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Previous Thread: >>82971353
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>>82985866
>Hose of Replication + Coil of Immortality gooification
I am become Solaris, abyss of dreams.
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I checked the thread a while back and saw people talking about the quality of my creations. I'm happy and flattered to see that my choice games have garnered discussion. I've also seen that some key points of criticism have been that they should be more about a sense of empowerment, have more characters for the reader to be able to conceive of a connection with, and that they're visually uninteresting.

I'll admit those things are probably issues inherent in my style and my typical choice of focus, but I like experimenting, so I made this one in two parts to see if I can try to specifically emphasize those points this time.

Enjoy!
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>>82985866
Storybook of Adventure and then I kill myself when I get ejected.
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>>82985941
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>>82985941
>they/them non-binary faggot
why?
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>>82985941
Much better than your work before, but it still could be better. I will make a build but your formatting and waifus could be 10x better
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>>82985976
For a few characters mentioned I didn't want to need to add two pictures or limit possibilities by being too specific, so I left it deliberately ambiguous (e.g. I called the sidekick "Alex" and picked a somewhat androgynous picture for them, so you can choose whether you'd like to imagine your sidekick as a man or a woman).
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>>82985941
>>82985952
>literally every name mentioned is alliterative
>random words in the text are bolded
Kek, got me to chuckle.
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>>82986029
Also everyone appears to be Jewish, which is a little funny, but imho that's much more typical of earlier comics back when the entire industry was a bunch of Jews in an office, so I wouldn't say this is very good representation.
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>>82985941
>>82985952
I always get the feeling that UC16 hasn't actually ever consumed media from after the 70's or so. The art is all over the place but the content all points at comics from way, way, way, way back.
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>>82985811
nice dubs writefag

>>82979085
is me. My plan is, in the first year, fulfill most of my missions to power up, then take over the UK to gain political power in time for the summit in year two. After that I wrote in my follow up post.
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Cyoas that let you choose to take companions and waifus as enemies instead?
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>>82986194
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>>82985941
The black fading at the edge of the boxes blends with the letters a little. Much better legibility than the first draft of alien survival though.
>>82986000
Figured as much. >>82985976 was probably looking for an excuse to get triggered.

>Plasticity, Great Physique, Endurance, Tertiary Senses
Eventually I should be able to weave my tissues into living siege engine. I have enough time and energy to practice as well as souped-up propioperception/balance (my external senses remain as mundane as ever).
>Alex Adler
A straight A+ physics student is not as intelligent as myself unless they're socially retarded to make up for those smarts. Aikido and applied physics should make using my flexibility to full effect easier and feeling that I'm fighting for someone else's sake as well as my own should keep me motivated.
>Hunger, Grotesque
Apparently super-density requires fuelling and storage which is expensive and distracting respectively.
>Ella Escobar
Self-mastery's my thing but I'm well aware that the world keeps turning no matter what I do, information is paramount. Using Ella aside I figure that my rubbish attempts at shapeshifting should go some way to reassuring any seeds of schizo obsession with skinwalkers.
>Let the Games Begin
My first instinct is to learn from Ella's use of Primary Telepathy and try it out myself but great risk for all beckons with the opportunity of great rewards for all.
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>>82986110
>>82986059
I wouldn't say so at all. I just finished reading over the companion section and the way I see it almost each of them is a reference to another subgerne of superhero comics, for example Grim Guaridan is very obviously a dig at the 90s and their edgy grimdark weaboos with ridiculously tragic pasts, Force Fortress is from those cringy attempts to appeal to manga fans in the early 2000's, Incendia seems to be a parody of Spider Man villains (crippled teenager gets superpowers, becomes mad with power), etc.
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>>82986207
Did you roll a villain though?
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>>82986194
The new one just posted >>82985952 allows for any companion characters (no specific waifus but not like that's gonna stop anons when three are girls) to end up as your enemy based on your choices/rolls.
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>>82986230
Working on it.
>>82986207
Using post numbers in reverse as roll.
>7, Plasticity
>10, 2, 6, Flight, Shifting
>8, Stealth
Shit, all that "there are no skinwalkers" stuff to Ella is about to backfire spectacularly. I hope the damage isn't permanent.
>9, Robotic Base
>2, No Weakness
Oh this fucker won the jackpot. Passive isn't going to work for this. We need Ella's cooperative bent and telepathy assisted "negotiation" blackmail to assemble a squad of supers/glowies who can root out this steel cancer.
>8, Incendia
Justice and fairness, eh? Ella's approach might work here if we can get across the nemesis' malign backers and the potential benefits to all if we kick them offworld and take their stuff.
>n/a, Ayy Support
No wonder the fucker has a robobunker. Even with a supersquad and alphabet men we'll be hard pressed to overcome them. At least we'll be better prepared for the invasion.
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>>82986301
Damn, you're fucking boned.
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>>82985952
>some people may not choose to work alongside Superman Tolkien
What insanity could drive a man to this?
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>>82986323
Them's the dice. I don't mind going down personally if I can fuck over the backers enough that some of their technology can be scavenged and humanity gets a fighting chance when the invasion comes. Assuming Incendia grasps that I'm serious about the greater good she might abandon the nemesis at a crucial moment, maybe even sabotage some infrastructure if I'm really lucky. Depending on how effectively the schizo false positives can be controlled Ella might be of some use in scanning too.
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>>82986346
The drive for waifus.
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>>82985952
I think reading story F. just gave me a paper cut.
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>>82985941
The text is really difficult to read, because of the combination of font, colors and formatting
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>>82986431
You should’ve seen his other cyoas
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>>82985941
>posts discussing this cyoa and offering genuine constructive criticism were deleted
why
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>>82986420
It's very obviously a parody of superheroes from the 90s.
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>>82986455
I assume someone got offended, like with the Islam builds for the OC yesterday.
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>>82986431
It's not that bad.
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>>82986467
Probably. Hope it passes quickly and isn't a sign of impending widespread censoring.
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>>82986415
Not really. My logic here >>82986207 is that my might would soon be satisfactory and intel/soft power would be lacking. Ella would still sensible choice if she was an old dude instead. Shame the dice gave me a nemesis tailor made to encourage paranoia.
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>>82985866
>have to wait hours to be the little girl
why
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>>82986533
Balance. If being the little girl was easy everyone would take it.
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>>82986455
Something got deleted?
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>>82986455
new janny is trying to strangle the old /cyoag/ shitposting
so far we've gotten some pretty good threads out of it
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>>82986543
Several posts discussing companion/waifu options and one post that was just posting a cyoa.
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>>82986553
still, wanting teenage waifus is based
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>>82986553
The new janny has proven more successful at strangling discussion than shitposting. The threads post-mass-deletion have always been worse than they were before.
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>>82986569
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>>82986553
ngl these threads were getting much better by themselves, a janny attack is the worst thing for us
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>>82986455
Winter the cutest.
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>>82985941
>>82985952
You do realize nobody will make any builds for this, right?
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>>82985952
>>82985986
Incendia's pretty waifu tier
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>>82986657
A build was promised >>82985986
A build was delivered >>82986207
And miraculously it wasn't cleaned up.
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>>82986556
I wanna go to reversed roles world but like the one in amahara's doujins
still can't believe he got to make that into an actual manga

