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You are Lieren, the primarch of the emperor's second Legion of Adeptus Astartes and father to its legionaires, greatest scion of the village of Nothing. Heroic hunter and philosopher, friend of humanity and the oppressed, sworn enemy of wicked spirits and devils, betrothed to the ancient vessel Kanzeon, spreader and protector of prosperity, slayer of tyrants and grand architect of the Long-Jian, Grandmaster of the psykerist sect "The wanderers in the fog", the Great hunter of the wilds and teacher of the brothers of the panther, Writer of the Journey, Slayer of the foul tyrant Nitya Sinha and witness to the just execution of the black iron king's bride, AvalokiteĊ›vara, caried out by her own sisters, Kanzeon and Mari.

Having ended the greatest threat posed against humanity upon Shangrala, and freed a second of Kanzeon's sister, the studious Al-uzza, you left your noblest son Dae-Hyun to be recover and be freed from the shell of his dreadnaught while you left behind the known world of Shangrala, to make contact with the mysterious Zoroast peoples, disguising yourself as an excited tradesman and awefilled adventurer, you and your legionaires, joined by Kanzeon and aided secretly from the mists by the Aeldari host lead by the journeywoman Carys, investigated the society and culture of the disparate Zoroast states and where necessary pruned them of corruption and wicked men. Tyrants were hung, and for a short time, you found a measure of peace teaching your sons the techniques of your three martial arts and guiding the blessed amongst them into accepting their gift of psykerism, unhounded and unbothered by the earthly ambitions and manipulations of the chaotic powers, meeting only minor cults festering unseen amongst the thousands of faiths followed by the Zoroast people.

But, once more, the shadows of the primordial tyrants was cast before the sight of your kind golden eyes, and you were drawn into action against their mortal agents and thralls once more, having found a great temple of the corrupted faith known as the Spenta directly over the resting site of Kanzeon's sister Anahita, and discovered a new breed of humanity in the form of the Angra.

And while the majority of these Ox like men were corrupted to serve the malevolent powers of the warp, there existed peaceable tribes of the uncorrupted, demure pacifists who were hunted and mistreated by both the Zoroast and their own corrupted Kinfolk.

Deciding immediately that you could not let such abhorrence continue unchallenged, while Kanzeon lead a squad of your sons into the earth to reach Kanzeon, you gathered the majority of your space marines to find and guard the innocent yet unmaddened Angra, so they may be taught how to defend themselves.

And taught more importantly how to fight, so they may never again be oppressed and slaughtered for the crimes of their cousins.
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>>5264486

The largest and most hardy of the bulls amongst these tribes were personally trained by yourself, while the rest were taught by your sons, primarily those who already had experience in command, the officers of the army of your blood. And, as few of the Angra, especially amongst the free and pure clans, could possibly endure a training session with you even if you held back greatly, you spent most of the time observing them in their day to day life and their new training, having learned their guttural, braying tongue after spending a night with them around the fires they lit in pits of the earth and covered with dried skins to hide the smoke.

You did not, at first, know exactly why you were studying these humble, nomadic people so closely and diligently, but it soon became apparent to you as you watched them carry on with their lives and fended off raiding parties of the corrupted kin and met new tribes and clans of the pure strain of the Angra.

You were searching, subconsciously, for the cause of their cousin's corruption. You had noticed, that every culture on Shangrala bore a weakness to the temptations of dark powers, culturally and societally. The Long-Jian desire for many forms of mastery and innate poetic elegance and expected courtly graces and social orders and the old Yan nobilities abominable excesses, the Vishnu's warrior lifestyle and honor bound way of life and unparalleled tenacity , the Shuni's strong faith, strong familial loyalty and trust, and sorcerous blood, The bask's nobility's tendency to stagnancy and how cheerfully they met hardships. All good, even virtuous qualities men could and should possess, but easily twisted into something foul and immoral by the temptations of the self named gods of chaos.

And, for the Angra, the quality that rendered them open to those temptations, were their stark traditionalism, similar to the bask, and oddly enough their wariness of technology beyond simple stone tools and wares the like the peasantry of long-Jia were forced to use before your arrival one fateful eve.

This wariness, this fear, weakens them, but also forces them to be physically strong. It forces them apart from proper, ordered society and leaves them vulnerable to the whispers of evil spirits. And it is why, so many of their clans and tribes have become monstrous, anarchist cannibals that sweep across the plains like a tide of hungering locusts.

