want it or not.For in the memory of good ol' Mujahideen Bob who wished nothing but that the dreams of Omnissiah the human formerly know as Dustin Hoffman (not the actor) would come true he will achieve his vision.For in the memory of what they took from him, he will make sure that they pay.>ScenarioWorthless Opponent>Path, Origin, IdentityVillainAdultNo Identity>ShardNatural Trigger>Perks & Flaws Perks: Negentropy, Noctis Cape, Secret Lair, Power Slot x3, Second Trigger x2 & Follower x2 Path Perks: Mooks, Money & ConnectionsFlaws: Case 53 x3, Worst Day Ever x2, Rough Start x1, Unruly Passenger, Slaughterhouse Nine & Humble BeginningsPath Flaws: Kill Order>Skills & Path SpecificsSkills: Hacking, Mechanics, Tactics, Strategy, Investigation, Stealth, First Aid & BanterPath: Other "Gang" (Own)>PowerTechnopathy (Second Trigger), Perfect Mind (Second Trigger), Robotics, Augmentation, Machine Spirit & Power RefinementPower Refinement: Mind of the Machine - The mind has become capable of doing complex calculations on the fly like that of a computer. Body of the Machine - Any machine you can control can be posessed. Spirit of the Machine - The machines possessed by the Machine Spirit are powered by it.
>>88101484>FollowersMujahideen Bob (Warrior Shard)Brave warrior from faraway sands who gave his life so valiantly fighing for the downtrodden, dispensing justice like that of a justice dispensing vending machine.>Skills Marksmanship, Martial Arts, First Aid, Banter, Stealth>Perks & FlawsPower Slot x4, Second Trigger x1Psychich Nosebleed, Rough Start & Numbed Emotions>PowersPeak Condition, MacGyver, Small Arms, Infinite Ammo, Background Music, Prop Hunt (Second Trigger) & Power Refinement (Second Trigger)Power Refinement: Can transform into the ultimate Mujahideen of legend gaining all of the skills and abilities and blasting the nastiest of nasheeds directly into the ears of the infidels. (Explodes with the force of a 500kg TNT dynamite bomb on transforming back into regular ol' bob)Big Tits McGee She's a big girl, and she's gone too far cause she know it don't matter anyway. Don't you know that it's wrong to take what is given you, so far gone.RIP - Carolinne Hoffman real life waifu>SkillsTactics, Parkour, Martial Arts>Perks & Flaws>PowersFat Fuck, Titan Form & Elasticity
>>88101484Humble beginnings truly is the free flaw of this MP. I remember some fuck complaining about changing the amount of points the scenario gave us and now basically everyone starts with at least 15 Shard points anyway.
>>88101462I mean have you SEEN those uchiha?
>>88101484>>88101497Cool build, you going to write for him?
>>88101424>I'll likely post a tweaked version of Kiko'sWhat are you going to chance anon? And what is Kiko's relationship with her fellow clanner, are they siblings, cousins?
>>88101507Why are you forcing this so hard?
>>88101479If you need more soldiers now then you tell lord big dick he needs hire someone else to retrieve his special cock ring.
>>88101507Woops meant to post the full image.
>>88101524That anon was brainwashed by genjutsu, you must understand
>>88101465If you pay the Uchiha it's because you want their funny eyes working for you. There's no point if they just pay someone else to do a job.
>>88101522I'm basically retarded when it comes to writing but I will give it a go and write something that will inevitably be cringe
>>88101522No, I already have another one. Feel free to use him as a Nemesis if you want, or write your build killing him if it makes sense and is well written.
>>88099458>Name: Louis White>Codename: Unseen>Gender:Male>Age:23>Awakening: Early>View: Rejection>Facility: The Foundation>Memories:StudiesThe Mentor >Stats:Control IDiscretion IIResponsibility I>Power Type:Mutant>Esper:Suggestion IDefense I/II/III>Mutant:Peak Body I/IIEnhanced Senses II (Super Hearing)Muscle Density I/IISkin Resistance IFading IInvisibility Extension I/II/IIICloaking I/IIImperceptibility I/II>Revelation:The Scrolls>Decision: Stay>Loyalty:Kept On A Tight Leash>Role:Field Agent>Dossier:Louis White was one of The Foundation's earliest recruits, born in [Redacted] was eventually discovered when information about a young boy managing to lift a car off his father came our way. A quick investigation later, and [Redacted] was dispatched to abduct the boy into our care, Louis was quick to adapt to Foundation life, as has been the case with most early recruits, but his own sense of self loathing over what he is and how it relates to the man who killed his parents had left him rather reclusive. During one of our planned breakouts Louis inevitably chose to stay, we believe this is because of the connection he had fostered with Professor Grant, one of our senior staff who has been (Without our express permission) inducting him into the [Redacted] and teaching him of the more mystical aspects of the burgeoning powers. Thankfully, this has made the boy an effective field agent with his mix of loyalty, understanding and skill, however, he is still to be kept in check as his powers have made him both our greatest spy and assassin.