>>82986571
if what you wanted to talk about was "is cunny good for you" for the millionth time or authorfaggotry then yeah you'd be right

not a single deleted post in last thread was of any value whatsoever except the daily dose made of elemental icons
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>>82986681
Wait, are you implying I'm >>82985986? I'm completely indifferent to waifus >>82986505.
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>>82986686
>if what you wanted to talk about was "is cunny good for you" for the millionth time or authorfaggotry then yeah you'd be right
I am sorry, but I don't see how calmly discussing lolis in cyoas or making edgy builds for a new cyoa are in any way bad for a thread.
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>>82986699
I thought you were, Usually when you see a post like "making a build now" and it's shortly thereafter followed by a build it's the same poster.
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>>82986715
Saying "nice CYOA but it could have lolis" isn't a discussion, it's an inflammatory statement.
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>>82986728
Usually someone making a big deal out of the waifus mentions how they'll waifu them. If I were to waifu Ella it'd be secondary to her utility and concern for a friend's mental health. I'll probably just die though, that nemesis is tough.
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>>82986735
If you get angry at the mere mention of something, that's (You) problem.
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>>82986735
How is suggesting something completely reasonably "inflammatory" to you? No one seemed inflamed, except for one anon who seemed to think it was shitposting (and was corrected). Now >>82985976, that's inflammatory.
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>>82986735
Why are you so inflamed then?
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>>82986767
>Usually someone making a big deal out of the waifus mentions how they'll waifu them.
He said that he thought they were merely ok, so it's understandable why he might not gush over them.
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>>82986772
>>82986790
Nice gaslighting, but anyone with two braincells to rub together can understand that this is intended to get a reaction out of people, nothing more.
http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/82985866/#82985996

>>82986780
>and was corrected
http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/82985866/#82986091
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I don't see the ayy or Siberia survival cyoas in UA16's allsynch folder.
>>82986854
Apparently they were central to his enjoyment of cyoa. Even if you only think it's an "ok" cyoa by your preferred metric that's still something you'd focus on in your build.
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>I don't see the ayy or Siberia survival cyoas in UA16's allsynch folder.

there you go. Firstly this is the latest version of Siberian Isolation I found
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>>82986865
>gaslighting
You sound like a woman.
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>>82986865
That poster was me, and I agreed with him then told him that his posting style made his point look like a shitpost, even though it obviously wasn't.
>>82986891
>Apparently they were central to his enjoyment of cyoa.
He doesn't say that. And as neither of us are him, I don't see the point of psychoanalyzing him.
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>>82985941
I feel like primary energy projection is the strongest power, it sounds like you can slag just about anything your opponent throws at you.
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>>82986865
You sound unreasonably angry. What’s your problem with lolis?
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>>82986909
Alien planet, part 1
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>>82986909
Cheers. It's unplayable as is for me but I like combos so I'll tackle it after getting the agent training reward from Chariot.
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>>82986940
And alien planet, part 2 (this version is from another website, has one different option on the second page)
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>>82986956
>another website
which one?
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>>82986950
>do all of UC16's CYOAs in a row

What's the logical order?
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>>82986973
Not him, but starting with >>82985941 is the obvious choice.
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>>82986960
r9k
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>>82986981
I mean in terms of "metaplot", not in terms of what would allow you to effortlessly stomp over all of them.
>>82986991
Anon, that's not another website, that's a board.
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>>82987007
>Anon, that's not another website, that's a board.
Very barely
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>>82986780
>Potions & Living bottles
Potions seem like a must have since they have the most potency and living bottles seem like a fun way to keep a certain enchantment permanently located in a room.

>Body, nature, space, time
Body has the possibility to keep me young and healthy, so it's an easy pick. Nature seems like it might be useful to have, like grow rare plants for ingredients by placing a living bottle in a green house to increase plant health or yield. Space and time are there to upgrade my house, make it bigger on the inside and have time be slowed down and stuff.

>Invite others
Our world becoming a magical world would be pretty fun. Also being one of the first would mean I have a head start in creating fun stuff.

I'd probably work on body healing and reverse aging potions first. Then go off the grid and build a small farm for rare ingredients without people becoming suspicious of the strange effects from my alchemy while magic is still rare. Eventually I'll have some more powerful potions that use rare ingredients I grew on the farm and come back to normal life with my wares. Perhaps I'll give some potions away for fun just to cause chaos, but most I'd probably sell to buyers I trust. By the time magic is commonplace I hope to have a good reputation as an alchemist and have a core following of customers.
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>>82986973
I'm still working that out.
>>82986981
Personally I'd prefer to start with the mundane ones and have steadily escalating madness. Ayy + Semi-conductors + Siberia would give mankind a while to build up their technology base, invaders from the Supers cyoa would be in for a rude awakening.
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>>82985952
Superhero waifus and not a single one has a rack that could crush a kitten to death? The hell is this?
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>>82986973
>>82986981
>>82987039
I wonder if the "Competitors" from >>82985941
are aware of the hypergalactic intelligence from >>82986940. And if so, which is more powerful?
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>>82987045
Find me a picture that fits the artstyle, fits the superhero genre, fits one of the character descriptions, fits the theme, isn't of an existing easily recognizable character and isn't pornographic, and I'd make an edit just for you.
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>>82986681
I'll take Democracy; her power is very useful for realizing my ideals. It's been shown that the will of the people is almost never fulfilled by the US federal government. I'd use her power to give the common man control over his nation. To give a real life example, gay marriage failed to pass in a vote in Commiefornia of all places.
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>>82987111
Go ahead and ask for the moon while you're at it, wouldn't you?
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>>82987154
Go ahead and seethe then.
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>>82987111
Westerners do no like attractive women. It's impossible.
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>>82986468
>pick Spring
>use her curse to play La-Mulana 2 fresh again
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>>82987045
>>82987111
>>82987154
>>82987178

