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Take 15 minutes to write a poem called "Who | Am." The only rule is that each line should begin with the words "I am...". Include statements about where you are from racially and culturally; memories from different points in their lives; interests and hobbies; mottos or credos; favorite phrases; family traditions and customs; and whatever else defines who you are racially.
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>>19050613
Your Uni is dataminig your soul.
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I am confident
I am superior
I am white
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>>19050613
I am a nigger
I am from niggerville
I like sucking nigger dicks
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>>19050613
I am Chuba Janga
My motto is "Fuck the anglo"
My cultural tradition is impregnating white women
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I am some dude who spends too much time on the web
I am always pretending to be well read
I am a pseud, a fag, with women I always shit the bed
I am worthless, professor, please give me a F grade
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I'm a white boy
I'm meek and tamed
I'm a loyal goy
I'm my ancestors shame

I'm indebted to the academics
I'm failing in ways of procreation
I'm gonna wear a mask and believe in pandemic
"I'm not a racist at least" is my compensation
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>>19050682
This is nice.
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>>19050613
I would do this seriously but not if I were on 4chan
If you're just a suburban white kid with no knowledge of his ancestors then go by your hobbies and interests. And probably talk about charity idk. You go to church?
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I am white
I am pro-white genocide
I am jewish soooo
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>>19050694
Is this trip still on?
"I thought I was dreaming that there was another butterfly".
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The gay thing about this is, if you're white, you will not be permitted to express any pride, 'racially'.
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>>19050613
I am...
I am...
I AM....
I am....
(here you go OP this will get you an A in modern "academia")
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>>19050704
Butterfly is cute but our personalities are pretty distinct, I get baited more
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>>19050745
>Butterfly is cute
Are you a lesbian too?
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Do american unis really?
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>>19050751
I'm bisexual but also kind of a loser so women don't go for me
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>>19050774
ew, repent
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>>19050613
I am a nigger
I am a faggot
I am a niggerfaggot
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I am
The tiger
He destroyed his cage
Yes
YES
The tiger is out
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>>19050774
>I'm bisexual
>I'm a bisex
>I'm a bi
>I'm
>I
Wtf, man?
Why is every young woman these days always some variety of non-hetero?

That said, why don't you hit on them instead?
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>>19050809
I love this poem unironically
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>>19050817
It reminds me of Blake. But also a Lord Weird Slough Feg song
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>>19050682

hehe
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>>19050813
Because I'm into the type of ego-annihilating sex that only desperation and horniness can produce. I don't fuck women expressly to get off, vibrators are more effective at that anyway. Lesbian sex has more of an altruistic quality. It's very /lit/
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I am, therefore I think.
I am, therefore I stink.
I am everything but the kitchen sink.
I am a real faggot.
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>>19050613
Anthropomorphize an object. Imply a lifespan. That's all you need to do.

I am a star backlit,
a beam unbroken,
my mind a mellified phase.
The begining was so long ago,
bright and warm,
against the cold swells that buffet from the emptiness ahead.
The arrow of time cannot reveal,
the cruelty of a filament,
closer to the beginning,
than the end.
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>>19050851
>Lesbian sex has more of an altruistic quality.
Altruistic? Tell me more.
I sense some kino coming up, let's see if you can deliver it.
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>>19050851
I am coomer hear me click
I am tired of tame shlock
I am where I point my dick
I am range banned from Iraq
I am buying new hard drives
I am spilling countless lives
I am going to fap to you
And there's nothing you can do.
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If you are not black you wont win anyway so not much point entering
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I am white
I miss Hitler
I wish someone nuked America
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>>19050613
I am whatever you say I am, if I wasn't then why would I say
I am, in the papers, the news everyday
I am, the radio won't even play my jam
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>>19050889
I am your gasp and curdling scream
I am the dread of morning
I am your neighbors drawing the blinds
I am the reason you took off work
I am a panting grin between your thighs
I am the hands that smother your cries
I am the girl you want to hate
I am not why your period came late
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>>19050817
You see, this is why we post anonymously. If I had come across this post by Anonymous, I wouldn’t have thought anything of it. It would merely be another anon wholesomely expressing his fondness for Nael’s poem. It belongs to a generic, collective voice without name or background that merely approves, with the community of which it is a part, of Nael’s poem. But suddenly, with the introduction of the name and the tripcode, the ‘I’ becomes individualised. Suddenly, you posting this, perhaps unconsciously or even outside of your attention, becomes a self-asserting act, as in ‘I’ like this poem ‘unironically’, as opposed to other people who don’t like it, or people who only like it ironically. But such a statement is incredibly annoying and vapid: you are not original for liking this poem unironically, as the ‘I’ in connection to your tripcode wishes to assert. It is an incredibly generic opinion, that shows immediately your newfaggotry and implies a deluded self-centredness, as though it were necessary for your mundane opinion on this poem to be heard. It is not, your voice is not original, you are not special. Either hide your shame of ‘individuality’ under the shared name of Anonymous or get off this board.
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>>19051043
all this shit just to namefag LMAO
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>>19050613
I am from the middle of the voiced path.
I am where the marrow meets the night.
I am where nature shudders in fright.
I am who died when the devil repented.
I am the storm and its heartbeet rain.
I am the place where stones do not go.
I am the river where that cleanses their soul.
I am nobody, and yet, I will outlive time.