But this is easily solved. For, the Angra are much like the tiger folk, they can be shaped and taught, they are not born ludites just as the tiger folk were not born barbarians and cannibals but rather lead and taught to be monsters. All it would take for the same to befall the remainder of the pure Angra would be a single leader or usurpation to guide all of them into darkness. A tragedy you cannot allow.
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>>5264488

So, while your sons train the young of the tribes, you ride forth, teaching them of the Journey and its wisdom and meeting with the elders of each clans, who are all greying and weakening with age. Then, through skillful and well worded debate, convince them one by one of the benefits of technology and higher culture. Most are stubborn, set in their ways, and snort and bellow and flare their nostrils as they argue with you, hiding behind folk belief and tradition to explain their hesitance to accept your gifts and wisdom.

So you convince them. Through medicine that saves the young children of a clan beset by plague, denying Na Gou a minor prize, or showing a tribe hounded by their corrupted, traitorous cousins the power of the various forms of firearms fielded by your sons of your design or not, or helping a starving clan till fields and produce the same fertilizer and chemical treatments you used to end the famine that weakened Long-Jia at your birth. Soon, when you enter into a clan's grounds, you are met with approval and pleading calls for your gifts of martial training, technology and knowledge. And so, within a fortnight the tribes that once were on the brink of damnation or annihilation, have formed together and left behind their ignornant past.

And are ready to leave behind the stained legacy created for their kind by their traitorous kin. Who, for all their failings and animalistic tendencies, gathered as their now more civilized and learned kinfolk had done under your guidance and command. Which was impressive, considering the barbaric tribes each followed different gods. But, when your head is offered as a prize, perhaps even the squabbling, most malevolent of sibling spirits ancient and spiteful can set aside their difference to make a combined effort to claim it through a mortal proxy.

It shall not matter, for even if every ox headed warrior is blessed by their vile patron, they will be no match for valor and steel will of your sons.

Nor their great firepower and martial talents.

The corrupted Angra, whose luddite beliefs and harsh way of life lead into the open arms of the discordant patriarchs, shall befoul and taint this land no longer. For the heart of their corruption, the gathering of the broken tribes, shall be crushed beneath your heel without remorse.

But, even though they are weaker than your sons, and wield clubs and spears while they wield laser rifles, dark light lances, Bolters, Plasma cannons, and the various other forms of advance killing tools you have created, one can never be overtly cautious when riding to battle.

Especially when the opponent they face gives their service to evil spirits
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>>5264492

How will you approach the coming battles, Lieren?

>Have your sons join with the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash Zaandia in claiming his master's throne, so they are not shot on sight.

>Leave your sons to decimate the unsalvageable Angra population, while you lead the Pure Angra into battle for Arash' benefit and teach him the true might of Long-Jia

>Delegate both the leading of the Angra and the destruction of them to your sons, as you journey back to make sure the Spenta temple is destroyed in the chaos to come

>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons

>Write in

>>5264488
Also meant "Nearly all good, even virtuous qualities men could possess"
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>>5264495
>>Have your sons join with the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash Zaandia in claiming his master's throne, so they are not shot on sight.
>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
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>>5264495
>>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
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>>5264495
>>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into the open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
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>>5264495
>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
>Have your sons join with the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash Zaandia in claiming his master's throne, so they are not shot on sight.
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>>5264495
>Have your sons join with the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash Zaandia in claiming his master's throne, so they are not shot on sight.
>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
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>>5264509
>support
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>Delegate both the leading of the Angra and the destruction of them to your sons, as you journey back to make sure the Spenta temple is destroyed in the chaos to come

tIME TO use the ultimate superpower.
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>>5264495
>Have your sons join the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash
>Take advantage of your brand and draw the hoards into undefendable territory

We can kill them alone. Give us 50 of our sons and we will kill them all in a matter of an hour
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>>5264495
>Have your sons join with the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash Zaandia in claiming his master's throne, so they are not shot on sight.
>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
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>>5264509
+1
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>>5264495
>Delegate both the leading of the Angra and the destruction of them to your sons, as you journey back to make sure the Spenta temple is destroyed in the chaos to come
Think our sons can handle both jobs, the spenta could have quite a few surprises in store plus I'm not liking the odds of the zorost by themselves fighting daemon engines with steel age militaries even if the daemon engines are primitive.
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>>5264486
>while Kanzeon lead a squad of your sons into the earth to reach Kanzeon
I assume the latter Kanzeon should be Anahita, kek

