Snag is for bullying
>>120228936I like the cactus
this was really fucking good, hope it gets picked up
>>120228936I wanna marry that bunny girl
>>120228957If Snag had a cuter design he’d be more popular
>>120228957People would like Snag more if he didn't look like a rejected Gorillaz member
>>120229118She's too good for any of us
>>120228936Likes:>Lovely animation>Awesome background art and character designs>Almost every voice actor sounded good>Badass musical score>Rawhide makes for a fun protagonist>Mako makes for an excellent first antagonistDislikes:>Not really a fan of the voice for BW>Marigold and Snag weren't all that great as characters>Rawhide and Snag's relationship could use more focus>The show needs more of a straightman to balance out the wackiness. I could see BW and that red fluffy dude working out as the straightmen of the show but I didn't get the feeling of that in this pilot.Overall, I'd rate the pilot an 8/10. Liked it a bit better than Cliffside's.
>>120229184Pretty much this. Based Mako appreciator.
>>120229168This. Isn't he supposed to wear some cowboy-like clothes?
>>120229240bio says he is an outsider who drifted into the town. A city boy
Was makos father an alcoholic?
Gonna sound weird but the mayor was my favorite character. He was funny as fuck.
>>120228936honestly i don't see what all the fuzz is aboutyeah it was fun and shit and i see all the effort they put into it with all those years in development but i got bored after rawhide got her badge taken awayam i missing something or what?
>>120228936God damn this is so good, IF ONLY Rawhide and BW had competent voice actors. I swear every time they speak it just takes me out of such a vividly imaginative and visually splendorous world.
>>120229469It could be improved once it gets picked
>>120229469Why are their VAs bad? BW and Rawhide both fit the characters, especially better than their original VAs. The only thing I would say is have BW tone back the sultry aspect of her voice, it doesn't fit the upbeat show, granted she's been in darker scenes. But the fans would hate for BW to be less sexual in any way.
>>120229450not everything will click with everybody. that's just how it is.
>>120229469I kinda liked Rawhide's actor. The way she said "Sorry dad" at that one scene nearly made me tear up.I do agree with you on BW's voice, though.
>>120229209Mako is funny and oddly attractive.
>>120229609It's the stache.>>120229469>EG Daily>not competent
>>120229469Rawhides voice is Tommy Pickles, Elizabeth Daily, you don't get much more competent than a woman with her resume.
IT'S ACTUALLY OUT???????????
>>120229636>>120229690Well she's sounding her age, her raspy voice does not fit the energy needed for this role in the slightest.
>>120228936i enjoyed snag. his voice reminds me of that bully from fairly oddparents.
No one is talking about the cactus guy. Shame.
>>120229869He's voiced by the same guy who did Jack Spicer BTW
>>120230013Thanks Puu I love you, blessed be ye soul
RIP BECKY PRIM
>>120230153Rest in Pepperoni
>>120230153SHE WAS VERY SLIM
>>120228936I hope the LGG folks release a full version of this snake creature guy's song sometime Also I hope someday that poor dude changes back
I liked it, but yeah BW voice doesn't work for me and the saloon fight kind of didn't make sense for me with the haunted skulls making BW and Rawhide fight I didn't see why that was really necessary.
This wont matter
>>120230195AND INCREDEBILY DIM
New Pogchamp leaked
>>120230472He's quite badass without trying
Sound design and sound quality is really lacking.
>>120228936Meh the world feels off, like it's not sure if the whole world is made of monsters living like normal people of it's just the town.Raw Hide is ok as the girl trying to live up to her dad as a sheriff.Snag is kind of under developed, he needs a reason as to why he left the city and why he teamed up with Raw Hide.Buffalo Wing is just the mysterious bounty hunter/native girl, I like how she went looking for Raw Hide, but I mixed feeling about her not helping the town.On the one hand it makes sense as a bounty hunter not to help for free, but it means she less screen time.The other characters are ok, the main focus is Raw Hide being sheriff after all.
>>120230472Ridiculous screencaps thread? Ridiculous screencaps thread.
The voices sound like they afraid to yell
Snag is like half ape.
>>120230245It establishes the setting and weird and wacky. Some skull ghosts possess the main character and her foil and it's not big deal.
>>120230528Yeah the audio was a little wonky at times. It being an indie pilot is maybe an excuse. I'm sure it wouldn't be a problem in a full-scale production.
BW's frenemy shtick is potentially interesting. Why does she antagonize Rawhide so much but then go to the effort to goad her out of her funk?Salty that internet scum ruined the "Bufflo Wing" gag, though.
>>120231107Maybe she is lonely. The elaborate gags with the constant name changing kinda makes me think that. Wants someone to mess around with. A friend
These designs ain't great
>>120230621Yeah, some lines actually surprised me when they got angry because I expected loud yelling
So, when are we going to get some Mako porn?
>>120231403I have seen some mako requests on aco. Nothing. So probably not for a good bit. Not a whole lot seem interested in him sexually
>>120228957>>120229153>>120229168I think getting rid of the unibrow would help.