>>88101543Why would our genjutsu users brainwash him to act this way? They aren't Uchiha
>>88101580Personality:Louis is the bumbling assistant to Professor Grant and an acting mentor to some of the younger Foundation students. An often frazzled and shaky man Louis is often laughed at by the younger students, though much of the older generation has put together that it's an act put on by the world's premier super-spy to lessen the fears of the younger generation. Louis' antics have led to him obtaining the nickname "Houdini" for his tendency to go invisible at the nearest sign of trouble.When the students aren't around and the "Good Work" needs doing though, Louis will drop the goofy act and assumes his more sullen and stern personality. This is what Louis refers to as his "Work Persona" whereby he becomes a cold and calculating machine of a man, able to perform any task with a hollow expression.Louis in truth, is a master liar, internally he is fearful and hateful of everyone's powers. Louis is haunted by the death of his parents at the hands of his abductor, and has long since realized that it was professor Grant herself who committed the deed, leaving himself in a paradoxical situation of seeing her as his most trusted confidant, the woman who, risking a great deal of danger to herself exposed him to the Ancient rites, and the woman who murdered his parents in cold blood. This dichotomy only became worsened when he became a field agent and has since committed just as horrible if not worse atrocities, whether they be capturing "Escaped" foundation students, "Recruiting" new members or in removing those that have learned too much of the Foundation's ways. Louis' attitude towards the Foundation has always been that the Foundation is his home, especially since he has learned of it's more esoteric practices and through the utilization of it's more mystical teachings in his fieldwork. Louis hopes that he can inspire that same sense of loyalty to the Foundation in it's younger students through his more outwardly friendly manner.
>>88101581>Why would our genjutsu users brainwash him to act this way? It's quite obvious this is a desperate attempt of the Uchiha to recruit more people to their side
Name: Sierra AlphaActually its a callsign, but the Center doesn't want me to use my name anymore.The Awakening: Childhood >A relatively bog standard awakening. Turns out normal kids can't run the mile in 15 seconds.View of Self: Pragmatism>My powers are useful to me, and keep me safe. Can't really do anything that cool though.The Facility: Center>The Center, Home, atleast it was until the escapees all fucked it up. Memories: Combat Training, Meditation (Overdrive: Mastery of the self means that when you fail to calm yourself you explode that much harder)>I did better on the mixxed combat drills than anyone expected, I never felt the need to explain why it was so easy for me to aim. Stats: Versatility 2, Overdrive 2>I'm on the versatile side. Normally you get one set and just max it out while I'm spread out across all three. Gives me a unique boost when I'm angry.Power Source: Psyker>I don't know why I'm classified as a Psy, I don't really do anything with my mind, I just happen to be able to stop type and stuff.Mind: Suggestion I, Defense III, >Apparently things that should work on me don't always, the other thing I don't use often. Keep it secret.Body: Dash I, Blink I, Temporal Compression II, >Bread and butter and its not even my main strength. A side effect of all my time powers is when im Dashin' and Blinkin' I can move my arms at full speed. Makes using a gun way easier than it should be.Psy: Absorption III, Temporal Pause II, Time Lock II, Time Stop I>I got a kinda stasis deal goin on, don't get hot or cold or anything like that. Also control time, no big deal.Revelation: Test (Passed)>Bosses finally revealed their true colors, but my training made it pretty easy to follow the order.
>>88101617>>88099458Ugh forgot to link op when redoin my post to leave the other anons posts close together.Decision: Stay>When everyone fled it made my life that much worse. Barely get any freedom anymore when I'm at home.Loyalty: Practical>Not a big fan of the escapees but I don't hate all of them. I'de rather be free too, but playing along is more fun usually. I get to kill people afterall!Role: Field Agent>I get let out of my cage for missions of all sorts. Though often its about capturing a new...Or sometimes old, paras. Escapees or just kids who only recently awoke.Dossier: Not the ideal candidate, but when push came to shove she stayed while other more reliable agents fled. Damn good thing too, on paper she sounds weak but the casualties that she can cause in a short while with a gun are terrifying. She's one of the best asset retrieval agents we've come across and the results speak for themselves. Very few psychics can keep themself out of a timestop bubble and avoid getting carried right into a waiting capture team a few thousand meters away.
>>88099458>Mind Control build is made>Every following build takes the immunity to mind powers power.Pure coincidence
>>88101653The mind control in the cyoa isn't even much of a threat considering people can just ignore suggestions.
>>88101653Its almost like people really don't want to lose agency over their OC or something
>>88101653Probably? Puppet is an escapee going after other escapees. Probably not a big threat to the stay builds we're seeing. Neither of the new bitchy asians had it either, so you're also just... incorrect.
