Archives & Other Resources: https://pastebin.com/wETipqYwAllSync: https://cyoaarchive.com/mainPrevious Thread: >>87476106TQ: Do you like lots of empty space (like Italics), or like text and images cramped tightly together (like DSA)?
>>87496400It was too complex for smolbrain cyoa fans from cyoag.For me as well. I got stuck in the middle of the gardener girl calculations for optimal gardening.
>>87496052Neither.Images CYOAs should use space and images to deliberately the readers attention and make the information easy to digest.CYOAs that just leave empty space everywhere or mindlessly pack images together are both different kinds of lazy.
I am once again asking for the status of the world conquerer OC in progress influenced by the Viltrumites
>>87496574redditmites, reddit show. go back
>>87496689"I don't even try at balance" the cyoa
>>87496689>Naga>Enhanced Intelligence>Illusion Magic>Portal to a Fantasy WorldHowever I would swap one of those out for Animal Companion if I could instead use it to upgrade my cat because he's a good buddy who deserves it.
>>87496743>Naga>No appearance changeUgliest naga in existence
No one cares.
>>87496689>the partner option says "whom you are compatible with">implicitly meaning of the opposite sex>Kitsune are always femaleWould this just give you a normal fox?
>>87496574conqueror of the universe by ordion? still being worked on as far as i know
>>87496918>implicitly meaning of the opposite sexidiocy
>>87496932Fine, preferred sex. Now suppose that the kitsune (You) is a heterosexual.
>>87496948Okay. So I like women. I become a kitsune girl. I get given a waifu of the preferred sex...which is female. So I get a female kitsune. What's your point.
>>87496655Fuck you I read the comic years before the show and it ended like shit, was aimless, and it somehow got popular while wolf-man died an ignoble death. I just think the concept is good for a fun CYOa
>>87496689>air elementalI need to keep eating air to survive, whatever will I do?? Not swim or go to outer space, I guess?>portal>enhanced intelligence>illusion magicI will keep living as I do, do jobs over the internet so nobody's bothered by my unnatural appearance.And if/when the world truly goes to shit, boot off to the fantasy world. Using illusion magic I'll try appearing as a normal human when talking to strangers.
>>87496987The cartoon is better than the comic desu
>>87496987>while wolf-man died an ignoble deathI dont know if I'm alone in this, but I always liked Battlebeasts early appearance in the comic, just showing up as a regular hired villain who turns out to be way above everyone else on the scene, trashing a bunch of heroes and leaving because its boringMade me feel like it was a big setting where powerful players existed outside of what we'd seen
>>87497031Wolf-Man was another hero in the setting but I am with you on Battle Beast. He’s a cool guy with a great death but they made him too important in the end. I agree, I liked how he made the world seem bigger and not a solved system like most cape stuff.
>>87497028Listen I can get that opinion, the voice actors are great for the most part and good music choices. I just feel the changes they have made are not necessarily better for the story, but I can’t deny it adds drama. This next season as Mark gets out of his dads shadow and is on his own will shape if it’s better or not
>>87497109The voice actor of the old teleporting CIA guy sounded hillariously off to me
>>87497095>Wolf-Man was another hero in the settingoh yeah, you're right about that, I forgot him
>>87497109>I just feel the changes they have made are not necessarily better for the story, but I can’t deny it adds dramaI think moving up Omniman offing the rest of the team to the start of the show was good to add some mystery and suspense. They somehow made Amber 100% worse and she already wasn't great.
>>87497217What do you mean? Amber was cool.
I'm glad that magic isn't real. I love living in a universe where programming errors can't displace my organs.
>>87497294>Patient with cancer is brought to magic hospital>Magical programming error interprets the cancer as https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cancer_(genus)>The crab is promptly removed from the body by surgeryWhat are you complaining about
>>87497202No worries most people did
>>87497138Yeah he didn’t quite pull off what I had imagined for the man running the world
>>87497217Yeah then moving up of the killing, making him lose a bit there to make it more of a mystery, making not Hellboy not a joke, and all that was great.But some of the characterization of Amber was weird, and the final fight made Omniman more cruel and less indifferent with the killing which doesn’t gel well with how things are supposed to go later
>>87497294they just steal themseriously, don't give the hospital your organs, they'll displave it and sell it for profit
>>87497294Programming errors can already fuck you over though.
MGI V7 DOKO?
Hello, this cyoa started as a DLC of the Isekai Yog-Sothoth version 2.0 for the world of "Gargutawaria" but I decided to make it a separate Cyoa.In any case, you can play it normally or in god mode with the powers of the Isekai Yog-Sothoth version 2.0.Awakening in the Future Cyoa:
>>87497973Hell yeah dude! Love your stuff
>>87498033I’ll be honest and not to criticize a CYOA with Isekai in the name, but I miss the option of just being on Earth, it’s more fun to change the world with supernatural stuff than just going to one with it all premade
>>87496918I got one better.>Kitsune race(race is female and you change to female>change sex boon(change to male)
>>87498290You will just get vaporized.
>>87498016Could you post the rest?