>>120231403If she couldn't get lewds then much less gays>>120229670>>120229692
>>120231403>>120231470I mean, I'm into it, but I've never drawn shark man porn before. I don't even know what the dick should look like.
>>120231593I guess take a plunge into rule34.xxx or e621. A lot of shark anthros probably
>>120230245The skull thing could've been shown better but other than that I have no qualms
>>120230245Yeah the possession part was definitely weird and I wondered if it was like a reference to when BW's character used to be spooky and she was more like a medium.
>>120231837Probably, shame they didn't use old concepts from the original trailer
I hope BWs voice changes if this ever gets picked up or more eps are released. Absolutely terrible voice
>>120228936If the creators are reading this: why a pilot? I don't mean it as an insult, I think this was a well done piece, but why not just make it a 20 minute standalone film? Like it could be the same conflict, but without the trappings of needing to introduce everything as a recurring conflict. Just a small thing but I see all these indie pilots and i wonder
>>120231891>why not just make it a 20 minute standalone film?because they want to make a series, of course.
>>120228936the native looks high AF
it felt pretty lackluster for all the buildup. The audio was really bad. From a lot of the still images I saw I expected something more polished.
>>120229168Yeah I get that he's the city slicker but he totally sticks out, though a bit less so after the saloon scene.
>>120228957tbf i prefer Snag to raw ride, she is ... a co-protagonist who only exists to be funny and be his partner. Snag is the best option.
>>120232486That weird scream cracked me up.
>>120232346They had to cut coats
>>120228957I'm a Snagfag, so add an extra tally to that chart.
>>120231500Idk I thought Snag was a nice touch. Lord knows how many Greaser looking characters there are these days.
>>120228936>the trigger warning at the beginningholy shit, who the fuck needs a trigger warning for something you'd see on Cartoon Network? holy fuck
>>120232618>who the fuck needs a trigger warning for something you'd see on Cartoon Network?Literally Youtube.
>>120230239It's a real song by JD Wilkes called "Bible, Candle, and Skull" https://youtu.be/oagfWnh-oPY
Has rawhide fugt snag?
Is this supposed to be for children? Is it supposed to be funny, or just nice animation?
>>120229184This but I personally liked Marigold for comedic value the sequence in the bar was my biggest laugh of the episode
>>120229469BW was fucking garbage but Rawhide was good, I thought she sounded cute
>>120230101What is this garbage?
>>120231921But if you already made the "pilot," do you even need a series? Does it need to fit that mold? What can't you say in 20 minutes?
>>120228936How many cryptids were you able to recognize in this pilot, /co/?
>>120228936holy shit this is terrible, even for an indie project. even Hazbin Hotel was more tolerable than this. speaking of which, I wonder if it was because of HH that LGG team got their shit together and actually finished this. 2/10, just not very good.
>>120232834I got excited when I saw the Yokai and The Flatwoods Monster.
I've noticed these threads over the years, bit never really scrolled through any of em. I saw the release and it was pretty decent.Give me a quick run down?
>>120228957That settles it. I’m gonna draw a Snag.Our boy needs support.
>>120232834I appreciate seeing the Hopkinsville Goblins.
>>120232831Is your brain OK?
Is there a Mako character sheet? I can try contributing, not gonna do porn first though.
>>120232847>when someone talks shit about Sergio Leone's spaghetti westerns
>>120233051Lineup for character height.
>>120233046>>120233051>>120233077Thanks. Like I said don't expect anything too exciting at first.
>>120233077Goddamn can Zach draw a cute girl. I hope if he ever has the time, he does a painting of BW like his other pinup girl art.
Before watching this I thought Marigold was going to be the mayor's daughter.
I really don't see all the hate for the voice actors, unless there was some pre-pilot test footage that voiced them different. Fang sounding like Jack Spicer fits well, and while BW is a bit boring in her first scene, the graveyard one sounds better. Can't really comment on RH since I neither love nor hate it, it is what it is.The one thing that did bother me was pic related. Maybe I'm an idiot who has no knowledge of how animation works, but this looks kinda bad. But is the only thing that I thought did look bad, so big plus there.
Where the FUCK did Snag get this big ass skull?
>>120233174It does look odde
>>120233210same place as the ribs mako's lackeys get knocked in to
>>120233297They need to fuck
>>120233174She's sliding that's why.
This feels like those terrible post john k bob camp episodes of ren and stimpy
>>120233185>WATASHI WA NO NINGEN DESU
>>120233174Her slow gait and dejected motional state should mean she moves slowly but she quickly slides along instead.
>>120228936still not even a 100k views
>they kept rawhide's visible titsThat was my main worry for the past few years, good stuff
>>120233607It's up to you anon to do your part and share it around to those around you who maybe interested through social media.
>>120228936I hope the youtuber fandubbers makes some cool dubs of this, would be cool hearing a German, French, or Spanish rawhide, and it would be cool if it got a japanese dub for westaboos.