>>88101615It's so off-putting that it seems more like some false flag attempt by their enemies
>>88101653>anons make objectively correct choices and select powerful options >immediate crying because your super special build can't btfo everyone now, this is so unfair Kill yourself
>>88101653People don't like auto-loss conditions, color me shocked. And before you disagree, you can't tell me that there's not always some "dies to gun" type autist that argues for his mind control build beating everyone forever. It's a waste of time to allow the argument, so may as well lock it off.
>>88101698The mind control options are incredibly weak though. Defence is more useful against the mental blasts.
>>88101737And thats the main reason we take it. it negates an entire 1/3 of the cyoa.
>>88101653I just took it because the point of Louis is to be unnoticeable, even by other powers
>>88101698Anon it's only auto lose if she touches you. You have the option of ignoring everything else. I have no problem with people having mind defense, it's the third upgrade that's fucking cheap. 6 points to invalidate another build completely, tell me it wouldn't be cheap at all if there was some 6 point be utterly immune to physical damage power.
>>88101780We dont care about the shitty mind control, we carea bout the fact that it negates the ENTIRE 1/3 of the cyoa.Also absorption exists and negates a large chunk of the 3rd tree.
>>88101756It really only negates one option (mental shock) because it's the only option that would really matter to another build.
>>88101780>if there was some 6 point be utterly immune to physical damage power.That's phasing for 5/6 points
>>88101839Is phasing active at all times?
>>88101737Some of them are, but others are much more dangerous. But you know what's more dangerous?Actually existing in the world and having your abilities be mapped and planned for. Someone sinking points in defence is only as useful as it just being them alone with an esper. A specialized mutant will probably be able to eat an anti-esper, and a specialized mutant will be vulnerable to espers. Psions are more fucky and situational. Any one advantage can be countered given the right circumstances.And all of this is just pissing in the wind without any actual events behind it.
>>88101824Absorption doesn't. Just because you can absorb some of that element doesn't mean you can absorb the lightning strikes/explosions/ice storms they can start throwing at you.
>>88101848>Is phasing active at all times?Kinda? You set the enemy as the target, then no matter what kind of physical power they try to use you're automatically going to phase out of harm's way. If your powers don't require physical contact (say you're going balls deep into External powers) you could just be permanently phased in the ground
>>88101863>A specialized mutant will probably be able to eat an anti-esperAnon it's 6 points. You barely take any damage at all to your specialization with that. Every power type gets 6 general points along with it's 22 specific points.
>>88101871You don't know what absorb means.
>>88101897You can absorb a campfire to recharge, that doesn't mean you can absorb a fireball.
>>88101897You're absorbing "Cold" not fucking balls of ice being flung at you you retard
How strong would Juggernaut be if she had bofa?
>>88101919Who is Steve Jobs?
>>88099458Ech. A quest thread.
>>88101907>>88101905Its ABSORB not RESISTThe physical damage of a ball of ice sure, but not the cold.
>>88101953Anon stoops down to onomatopoeia faster than hog posting lmao
>>88101959Anon I'm gonna give up on you, anyone that'd unironically argue that spending 3 points to get all the starting upgrades of a tree should make you immune to everything the specialists in that tree can do is such a massive retard no outside opinion could ever hope to pierce their denser than a neutron star head to hit their single atom sized brain.
>>88102001actually not even all the starting upgrades. All 2 upgrades of the trees starter power.
yikes naruto is dead
>>88102021It got two builds this thread
>>88102021i wish. then i could sleep at night knowing this thread wasn't being shitted up by 500-post long arguments about which hokage had the biggest nuts or whatever boring, inane shit they talk about
>>88102041then you can have a 500-post long argument about mind control or some stupid shit, oh wait
>>88102057this guy definitely thinks that hiruzen sarutobi had the biggest nuts canonically.. lmao
>>88102072why are you thinking so much about nuts man? kinda weird
>>88102072I mean the guy was willing to fight both Tobirama and Hashirama. They were heavily weakened sure but just the psychological factor of fighting them should have made him hesitate. He also didn't know how much they'd been weakened.
RETARDSKimimaro easily had bigger nuts than any of the Kage.
>>88102072It was obviously Jiraiya. He was the pervy sage, and the blue balls buff from Tsunade was mega OP. Fucking lorlet
Editing is done for my next write-up. Advancing the timeline to allow for the eventual meeting and probably going to do the same for the Stay people at the centre.Honestly, I'm gonna stay out of any thread arguments. They poison the fun I have with people's characters and I like a lot of facilities cast.>Breakfast At Rileys (Arditi & Nikitai)https://pastebin.com/bTMLn6sN
>>88101978>hog postingThanks for reminding me.Rules:>None, go hog wild
>>88099545Finally got my Shiki intro done: https://controlc.com/79f57dcbDidn't turn out exactly how I wanted, but between life and lack of motivation it probably never would have.
>>88102118>Giant Hog>Terrorism >All of Alabama >Bank of Pig Pen >Grease ($9)>Helper Monkey ($7)>Caltrop Dispenser ($6)>Slop X6 ($0)I'm here for a good time.