>>87497973Nice>Reincarnationthe dream is still alive>Silicon BeingI think underwater races are cool, but I also think underwater is spooky, so I'll go for the nanomachine option.How many quests/rewards/companions do we pick? Who knows. I'll pick one of each.>Reactor ProblemsSeems like a safe job for me and it'd be nice to be pals with the moles.>GECKWould hold onto this for a while but sooner or later would make for a good way to start on a proper home>Kateis cute
>>87497973>cryogenicsnot reading the rest, kill yourself and then go read a dictionary
>>87498299That makes no sense, I never asked for a race not on the list. I used the provided information and options to get a different outcome, not my fault the wizard didn’t account for that.
>>87498528Not wizard's problem that you are stupid. Ask stupiod questions, get stupid answers, you know.
>>87496469>mindlessly pack images togethermindless how, what's your example of that? Is The Village mindlessly packed together?I don't remember ever reading a cyoa and thinking "this is too mindlessly packed together".
>>87498571>first post itt is thisfor what purpose?
>>87498605Did Anon stutter?
>>87498605It's gil, he's feeling lonely.
>>87498317Seconded, I can’t find version 1.0 in the all sync, much less this 2.0
>>87496409I like complex cyoas.This author just sucks big assholes at making fun cyoas. He’s comparable to that tranny author on reddit, you just know what you’re gonna get before even starting...boring poo poo garbage that does not satisfy the need for tummy feels whatsoever.
>>87498722Name complex fun cyoas.
>>87498722I also enjoy complex but fun cyoas. A LIfe Chronicle and JRPG Trator were most pleasant.
>>87498744time of troubles
>>87498016*The first version had synergy, we lost it.*Version 2 had threats, flaws, a good Power list, worlds you could go to and complete quests, the ability to go to ANY world you wanted to go to at the start. And this is what we have lost.*We even had a DLS that expanded information about the setting, the items you could get, and the companions/waifu you could have. We have lost it too.*Third version has only shit initial freebies, three Powers (many are just a combination of two previous Powers) and one world to choose from.Good work author, I will always remember you. You and your cyoa will stand in line with Ultimate God Redux, Naruto (by Apotheosis), Xenon and Indulgence as an example of how an update can make cyoa much worse.
>>87498908Don't forget Italics and Lamentations.>>87498925Suck my taint.
How do you guys feel about Xenoblade?
>>87498929Lamentations update made it better you contrarian.
>>87499233>Took away a threat>Made it too open-endedDefine better.
>>87499233>no nightmares>no moonbots>no directorate>no end of the world
>>87499246>Took away a threatAnd added in multiple new ones that are better.>>87499253>no nightmareSee above.>no moonbotsRetarded idea and he already made a robot cyoa.>no directorateGood. They were niggers anyways.>no end of the worldNew threats are better.
>>87499385>And added in multiple new ones that are better.>New threats are better.Lol, lmao.>Retarded idea and he already made a robot cyoa.Agree to disagree.>Good. They were niggers anyways.Agreed, but a revivalist faction would've been nice.
>>87498908naruto was better after the update though?
>>87499385>And added in multiple new ones that are better.Explain to be how they're better.
>>87499397>>87499434Enigmas are cool superbosses instead of generic enemies that can be tied to the lore like the one that is making fog and the White One. All we need now is to tie them further to the sleeping gods.
>>87499585So you admit the "updated" edition appeared rushed and unfinished?
>>87499585Not them, but aren't the Enigmas exclusive to some zones? I'm not sure it's "better" if you're forced to seek the confrontation.
>>87498016Well if the rest is not going to be posted I am just going to have to link bad reddit OC: https://imgchest.com/p/qb4zj6klyjm
>>87499585The enigmas kinda feel there and not much else desu
>>87499631>>87499664All bosses are zone exclusive. The End of the World was located in one far off location you had to seek out. The Enigma are big threats for whatever land you kive in or explore and must be dealt with.
>>87491894I picked Julie the Slime last time.Going through it again, I'd also pick Julie this time, but let's pretend she isn't there.Then Heather the Cheshire Cat.
>>87499678I get that, but I counted three or four Enigmas. Some regions just don't have them.
>>87499427Yes, except that Apotheosis added a crappy ability to choose your starting rank (seriously, this is a bullshit, everyone will choose Z Rank, no one wants to be D Rank, because the rank of threats in the world does not change which Rank you choose) and his most shitty, disgusting, vile and meanest act ever. Completely ignoring the Companions pages, this fucking fat freak just pretends that everything is fine even though it's not, you can't say "oh, Companions are fine, just use them from the previous version, although there are direct links to them in the text itself, but the pages I don't and even I won't post them when I post cyoa". He has the same problem in Monstergirl Fantasy Isekai, only there is a problem with the Bestiary, which is NEVER published ANYWHERE, but it is still in the text and has not been updated for a million years. I even doubt that those who played this cyoa know about the existence of the Bestiary and that it remains canon.
>>87499813>added a crappy ability to choose your starting rank (seriously, this is a bullshit, everyone will choose Z Rank, no one wants to be D Rank, because the rank of threats in the world does not change which Rank you choose)Except most people in the mcyoag, at least, didn't choose Z rank. They were mainly C-A. But besides that, Bigger Fish makes it so that ranks really do matter.
>>87498908I am a noob in making cyoa, I thought that simpler and smaller was better than making 60 powers with 5 levels each and a point system to buy them (besides being much more work)I advance version 3Yog Sothoth cyoa ver 3:Choose one:ImmortalityShoot Nukesportal to any worldEndIf there are no missions or companions in version 2, it is because I was thinking of doing specific missions for each world.
