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>>77682913>>77682937Badlander, Tradesman (+25 grit)(-30)Dexterity, Running ManToughness, RuggedMelee, Mugger(-90)SurvivalistFujo/Skirt-chaser (+20 grit)Forgotten technology, MasterMechanics, MasterWeaponscraft. Master($$1000)Heavy Weapon, Explosive Launcher $$650Energy Weapon $$250-Energy Beam $$100I assume there's much more to be done with forgotten technology than what is shown, given the Mastery options and the rest of the setting. I am likely to work from what I know, building up a workshop of lost wonders to peddle both cheaply and expensively. Maybe make a name for myself.Also when does this take place in the anime? Vash is running around being himself somewhere?
>>77686957super science please
On the topic of beards:
>>77682913reposting weak engineer/scientist build>Remain silentNo need to go blabbering details about myself around.>Sky-person>NothingI just fell from the sky bro. Probably got kicked out for being a dumbass. Still gotta find a job 'round here.>Talents: Unassuming (70G), Forgotten technology 3 (50G), Mechanics 3 (20G), Weaponscraft 2 (0G)>Forgotten Technology: Automated Processing ($$700), Mechanical Constitution ($$150), Scanner ($$100)I'll keep the last $$100 to pay for the drink and buy other shit. I have little combat capability, my expertise lies in fixing, tinkering, and identifying shit, which is where I will get the majority of my income, as well as plant maintenance. I will use my mechanical/ballistics expertise and the money I earn to make myself a weapon, or possibly an integrated weapons system eventually (turning myself into a one man arsenal sounds good), but for now I will have no weapon whatsoever besides my mechanical body. Hopefully Unassuming will save me from being curbstomped by random angry gangbangers.
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>>77686984>Also when does this take place in the anime? Vash is running around being himself somewhere?Yea, hes out there somewhere doing Vash things.Im going to say pre showdown with knives just so Wolfwood and the GHG's are still around. I also think youre the first person to take a heavy weapon, and a fucking blasma cannon at that by the looks of things. Brave from a man who cant aim.
>>77687041Oh god you dont even have a gun. The setting has "gun" in the name anon, what are you doing?
>>77687073It will be stored away for safekeeping until I can find an ingenious method to repurpose it somehow. Making explosives > any gun, anyway.
reposting excelanons work so that I can steal his (You)s from right under his nose
>>77687136>It will be stored away for safekeeping until I can find an ingenious method to repurpose it somehow.Well hey, if you ever really need to dispose of something very big quite far away, you have the perfect tool.
>>77687136>Making explosives > any gunOnly casterfags think this
>>77687138why would you shit on excelanon like this
>>77687138As if (you) aren't really (him)! I'm wise to (you)r tricks, anon!
>>77682913>>77682913>Badlander>Bounty Hunter>Strength: Weightlifter>Accuracy: Sniper>Draw: Gunslinger>Toughness: Masochist>Survivalist, Intimidating>Sniper, Large Caliber>Energy Weapon, Dead Man's Switch, ScannerEyehax + Sniper = Bestest Bounty Hunter the world's ever seen.
imagine actually making builds for gilshit
>>77687112Anon, I am a normal person who works normal jobs. Besides the occasional mugging, I have no use for a gun. And why would anyone want to kill me when I could fix their shit for them? I'm too useful to die.
>>77687177Casters are a type of gun :^)Also, can we not get into this over a fucking post apocalyptic sci-fi wilf west setting? Pick your battlegrounds god dammit.>>77687136>Making explosives > any gun, anyway.Just be careful no-one shoots your grenades.>>77687209>good draw>sniper rifleOh god its a quickscoper.(also, dead mans switch is an upgrade to the thing above it, perhaps I should have been clearer on that)>>77687238>I have no use for a gun.Aesthetics!
>>77687220It's fun.
What is the most recent version of Black Magic? What's in the allsync doesn't make sense
More sf western-ish.
>>77687286allsync anon's brain was been warped by demonic perceptions, that's why
>>77687286>pg1>pg3Yeah I dunno. Black Magic technically starts with pic related.
>>77687311You don't have to post it you know...
>>77687311What is the full collection supposed to be like
>>77687288
>>77687311And then this page, which is the most recent most assuredly.
>>77687342Yes... And we all know what comes after...
>>77687342And then these two Necromancy pages.>>77687327Why not?
>>77687339
>>77687361
>>77687361Because we already know, you disingenuous cuntstain.
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>>77687220People make builds for italicshit. Stop being a bitch.
>>77682913 repostan>remain silent>Badlander>Strength 1>Accuracy 1>Draw 4 (-30)>Dexterity 4 (-30)>Toughness 3 (-20)>Melee 4 (-30)>Skirt chaser>weaponsBlades:Light (-100)Monomolecular edge (-100)Defensive (-50)>Forgotten TechnologyReflex Tuner (-200)Trajectory Tracker (-300)Scanner (-100)Im the fastest blade in the west, a dashing swordsman whos trusted blade "Rakurai" strikes with such speed that it is invisible to the naked eye. Bullets, men and robots shall all be cut by my katana.