>>88102118>Warthog>Espionage>The UN Assembly>Pig Pen>Ninja Suit -1>Self-Destruct -1>Jet Pack -2>Grenade -2>EMP Device -1>Stimulants -2>Slop -1One final meal before going hog wild
>>88102118"Général" Phileas HoggHog Species: WarthogMission: AssassinationTarget: Hubbard's HouseFinancer: Deutsche BankStarting Points: 12Armor: Spidey Suit (-2)Back Mount: Jet Pack (-2)Tail Mount: Tail Gun (-2)Utility OptionsTitanium Tusks (-2)Stimulants (-2)Aztec Amulet (-2)Descended from the ancient warrior hogs of Mali, Phileas Hogg was made for a life of dubious activity. In the past, he was the court pig of Emperor Bokassa, doing the emperor's bidding. However, following the fall of the CAE, he has lived abroad. selling his services for a hitman. His current mission? Putting down the clone of Tom Cruise before the technology which made him can be used by the Utah government to spread Scientology across the US.
>>88102118Name: Big BerthaAlias: Stompy MechSpecies:Giant HogGender: FemaleGoal: TerrorismTarget: Paris FranceMoney: Bank of AmericaArmor: MechUtility: Slop, Aztec Amulet, Titanium Tusks
>>88101617>>88099458Probably should put a image for visibility.https://pastebin.com/tLjErAuV
>>88102118>Giant Hog>Terrorism>Soviet Nazi Base>Deutsche Bank>Plate Mail>Machine Gun>Shield Gen>Aztec Amulet>I defy reality to pick slop anyway
>>88102160I liked it. Could have been better but it serves it's purpose as an intro scene. Establishes her current situation, gives other characters a reason for going to interact with her(in this case she showed up in front of their club room and apparently robbed someone's their lunch/threatened to take their soul, from their possible perspective anyway), show's how she usually acts and show's her view on aforementioned characters. Looking forward to more.
>>88100440Probably one of the best thematic builds written so far. I hope we see some writing about this dude.
I usually start writing things immediately after getting an idea, but I imagined my current writefag some time ago. Even after making a proper outline for it, writing the story is much more difficult than usual. I can't seem to find the energy to see things through until the end.
>>88103323What's it for?
>>88103351Demon Eyes. I just gave up writing for the day halfway through a section, which I never do. It isn't writer's block so much as plain lethargy.
>>88103527Some of us are in the process of scrubbing out at locals.
Why is no one writing....
>>88103617I'm almost finishing my relationship chart for nart, it's not much but eh.
>>88103633Looking forward to it
>>88103617Writings been posted in this thread. There's been a stead flow all week.Why aren't YOU writing, huh?
>>88103681I never learned how to read or write
>>88103617I haven't slept since yesterday. No energy to write.
I wish writefaggeries were pngs like image builds, with the text next to pretty images that describe the scene
>>88103617I'm finishing off Kassandra's entry to Brockton Bay, I've got a motive and it's just a matter of getting it down.
>>88103722And I wish you're weren't a faggot but life just isn't fair.
>>88103617I have something in mind for Eyespy but like I said I'm pretty dry at the moment. I've pretty much been writing nonstop so I need a bit of a break.
>>88103739>images are faggot!!!!no
I wish that anons would post their writefags directly inside of the thread as it was done in the days of Erudita.
>>88103764No, I love making image builds and appreciate drawfags. You're just a faggot. Simple as.
>>88103783That was only Erudita though.
>>88103617NIGGA WE HAD THREE POSTED BACK TO BACK NOT 30 POSTS AGO
>>88103783No, you’re wrong to wish that.
>>88103783I wish you wished for better things.
>>88103764>images are faggot!!!!yes, exactly
>>88102113Good stuff anon. I've got something lined up that pertains to these two and a few others. Might release it later tonight.
>>88103617>>88102385>>88102160>>88102113Literally three back to back less than 700 global posts ago. Barely any (You)s for them though.
>>88102160Good work, I don't think anyone else actually wrote about their PC's Awakening.
>>88103783I used to do that, yielded to pastebin after it proved to be better for archiving. It's not like back in OR or earlier, where there was one writefag who wrote one story with a few builds. There's dozens to hundreds of stories now, and if they all had 4plebs links instead of pastebins, they'd be way harder to keep track of.
>>88103838Pre or Post escape. I'll be honest the lower stake pre-stuff is definitely easier for me.
Welcome to the Dark Zone!Rules:>The second Agent Bonus has been changed to "Choose any Major Threat as your nemesis, the main target of your assignments".>You may choose sapient Major Threats as an Affiliation.>A player can make a new version of any given Contact by changing their race (human, android, chimeric ) and affiliation (federation, oracle, syndicate, loner). The same template-race-faction combination is the same multiplayer character.>Ignore the Major Threats section except as a source of setting information, they have been permanently assigned to the same set of territories for all players.Was the custom companion rule a mistake? - https://strawpoll.com/polls/GeZAOGpw1nV
>>88103835Effortposting should be rewarded, Anon.Have you considered _you_ might be the faggot?