>>87498908>>87499756get fucked retard lmao
While you guys are ibsessed with Enigmas. I just want more lore about Lamentations world and Comrade races. I want to know more about whay the bird people do in their city and how are their relations with humans living there? Do the bird and humans do the same culture things? Do they have sex?. How do you live on the coastline with pirates and fish people? What is life like in the mafia city? How do Comrades treat each other and do thry have racism? Do sexoo cats have sex with human men? What movies do they watch? Do they have pornography? The CYOA is so big and diverse, but we only get a piecemeal?
>>87499891>Do they have sex?>Do sexoo cats have sex with human men?>Do they have pornography?Go play Harahel or something.
>>87499813I just want MGI v7 ffs
>>87499830The story itself matters. No matter what rank you have, the fun party of Otsusuki will come into the world to destroy it and distribute OP abilities to their servants. And I have a little doubt that a C-A player would be good against the OP bullshit powers that Chad Otsusuki has.
>>87499910eight gates shadow clones shit on half of the alien nigs
>>87499910>OtsusukiTbf they only show up after Shippuden. So unless you picked literally anything beyond that, you've got more than enough time to get strong enough to reach ninja god level. Or at least fuck off to another continent.
>>87499891because i want something to fight
>>87499766Unfortunately you are going to have to update this one as well now that the powers are switched up
Where can I upload the cyoa so I don't have to search and post 6 times?
>>87499940The gates of death are shitting on them and on you, because it is doubtful that you will be able to survive after this if you do not use insane move combos (like edo tensei). In addition, shadow clones disintegrate from one sneeze, it is foolish to think that they will not disappear anywhere from this body-searing technique.
>>87499940Or just get EMS and literally any 2 flavors of busted eye hax you want.
>>87499989This is getting too confusing, I thought I could dedicate myself to other cyoa I had in mind, but I could do a third version of this with more but more specific powers and a point system.I had thought about one of insect powers and another from the world of angels but I will have to postpone them.
>>87500001you can pay 7 points to upgrade any hidden jutsu to the level of it's greatest wielders, that and deep reserves will make them last a few seconds after a lethal wound, and you can go beyond that with any combinación of taijutsu or body enhancing perks, like prodigious, skilled, talented, tough or enhanced body, and it's possible that the regeneration kekkei genkai might be able to keep you from dying on the eight gate, i would bring up one's own life reincarnation, fury and reaper death deal with shadow clones but those don't work on the otsotsuki, still way too op for anyone with two digit iqor just get perfect sage mode and dark element dust, senjutsu also dabs on alien nigs
>>87499950If you are a stupid, spineless, insignificant amoeba, then no matter how many centuries pass, you will not become a ninja god (Zetsu himself did not become the new Madara, after all). Skills don't just come with time, and considering what kind of anime it is, you have to have SOMETHING that will give you power. Madara OP is not because he is so cool on his own, he is the incarnation of Indra, the same with the main characters. They all got their power from some source. The world of Naruto is not a world of cultivation.The problem with Ōtsusuki is not solved by such a move, because when they destroy the world, it doesn't matter what continent you hide on.
>>87499902I'm asking legitimate questions. They canonically have films and WW1 tier cabaret clubs. So it makes sense to ask serious questions.
>>87500086Because "do sexxo cats have sex with human men" sounds like a legitimate question?
>>87500067>If you are a stupid, spineless, insignificant amoebaSounds like a (You) problem. Remember that stealing bloodlines is a thing.>when they destroy the worldThat's just a "What-If" scenario for if you somehow got the main characters killed or fucked with their moral compass. You and I both know Kishimoto will make it so Boruto and his ilk will become as strong or even stronger than the ayy lmaos.
>>87500064Okay, I'll pretend that this really will work. Now the question is, how much chakra exactly will be required to maintain the shadow clones and the gates of death themselves? All clones share the same chakra pool as the owner of the vehicle.And one more thing, I think you're forgetting one fact. Naruto is not such a great example of technology, he could spam shadow clones because he had an ocean of chakra because of the Juubi. The greatest users of this technique only had two shadow clones.
>>87500158>and the gates of death themselvesnone, those do the generating.
>>87500158fortunately there's also the option to be a pseudo-jinchuriki with the 35-point chakra beast which also nets you 70 of new abilities, as long as it let's you use them or you have a sharingan or something
>>87500131>Sounds like a (You) problem. Remember that stealing bloodlines is a thing.And not the cheapest thing, if through the cyoa itself, and if through "fun" experiments, then not the most reliable, besides, Kekkei Genkai's by themselves are not something that can be used effectively against Otsusuki.>You and I both know Kishimoto will make it so Boruto and his ilk will become as strong or even stronger than the ayy lmaosCringe. Let's start with the fact that the player himself can accidentally do a bullshit, which can break the plot, for example, Boruto should get the standard anime Upgrades in battle, but the player intervenes and saves everyone. In addition, the story itself is already written, that is, if you come and intervene, do not expect Boruto to be the way Kishimoto intended him for the finale. Plus, when departing from the plot, Boruto and his team will obviously lose their plot armor, and for example, I doubt that a creature like Boruto can survive without it (he really sometimes behaves like a suicide).
>>87500115If you have two or more races in existence. You have to ask the question of reproduction.