I am a bird whose nest is woven from
I am's and whose call is what broken
I am.
I am dust and I am life -
I am a war made awake to itself, and
I am the breath that illuminates the words,
"I am that I am."
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>>19051053
Edits
I am from the middle of the voiced path.
I am where the marrow meets the night.
I am where nature shudders in fright.
I am who died when the devil repented.
I am the storm and its heartbeet rain.
I am the place where stones do not go.
I am the river that cleanses their soul.
I am nobody, and yet, I will outlive time.

I am a bird whose nest is woven from
I am's and whose call is one big broken
I am.
I am dust and I am life -
I am a war made awake to itself, and
I am the breath that illuminates the words,
"I am that I am."
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>>19050613
I am angry
I am upset
I have to do this gay poem
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>>19051019
Kek. You really belong here.
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poetry is for fags, this thread confirms it.
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>>19051133
poetry is for PATRICIANS. Stay pleb.
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>>19051047
fuckin name fags, amirite?
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>>19050613
I am white and proud
I am shouting out loud
I am really sick of feral niggers
I am taking the names of election riggers
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>>19050613
I AM I AM I AM I AM
I AM I AM I AM I AM
I AM I AM I AM I AM
I AM I AM I AM I AM
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I am not my job,
I'm not how much money I have in the bank.

I am not the car I drive.
I'm not the contents of my wallet.

