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A furry setting that is anti gay makes no sense when furries ARE faggots, tbqh
>>85029558shut the fuck up already tok holy shit
>>85029558Sorry I can't hear you. Guess you're gonna have to sneed harder.
>>85029672I'm not posting the rest for now, either someone else do it or I'm picking it up when I come back.
>>85029612>>85029705>>85029631You forgot the extra mommy companions.
>>85029713what is trash and why should it be posted??
>>85029672Comrade Creation pages.
>>85029577>>85029595>>85029612I really like italics stuff, except for this. And it's because of furries.If only it were cute animal ear stuff.
>>85029809To anger (you).
>>85029715>he doesn't have things to do
>>85029713more like /tg/ cyoa
>one CYOA in the entire threadCome on guys
>I'm fine with pedofags>Animalfuckers make me supremely uncomfortablewhat is wrong with my brain? my only fetish is asian mommies with big milkers.
Well I might just make my own maze cyoa
>>85029988brains are stupid and full of weird dumb spaghetti code. Don't even try to comprehend it as we can't debug that fucker yet.
R*ddit thread huh
>>85030069Its weird. I don't agree with either. Maybe its because lolishit is naturally just anime and I like anime so my brain is wired? Furryshit is like 95% western, the east has some kemono stuff but its really, REALLY niche. Like 1/150 doujins might be kemono/furry.
>>85029988>pedofagsI will continue to call them lolicons, as my anonymous ancestors before me
>>85030095if you ask me kemono is nice desu
>>85030164Last post to Lamentations is an FAQ PDF about the setting.Lamentations is not a medieval fantasy, but instead a post-apocalyptic science-fantasy setting. They have access to television, movies, computers, video games, the internet, jet airships, and other technology.
Zero builds the CYOA.
>>85030291yeah its pretty funnywaiting for OP to desperately put one together to "prove" you wrong>>85030217if you like it, you're furry, its not much difference. Only furries would notice it. I just use the term since its the japanese term (like lolicon instead of pedophile).
>>85030145nooooo! you can't use alternative geometry to skip the maze that's cheating!
>>85029456I didn't start the cyoa yet because i'm busy shitposting, but I'm gonna make a comrade with human soul build.
>>85030505>the FIRST person to play this CYOAThe Legend...
>>85029471Name: (Male)Home: Kitsune SanctuaryReason: A Change in LifeTalents: Alchemy, Combat Experience, Cooking, Weapon Mastery (+2 Techs), Tailoring, TeachingEquipment: Camping Set (4,850M), Cooking Set (4,770), Hunting Kit (4,695), Medical Kit (4,620), Alchemy Kit (4,370), Portable Camera (4,170), Portable Radio (4,020), Housing Contract (2,770), Rings of Matrimony (2,270M)Armament Specialization: GauntletArmament Techniques: Body Rush, Ground Launcher, Heavy Fish, Rising Star, Stun GunBio Spells: Cure Affliction, Healing Wave, Earth BreakerFree Association: The Kitsune Sanctuary, The Great Monastery TempleCompanions: The Great Fox*, Chiyo, AshoQuests: The Great White OneThe basics of my build is that I was born and raised in the Kitsune Sanctuary where I became friends with Asho and his little sister. In my youth I got sent over to the Great Monastery Temple as part of an exchange student program to build up relations under Chiyo who wants to counter the Imperial Bannermen and the monks at the temple taught me the martial arts. I begin my journey assisting Asho in rescuing his little sister. Chiyo is tagging along with us, but will ultimately depart from our company when we get to Hasing City. On our journey, Asho and I encountered the Great Fox who was on the hunt for the White One that ended up escaping from their seal. Helping her to kill the creature at last, she decided to tag along with us and ended up imprinting on me, starting our relationship.Home BuildingSettlement: Chissaum RegionHome Placement: City (Kitsune Sanctuary)Steady Work: N/AHouse Size: Mansion (270 Marks)House Design: OrientalHousehold Gadgets: Computer System and Extranet, Television Sets and Video PlayersRooms: Training Grounds Hub, Onsen Hotsprings, Storage Area, Home LibraryHome Quests: Family DevelopmentAfter saving Asho's sister, I'm basically going to return to the Kitsune Sanctuary with my Lolibaba kitsune wife and have kemomimi fox children.
>>85030668I forgot to type my own name. Nyooooo.My character's name is Nama Ken
>>85030668>>85030684no, his name is now (male)
Lamentations 2 mechanics are fine and its lore is great. But it would do better as an actual product (Video Game or Table-top RPG) than a CYOA, especially with its niche/heavy focus on kemono races and humans living together in a post-apocalyptic landscape.
>>85029456I’m just going to ignore the blatant homophobia under the option for Lovers where it requires them to be the opposite sex (and is explicitly stated), but I’ll give the benefit of the doubt that it wasn’t malicious and just accidental. Nevertheless, unless you’re taking time to explore the culture’s thoughts about acceptable attraction and making same-sex relations a crime in your world then it seems kind of pointless to add this mechanical ban as an afterthought.Like if the cyoa was like “Requirement: They have to be the opposite sex, although same-sex relations have been heard of but many governments frown upon it on Hymn so- proceed with caution.” Then I wouldn’t mind it as much, but the way it’s implemented now just comes across at best as someone forgetting gay people exist and at worst as an unnecessary political statement from the author. (Just my two cents anyways, I’d be interested in hearing other people’s thoughts.)
do you think it's scummy if i steal a bunch of the abilities and options from cyoas and put them in the videogame i am making?