>>5264495
>Delegate both the leading of the Angra and the destruction of them to your sons, as you journey back to make sure the Spenta temple is destroyed in the chaos to come
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>>5264495
>Have your sons join with the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash Zaandia in claiming his master's throne, so they are not shot on sight.
>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
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>>5264495
>>5264509
this is fine.
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>>5264495
>>Delegate both the leading of the Angra and the destruction of them to your sons, as you journey back to make sure the Spenta temple is destroyed in the chaos to come

changing vote.
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>>5264495
>>Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons
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>>5264495
>Delegate both the leading of the Angra and the destruction of them to your sons, as you journey back to make sure the Spenta temple is destroyed in the chaos to come
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Calling the vote now.

Have your sons join with the Pure Angra as they ride to aid Arash Zaandia in claiming his master's throne, so they are not shot on sight.:8

Take advantage of your brand, and draw the Angra hordes into open and undefendable territory. Where they shall then be crushed by their more civilized cousins and your sons:11

Delegate both the leading of the Angra and the destruction of them to your sons, as you journey back to make sure the Spenta temple is destroyed in the chaos to come:5

Total votes:16

So Lieren will first split his present forces, sending some of his sons to fight alongside the Pure Angra who move to aid Arash in his usurpation so they are not killed on sight, then taking advantage of his brand, draw the Angra hordes into an open and undefendable battlefield to crush them with the remainder of his Astartes in a single decisive (And completely unfair) battle

Writing now

>>5264718
Yep!
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>>5266076
Playing fair is when you have no tricks to play or need to win.
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However, it is clear to you, that the still barbaric and chaos enthralled Angra are remarkably stupid. And even if they are blessed by their repugnant "gods", they are still armed with the simplest and most crude of weapons compared to your sons, who are equipped with armaments and armor forged through knowledge and advance methods preserved from the era of humanity's highest peak thus far. Taking every precaution possible, is common sense, and to not do so against the slaves of darkness is utter folly, but even though you have yet to reach the pinnacle of tactical genius embodied by the legendary generals and warlords of the present era, such as Yin Lei or the sadly departed Yan Zihao, your great work to usher in prosperity and end tyranny has necessitated your study and on field experience with the ways of battle and deeper strategy.

But even an utter novice or a humble farmer taken and given the regalia of a general, would be able to realize what is all too readily apparent to you. Your forces hold an overwhelming advantage, greater than any battle you have taken part of before, even those foolhardy bandits who attacked you in the days of your tenure as the administrator of the Gao lands. The Angra are naturally stronger than mundane men, than baseline humanity. However, so were the cloned hordes of Nitya Sinha, and they were similarly equipped. They only remained a threat because of their sheer, all but immeasurable advantage of numbers.

Which the Angra do not have. All they have, is the potential to earn the attention and favor of the foul spirits they worship. And there is no guarantee they will lend these brutes their power or even "bless" them with their notice and watch their struggles in attempting to claim the prize promised for your death or corruption. They would become more troublesome, if they were given a boon by their "Divine" patrons, but as the war against the butcher, the hunt for the lord of the evernight, the scouring of the bask lords, and the burning of the messenger in the flames proved the tides of the great sea are not so indomitable and even the greatest of the beasts that crawl from the shores of the Empyrean can be subjugated and slain.

You look at your hands, contemplating how often they have proven that daemons and the moral, spiritual and mental corruption they embody can be bested and defeated. For, how many have these hands of yours personally subdued and executed? A proud smirk graces your features as you look towards the setting sun, as your sons stand at formation alongside the trained and tutored Angra you have visited and aided. Astarte and Angra both awaiting your next command as you look through the fog and towards the seemingly endless horizon.

For a moment, you imagine the shadows of six great figures befouling it, like mildew on an aged painting.
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>>5266165

And so, your smirk turns into a tenaciously cocksure grin, inviting the beings that cast those imaginary shadows to take their best shot and aim for your head.

"Arash Zaandia is in the process of rising against his lord, seeking his throne. This is a righteous usurpation, for the king he served is a tyranny by way of apathy, indolence and extreme cowardice" You explain, arms crossed and iron hued hair lifting and flowing on the wind like the mane of a dragon in flight, the scar on your cheek revealed through the light of the setting son as you grin only grows larger and more confident "I had planned for this, of course, as it serves not only Long-Jia but mankind itself that a more virtuous ruler takes the reigns of these lands. As was our assassination of those sects I deemed..."