>>88103923It's post escape, but it's relatively low stakes. Arditi and Nikitai are mentioned in a conversation between some officers and the Major, who are talking about apprehending 8001
>>88103948Builds:>FederationFast Track (Pilot, Shoreline): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86128285/Maximillian Law (Pilot, Villages): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86139710/Ruby (Driver, Outposts): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86126902/>Oracle Inc.LRCS-IV (Vaulter, Mountains): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86131735/Mars (Pilot, Sprawl) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86139154/>SyndicateAlexa Zaslavski (Commander, Villages): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/88028509Des (Commander, Metro): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/88008838Lord Zagon Z (Commander, Metro): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86130819/Zhu (Commander, Sprawl): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86129234/"The Golden Dragon" Ma Dong-soo (Vaulter, Sprawl): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/88007016>LonerCleaner (Agent, Oil Slicks): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86130698/The Puppeteer (Vaulter, Villages): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86131745/John Spartan (Agent, Metro): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86144094/Eric O'Dell (Pilot, Level 4 Zone): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/88001459Simon Black (Pilot, Level 4 Zone): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/88003255Name omitted (Agent, Level 4 Zone): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86164518/Postman (Driver, Outposts): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86126947/Sasha (Agent, Outposts): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86137314/Indigo (Driver, Sprawl): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86130022/Genevieve Sauer (Agent, Sprawl): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86451682>ReaversThe Duke of Flies (Commander, Level 4 Zone): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86130986/Hierophant (Driver, Level 4 Zone): https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86132636/>RoguesJin Kyung-Sook (Vaulter, Shoreline) https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/post/86131300/
>>88103966Cards:The Duke of Flies: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/03/1664034532900.pngFast Track: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/05/1664057950124.jpgHierophant: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/02/1664026050563.pngLCRS-IV: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/03/1664031848532.pngPuppeteer: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/02/1664029661886.pngRuby: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/03/1664030878259.pngPostman: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/70/1664700537205.pngJin Card False: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/84/1664840192754.pngJin Card True: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1664/84/1664840266256.pngSimon Black: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1679/07/1679072400922.pngAlexa Zaslavski: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1679/07/1679075538468.pngTemplate: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1663/98/1663982826841.pngWritefagging:Escape from the Zone (John Spartan): https://controlc.com/fe091469Ivy Thoughts (LRCS-IV relation chart): https://pastebin.com/bT0DpjDrRuby Ride Along: https://pastebin.com/UqkpcXnhThe Evening Sermon (Hierophant Writing and Chart): https://controlc.com/905c706fvictory, pyre(rhic) (LCRS-IV): https://pastebin.com/72F2jdCfArt/Edits:Annual Fed Convention: https://desu-usergeneratedcontent.xyz/tg/image/1665/32/1665322869936.jpg
>>88103964Nice. I love the Project getting attention. Hopefully 'A Chance Encounter' gets a followup. Those two were cute.
>>88103789NTA, I like drawfags and builds with images attached, but I don't like image builds. Text in those doesn't scale as well and I'm an eyelet.
>>88104052I thought this would take me longer, but the editing process is making my eyes melt out of my skull so I'm gonna call it right here. Let me know if any of this needs to be reworked for anything you have in store.And hopefully I didn't forget to change or fix anything.>>88099458"The Major"Late AwakeningSuperior View of SelfThe Mentor (Col. Woods)Combat TrainingResponsibility 2Potential 1Type: Mutant27 bpts 6 gptsSuggestion M1, Defence M1 M2 M3 (-6 gpts)Peak Body M1, Metabolism M1, I4 (-3 bpts)Muscle Density M1, M2, I1 (-4 bpts)Fast Healing M1 (-2 bpts)Hyper Durability M1 (-3 bpts)Regeneration M1 (-4 bpts)Skin Resistance M1, I1 (-2 bpts)Skin Hardening M1 (-2 bpts)Skin Invuln M1 (-2 bpts)Kinetic Repulsion M1, I1 (-5 bpts)The Revelation: The TestDecision: StayLoyalty: PracticalRole: Currently Internal, but subject to change if deemed necessary.The Major has been personally responsible for dispatching a number of subjects deemed by himself or superiors to be 'failures'. With this in mind, it is unknown why the Major was so reluctant to pull the plug on Project A-0009420-M/ASS/S "No.Miss" before it successfully escaped. He is currently appointed to the head of recapture team for Project C-008001-M-APW/E, as well as the head of neutralization team for Project A-0009420-M/ASS/S. Other current duties include ops support for any other recapture or neutralization teams operating in the same area as the Major's personnel.Writefag: Delayed Briefing (Ft. The Major. Includes mention of 8001, Nikitai, Arditi, No.Miss)https://controlc.com/65700231[Power-wise, I know he's a bit simple. But I wanted a sort of 'terminator' vibe for this guy. He's not terribly strong compared to other mutants, but I think he is one of the most resistant, and can actively turn people's kinetic attacks against them which is pretty neat I think..]