I don't think this is a reason to fuss over. I'll admit that this isn't really my style to be honest I think this is a somewhat silly request, because I didn't mean this to be the focus of the game, but here, go ahead. Have fun. Feel free to treat either of those as a "canonical" page, for all that's worth.
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>>82986735
this is true
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>>82987297
Inhumanly based
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>>82987297
UC16, while I like your work, you really should grow a fucking spine.
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>>82987363
>t. btfo shitposter
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>>82987363
Seethe harder, fuck off.
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>>82987297
desu imho it's not even that out of place, since the character's deal is partially that she has a self image problem and thinks superpowers are about becoming attractive and popular. It's not out of place for her to decide to transform herself into a monstertits animmo supermodel when given the chance (assuming this is somehow similar to her older sister/how she looked before).
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>>82987297
quite possibly the most based author on /cyoag/
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>>82987297
The new canonical version. I have replaced my downloaded file, thank you very much.
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>>82987363
To be fair >>82987399 is right that it fits the character and overall genre. Humouring a faggot who thinks trawling artstation is somehow hard work >>82987154 is daft though.
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>>82987297
>non pornographic
Her nipple's about to rip right through that bra and launch itself at the enemy, what the fuck are you smoking?
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>>82985941
>>82985952
>>82987297
>>82986909
>>82986940
>>82986956
Anybody putting those in the archive under UA16?
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>>82987461
The issue is >>82987476, that anything would be pornagraphic to a moralfag like him.
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>>82986929
It's like it says in the cyoa: it's the strongest in terms of raw power but it's also the least useful. The only thing you really do with it is absolutely demolish your enemy (and the entire surrounding area in the process). Nothing else.
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>>82987125
Democracy is both enormous OP, and also enormously beneficial to mankind if used for good ends. All violent crime (defined however (You) define it, it's not like anyone cares about the details) could end because the majority of humanity would decide so.
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>>82987613
Also the girl is the cutest (and funniest)
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>>82987565
No, the issue is humouring lazy cunts >>82987154. Some pics are hard to find. This wasn't.
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>>82987619
No. I already gained the special power, so as deadweight she will be dumped in a river. Who knows what these supernatural fucks might get up to if allowed to live.
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>>82987476
Here. It's called a "smudge" function. Most image manipulation programs have it. Happy now?
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>>82987697
lmao little bitch
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>>82987579
Demolishing your enemies is precisely what you're supposed to be doing that scenario.
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>>82987697
Too fucking attractive. Why are you catering to coomers and waifufags? AHS was right.
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>>82987725
That's not me. I did the original and >>82987297. Though I appreciate that some take their time to edit the pictures to suit their needs without detracting from the content.
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>>82987363
Anyone too afraid to put a name on their work has no spine anyway.
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>>82987725
Is this a false flag? It'd be out of place as the default but supers tend to be sexualised and that character in particular is an insecure selfie-taking mess trying to be pretty outside to cover up the perceived ugliness inside. She's as much a parody as the edgelord is.
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Boris best waifu, my nemesis can have monstertits for all I care
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>>82987756
>She's as much a parody as the edgelord is
I don't think that's the case. I think F. is a parody, yes, but the other characters in no way are.
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>>82987725
This. The lolifags for one are never going to shut up about it.
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>>82985952
Not reading all this shit, just tell me who the best waifu is.
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>>82985941
>>82985952
another silly cyoa from a silly person
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>>82988233
>just tell me who the best waifu is
You.
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writefag from previous thread here. I had 4 responses, so I'll use those builds.
Said builds:
>>82985875
>>82986169
>>82986250
>>82987420

I am rusty at writefagging, but I will do my best
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>>82987039
would be waiting to see your builds, would be interesting to see how all the different ones interact
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>>82987756
It's not a parody because a parody needs to refer to something and present it in a deliberately comical way. None of those except MAYBE Grim Guardian fits the bill. "Black guy with telekinesis!" isn't a parody of anything. Neither is "sexy woman".
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I want a mythology CYOA where it's Biblical.
You die, and you become an Angel... and then it turns out God rules over many different worlds (But Earth is his Jewel), and he sends in his angels to subjucate/do missions in the other worlds.

So you get to choose what kind of Angel you want to be, some powers, what position you would like, form your team. Then go carry out the will of the big G with your Angel buddies.
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>>82988858
Why won't you make it then?
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>>82988883
Because I got a new job and have been busy with work.
Then again, I've recently gotten much better with Photoshop.
I'll start writing out ideas for it, but probably won't go anywhere.
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>>82988399
Nice. Can't wait to see what you come up with.
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>>82988901
Eh, maybe Cyrus will make something out of it.
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>>82985941
Do you select your drawback?
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>>82988988
Yes, or you can choose to sacrifice a power and not have one.
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I humbly request one (1) monstergirl/catgirl waifu cyoa.
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>>82987528
Invited to An Alien Planet is under Themed > Imprisoned, because if people don't post who made something and the author doesn't sign it then it ends up in Themed or Genres where it belongs.
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>>82988858
Sounds neat.
>>82988887
I would kind of disagree... But that's just me.
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>>82989081
Wasn't it always common knowledge UA16 made them?
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>>82985941
What in the hell am I looking at.
He's sitting like he's doing incline bench.
But it looks like he's doing reverse curls.
What the fuck?
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>>82989203
A comic book writer and/or artist who doesn't know anything about working out. Shocking, eh?
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>>82986571
I still don't know if I best fit with Doomer or Author.
I don't feel happy from other people caring about my works anymore, so Author ain't it. I do like loli anon though, he likes what he likes and ain't afraid to admit it. Praise is weird and uncomfortable though.
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Okay back to CYOA talk, sorry to take the thread off topic.
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While we're all fellating UC16, here's his latest revision of the magic hat shop CYOA. Always liked that one, I find it charming for some reason
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>>82989355
Police cap still the best, as always. Imagine the free access to pristine cunny.
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I wish Harbingeranon made more cyoas. I've enjoyed everything he's made.
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pic is my fav desu

>>82989434
he is a silly author and I like his silly ideas (color magics in particular)
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>>82989415
Whoever wrote this clearly has a heart as pure as his lust is strong. I can only respect such an author.

Taigah has Big Botan Energy, mixed with mommydom.
Emma is a manticore and automaticall A+.
>5th mouth
You just know...

Skye is hyper lewd. Public degeneracy is very naisu. Being unable to control how horny she is, while being a tsundere, is beyond good and evil.

>Ane Maru
Unacceptable, I will not cuck MC-kun.

>Milkie-girl
No

>Crab
Senjougaraha is the only crab for me

>Titty trash-panda
No.