I am not my fucking khakis.
I am all singing, all dancing crap of the world.
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>>19051222
this one is really good i like it
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>>19050613
I am a "nazi"
I am a racist sexist bigoted antisemite
I am advocating for genocide and the enslavement of females
I am justifying this with recourse to "game theory"
I am accepting the death of my people cheerfully
I am getting shot by federal armed forces
I am posting sneed
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I am not a tick on your chart
I am not a statistic, bought and sold
I am not your poster child
I am not yours
I am too plain, so I am told
I am to be ashamed, if only I could
I am remorse to know, of course, that
I am a color that cannot celebrate
I am not to dance, sing, or sport
I am cultureless, never to participate
I am of thieves and colonialist sort
I am to sever my lineage
I am only to sit afar in quietude
I am to repent and beg
I am, all the while, useless to you
I am sorry for my great grandfather
I am sorry to have said "great"
I am aware of my privilege
I am aware of my hate
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>>19051080
The only poem here that amounts to true art. Good job, anon.
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I am the world's forgotten boy.
I am the one who searches... only to destroy.
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>>19051460
It's not really a poem, just a string of tone cliches.
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I AM THE LAW
I AM THE LAW
I AM THE LAW
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>>19051493
Perhaps I agree that the first block is. But that second block is magnificent.
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>>19051460
>pretentiousness is equivalent to art
Found the mid-wit
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I am man who walks on boundaries
I am someone who would know
I am the man with the shirt
I am fallen in the snow
I am the shoes with lightning
I am the whipped calf
I am alpenstock holder
I am the gravel down
I am the brown who sings
I am the white clown
I am the man who walks boundaries
I am the fence itself
I am the one who will decide
I am unleashed hell.
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>>19050613
I am spending way too much money one this bullshit “education”
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>>19051460
Thanks, friend - I'm just a nobody.
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>>19051080
I agree this one is kino
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>>19051080
based
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>>19050613
I'm unironically descended from slave owners in the Southern United States (I'm not jewish). I have occasionally met black ladies at Wal-Mart who tell me we are related (I have no African DNA), perhaps my great-great-grandfather raped their great-grandmother in the woods. That's what they used to do, the men would go walk out in the woods and send someone to the woman to tell her that the master's calling her and he's out there in the trees. Pretty messed up of him to racemix, I'm glad I at least come from the pure line (no black admixture) straight through from Anglo-Saxons and Norman stock.
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I am the veiled solipsist
I am the kingdom of the abyssal astronomist
I am the world at the base of the spine
I am his hands reaching out for all they can find
I am pulled into the depths of mind
I am the burned out star that lost its shine
I am lord of the cosmos, burning white hot
I am engulfed, submerged under waves of thought
I am placed one by one into the skull
I am night bursting out when it is full
I am eyes that can no longer see
I am soul untethered in the starless sea
I am observed and observer of distinction
I am void and divine fiction
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I am
SHAKE ZULA
THE MIC RULA
THE OLD SCHOOLA
YOU WANNA TRIP
I'LL BRING IT TO YA
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>>19050613
Oh god that's masturbatory. Why have universities become such jokes? Everyone is a character with a backstory that has to be explored and picked apart, everyone is a "Who I am" as if it's anyone's business who you really are but the people who are close to you. Creepy bastards. Just list off some racial stereotypes associated with whatever group you belong to, ironically that's what they want to see. The Mexican kid talking about chanklas and their Madre's famous guacamole.
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I am narcissistic.
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I yam what I yam and it's all that I yam
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I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body and fire is my blood
I have created over a thousand blades
Unknown to Death,
Nor known to Life.
Have withstood pain to create many weapons
Yet, those hands will never hold anything
So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works.
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>>19050613
I am nobody
I am a tramp, a bum, a hobo
I am a boxcar and a jug of wine
And I am a straight razor, if you get too close to me
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>>19051840
You're actually on the right track but need to turn up the volume. Every sentence logically connects to itself:
>I am the world at the base of the spine
>I am his hands reaching out for all they can find
>I am pulled into the depths of mind
I am the realm at the valley of the spine
I am hands dancing for what they find
I am drowning under the hills of the mind

Creativity is kinda forumulic. Say you have
hands -> reach
becomes
hands -> body party -> body -> things body does -> dancing!
It's really simple but what gives poems a polished look. For base of spine:
base -> bottom -> part -> features that describes bottom -> valley
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>>19052114
Then to add spice every now and then pick and opposite so depth -> cave -> hill. Use adjectives however you want.
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>>19050851
>altruism
>/lit/
fuck off
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Wait a minute, I saw Jesse Jackson do this on an episode of Sesame Street and a rerun of CHiPs
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Iam I am I am I am
I think I am
I thank I am
I'm glad I am
I'm proud I am
A real religious man

I am I am I am I am
I pray I am
I feel I am
Oh Lord I am

God knows I am
A real religious man
As I realised
You're my best friend
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>>19052564
get dat corn outta my face
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>>19050853
kek'd
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NIGGER NIGGER NIGGER
I am
1 100 %
Nigger.
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I am the guy your girlfriend wants to fuck
I am someone she would offer to suck
I am everything she wants in her hole
I am something she wishes she stole
I am beyond your fragile understanding of flings
I am over the general gist of things
I am unable to comprehend life in sadness
I am damned to live in faithlessness

