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>>86802239You're a cool guy, OP.
death is cancelled, thanks OP
SHINE update.(Action Horror RYOAdventure)Testing is complete. Now entering the final stage of production.This will consist mainly of small value tweaks, the CYOA Mode, and Epilogue. It should take no more than a couple days of brainstorming and execution.Once it is optimized, I will then upload it to my sta.sh account, with both JPG and PNG formats. I will also include a high-rez standalone copy of the Map, and cited sources to all the art I used, minus a few.I will publicly upload first to infinity, because I can have my own thread for it there, where I can respond more quickly and accurately to questions, because 4chan still has my phone rangebanned, and I work too much right now to keep up with /cyoag/.Then, I will make a pastebin post and link everything there. I will also include a sample copypasta text for the sequential main game mechanic, which you will need to keep track of your stats, items, and so forth.After all that is done, I will post to /cyoag/.The TARGET day of release is Saturday, November 26, when I come home from work. It is the only time I expect to have to myself at home for several days. But with boomer family, who knows.If you've been following this project, thank you very much for your patience. It took a while to make, and it still might not be perfect, but I am quite pleased with the result, and I hope at least some of you will enjoy it
>>86802444So a bit less than a week? Cool.
>>86802540yea. I was tempted to cut corners, but the words of Miyamoto kept me steady
I wonder how fucked things would be if they taught Blood Magic (from said CYOA) at Hogwarts.
>>86802444Looking forward to it anon. Love horror!
There be three broad posters of the general, born before memory or fable, whose mothers are whores and whose father was abusive. There names be Moralfag, Lolifag, and Chaosfag.And Moralfag is the joy of low magic; and Lolifag hath bowed his neck to the yoke of waifus, and carries the OC from the trash pile far up below the general; and Chaosfag sings old songs to newfags, singing of his youth of samefagging. These be the posters of quality, wherein the general rejoices. But oldfags tell, whose fathers heard it from the ancientfags, how once the three lords of qualityposting rebelled against the law of the Boards, and passed beyond their boundaries, and joined together and whelmed jannies and slew threads, saying: "We now play the game of the skubwar and shitpost for our pleasure, and we be greater than the mods of /TG/."And all the general was flooded with shit.And Moralfag, Lolifag, and Chaosfag shat upon the threads, and spread their greasy hands over their shitposters that rebelled by their command.But the reports of Celt going upward found the IRC, and cried in the ear of the mods: "There be three shitposters who slay threads for their pleasure, and say that they be mightier than mods, and play Their game with anons."Then were all the mods of /TG/ very wroth; but They could not whelm the lords of the shit, because being evading shitposters, though small, they were unbannable.And still the shitposters spread their hands across the threads, with their fingers wide apart, and the shit rose and rose, and the voice of their deluge grew louder, crying: "Are we not Moralfag, Lolifag, and Chaosfag?"
>>86803056A very wordy way to say all three """"sides"""" were retarded.
>>86802722cut cotners bsd
>>86802722some rushed games are also eventually good, it's just a question if the devs keep meaningful updates going
>>86803144>Release broken skeleton of a game>It's okay bros they will fix it in 4 years into a playable state!>Charge AAA full price regardlessfuck you
>>86803144How dense are you?
>>86803193some games have big updates every month for the first six months, others have big updates every six months for ten years, it doesn't matter to me, i pirate them if i want to play them and only buy them if they've outdone themselves>>86803200since i'm talking about actual games that i've followed from a terrible release and through update cycles that fixed and improved everything, like kingmaker for example, i think i'm fine
>>86803211Yeah, no. If they can't do it right upon release, a company deserves nothing from me. Shit taste and a retarded willingness to give moneygrubbing whores the benefit of the doubt is why we can't have nice things.
>>86803217wrong and your loss, i know plenty of games that are great that i would never play if i was as retarded as you and only judged them for how they were years ago instead of today, good day
>>86803224Accept your wasted money and further contribution to the degradation of the video game market. People like you are why they cut corners on production.
>>86803211Yeah but then it should be priced once the game is fully fixed. Otherwise it's bad for the devs (bad publicity) and the players (feeling let down). I don't know a lot of people okay with the patches solution. A bit like Cyberpunk you know? No matter the current quality, it would be wasted if the anime didn't brought back audience.
>>86803237Agreed. It also sucks for the workers involved.Businesses have no excuse.
>>86803232>nooo you're not really having fun even if you think you are, you wasted your moneeeylmao, seethealso read, i don't throw any money at devs if their games are shit>>86803237pricing is irrelevant to whether a game that is shit at the start can or cannot become good later on, so i consider this a change of topic, and again since i just pirate that shit until i have proof of quality it's personally completely irrelevant to me
>>86802239For next thread:/cyoag/ — Choose Your Own Adventure General
>>86803244You will never be a member of the video game elite no matter how much cock you gargle.There is no excuse rushed production.
>>86803244I talked about prices because it seemed relevant. I guess the better example is calling a game "done" when it's clearly not. When I pirate/buy a game with 1.0 written on it, something polished and finished is expected.>it's personally completely irrelevant to meTrue, but it's linked to the current discussion.
>>86803257i will never want to gargle your cock, gay tsundere anon>>86803261it's not relevant to this particular conversation that i started, i'm sure it's relevant to someone else, like the gay anon above your post
>>86803257>nooo games can't improve if they were shit once they're always shit!nta but you may be actually, genuinely retarded
>>86803246Alright, I just copied the last thread's title but if it falls to me again I'll make sure to use that format.
>>86803324Because I assume anyone who feels strongly on the matter has a reason for doing so and isn't just a rampant shitposter.
>>86803345>he doesn't know
>>86803297I am a man of principles. There is no excuse for rushed production. Either make the game the best you can upon release, or fuck off and don't expect me to purchase it. This is why piracy exists.
I don't know what to post.
Just go for classics.
>>86803576What IS a classic? Is being ancient good enough or does it have to be appreciated by most?
>>86803591It must be ancient, but it must also be appreciated by (you) in the first place.You can't post what you don't have after all.
No one cares.
>>86803892We should send flowers to "No one". We appreciate their silent watch over our thread.
>>86804159It's been dead for 6 years. Leave it well alone.
>>86802790Seriously fucked. Realistically it would be banned and not taught in schools
Tfw no on me repodtd your cyoas ever
>>86804402>>86804398Are you having a stroke?
>>86804398post it and i'll repost it from now on>>86802790>hogwarts>the class is entirely composed of differents (You)>the DADA teacher is Didosovl
>>86803056Man this shit has been going on for two years?
>>86804942Was.Everybody eventually gave up. The thread doesn't react anymore.
Got another question for everybody. Do you know how to play Magic: The Gathering? This is important because I consider implementing mechanics that allow you to choose MTG cards in your build. >>86802790>>86802961Gonna recreate my snake slut build in Hogwarts Legacy once the game is out. The game looks super comfy, can't wait to play it, video realtedhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dngETLI-888
>>86805182I just hope it's good. The trailer showed a lot of potential but you never know. Thanks for reminding me anon.
>>86805182I know the rules but not all keywords
>>86805182>Do you know how to play Magic: The Gathering?You counterspell everything they try to cast, wipe clean everything they were able to put on the field and crush their hopes and dreams.
>>86805182>doesn't even know how to play>wants to make a cyoa based on itThat's full cap, deadass.
>>86805182No clue but if you put some instructions I'll manage, though I suspect allowing people to plug cards into the cyoa is going to lead to some RaW flavoured hilarity.
>>86805182Don't worry basic magic mechanics are extremely simple hell they are similar to what CYOAs already do, use blue points to buy blue powers, red points to buy red powers, etc.
>>86805293>doesn't even know how to play>wants to make a cyoa based on itYou couldn't be more wrong even if you tried, decks realtedhttps://tappedout.net/mtg-decks/silumgars-bad-dragons-1/https://tappedout.net/mtg-decks/teysas-tormenting-thunder-thighs-1/?cb=1669128357https://tappedout.net/mtg-decks/deadly-destructive-dragon-dicking/?cb=1669128412
>>86805485>>86805182If I could make a suggestion.I think it would be a good idea to make it inspired by commander.You get one main monster(waifu) and create an army for her to lead for you.