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>>85030836>Now just comes across at best someone forgetting gay people exist.I mean, unironically. If you're an American and you ignore the internet, your chance at meeting someone that is gay is at is 3%, bisexual at 1.4% and .2% chance of meeting a transgender.So it is easy to completely forget that gays exists, especially if they're not part of your social circle and you are outside the heavily populated cities.
>setting contains culture/race using technology hundreds or even thousands of years ahead of everyone else and for some reason no one feels the need to learn or propagate such practical information realisticallyThis really takes me out of it. It's like some brain worm is telling people to be stagnant and remain in the dark ages when when dwarves are using toilets and humans are still using chamber pots. Is trade not a thing?
>>85030291>>85030350>>85030505>>85030569>oh no, someone didn't mention me (the shittiest author around) for 2.4 secondsWhy are you here? Are you really this lonely? Do you have nothing better to do? This general would flourish and become a literal utopia if you left.
>>85030926The Chinese were technologically ahead of medieval Europe and Central Asia for centuries until colonization. Both sides at interaction with China, but did nothing to copy or propagate knowledge from there until much later.The Horn of Africa and Western Africa were far technologically better and more organized than Central Africa, but you didn't see propagation. Just because it exists. Doesn't mean everyone will do it or have a motive to do it.
>>85030961>The Chinese were technologically ahead of medieval Europe and Central Asia for centuries until colonization.
>>85030947You shouldn't talk about Italics that way, lmao.
>>85030971Yes, bro. It is a historical fact that Europe didn't surpass China until the 1700s. In fact, Spain went bankrupt with its silver just to do trade with China. Now prove otherwise, or shut up for being a shitposter and trying to derail the thread.
>>85030971The Chinese invented rice, which is one of the most efficient foods for population expansion even to this day.
>>85030668(Male) is a pretty cool guy, eh lewds lolis and doesn't afraid of anything.
>>85030996I'm the one who invented rice, asshole.
>>85030878Bros, I'm tired of reading left to right. Are there any CYOAS that written from right to left in the english language?sorry but you forgot an "are" between "that" and "written".2/10, see me after class.
>>85030996The Chinese didn't invent rice. The Chinese discovered rice. Also, one of the most efficient foods for population expansion is Corn and Wheat. Mostly, wheat though.
>>85030989>It is a historical fact that Europe didn't surpass China until the 1700sSource?
>>85031054>The Chinese didn't invent rice. The Chinese discovered rice.No, the Chinese invented rice.
>>85029652What does "sneed" mean?
>>85031064The Chinese discovered rice, you little faggot. This is like saying the Native Americans invented potatoes. They discovered the vegetables and cultivated for their own use as a staple food, but it had already existed in the wild and was eaten by birds, insects, and other animals.
>>85030015How is this a cyoa?
>>85031078seriously need elongated earwax dick
>>85031027The Great Fox is the smuggest lolibaba kemono. Look at her.
>>85031111unfortunately I don't find furry stuff attractive. I'm not sure. I like animals, but when I see something like that I just feel repulsed and disgusted.
>>85031064>>85031089They invented rice cultivation at least. Honestly, it's possible they did enough artificial selection on it over the centuries that it wouldn't be unreasonable to say they "invented" the staple food version of it, it either
>>85030112Thank you anon>>85029988To be fair Asian women are on another level.
>>85031122Sounds like you got personal issues homo.
>>85031089>>85031154>>85031064>>85031054did you know that the Katana was originally chinese, and the j*ps stole its design
>>85031122It's because you're a newfag soul who's never been an anthro ayy before.
>>85031122>I feel repulsed and disgusted>At a cartoon drawing.Reddit is waiting in the wings for you.
>>85030926In my setting something like this happened there are small places where technology is on the level or even higher than modern day but outside them reality kind of breaks down making complex machinery to malfunction.
>>85031184You mean kemono? I've been a weeb since the early 90s and I've browsed this site since around 2007.>>85031186I never liked that place, I don't like making accounts and the layout of the site sucked. I found 4chan sometime around 2007 due to anime and I've never left.>>85031172Maybe. Furry stuff just revolts me though, its gross. Its like...I don't know. I look at a cute animal, and I like it, but I don't want to fuck it. Do some people look at a cute baby and decide they want to fuck it? It must be something wired wrong in someone's brain. Though then again I don't find the furry stuff cute, it just weirds me out. Maybe the uncanny valley problem? I should research this more.
>>85031203>Do some people look at a cute baby and decide they want to fuck it?Retard-kun I...
>>85031231I have autism, please understand. I literally don't know how people think or what is considered normal, hence why I have been a shutin for over 20 years now.
>>85031203kemonos are anthros too yes
>>85030961>The Chinese were technologically ahead of medieval Europe and Central Asia for centuries until colonization.This was before the West happened and the rates of advancement increased a thousand fold.
>>85030989>It is a historical fact that Europe didn't surpass China until the 1700s....The ancient Greco-Romans were comparable.
>>85030961>>85030989t. harper scum
>arabs and whites take gunpowder and do amazing innovational things with it>'y-yeah, w-well china found it first'lolthe charm surrounding euro supremacy was that northern europe was a dump while other places were thrivingthe sudden change/contrast is fun
Oh great. White supremacists.
>>85031409yeah this shit is lamefuck politics
>>85031184>anthro ayyayy lmao?
>>85031435politics is intertwined with everything
>>85031409Those darn 4channers and their darn racism!