>>120232971Yes, I just think everyone conceiving of their ideas as tv shows that may never get picked up is limiting the medium. There are so many pilots, and relatively few shorts that stand on their own as complete statements. This was a good short, and I can tell how much love went into it, I just wonder why it's trying to fit a television mold when it could have exercised more freedom. Same with Hazbin, same with any of 'em.
I wanna fuck the shark.
>>120233793But how does one fuck a guy that's got 2 penises?
>>120233814>2 penises You’re joking, r-right?
>>120233880Technically, they're cartilage extensions called " claspers" used to hold the female.
>>120233880Anon, havent you studied marine biology before?>Google: sharks have “two penis-like organs called claspers,” and that “shark sex is extremely aggressive.”
>>120233959I imagine a lot of people will be drawing this one
>>120229268Didn't everyone drink back then ?
>>120233926what's this from? is the girl bringing it up out of nowhere, or is it one of those "this is how god made it" jokes
>>120231529I need tumbleweed GF.
Is it bad that I felt no pity for Rhubarb and laughed at his misfortune in spite of the abuse he endured?
>>120234145Unlike most punching bags, Rhubarb seems to really deserve what he gets, and this is also balanced by his having tangible power as mayor.
>>120234145No, it's called karma
>>120234077It's a series called "Heaven's Design Team", it's about a team of people who design animals based on God's requests.
>>120234283Exactly what I was hoping it'd be, thank you.
>>120234145He deserves the worse
Dunno if I'd wait another 5 years for the next episode, but I'd definitely watch the series!
>>120234145Ouch, that’s gonna hurt in the mornin’
My only real complaint was I didn't really liek BW's voice. I didn't HATE it, but I didn't really like it.And I know it won't get changed, because they made SUCH a big deal out of getting a Native to voice a Native.
>>120233814There’s two holes anon.
There is SO MUCH BW porn out there...
>>120229184Agreed it really needs a straightman, and the mayor cannot be that person.Maybe have more of a "city folk" character that has heard about the town and is explicitly there to wrangle some of the craziness. Like a cryptid researcher, there to classify and order and put into a box. Not an "audience perspective" character, but the opposite.
>>120234662They just need to at least get her a better mic. ffs>>120234767With a good chunk coming from commissions and request from drawthreads.
>>120234767International porn no less, even Nezumin-san has done BW
>>120234767>>120234811If you count the porn and regular art BW easily amounts for most of the Long Gone Gulch fanart.
>>120234690Bless you for the only shirtless mako image in this thread so far.
>>120234767And that's good!
>>120234767Which is your favorite?
Mako is more effeminate than I expected from a character like him, is he supposed to be gay or something?
Gross, I love her.
>>120234997Effeminate? He's just more silly than I expected. And that's still attractive somehow."What the grits!?" is gold.
>>120232657What could possibly be triggering about it?
I'm not seeing any talk of this anywhere else but here. I'm worried the hype was dead before it began.
>>120235108dude, just search Longgonegulch or Long gone gulch on twitter, I am seeing quite a few on the main post from LGG and others
>>1202348481000 hours in mspaint
>>120232917Well, I drew Snag, but even then Rawhide managed to work her way in.You'll have to forgive me.
>>120235171Even when he wins he loses
>>120235171This looks clean anon. Great work.
>>120235171Cool stuff dude
>>120235171He can't stop losing
>>120235171Got a blog, bro?
>>120235401no i do not
>>120235429Don't answer for me.>>1202354@aesderelict/spoiler]
>>120235171Sweet work my dude
>>120233988I can't believe I remember this cartoonWonder how many Game Grumps fans know egoraptor once animated a chick getting raped by a shark
What the grits?
>>120229986I knew that voice sounded familiar. i haven't heard him in awhile.
>>120233174Toonboom rig, that is all
>>120228936https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gh0lvpdikzoWhat exact drawing program are they using here?
>>120232968Based Hopkinsville poster.
>>120235512Gonna check your stuff
>>120235499Followed, your stuff is dope
>>120235742I had completely forgotten that tomar did the voices for it, the dad, the daughter, and even the shark.
>>120236022was it actually his birthday, or is that his gimmick?
>>120235742Uhh video?>>120236064I honestly don't know. It seemed like a gimmick.
>>120236064only just because the pilot came out that day
>>120230560>Snag is kind of under developed, he needs a reason as to why he left the city and why he teamed up with Raw Hide.It's just the first episode. I'm sure we'll get the flashback/origin story of Snag at some point.
>>120229184Why is Mako unironically hot?
>>120236312is there any source of this? I've been hearing peeps say they will produce more independently. All I know is that they will make a move to promote this video to various studios to get it picked up
>>120230601>>120230472I didn't know it was Budnik that voiced him.
I want to molest Snag.
>>120236347You tell me, anon.Is there a term for people who want to fuck marine life similar to furries or scalies? I'd refer to you as that if there is.
>>120230245the mayor implied that a possession fight happened before right?
>>120235801Wait no I lied that looks like Adobe flash CS5
>>120228936Lot of the wanted posters at 2:53 looked cool. That squirrel looked like it was ready to fuck shit up.