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>>77687413>katana>skirt-chaserKYS coomer weeb
>>77687286>>77687311>>77687342>>77687361>>77687382>Hello, I don't actually like this cyoa, but I will post it anyway pretending that I do, most likely responding to a post I made pretending to be ignorant of something I already knew
>>77682913 I wanna join in too.>sky personDiscounts on the fancy tech are really nice, especially since you cant get money like you can grit.>skillsStrength: Works Out 10Accuracy: Sniper 30Desterity: Running Man 10Toughness: Abs of Steel 30>talentsSkirt-chaser +10Intimidating 5>weaponsMagnum $$400Alternate Mode (Machinegun) $$50Alternate Mode (automatic rifle) $$50Alternate Mode (Explosive launcher ) $$50Alternate Mode (Sniper) $$50>Forgotten TechnologyEnergy weapon $$200Beam $$50Integrated weapon system (eye) $$100Scanner $$50I have an advanced energy weapon integrated into my head. Its for this reason that they call me angel-eye, because looking me in the eye is the last thing my targets do before they see the angels.My angels eye is capable of multiple modes of fire that meet whatever needs I may have, from dealing with targets at extreme range, mowing down gangs under a hail of burning plasma fire or even concentrated bursts that leave craters in their wake. And it it comes down to it I can even emit a beam to deal with any particularly dangerous targets.Due to the nature of my weapon I have no need to draw my weapon, all I need to do is look at my target to have them in my crosshairs. I can just stand somewhere and lay waste to everyone in my way from whatever distance I wish. Make way everyone, the most fearsome bounty hunter in the badlands is here!
>>77687425cringe
>>77687445Nope.
>>77687445I think he actually likes it, he just hasn't (probably never will) figured out how annoying and damning he looks. He can't even shill the thing he loved properly without people hating it. Does he think he's making it more liked? Or maybe he just doesn't care.
>>77687138Basado y rojopilado
>>77687445What? I actually didn't know. I haven't been in this general regularly for a year or two and I was curious about this CYOA getting shitposted about. Not everything is part of your gay shitposting war
WHY IS EVERYONE MAKING BUILDS FOR GILSHIT STOP STOP STOP STOP
>>77687492Don't worry anon, just tell yourself that it's all gil samefagging to make the hurt stop
>>77687425Anon. Its:A. an anime cyoaB. an anime cyoa about a main character who hits on basically every pretty woman he seesC. an anime that has a dude who can shoot sword slashes from his katana (and is an actual japanese larper)>>77687413But what happens when a dude is further than like 3 metres away from you?>>77687451Spoopy. Just avoid getting shot, what with a laser cannon on your face.>>77687220I dont know why all of a sudden, but im enjoying it.
>>77687492Because they like it? Different tastes are OK.
>>77687479If he does like it, he doesn't want other people liking it. Therefore it's not unreasonable to assume he does, in fact, hate it. If he doesn't care either way, then that's actually more distressing since it implies he has no social grace or awareness, anywhere.
>>77687425>coomerThis is the wholesome kind of skirt chasing, the kind that involves trying to look up skirts and peep on ladies in the showers. Not the kind that actually gets laid.
>>77687479>I think he actually likes it<Citation Needed>
>>77687288Always really liked this cyoa, but noxus/ignited felt kinda weak and badly developed imo.
WHEN IS IT GETTING FINISHED? MY BODY CAN"T TAKE ANYMORE
>>77687209>>77687041>>77686984>>77687413>>77687451Now... FIGHT!
>>77687590Yeah, Ignited always used to be even worse with the power stat corresponding to individual charges. Noxus I'm a little more OK with since that hazmat dude seems to work like a regular guy who happens to be a smart cookie and immortal. tfw no brainy slime gf squeezed into latex fetish gear because "they were the only impermeables i could find"
>>77687640Never ever. Throw it in the same bin with cultivator
>>77687662>FIGHT!>non-combat buildbro please no...
>>77687691You'd better have a sharp tongue and sharper mind.
>>77687691You can be the dude whoever happens to be the MC has to protect/rescue!
>>77687691Build a mech suit.
>>77687691Tut tut. Should've known this would happen.
Rolled 29, 26, 6, 21, 2 = 84 (5d30)>>77686957genetics get
>>77682913fuck it>The human typhoon: Vash the StampedeA healthy sense of humor is important in this line of work.>Badlander (100)Ain't nobody special. >OutlawNone of that leg-breaking thugwork, just honest robbery, thievery, and scavenging things that haven't broken yet. >Strength 4 (70)>Dexterity 4 (40)>Toughness 4 (10)The body is the only weapon you can't misplace. >Accuracy/Draw/Melee 1What's a gun lol>Martial Arts (0)There's a limit to punching people? Guess it depends on where you punch them. >Skirt Chaser + Fujo (20)The master thief is also a master pervert. Oh well, we all have weaknesses. >Unassuming (15)A notable thief is a bad thief. >Survivalist (10)Hard won experience from the streets.>Forgotten Technology 1 (0)If you don't know what you're stealing, how do you know you're stealing the right thing? >No weaponThey'd show up on frisk searches. because those are just awful hahaha>Reflex Tuner, Scanner x2, Trajectory Tracker ($$300)Don't ask where I got these. The last $$300 is for... personal enrichment. Bribes, gear, drink and bitches.