Counterpoint: everyone this deeply invested in Naruto lore has been wasting his life like holy fuck
Just take gates + jashin. Who cares if it kills you when youre immortal? Now enjoy your infinite chakra and immortality.
niggas really did forget about senjutsu chakra huh
>>87500239>>87500221Okay, let's completely discard the clone version. The death gate generates a red aura, which is the user's blood due to the heat of the body. And so the question is, shadow clones, will they be able to withstand SUCH loads?>>87500239It is doubtful that such a chakra-beast would be equal in strength to the Juubi. I want to remind you that he is a 9-tailed and is second in strength only to a Ten-tailed one. It's doubtful that a nameless chakra beast would have as much chakra as a Juubi (yes, even considering it was half as strong).
Whenever I read a CYOA if there is an evil heroine or villainess I always focus on them. Am I the only one like this? Do you like evil women? What kind of evil women? What draws you to them? How evil exactly?
>>87500334But we already know the answer to those questions. It's in the lore PDF.
>>87500444>will they be able to withstand SUCH loads?probably not for long, unless their durability scales with yours and you do some other bullshit. but you can just keep shitting them out
>>87500449fuck off gil
>>87500415Well, not everyone enjoys being grilled chicken. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
>>87500449i don't really care about characters in cyoas past what reading about them tells me about the world
>>87499936cool cyoa broliked the bit with the missions
>>87500444we never saw an eight gates user utilize the shadow clone technique, but even limiting them to two or three, or even just one with half of your chakra, is enough to shit on just about any normal ninja and fight a rinnegan user to a standstill
Did The Night Train CYOA ever get an update?
>>87500432I do not understand what this chakra excites you. There is nothing remarkable in it, it just gives an average boost to all indicators, in return you have to stand and masturbate on the battlefield.
>>87500508I do not deny the effectiveness of this OP mode. He makes it clear that you will become equal in strength to Otsusuki (Madara + Bijuu > Five Kage; Momoshiki > Five Kage; Gai > Madara + Bijuu; Gai >/= Momoshiki). I only question the use of shadow clones for this purpose.
>>87500449>Am I the only one like this?Dumb question. You could ask, "Am I the only one to like two-headed quadruple amputee bee-girls who want to drown the world in their honey?" and this being 4chan, the answer would still be no.>Do you like evil women?I don't pick them as waifus, at least in self-inserty builds, but I like them present. Perhaps a better approach would be the opposite - if you have villains, why not also make them cute anime girls? In a realistic setting you wouldn't, but in the typical cyoa setting, it's clearly preferrable.>What kind of evil women? What draws you to them? How evil exactly?Any kind. If they have enough presence throughout the cyoa and enough hooks to the rest of the setting and characters, they'll be fine.But if they are to be sympathetic, then they could have specific enough motives that conflict with each others', so you have an "enemy of my enemy" kind of thing going on with them. This can make even the worst scum likeable.
>>87500490oh boo hoo, it hurts a bit. Who cares? Youre not going to die like Guy did because you have Jashin/EGF so whats the big deal? Hell, if you take the "I gain chakra from my pain" village (there was one right?) then you get even MORE chakra
aren't you supposed to be in mcyoag
>>87500455What lore pdf? Post proof
>>87500607well, you WILL die if you use it normally, by using a shadow clone you can still destroy anyone on hand-to-hand combat, while still not dying due to the strain, naruto's shadow clones could withstand lethal blows by the end of SD, and if that it's due to chakra or skill, both of those are obtainable from the get-go
>>87500636It's funny to hear this from someone who can cry and/or fall over because they hit their pinky on the nightstand. I think you're obviously going to need a few tricks to lessen the pain somehow. Brother, you are not a ninja, even if you get into his body, your mind is still a pampered little amoeba.>I gain chakra from my pain" village (there was one right?)I don't have one. But there is one that gives because of emotions, when you burn alive, you will obviously develop them well.
Its amazing how deeply cringe i was four years ago, just posting this cause the mental damage and embarrassment i have to suffer each time i open up this thread is unbearable, but i cant bring myself to delete it w/o posting since past me worked so very hard at being an absolute retard, was gonna be a lot longer, w like 7 guys more, but i cant even look at it now, so don't ask me to fill it in, oc btw
I am going to kms
>>87500115Do the cats sexoo though?
>>87500810>Anon wants to kill himself>as his last act to inflict his pain on others, he makes a CYOA with dark red text on dark blue backgroundI respect that
>>87500794>35% of all marriages are between Human and Comrades.That is a very big percentage of marriages. Just to put it into perspective that is nearly double the amount of interracial marriages in real life.While I'm at it that PDF doesn't talk about the individual cultures and lifestyles of the cities or any of the factions.
>>87500888Can't you infer that from the descriptions of the zones and what races lives there?
Lamentations would be better as an actual RPG, table-top or video game. Or if it's kept as a CYOA it needs to have a limited spin-off set in the same universe. Italics is such a fucking coward. He doesn't want to do anything with Magi Bloodlines.l even though its supppse to be this big magnum opus of lore and setting and characters with a specialized magic system. He doesn't want to do anything like ZBG and make Echoes as VN.
>>87500728Your pain tolerance is neurological, it should likely change with your new body, bro.
>>87500925But that doesn't give me the actual characters running the cities and factions and what their plans are.
>>87500995Because that's not the focus and you're free to fill it with whatever you like. Most cyoas have those blanks. I don't understand what you expected from Lamentations.
>>87501023A good cyoa.
>>87501028Cyoas that explain every little part of the world don't sound very fun to play.