>>86805284U/B bruise fairy decks best decks.Also only faggots stayed in after Lorwyn cycle
>>86805182Why would I want to play with cards in a CYOA when I can do it for real instead? Back to the drawing board, Tok.
Last time I'll ever mention it, on my Mass Effect cyoa, should I restrict races to certain classes (allowing point buy to have another class) like asari having only biotic classes, humans having all of them, etc?
>>86806359No, that makes no sense, race doesn't exclude classes in their own lore.
>>86806359To add onto this>>86806390Some races should innately have one class and choose another. Biotic as a class only makes sense for everyone not an Asari, and even then, its more a combo ability class than everything else. If that.
>>86805485>Silumgar's Bad Dragons>Teysa's Tormenting Thunder Thighs>Deadly Destructive Dragon DickingSomehow I'm not surprised about your deck names
>>86806499biotic is not it's own class, just a focus
>>86805182I played once. Then everyo e fucked off to the seven corners of the world and i cant play anymore
>>86805800There have been some good fairy cards in Eldraine
>>86805182I have no bloody idea, but maybe you could just explain it in the cyoa like a normal person would if they desired for all people to enjoy their work?
>>86805182I know how to play MtG, but if I wanted to build a MtG deck, I'd probably just build an MtG deck. There are deck building programs and massive archives so I could make practically anything. And the premise is already that (you) are a planes walker and your deck is (you)r spell list so it's a short hop to fantasizing about what you'd do with that power. So how would your CYOA meaning fully add to the process?
>>86806327I would assume you don't actually play the card game but become a plainswalker in universe.
>>86807728and this nigga wants you to play the card game instead
New Italics CYOA with furry women when?
>>86807925I also feel the dark hunger, friend.
>>86809689I just want them because we don't see them often in CYOAS. And because HMoFA is underrated kino. But instead of fantasy, he should make it sci-fi or space.
>>86809837If you didn't like HMoFA, you'd be a weirdo; it's a top tier fetish. Hmmm... Lamentation in space sounds pretty sweet, going around the galaxy collectin' fuzzy wamen.
I don't feel so good, broshttps://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Maladaptive_daydreaming
>>86810423>doing something for an unhealthy amount is okay>until the priesthood...psychiatric industry names it a sin...mental illness
>>86810480Why the fuck would doing something an unhealthy amount be "okay"?
Been maladaptive daydreaming since I was in gradeschool
>>86805182Yes, I have been playing modern and commander periodically since Dragons of Tarkir. Giving the player the ability to choose a specific card for a build sounds like a cool Idea. Perhaps a general spells list could be given to unfamiliar players and options for the experienced to choose their favorite cards.It would be fun to have a planeswalker waifus option. Additionally, it would be fun to see implementations of the color pie philosophy and even the dual color philosophy. Perhaps if a player chooses a lot of red options he can gain some extra points by taking a weakness attributed normally to red (impulsiveness, rageful, etc..) and so forth with the rest of the color pie. P.S.pls add genderbent big booba sarkhan vol planeswalker waifu option.
>>86810423>interferes with lifeNooOoOOOOO you gotta work and be unhappy like the rest of us!!"To the teachers of selfiessness. - A person's virtues are called good withrespect to their presumed effects not on him but on us and society - thepraise of virtues has always been far from 'selfless', far from 'unegoistic'!For otherwise one would have had to recognize that the virtues (such asdiligence, obedience, chastity, piety, justice) are mostly harmful to theirpossessors, being drives which dominate them all too violently andcovetously and in no way let reason keep them in balance with the otherdrives. When you have a virtue - areal, complete virtue (and not just asmall drive towards some virtue) - you are its victim! But the neighbourpraises your virtue precisely on that account! One praises the diligent even if he should harm his vision or the originality and freshness of hisspirit; one honours and feels sorry for the youth who has 'workedhimself to death' because one thinks: 'For society as a whole the loss ofeven the best individual is merely a small sacrifice! Too bad that thesacrifice is necessary! It would surely be much worse though if theindividual had thought otherwise and considered his own preservationand development more important than his work in the service ofsociety!' And so one feels sorry for this youth, not for his own sake butbecause a devoted tool, ruthless towards itself - a so-called 'good man' -has been lost to society through his death." - Friedrich Neetzsche (1882): The Gay Science, I. 21.
>>86810486I'm just schizoposting, don't mind me.
>>86810423>Somer has proposed "stimuli" for maladaptive daydreams that may relate to specific locations. The main proposed symptom is extremely vivid fantasies with "story-like features", such as the daydream's characters, plots and settings.>In one case study, a patient believed to have the condition was administeredfluvoxamine, a medication typically used to treat those with OCD. The patient found she was better able to control the frequency of her daydreaming episodes.You are very sick, anon. You need to be cured of your overactive "imagination" attacks before they irreversibly ruin your life.
Have you guys ever considered making IRL friends and falling in love?
>>86811634why would I choose that when invincibility + a harem of waifus cost the same number of points?
>>86811634In which CYOA?
>>86805182>Do you know how to play Magic: The Gathering? This is important because I consider implementing mechanics that allow you to choose MTG cards in your build.Yes. But my favorite sets are the silver bordered ones. Infinite multiverses need infinite chaotic silliness.
>>86811634easier said than done
>>86811910It's only hard in your head, and that can only be made easier if you make the decision to start working on it.
>>86811979heheh you know what else is hard in my hard?
>>86812008not botching your joke
What about this idea for a power themed around corruption.By having contact with someone during a prolonged time you can eventually change their mind to your liking.Depending on how deep the changes are or how willful the person is this can take a while.
>>86811634Sure! We can do those things. What's your address, soon-to-be friend and lover?
>>86811634I fall in love all the time.
>>86807084Sure, but Teferi giving everything Flash was peak kino.
>>86811428>Quoting someone quoting Nietzsche>>86811104What's wrong, you seem unhappy
>>86811634I had time to cycle through a few relationship and friends circle.
>>86802790>Muggle-born gives you 10 points>Half-blood gives you 2 Adventure Points>Pure-blood gives you 10 points, but you can only spend them on itemsHow the fuck is that supposed to make any sense? This is some of the worst CYOA balancing I've ever seen
SHINE (WIP) updateI've written the CYOA Mode in, which became a condensed arrangement of options (you) will use to describe your decisions and sensibilities during your time on the island.As part of that, I've got some lists of things out of context, so I don't mind giving you a peek.I should have the CYOA Mode dialed in by Wednesday night, and during that time I will write the Epilogue, which I should have ready by Thursday night.Everything I've mentioned here >>86802444 still seems very doable.I must stress that anyone who really cares should post on the thread I will create on infinity, because I won't be able to talk to anybody on 4chin most of the day, thanks to them rangebanning my phone, and I'm too dumb to figure my way around it
>>86814149>a condensed arrangement of options (you) will use to describe your decisions and sensibilities during your time on the island.>wake, regret technology, talk to seagulls, search for an exit, comtemplate suicide, sleep, repeat>bonus decision once per week - flee like your life depends on it (it does)Good to see you haven't met more setbacks as of now.
>>86814197thank you.I haven't been sleeping enough. I hope after this is finished I can get the day off I requested next week...
>>86814275Chicken, no question. Orangutan with a sword could fuck you up. Also, 19 times out of 20 I'm on a motorcycle, not a car.
>>86802790Very little of the contents of this appeal to my normal power-fantasy-type interests, so this is my meh character.
>>86814275I can't drive nor have a car so chiken. Easy.
>>86812361Prefer this one, fantasy-wise.
>>86813854>muggleborn is worth 15 points if you're buying perks>halfblood is worth up to 20 points if you're taking magic drawbacks, and gives an additional 2 adventure points>pureblood is worth 15 points if you're buying itemsYeah the balance is shit. Halfblood is way too good compared to the other two.Muggleborn should get 20 points instead of 10.Pureblood should get an extra 0.5 affinity to one category and their free points should be for either items or inborn traits.
>>86805182I knew how to play magic back when baneslayer angel was standard.I'm sure by now the game has power creeped itself into oblivion but so long as the core mechanics are the same I think I would be able to play just fine.
>>86802239Anyone can post Shonen paladin?
>>86815029Thank you anon!
>>86814275do i get the sword or does the orangutan get itenglish is such a shit language
>>86815150Obviously the orangutan has the sword
>>86814275>>86815165I'd rather kill chickens than an Orangutan. Orangutans are cool. But like... could I just get a gun? Monkey with a sword ain't gonna do much versus a gun.