>>77687878>blasts dubstep at youWhat now, punk?
>>77687882Well, certainly unique as far as builds go. Although I'm pretty sure he can just walk out with the whole safe half the time, dudes jacked.
I currently have ~100 bottles of urine stored under my bed. Choose my adventure in trying to dispose of them,
>>77687957use your piss to create a philosopher's stone, like the alchemists of old
Gil is giving out author build ratings and now he's getting a lot of builds. It fucking WORKS
>>77687882I see you too have watched great pretender.
>>77686984>>77687882FAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGOTS
Is it better to talk about CYOAs you're working on beforehand (provided you're certain you'll finish them) so that anons know that they're coming? Or it is better to just drop the completed CYOA on the thread one day without pomp or ceremony?
>>77687967That's just citrinas to albedo you need to burn the phosphorus to get the nigredo ash. Still missing rubedo and in the wrong order, a philosopher's stone piss-salts are not.
>>77688112>that picIf you do it PCA then it’s ok
>>77688112Maybe mention it when you have the finished goods and drop it at the start of the next thread. Soliciting suggestions early on can be handy though.
>>77688112>provided you're certain you'll finish themthis is the detail that mattersonce you're close enough that posting them is actually a realistic scenario, or you're just that determined to finish it I guess, then a few posts mentioning it are a good idea. No reason to talk about a cyoa that you aren't going to finish. It's also not good to talk too much about a cyoa that isn't out yet, or the hype will get bigger than the cyoa can deliver onalso what >>77688165 said
>>77688200>It's also not good to talk too much about a cyoa that isn't out yet, or the hype will get bigger than the cyoa can deliver onrip ESA
Give me...waifu CYOAs
>>77688345The only cyoas that aren’t pretending to be something they’re not. Based taste, anon.
I want an evil waifu CYOA.
>>77688345No such thing exists.
>>77687896Apparntly I hope I wasn't flying at the time.Wear a pair of ear-deffs?
>>77688418What do you mean?
Latest changelog:>Added JRPG>Finished ThistlewaiteWork needed is as follows:>IncompleteAnduinBlissDSAFumblemoreHexalbyLanguid CicadaNew ObserverPeil>Almost completenxtub (first cyoa description is a bit sparse, would be nice to have one more boon/bug/bane)Savestate (three boons, two banes)Sockminster (a boon and a bug)unDEFINED (description, more boon/bug/bane)>Might need a rewriteAcheld (claim it is too mean)Aromage (adding slashfiction feels a little too much)Eternal Anon (glowing eyes and halo?)Gil (adding slashfiction feels a little too much)Highlander (claim it is too mean)Sandnigger (claim it is too mean)>Haven't even startedclockworkGhost, EDG, Excelanon, Fox, GenieAnon, GiftedAnon, Homo author #1, Homo author #2, Homo author #3, Liminal, MaskAnon, Mithradates Excelsior, Overlord, Pallas, Quiet, RavenKing, SDA, Spadsey, Strife, TextAnon, Thoth, Thrallherd, and Tunebuggy (possibly more)
>>77688443Waifus who are evil or at least objectively bad people. Not in like a slutty way just like a sociopath or mentally ill way
>>77688514>inb4 castitas
>>77688527castitas did absolutely nothing wrong
>>77688418
>>77688514Check out the black lagoon waifus, they fit that bill
>>77688345
>>77687667Flavor wise noxii seem to be manageable but mechanically they are fucked up
>>77687957Jarate
>>77688859MON DIEU
>>77686903>Jeeves>Bank CodesMostly for the "undetectable" part.>Wrist communicator -1>Enhanced Intelligence -4>Nanobot injection -5I will have it work on further extending my lifespan and preventing any significant global crises.
>tfw redditors are fixing Tok CYOAs
>>77689186proof?
Well that’s it lads, the thread’s going down the shitter now. I can almost guarantee it.
>>77689223https://www.reddit.com/r/nsfwcyoa/comments/lpy0ip/infected_v15_cyoa_editdlc/?utm_medium=android_app&utm_source=share
>>77689186>>77689359Wow, we knew Reddit had bad taste, but this is beyond.
>>77689186You can't improve on Tok's works, they're already perfect.Reddit can't improve on anything, all they do is reduce quality to appeal to the lowest common denominator.How is Reddit fixing a Tok CYOA, then?
>>77689359Is there anything more based than improving upon CYOAs made by other authors?
>>77689359Normally I wouldn’t approve of editing CYOAs, but since it’s tok this is pretty based. Tok CYOAs should be edited as often as possible, preferably by redditors, or maybe the funnyjunk people or somesuch - the more retarded the better.