>>85031186reddit is full of furries
>>85030867Yes of course. Atleast try and get the author on board will probably improve the game. Not that the video game made by some scrote bottomfeeder will be any good anyway
>>85031093Well you choose the path, I guess
>>85030867Authors steal a bunch of ideas and images and slap their name on it along with a few sentences of writing so they can post for free on an anonymous website. What do you think?
Call me when Tankista releases his CYOA.
(you) me a CYOA for a guaranteed build. Not lamentations I will definitely do that but I am too tired for 40 pages today
There's a long ass Fallout cyoa, completed, but it was commissioned with the "It must not contain any images whatsoever" as instructions.>https://imgur.com/a/jRN9FoVWhat do you do in this scenario? Do you improvise visuals in your head using the power of i m a g i n a t i o n ? What are your thoughts on imageless cyoas in general?
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>Find sleeping gods>Claim to worship them>Proceed to rip body parts from them and remove them from their homes.>Use their extracted blood to create furries and use them as slaves to wage war.Humans in Lamentation deserved to get nuke.
>>85031780>40 pages>The CYOA is literally 10 pages + 2 for optional home.customization.
>>85031796I can appreciate the hustle.
>>85029456This would be so much better if not for the furries focus.
>>85031807Which is a testament for how I am in no state to enjoy the newest oc masterpiece, can't even count. Now post something short arigato
>>85031793they only work if they are really short
>>85029456>still no reddit repostImagine being so boring even low garbage don't want you.
>>85031880This man goes on reddit every single day.
>>85029430>How many Worm CYOA's are there now anyway?At least 10 (not including NSFW).>if they're that easy to make, I'm just gonna make one myselfThere are a lot of CYOAs because there is a big fanfic community (over 10,000 fanfics, believe it or not). They aren't easy.Good Worm CYOA needs:1) setting-appropriate powers (>>85021609 is actually good in this, btw)2) coherent framework that allows protagonist to survive without becoming a roadkill in under a week (or slave to gangs)3) a way to punch out tougher-than-Cthulhu endboss to have life expectancy longer than 2 years (note that #1 precludes godmodding).Many can't even manage one of those.
>>85031880Reddit ended up getting the original release of the CYOA because it was put on imgur by Italics and Reddit stole the link. To get this new updated version requires someone to upload it to imgur and feed it to reddit.
>>85029456Someone read this cyoa for me i can't work myself up to start it
>>85031948for 3), since the power levels are retarded in worm, why not just retcon endbringers and cauldron out of existence? there's a common sentiment in the worm fandom that the street level arcs were the best anyway, so it's not like the high level fuckery is that essential to the setting
>>85032032b-but muh Simurgh/PTV-proof strat !
>>85032004>Humans find the creator gods sleeping and use them to create magic and kemono races. >Civilization becomes super advanced, but one day humanity wakes up one of the gods and it destroys civilization.>Humans and Kemono have to rebuild in the aftermath and lament on the destruction together.>Kemono women happily marry and start families with Human men.>Time SkipYou go off on an adventure with your own Kemono best friends to help solve conflicts in the post-apocalyptic world.
>>85032032Not having to figure out the puzzle of how you would defeat the big guys removes half the fun of a Worm CYOA.
>>85032032>for 3), since the power levels are retarded in worm, why not just retcon endbringers and cauldron out of existence?Scion and EBs, you mean. IMO, this is an acceptable solution, but most CYOAs don't do anything about it for some reason.If you want to remove Cauldron, you'd need to describe how things change without them. Chances are, cape ("superhero/supervillain") culture wouldn't exist, or would be different.
>>85031948>please play my reddit cyoaIt's getting embarassing
Italics here. Thanks for voting last thread. Eternal Blue CYOA came out on top with a total of 11 votes, so it'll be something to look forward to in the future.The Magi Case will be my next big released CYOA, so look forward to its release. Though it'll be quite long mostly due to all the spells and companions.
>>85032265Eta on magi case?
>>85029534>Wide sweeps>Is not a sweepItalics wtf
>>85030989History isn't a game of civilisation. It doesn't make sense to talk about any one region surpassing any other region IN GENERAL; you have to be specific. You have to talk about industrial output or geographical area conquered or something. There's no big objective tech tree.That other guy is totally correct. It's weird for there to be no info trade without a concerted effort to avoid it.
>>85031866Thanks!I would believe my grandfather to be a magician any second to be honest>Affinity: WaterNo clue what power that entails, but it sure beats air and earth and I am not feeling classic fire today. Dark blue scales, details grey to black on horns and wingsPoints:>Improved Wings Tier 2 (-5)The idea of carrying around "decorative" dead tissue on my back is abhorrent. Flight is a convenient byproduct.>Timeless Tier 3 (-10)Taking immortality wherever I can>Formshifting Tier 2 (-6)Human form for blending in, dragon form for raw power>Draconic Magic Tier 1 (-3)Pursuing magic studies will be a great pass time between continuing to spend my time on /cyoag/ and writefagging>Improved Senses Tier 1 (-1)Great bang for the buck, being superhuman is always sweet>Improved Celerity Tier 1 (-1)Same reasoning>Draconic Claws Tier 1 (-1)Make that half-dragon form useful>Improved Vitality Tier 1 (-2)Same logic as above. Hope it applies to true dragon form too>Improved Affinity Tier 1 (-1)Changing affinity to Spirit, I bet thats an elemtn. Not sure what it does, but beats waterI will take the blessing and first continue to live a normal life, with some amazing perks. While playing around with them, I will inevitably run into the super natural world that was so long unknown to me, and adventure surely will follow.Is the half-dragon roommate cyoa related to this? I only know the titles, though it may fly around in my download folder somewhere
>>85032298July. Though, looking at the size of the CYOA. I don't think it's going to get many builds on release.