>>86815165monke too op
>>86815183>But like... could I just get a gun?Could you?
>>86815199I mean. I could. I guess I'll just stay strapped 24/7 in case of rogue monkey samurai attacks.
>>86814275Chicken. I get to ring a bird's neck which is always fun and I get a meal for later
>>86802261Life of Adventure as a Wizard. Gonna smash some elf pussy
>>86802261Comfort and Adventure are the only ones that I'd really consider. Lets say Adventure because Comfort is feeling a little too raw right now, I'll go the Warrior. Maybe I can team up with Wizard anon.
>>86815281>>86815395>>86815425Leisure and Adventure are really the only good ones huh? I would consider Good Works if you could go back in. It's not the most awful living situation. But you're gonna go fucking mad if you stay in there long enough. And you're never allowed to go back in if you leave.
>>86815443I feel like I'd go crazy if I took Leisure sooner or later, especially with the lack of engaging past times beyond what sounds like pretty shallow media. Though admittedly it'd probably take me a good long time before it got that bad, and I'll take it over real life in a heartbeat with a few conditions
>>86815165how is that obvious
>>86815425Hell yeah, let's slay dragons and lay bitches
This thread has been slow even for recent times
>>86815707No OC. Not even announced WIPs. Except for that horror one. But I dislike horror.
>>86815766this isn't stat cancer, this is eye cancer
Magi Case is a month late. Fuck you.
>>86815707eurohours>>86815784>month late>he doesn't know
>>86815784It's 4 months late, newfren
>>86815786Oh, I do know. I feel like Rose from Titanic.>>86815788More like years.
>>86815707Euros are allergic to social interaction, you should know this
>>86815793He restarted the project which means it was heavily delayed but by definition not "late."
>>86815796What kind of "social interaction" is there to do anyway? Unless something new happens it's the same deluge of one-pager and namefagging.It's better to wait the burgers.
>>86808817Is this new?
>>86815707Fae for me
>>86815784>>86815838Tranny Casefags are malding. It's our time Echoes Gods, we and our harem of high school psychic girls have won.
>>86815904Until the release of PSY you're just like them.
>>86815784Italics is upset that his new CYOAs have flopped and is witholding Bloodlines. Think about how salty he was to see no builds for his Eternal Blue.
>>86815948But it had builds. I even made one upon release.
>>86815784>month lateI wish.
>>86815954The CYOA flopped harder than Lamentations, hush.
>>86815976It literally didn't tho
>>86815976What's a flop in terms of CYOAs? Not enough builds?
>>86815979It got zero discussions about its lore (something Italics is "suppose" to be "good" at) unlike Dragonfall and next to no repostings except for when Italics posted it. It flopped.
>>86815985AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA GIVE ME MY MALL KATANA WIFE AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
>>86815989Okay, Tok. Go back to bed.
>>86815989>dargonfalllmaoNo one cared about the lore of that shit, it's just another one of your poorly balanced cyoas that people enjoy breaking.
>>86815995I'm half-convinced the Dragonfall shiller isn't Tok because he's so obvious.
>>86815995>>86816009I'm just using Dragonfall as an example. But the CYOA still flopped in comparison.
>>86816023Dragonfall can't work "as an example" because the author samefag to infinity and admitted as much. Take Demon Eyes or Hamlet Brawl next time.
>The main complaint about Eternal Blue on Reddit is that all the companions are young teen girls and that it's creepy.>The Player is a teenager around the same age as the girls.>Age of consent means being able to leave home and become an explorer with the government of your own consent.>Reddit thinks it means sex.Are they repressed?
>>86816055Duh, they're brainwashed into thinking old hags are acceptable.
>>86816073Some people here are awaiting the...caterpillar? Catimini? The CYOA with the old women. Unless you think they are "reddit".
>>86816073>Duh, they're brainwashed into thinking old hags are acceptable.Italics literally just shilled two upcoming CYOAs about hags. One is about marrying an older woman that has pumped out kids. And the other is not!Zelda and being raised by mommy goddesses that turn you into their champion and lover.
>>86816073Bro, your lolibabas from Magi Case.
>>86816128never ever btw
>>86816135I believe it's a never ever because of expectations. Think about it. The CYOA is about being a detective, but everyone else expects something entirely different like up ending the system to become mage gods or Fate / Stay Night.
>>86816165so a rerun of lamentations where the version in our heads was different from the actual oc, got it
>>86816165I actually just want to be a detective though. There aren't enough cyoas that fill magic detective niche.
>>86816171Yeah. Which is weird considering Italics has on record stated we are the mage equivalent of the FBI and we are supposed to imvestigate the messed up world of mages and possibly stop injustices done by other mages. Like stopping one of the companioms from getting raped by her husband.
>>86816191>Paranormal Debt Collector>Supernatural Investigator>...?Huh. You might be right.
>>86816197I'm not following Italics' blogposts, but if our goals and place within the world is already established, why was that guy ranting about determinism back then? It makes even less sense.
>>86816197>stopping one of the companioms from getting raped by her husband.Man nu italics is lame. Back when Italics was based he would've made the rapist a companion and allowed you to rape women with him.
>>86816236>being a cuckNah, I'm gonna kill him and rape his wife before he can.
>>86816236Just rape the companion retard.
>>86816252His cuck brain can't fathom not letting another man fuck his companion.
>>86816236>don't pick her>she's not my companionit's that easy
>>86816229Retardation. It's quite common in these parts.
>>86816229Italics made a comment saying fhe universe /magic emegered from a single mono existenxe and all will return to it eons into the future when asked about the cosmology of Magi. He said this doesn't practically matter what so ever in what you will be doing in the CYOA.Determinism spergs out about not being able to live eons and surpass this event of returning to the origin. Literal retardism.
>>86816236>Back when Italics was based he would've made the rapist a companion and allowed you to rape women with him.When has Italics ever done anything like this?
>>86816312I'm pretty sure anon is just thinking of jrpg traitor
>>86815934>GutsAnon... Berserk is seinen.
>>86816320But we don't rape anyone in JRPG Traitor. If anything it's the companion going around raping siblings.
>>86816323Ppp is A meme no one read.
>>86816171I actually liked the concept behind Lamentations and its multiple races/companions. I honestly believe Italics should give it another go.
>>86816444A version less aimless with the Directorate would be cool, but I prefer to see his """never ever"""" first.
>>86816487Which one? Magi or Echoes?
>>86816487Also expand the housing system. It's a good set up for a sub-CYOA, but we can add more like the ability to pick our children. Give each race 1 child and 1 human child.Rat waifu gives you rat son or human daughter with rat ears/tail.
>>86816509Both I guess. I remember Echoes to be decent when it came out and it'll be interesting to see what got extended and how he changed as an author.Magi Case was anticipated by the thread for years, so I'm curious to see what's the WIP that survive everything, skubwar included. It'd be a shame to see Italics delay it once again. Also it's been a while since we had a compact wordy original CYOA here. >>86816514The house system was the best part of Lamentations, but these additions would be welcomed. Sounds comfy.
>>86816562>how he changed as an authorwe lost the shack
>>86816562I don't yhink Magi will amount to anything despite Italics supposedly working on it for years. It's suppose to be a big CYOA, but what is the reward for it? What is the end game with the project?
>>86816627I'm not sure if CYOAs have end games beyond satisfying the author and being playable by most. We should ask Italics that question the next time he lurks.Magi Case being our equivalent of Cyberpunk 2077 in terms of reception would be hilarious.
>>86816627I mean if my own experience with my own WIPs is applicable, working on something for years means adding a paragraph every month and deleting a paragraph every month too.
>UPCOMING CYOAS>MAGI CASE>TOK'S UNKNOWN PROJECT>worm again I guess>DOMINATOR OF THE UNIVERSE>HOUSE FEY AGENCY>FANTASY RACE CREATOR>Tomefu spiritual sucessor (up in the air)>vampire the masquerade (on hold)>1920S PULP HERO>SAINT SLAYER>QUIET 2>COSY CATASTROPHE/UPLIFT DIRECTIVE>EIGENWEAPON>DARK ZONE>STRANGE RAINS>SUBURBAN EXCHANGEare you satisfied with what came out
>>86816766I'm working on it okay
>>86816766desu I had more fun with some of the little ones that came out with no build upI cant think of a cyoa that was hyped up in advance that warranted it
>>86816781cityscape skirmish was everything it sets out to be
>>86816717>Magi Case being our equivalent of Cyberpunk 2077 in terms of reception would be hilarious.So Italics releases a broken CYOA? It crashes and burns all his cred. He then gets an anime may made and then everyone lraises it was one of the best CYOAS ever made and not deserving of its trashing. He then makes a unnecessary sequel CYOA with everyone being excited about it and makes you pay for content for Magi?