You pause, seeing your father's visage in the rays of sunlight cascading upon you and shake your head, the bitterness of your oath and its necessity returning to sour your tongue enough to draw a sigh out of your lips.

"a risk of becoming a subversive element against the peace and order I and so many others have sweat, wept and bled to bring about" You calmly state as you take a single step forward and close your gold eyes "To ensure the Angra we've raised from their humble and brutish roots can integrate and survive in the society that shall be established from the ashes of the old, they shall prove their humanity and worth by aiding the heroic rebel in his cause, as the Vishnu once did in my own liberation of the Long-Jia heartlands from the cruelties and wild and abhorrent excesses of the Yan nobility"

"They will be shot on sight" One of your son's drawls, drawing his combat knife against the gauntlets of his armor, having chosen to carve bull horn's over the knuckles to further decorate his personal regalia "For these Zoroast, have not been shown the way of the Journey and still think all of these bull men are the same as their feral counterparts and that they are some breed of monster rather than a strain of true humanity. But, I'm sure you're aware of that danger, my Primarch. For nothing escapes your notice, as I have become all to aware"

He is Hector, taken from Creti stock. He refers to his gambling habit and rivalry with Chul-Moo when he speaks of nothing escaping your notice.

"Of course, the majority of our forces will be present to ensure they are not butchered by the same men they ride to the aid of" You say with a nod, subtly showing your approval of your son's decision to raise his voice and point out an apparent flaw in your plan without disgracing you or himself by insinuating that you were so foolish as to allow such a flaw into your plan to begin with or raising his voice brashly and insultingly. A sign that he, has began to adapt to your adoptive culture. Your smile grows less brazen and fills with a parental warmth in its stead.
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>>5266169

"A wise decision, venerable father" Hector says, clearly relieved that his assumption had proven correct, though it would be obvious it would be to anyone who knew you but there is no reason to point out such a trifling fact, especially in front of his brothers.

"Yes, the extermination of the degenerated Angra clans can be carried out with but a fraction of our current numbers, with fifty at my side, I could see them wiped from Shangrala within an hour" You say, making no boasts and speaking no lies

"Which would leave a hundred and eighty six to help the civilized ones not get slaughtered" Chul-Moo chimes in, lifting his eyes away from the lenses of his helmet, which he sets upon his knee "Considering Dae-Hyun is undertaking a covert mission of some sort, and Nikephoros is leading an expedition to retrieve another Archeotech vessel"

"And that would be more than enough to win the war for Arash, but that is not your mission. You are to ensure the Angra are accepted and understood, to protect them so the Zoroast may recognize them as men and allies" You reply "It is unlikely any of you will need to fire a single round in this conflict, but witnessing it may yet prove to be a valuable lesson. One can never know when a sudden insight will reveal deeper wisdom"

And with that, your sons and the newly trained Angra warriors depart to join the annals of local history, while the fifty of your sons who you have kept under your direct command ride with you deeper into the plains and meadows controlled by the corrupted Angra.

Of course, your sons are not aware, that the brand upon your brow is what draws the primitive warriors from their stronghold in the earth, away from the natural walls and pits that would otherwise serve a tactical advantage or as a brief fortification if they remained within it. And while cleverer and more shrewd servants of evil spirits may exploit the weakening of the veil brought about by the presence of your accursed mark, most of them are too blinded by greed and ambition at the sight of it. And though there is no mystical beacon set amongst the stars, as was the case during hunt for Kamal Kannan due to the interference and sorceries of Jian Qi, you are able to lead the Angra from their strong hold by coming within site of their great camp, revealing your forehead and shouting insults and taunts at them in their native tongue. They, for a time, shout back threats, curses and promises to feast upon your entrails as you still live, until their shamans and seers explain to the common warrior and brute the meaning of the symbol carved upon your head and the reward that could be won should your head be offered as sacrifice to their cruel gods.

Claims which you all too readily support, which is what brings them spilling forth from their odorous warrens and guarded burrows. They only keep sight of you, as you slow your pace to allow them to remain just out of reach.
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>>5266172

Until you and your pursuers reach the open plains, where your fifty sons have been give an entire day to prepare. The once featureless, yawning fields of hardy grass and flat lands have been made into a trap filled gauntlet. Seeing the gruesome, sudden demise of the vanguard and most of the chieftains of the confederation of corrupted clans, only seems to encourage the Angra to charge forward with more fervor and excitment.