>>77689465It’s the same way that watering down hot sauce is “fixing it”Some people just can’t handle things in their raw state, they aren’t ready for that kind of intensity, so others have to cater to them, and “fixing” it by making it entry level
>>77689510>making male demons into waifus BASED AS FUCK!
>>77689359Damn... that's pretty cringe.
>>77689359nothing is holy anymore
>>77689510Improving them and then claiming you made them all by yourself
>>77689513>Lore has been rewritten to read clearer, less plot-holey (and more engaging).>There are a few new mutations.>Rebalance the points - previously when using the dual strain option you could end up with fractions. This has now been eliminated.Doesn't seem like "watering down".
>>77689569I haven't seen that happen?The only times when I've seen someone misattribute the authorship of a CYOA, is when it's a confusion by a third person (Redditor) between the uploader and author.
>>77689359>he didn't even bother to credit the original creatorHoly shit lmao. Tok and Reddit really go together like bread and butter.
>>77689611>I haven't seen that happen?No one has been Chad enough to do it.
>>77689611Hey check out this CYOA I just made
>>77689650You have to at least watermark it with your name to truly claim it, like dogs mark lampposts with their piss
I cannot believe that despite the constant shitposting over the cyoa, nobody's gone and made BLACKED magic yet.
>>77689671N
>>77689671You could have done it yourself and made us all laugh, you ruined it now
Any CYOA that allow you to Be the Boy?
>>77689737There was a neat age regression CYOA that was either by Beri or at least very Berilike in writing style. The one with predefined companions, not the one with generic companions.
>>77689809This one?
>>77690182
>>77690182>predefined companions, not the one with generic companionsProbably not.
>>77689510>Guardian Shade1/10. I might appreciate good sleep, and I could move into an isolated house to avoid the effects on others. It would only just barely be worth the trouble though.>El the Lonesome0/10. By far the worst option. I am lobotomized in exchange for nothing at all?>Lurking Eye2/10. Perhaps with enough creativity, severe but not utterly immoral crimes could be devised. The secrets I would like to know most would involve extending my lifespan.>Lost Scourge0/10. "at least once per day" seems destined to bite me. Perhaps I will be particularly forgetful, drunk or comatose on some day, and then she will kill me.>Mammon0/10. More a dangerous liability than an asset. The right person might make this work, but I am not the nurturing type, surely I would mess things up and the worst would come to pass.>Blurred Prophet0/10. I have nothing to protect me against unspecific demons, so picking her would only mean I avoid looking into mirrors ever after. Shaving would be a hassle.
>>77690219Yeah. >>77690182 is exactly the one I meant to exclude. The CYOA I meant had an active Beri-style narrator, a minor god-waifu who was also one possible companion.
>>77689186The only way to improve a tok cyoa is to delete it
Reddit OC
>>77690275Keep reddit OC on reddit please, redditor
>>77690308It's cyoa, so it stays, nigger.
>>77690275I quite like the art and general design, which is rare for reddit cyoas
>>77690275>Type to Video Conversion Projector>Lantern Microscope>Open Wheel Saxophone>Hadron Typewriter
>>77678427The full text reads:A ponderous spell, so slow to cast that most mistake it for a ritual. Practically everyone who uses this spell has some sort of augur (generally a wand of obsidian), since making the spell faster is a necessity if one wishes to use it in combat. The caster holds their hand or augur high, and begins channeling shadows into the air, where they coalesce into a large sphere. Once it has achieved a critical density, it can then be launched at a target or further charged to become more potent. It is exceptionally powerful, but can require up to ten minutes to properly charge. 1 10 Most hunters who learn the spell do not, in fact, control it. It takes very little arcane knowledge to be able to contribute to the formation, and hunters who know this lesser form add to the sphere at a rate only slightly less than one who knows the greater forms. They exert no control over the spell, but if a group of such hunters is formed, they can create a full Shadow Sphere in only a few seconds. 2 20 This is the greater form of the spell, and such a hunter is needed to begin the casting process. At any time, the caster may launch the sphere, but it will be nothing but harmless shadow unless it has properly charged. 3 40 Any lapse of concentration will ruin the spell, and the lack of proper defense makes the caster extremely vulnerable. But with this form of the spell, the caster can rip shreds of shadow from the sphere and slash at foes.
CYOAs where I can run a church? Or be a god worshiped by a church? Pic related has got me feeling a very strange but comfy feeling..
Any cool CYOAs you'd consider actually life changing or that have, like, marked you in some way?
>>77690877>have to rely on other people for your spells you are so fucking retarded, oh my god
>>77690877This >>77691064, no one wants a spell that is only usable if you have backup dancers, we all want spells that let us rip through whatever opposes us.
>>77690877I have to agree with >>77691064 and >>77691078, this is just awful cyoa design. What, you expect anons to be excited about needing to walk around with 20 dudes spamming shadowball?
>>77691064>>77691078>>77691097but can you post within a minute of each other?