>>86816766I'm glad I didn't add my cyoa to the list
>>86816844Replace the anime with New New Post-Story waify, starring lolibabas.
>>86816487Why does it have to be the Directorate? I'm pretty sure they're dead by the time that the CYOA starts? I like the concept of the Enigma. Weird alien creatures making messed up decisions and plotting thinfa from the shadows.
>>86816953>That one pick a waifu CYOA about you moving to a small town and all the girls are psychologically damaged and have powers with abusive families taking advantage of them.What in the fuck was Italics thinking? I wonder if it's set in the same universe as Echoes.
>>86816959Ideas of "remnants of the Directorate fuck the world" have been raised. I'm okay with them or the Enigmas.
>>86817036Why not both? Have a Directorate Remnant/Directorate Revivalists and Enigmas.
>>86817036>Directorate remnants fuck the world.If he does that he will need to make a lot of changes to the lore. I don't see why they wouldn't emerge earlier.He also needs to get rid of some of the factions or turn them completely into side quests people.
Posting latest version of DotU:R because I have a build for it.https://imgchest.com/p/lqyepdex7dn
>>86817167Starting: 60> WMYS?Gear: free power armor, free restricted wep, half price mechRace: Human (+8 points; 68)Boons: Born this way (quarian), luck of the draw (+8 points; 76*), modable *8 must be used in gear or ship sectionsDrawbacks: lose some, piece of junk, vigilanteAbilities: tech skills (free), combat training (73), creative (71)> Augmentation: cyberneticCybernetic limbs (68), mechanical frame (66), cybernetic senses (65), artificial organs (63), hardened electronics (62)Armor; space suit (free), power armor (free), mech (56)> Armor traits purchased:Jump jets (free), utility drones (free) firepower (free) exponential replicator (50), super suit (41), quantum link (34), energy systems (33), survivalist (32)Free traits provided by other traits: enhanced servos, enhanced shell, smart armor, nanobots, dr. armor, cyberwarfare suite>Armor layouts:SS: exponential replicator, jump jets, survivalist, energy system, enhanced shellPA: super suit, exponential replicator, energy systems, jump jets, survivalist, quantum link, utility dronesMEK: super suit, exponential replicator, energy systems, jump jets, survivalist, quantum link, utility drones>Weapons:Klimov anti material rifle (free), pulse pistol (free)>ShipClass: destroyer (23)Style: grey (free)Main weapon: none>Traits:Upgraded stealth (partially free, 21), grav tech (free), experienced crew (free), medical bay (19), orbital bombardment weaponry (17), hangar (16), dropships (12), upgraded hull armor (9), upgraded defenses (5), built to last (3)>CompanionsMorgan Yu (1)
>>86817200Missions> Ancient machinesRelevant traits: Destroyer (+9), upgraded stealth (+50), experienced crew(+10), orbital bombardment weaponry(+4), upgraded hull armor(+6), upgraded defenses(+20), built to last(+4)VP total 103Outcome pt 1: Total victory, +8 points (9)Outcome pt 2: No research facility or AI, +2 (11)> Apex(Skipped)> Diablos ex machinaRelevant traits: Super Suit (+10), Jump jets (+8), utility drones (+4), survivalist (+2), quantum link (+10), energy systems (+5), firepower (fulfilled condition, +10)VP total 49Outcome pt 1: Take the bribe, +6 points total (17)Outcome pt 2: Total victory, free armor trait S-500 Buzzard> Into the abyssBefore mission purchases: Hover tanks (13), Amelia oxton (11), Iris Grüner (5), Sky Tulark (3), Darius (0)Relevant traits: grav tech (+10), Dropships (+20), hover tanks (+10), medical expert (+4), medical bay (+8), experienced crew (4), Dropships [used again] (+4), piloting (+6), jump jets (+5 per, +20 total), Combat capable companions [Darius(+6), Amelia(+4), Iris(+12)], klimov anti material rifle (+4), Utility drones (+2), super suit (9), exponential replicator (+6), S-500 buzzard (+5), combat training (+3), cybernetic limbs (+4), mechanical frame (+3), cybernetic senses (+2), cybernetic organs (+3), hardened electronics (+2)VP total 159Outcome: Total victory. Cure lose some drawback for free, Ajax joins for free
>>86817220Missions (continued)> Guardian angelRelevant traits: Sky (+4), special ops (Darius, +6), cybernetic senses (prevention), Darius (prevention), automatic prevention, Amelia/Iris (prevention)VP total 10Outcome, Queen lives, +8 points (8), Sylese joins for free.> Gods and mastersBefore mission purchases: advanced flight (0)Relevant traits: Iris (+8), S-500 buzzard (+8), hover tanks (+7) Dropships (+4), OBW (+10), Tanks/OBW (condition fulfilled, +15), combat capable teammates *iris excluded [Amelia (+4), Darius (+6)], Anti material rifle (+4), all armor traits (UD +2, SS +9, ER +6, QL +7, NG +1, SV +1, AF +8), combat training (+3), creative (+2), Augmentation path abilities (CL +4, MF +3, CS +2, CO +3, HE +2), Buccaneers fulfilled (+15)VP total 134Outcome: Middling victory, no bonus> Stranger in utulek(Skipped)> Rat in a trapStarting VP 50Relevant traits: quantum link (+40), combat training (+6), creative (+4), tech skills (+4), all augments (CL +8, MF +6, CS +4, CO +6, HE +4), Anti material rifle (+8), all armor traits (UD +4, SS +18, ER +12, QL +14, NG +2, SV +2, AF +16, S500 +10), Advanced flight (+60)VP total 278Outcome: Decisive victory, +10 points (10)
>>86817246The end!> -Final traits List-Race: human/quarian hybrid Drawbacks: VigilanteAbilities: Combat training, CreativeAugments: Cybernetic limbs, mechanical frame, cybernetic senses, artificial organs, hardened electronics> Armor: SS: exponential replicator, jump jets, survivalist, energy system, enhanced shellPA: Exponential replicator, energy systemsMEK: super suit, exponential replicator, energy systems, advanced flight, survivalist, quantum link, utility drones, S-500 buzzardWeapons: klimov anti material rifle, pulse pistol Ship: Destroyer class, Grey style, piece of junk drawback. No main weapon. Upgraded stealth, grav tech, experienced crew, medical bay, orbital bombardment weaponry, hangar, dropships, upgraded hull armor, upgraded defenses, built to last, hover tanksCompanions: Sky Tulark, Morgan Yu, Amelia Oxton, Iris Grüner, Darius, Ajax, Selyse
>>86817048Best of both worlds? It would be nice.>>86817068Maybe they were conspiring because as the minority you can't overthrow the world with the Ancients?
>>86817068NTA, but that’s why I think a Directorate Revivalist faction might be better.
>>86816717I enjoy CP77 on release desu. It was pretty much exactly what I was expecting.
>>86817290>>86817299I like the idea of the Directorate, but wouldn't they as a faction take away some of the mysticism of the post-apoc world? I mean they would have to start a world war to seize control and that throw a wrench in anyone wanting to life the comfy life. How would we strike a balance between the two?
>>86817504Nascent occult Nazi-wannabes?
>>86817535The Directorate doesn't sound like Nazis. All they did was>No more fighting between humanity>Everyone has to be assimilated under a aingle government>Human and Furry seggs and marrriage is banned
>>86817563Then apartheid wannabes.
>>86817563How do Human women even compete in Lamentations? Why pick a human woman when you can have a thick trad bunny wife that loves to stay home and cook?
>>86816959The enigmas sadly dont have enough presence on the cyoa
>>86817600Why would I want a trad wife who stays at home
>>86817504"Technically" having a comfy life is hard in most regions thanks to the enigmas, mafioso, and all the retarded governements. A new sect wouldn't change much.I'd even argue that it will probably be solved by others, since you're a nobody in Lamentations.