>Cat
Okay

I humbly request time with the lewd squid.
I have bad taste and like tsunderes.
And I like girls who are honest with their feelings. Who actually wants a difficult relationship? Communicate clearly! If sushi, sushi. If not sushi, not sushi!
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>>82989522
ah, a fellow squidchad
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>>82989522
>Botan
Based
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>>82989556
It warms my heart to know that I am surrounded by friends.
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WHO THE FUCK CENSORS NIPPLE ???
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>>82989738
>mind break power
I will now read your cyoa.
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>>82989749
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>>82989764
>it's another cumbrain focuses on shitty coomfaggotry catering to him episode
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>>82989730
janny banny if nipple
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>>82989415
Not too into femdom, but Lissie seems best.
I love me some cowgirls
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>>82989841
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>>82989846
also milk
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>>82990040
milch lieber
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>>82987034
>High School
>Shorty
>Regular Weight
>Average Breasts
>Child Bearing Behind
>Cute Face
>Ponytail
>Fair Skin
>Receptive Sex Drive
>Mostly Equal
>Personality Traits
Feminine
Lightweight
Klutz
Pure
Romantic
Kind-Hearted
Dull-Witted
Laidback
>Fetishes and Desires
Cuddling III
Frottage III
Lewd Roleplay
>Hobbies and Interests
Reading
Gardening
Hiking
Computer
Cooking

Our song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJMAS0Nd7Ok
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>>82989486
>color magics
What?
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>>82989738
>Strange
Great aesthetically pleasing male physique, shiny golden skin, bright green eyes, unnaturally white teeth, and no hair.
>Luck
>Independent
>+6 strength and +2 Control
>Creative
>Aesthetic
>Needy

>Clothing
>Themed, fancy formal suits
>Unarmored
>None
>Variety and Electronic

>Piggybank, Stimulus, and Billionaire
>War summit
>Super School
>Space Cadet

I start out with 7, 4, 1 stats and if all my missions and milestones work out I end up with 10, 7, 10 stats. With my extreme luck I should be more than fine on any of the missions, especially if I spend my time before them working on earning money so I can up my charisma with the knowledge points from the milestones.
My plan is to become an asset that different factions want to use, as keeping me around would mean luck for them too. Because I am independent I can choose to join or leave whichever faction I see fit whenever I want, which they would happily comply with because I am useful. Put me in your high tech lab and a successful breakthrough is guaranteed, keep me around your intel gathering team to make sure they get the highest value info, or just keep me close to the boss to prevent assassinations. Because I am valuable I won't be killed, at most kidnapped or traded between factions.
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>>82986571
Unironically the best summary of thread politics.
>chaosanon is silly but easily baited and sometimes doesn't want to be silly
>lolianon loves cyoas and just wants to have fun with likeminded anons
>doomeranon only likes old cyoas but wants new ones still
>authoranon wants to make others happy and loves seeing anons (especially lolianon) love her cyoas
>moralanon just wants to appear smart and sophisticated despite not being either
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>>82989846
>>82990040
Nice taste anons
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>>82986571
I enjoyed the last few threads.
Shame your ban expired.
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>>82990145
I haven’t been banned though? I had one build deleted, that’s the worst of it.
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Latest changelog:

>Updated Angel's picture, lore, and cyoa

Work needed is as follows:

>Incomplete
Anduin
Bliss
DSA
Excelanon
Fumblemore
Hexalby
Languid Cicada
New Observer
Peil
Textanon

>Almost complete
EDG (need pros and cons for the guy)
nxtub (first cyoa description is a bit sparse, would be nice to have one more boon/bug/bane)
Savestate (three boons, two banes)
Sockminster (a boon and a bug)
unDEFINED (description, more boon/bug/bane)

>Haven't even started
clockworkGhost, Fox, GenieAnon, GiftedAnon, Homo author #1, Homo author #2, Homo author #3, Liminal, MaskAnon, Mithradates Excelsior, Overlord, Pallas, Quiet, RavenKing, SDA, Spadsey, Strife, TextAnon, Thoth, Thrallherd, and Tunebuggy (possibly more)

Additions, edits, and improvements appreciated. This is a community project.
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>>82990439
I'm still very happy with my entry. Except
>second buffest author
Whomst doth thou claim to be the buffest author? Shall we settle this in the power cage?
I also want to have... fun, with boxed wine.
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>>82990239
>4 days worth of travel in the desert
You will need at least 6-8 liters of water and 4-8 meals to get though it all. 6 liters of water alone would cost 24 "M", unless you get the piss mystery liquid soft drink 12 times.

I guess I'd take 12 of the soda bottles and 4 of the soup containers. That gives me enough liquid and soup should keep my sodium levels in check, with all the sweating and whatnot. Not quite enough so I'd also take Melanie and Salvador so I can afford the trail mix and bananas. As long as Melanie doesn't murder Salvador in the name of social justice it should go fine.
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>>82990479
Can't disagree
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>>82990479
take the boot out of your mouth already
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>>82985952
Am I missing something or would any nemesis you roll be so much more powerful than yourself you have no realistic hope of defeating him in a million years?
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>>82990560
Bliss
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What's the most useless choice to give?

I'd say giving a single immortality option that still costs points, I mean nobody isn't going to pick it and it's the same outcome as removing one point and giving everyone immortality. It's fine if there's multiple kinds of immortality with different perks and drawback though.
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>>82990925
I never take immortality. Living forever is horrifying.
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>>82990979
I will dab on your death bed lmao
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>>82990863
Who dis?
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>>82991066
Current dude reposting the cyoa.
You asked who was the most buff author.
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>>82985866
Can SDA or whoever is in charge of the pastebin update my googledrive link to my new and improved googledrive link which doesn't require you to be logged in to google to check out my CYOAs???? Have asked like 5 threads in a row now.

https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B1CwO4KqTgloRXVUV19DR19hdEk?resourcekey=0-W3KdK_IBXOUF5gWTJR3NRA
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>82991648
kek
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>>82991648
no
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I miss the activity.
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>>82991783
Fine, let's be active.
What do you wanna do?
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>>82991855
idk what do you want to do
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>>82991855
nta , but buildposting isn't the same without countless anons with autism and chatting about lore will probably just attract shitposters. The period where Blessed Garden released was good and then...nothing, really. What do YOU want to do ?
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>>82991855
I know what I wanna do, so might as well do it now. Let's make a magical girl troupe.
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Aight, >>82991969 will be aliens, >>82991993 will be robots.
May the best autist win.
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>>82992057
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>>82992057
Sorry, but I don't like making builds where I'm a female.
Good luck tho.
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>>82992101
Misc. perk 12 on page 2.
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>>82992072
Eh, why not. Fuck xenos.
>Cyborgs
>Agility Bots
>Robo-Draft
I wanted to take "Victory Bots" at first (because mechas generally win) but the opposition have a fucking death ray. Cyborgs are more easy to put everywhere, too. The speed boost was going to be purchased because ayys could be everywhere - having a strikeforce ready in permanence is useful. Finally, thanks to the draft the whole burger industry is geared towards conflict. If I had a most precise control over it I'd still send robowaifus and builders everywhere, but with a passive combat
mode.
Good luck to even land a bullet on these.
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>>82992258
they sound like a package deal to me
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>>82992057
Wish this wasn't rollshit. Magical little girl cyoas are great, but rolling ruins a lot of the choice.
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>>82991783
Tough choice between fantasy and media