>>85032382>Is the half-dragon roommate cyoa related to this?Yep. From my understanding what I posted was technically a remaster of the latter, but the author never finished it.
>>85032265You should have made a ranked or alternative poll, assuming such a site exists.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Y3jE3B8HsE&list=PLNCHVwtpeBY4mybPkHEnRxSOb7FQ2vF9c&index=2
>>85031866This CYOA became obsolete since Dragonfall
>>85032405I'll hold off my release till a few days after to give it breathing room then
>>85032413Nah, I like it better. I'm still in my own world with my family, except I have cool powers, my ancestor was a badass and the narrator is a cute. I vaguely understand the appeal of Dragonfall, but it doesn't attract me.
where the fuck is fantasy race creator?
>>85032424You can go ahead and release your CYOA right now. No need to wait on me. I and I'm sure many others would be happy to read what you wrote.>>85032409I don't think ranked voting would be needed at all.
>>85032554It also won't be ready till early julyThank you though, I like your cyoas a lot
>>85031844>masterpiecelol, lmao even
>>85032569That is kind of you man. Just to make sure. Isn't your CYOA the one about being from a mage family, someone died in the family or you got invited back, and you have to deal with your family members and the magic that you inherited. Right?
>>85032591No it's a sci-fi cyoa to start
>>85032137There is no puzzle. The endbringers are invulnerable full stop. The puzzle is "where is a person with a dead shard power that bypasses these protections". There is no one with a living shard to have one, and if you think that's possible you don't understand the setting. I will give you grave though, if your plan was to like launch them into space or something I don't remember there being anything stopping that and it's kinda strange it never happened or was mentioned.I think you are mistaking the high-level characters powers with the endbringers, because those powers are interesting to imagine a plan for because there is actual variation there.
>>85032617Oh, I'm sorry. I must gotten you mixed up with someone else. Go ahead and give me the run down man.
>>85032195>Husbando BuilderHonestly surprised how great the cyoas directed my way were so far. I guess all good things need to come to an end. The premise does not really allow me to engage it sincerely without deviating from it, so I'll just try my best>Archetype: Driven GeniusAt least this one is going to be consumed by something else. He can have his cathartic outbursts, I'll understand and cope by going on my own 'solemn night hikes' or whateverTraits:>ColdYeah stay the fuck away from me>AcademicYeah stay the fuck in your room>CulturedYeah respect my fucking boundaries>GamerYeah get your fucking dopamine elsewhere>PureN-no husbando-kun, locking eyes or being in the same room is too lewd for me>Mind: Machinist Genius GigabrainI would respect that in a bro, immensely. So given the traits, I hope he keeps his hands on his workbench. If he is willing to do that I GUESS we can spend some time in the workshop together, platonically>Body: DisciplineYeah stay in your fucking workshop, nerd>Soul: Permancence, Soul CalibreNow we are talking. Giving me immortality is the long lost reason to stick around I guess. Maybe we can be friends after all. Literal roommates. Fuck off with that dirty look faggotAnd I guess if that happens, getting another buff while around wont be all that bad>Waifu abilities: Master Chef, Wiki WaifuBitch please, I already swallowed my new gay roommate (..) and now I have to hang my balls at the door as well. Master Chef is nice, I enjoy cooking and not sucking dock (...) at it is cool. I suck at information management so wiki is actually a life saver, though I am not sure I'd take the gay roommate for it>Project: UpheavalBased?>DrawbacksAs funny as "Barren Future" would be, I m good, thanksWAIT NEVER MIND I TAKE THE WAIFUWell now I have a waifu that behaves like an autistic ass gay man kept at arms length. New fetish, thanks
>>85032675Can't say I didn't take you on an adventure anon, looks like it was an emotional one too>>85032661Thousand year old decadent human empire I'd beginning to collapse. It relied on advanced gene splicing to create different clades of human. It has largely forgotten it's past and various divergent cultures exist across the solar system. There is no FTL. The player will make a build then pick their way through successive ever more devastating crisises that sweep across the solar system and we see where they end up
>>85032641>There is no one with a living shard to have oneFlechette
>>85032762No lasting regrets, nope. I hope my struggle was a fun read to you too, I definitely discovered some new emotions there
>>85032641Knocking them into space requires you be able to not get killed when they stop sandbagging, having the power to actually move them and faster than they can move away. Not exactly a casual solution.
>>85032775I really enjoyed your build Anon yeah
>>85032762Sounds like a pretty cool idea for a CYOA, especially for a sci-fi CYOA set in space. Usually, they're some form of survival or shipbuilding. But your idea is neat in the fact the choices, I persume are shaping the overall narrative of the different human races in the system to get to some kind of open ending or defined ending.> It relied on advanced gene splicing to create different clades of human. I originally wanted to go a magical version of this for Lamentation. The Comrades would have been Humans that consumed Ancient Being blood to survive a collapse.
>>85029471The version I have from last August looks different, is this an updated version or something?
>>85032991Yes. It's a redux version of the CYOA updating and streamlining a lot of things and changing up the lore.