>>86817635To raise your children and have a warm meal ready to greet you when you get home.
>>86817725Why the fuck would I want childrenI'm 24 anonAnd I want my girlfriend to be with me or pursuing her dreams, not away from me at home doing nothing
>>86817631What are you talking about? If I remember right like two or three Enigmas are outright villain characrers screwing things up. The Bat MILF that lived in a castle city or whatever is trying to kill one because it's responsible for spreading that fog that turns people into monsters.>>86817672>EnigmasThey're rare.>MafiaOnly a problem if you go to Las Vegas and start shit.>Retarded governmentsThe governments did nothing wrong.
>>86817736Anon we're taling about a fictional CYOA. Not your real life problems and retardism of raising kids being nothing.
>>86816197As I understand it, you're not stopping the rape per se. The victim-to-be is one of the waifu candidates in Magi Case, and will be forced into an arranged marriage with an abusive scumbag if you don't pick her.Overall, I get the impression be's trying to push the player into hard decisions.
Does anyone have a (big) background image that would imply a desk? Or maybe just finished wood? I'm trying for a pages scattered across a desk aesthetic for my WIP.(Got the paper image already)
>>86817789Yes, and in this fictional CYOA, why on Earth would I want to accept the massive responsibility of having children? I'm not ready for that yet. That's a nightmare, not a fantasy.
>>86817827>Having sex with your wife means you're an abusive scumbagWha?
>>86817925>Having and raising kids in a fictional CYOA is a responsibility, hard, and nightmare.You can literally skip forward and backwards at times when you raised them. The fuck do you mean it's a nightmare? Hell they can be easier than real life childrearing. Stop coping and making excuses.
>>86817955Very well, if I were to skip forwards in time then perhaps taking care of my children would matter. But I mean NOW. I'm self inserting as myself, anon. I don't need a trad wife who derives self worth from doing basic housewife stuff. I need a woman with ambition and dreams beyond the house and bedroom. I want to be a POWER COUPLE. A trad wife would bore the ever loving shit out of me. I want a girl who takes me along on her journey.And it's not about how hard it is you fool, it's about the fact there's an entire sapient life who looks up to you and will be shaped by you and you've got to fucking make sure they have a good life.
I don't know why anon want their wives sitting getting bored to death instead of actually spending time with them.It's like choosing to have a long distance relationship. You will be cucked 10/10 times.
>>86817990>I'm self inserting as myself,I'm so sorry for you.
>>86818033Well, if I was creating a character rather than self inserting then everything would be up in the air and there's no guarantee they'd even care about love. I love making and playing total ugly bastard greedy Jew arrogant prick characters.
>>86818033I don't self insert in cyoas tho. It's just a fact. It's a non existent problem since no cyoa includes real women, but it's a fact.
>>86818018Lamentation furry women don't cheat if you're a Human. They will have most likely imprinted on you and be super loyal. The only ones who could cheat would be the human women.
For me, it's an older Onikuma wife and running a Noodle and Dumpling (+ other oriental foods) restaurant together in a big city.Don't bully my dream bros.
>>86818204Why would I? That sounds cute and comfy. I've daydreamed about it too. Shame it's such a hard life IRL, those people get up at like 3am to start work.
>>86817990Have you tried having a child and going on adventure anyways?
>>86817990How do you play 'Destined for Greatness' with that mindset?
>>86818212>Shame it's such a hard life IRL, those people get up at like 3am to start work.Where did you hear this.>Why would I?Muh furries bad. Yiff in hell posts.>Sounds cute and comfy.It is cute and comfy. Lamentations should expand the slice of life elements with career options. More than the 4 we get presented in the house buildimg and remove the tax system.
>>86818269muh furries bad yiff in hell and i'm calling you tok for free
>>86818284Nyooo I asked for no bullying.
>>86818284I don't think Tok can imagine himself running an oriental restaurant with his loving wife.
>>86818308he probably had incel dreams before a woman betrayed him or smthing
>>86818269>Where did you hear this.I SAW them. I'd be walking home drunk from the clubs and they'd be just setting up their massive pile of meat and their dough to make the dumplings.
if you could choose one waifu from here to become real right now for you, who would you pick
>>86818385The one from this CYOA
>>86818284>>86818308Yeah, I'm not Tok. He's a fag that hates anthro women and one of the Yiff in Hell posters along with some others. I just want a comfy life with an older panda wife and maybe some kids to help at the shop.>>86818363Damn, that's depressing. But since we would be living in an industrial city, I'm sure I can use the CYOAS advance technology to speed up the process. Remember they have canon giant mobile fortresses that have been turned homes/trading hubs. They have to have robots or machines to speed up the process.
>>86818428I mean...I was in a modern day city lol. They had lots of machinery I'm sure. But the way it ended up was that they had to get up super early to be ready for the breakfast rush (breakfast is where they make SO MUCH of their money, it's how everyone eats breakfast; dumplings on commute).It's like being a traditional baker. Super romantic daydream, but a bloody hard life IRL.
>>86818385You mean here on Earth, 2022, next to me?Probably Polaris by elimination.
>>86818442The CYOA technology is completely different from real life.>BreakfastI was thinking of operating more like lunch and into the late night. Morning would be used to prepare the kitchen, seats, clean the place up, balance the books and supplies.
>>86818385None. I refuse to send waifus to hell.
>>86818469Oh I'm not trying to critique your CYOA fantasy lmao. I was just describing what it's like IRL.
>>86818539That's why you choose a godfu who cleanse this hell whole
>>86818557Sentience entails the tearing of a "spark" of Godhood from the Godhead, an unnatural and mistaken act which must be reversed (the spark must return to the Godhead). There is no need to tear more sparks from the Godhead.
>>86818498Charlotte obtained godhood. She wouldn't adjust, and I don't trust her without the Eleventh guidance to be "good".Adelina cannot be allowed to see this era of "women can do no wrong".Bringing the Anglerfish in this world is dooming us all.Zynthia is social suicide incarnate.And so on and so on. Like one of posters above me said, this realm is pretty shit anyway so the reverse isekai isn't appealing except for two girls: Alice and Polaris. The main difference is that one might understand than 'realness' cannot be defined while the other is obsessed by it. So Polaris, for her own sake.
>>86818611Poor polaris. The appeal of realness is probably going to wear off in a couple of years.
The right answer is Elspeth
>>86818658That bitch ruined the world so she could become a god
>>86818641Perhaps, but then she'll have a friend in me. One of her biggest problems is the self-imposed isolation due to the reality peeking - impossible here, and I won't leave her mull over things like that alone.A friendship would be nice.>>86818658With a firm hand Braun could work, but you need to prevent her mistakes in judgement.
Italics really fucked up on the race names for Lamentations.There is an entire race of goat people that wear masks, barely talk, manipulate ice like ghosts, and spend all their time living in a frozen tundra and hunting. But they're called Wendigos.Another is a race of rat people with hyper intelligence, basically Skavens without the igger personality/disease, but they are called Rat Kings and don't have their tails tied together.
>>86818672everyone else did, she just accounted for it
TOK! TOOOOOOOK! Get your butt in here, I think I just found a dragonfall fic! It's only the first chapter, but still.https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/born-of-flames-and-scales-asoiaf-dragonfall.1055214/
>>86818672She didnt nuked the world twice anon
What if the Dragonfall shiller isn't Tok? I have trouble thinking he could be THAT obvious about it, which lead me to think this isn't him.
>>86818798trust us he is that retarded
>>86818798You underestimate his competence and overestimate his care for not getting caught. It is always extremely obvious when he samefags.
>>86818798>>86818815Why are you retards obsessed with namefagging?
>>86818775Her giving everybody mind powers did
>>86818830I'm not obsessed; just confused by the equivalent of a misplaced fake mustache.
>>86818798Tok once shilled himself, but forgot to take off his trip. He immediately deleted the post and coped hard despite everyone seeing it and someone screencapping it.
>>86818851He's also just admitted to talking about his own CYOAs anonymously before. He'd post things like "Dragonfall has a few flaws, but it's quite impressive how it's managed to capture the imaginations of so many people".
>>86818760Which CYOAs have had fanfiction? Not extensive builds or role play, but traditional fiction. I feel like it can't be that uncommon but this and someone on Reddit who wrote one about one of the Animus companions are the only ones I've seen.