>>87501046A good cyoa would allow the player to reasonably extrapolate the environs of the sociocultural system present.
>>87501023>>87501046Lamentation is a world made by Italics who uses lore to paint the environment for us to explore in his CYOAs usually. He did not go far enough when giving us tools and instead left too big of a sandbox for no reason in Lamentations. We NEED a reason to explore. We NEED a story. We NEED bosses.We NEED a reason to care about the factions and join them. We NEED to know more about the culture to participate in it.
>>87501151we already have enignmas bro
>>87501151Just read the next 39 pages of some tramp's biography if you want more setting info from italics.
>>87497973Is the brain hugger itself unaging, as long as its hops hosts?Do I also degenerate "into the wildest madness" if I reincarnate as a silicon being?
>>87497973Nice work>How did you get to the FutureAlien Abductionthis is going to cause some problems early on but Telekinesis that strong is really good>QuestThe EmperorI walk up and chat with him to figure out how he calmed them down then murder him once I get what I need or when he won't give it upThe fall of the space stationshouldn't take too longReactor problemsIf this goes wrong the world dies so fixing this is top of my to-do listRewardsSkills Injector, time to remake everythingHideauze suit, I'm not taking it off and will make a suit to keep me from drying out>CompanionsStellawell I'm not hiding who I am and they are willing to tradePikacthulhuA helping healer who only needs a bit of my blood is greatOneillI will help him and force him to stop taking over random Loli's and with the two of us together we will make a Body making machine to stop him from taking people's bodiesTogether with my powers and companions I will remake the world into a Utopia then to the stars we shall go
Lamentation rpg when?
>>87498568>Gothic Parish>Mediterranean>Desert>Marshland>Volcano>Rivers>Waterfalls>Mobile House>Far Outskirts>Yellowed Book>Rusty Dagger>Pale Ring>Fur Mantle>The High Walls>Archivist>Farmer>Shepherd>Guardsman>Floating Islands>Primeval Forest>Siren Overlook>The Old Castle>Nostalgic Chief>Christmas Cake>The Old Guard>Wandering God>Decay City Ruins
>>87500796>>87500810GAAAAAAAYBut seriously we need more femboi/catboi cyoa for reasons that are completely heterosexual
god loves fags
>>87502398>>>/trash/53962106 is the thread you are looking for, Anon
>>87502530Don’t be a homophobic bigot
>>87502398back to discord now
god i love fags
Are there any Gnostic CYOAs?So CYOAs where I obtain occult knowledge to flex on the demiurge?
>>87496118So Aria's good end how do you get it? And what is it?
>>87502702> he thinks the universe cares about le human imaginationFucking idiot. God isn’t some lion headed snake.
>>87502743Not really, I just think gnostic lore is ki'd of cool.
>>87502764Then you are now on a simulation entertaining this silly human make belief. I doubt space goes further than the hemisphere LOL.
>>87498689I haven't had a chance to update the allsync this month so that's why it's not there. Also who made it? It's unsigned as usual.
>>87502724There's a secret page. It requires a bit of effort to find it.You can't find it here but you can find it on:https://stellinearized.github.io/cityscapeskirmish
>>87502867(and it's not related to the bonus/multiplayer page)
>>87502828>tfw my penis is smaller than 3 inches so the 2nd option would be a buffcyoas for this feel?
>>87502867Ok, I'm retarded, did anyone solve it and take a picture?
>>87502953Yeah, but it might ruin your sense of achievement. Are you sure?
>>87502969Yes. Please tell me what the secret page says.
>>87502990You find who is pulling the strings and get to fight them for real. I'd say it's the "true end" but every closure is worthwhile in my opinion.
What’s wrong with gay
>>87503036Who is pulling the strings?
I've restarted my WiP from scratch
Fuck your wip
>>87495758I'm the anon you're replying to but NTA who said fuck you. I misspoke. I meant lewds as in lewd pictures of companions and flirty romance, not full-blown ERP or anything like that>>87495835Use your imagination or your ability to empathize with others emotionally or your ability to understand others logically. Any of the 3 will give you multiple reasons as to whyThat never fails to amaze me, the extraordinarily limited scope of other people's minds, especially the ones who ask rhetorical questions like "Why the fuck would xyz"
>>87498908DLC YOU RETAD
>>87503061I think you're trying to pull my leg, buddy.
>>87499678The End of the World had global consequences though.
>>87503052Go on the site Anon linked you earlier and replace "cityscapeskirmish" by who you think is the culprit.Guessing wrong lead to funny quotes so you should try everyone.
>>87503107To be fair, I'm not sure being the companion to the Phoenix King is a good idea. The first was benevolent, but the second spent her life hiding and the third went full "WITNESS" on the setting. Do we know if the previous vessels were our past lives or differents people?
Any CYOA where I can get a girl with pearls in her hair?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nx4UDTmqIqM
>>87503107post an example of an image you would like to see
>>87503446Where do I replace "cityscapeskirmish"?
>>87503446Nvm I figured it out Levi!
>>87502398>Saying femboi instead of trapgay
>>87503925>he doesn't know the difference between femboys and trapsngmi
>>87503964Miss me with that nonsense. A boy that looks like a girl is a trap and that's all there is to it
>>87504012And a feminine boy that doesn't look like a girl is a femboy. Glad we agree.