>>120236472Those are technically still considered Scalies. Fish have scales too remember
>>120236564do you think some of them will show up later in the series?
>>120236657likely just background stuff. I doubt any will be involved in scenes.
>>120236681>>120236657>>120236564Probably backers or something
>>120232689Looks like the right
>>120236714You right but to be exact those are a few of the most prominent supporters who shared all updates and helped to showcase the show a bit further.
I keep getting autofilled jgl in Leauge, so while I wait for dodging, here's another wiphttps://imgur.com/a/lL1AYrQ
>>120236779>https://imgur.com/a/lL1AYrQsaw it in the other LGG thread. excited to see it finished
>>120236779Can I see your other art?
>>120235086People get furious over words, I mean you can't even say Simp as a joke anymore...
This was really cool, and I love the character designs so much.Also the backgrounds are kino...But, the writing needs a little refinement if I'm being honest.
I liked it. Good show.
>>120237215Jolly good show!
>>120237267Indeed glad they managed to make it
>>120229899Fucking loved that guy, and loved the comedic timing on "I messed up!"
>>120230970Would've liked this better if it felt less random though. Like have someone try to cast a spell that goes wrong or whatever, just so the ghosts have some context.
>>120233741They're made by people who want to do a bunch of wacky adventures with their characters.The people who are comfortable making standalone shorts tend to be more artsy.
>>120237365Star nipples is my favorite. But underappreciated is the Squatch."Wait your turn!"
>>120236347Evil is sexy.
>>120233174>I really don't see all the hate for the voice actorsThey're not bad, they're just not very good.When she says "gimme" she's really not selling it. Lots of lines are not "sold". The only exception is Bauza who's doing Mako. And I hate Bauza's acting in general, but he's the best voice actor on this pilot.
This anon here. >>20227255Just dropping the first drawing. It's a sketch for now but he said he might finish it later. The next idea is RH+BW with Squatch.https://files.catbox.moe/vup25u.png
>>120229692What a precious bunny
>>120237516Ah! You beat me to the punch!
>>120237516>https://files.catbox.moe/vup25u.pngThis is a work of art.
>>120237576You in any way related to Sheridan College?
>>120237736Who? Might be a stupid question.
>>120237516Hot as hell
It's just Gravity Falls in the Southwest instead of the Northwest. Would absolutely prefer this over Hotelluva Boss, though.
>>120228936Loved it. Long Gone Gulch is a great start to the new year.
I just wanna fuck the shark.
More like Long Gone Hype
So BW is sure to be in Miss /co/ this year right?
>>120238962Most likely. But that depends on if some one nominates her and if she qualifies.
Anyone drawn raw hydes sheriff balls with her sheriff cock?
>>120238801Yeah... I’m not sure what the future holds once a few more weeks pass and The Internet forgets all about this indie pilot.
>>120238981I know some old rawhide futa drawing from ages ago. Not that good looking in my opinion m. There’s a bit more for BW futa stuff
>>120239005Ill try to request or commission some, do we have ages for these characters?
>>12023904516 for Rawhide, 17 for Snag, and at least 18 for BW. I am not a huge futa fan but I will appreciate it if the art is good enough for me. Who you eyeing for?
>>120239004Habbo Hotel will live forever because it's uniquely unappealing in all respects but Gulch isn't bad enough to live on in infamy like that or anything, it's just alright.
>>120239004If we get news of the show getting picked up with in 2 weeks we should be fine. Hopefully there's no higher ups meddling with the style or designs.>>120239065Sweet shes both legal and not legal over here, I'll try to draw some stuff.
>>120239111Oh you are an artist? Nice.
>>120239065Literally what was the point of giving them rigid numerical ages? Aside from Rawhide missing her late father, there’s nothing in the pilot that gives off the feeling that the two leads are teenagers. It doesn’t matter if Zach & Tara were asked the question; they didn’t NEED to come up with specific ages. More cartoon creators should just take the Rad and Enid approach.
>>120239111already got an idea in mind btw? I was thinking maybe BW sucking Rawhide off>>120239136world building I guess like BW being a bounty hunter.
>>120239120No but if the show takes off like star vs I can make lewd meme with /co/
>>120238962If we don't get another ridged poll as usual
hasn't this been on production since 2015 or something? why does it look so fucking bad
>>120239380It's because other stuff looks better compared to it.
>>120239385no I mean, it looks nice at times but the animation comes and goes, I guess it's pretty hard to notice but something about it feels really off, some scenes look great and then it's stiff and plastic lookingthe direction is pretty bad too, it lacks focus
>>120239400Well they were going for animation that's not just people standing still all the time which was a common complaint back in early 2010.The animation reminds me of Mighty B. Maybe the fact that it's so polished and new looking that it doesn't hit the same beats as other shows that use it's style of animation. It probably just needs some grain on it.
>>120239420ffs sake guys.