Charge directly into the fortified trenches dug by your sons, who rise from the mists like a host of vengeful spirits.

The battle is a slaughter, and does not last even half of an hour. The corpses of the Angra filled the craters created by the minefield and the stain the golden grasses of the plains that have survived the battle unburned red

It is a total victory. One even the old fox would admire.

What do you do now that the Corrupted Angra tribes have been ground into dust, Lieren?

>Rejoin with your sons protecting the Angra, and observe the manner of Arash's rebellion and victory

>Meet with Kanzeon outside of the mines to hear of Anahita's condition, and meet her, if she remains a friend of humanity

>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands

>Explore the Angra warrens, sending your sons away so you can investigate the land for chaos corruption and Malevolent Qi

>Write in
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>>5266175
>Meet with Kanzeon outside of the mines to hear of Anahita's condition, and meet her, if she remains a friend of humanity
>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands
The temple is on top of Anahita, isn't it?
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>>5266175
>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands
>>Explore the Angra warrens, sending your sons away so you can investigate the land for chaos corruption and Malevolent Qi
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>>5266181
Support.
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>>5266165
Also, does Lieren really not match up to the Black General or Old fox?

I get that he's never really focused on practicing or learning warfare as a general and instead focused on spec ops spear thrusts but I'd have thought that he has the experience and aptitude to have been able to match wits with the black general on the field of war.
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>>5266175
>Meet with Kanzeon outside of the mines to hear of Anahita's condition, and meet her, if she remains a friend of humanity
>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands
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>>5266201
People that Lieren surrounds himself with tend to be incredibly skilled. Sometime they surpass even Lieren like Feng does. It makes sense because he hates being above humanity.
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>>5266175

>Meet with Kanzeon outside of the mines to hear of Anahita's condition, and meet her, if she remains a friend of humanity

>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands
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>>5266213
Doesn't really make that much sense.
Attracting the skilled does, but because he hates being above people his own skill goes down?
Doesn't sound like our boy.

It's just surprising to me is all.
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>>5266201
>>5266213
>>5266221
While Lieren does tend to have very skilled and incredibly talented friends, it would also do to remember that he's incredibly humble despite being a primarch.

And that that statement came from his own thoughts. Despite Lieren having a strong sense of logic and reason, his sense of humility tends to win out when he compares himself to others, especially people he admires and knows to be a master of their chosen profession/ field.

Also, remember the revelation/ fragment of enlightenment that awoke his psionic potential and decide what his unique ability would be

"The forces that plague this realm, be they material or immaterial, beasts or tyrants are results of excess and intemperance. I empower my allies who in turn empower me. The cycle is without end and beginning and with it's power these threats will be made unreal. For nothing is real but what you create and what we create is reality. A reality where the flesh is denied rot, the blade is denied blood, the flesh denied hedonism, and the mind denied manipulation"

And considering that Lieren's "Golden sea" has only continued to spread and connect to more souls, including Psionically potent Aeldari and he has only grown more psionically powerful from meeting magnus and exchanging energy with a Goddess. And that he isn't particularly shy about praising others...
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>>5266245
Oops, made a mistake. The revelation was "The forces that plague this realm, be they material or immaterial, beasts or tyrants are results of excess and intemperance. I empower my allies who in turn empower me. The cycle is without end and beginning and with it's power these threats will be made unreal. For nothing is real but what you create and what we create is reality. A reality where the rot is denied flesh, the blade is denied blood, the body denied intoxication, and the mind denied schemes."

Not much of a difference, but I'd feel like a prat if I didn't point it out, since what I posted was the original Write in prior to its writer editing it. It'd not only rude not to post the final product, but stupid, since it was what made it into the update
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>>5266245
It's the thing with using Lieren as THE objective narrator, since his eyes are conceptually the perfect sword of truth against any lie.

So if he says something is true or false, we've no real reason to not believe him.
Also, huh. I thought that the golden sea was a deliberate connection that needed to be pulled on to get dividends.

If it's a passive one, then every member of the network subtly and passively improves due to their connection to one another, or just to Lieren who in turn is improved by these connections in a paradoxical self feeding style.