I am once again asking for a cyoa for this feel
>>87504251Mine but she will be a loli.
>>87504251there ▶ >>87487454satisfied?
>>87504320You have no cyoa
>>87504320You've been talking about it for a while. Give us a preview.
>>87504413Too bad. My turn.I am asking for a cyoa for this feel
>>87504320more vaporwave lmao
>>87504235>FeminineSo it looks like a girl
>>87498016>no multiversal travelWhy would you ruin your cyoa like this? It just needed some balancing options
>>87504645Oh wait shit I misread space control, never mind. More power variety would've been good though.
>>87496052I really don't like the formatting on this one. I feel like it could be condensed a lot more.
>>87498016Where the fuck did my DRAWBACKS go?
What would scare you more?>an AI nanobot swarm capable of consuming entire planets with grey goo>the Greek god Hades
>>87504765Don't you just die of thirst and starvation in this cyoa pretty quick?
>>87500680Weirdest thing is, that gates Are Not a guaranteed kill in canon. They're just so rarely used nobody knows there's already jutsu that counter's the effect.The Eight gates kill by using up so much energy in the body so faster that the user literally burns up.Tsunade's creation rebirth would be able to counter that, replacing the destroyed cells as fast as they die and powering the body with the user's chakra(which is amped thanks to the gate user turning all their physical energy into chakra). It essentially trades the instant death side effect to shortened lifespan.
>>87504848take the carrots
>>87504848You can eat the snow.
>>87504785hades is alright
Requesting a CYOA with real waifus. I need to feel.
>>87498929>>87499246>>87499253Calm down. At some point in the future, I will be doing an update to Lamentations (Titled: R~) that will reintroduce human companions, make other changes to CYOA's system, and make it more in-line with a traditional adventure with a narrative as the Player and their Comrade seek vestiges of the First Civilization against enigmatic beings from an age old catastrophe.
>>87504954Delete this. You can see her kitty.
>>87502828Honestly, I'd be cool with going on an adventure with my mom. She's kick ass and a doctor, she'd probably have tons of fun. A real world isn't that bad either.
>>87504953tf u mean real
>>87498016>god of life, space control, time control>rezsubam>no missions, threats, companions or itemsplan; planeswalk to konosuba and impregnate the entire cast
>>87496107Isn't this kind of busted, at least a glance? Precognition + Console is basically unlimited power within the scope of your influence points. I picked Lethe thinking it would be a slog and she's basically carte blanche to just steamroll the plot, even if you stick to only editing page 7.
>>87504954We have 40~ regulars posters so the people in the conversation were probably there when you pitched this idea (and it happened at least four times). No need to explain it again.
>>87505270Tranime has rotten your brain
cyoa where I can mass produce half elves?
>>87500796>wtf why didnt anyone make a build for oc->monsterboy...EnslavedAnon is that you?
>>87505674Wait no the one EnslavedAnon made looked a lot different. Guess it will remain in my graveyard folder for eternity
>>87500796>monsterboysno thank you I will save my money for a new stock of girls
Post your WIPs
bitch literally gets to a second chance at life via reincarnation, into the lifestyle she gets to specify, with a bunch of fancy gifts / mentors and the patronage of a god. "I earned this and everyone else should have to earn what they have too, also everyone has to be equal but I get to be a god". Was 0^0 a white american woman before she died or did I miss the point?
>>87505802Charlie being a hypocrite is pointed out in the CYOA anon
>>87500796I liked it.>NepaprastalFUCKING CUTE. The fact that his species lives for so short is a crime. I will either have to find a way to extend his lifespan or breed him a lot if that fails.>HunaahiCurrently kind of a glorified statue but might get better from what the guy said so that's nice and i am in no hurry. Also a small but infinite source of reagents is pretty nice.
>>87504785Ares Poseidon or Zeus would scare me way more than Hades
>>87503861The URL(The "replace the silence" clue Aria gives you actually means "replace the silence in https://stellinearized.github.io/silence with the culprit" - but obviously replacing the cityscapeskirmish in https://stellinearized.github.io/cityscapeskirmish would give the same result)
Oh hey, randomly searching my/my CYOA names on the archive out of boredom actually gave me posts recent enough to talk about this time, neat>>87496400Yeah. I think the rigidly-defined format (each page has different powers available and challenges to fight, but ultimately follows almost the same sequential 7-day challenge format) might've hurt it the most. Oh well. Glad I'm finished with it, at least>>87504720It's ~45,000 words and there are limits to how small I can reasonably make the text
>>87506096>or breed him a lotw-what
>>87506096Kinda sad that i couldn't get the boys i would love the most rn in (pair of rabbit twins, one bitchy and the other nice and understanding)
>>87506438you heard me
>>87506499it is never too late for a remake
Speaking fo WIP, anybody have a readable version of the second Saint Slayer WIP? I tried using image enhancer myself but I'm not very good at it.
>Gateniggers forgot it was a team battle in the first place. Against one-eyed Madara. And he regenerated after Guy's best attack anyway
Any Hobo adventure CYOAs? I remember one about train hopping in a fantastical world.
>>875058020^0 is a standard roastie if given powers. The fact her whole magic math system doesn't even work should tell you everything.
>>87506909>fucked two (2) men>roastie
>>87496689Angel.>Portal to Fantasy World>Enhanced Intelligence>Appearance change, to touch myself up a little. Or a lot.Fly, live forever, real good stuff. Wish I had healing magic, though.