>>88104442>Defence M1 M2 M3certified soulless
>>88104454Tfw Juggernaut is the OG pure physical chad and didn't buy defense to negate their weaknesses, Just litearlly the entire enhancement tree apparentlyEnhancement: Peak Body+MI1, Metabolism+MI234, Muscle Density+MMI, Fast Healing+M, Regeneration+M, Super Strength+M, Hyper Durability+MSkin Alteration: Skin Resistance+MI, Skin Hardening+M, Skin Invulnerability+M, Kinetic Repulsion+MI
>>88104471Enhancement and Skin alteration specifically anon, Are you blind?
>>88104471The only good Mutant build.
>>88104522Not even weak either. Invincible Skin + Hyper Durability both upgraded extensively. Then also Regen and Repulsion ontop of it incase they weren't unkillable enough already.Variety is overrated.
>>88104522What's your problem with the rest of them?
>>88104546They're either unoriginal fags who copied her build and didn't even do anything new with it, or soulless mega fags who did the same but took mental defenses/absorptions/fleshcrafting(which is not that strong but they will wank into oblivion) to try and ensure they had less weakness and could kill whoever they wanted with impunity.
>>88104571First three builds were all Mutants and neither Jejune nor Ghost are copies of her.
>>88104442"We were on the right track with No.Miss"No.Miss: LOL, LMAO
Need MHA....soon Tired....of ninjas and demons.
>>88102113> spoilerBased and objectively correct anon
>>88104614That part in particular is supposed to tell you that this guy isn't working with a full deck of cards here.
>>88103966Sorry to be a nag, but Simon Black (loner faction) is *still* listed as a pilot, instead of the agent he actually is.Pls fix next time!
>>88101580Nice, another Foundation Stay build!
>>88104644The state of the Stay Center clique is a fucking disaster. I love it.Oh god Tiger is actually going to be able to pull his soft coup bullshit with this line-up and it might be an improvement.
I'm honestly surprised that Farmhouse has taken off so nicely. I'd been puzzling over her introductory writefag on and off, so it's great to see that it's not needed.
>>88104752Write! WRITE!!! I COMPEL YOU TO WRITE ABOUT FARMHOUSE!!!
>>88104741All the stay Center builds are different flavours of mentally deranged.
>>88104752Sometimes the best builds are ones where you start out from a low point and let them grow from there.In the case of Farmhouse she's pretty rough but has a sizable and solid enough personality to really bounce off of with whatever other characters. She can be the butt of a joke, but can also rebound from it with ease.
>>88099714Finally finished the relationship chart of Itsumahime, here it is:https://controlc.com/68b393fb
>>88099699>>88104850Am stupid, linked the wrong one, sasuga sleepy me
>>88104777>>88104741I made a new one and even wrote for it, I'll be glad to see any responses IC to the newly declassified gal.>>88102385
>>88104442I definitely gel with him anon. Good shit. All these memos and write-ups are really solid. Which means I'll probably need to put one out after I finish the writefags and a relationship chart update. I also wouldn't mind getting some notes from the major about people so I can get his broader vibes premutiny. >>88102385We're definitely getting a full roster for the Centre. Hoefully the Institute and the Foundation will recieve some love with the broader setting being built up.Also cute.
>>88104850Nice job anon
So, for the Facility CYOA anons, is it sort of accepted there’s only one center, institute, and foundation? Or multiple of each type across the USA? Wouldn’t that mean there’s likely less than 1000 superhumans even in play? Drop of water in the ocean of 8 billion humans.
>>88104940I imagine other parts of the world have their own facilities for dealing with powered kids. The Center, Institute and Foundation probably just focus on the US (plus maybe Canada).Europe probably has its own set of facilities. Maybe more than three. China too. Former Soviet Union. Competing facilities scattered throughout the Mid-East. Africa is probably a clusterfuck with no facilities and powered kids free to roam, same as it always was.
>>88104940Our MP is mainly focused on this one state but even if it's the 'only 1 of each' thing we don't know how long superhumans have been in play. Could be we're basically just the kksecond generation and the second wave will be larger.
>>88104975>Our MP is mainly focused on this one state but even if it's the 'only 1 of each' thing we don't know how long superhumans have been in play.The scrolls give an idea.
>>88104940I imagine the three Facilities are each doing their own thing with some outposts, but because we've sorta shuffled this in the US there are other groups all over the place. Probably some also in the US, but the trio of 'Facilities' just so happen to be the most aggressive.>>88104959>Kisimbe Katonga gets to be a cool witch-lord and will rise to be a regional strongman involved in national politics>John Texas gets shipped off to a sterile building where they steel his nut for genetic experimentsWhat a horrible day to be a burger
>>88104983>>Kisimbe Katonga gets to be a cool witch-lord and will rise to be a regional strongman involved in national politicsThis unironically sounds fun. Fuck the facilities for depriving us of Espers involved in politics
>>88104983> Sergei Kalashnikov from northern Kazakhstan gets conscripted by Putin to blow heads up in Ukraine> Yulia Pilzudski gets conscripted by Ursula von der Leyen to move shit with her mind in Ukraine> Li Chang is inducted into President Xi's secret breeding programme and given his pick of cute Chinese girlsKino.