Shit, that's some fridge logic I never considered.
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>>5266175
>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands
>Explore the Angra warrens, sending your sons away so you can investigate the land for chaos corruption and Malevolent Qi
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>>5266175
>>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands

>Explore the Angra warrens, sending your sons away so you can investigate the land for chaos corruption and Malevolent Qi
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>>5266175
>>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands
>>5266253
>Not much of a difference, but I'd feel like a prat if I didn't point it out, since what I posted was the original Write in prior to its writer editing it. It'd not only rude not to post the final product, but stupid, since it was what made it into the update
I was unhappy with that part of the write-in even after revising it, feel free to retcon what you want to make it flow better. I'm just glad it all worked out to the degree it did lol.
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>>5266181
Changing the first part with
>Explore the Angra warrens, sending your sons away so you can investigate the land for chaos corruption and Malevolent Qi
Kanzeon can handle herself, we got to clean up the corruption.
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>>5266175
>Meet with Kanzeon outside of the mines to hear of Anahita's condition, and meet her, if she remains a friend of humanity
>Take your fifty sons, and while the war travels across the lands, personally see to the destruction of the Spenta temple, to keep them from unleashing their devil cages upon the lands
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>>5266181
>support
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>>5266175
>Explore the Angra warrens, sending your sons away so you can investigate the land for chaos corruption and Malevolent Qi
>Meet with Kanzeon outside of the mines to hear of Anahita's condition, and meet her, if she remains a friend of humanity
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>>5266175
>>Explore the Angra warrens, sending your sons away so you can investigate the land for chaos corruption and Malevolent Qi
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btw Malal if 4chan goes down are you going to move over to another site? Like Fiction.live or something? (askin because of the shooting thing in Texas and name dropping 4chan)
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>>5266175
>>Meet with Kanzeon outside of the mines to hear of Anahita's condition, and meet her, if she remains a friend of humanity
>>5267505
Odds of the site going down are slim to none. Worse shit has been tied to it than a shooting.
>Fiction.live
Call it akun
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>>5267505
If this place goes down then there won't be a site on the internet where he could write this.
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>>5267795
truth
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>>5267798
>>5267795
False. Sufficient Velocity hosts three
HUGE WHFB:Quests.
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>>5268068
>SV

My guy...
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Unwritten rule violation?
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>>5268098
nah you're not in any hot water.

SB and SV especially just have a really shit mod team and culture that'd stifle this quest into the ground, and ngl most participants would be banned due to various excuses
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>TFW we were memeing last thread about lieren undoing retcons and bringing back squats and found out like an hour ago squats are apparently actually coming back under a new faction name
Well son of a bitch.
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Oh wow. Lieren is now affecting IRL
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>>5268183
What about QQ?
Not many Quests there tho
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>>5268442
QQ is more smut heavy while having less awful moderation.
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>>5268068
I meant it more that if they are banning this site they would be banning all forum sites.
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>>5268183
What? What are those acronyms?
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>>5268659
Questionable questing, it's like Spacebattles but with porn and less shitty mods.
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To be fair the NSFW stuff is a different section from the SFW stuff.
Safeeeeeeeeee
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>>5268602
They're probably just using this as excuse to crack down in anonymous message boards, not all boards.
Intelligence agencies love online forums, they're great for gathering info and evidence in most cases.
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>>5268068
QQ has a decent one about the pre-Sanguinius IX Legion, but I'm very torn regarding the legion's special ability. On one hand, eating something's brain and gaining all of their skills and memories seems OP as fuck, especially when applied to psykers, but on the other I really like the idea that if a less-willful marine eats the brain of one of his more willful, dead comrades, the dead one can take over the eater's body. Makes the whole "they've only had one Legion Master despite him being recorded as KIA multiple times" thing a lot more interesting than just "a new marine takes the name."
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>>5268823
Thank you! Will check that one out.
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You know when we do join up with the Emps proper i kinda like the idea of Lieren disguising himself as a Custodes to keep up his tricky ways but also to observe other Primarch meetings on the quiet with his eyes. Give a fun chance for encounters to.
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Ohohoh..... Sounds like fun. We should train up our legion to do some compliance without us so we can go around doing this.

Wonder if we an convince dad to give it his thumbs up?
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>>5269189
Alpharius is going to sue.
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>>5269227
The panther and the hydra will become either mortal espionage enemies or best stealth buds. But, the most important question is this. Whose is solid and who is liquid?
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>>5269227
So will Vulkan. He traveled with the Emperor in unadorned power armor for a few years before reuniting with the Fearless (and renaming them).
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>>5269257
So what you're saying is.... We'll be serving with Vulkan for some BROTHERLY BONDING!
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>>5269284
I think that'll happen regardless. Promethean Cult vs the Journey debates will be fun.





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