>>120239428>that's not just people standing still all the timeIt looks like they put too many frames in between "standing still" ones so you get a couple """fluid""" ones and then it goes back to standing still, it just looks very amateurish, and why the hell did they go for 20+ minutes instead of condensing it to less than 10? it just feels bloated
>>120239477This post was never mentioned in the past LGG threads, now suddenly, it's out and about.
>>120239535mate, this hasn't happened in the pilot and we are unsure of it's future. You are outraging over nothing
>>120239548If that so he deserved being cancelled
>>120238962God I wish
>>120239562This isn't twitter
>>120238962I suppose but that thing is a mess at least a believe mess unlike /v/'s version.
>>120239631it's two camps, it's either way better, or too boring.for /v/'s campaign.
>>120239562It was never picked or pitched it can't get canned anon.
>>120239535I don't really give a shit if it's actually done properly and not in your face.
>>120230101Puu is a pedo
>>120231403I want to draw him but I only draw straight porn. What girl should I pair him with?
>>120240111I guess it's up on who you prefer the most.
>>120240111draw him solo
>>120240152He said he doesn't do gay porn.
>>120240111why not both?
>>120240157it's not gay if he's alone
>>120240136I do like bw a lot, I wonder if they fit together. Doesn't hurt to try>>120240164what do you mean anon?
>>120240181I mean, if a guy is jacking off and you're looking at the image of him jacking off, it's gay.
>>120228936It was pretty alright, but nothing too particularly revolutionary.The good>overall designs and background work>visual humour>general art style>the concept of using myths with wild westThe bad>inconsistent linework, appears quite frequently throughout the pilot >the animation in some areas is quite limited and stiff, clearly had some signs that it was rushed and should be polished way much more>the overall plot is fairly predictable and standard in how it's structured>most characters in the show feel like cardboard cutouts with not much to show for, outside of their roles. But this is likely to be expected for a pilot>Marigold feels quite useless as a character and serves as no purpose in overall story, the very same can be said for cactus scarecrow character>The relationship of main characters isn't well thought out and didn't have much to show for>Rawhide's backstory seems to be thrown in for the sake of making her sympathetic to the viewers>Mayor being a general stupid ass overall doesn't really entice anyone to think that the main characters should stay in the townWould I see this being picked up? Probably not, since I feel that this show is very basic for what it is. I'll think otherwise if they can improve on it's own flaws.
>>120240111I actually like Rawhide the best so uhh her.
>>120240191threesomes are a thing. https://us.rule34.xxx//images/3861/8ecf911bd39e6d5aecae995e1cea8fcd.jpeg
>>120240191noice, I like her a lot. I wonder what idea you got in mind.
>>120240208oh you meant both girls?
>>120240221Yes. Double fellatio, titjob, assjob, really anything will do.
>>120240111same guy who made this? >>120234690
>>120240285no, I'm a different anon. I never drew Mako still. I only made sfw fanart back in 2016/2017
>>120240191you probably already drawing but pigtails are the best so maybe include that hairstyle.
>>120228936the fuck is with the greaser's voice? by visuals he looks like he should sound like an adult, but his voice is that of a teen
I wanna marry a marygold
>>120240285Lol no that’s me.
>>120228936Rawhide and Snag's designs are extremely appealing, they're practically ripe for merch.
>120k in one dayNot looking good /co/mrades
>>120232618Twitter usersEspecially dumb fucking minors who always bitch over the dumbest shit
>>120241014We'll have to save it with porn
>>120241287Can confirm. Twitter is the new tumblr after the porn ban because all the idiots moved onto that site
>>120232618In all my years I have never seen a warning for an animated short that was this vanilla
>>120236303>that detailed backOh fuck I didn't even know I cared about this until now
>>120240980>everything needs to pull in fuckhuge numbers in the first 24 hours or it's not worth itBased nickelodeon executive
>>120232618It’s the fault of Youtube. They advertise anything animated for babies if you don’t put a disclaimer. Hazbin Hotel and Helluva Boss had to specify they were R-rated to get a profit off the episodes they released
>>120239607Apu Star wars is sjwfest
I think BW is very attractive, anyone else feel the same way?
>>120237501What’s so good about Mako’s voice compared to the others?
>>120237501>And I hate Bauza's acting in general But why??
>>120242464Shame her voice actor is fucking trash.
So we are all staying here just for the porn, right?
>>120243171Pretty much. We’re already running out of things to say about the pilot now that it’s out, and Lord knows a follow-up won’t be coming anytime soon, if at all.
>>120242972Do you expect me to write a line-by-line breakdown of all the bad deliveries versus the good deliveries? I gave one example. You want more, listen to the pilot yourself.>>120243068No reason. Like I said he's the best voice actor on the pilot by far.
>>120243220I can argue with the people who don't like BW's voice. I think she has a great voice but I understand why people don't like it.
>>120243237>Superjail! I miss it ever so...
>>120243251So you personally liked Midthunder’s line deliveries, but can admit something was up with her recording equipment/sound editing?