>>82992258
So that's where that face crop on the right comes from
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>>82992057
This >>82992319. Post Magia or AMG? I know AMG has some rolling but it's less than this.
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>>82991855
Wanna play terraria?
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>>82992258
Left, seems really chill and is taller
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>>82992150
Reading through it, it seems to be a roya with limited currency to make actual choices.
Not to be choosy (heh) but I don't like roya.
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>>82992378
That's not what this thread is for.
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How about seinaru?
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>>82992468
So, no?
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>>82992482
what do you mean, seinaru ?
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>>82990733
On average,It's you versus someone with superior powers and they've enough prep time to know everything about you. You're screwed.
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>>82988858
Okay I was supposed to sleep 3 hours ago but I spent that time writing out lore instead.

I have the seven layers of heaven written out, as well as the angel types. I've taken these from judiasm (very loose judiasm since most of it is kabbalistic and talmud nonsense, but fuck it, its cool).

I'm gonna borrow from Christianity and Islam to pad it out though, since a lot of the things in the higher levels are super vague, and like half the angel types have literally nothing on them... but good progress.
Think I'm gonna actually make this CYOA
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>>82992764
seinaru magecraft girls
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>>82992830
trumpet status: Blown
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>>82992830
>seven layers
A bit like Yggdrasil ? Or is it rather a reference to the circles of hell-thing ?
>>82992860
Yes, I know of it, but what do you want from it ? Disscussion about a particular aspect ? Just someone to post it ?
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>>82990925
Immortality is never true Immortality in CYOAs, just unaging.
So there are definitely specifc settings or situations in CYOAs where there are much better choices then Immortality.
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>>82992830
I thought the sefirot had 10 branches
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>>82992927
sometimes there is true immortality but it tends to be the exception and not the norm
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>>82992878
It's not a reference to circles of hell, it's an actual belief of 1st century jewish mysticism. I think that it was taken from ancient Babylonian religion. I had like 10 sources open since everybody has something to say about it, but basically it goes
>The Veil
Hard to say what this is but I interpreted it as a dream world, humanity's collective unconscious
>The Firmament (Rakia)
This is what God puts in to the sky in Genesis, early beliefs said it was a big some
>The Skies
Book of Enoch (non canon) says Eden is here, so I interpreted it as a sort of Elysium, a true paradise garden

I forget the rest of the names but the next one was a city, a heavenly Jerusalem... then מכון which means institute. Sixth is where all the forces of nature are stored, and Seventh is the layer of God

Jews don't believe in layers of hell either, Dante really just made shit up
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>>82992942
The sefirot aren't the layers of heaven, they are the layers of the tree of life. I think Kabbalah is cool but like I said I was only borrowing from it, I didn't want to bother with the sefirot.

However I did take inspiration as כתר for heaven's final layer, since it matched up very nicely with what I imagine God's realm would be like
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>>82992057
Stats at First:
>Str: 4
>Vit: 7
>Agi: 6
>Mag: 9
>Luck: 5
Twin Soul'd:
>Str: 3
>Vit: 5
>Agi: 5
>Mag: 7
>Luck: 4
Age: 7
Body Development: 20
Specialization: 18
Weapon: 12 (Ranged)
Outfit: 13 (Elaborate)
Magical Power: 7 (Focused Assault, spent 1 gold for extra Third Eye)
Misc Perks:
> 17
> 20 (spent 1 silver for Interdimensional Bro)
> 3
> 19 (Spent 1 silver for Closure)
> 7 (Spent 1 silver for Masculinity)

Twin Soul:
Age: 7
Body Development: 7
Outfit: Skimpy
Weapon: Fist
Power: Third Eye (I give it to her)

Well, I'm a shota drider with strong mental assault powers, and a speciality in Focused Assaults). I can travel between dimensions with my interdimensional bro, and I have a female loli twin who beats people up and has scrying and clairvoyant powers, as well as the invisibility and mental assault powers that we both have.
I normally like to include a picture of my character, but I don't have any twin loli/shota drider pictures. I don't even know if there is such art.
Even though I was turned into a drider (against my will), I don't really want to do bad things, so I guess a bunch of magical girls are going to assault me and my sister for no reason.
After fighting a million and one times, maybe some of them will just be friends with me. Maybe more than friends, since I'd still want kids even if I'm some weird magic thing. Even though its kinda fucked up, I'd probably fuck with their minds a bit, so they stop assaulting me, and I know that would sort of give them a reason to be angry at me, but they can fuck off with their unprovoked murder attempts.
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>>82992830
> a lot of the things in the higher levels are super vague
That's where your creativity should shine. Latch onto a very specific short description or concept in their explanation and headcannon your own unique take on it, creating something semi-new in process.
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>>82992969
Huh. I don't understand everything, but thank you for the explication anyway, anon. Good luck on your OC.
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>>82993015
Yup that's exactly what I'm doing! It's a ton of fun because I get to flesh it out, I love worldbuilding. Really looking forward to making this one
>>82993053
It will be explained better in the CYOA don't worry haha, ty
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>>82989203
Weird forearm/wrist workout?
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>>82992998
As a former Orthodox Jew who learnt Kabbalah and Talmud, it'll be interesting to see your take on it. Can't wait.
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>>82992998
You shouldn't bring Jewish devilry into the thread. That stuff is no joke.
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>>82993108
אולי אני אחזור בתשובה חחחח
>>82993172
It's just interesting theology
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>>82993040
I told you here >>82990585. I'm just glad you have realized your mistake.
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>>82992969
The book of enoch is cool so it might as well be canon
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been a while since i've been here, what are the best cyoas from the last few months?
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>>82993288
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>>82993325
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>>82993288
Dragonfall was great
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>>82993234
What a disgusting CYOA.