Definitely want to read a writefag of one or a few Facility builds taking on The Inquisitors
>>88102160Short and sweet. Good work anon. I enjoy that the reaper has been bribed with sweets (even if she wasn't going to do anything).>>88104850Good stuff. I enjoy how Hiro has become the source of all evil, or at least a lot of evil. Clearly Itsumahime and Homura will have to meet some time.
>>88104983>Kisimbe Katonga gets to be a cool witch-lord and will rise to be a regional strongman involved in national politicsgod I miss SNAFU
>>88101617> Power Source: PsykerPsionic?
>>88105294No, she draws from the Warp.
>>88099699Made a custom power for my Naruto build, and I'm unsure what would be the best way to format the explanation of it.
>>88104850Homura isn't an Uzumaki, she's a hired bodyguard. Her original home was with the samurai.
>>88105308Actually this makes want to ask. Anons how would your build fair in Warhammer 40k? Also fantasy if you want to answer.
>>88105385She was adopted tho
>>88105385Pretty sure she was brought into the clan too. Or does she need to actually marry in? Quick someone make an Uzumaki husbando for Homura to be engaged with.
>>88105390I'm sure for most builds the answer is something along the lines of, "It would take just slightly longer for my build to be vaporized in a hail of lasgun fire than the average person in the setting."
>>88105390>didn't take perfect mental defensesDead. Just dead.
>>88105089>I enjoy how Hiro has become the source of all evil, or at least a lot of evilIt was more or less inevitable, all other akatsuki are misguided children + Kamon who is the mystery member nobody knows anything about, meanwhile Hiro-kun is a hivemind who lost its humanity in name of peace who wants to enslave the living and dead for its insane goal, he just so happens to be everything wrong with the Akatsuki. So come to think of it, the Akatsuki is a daycare with a monster and some guy taking care of the children >Clearly Itsumahime and Homura will have to meet some time.Of course! She is also a perfectly sane medical nin, so that's someone who could be invited for homuhomu's perfect cooking class
>>88105419>Or does she need to actually marry in?I believe that was the case, she was supposed to marry someone but that was put on hold because they didn't have a fitting husbando
Uchiha got the milfs but Uzumaki got the cunny
>>88105540>Uzumaki got the cunnyKimiko isn't cute and funny, meanwhile Homura is simply flat for now, she'll grow up more in the future
>>88105524>all other akatsuki are misguided childrenMakes sense. Speaking of misguided Akatsuki children, what clan does Yukiko even want revenge on? Has that been clarified yet? I only remember that they use fire justu.>homuhomu's perfect cooking class>"Itsumahime, try adding a little more salt. Also stop adding poison to the pot. Yes, I know it won't kill you and you enjoy the flavor, but please stop doing it.">>88105537Correct. I don't have the slightest clue on writing romance, and I don't think I have thick enough skin to try, so I glossed over that detail and moved on.
>>88105626Point in case.
>>88099458>Duma Abbas>Codename: Auditor >Early Awakening >Superiority >The Foundation >Studies, The Mentor [ Headmaster ]>Stats:Control 1 Discretion 1 Responsiblity 2>Type: Psionic>PrecognitionInsight M1Probability Detection M1 Foresight M1, M2, M3 >Summoning Shadow Servant M1 (20)Dark Clone M1 (17)Sentient Double M1 (12)>Reality Warping Quantic Double M1, I1 (6)Incertainty M1 (0)>The Scrolls >Stay>Loyalty: Devoted >Role: Field Agent Duma had always been different. For years he felt aimless, empty. Even amongst his supposed fellows at the Foundation, he felt too different to properly interact with any of them. When the Foundation's Headmaster took him in for a "tutoring session", Duma understood what he really was. Something beyond Humanity and it's petty needs. These lessons continued, and Duma understood more and more. When the other subjects broke out, causing panic among the Foundation's staff, Duma set to work. One Duma sat patiently in his room, and the other entered the Headmaster's office and discovered the Truth. Now he understands why they were there, the grand purpose of the Foundation. When staff found him, he was sitting on his bed, unblinking. The Headmaster knew what Duma had done, and knew that he could not be put to waste. Sending him out alongside squads of the Foundation's most trustworthy operatives, Duma serves as a loyal dog to retrieve any paranormal humans for an esoteric plan. He knows the truth. When the portal opens, all of mankind will know what lurks in realms unseen, and Duma might finally feel at home.