>>77691111>it’s a samefag it has to be
>>77691043Black Magic. It's ruined urban fantasy as a genre for me. I always mentally compare it all to BM and it always falls flat.
>>77691120seems that way to me bucko
>>77691120If the shoe fits
>>77690877what's the power level of the shadow sphere? if it's portable artillery I can see it being useful, otherwise it seems too slow to be helpful
Any CYOAs using the chinese elements?
>>77688593Thank you
>>77691252Xuanhuan
>>77691134I'll be 100% honest, I never managed to do Black Magic. I`ve had it saved for a while and keep telling myself I'll do it, but every time I'm going to, bthe annoying formating and how tiresome and time consuming it feels sets me back. The shitstorm its mere existance brings up also hasn't helped my enthusiasm for it.
>>77691270What the fuck I was going to reply to that anon with the exact same thoughts and then decided not to
I want to like Black Magic, but the big tiddy anime waifus are just not there.
>>77691252>insultswha-what does that mean?
>>77691312Annoys basically.Fire makes water seethe
>>77691293I don't need waifus I just need less dense text. Like if you're going to write a novel at least put it in a text format and not an image one
>>77691312>The Insulting Cycle (Wu) Anti-Ko>The Insulting Wu cycle is the opposite of the Controlling Ko cycle. It represents an imbalance in the system. In the Insulting Wu cycle, the Child element that would normally be controlled and balanced by the Grandparent in the Ko cycle, becomes excessively imbalanced, and controls its Grandparent. It resists the control and reverses it, somewhat like a manipulative Grandchild.>For example, instead of Metal (axe) controlling Wood (tree), if Wood becomes overly excessive, it can “insult” Metal, ganging up on the Metal and overwhelming it, causing Metal to become imbalanced. This is like a rebellious child insulting or trying to discipline its Grandparent. In the insulting cycle that element which is normally controlled, harms the controller. This reversal of the normal Ko cycle can happen when the Grandparent element is deficient. For example:
>>77691370Sure, there's that, but come on, waifus. Each spell could be embodied by a tiny fairy with big anime tiddies.
Every time I finish OC I feel deathly bored. Should I just continue working on it and see where it goes instead?
>>77691293>>77691390The false flags here nowadays are worse than the CIA's
>>77691469Why the fuck not?
>>77689186Normally I'd say that they couldn't possibly make them worse, but reddit doesn't like lolis so
>>77691581Because I stop working on something once I release it. I don't like updating.
>>77691587you know this isn’t true, tok
>>77691469Sure, why not ?
>>77691624> I don't like updating.Video games release patch updates and dlc updates all the time. Why should 100x easier to make cyoas be any different?
>>77691649because not everyone wants to make a cyoa 2.27.2917
>>77691664Then get it right the first time and don't upload some crap full of spelling and grammar issues, format fuckups and failure to balance anything properly
>>77691664Well too bad. People like tankista do.
>>77691624I'm pretty sure most cyoas have received minimal changes of some sort after their initial release
>>77686984Third person who wants to look for forgotten technologyFirst was me: The Tech BanditSecond was the walking Maguffin who wanted to fix stuff around the wasteland
>>77691678>don't upload some crap full of spelling and grammar issues, format fuckups and failure to balance anything properlybro you don’t have to shit on italics like this
Drop your fucking OC
>>77691713ok anon, I dropped it. it wasn't very good anyway.
>>77691713Bro wtf I dropped it and it broke
>>77687036>SleekLike I already do>Super Powers>Immortality>Fire Magic>Flight
>>77691700Of all the goddamn authors in existence, Italics is the one who desperately needs the most updates/fixing. It's amazing how his cyoas are so loved, and yet a lot of them are confusing to read/follow, and some text just flat out gets cut off.
Ummm
>>77691735>It's amazing how his cyoas are so lovedUmmm
>>77691759>>77691776Yes.
>>77691776Italics cyoas are indeed beloved. We've had a lot of skeletons over the past three years.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jM8dCGIm6ycUmmm
If you question the love for italics, that's a red flag for multiple reasons
I don't love italics
Post ONE (1) good Italics CYOA.
>>77691920You don't have to love him, just acknowledge that anons love him.
Anons who love italics, speak now or forever hold your tongue
>>77691933that's impossible, you can't acknowledge something that isn't true
ppp+ when
>>77691969pulsating penises plus
>>77691961I love Italics, but wish that he hires an editor and stop pretending Magi's magic will come out good.
The skeleton pope is not one to be summoned by any mere demand, Anon.
>>77692015>The Elemental Charge spell is on a timer and when it is to expire then the effects of the spell is to come to an endThis one gets me every time. That and >When the spell is to be casted on to a non-living object
>>77689809Serene serendipity?
>>77692080Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?
>>77692080>When the spell is to be casted on to a non-living object.Considering we are dealing with anime and magic. There could be a case for a object to be "living".
>>77692120Thinking about it. Aren't all of the lolibabas living objects or whatever like a book?