>>86818922Worm. Harry Potter. Essence. I saw a few with Meioweapons.
>>86818960 (me)Ah, and the Resonator story someone shared a while back. I should give it a try one day.
>>86818922I remember there being a fad of Living Planet fics on Spacebattles once, couldn't tell you any names though.
>>86818845 everyone should have power
>>86818960>Harry PotterKinda cheating, but technically right.
>>86819261I'm only counting the stories where options from the CYOA/Jumpchain are visible.
>All these Lamentations postersWhy do you want to fuck the furry woman?
>>86819386I don't want to fuck furry women. At best I want to give closure to the Bat hybrid.
>>86817827>Overall, I get the impression be's trying to push the player into hard decisions.Don't worry about it, she and her problems won't exist if you don't choose her!
>>86819386male human on female anthro/monster girl is kino. My white genetics push me to dominate the other races
>>86819386because i want to fuck them
>>86819418>At best I want to give closure to the Bat hybrid.Who?
>>86819386How could I not want to marry this?
>>86818922Fate Another Pretender.
>>86819545Ugly picture. Got a better one with her body?
>>86818760Is that the famous reddit spacing
>>86818922QuietAnon wrote a short story for Rise, based on a player's build. Eon, Sedana, and Tyr raid the headquarters of the eldritch frost cult, and attempt to escape with their soul orb.
Making good progress on the Gifted remake. Should get the Curses images finished tomorrow and can write them out properly on Friday (I have all the options laid out, just need to do the fluff).At this pace I'd say it'll be done towards the end of next week.
>>86820641Thanks for the updated, I find them to be motivating and pleasant.
>>86820641man your order of working on things feels so alien to me, if i haven't done several pages of fluff yet there's no way i would be capable of starting on anything else
>>86820641hell yeah. did you add any new abilities?
>>86820831Only one wholly new one, but lots of expanded applications of the existing ones via new upgrades.>>86820824I can't do the fluff first. It's the fun bit. If I leave admin shit like layouts and images until last I'd never finish the fucking things.
>>86816717>We should ask Italics that question the next time he lurks.I just want to make a CYOA based around being a magical investigator in a masquerade of my own invention. There is nothing extremely complicated about it. That's the only reason why the Magi Case exists.
>>86821028If you dropped the masquerade aspect and instead made in a conworld, that'd be better. But whatever, it's your creation, not mine. Do what thou wilt.
>>86820932>Only one wholly new one,C'mooooon Meat-Vision!
>>86821039The Magi Case doesn't need its own original constructed world completely separated from reality with magic out all day in the opening. Doing that would ruin the mystery, effort, and most importantly the design and flow of the CYOA/setting. Bonus: The Magi Case also originated as a Spire CYOA and didn't take place in our real world, but that thrown out due to my loss of half of the original written content. In hindsight it was a good thing because the original lore/writings/conflicts for it were garbage and not interesting compared to now.
>>86821113Masquerade settings are inherently uninteresting.The moment you place fantastical elements in a world where realism dominates, it falls flat.Moreover, it wouldn't ruin the "mystery" whatsoever, if you possessed the barest modicum of skill. Then again, it is you we're talking about.
>>86821145>Masquerade settings are inherently uninteresting.For you.>The moment you place fantastical elements in a world where realism dominates, it falls flat.That didn't stop people from coming up with stories about fairies living in forests and kidnapping children. We have stories that don't have fantastical elements set in a world where realism dominates and they too fall flat. The word is called fiction for a reason and suspends belief to tell a story for fun or enjoyment.>Moreover, it wouldn't ruin the "mystery" whatsoever, if you possessed the barest modicum of skill. Then again, it is you we're talking about.Well, fuck you too.
>>86821240>fiction for a reason and suspends belief to tell a storyA masquerade is inherently less believable than "magic". Everything can be explained, even in a conworld, without the trite reliance on "ancient conspiracy".
>>86821256>Everything can be explained,And everything can be explained without a constructed world.
>>86821311A masquerade is not an explanation, but rather an excuse for lazy worldbuilding.
>>86821322>Masquerades are not an explanation.>It's an excuse.That is some literal cope.
>>86821340Okay, conspiracy theorist. Explain your justification for placing a pseudoscientific masquerade in your CYOA.
>>86821322Did you enjoy Echoes CYOA?
>>86821349How can I enjoy a CYOA that hasn't been released yet?
>>86821361>Echoes CYOA>Hasn't been released yetAnon... I don't know how to tell you this.
>>86821340Since you haven't responded, I accept your concession.
>>86821586Coming from Italics, that's a compliment.
>>86821650>Coming from Italics,He doesn't know.
>masquerade bad austist is back
>>86821704>He thinks they ever left.
>>86821704masqueradefag and physicsfag have provoked argument after argument in this general. im kinda sick of them. i miss mvc arguments, or memory death stuff.
We live in a post-apocalyptic masquerade setting with a bunch of choices that don't matter and a women with grotesquely oversized backstories.
>>86819386Because they're objectively superior to human women.
>>86821145>>86821322>>86821343I think a masquerade *failing* is really interesting as an idea. Everything coming out and people fighting over keeping scraps of magical knowledge from being devalued by becoming common knowledge or trying to take advantage and leverage their faction into the best position post-masquerade. The problem is that the actual masquerade itself is just fucking dumb. Secret keeping is just fucking impossible on that sort of scale without resorting to stupid bullshit. The idea of the urban fantasy setting where wizards and werewolves are hiding everywhere but just somehow go unnoticed and as a result everything is the same is just retarded when you spend any time thinking about it. It also implies that muggle humans are just retarded not to notice all this.I kinda like the idea of a world where some sort of weird reality colliding bullshit happens and a bunch of people *retroactively* become supernatural. Like, you've been working your dead end office job for the last few years as boring mcfucking no-one, but wake up one day with the memories, skill and knowledge of a hundred year old member of the magical masquerade. All your magical contacts are the same, Doris in accounting suddenly recalls she's the city's head witch etc. Just a bunch of normal boring people inexplicably combining with a reality where actually there was a very classic urban fantasy style supernatural masquerade and having to deal with being a mundane person with a normal job and a sudden influx of werewolfism or whatever.Except things almost immediately starts to fall apart because the urban fantasy has lost all it's bullshit inertia. Shit like how you can't keep the wizard tower that suddenly has always been hidden in that small forest conveniently near your house secret from the tax man, even if they've no clue how the fuck they missed this thing, and basically the 'masquerade' dissolves when it meets reality like sugar in coffee.
>>86821792We had an entire nation ran by a cult filled with women IRL.
>>86821815Yawn. Try again.
>>86821792I think I should chime in that the Mage populace in the Magi Case is around 0.13% of the entire human race (around 9 million people and declining), so the average person encountering one or seeing magic is extremely, extremely, extremely low. Encountering werewolves, fairies, and such are also quite rare as they spawn randomly and often in the middle of nowhere since the world is a big place, they're not living in big metropolis cities like a Harry Potter or typical western fantasy brought into modernity.
>>86821848Okay. Then your CYOA is bullshit and unrealistic, even for a fantasy.
>>86821877No further explanation is needed. You are the epitome of retardation, what with your bullshit excuses, masquerade havingness, and memory wiping spell nonsense. Every conspiracy falls eventually. Yet you think a millennia-old conspiracy warfare between "reason" and "magecraft" would go unnoticed by the masses? Hahahahahahaha.
>>86821905>Would go unnoticed by the masses?What are you talking about? I've said before that non-mage governments and Illuminati know about the existence of mages and made backroom deals with them.
>>86821987>backroom dealsYou think deals are always honored?If so, you're even more retarded than I thought.
>>86821996>You think deals are always honored?Nobody knew what the Soviets gained from the United States for ending the Cuban Missile Crisis in the backroom until decades later when the documents were declassified and a fake cover was posted/talked about. Yes, deals can be made in secret and kept. What are you retarded?
>>86822021>deals can be made in secret and keptNot for millenia. Retard. Keep on peddling your excuses. It's funny.
All stories are contrived by their very nature (since the writer has to move characters from plot point A to plot points B, C, D and so on). A secret being hidden from the masses is way more realistic than things that move faster than light or things that break the laws of thermodynamics.
>>86822045And here with go with non sequiturs and abject dishonesty.