>>85032866Yeah hopefully I execute we on it longest cyoa ive done before this is four pages.Yeah the intent is to have several 'endings' anons can get to but they will be prett open ended and hopefully by then they know where their character is headed anyway
>>85032771Fuck I hate to admit it but you're right. Sort of a plothole tho I think because wildbow goes on and on about how everything was a great big plan by the Thinker or whatever and how they keep all their most powerful shards to themselves and yada yada yada. Like specifically the Uber powerful shards are nearly all dead shards because they weren't intended to ever come out. But whatever I guess the thinkers big Uber plan would have used some mind control or rearranged a pebble on a beach to make Flechette think of her mother and miss her shot...>>85032781Yeah but it's a million times more possible than a lot of the other things they tried, and it's literally never mentioned to my memory. But I agree, it's very unlikely, plus a lot of the endbringers have powers that would allow them to simply return.
>>85032675>>85032788You get the good ending then, and I'll redo it knowing that I am building the ultimate waifu instead. I was going to ask if there is a waifu builder in a similar vein, but I guess the author is just a cunt like that (nothing but respect)>Archetype: Driven GeniusPeople who pursue their own projects are extremely attractive to me. Some lashing out is okay, as long as it's not directed my way. Night walks together this timeTraits:>RecluseShe is MY waifu and better stay in and around the cave. Hopefully some outdoor adventures are still on the table, though I will always be there to sort the confusing moving parts out for the autist>CreativeHot & draws art for my CYOA>PureSomeone being all over you gets old within a week, so it better stay special>Cold & CaringThough they may appear to be opposites on first glance, this particular blend is quite simple. Cold to everyone else, caring to me (and maybe some VIPs)>MY Mind abilities: Genius, Inspiring, Perfect MemorySmarter = Betterer. Inspiring will mostly be used to craft compelling narratives. IQ boost is direly needed. Perfect Memory so I don't forget my dreams and shower thoughts all the time>MY Body ability: RegenerationFor reckless idiocy>MY soul ability: Soul Calibre, Transcendence (Machinist)Spending time together being a boon is great, and we both don't have to leave often, hopefully. Machinism is still cool & sharing that is even better>Waifu abilities: Domestimancy, BeautifulI have no excuses>Project: UpheavalIt's not as radical as it sounds, I swear. Mostly about making everyone love each other or something. Not me or my waifu though. They can have world peace, but over there. Stay off my lawn
>>85033049Two builds what a treat. I did consider doing a waifu builder too but I feel like there's loads of specialised waifu builders plus the seethe when I released this put me off a bit
>>85032195Why are they all white
>>85033014>changing up the loreWhat changed, exactly ? Nobody will do the effort of cross-referencing the lore.
>>85033181Oh you made it? Honestly, the premise of going all in on a Husbando builder that you can technically treat as a waifubuilder is hilarious. Though I would admittedly have dismissed it immediately based on the title if it wasn't for this format, which ultimately ended up more fun with the base reluctance on the first run.Your writing style is nice in this in my opinion, right amount of flowery without making reading a chore. I am no expert on waifu builders, but your spectrum of choices and descriptions were evocative too. If you ever get hit with inspirations there's some counter-seethe.You'll get a third build with me actually taking drawbacks another day, so while a lot of anons might share my initial eugh reaction at least someone played it thrice after getting through that
>>85033272Thanks anon I really appreciate that, means more than you probably realiseI want to make unique cyoa if I can
>>85033261The largest has the Nightmares removed from the CYOA, no longer marking them as a threat or in the CYOA. Enigmas are new additions, they're basically superbosses like you would encounter from Final Fantasy made from the dreams of the Ancient Beings that cause destruction. The Fog of Vlach, the Rot of Ostersphere, etc. All terrible acts made by the Enigmas.Minor stuff has the La Festa Syndicate no longer being doomed to fail. Lung Comrades became focused on lightning/electricity only be used as super soldiers and Salamanders took their fire abilities to be a race of blacksmith that engineered weapons alongside the Rat Kings. And there is several other large and small thing.
>>85031780You did Dragonfall, how about one less "sex and power" and more genuine and comfy?
Italics, on average. How easy would it be for an average human guy to get a Comrade girlfriend like the cow, rat, or monkey? What would marriage be like?