>>87506909But it does work?
cyoas where i am forced into marriage?
>>87507018>reality is collapsing as she brute forces her magic system into workingIt's additional proof she's incompetent when designing her own "systems". The world is a game and other goddesses are more annoyed than entertained with her, which is pretty damning considering they're running the whole show the get new players
>>87507050Angela was such a shit character holy shit. I hope she never shows up in Limbus Corp
>>87507065She was a great character and everything bad that happens is due to A. A is still the best character in the series however
>>87507057I mean mathemagic seemed to exist before her ascension what doesn't quite work is her rewriting of reality on her territory that mostly seems stemmed from the fact that she didn't really understand much of how reality worked back on earth.
fucking no one on the planet understands enough about how reality works to completely recreate it somewhere else. specialization exists for a reason. stop giving charlie shit you fucking incels
>>87507114Anon. She doesn't know how planes fly so she can't have aircraft of any sort because she removed phlogiston on her territory and has not replaced it with anything else.
>>87496877I'm sorry, anon, I don't know what got over me. I had a really rough day, but what I said was still inexcusable. Please forgive me.
>>87503107A full paragraph, and still not a single reason why.
>>87497973If I incarnate as a silicon being by the goddess am I insane like the other silicon beings or just as insane as I was when I met the goddess?
>>87505802You miss the point. She hates being forced to do stuff, and thinks fate is the gods forcing her, so she thinks she can and did stop it.>fancy gifts / mentors and the patronage of a godCompletely meaningless if the gods go "dance monkey, dance!" and decide when, how and against who you're going to use those stuff, including when they'll work, when you'll lose those powers and when you'll die.
>>87507133Where is that in the CYOA? Sounds like weird headcanon.
>>87507467word of god
Outer Reincarnation is a story about how people hate to play Outer Reincarnation.
>>87507613The most divisive cyoas attract the most posts retardedly arguing about it.
>>87507071Is 0^0 the ultimate form of the reddit "fuck I love science" fags who don't understand how science works, were terrible at math and got meme degrees like lit or philosophy?
>>87507722I would argue she has to be great at math. Remember that she won by slapping JPNL and boxing SRTR
>>87507613But i played it!
>>87507722To the point she's practically a strawman yeah. I wish Tankista made her more sympathetic instead of a walking caricature, it would've made the outer tide more interesting if there were more people siding with her besides simps.
>>87507871It seems that it is kind of a self-perpetuated meme that 0^0 is fucking useless
>>87507904>fucking useless>manages to kill JNPL, attain godhood, create the country that becomes the dominant power in the world, destroy the entirety of the underdark, wipe the elven continent clean of life, imprison SRTR, and send YMRD into hidinggoddamn how much more competent does she need to be?
>>87507928The fuck i know. I didn't made the meme.
>>87507904Most anons despise her by the time they finish reading the first page of the cyoa, its not exactly rocket science that they'd end up interpreting her negatively as an incompetent retard especially when such an interpretation boosts their builds odds of killing her. The fact that her umineko counterpart is also a memetically incompetent retard doesn't help.
>>87507141What's in the box?
>>87507770>>87507928>One of her titles is literally Mary SueB-bu-But- guys she killed JNPL and drove off YMRD and SRTRBeing overpowered is not the same thing as being competent anon. In fact, using cheats tends to mean a player is worse at the game than average.Her backstory has her given way too much power since the beginning and she's been coasting off a mix of that and god-script cheats(specifically, she has a couple ancient/secret letters, but does not understand god-script itself). She's a script kiddy, not a hacker.On top of that, her supposed accomplishments are suspect if you look at them more closely. JNPL isn't very dead considering how much she talks to you, SRTR sealed Herself(which given her personality, might have been for the memes), and YMRD is literally just hanging out in the mortal realm doing whatever she wants.If anything, I think the prime goddesses are LARPing, because this is the most interesting mix-up in a while.
>>87507928Still defeated by the anons.Honestly I hate that she did all the cool stuff before I could join the game.
>>87508109>JPNL is the narrator>She calls her Mary Sue and Mega Bitchhmmmm
>>87508109IDK bro sounds like cope to me. Charlie is objectively a competent person, you cannot look at that resume and tell me she's incompetent.
>>87508137>JNPL is the Narrator>CHRL supposedly killed JNPLhmmm
>>87508227as if you wouldn't be upset if someone killed you
>>87508141What has she actually accomplished beyond making everything worse?She never properly ascended and has to pilot JNPLs corpse like an evangelion to do anything.Her magic system is worse than godscript, only becoming a translation on the same level when you introduce numerology.Her alterations to reality are retarded. Trying to kill the godscript will unravel reality and she doesn't understand even the basics of math and science necessary to recreate earth's physics. The god she supposedly killed is still around and YMRD is still walking around doing whatever the fuck she wants.The only thing she's succeeded in doing is wage an eternal, genocidal war on all races she doesn't like and even That she's left largely unfinished.
>>87508251If I'm around to be upset, then the person who killed me did a pretty shit job.
>>87508265>Her magic system is worse than godscript, only becoming a translation on the same level when you introduce numerology.do you have any evidence of this?
>>87508265Of all the things you could say 0^0 is bad at being a bad Mathematician is not one of them.
I honestly believe that most anons would be so much worse then 0^0, if they got her power. Just look at builds of outer tide. Many of them are moving deep into cringe god territory. Also Keter is worse then 0^0 to be honest.