>>86822030>Not for millenia. But the masquerade conspiracy isn't thousand years old and continuous. The deal with the TMC-Illuminati came about in the late-19th century and Magic as it exists and used now in its perfected state is only like 500 years old.
>>86822061That makes it even worse. "Perfected"? I thought you were a better writer than that. Apparently not.
>>86822053Not the same anon, and I see no counter argument.
>>86821710>singular they for Anon
>>86822073Magic in its natural state is Creation which can be anything and everything without limit. The Magi as humans are products of Reason and because of this, they restrict Magic by giving it rules/effects. Magic for Magic became perfected when it became observable and defined as magical types and spells. So yes, Magic is in its perfected state for Mages.
>>86822079>move faster than light or things that break the laws of thermodynamicsYou assume these things couldn't be done away with applied phlebotinum and/or scientific advances more complex than our presumed technological achievements? If so, you are an imbecile.
new thread WHEN
>>86822092I see. You think gnosticism makes for good material. Counterpoint: you need to get your shit together and rethink your entire life.
>>86816766>TOK'S UNKNOWN PROJECTI'm pretty sure he was gonna make a MTG CYOA, even said so himself in this very thread
>>86822107I think a lot of things make for good material. When making a CYOA, I believe one should branch out from their own core beliefs and ideas to find new and strange things to write about or to take inspiration from when crafting something they wish to write about and let others read. The concept of Reason and Creation were also influenced by the concept of Love and Strife by Greek philosophers, where the two forces would push/pull each other and help to form the universe.
>>86822135it's an ancient list, that's the point anon
>>86822143>Reason and Creation were also influenced by the concept of Love and StrifeIn other words, bullshit which serves to take away choice from the player. Good to know you hate player agency.
>>86822160can you shut the fuck up already you massive faggot
>>86822096If it could be done, especially with thermodynamics and zero energy machines, they would have been done so already. Just like a masquerade would have been discovered.>advances more complex than our presumed technological achievements?Give one example of a scientific theory that broke the rules of previous ones. The notion of one popular theory disproving another in a way that makes one rule or the other null is a common misconception.
>>86822176Never. You are stuck with me till the end of days.>>86822178Plate tectonics.
>>86822178>Give one example of a scientific theory that broke the rules of previous onesHiggins Bison was stated to never exist by Stephen Hawking before he got BTFO along with the rest of the scientific community after 40 years of research.
>>86822184>Plate tectonicsWhat rule exactly was disproved?From physics would have been a better example, since it's the subject we're talking about.
>>86822184...fair enough, make sure to spice it up with the uhh Positive words of encouragement and of hopeful enthusiasm that people will learn from their mistakes and become better people>>86822178General relativity
>>86822215I wish you the best and pray that nothing but good fortune and happiness will bless you and your lineage.Anyway, what genre of CYOA do you enjoy best?
>>86822215>General relativityGo ahead, point to the formula or rules in general relativity that was proved or proved a different rules to no longer work within the frame it was first formed with.The "disproving" that Einstein did was expanding the model outside the scope it was originally thought in, all of Newton's rules are still taught in every school, even if they aren't exact enough. Because they work.>>86822205Not a case of an existing rule or model being being disproved, that was an argument against a specific model existing. From the history question:>However, attempts to produce quantum field models for two of the four known fundamental forces - the electromagnetic force and the weak nuclear force – and then to unify these interactions, were still unsuccessful.
>>86822293>aren't exact enoughI accept your concession. This is proof we lack knowledge. A more advanced race would presumably possess greater knowledge than our own. Checkmate.
>>86822230>Anyway, what genre of CYOA do you enjoy best?Variety is the spice of life. Night Drive has a place in my heart, aswell as Urban Unease, because of how they do plug into life. On the other hand I also greatly enjoy cyoas with a set premise you do not really bring anything to, like most of the oldschool fantasy ones with a thinly veiled isekai premise. I also like anything discussable in the thread, and the more existentially inspired stuff. Gnosticism is cool.What about you?>>86822293>Go ahead, point to the formula or rules in general relativityNo. Also planetary orbits being off with newtonian formulas is the literal reason Einstein developed it, so yeah.
>>86822317Lack knowledge only about things we haven't seen or looked at. Things we looked at still behave the exact same as the rules we formed 100 or 200 years ago.So the basics of thermodynamics will never be broken anywhere on earth or remotely near it.>>86822322Newton's laws work on earth, which is the frame they were written in and about. You won't be able to find a way to break them here, same with thermodynamics.
>>86822322I enjoyed A Life Chronicle. I once enjoyed JRPG Traitor, but a second glance at the lore ruined it for me. Overall, CYOAs which mix slice-of-life iyashiskei-style minutiae with high fantastical adventure, Victorian detective-style mystery, and lovey-dovey harem romance interest me most, though it saddens me how there aren’t many, and even of those which do exist, seldom are they autistically fleshed out.Grimdark scenarios disinterest me. Settings wherein the concepts don't mesh or are insufficiently explain disinterest me.
>>86822178>Just like a masquerade would have been discovered.That already happened, always, in every story. They're always about concepts that are well understood by the "outside world". The protagonist will understand every concept expressed when his uncle faints at his doorstep from bloodloss, and his first words upon waking up in the hospital are "Johnathan, your missing parents were aliens like me, and they didn't just disappear" [wrong, they will become his new mentors in the second book] "they were murdered by werewolves. I'm going to teach you their magic so that we can take revenge."
>>86822375>never>won'tI accept you concession.
>>86807925>>86809837I once had a CYOA concept taking place in the Echoes Universe except it's in outer space and before the CYOA takes place. I really do want to make more sci-fi CYOAS especially one taking place in outer space, but what it would become is unknown. I sort of want to do something cool like Metroid or Star Fox or Star Wars, but the problem with space opera is that it's hard to make a general focus on characters/locations/history with how expansive space is. How do I make people care about the planets and conflicts of the factions in space? And how do I avoid falling into the standard trap of shipmaking/crew building that dominates so many of the space CYOA?One dumb idea I came up with was to make a space farming (colony) simulator. Something unique no one has done before for CYOAs and to make it weird. Another was Castitas, each planet gives you options/characters/outcomes, but that wasn't viable in the long-run. Maybe, I'll figure it out in the future.>LamentationI have the concept for Lamentation R~ floating around. The concept behind it was to take the most favored materials of Lamentation 2.0 and create a more narrative experience with defined villain characters, Humans/Comrade characters to recruit, and to give the player more narrative variety/freedom for their lives and how they ended up in their situation. Though, I'm wary of how it would turn out since Lamentation overall received a moderate success.
>>86822393What do you think about settings that require you to accept a premise quite heavily outside of well explored fantasy. Thinking stuff like The Hospital here, you are at the mercy of a lot of unexplained happenings that are never resolved but assumed for the sake of the setting.>>86822375>guys this rule is totally valid outside of my head>okay at least it applies to the solar system>earth maybe??>at least it was valid in my lab that one timeSee the induction paradox happening in real time? Read up about scientific principles as >>86822406 is telling you to to be honest, you seem confused
>>86822406It never happened in the past, so it won't in the future. If you can find an example of a rule that actually changed instead of just being expanded, go ahead.
>>86822448>arrow no fly fast in past>wont happen in future!!
>>86822448>It never happened in the past, so it won't in the future.Lol, lmao even. There is no further discussion to be had.I refuse to believe you're this retarded.
>>86822403Uncle John sounds like a cool guy.
>>86822446>See the induction paradox happening in real time?I honestly don't, Newton's law of gravity is still being taught and used today for anything in earth, are you saying it isn't? Einstein's relativity is being used for things outside of earth, and one day we'll explain things that are far away enough using other laws, while still using both Einstein's and Newton's laws for what they were intended for, once again showing that rules expand on each other, not replacing them.
>>86822503>rules expand on each other, not replacing themYou are an idiot.
>>86822448Nicolaus Copernicus's Heliocentric Model.
>>86822490John is the protagonst/nephew/protege character in this example.
>>86822463>masquerade no happen in past>can't happen in present!!
>>86822505ad hominem, why not answer the question?