>>88104850Shino isn't a member of the Akatsuki so much as being manipulated by them, just a note.
>>88105649The mad lad actually did it, The clone build.
> Two Foundation Stay builds.I may have been too hasty in having Barbara leave.
>>88105696Do you think they can successfully recapture her?
>>88105696Just write her gaslighting the Foundation staff into believing she never left and it was all a weird dream.
>>88105700If Bob doesn't want to go back, they're not going back. He doesn't need her consent to assume full control.>>88105710I like the idea of Barbara coming and going as she pleases, though. Dropping back in for breakfast and waltzing back out.
>>88105700Centre chads can capture her for sure.
Considering everyone broke out at the same time why not have the three work together to recapture the missing muties? Its in all of their best interest afterall to combine forces.
>>88105627>what clan does Yukiko even want revenge on? Has that been clarified yet?I don't think that has been decided yet. Hmn, at least for a rival it does seem like Homura and Yukiko might have some potential (excluding the experience difference), Homura is fire and full monke low int, Yukiko is made out of glass(ice)and a genjutsu enjoyer. Problem is that even with a similar experience they can't really fight, in a mano a mano Homura is going to win, meanwhile Homuhomu doesn't have the beeg brains to escape a genjutsu. Oh yeah, since we are on this topic, did Homura get a rival so far?>Yes, I know it won't kill you and you enjoy the flavor, but please stop doing it."You're not thinking about it enough, she can be the perfect taste tester for any type of medicine, she would be able to check the fine line between "dangerous medicine" and "you just die"! Of course she does have access to a wider variety of spices that unfortunately kill normal people, but that's beside the pointJokes aside, unless she was cooking for someone she knows would be able to stand a poison dish she'd actually properly cook it, medical precision + poison experience after all.>I don't have the slightest clue on writing romanceFair, but it would be pretty entertaining to see Homura and her fiancee in that "what the hell am i supposed to be doing" stage of a romcom and failing miserably at normal couple stuff.
>>88105747Now i must sleep
>>88104454Didn't make sense to me to have him be in charge of subjects at the center if he could just... be mind controlled by them. I also wanted him to be a threat that everyone could conceivably have trouble with. At the end of the day, I'm pretty sure you can just drop him in a really large hole and he would eventually die. That or drown him in concrete.>>88104741Glad you liked it. That reminds me that I forgot to tag Tiger as being mentioned in the writefag as well. Oops.>>88104894I'm glad you liked it as well. I think my brain is fried at this hour, but I'm not sure what you mean by "getting some notes from the major about people".
Someone else post JRPG for me next thread im going to bed and would love to wake up with someone for my light gal to interact with
>>88105747>meanwhile Homuhomu doesn't have the beeg brains to escape a genjutsu.It was temperature based right? I wonder if Homura's fire style chakra cloak would be a valid defense. Regardless, the experience gap is an issue.>Oh yeah, since we are on this topic, did Homura get a rival so far?Nope. Slot's still open.>cooking for someone she knows would be able to stand a poison dish she'd actually properly cook it...Unless she was in the mood to 'save' whoever she was cooking for anwyay.>it would be pretty entertaining to see Homura and her fiancee ... failing miserably at normal couple stuff.You not wrong. It'd be pretty cute.>>88105752Sweet dreams. Don't let the Mari bite. You won't even get cool vampire powers out of the deal.
>>88105745In the short term, but all three have conflicting goals in the long termCenter: Uphold current illuminatiFoundation: Revive some fucked up ancient evil(?)Institute: Bring themselves to power by figuring out how to make themselves superpowered individuals, I think? Something like that. Not sure.
>>88105747>meanwhile Homuhomu doesn't have the beeg brains to escape a genjutsu.Not a narutard, but being smart let's you escape genjutsus? Didn't know that.
>didnt get invited to the mcyoag sleepover
>>88105875It'd doesn't 'let you' escape per se. Being smart means you can figure out the kind of genjutsu being used on you easier and quickly development countermeasures. Meaning it helps you avoid getting stuck in the genjutsu in the first place. If you do get trapped in a genjutsu, a genius would be as screwed as everyone else.
>>88106344I mean, you'd also be able to figure you're in one which is pretty useful for escaping most.
>>88106354True enough, but honestly is seems like by the time you realize and break out, your opponent is going to body you somehow. Even if you're only standing still for a few seconds, it's enough to assassinate you mid combat.
>>88106379Nah as seen in the series Genjutsu user's get hit by the autojob effect once they trap a protagonist and need to wait for them to break out.
>>88105540Neither clan fits those descriptions
>>88104850>is also a bit disappointed in Harema, he helped his master become a martyr in his noble sacrifice, that's a reason to be proudJust in case, the details of Harema's part in previous Senju leader's death aren't widely known. No witnesses were left alive besides Harema himself and he only informed the clan elders. It wasn't spread further as it's a bad PR.
>>88106611>>88106611>>88106611Hog Senpais, roll out!
>>88099783I'm very sorry