>>120243220See you in five years for the next episode
>>120228936Liked it but the native american bitch was making out with the microphone so hard trying to do a slutty voice I honestly had trouble hearing what she was supposed to be saying at some parts, I saw her design months ago and never imagined her sounding remotely like that at all
>>120243220>>120243330Has a singular, 20-minute cartoon ever garnered consistent /co/ discussion for more than a month? I’m already dreading LGG’s fade into obscurity.
>>120243347Ah, so you share the same sentiments most of us do. Good.
>>120243347Yeah I think everyone agrees that BW's voice sucked ass.Glad to hear that my nigga Pinchley had a good voice though, I don't think they even confirmed a VA for him until like a few weeks ago
>>120243382Gt released around 8 episodes per "season" and that didnt last so there's no chance this will survive will no news.
>"Excuse me BW, you think you could speak up a bit?"
>>120228936That was alright.About my only major complaint is BW's voice.I think it's supposed to sound sultry, but she sounds more tired than anything.That, and I'm not sure what the point of the spirits possessing BW and Rawhide to fight was.I think it would've been better if Rawhide decided to fight BW on her own for disrespecting her, her badge, and her role as sheriff.Other than that this was decently amusing.Wouldn't mind seeing this picked up.
>>120240216ayo, who's the artist?
>>120243382It could survive a while if the creators make some promo art or a Q&A about the world and things like that
>>120243347I liked her voice it was like soothing asmr
>>120240216The whole essence of Heidi/Rawhide (oh, I just got it, Heidi, Hide, Rawhide, haha) is that her boobs are way higher on her chest. This guy fucked up
>>120229800The voicework on Rawhide is kinda funny because her deliveries are expressive and definitely sound cute, but the character's animation is so manic that the voice sounds low-key in comparison.It's probably less a matter of the VA's age and more a matter of the director not explaining how wacky the animation style would be.
>>120244482 Haha that is kinda funny yeah
Snag's soft spot for Rawhide is cute.
>>120228936I see Zeurel worked on this. Is ANYBODY interested in his indie pilot?
>>120245624Not unless it has cute waifus
>>120245624not into furries, sorry
>>120245624Right now I’m indifferent to it, but I haaate the main character’s voice. That’s gonna be the biggest barrier for me to cross once the pilot comes out.
>>120245624I like how he animates stuff, so he trying a real thing would be interesting, but dont know if he will abuse the "focus on a character head and then animation is super bouncy to compensate the composition"
>>120245761>>120245772The duality of anon
>>120245836Nice ass and thighs. I’m kinda bummed there isn’t more art of her out there.
>>120245624>>120245783Getting Rachet & Clank vibes from this. I dig it
Does Tara have any non-tv animated stuff prior to LGG? I know Zach made Blendersteinhttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnDm8-b8Jp8
>>120236779A bit weird that you pretended to be me and copy and paste my exact post from the other thread, but I am still working on it>>120243874that would be me
>>120246379not him but that confused me. I was like, no progress since hours passed and still playing league?
>>120246379Heh, sorry for that. I just don’t get why it was so hard for everyone to stick to one designated thread. That first one should’ve been abandoned the moment >>120222968 was made, and it definitely should’ve been archived by the time the second thread with a YouTube link in its OP surpassed in reply count. It’s annoying having discussion split between two alternating threads.
>>120246406Yeah, dont know what that was about... I wouldive made atleast some progress and would post more WIPs other the same one over and over again lol
>>120246504>designated threadkys yourself ponyfag
>>120246790>ponyfag I don’t see the correlation... C’mon, anon. What exactly is “fun” about hopping back and forth between two threads over the same fucking topic? It’s so much easier to just have everyone in one thread, plus we can always continue discussion into a following thread once it hits bump limit. This should be a no-brainer, yet synchronous threads keep happening ALL THE TIME.
>>120246576I feel I seen you before. Are you the same guy who drew Rawhide holding a guitar. I requested that
>>120245836What can I say?Love bunsLovr buttsLove thighsSimple as
>>120246909you misunderstand the situation. it's not that there are issues with having multiple threads about a single topic. it's just that nobody fucking cares.
>>120246962Who drew dis?
>>120247114IC. some guy I stumbled upon on a art server. I left but apparently he drew it because another guy told me about it. Asking that dude if he has any twitter account
>>120246379Mate that's looking fantastic
>>120239175Sixteen and Seventeen!!!!?Man I thought that they were at least 14 and 15 due by their behavior/personality, and maybe by their height and how they look.
I know you're not allowed to cast people who aren't the right race for VA work anymore because it makes Tumblr cry but man is the VA for Buffalo Wing bad.
>>120248272Is she even the right race?
>>120248293she's a native american, if I'm thinking of the right person (chick from legion who was inside the dude from legion)
>>120228936dont get me wrong , great art style but bad everything else if i was a channel i would say no to this pitch
>>120248338if you were a channel you'd be an abstract concept incapable of making decisions
>>120234662She sounds like she's trying too hard to sound like Raven, IMHO.