>>85033353I didn't do Dragonfall (yet), but I love genuine and comfy. Can't compare the two thoughI am past my bedtime so I will just let it flow, behold the kobold sister-wife build>Species: KoboldHigh reproduction. Obviously, I wont be a huge fighter with this choice, so I hope the extra Embers give me some cool magic. If you've seen my animus build by any chance, yes I am making the same mistake again>Scales: MottledAlready not a huge fighter; and I somehow cannot imagine a Kobold with a relevant breath weapon (okay now I can but the die is cast). Magic resistance is nice, but I don't plan on getting hitPhysical Boons:>Boss of the LitterChad of Kobolds. Pure vanity, but I will atleast be eye-level with humans. >Tough CookieMostly to cement my status as Kobold royaltySo far, I made myself budget dragon spawn>Meaningful MienI shall be the most trustworthy Kobold around. Disregard the hand-rubbing>Pheromones>SiblingSister wife. Once again, there is no excuses, Kobolds are rare now, and I am going the path I have to to fix it, okay?Spells:>Secret GatewayPocket Dimenson! Given my regal mud brown scales, it's probably resemblant of a pig pen at first. My offspring will be put to work to create koboldtopia though.>Flesh From BoneI will spend my entire life toothless, sister-wife will have to pre-chew. My legions of Iasons foes will be the guardians of my pocket dimension and arm in the outside world>Dragon Gods GIftThough dragon god may be a stretch, I will acquire a champion worthy of the blessing. He can marry a kobold princess too, if he swings that way>Location: Fanged GladeI fear no dragon, for many reasons. 1: They probably do not consider me a rival. 2: Pheromones 3: watch>Companion: AuraShe seems nice. Also, a great protector. I bet she will be thrilled about all the grandchildren, and grandgrandchildren or whoever that works in english>Items: Your StuffGotta keep posting on /cyoag/ somehow>Fate: Saviour of Dragons
>>85033335>Nightmares are gonebooo. at least the fog spooks exist. but the enigma doesn't give quite the same feel as the black hole of misery at the center of fuck you valley desu
>>85031880Lmao it's funny how yesterday a guy was arguing that adding anti reddit elements to cyoas wouldn't work cause they'd edit it out for upvotes and here you have a italics cyoa which is guaranteed upvotes being ignored cause it's too much of a hassle
>>85032641>There is no puzzle. The endbringers are invulnerable full stop. EBs are effectively invulnerable to brute force (this is what "effectively, galaxy mass" is about - regular damage gets dissipated across dimensions, you need do deliver truly obscene amounts of damage for anything to get through).But this doesn't matter if you are using dimensional attacks that bypass those defences. Flechette is simply the most obvious one. You can go with Siberian, Damsel of Distress, Scrub, and others who have "all-or-nothing" effects. Its just EBs will stop horsing around and will murderize the fuck out of anyone with those powers before they get in position to damage them.>>85033031IIRC, "Uber powerful shards" simply have their restrictions jailbroken.
>>85029471It scares me how similar this looks to my own world
>>85033881based dimensional crossposter
I'm just gonna write this shitHis name is unknown, but this is his themehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EQVsQsUmu-I>Striker>Grappler>Awareness>Dirty Fighter>Ambusher>He's Strong>Aerial Fighter>Fancy>Imagination Power>Exotic Moves>Smooth KOs>That's it?>Biting strength>Redirection>Just a scratch>Chi Bullshit and Aiki Magic>Tism++ and Training AddictThis man is a fucking nutcase
>>85033331go back to the shadow realm, faggot
>>85033992Once you go back to posting about reddit
>>85030226Here’s the map that was posted last thread.
>>85033802I know about the original version of Lamentation being on Reddit. But I don't think my CYOAs will do well or get upvoted on Reddit.>>85033793Removing the Nightmares seemed like the right choice. When I looked over them. I found that they were too similar to the Vampires in Apocrypha. And to make the CYOA more geared towards (You)R adventure in a strange real world, they would get in the way. The Enigmas, I think make a fine replacement as they are nightmarish creatures that come into the world cause havoc and add in a sense of unexplained mystery. One of my biggest regrets for Lamentation. Is that as a CYOA. It is limited in presentation both in what I can type/talk about and what I can show. I wish I had a bigger and better selection of artwork to present its world and draw people into it and could give it a wider scope.
>>85033881What are you working on Anon?
>>85034010>I don't think my CYOAs will do well or get upvoted on Reddit.This>>85030836 was one of the most upvoted comment on the original lamentation
>>85034058Yeah. I don't think my CYOA will do well or get upvoted on Reddit. >blatant homophobia.My sides.
>>85029456gonna need a good rest before getting to build this
>>85029471>Name: Herschel Nimney>Male>Region: Pendragon>Reason: In Search of Knowledge>Continuance Talents:AlchemyDetectionMachinerySmithing>Social Talents:Equipment ManagementQuick Learner>Equipment:Construction Kit -100Miners Kit -250Grappling Hook -250Portable Camera -200Housing Contract -1250>Armament: Firearms>Bio-Art Spells:Body DoubleReflectWindstream>Free AssociationThe Order of the SkyfarersThe Sandstone AcademyThe Telos Architects>Companions:RondelleYevetLomania>Quests:An Adventurer's Guide to the HymnTerminal Station OneThe Sunken Treasures of the Olous Luminad>Hearth and Home>Region: Gravis Region>Home Placement: Rural>Home Size: Mansion -2000>Home Design: Mountain Home>Household Gadgets:Computer System and Extranet Service, Electronic Home Appliances, Home Maintenance System -150, Orchestral Player and Radio -150, Television Sets and Video Players -150.>Home Additions:Alchemy Laboratory, Crafting Workshop, Dungeon System, Home Fortifications, Home Library -300, Household Garden -300, Inn System -300, Storage Area -300, Weapon Workshop -300.Tavern Owner and part time researcher/explorer of the Gravis Region. Usually never seen inside the tavern much and leaves it to be ran by his childhood friend Calso who is a part owner of the place. Spends most of his time deep within his work, researching the old machineries that lie about in the region and refining his craft to one day recreate them in its entirety. Has a very welcoming attitude towards anyone looking to broaden their knowledge and seek out ancient ruins and technologies, and is probably one of the only people who can tolerate extended periods of time around Caelum residents and their incessant gloating and pride.
>>85034164>Comrade Name: Calso>Gender: Female>Race: Ceryneian Hind>Backstory: Commoner>Relationship: Close Family>Personality: Gentle>Life Events: Explorations, Next Generation>Continuance Talents: Agriculture, Culinary Arts, Survival>Social Talents: Conversation, Educated, Homecare.>Fighting Style: Defensive Method>Weapon Specialization: Magic>Racial Techniques: Pathfinder, Plant Healing, Root Trap.Grew up with Herschel and always dreamed of opening up a tavern to have a place of their own. Grew up in Pendragon but always wanted to leave to pursue her dream. When the time came for the both of them to go down their own paths, she went everywhere she could to broaden her horizons, making her way across the Western Continent. Eventually she met with Herschel again and they decided to create a place out in the Gravis Fields, acting as both a tavern and research outpost.