I am but a shadow over your life
I am that yet you release a sigh
I am not a poet in the slightest
I am not even a writer why then?
I am aware this is awful
I am aware this could've been soulful
I am cursed with a foggy mind
I am afraid I cannot write
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I am White
I am Right
I am the Rider in the night
Burning crosses in my wake
Chasing spooks their scalps to take
Hitler's ghost my arm shall guide
As you join me by my side
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>>19052086
Based and ATWApilled
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>>19050813
>Why is every young woman these days always some variety of non-hetero?
it's in vogue
sole reason.
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>I am a bitter man
>I am a spiteful man
>I am an unattractive man
>I am a man with a diseased liver
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I am Batman.
I am quitting this college because this assignment is hella fucking gay.
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>>19050682
Nice
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>>19051080
Kino
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>>19051504
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p3ta5ahB-6w
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I am the terror that flaps in the night
I am the fingernail that scrapes the blackboard of your soul
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>>19054576
Have you ever considered that maybe women enjoy sex and not only with men?
It's not a huge jump in logic considering the Greeks were pedophiles and the age of consent in America used to be 12 years old
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>>19055297
cope
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There is no real me, only an entity, something illusory, and though I can hide my cold gaze and you can shake my hand and feel flesh gripping yours and maybe you can even sense our lifestyles are probably comparable: I simply am not there. It is hard for me to make sense on any given level. Myself is fabricated, an aberration. I am a noncontingent human being. My personality is sketchy and unformed, my heartlessness goes deep and is persistent. My conscience, my pity, my hopes disappeared a long time ago (probably at Harvard) if they ever did exist. There are no more barriers to cross. All I have in common with the uncontrollable and the insane, the vicious and the evil, all the mayhem I have caused and my utter indifference toward it, I have now surpassed. I still, though, hold on to one single bleak truth: no one is safe, nothing is redeemed. Yet I am blameless. Each model of human behavior must be assumed to have some validity. Is evil something you are? Or is it something you do? My pain is constant and sharp and I do not hope for a better world for anyone. In fact, I want my pain to be inflicted on others. I want no one to escape. But even after admitting this—and I have countless times, in just about every act I’ve committed—and coming face-to-face with these truths, there is no catharsis. I gain no deeper knowledge about myself, no new understanding can be extracted from my telling. There has been no reason for me to tell you any of this. This confession has meant nothing….
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>>19055387
Repent. Accept Christ. This is garbage.
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>>19050613
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>>19050813
>Why is every young woman these days always some variety of non-hetero?
Because women aren't really attracted to men.
Sexuality is a social contract, existing externally to us in the form of archetypes, stories, dramas, etc. The knight rescues the princes, woman do not fantasize about rescuing a handsome prince. The conquering warlord has his way with fair maidens, woman simple accept this with open arms. Men lust for women, women lust after the idea of being lusted after by a handsome man. You're looking at humanity trying to find some semblance of distinction, of class, of differentiation and self-realization, but there simply isn't any. Women are attracted to men who attract women, and while that seems tautological to you it makes perfect sense to the over-socialized femazoid species.
Stop thinking of sex as some sort of atomized liberal contract between consenting and knowledgeable parties. There is no depth, not even shallowness, just a constant reflection of your own gaze and your own mind, which is itself merely the self realization of a culture and a language within a particular sack of flesh with all of the subjectivities and shortcomings that entails.
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>>19050682
Based
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>>19055440
>princes, woman do not fantasize about rescuing a handsome prince. The conquering warlord has his way with fair maidens, woman simple accept this with open arms
Now this is actual cope. 30% of women attempt suicide after rape
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>>19050682
A+
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I am black
I am white
I am zebra
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>>19055297
The only thing women truly "enjoy" is Satan.
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>>19055456
Sure but 70% of female erotic novels are about handsome warlords carrying them off to be ravished against their will.
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>>19055493
These days that kind of plot would be panned as "problematic"
Even 50 Shades of Grey starts off with a literal contract. Elements of non-censuality are highly scrutinized. At the most there's physically abusive and domineering relationships
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>>19055505
Only because the overarching method of societal and economic control is in the form of atomized liberal contracts between consenting and knowledgeable parties. That merely proves my point that people don't have genuine erotic sensibilities but simply reflect the overarching mythos of society. In this case, the idea of entering into a pleasurable social contract with a handsome domineering billionaire is just a fetishization of the economic superstructure we already live under.

The thesis, which is that sex is a genderless social phenomenon, still stands. In the case of college lesbians, its probably the result of Katy Perry being heavily pushed by Jewish pedophiles back in 2008.
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>>19055543
>The thesis, which is that sex is a genderless social phenomenon, still stands.
No.
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I am peepee
I am poopoo
I am peepeepoopoo
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>>19055564
Cope



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