>>77692120>>77692146anon, if that's your biggest problem with that phrase, I think your grammar checking skills need refinement
>>77692080Why does he feel the need to explain what a timer is in the context of a spell? Or what happens when a spell expires? Did he think anyone would believe that the effects of a spell wouldn't come to an end when it expires? Isn't that the definition? And it's everywhere, just looking for like ten seconds I saw >When the time for the spell is to expire the power of the caster's spells will revert back to their normal tiers unless this spell is recast.right after it. Italics, come on, you literally just said that the spell expires and its effects end and you immediately say the exact same thing again.
>>77692158Well you can correct it to.>When this spell is to be cast on to objectsBut it's whatever for me.
If you could chat irl with any cyoa author for advice (doesn't have to be cyoa related), who would you pick? You only have one hour.
>>77692220>When this spell is to be cast on to objectsanon, I have to ask, does that seem well-written to you?
>>77692224Tok.To use him as an example of what not to do.I would become an astronaut or CEO.
>>77692224You can already get into contact with most authors anon
>>77687510>But what happens when a dude is further than like 3 metres away from you?>Anon. Its:>A. an anime cyoa
Any CYOA where you can create / rule a city-state? I think that's the ideal scale.
>>77692206Repeating things is a symptom of mental disabilities, anon. Don't be rude, we all have our problems.
>>77692224Holdfast. Ask him which movie used his script.
>>77692293Last City by Hexalby.
>>77692234Well you can remove "to be" as well and correct "When this spell" to "When the Animate Object spell is cast on to an object.."I'm not going to nitpick the thing like some autist though.
>>77692080you forgot the incredible >you will never know what cats respond back to you if you are to ask them a question for this spell does not cover that
>>77692385
>>77692403
>>77692423
>>77692080Ultimately, it does not matter if Italics has bad grammar or prose. The majority of people will still play his CYOA with the spells the way they are, the threads will still be devoured in shitposting over lolis or whatever asinine shit that catches their attention, and the world will keep turning.
>>77692390I'd read an entire cyoa with spells written in this style desu
>>77692489Well you're in luck
>>77692385Defeating the invaders normally > grand projects
>>77692461It's true that it will not matter because, as you said, his fans only care about the lolis and other asinine shit, but that doesn't mean we can't have a nice chuckle at grammar that would appall an ESL.
>>77692489Anon, I have some very good news for you.seriously though black magic abridged when?
>>77692390>Use a spell to talk to cats>Can't understand them when they talk back to you. >The translation spell was only one way.Monkey's paw.
>>77692503>his fans only care about the lolis and other asinine shitI was talking about CYOAG in general.
>>77692553you're not wrong
Daft Punk splitting has made me sad enough that I'm going to start working on my CYOA again to cheer myself up
>>77692503If you really want to laugh at Italics and his fags. Why don't you edit his CYOAs by writing over them? Correct everything grammatically wrong with them, add in some new things, post it to reddit just to rile him and his fags up.
>>77690275I like it, some things could be adjusted here and there but its still good.>Super 8 telephone>Video telephone>Antique camera phone>Lantern microscopeIt is now time to edit the timeline, fuck with the dead, and steal the insight of the mortals.
>>77692731this but also remove all the waifus too
we are all friends in /cyoag/
>>77692824except tok
>>77691633Please don't insult me by calling me that again
>>77691814Cmon anon, you're making me feel like I don't matter. I went on a one to two year spree of shitting on Italics. I know I had a few other anons join in, you can't say he is beloved with that kind of shitposting.
>>77692897How does you shitposting about him change the fact that most anons like him?
>>77687286When BMA posted BM he posted the spell page and then the 2 necro pages a bit later as lore/addons. Every update he did after that and there were over a dozen, he only updated the spell page, until near the final final for real this time version of black magic aka 1.9.6 he updated the necromacy pages, hence that's why they're v2 and the other one is v1. Maybe they should be labeled v1.9.6 so as to not confuse people but BMA only updated those a couple times compared to the rest of the mess. He posted inconsipcious relics at another time as if it were a stand alone and then said that it should come before black magic, which is why it's in it's own folder. He only updated that a few times.The 2 page 3's are an error as one is supposed to be page 2.
>>77687483That cyoa IS the main cyoa in those gay shitposting wars...for over a year.
>>77691312Basically instead of being 'weak to' they say 'insult' because of translations.
>>77693033Don't lie, BM shitposting lasted like a month or two at most.
>>77693149
>>77692224As if anyone on 4chan has useful advice to give.Acheld seems well adjusted if anyone.
>>77686957Roll 5d30
>>77693224I don't want to
>>77693149I could have sworn there was a version of this were like 70% of the pics had the girls in their underwear like Rika
>>77693265>chinese mythologyYou couldn't lose my interest faster if you tried.
>>77693324yeah true desu
First OC, please be gentle. 1 million hours in mspaint. Think someone already made an /f/ cyoa at some point or something similar, but fuck it I was already halfway through when I remembered that. Hopefully at least one anon gets a kick out of it.