Ok... I'm done complaining. Mark this day... as the day Doku ENTERs the fray.I'm the man who will one day stand on top of the CYOA world>Believe it
What cyoa author do you miss the most
>>85034347I would choose an evolved Army of One if not for the fact there is no way to control them besides the fact they are an identical copy of you at summon. Letting your clones live on seems like a bad idea because then you'll just run into the Twice situation where they'll try to rebel if you work them too much.
>>85034347eleventh hour and its evolution. now i can get a job somewhere really far and get back home instantly. >I'm the man who will one day stand on top of the CYOA worldyoure gonna have to do a lot more than power pickers if you want to beat gods like BMA or Savestate
>>85034356>Long ForTankista, Italics, PCA, Liminal, Hali>Depression and Pain Tunebuggy, Kit, DSA, ZBG, Old Ordion, Old Observer>Pure AgonyCelt, Acheld, Gil, Scott, SDA, Aromage, unDEFINED
>>85034455>gilshitpost list and/or posted by gil himself. go back gil
>>85034455You must add Tok to that list and then it's purrfect.
>>85034448Heh... I'm just getting warmed upNext up-> a hearthstone deck building cyoa and then a buddy cop cyoaGotta run through the motions before getting high concept you know
>>85034347>Selective stasis>Miracle metabolismWatch me become the healthiest person ever by just sleeping and eating a lot.
>>85034455>ItalicsWhy am I on the list?
>>85034500Italics changed, bro...Back then he gave us simple, nice OCs, but now even his one-pager are ocean-deep levels of lore...
>Tok, Italics and Gil all on the thread at the same timeFuck me...
>>85034510>Back then>Unaware of shit like motherfucking Order
>>85034510>What is PPP
>>85034515W-We should at least go on a date anon.
>>85034356None, long live the City Witch author who is based and handsome and absolutely not me
>>85034478Tok is a barnacle attached to this hull and isn't going away ever.
>>85034643>not the Innermost InstituteI'll allow since they're brothers in release.
>>85034510I haven't released a one page CYOA in two years. Also my original CYOA releases dating back to like 2015 were all multi page. I did short releases afterwards or so. And I did Kins Wolfe and Colossian (Short CYOAs) last year.After the release of the Magi Case and Echoes PSY. I will definetly be going back to medium/decent sized CYOAs.Eternal Blue, a CYOA that is somewhat similar in feeling to Megaman Legends world is going to be first CYOA to return to that simple form. You focus entirely on adventure with small lore details and such. Then from there you will have Kins Wolfe, Colossian, Apocrypha, etc updates and OC.
>>85034674Unless you post Magi Case or Echoes, you're not Italics. Do not respond to my post ever again, faker.
>>85034466Anon misses himCope
>>85034657No. He have to die at some point. Find a new hobby. Hell, go to prison. We'll be free, bros....
>>85034687Bro, your meds now.
>>85034356Lady Eggs. You can just see the potential...
>>85034773-> >>85033353I still miss her anon
>>85034347Selective stasis and miracle metabolism. Honing these skills will be comfy.
>>85034718>WIPNice try, faggot. It's not the full release, stop pretending to be someone else.
>>85034797That page was never released before. Don't make me cancel Echoes PSY.
>>85034834>implying I care about Italics' OCGo on, 'Italics', cancel your most anticipated OC because some meanie on the internet called you out lol. If you were the real deal (which you aren't, of course) I would be laughing forever.
>>85034834...Dude, just ignore him. Threats won't work, and punishing everyone for a chaosfag is hardly fair.
>>85034862>>85034873I wasn't being serious about cancelling Echoes PSY. I was just punking with him back since it seemed like he cared for it. >Most anticipated OC.>EchoesNo.
>>85034894But of course, dude, we totally want Magi Case and GrandBlue and everything else kek
>>85034356Ordion when he used to make cool shit like Fantasy Nation Builder
>pointless bait Enough, post cyoas you liked that aren't posted enough.
>>85034562>PPPPiss Poop Puke?
>>85034562Penis Penetrating Peehole
>>85034032I mean the art. It reminds me of mine a little bit
>>85034562Peepee Pleasure Pumping
>>85034562Portland People's Party
>>85034010I’m liking the updates to the lore of Lamentations.
>>85034562Papa Pedo's Pizza
>>85034718>your meds now.Dumb plebbit phrase. Next you'll tell him to touch grass.
>>85035212No, how could this have happened.
Does anyone have the cyoa where you choose an original goddess to be your lover? It's similar to Divinity in Chains by Tok, but it was a different cyoa. You choose between many goddesses, including the goddesses of Fire, Metal, Knowledge etc, and each Goddess grants you a thematic power.
>>85035887bro you dreamt that shit up, it isn't real
>>85034445>control themWhy on earth would you rebel against yourself? Do you hate yourself or something?
>>85032265Can you post a few companions or some snippets from Magi Case to tide us over until August?
>>85031866This CYOA made Dragonfall redundant for me.
>>85036038Its if you use them for an extended time. If you are using a clone for a task you are probably already lazy because you didnt use it yourself. If you keep them out without dematerializing them and summoning new ones they'll slowly branch off from you from the moment they split.