>>86822503>>86822505 is completely correct. A rule claims to hold explainative value over a certain domain, and another rule "expanding on" it requires it to replace it in the same domain. Induction is the assumption that a specificum applies universally (or atleast at a higher scale), said thesis being *replaced* by a more refined rule set later on definitely needs to falsify the formerly assumed rule.>>86822534back to r*ddit it is
>>86822509I concede, although I would like an example from something created via the scientific method, since an example from before it is weaker when arguing about it.
>>86822580Your concession is accepted. Also, Newtonian physics.
>>86822580Pick whichever you think fits your criteria from here:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Superseded_theories_in_science
>>86822574While the old rule itself is indeed falsified, what it was used for, the practical examples and tests, the cases discussed within those example, it working in the scope it was formed in - isn't. If the law of conservation says that energy of an isolated system stays the same, it does so in isolated systems. Based on how "replacing" rules and theories formed in the past, any new law that disproves that will have to find something that wasn't tested or verified, probably in a different scope, hence something so remote from regular energy systems we use and see in day to day on earth, something that never effected it in a way that was ever noticed, it would be ridiculous to think we'll ever reach or use it, even assuming it exists.In other words, if net zero energy systems existed, we would have found them long ago.
>>86822696If you genuinely believe that, education is wasted on you.
>>86822696Contrary to reinforcement anon I believe it futile to argue about details. If you want to define a theory as not replaced if it is only falsified in sub-domains be my guest, I don't care enough. Falsification DOES still occur though. Rules per definitionem claim universality, and refinement ("expanding on") requires said universality to be limited/disproven. A rule established on limited experimentation is still falsified as a rule even if the experiments are not - claiming otherwise is what I called an induction paradox. Back and forth over but I'll read your retort.
>>86822659The opening paragraph repeats what I said>Here are a bunch of theories from before scientific theory without much evidence, and here are some theories that were replaced that fit the data betterWhat you're arguing for is that the data for the same tests can change suddenly, that thermodynamics can be somehow broken in a realistic way here on earth or anywhere close enough for us to capitalize on it.
>>86822749To assert we "never" could goes against the scientific method.Any scientist worth his salt knows to never assume our species has a perfect understanding of anything.
>>86816766>At least one person is still waiting on Fantasy Race Creator.I'm gonna write at least one more paragraph of it tonight.
>>86822795Add one to the list, I had a similar segment in mind and was waiting for your take for inspiration
>>86822805If you want to do something similar to what I'm already working on, then go for it.I can't be trusted to finish things.
>>86822747>Falsification DOES still occur though. Rules per definitionem claim universalityI agree. My entire argument, since the beginning, was that the common person's definition of what falsification means is a misconception. Yes, old theories are falsified. No, that does not mean that everything the theory said is false. In logic language, a person like >>86822096 sees a non-tautology assertion and assumes it's a contradiction just because the word "false" or "disproved" is used there, hence suddenly everything that was impossible is now possible. When in reality, it's less accurate yet more understandable to describe it as "exapnding on the old", or "more accurate than before", not "everything we know can be wrong"
>>86822910If you believe that's what I meant, you are denser than a black hole. How can a person misinterpret my argument this badly?
>>86822910>everything the theory saidLuminiferous aether.
>>86822932It's the antagonism mr blackhole, give them sugar
>>86822932Because you argued that it's possible break the laws of thermodynamics, although nothing similar even remotely happened in the past.>these things could be done away scientific advances more complex than what we haveWhere are you pulling that from?
So this is the power of Italics...
>>86822986Laws might not be absolute.Per the scientific method, our understanding of reality is anything but concrete. But if you want to be disingenuous and ignore that, be my guest.
>>86822986Please just stop. Scientific theory is such an amazingly flexible system that it could account for god opening the gates to another dimension tomorrow, yet you are here making absolute claims for literally no reason. Maybe it is just a question of philosophrtxkay but it hurts
>>86823013The original conversation was about the likelihood of those things, not their possibility.>Masquerade is so unrealistic and unlikely, it's ridiculous!>Suspension of disbelief, sci fi stuff are more ridiculous and unlikely.>But they're possible!A secret magic group hiding for a thousand years is way more "realistic" than the rules of reality suddenly being proven wrong.
>>86823047No. Reality could breakdown right now and that'd would be more believable than a masquerade existing for that long. You misunderstand the depth of scale it takes for a conspiracy to not fall apart.
>>86823062Yeah~ that's when a masquerade-within-a-masquerade develops around the dark secret that the protagonist will uncover.
>>86823062And again, where are you getting that from? People and societies were fooled for tens of years, thousands of years is a big stretch from that. Logically, way less of a stretch from something that was tested yet never documented to happen suddenly happening.
>>86823090Rule changing = rules changingRules have always been different but noone saw it despite looking = ????
>>86823090This isn't me: >>86823101.My argument is that the greater the number of people in the know on a conspiracy, the less likely it is that the masses wouldn't be aware of its existence.
we're past the bump limit and on page 10, someone make a new thread and let the autists continue arguing in this one.
>>86823101If it was only "rules changing", sure."Thermodynamics were completely wrong" like sci fi does is not that. >a person sees a non-true assertion and assumes it's a contradiction just because the word "change" is used there, hence suddenly everything that was impossible is now just as likely to be possible.The chance of thermodynamics being generally wrong (inaccurate) in one rule or the other? High. The chance of it being so wrong (inaccurate) you can find a way to ignore conservation of energy in a way you can use, see or touch? So extremely unlikely, it ironically comes out as>Rules have always been different but no one saw it despite looking with a lot of motivation (infinite energy)Which is way more unlikely than the regular "no one saw the secret society". People are way more motivated to get power and wealth than to uncover social truths or secrets.
>>86823220>Which is way more unlikely than the regular "no one saw the secret society".Nope.
>>86823225The reason it's more unlikely is because of the part in the greentext; irl, secret societies happened. A scientific theory being completely wrong, where the very basic rules were false, didn't. That's the part you haven't answered yet.
>>86823171Get in here buddy>>86823271>>86823271>>86823271
>>86823280>secret societiesNone of which were at the scale you're suggesting. None.
>>86823293Agreed, still>happened, just not at the same scale, despite lookingMore likely than>Never remotely happened at all, nothing even similar, despite looking
>>86823314Only if you think our comprehension of the fundamental framework of reality is perfect.Which it is not.
>>86823323Just because something isn't perfect (accurate), doesn't mean it's completely wrong.What you argue requires way more than "just not perfect", it requires "it's completely wrong on every level". Because the first law of thermodynamics was tested so much, for it to suddenly break in a way we can use is exactly>Never remotely happened at all, nothing even similar, despite looking.Ironically, you're arguing our comprehension of social structures/patterns (hidden societies, non-magical, regular humans) is perfect. At least, more perfect than actual reality.
>>86823389If you discount the possibility of workarounds and potential applications of substances and/or loopholes which don't "technically" break the framework itself, there is no further discussion to be had. ETA when?
am i retarded for not understanding this thread
>>86823421If it inspires you to learn something, yesIf it would not and would only lead to you feeling bad, no, everyone has different talents :)
>>86811634Too hard; don't like most people enough to spend time on them
>>86811634I have IRL friends but they're feminists girls.Spending time here is easier on my nerves.
>>86823469From experience: don't expect any returns on your investments, it's an exit scam
>>86823413They're possible, I'm not discounting them. We're talking about likelihood, what's more likely, not possibility.If you can give me examples of such substances or workarounds that did something similar (seems on the surface to break a fundamental rule of physics) than it wouldn't be >Never remotely happened at all, nothing even similar, despite looking.But I don't think that happened before. It might happen in the future for the first time like you say, so that "might" is still exactly the likelihood of "Never happened in the past, despite looking".
>>86823421Unironically you'll get it when you learn discrete math and logic + set theory
>>86823495Or read (about) Popper >t. B.A.
>>86823503Magi Case, of course, silly!
>>86823510Magi Case is a conspiracy, falsify this nerds
>>86823510A week or two.
>eta for magi case>no eta for echoes 2damn it
>>86823499Popper would absolutely abhor treating thermodynamic like it's likely to be false (I didn't say possible, I said likely). It stood so many falsifying tests...
>>86823562Popper literally established the worldview that everything is false and nothing can be known.
>>86823578falsifiable*, not false (I hope, but cannot be certain)
>>86823578Shit you're rightDamn you Lakatos
>>86823592Not an unreasonable mistake, and I'll not make any jokes about expanding theories with the given constellation