>>87508582The spiders are mostly alright
>>87508582Worth noting that 0^0 probably upgraded her neurology with the many mental feats.probably not Wisdom though
>>87508592>The spiders are mostly alright>ErrorAnon, the part that makes error a world boss is a legit build. The only-non-legit thing in it is a point deficit from the power section.The multi-timeline fuckery is a function of the death-letter system.Goes to show how much the old gods bothered to beta-test.
>>87508628they are not bugs they are features
>>87508298The fact it has no meaning(without numerology). That's it's core feature.The thing that wounded CHRL(who's still wounded from it) was a spell that used god-scripts ability to have multiple meanings(a long-winded word-play).
>>87508582The higher they reach the more like they are to fail.The ones that just want moderate power and play hero, make some lives better and settle down would do fineThe ones that want to upend the world are more likely to fuck up
>>87499813100% true and based
>>87508692I would argue that that is not quite right.Mathemagic reduces the meaning of letters into tsifra(numbers) but if the numbers themselves were not capable of expressing any meaning by themselves the entire system would simply be useless and not do anything at all. But yet it works.0^0 is likely a mathematical purist(autist) and on that field there is a certain beauty to it (Or so they say. I can't into numbers.) Not all of it is practical and has actual application of course but it wouldn't be that hard to imagine that from that viewpoint meaning albeit an alien one exists.This implies that Numerology is yet another translation on reverse on top of the already existing one of mathemagic that uses the meaning of numbers to create yet more strange new meanings into words.I guess that this all results on a big mess that is making me very confused.
>>87496409It's not complexity, it's just that it's very linear. It's basically a short novel presented in CYOA skin. If you read through it carefully and with a desire to play through the whole thing, all paths invariably converge into doing all the routes -> getting Aria's ending -> finding the 'secret' page. The only way you don't get this is if you stop playing, same way that the only way you don't get to a book's ending is if you stop reading. It's basically like how old school VNs had a 'True' route that was obnoxiously canon and trumped all the other choices. There's also not really a character-creation aspect to it, so you don't get that source of satisfaction either.Meanwhile you'll notice that the more oft-discussed CYOAs here have explicitly differing endings that don't invalidate each other, which means even in CYOAs without chargen/build-autism you can still get a discussion going.
Why is Tatsumaki so cute and hot bros?Any CYOAs with womanlet characters?
>>87509389Yeah, no. Soren route best route.
>>87498841Haven't seen Life Chronicle but I find JRPG pretty straightforward and not complex at all
>>87509389All other things being equal, Lethe's "bad" ending offers an outcome exclusive to her route that from some angles could be thought of as better than the "true" ending
>>87509389didn't read but cute cat
>>87508227JNPL got reincarnated as the System.
>>87507871You had people more or less siding with her excluding Zeroes. But builds like that were rare, especially since everybody else would gang up on you.
What makes CYOAG unique compared to other generals?
>>87510020This guy >>87510036
>>87510020the fact that everything is on topic
>>87507722No, I'm pretty sure she's the ultimate form of uplifting protagonists from isekai mangas whose efforts at uplifting succeed due to authorial plot armor because the author doesn't know how stuff works.She is an isekai'd ex-protagonist in a cyoa about isekaing, it's pretty straight-forward.
>>87510085I understand why people want to paint her as a retard when it's been stated countless times that she's just like you.
>>87510020A lot of people here don't post on the rest of /tg/ because they're posers
>>87507722How is lit or fucking philosophy a meme degreeDo you have any idea how much fucking work they have to do
>>87507722>shits on scientismists and philosophy majors in the same sentence even though the failure to understand science is entirely a philosophical issueweak
>>87504954Why are all the female Comrades thick in hips and thighs areas? Is that how they all look in-universe?
>>87509526>>87509812The problem is that it's implicit that you'll loop back to day 1 of the death game since any given ending except the discovery of the secret page means the silence is still corrupting the game and Aria is still restarting the loops. The CYOA played as written is 100% linear, the only true divergent choice is who you sit next to at the end of the secret page. Contrast with something like Outer Reincarnation or JRPG Traitor where there's a million possible endings that don't invalidate each other. Or hell, from something by Stellinearized himself, Abyss Diver, where there's a whole bunch of possible stopping points.Anyway my point was that something like Cityscape wouldn't get as much discussion/builds not because it's bad, but because its linearity means you're really only experiencing it once, despite the fact that it's pretty big by page count.
>>87506839Not that I know of, but I want one now.
>>87507613Almost, but not completely. > Outer Reincarnation is a story about people fighting over their opinion of Outer Reincarnation (CYOAs in general)> Some people (within this very general, despite insistence otherwise) seem to hate CYOAs and the only thing they hate worse is being disadvantaged within them> Other people game them or decipher them to the point they might as well destroy them, others are drama enthusiasts and munchkins> Some people are just content exist within the CYOA, warts and allI cannot think of a CYOA that is more heavily influenced by a community than OR.
>>87510144Because it implies the player is dumber than they actually are in some cases.It's the same reason many authors find "smart" characters are hard to write for, because some readers are just straight-up going to know and understand things the author doesn't.The author isn't the most autistic person on 4chan, therefore bigger autists inevitable call it out when they're misrepresented.
>>87511133Isekai rape monster is pretty close if not there already.
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