I'll take Lavenza, Lucia, Courtney, and Ana.
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>>82993288
I liked [Cerulean Dream] but all my builds treat the setting like it's a battle royale. Without that headcanon, it's like the residents throw away any moral code except what is preached by christianism. It's...unsettling.
We also had [Dragonfall], who gained a bit of traction. The balance still need some work, but it's been enjoyable anyway.
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>>82993340
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>>82989115
Not to someone who just skims the thread to grab OC.
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>>82993288
This is a pretty thorough list. Make your own decision as to whether they're good.
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/82808027/#82808847
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>>82993360
what do you think happend to the previous residents
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>>82993461
They didn't listen to Zuuru and were left to die for it. The angel giving us this "new life" also force this sort of 'found familiy' trope where everyone is friend and work for the tribe. If you choose to not interact with these relatives strangers (you could be an introvert) most would resent you quickly.
The only named guy who died is Wilson, with his ruins near the edge of the map. The location is interesting - the island is locked off by the east cliff, and the towers are the farthest away possible. A normal crewmate can't choose this place to live (would be suicidal anyway) which lead me to think he was exiled here. Death sentence since the demons explicitly come from the sea.
Zuuru say she keep the ruins as a "reminder against Pride". Since the defining traits of the fallen is their refusal to listen, and that Claudius can throw people off a building and be granted heaven...They probably refused to go native or disliked God (or worse, they could have been gays. Oh the horror !) which led to these circumstances. The other residents would probably let that kind of passive execution happen.
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>>82993325
>Santa is my ennemy
>Childhood Toy is my ennemy
>Capitalism is my enemy
>Betrayal is my enemy
>Helen is used goods, the other two already have mates
>will be smited if I don't follow the rules
>nightmarish demons everywhere
what the FUCK is that world ? Somehow YHF is more hopeful that this
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>>82993644
To be fair capitalism and betrayal were always your enemy
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>>82993644
Just fuck the unnamed
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>>82993677
ye, but i also use them everyday ? why am i on this side of the war
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>>82993644
If you want a Cerulean Dream waifu that hasn't fucked others and isn't dating someone else, you have to take the lolipill
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>>82993705
I still don't see who you are talking about
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>>82993712
'Unnamed' on page 3 rescued section. You can rescue her by taking a certain threat
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>>82993738
Unamed is peak daughterfu, but she's really the best waifu in the cyoa without being in the category at all.
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>>82993705
UOOOOOOOOH
SEEEEEGS
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>>82987697
One loli would be cool.
But don't feel forced to add her.
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>>82993677
>Capitalism bad.
OK idiot.
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>>82987697
Yeah. Who was your favorite(s) companion(s) to write ?
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>>82993644
If you play your cards right you can get demon enemies down to one major and one minor after all the quests and the minor ones are auto cucked by the pikmen looking things.
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>>82987034
Age: Christmas Cake
Height: Amazonian
Build: Scrawny
Breasts: Bee Stings
Butt/Hips: Tight
Face: Noble
Hairstyle: Sex Hair
Skin: Albino
Libido: Sexual Predator
Attitude: Fulltime Dom
Personality Traits
>Possesive
>Mean Spirited
>Pervert
>Feminine
>Charismatic
>Needy
>Aggressive
>Cunning

Fetishes:
>Cross-Dressing
>Rape-play
>Orgasm Denial
>Territorial

Hobbies:
>Travelling
>Running
>Hiking
>Sports

Extras:
>Glasses
>Smoker
>Inhuman(Black Sclera, Pointy Ears, Demonic tail, Great Horns)
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Thinking about making a lore-heavy CYOA ala Blood Mage or No Honor Among Thieves. Any advice? What would you guys like to see in terms of... really, I guess anything (setting/theme, sections/format, etc)? I've got some ideas in mind but I could go either way on some things based on thread input.
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>>82993705
This guy gets it.
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>>82993802
We already told him that, especially as little girl sidekicks are so common. I expect when he updates the cyoa he’ll add a loli.
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>>82994063
Dieselpunk
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>>82994200
>little girl sidekicks
a singular example of this i require
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>>82994212
Monstergirl from invincible
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>>82994063
I want some more good cultivation cyoas, and I know I'm not alone. The best one imo got cancelled less than half way through
pic related
More than wanting cultivation, I want you to make the cyoa about stuff you're passionate about. The passion will be visible to the reader, so don't make a cultivation cyoa just because I'm telling you I want one.
Besides that, in-depth companions are way better than plentiful companions. Limiting yourself to only waifu companions make things more same-y. Powers, factions, companions, etc can be used to introduce and expand on lore in a less lore-dumpy way.
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>>82994244
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>>82994063
i've always wanted a cyoa that's both aggresively high fantasy and aggresively soft punk to the point where you can't tell if you're using an incredibly advanced device to pull heat from other dimensions and shape it into disntinct forms or just casting a fireball, or if you're using an ancestral teleportation circle enchanment with the unique capability to move around it's target location or just using a teleporter, shit like that
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>>82994257
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>>82994233
>sidekick
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>>82994268
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>>82994271
If you have a problem with that definition, you can place your complaint with my lawyer.
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>>82994277
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>>82994281
i'm gonna fuck your lawyer in the ass and make him sue you
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>>82985941
Nice job in interested to see what you do next!
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>>82985941
Very light on fitting images considering how easy it is to find comic book pictures.
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>>82992345
That cyoa is the first version of AMG
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>>82994200
In general a sidekick section would be cool.
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>>82992809
Not only do they have prep time, they're given all the info about you already. Where you live, who your relatives are, what your powers are and where you are every 24 hours. You have a shit chance to survive with the powers given AND none of them are really good at getting away if your foe ends up with something like the Death Beam power. You're just fucked.
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>>82987980
lolifags and moralfags never shut up anyway, so nothing has changed.
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>>82987725
comics have appealed to coomers for a long time
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>>82994832
That’s because lolifags enjoy cyoas and post builds and discussions all the time
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>>82994958
so do moralfags, and other anons. people like you, just like to stir up shit with your incessant rantings.
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>>82987297
actually fits pretty well
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thinking of making a cyoa, what qualities make up a good cyoa?
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>>82995581
A good CYOA primarily focuses on the player's personal power. Everything else is secondary.
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>>82995603
Calm down there Vergil
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>>82995581
a work that manages to engage the player through its setting, mechanics or story
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>>82985941
I actually hate the core scenario for this (playing constant defense with the enemy having full knowledge of you no matter what) but I'll give it a go
>Primary: Amazing Physical Strength
I feel like you need this or plasticity just to avoid being potentially sniped
>Secondary: Super Senses
>Tertiary: Endurance
>Flight Pack
>Downside: Need More Food
>Denzel Davis
Hopefully covering as many bases as possible between me and Denzel, food bills gonna suck
Rolled for my Nemesis and got:
>Primary: Super Growth
>Secondaries (rolled a fucking 10): Telepathy, Shape Shifting
>Tertiary: Acrobatics
>Super Suit
>Weakness (2, rolled another 10): Silver, Highly Radioactive
>Ally: Hurricane
>Fortune
Chances aren't great for me really, giant radioactive monster man is going to be rough for even me to fight and then they've also got super-tier cash behind them. Best bet is to try work on the silver weakness I guess.
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>>82995581
I personally find the best CYOA's combine an interesting setting in combination with player control and freedom. The hard part is getting the power level right.
I personally think power level jerk off is fine, but only if you combine it with equally powerful threats. I think a good example of a recent CYOA of that is Dragonfall. You can basically make some God King Dragon and you really need to go out of your way to not do that, and in my opinion, that detracts from the rest of the CYOA which I personally enjoy, because then it's ultimately boring. But going in the opposite direction, where you make the threats too powerful or make it so you're basically fucked no matter what usually tends to just annoy people. Same with Drawbacks that are too intense or if you're forced to take terrible drawbacks.