>>120246406I want to suck BW’s ass
>>120248335You are correct. I wished they got a better actor but it's not like Native American actors are plentiful.
>>120249354Damn at least they picked a cute VA
>>120246379really? Are you in any way affiliated with the deviantart bondage community cause this stuff looks like it's a deviantart bondage drawing. no offense tho since i'm in that community too
>>120248335They actually prefer to be called indians. Only the white man calls them native americans
>>120228936>excellent animation and background>forgettable writing and poor pacingEvery fucking time.How can you spend YEARS on a 20 min pilot and still fuck up these parts?
>>120250162Art is a part of the writing in cartoons. Makes no sense.
>>120250162Hows the pacing poor?
>>120245624Most of these designs are shit and don't even look like they belong in the same show.
Behold: Snag fan art.
>Spunky redhead >petite brown girlYeah this is my shit. I give it a based/10
>>120228936cant wait to see when it gets picked upa few scenes need some more sound fx and a couple voices need to be changed. other than that good stuff!
>>120250162It's a pilot. It's almost as much an ad as it is an episode, so pacing and writing issues are forgivable so long as it's interesting enough.
>>120250673>no answer That anon was full of shit.
>>120251022Looks like a young Rick Sanchez
>>120249528No, im not active on DA atm and that WIP doesn't have any bdsm, although I do draw that kind of stuff alot.
Some of the pacing and atmosphere was a little off but overall I really liked it, and that's exactly the kind of flaw that is likely to get fixed if it becomes a series and they get enough episodes to find their groove.
>>120251927Why not? Having a place to post your stuff is important
>>120252021>Why not?bc I use NG
>people worrying about the amount of views influencing the show’s future Reminder that Breadwinners had like 100k views before Nickelodeon picked it up. The fact that this has people connected to the industry gives it a decent chance
>>120252125Oh alright. Just waiting for an update
>>120246379Fuck can't wait to see this finished
>>120232834/x/ hereis that the fucking Jersey Devil in the front?
>>120234767Nowhere near enough
>>120252963Question is which do you prefer. On model or off model?
>>120252125link to your account?
>>120252784Yeah they added cryptics from all the native American folklore both south and north
Alright its getting a bit late and I have to set this aside for now.Was going to color this, but I think I may just keep it black and whiteheres snag and rawhide visiting their pal, BW, on a scorching hot day only to find she's found an odd way to beat the heathttps://imgur.com/a/lBtl9dv
>>120253812Bravo, dude. Great on finishing it, ish. I will wait a day or two to see if you will color it on your Newgrounds before I take this to the color edit thread
>>120253812Amazing job glad you managed to finish it
>>120253812Absolutely based, got a site?
>>120253812Outstanding, and that's a nice POV too
Well there's not much to talk about the pilot anymore so who else we waiting to finish their art?
>sheriff legsI am particularly interested in this item
>>120229184I liked BW's line-delivery, but thought she was hard to hear at times.
>>120254734She sounds so much better in the graveyard. I think we're all just used to that saloon clip they shared ages ago where she sounds really awkward and quiet.
>>120228936Overall, I liked it. The animation and character design was good, but a lot of the gag work felt... Directionless? It's hard to explain. Sometimes it felt kind of wacky, but without saying anything. It didn't really seem to evoke character or what was happening.I like Rawhide. She's cute, but I wish there was something more to set her apart from the other spunky female protagonists we often see. Snag is a cool concept, but aside from aesthetics, I feel like very little sets him apart from the rest of the cast. If you're going for the city guy moved to the wild west, lean into that more. He had a different accent, but his lines still felt very western. BW was fine. Seen characters like her before. Didn't feel very noteworthy.The score was great for evoking a kind of late 60's, early 70's pop-horror vibe. Which is cool, because a majority of the characters are cryptids. That said, it felt, at times, more like surf music than Western. Maybe lean into that a little more.In fact, lean into the Western thing more, all together. It's nice to see so many Wild West themed cartoons coming out recently, because... Well, I'm from the South West, and it's nice to see the genre getting some love. That said, I feel like a lot of them, LGG included, use the trappings of the genre without really capturing the spirit. Overall, if one of these were to become a show, I wouldn't mind if it was this.[spolier]But I liked Sheriff Hayseed better.[/spoiler]
>>120232618I think it's less about "triggering" and more about making sure this doesn't get shoved into YouTube Kids.
>>120255358How does that shit work again? I know colorful videos get put in regardless if it is family friendly or not
What does BW stand for now? It doesn't really make sense. I always read "Buffalo Wing" as this character being a swindler who's playing up her heritage without understanding fuck-all about it to sell more snake oil and shit.
>>120255727>Whoever asks about what her name stands for, she will always give a different answer- BW's Bio>It doesn’t mean anything. Like the classic “Man with No Name” archetype of the Sergio Leone films. Its a moniker that is supposed to encite mystery. - Zach on Twitter
>>120255800That's pretty funny considering it's only her name because their old joke with it was deemed insensitive and they can't use it anymore. I'd have just changed her name entirely if I'd decided to bow out like that.