>>85036074Why not. Here is the Archmagus (Political Leader) of the Ager Clan that specializes in Chronomancy. She is marriageable character for the Player, optional friend, and an optional antagonist character. Roloi is over 35 years old and has CSD (Chronostasis Disease) due to being partially stuck together with the timestream. She has plans to take complete control of the timestream to create "Fate" and potentially purge all possible outcomes she doesn't like. She has issues with/doesn't like people who cannot be observed on the timestream such as several of the Auctors and other special individuals. The Player isn't supposed to meet her, but we know how build possibilities go, thus peaking her interest. Stopping her or not is up to the Player since this is more of a personal investigations (Quest)
>>85034356Guess I was an unwanted child then...
>>85034347are these AI generated surreal arts?cool
>>85034718Old Bloods ftw.
>>85036403Anything prevents you from using hot art for your character
Man. Apotheosis Naruto CYOA would be so much better if he included all the jutsus from the manga/show, removed the joke options/quests, had options broken down by timeline you decide to join in, and removed the OCDONUT characters. It's right on the edge.
>>85036608It would be better had he not made a cringe anime cyoa period LOL
>>85036594No, not really. The Magi Investigator (You) can be a hot older man, an ugly fat bald old man, or a plain jane that thinks she's in a shoujo. What you look like it completely determined by you.
Y'all got classic CYOA deals with a branched storyline to follow through?
>>85036679We don't do classic CYOAs as in the books. These are more open-prompts/settings that have the set-up and you do the end. Though we do have CYOAs that have an ending, but you gotta write the middle part of how you got there from your choices.
>>85036661>a hot older manitalics is confirmed a homo
>>85036800Older man and lolibaba is a good pairing.
>>85036800stop talking about yourself
lol at italics still failing to hide his blatant distaste for gay peopleIt is particularly funny since he didnt actually have to put in that limitation, kek
>>85030836Italics may actually just be incredibly autistic if he thinks brain chemistry is so limited and linear
Baitposters, nyot like this.
>>85030836>>85036882>>85036889...There is nothing preventing you from making your comrade gay in their customization page. Show me where it says this. If it is anything legal like marriage, then get fucked you can't expect whole cultures to just change and accept that. Shit is still awkward today.
>>85036948basedmarriage is a heterosexual ritual only (also a financial trap)
>>85036882Sounds like Basedalics deserves a raise.
yo new OC drop?
>>85036948The complaint doesn't even make sense consider Humans and Furries couldn't marry or fuck in the CYOA until after the apocalypse. So like they only recently approved interracial marriages.
>>85037028Yeah, you can't expect every setting to be progressive, not even just regarding homos.
>>85036456I'm not included either, but I console myself with the fact that I'm actively creating my next CYOA so it's hard to miss me when I'm right here
>>85037042Wrong. You WILL cater to me.
!*!*!*!* is dead.And lolifags killed him.
>>85037050Same. Might have it done by the end of the weekend if I'm lucky with the brainwaves. Gonna be some artsy fartsy fey shit.What's yours about?
Why do people in Lamentations eat meat when people look like so many different types of animals?That'd be weird as fuck.
>>85037147How can you eat bacon when you look like a pig?
>>85037120A big ol' ~10 page companion-focused death game. It's still a ways away, but I'm making new strides with it daily
>>85037162I don't eat baconAnd pigs are kin yes
>>85029577>>85029595>>85029612why are almost all the girls shortstacks?
>>85037147Birds in real life eat other birds. Deer outright eat meat. Horses can eat birds whole. Fish eat other fish.The people have no relation to the animals despite having animal features.
>>85034347Evolved Selective Status, aging two hours a day for about 10x the human lifespan and perfect sleep? Count me in.
Um, perhaps a stupid question but... what exactly are these things? Some kind of mental exercise? Fuel for daydreaming? Creative writing?
>>85037448All of the above taken to natural extremes. The PDFs get rough.
>>85033881based collective unconsciousness dweller
>>85037448>Fuel for daydreaming?Yes, also argument fuel>Creative writing?Yes
>>85032265Good luck, Italics!
>>85034674Quick question, Italics. Weren't you working on a short Cyoa set in the world of Magi Case, too? Or was that some wannabe messing with the thread?
>>85035113He's still around. Scottish just got involved with climate change protests, so he doesn't have as much free time.
>>85035887I think that was one of the /trash CYOAs. Divine Dating Protocol, or Divine Marriage Agency. Something like that.
>>85037448There's a FAQ in op, retard
>>85037448They're sort of in-between writing prompts and the character building section of a pen and paper rpg. Many explicitly allow for inserting yourself as the main character. We're at the end of this thread, but if there's a topic or genre that interests, trying asking for it. We've got a bunch of people who like to dig through their personal collections.
>>85029809The /trash thread is for NSFW CYOAs. Historically, we don't link to them, but someone's been posting the link for the last couple of months.
>>85031866Why post the incomplete remake of Half Dragon Roommate? Ferrean finished the original, complete with . . .you know, the roommates.
>>85037741OC donut steel tavern
>>85037777Donut Steel Tavern?
>>85035887Thats a qq cyoa like by chastity, look over there.
>>85037917Does Questionable Quests have any CYOAs that we don't?
>>85038013the diet and exercise book are the only ones that give you any tangible benefits
>>85036494Yeah, from dalle mini
>>85036882Get fuck fag- Wait that’s what you want isn’t it? Go catch aids instead.
>>85036403 do we get the option to kill her? won’t one of the stronger mages kill her if she tries this? she seems super evil.
>>85033881wtf tell us how to cross between worlds dont just keep that to yourself man