The other thing is good design that looks fun and interesting. I think it's fine to mix up art styles as long as they're not too grating, like if you're gonna have a waifu section, don't have some insanely realistic looking picture right next to some plastic 2d Anime picture.
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>>82995581
I personally enjoy the build making aspect of cyoas the most so for me a good cyoa is one that offers a lot of viable builds for me to try out.
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>>82985941
primary: telekinesis
Secondary: Shapeshifting
Tertiary: Endurance
Assets: None
Weakness: none
Ally: None
Reward: Keep powers, gain primary telepathy
Primary: super growth, cyrokinesis
Secondary: Destructive energy projection
Tertiary: Acrobatics
Asset: Hyperblade
Weakness: no weakness
Ally: Fortress force
Wildcard: fame

The plan here is to turn the tables on my nemesis. Now, I'm the one hiding while thanks to their fame I should have a decent idea where and who they are. The powers I've chosen for them give them a crippling weakness to surprise attacks, which I specialise in. As he only gets updates on my location every 24 hours, I'm going to stay away from them while I prepare, then make a mad dash to them once I'm ready and then gun them down.
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>>82995581
Read a bunch of the most popular CYOA's and figure out why they're popular. Personally I've always been fond of Hero Academy and Mage School.

Both were pretty popular a couple years ago.
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Any thoughts on improving the look of my Gift of Faves?

(The actual finished version may have to wait for tomorrow.)
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>>82985941
I feel like Doctor Danger's choice of image is a bit misleading.
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>>82994846
>comics have appealed to coomers for a long time
Also known as the reason J. Scott Campbell was a greatly in-demand comic book artist. :)
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>>82985941
A huge problem here is that you kinda have to make a very specific build if you want to make sure you'll survive (a telepathic one), as, if your Nemesis has Super Stealth and you don't have a telepathy equivalent, you're just dead no matter what else you do. Your Nemesis can just walk right up behind you and assassinate you - and you won't notice.

Makes the entire CYOA kinda a trap, as, without telepathy, it's basically game over.


Granted, for my Nemesis I rolled:

Primary: Cryokinesis
Secondary: Shape Shifting
Tertiary: Super Stealth
Asset: Hyperblade
Weakness: None
Ally: Doctor Danger
Wild Card: x2 - Alien Invader Support & Genius Level Intellect


Regardless of my non-telepathy build, I suspect the story goes...

> After receiving his powers, the defender went to talk to his family about them finding shelter or safety. It hardly mattered, though. The attacker was standing outside the defenders door. The attacker had the innate power to go unnoticed. When the defender went to leave, having not noticed anyone outside, the attacker decapitated him from behind. The end.
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>>82995581
Costs, resources, tiers, meters, NUMBERS. Choices that can in some way be quantified for comparison. But then make it really messy. But messy with numbers, to help make sense of the mess.
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>>82991783
I used to frequent these threads but why should I be active when every post I get some fat slob like (You) complaining and bitching? None of you even post interesting content or CYOA builds. It's pathetic, really. Anytime someone posts anything interesting you all jump on him and treat him like crap. Then you bitch when they leave about how dead your thread is. I wonder why?

This is the hell of your own collective design. Rot in it.
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>>82995912
Just pick your nemesis's powers instead of rolling.
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>>82995841
I don't care aout this trash redditor
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>>82995868
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>>82995581
If the cyoa is set somewhere other contemporary Earth, is it a setting that captures the reader's attention?

If the the cyoa has NPCs (as companions or enemies), are they people the reader would want to meet/help/fight?

If the cyoa has goals/quests, do they catch the reader's imagaination?

Does the author do a good job of integrating the lore?
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>>82995931
>I don't care aout this trash redditor
Jesus loves you, too.

(P.S. I'm not a redditor)
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>>82995581
I will say this; if you're going to have tonnes of powers or choices, spell out plainly HOW to get them. Say what you will about Dragonfall, but it's ability system is excessively easy to understand, which is good. Compared to something like the Bloodborne 2 CYOA, which is needlessly complex.

You can make your story, world and powers as complex as you want. But make the power system easy to understand. If you have separate points for each area, explain that simply and it's often times best to put it at the end of whatever 'Lore' you want to put in. In my personal experience, people tend to make more builds and discuss CYOA's more if these points are simplistic. And this is especially relevant the longer or bigger you make your CYOA. This doesn't mean you have to say, "You have 300 points, here are things that cost points and here are things you can take to get more points" for instance, if it's a school like setting, then you'd use a class like system where you can take 5 or 6 classes each year and then have 4 years, so you can take a total of 20 or 24 classes. The point is to explain this system simply and again, usually at the end of whatever writing you want to do, usually in a different colour or font to make sure people know this is part of the options for the CYOA.
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>>82995921
The trick is to ignore text-only posts whenever possible. That eliminates . . .like ninety percent of the toxicity.
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fairies?
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I wish there was a Harpy CYOA.
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>>82986571
wait
no one has posted the mystery box after half a day
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>>82996320
>fairies?
If that author did a Fairies cyoa, I haven't seen it. Here's another one, though, that's pretty good.
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>>82996327
>I wish there was a Harpy CYOA.
Haven't seen one. What would you want in it?
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>>82989071
>I humbly request one (1) monstergirl/catgirl waifu cyoa.
Will this do?
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was this WIP ever done
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>>82996421
I'm not sure that I've ever seen that "Save the Princess" WIP. Any idea how old it is?
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A New Elemental
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>>82986194
>Cyoas that let you choose to take companions and waifus as enemies instead?
There are a couple like that, including Tankista's Blood Magic. Or the relatively old Chrono Trigger one (which actually has very little to do with the video game). And the guy who does the Vixen Queen / Mission to the Crisis Worlds cyoas.
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>>82996462
just last year
>>79512999
https://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/79510494/#79512999
i was searching for when >>82990239 was an OC
to be more exact, if the drink "lxipichi" is real
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>just last year
Probably not, then. That happens to a lot of first time authors. They post a page or two, and then we never hear from them again.
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>>82996362
For it to be an Isekai CYOA.