>>77693149>highly values your opinionimmersion broken
>>77693342If that's what you believe to be immersion, then you're correct, nobody could value your opinion, not even imaginary waifus literally made to love no one but you.
>>77693339>depending on moot for a renaissanceGood riddance I say, faggot gave trannies a foothold.
Apotheosis, why hath thou forsaken us?
>>77693339>hat.swf [original]I'm gonna win debates against the president on twatter.>anime sailor.swf/holdfastanon/, here we come. His OC will drown the site in quality.>mongolian porn.swfbro&pussy_magnet.exe
Is there a cyoa with magical guns?
>>77693265Reminder that Anira/The Goat is the worst girl.
>>77690275uses shitty reddit memes as the bylines ugh
>>77693324
>>77693540
Why aren't there any CYOAs where I have an army of minigirls to do my bidding?
>>77693490JRPG Traitor is the only one that comes to mind.
>>77693586Sad...
>77693137Bullshit. Over a year faggot. Fucking history revisionist. You don't even deserve a (you)
>>77692224gilslap
>>77693578Well that would be because you haven't made it yet.
>>77693339>renamed: kuu ja kuljaa.swfThe afterlife is now Gensokyo. Who cares if I'm a low level npc, I'll be friends with the Youkai Grassroots Network and attend Choujuu Gigaku concerts.>renamed: FLASH.swfLet /k/ return to its early 2010s awesomeness!>original: miku.v4.swfpic related, here I come!
>>77693149Italics should just draft the settings/characters/world and then pass them off to better writers. His ideas are not safe in his own hands.
>>77693533Which of the content is reddit memes?
>>77693490MGI
>>77693670Hopefully a youkai mauls you
>>77693670Reminder: you love her, but there's no mention of her loving you, or even not treating you worse than the stacies already were.
>>77693339yume nikki renamedYuki-chan renamedKuu ja Kuljaa originalInspiration, motivation, and an afterlife.
>>77693803I know, that's why I picked a character that'd be a nice, loving person according to her canonical behavior.>>77693763can't die if it's already the afterlife, I guess. And even then, I'll just be sent to Yuyuko's and Youmu's realm.
>>77692385Normal Degradation RateFree Territory of KreviaMurkborough, the Buried CityRusted Rain, Plague of Storms, Crumbling NatureThe Alien City - ObserversBiological InvadersSkin Walkers, Regenerating, Growing Numbers, UnhinderedCrippled Logistics, Deterministic Behavior>Technological Projects-BaseAutomaton WorkersProstheticsSky ShipsAutomatic DefensesStabilizing ReactionsThe Scorched Forest Anomaly-AdvancedMega DrillersSky FleetSteam ArtilleryLand Dreadnoughts>Magical Projects-BaseGolem ServantsPsychic BeaconsThe Blood Spring AnomalyThe Pyre AnomalyMagineers CorpsThe Anchor Anomaly-AdvancedPsychic CapacitorsPlaneswalker ExpeditionsReactive WallsTitans>Social Projects-BaseIncubation ChambersThe Preservers InitiativeScouting DivisionMagical LegislationExtraplanar Diplomatic ServicesCivil Security Broadcasts-AdvancedThe Pocket AnomalyTerraforming TeamsXeno IntegrationHybridization>Special Projects-BaseRod Towers NetworkPyrokinetic FurnacesArtifical BreedingTricium Refinement-AdvancedTri-ReactorsInstability: 3Readiness: 25Threat: 16Trying to keep a balance between all three Projects for a measly -2 threat was definitely not worth the extra work.
>>77693540I have fond memories of coming up with bullshit on how each of those waifus cucks you.
>>77694014CYOAG is a temple and the only good thing we have for animals like you in our temples is sacrifice.
>>77694014
>>77693339mspaint gigachad
>>77694069Post him
>>77694066The assmad really was hilarious, even though I normally don't like guys like >>77694014 .
>>77690275Type to video conversion projector - top tier porn incomingOpen wheel saxophone - instant travel across thee worldTrack skates - to not get busted by border control and enter female dressing rooms and suchRed tattoo drill - some great buffs here
>>77694066The fact it drove him to make this was the absolute peak of my career as a shitposter
>>77689359I dislike tok but holy shit that's low
>>77689359Tok is an enormous wiener, but I despise leeches. I hope Tok lets loose upon these insects in some way.
>>77694367Only if he suffers worse than them, I don't want that twit coming here and praising himself for "Single-handedly dismantling reddit" after getting their admins to take down one thread. Mutual kill of some sort would be nice.
>>77689359To be fair, Tok has tried to 'improve' other people's CYOAs many times. He even tried to 'improve' mine and add a fucking Tok watermark at the top of the image. Good riddance, imo
>>77694386Mutual kill would be ignoring both.If you cannot hear them, see them nor feel them, they do not exist.Consign them to oblivion.
>>77694416Yeah, if anybody genuinely has it coming it's Tok. Hopefully enough people edit his CYOAs that he fucks off again.