The general goal and tones be told through a compelling setting.
For example, The first section will be a "Choose your location" section, where you'll quickly realize that Hapries are a discriminated race, and every place just discriminates against Harpies in different ways. This will set the reader's goal to "How do I deal and survive it, maybe even change it? What is the easiest one for me, or the one I most want to change, and where?", it will set the general attitude of the reader's choices for the rest of the CYOA.

Next, a wide variety of abilities or skills that thematically fits a Harpy and can compliment the general type of builds the reader will want to deal with the hinted problems at the beginnings.
There will be Perks to be more agile, fly quicker, react quicker, shoot accurately when flying, things that fit both a "I want to fight physically" and fit a Harpy. There will also be "Be cute" Perk, enhacnting eyes, Charisma, things that will fit a more social based build. There will be a Drawback section to get more points

And last, a companion/party building section with some limitation and a semi-unique take on the cocnept; Any Companion you take sets other, specifc Companions to be Enemies. Every companion can be an enemy, Each companion has a short paragraph detailing what he does or will try to do as an enemy, all Companions whether enemy or friend will both fit lore wise with the details hinted or provided at the Location section and serve to give more information about those places or the culture there, solidifying "plans" or goals of the reader from a general objective ("Free everyone") to specific ones ("Take the young prince who doesn't hate Harpies, advice and use gull to take out his enemies/help him get the throne")
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>>82996620
I just really want to be a Harpy. Fluffy wings, flying through the air, wind ruffling feathers, majestically avoiding attacks, gripping a bow with ambidextrous talons-as-feet, being cute, tilting my head puzzlingly a full 90 degrees when someone asks me a question, jumping-flying between trees, latching onto him with my talon-legs as I quickly traverse the forest, somber expression, struggling to survive in the wild for my tribe-mates. You know... the usual
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>>82996620
It sounds like you've half-written it yourself. Why not take it the rest of the way? Hit up Pixiv, Gelbooru, and ArtStation for graphics, write up the fine details . . .you can be our HarpyAnon, if you want.
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>>82996626
I blame Elur, the Companion from JRPG's Traitor CYOA, in the Wanderer part, for this.
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>>82996653
If you want to guarantee builds, you'd probably need to include a poop-on-people option (or drawback, if its people you shouldn't antagonize)
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>>82996656
>I blame Elur, the Companion from JRPG's Traitor CYOA, in the Wanderer part, for this.
I've wanted a cyoa with a tentacle waifu, ever since Book of Sigils came out. ;)
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>>82996653
I would absolutely love to do that, been wanting to for a while. I even have a bunch of images already.

The problem is, when I came here, I opened the thread once on college wifi, since then "Uploading files from your IP range has been blocked due to abuse" and I've been a text-only. I remember sending an email to the jannies once, but got no response.
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>>82995581
If you're going to make some combat focused abilities, make sure the player has something to actually fight. Also, give the player something to do in general.
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>>82996731
It's not that hard, just upload it from the wifi of some other place or email it to someone you know or another anon and ask them to upload it for you.
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>>82996822
Good idea, I'll try the wifi one later
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>>82995841
Those pictures look nice to me.

>>82995921
Yeah, we have a couple resident shitposters. You can see them having said they actively post to make this general die, because it isn't as good as they remember it being.
It's a pretty pitiful way for them to live life, but just keep in mind there's a high chance the random rude person is 1-2 no lifers.


>>82995581
Overall, creativity in all of the aspects is pretty great. Creative perks, drawbacks, companions, enemies, threats, worldbuilding, etc.
More specifically, some other things are:
> Nice Looking Pictures:
> Theme Fitting Pictures:
> Well Formatted Text
> Spacing
Spacing basically just means to make the full use of 8MB and 10,000 pixel height that /tg/ gives you
> Usefulness of Perks
> Meaningful Limitations of Perks
> Power Creativity
> Choice Difficulty
I like to struggle over which option to pick, because there's just not enough points available to give me everything I want.
I might make multiple builds that each specialize at something, because I want the other options so much.
> Understanding the lifestyle and beliefs of people in various parts of the world
If its a world that a bunch of people live in,
> Individual Characters Feel Realistic, not a complete Trope
> Desirable Companions
> Significant Threats to use perks against
> Meaningful Disadvantages in Drawbacks
> Drawbacks that are typically based in the setting, rather than coomer cyoas saying I get +4 points for having a constantly lubricated asshole by fiat
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>nearly done with my oc
Feels good
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>>82996960
good work anon
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>>82995861
You'd be surprised how hard it is to find good pictures of male black superheroes who aren't very obviously wearing the suit of a recognizable MCU A-lister.
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>>82995912
You could also take a magic ring or one of the telepathic (Doctor Danger or Empress) companions to cover your back. And even then you have to ask yourself if protecting yourself from that one 1 in a 10 chance they have that single power is worth shifting your entire build around?
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>>82996960
Nice, will we see it next thread?
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>>82997105
No I still have around 10% of work to do sorry
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>>82997138
> sorry
There is no need to apologize, anon.
I look forward to your OC
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>>82994063
Either cultivation or magical girls... Or cultivation magical girls? That sounds novel.
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>>82997006
Not really - until the Eighties, give or take, pretty much all superheroes were white (or shapeshifters who adopted a white persona).

If you still need art, look for settings that were developed after 1980. Wildstorm, Ultraforce, Image . . . much more diverse casts.
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>>82995841
>he's actually embracing namefaggotry
unironically kill yourself.
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>>82997030
Doesn't really matter with the powers he rolled for his nemesis. Total kill U powers in there when added to the fact your nemesis knows everything about you and where you are every single day. It's pure luck if you get a nemesis you can survive. The balance is pretty bad. It's a war games movie deal.

If your nemesis gets the beam power you're done even with telepathy you can't read every single mind in a 6 mile radius around you and once nemesis gets to 3 miles you're dead. Magic ring won't do shit when he knows where you are.
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>>82995912
>> After receiving his powers, the defender went to talk to his family about them finding shelter or safety. It hardly mattered, though. The attacker was standing outside the defenders door. The attacker had the innate power to go unnoticed. When the defender went to leave, having not noticed anyone outside, the attacker decapitated him from behind. The end.
Pretty much this
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Any other notes, KYSAnon? :)



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