>>77689359and this is why I'll never post my cyoas online
>>77694556Just do whatever dark voodo LO did to keep Reddit from stealing his new shit. Can't cannibalize it if they don't have it.
>>77694589what did he do?
>>77694589You want it posted?
>>77694014repost it, I'm curious
>be machine>can only take one avenue of advancement in a cyoafuck this bullshit why cant i take them all huh? why are you artificially limiting the might of the synthetic in this cyoa to give the other inferior options a fighting chance? let us bloom to our full potential damn it
>>77694747What CYOA do you have trouble with for this?
>>77688345Wasted opportunities have passed us by
>>77693339>Flandre.sfw (original)Because i wanna be the little girl. If i wear them while i go asleep i will be the little girl forever!>Yume nikki.sfwFun dreams are fun.>Move for me.sfwMore loli is nice desu.
>>77694747Here is a good cyoa for machines.
>>77694720I don't have it anymore
>>77695000>Food Sources: Common metals, Carbon plant-life (40), Carbon animal-life (50), Carbon, human-life (60)Sorry bros but points are points>Friend traits: Just you, no friends.>Foe traits: 1,000 foes (65), Sensory nerve stimulation (70), Monstrous reconstruction (75), Band of Darkness (95)I suppose 1,000 beings around the world really, really hate me. Oh well, it's unlikely they'll be able to do much to stop me. Does Band of Darkness do nothing since I didn't take any friend benefits?>Constructs: Ecological Recreation (80), Carver (75), Sentient Recreations (50), Transcendence (48), Mega Structures (33), Von Neumann Probes (23), Space colonization (13)I will remake the world in my image. After everyone is gone and dead I can just shape the world however I please. Dicking around with making a "fantasy" world or building the BLAME! Megastructure for shits and giggles or building a great nanobot supercomputer, possibilities here are limitless.
I hate Anduin. He's stinky and Dawn of a Demon Lord has shat up this thread for far too long.
As someone with a mild hoarder syndrome, I'd like to express my hatred for whoever names their files here as "1", "2", "3" etc. or any other random bullshit.
>>77695350>.pngwtf you cant have blank filenames
>>77695378Do you promise to properly name cyoas uploaded here if I teach you?
>>77695402i dont do that but yes sure affirmative now tell me how does one make a blank filename if its "get linux lol" im posting all my cyoas as 1 2 and 3 from here on out
It is illegal to kill cow in India, yes? But it is not illegal to eat cow. Why is that? You may eat cow but you cannot kill it? Is this not torture?
>>77695523I pick Wada even though she's objectively worse in every way.
>>77695443Nigga they're not blank on my OS. For this place just rename the attached file in bottom box of the reply form.>LinuxGenuinely considering it since w*ndows cucks me on the vital use of :, / and of course |.
>>77695555Then why do you pick her?
>>77695555based and quads
Favorite "build a god" cyoa?
>>77695667PPPP
>>77695523Take Yamamoto, unfuck her looks (sounds like she should grow out of it in the next 12 minutes anyway), make the subpar-ness of her friend apparent to her forcing the latter to adapt or fuck off, then marry n' kids.
>>77695710
The thread is dying...new thread when?
>>77695752Speaking of which, why do you guys start them pre-emptively? I'm a crossposter from another general and there we let it die before creating another one.
>>77695773These are peaceful times. We have grown content and complacent.Yet not all is well.Underneath the placid surface of /cyoag/ lies an ancient conflict, an ember which could grow to a wildfire in the heat of a moment, kid.The war between Create Your Own Adventure and Choose Your Own Adventure.
>>77695773Shitposters want to be first, to be fair when it's not Celt you often get trolling in the OP.
>>77693149man I wonder what would happen if you took them all
horny
>>77695773Ever been on /vg/? Specifically /mcg/? Same shit's happening here, sort of, and on a less autistic scale.
>>77695581Don't judge me
>>77695944Im not judging you, I want you to say why you like her.
>>77695964nta but I like her because she's literally not like other girls and is very much like me. She's the very opposite of most girls who put annoying shit like "Live, Laugh, Love 100 100 100" in their facebook messages. She's pretty based on almost every point, and I can easily help her expand her vocabulary. Also she gets angry easily and flustered girls are cute.
>>77695773Because people are so autistic that the title and contents of the OP are something to fling shit over.
>>77696041There we go. Tbh I would also pick wada I think, shes relatable and shes just more energetic and I like that. Shes also a bit of an immature wreck, but thats kinda cute in a way, like imagine making her come out of her shell and do normie things, it would be cute as heck. Although I do think that the "shes not like other girls" thing can apply to Yamamoto too. >>77695773Some other generals also do it. (see /wfg/, /aosg/ and /40kg/).
Bear CYOA?
>>77696146
>>77696315NEW THEAD because why not?
>>77693994>Trying to keep a balance between all three Projects for a measly -2 threat was definitely not worth the extra work.Rules as written you don't even get that -2 threat because it's canceled out by the +2 threat from invader matching your highest project category. A "slight" issue.