>>120255727They kinda did that with her having past aliases >>120226059had the pilot been longer, they might have expanded on that like maybe changing her name during the story.
>>120242464>magical savage tropeNOT COOL
>>120235035kind of reminds me boingo's manga style.
Really hoping Dom Kreeps will release his OST for the short, I like BW's little lounge themes she had when she popped up.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uk510sdKRYs
>>120256312>I like BW same
>>120256337https://youtu.be/qTtp305MieU>TFW no QT BW to drink with
>>120229153>>120229168>>120231500>>120229240jesus christ this board gets worse and worse by the year. i really do hope the crew gets advice from anywhere BUT HERE. holy hell this isn't even a taste issue anymore, some of you are outright misguided
>>120251022Oh no! He's hot!
>>120234145maybe snag and rawhide should be more competent.
>>120257125Here's some way way bigger boobahttps://rule34.paheal.net/post/view/3789267#search=Long_Gone_Gulch
>>120245624>Normal words, but animal guys!No.
Has the schizo SU fan from the other thread shown up already?
>>120257295Nope. His thread still gets bumped so he has no reason to move
>>120234662>a Native to voice a Native.I didn't know about that part I guess it explains why she sounds so weird compared to everyone else who goes between strong Wild West accent to weird old southerner
>>120257162>Mako has zero (0) pornwtf I thought people liked him
>>120232868>kappa>tengu>rokurokubi>kasa-obake>chochin-obake>what appears to be a very small ushi-oni/gyukithis IS a good cartoon
>>120255800>the w stands for wumbo
>>120257426Well we're waiting for this guy. He'd be the first>>120240111
>>120255835It's like when Lady Antebellum changed their name to Lady A. We all know what it used to be, you can't just say it doesn't stand for anything.
>>120230601a worm with a hat
>>120257587I mean his still has a ways to go. It's not going to die because the dude is certainly bumping it himself. While ours is almost done
>>120249354Damn, that's a badass last name.
>>120257388Her name is Midthunder, and they released an update about it a few years back.
>>120255382I'm not sure, but they really should give the creator the choice to send it there them self...
>>120255800>It doesn’t mean anythingBased if true.
>>120258414Don't know. sorry
>>120228957>>120232486I really like this City monkeyMy favorite character so far
>>120258793He's more ape that man
>>120256738>some of you are outright retardedftfy
>>120232834>fortune teller wears an 8-BallHeh
I might do some Mako lewds if I learn how to draw sharks
>>120245624He kept these characters since he was fucking 14 and it shows. Even vivzie has better sense of design. These look randomly generated
>>120228957I actually really dig Snag, he's a funny violent goblin and that's charming
Snag is my favorite character, but I still think he doesn't belong in the setting so I'm torn
>>120260820Same.Hes the only one that looks really out of place. Such an odd design choice.
>>120260830How would you improve his design?I think he would benefit as the outsider, trying a bit too hard to fit in.
>>120228936>Been up for over 48 hours>only has 262,000 views...damn it, I thought people would be more hyped.
>>120261134it was released way too late and it doesn't have a lot going for it besides it being a funny cartoon.
>>120260031Man, I used to draw so many sharks on doodle or die...
>>120260984>How would you improve his design?By making his costume and overall look more "wild west" themed.But personally, I would just make him a goblin. Like, an actual literal goblin.
>>120261171Yeah it needs more fetish fetish bait for Tumblr scene kids like Hazbin Hotel
>>120232735>>120232809Just fuck already...
what makes BW's desing so sexual, maybe its the subtle goth bf undertones but that about all i can think about
>>120250162It's a pilot Anon...
>>120261134hostly this. it's the "straight shonen protags overly obsessed with their rivalry it seems gay"
>>120261322no. i'm a girl and enjoyed watching snag.
>>120233150This is weirdly disheveled cute.
straight mako anon hereI don't think I'll be able to finish the sketch before thread dies, busy with workSee you in the next one, if this board will still care by tomorrow. I love you anons
>>120263078we have a long gone gulch thread on /aco/so head on here if there's no LGG thread on /co/ when you are done. Don't worry /aco/ is a slow board>>>/aco/4818515
>>120232834I see the Mothman on the left (even though normally Mothman doesn't actually look like a moth, more like a bat)
>>120264042Yeah and the Jerseys Devil
>>120261322He's an outsider; the only one in the gulch, apparently. His design emphasizes this with the lack of wild west elements.
>>120234662Another role ruined by race codes.
>>120264042It's actually Mothraman.
>>120265644What's the difference, genuine question
>>120265860Mothra is a monster from the Godzilla movies. Zach and Tara seem to be fans of them, Snatch has a Godzilla jacket for example.
I thought it was bad. Generic flash animation, poor voice acting (particularly BW), rushed pacing. More power to you if you liked it, but I feel bad for people spent years waiting for this. If not for the hype, this would have come and gone without notice like any random sub 1000 views animation on Youtube.
>>120263078Don't sweat it. Like the other guy said, you can go to /aco/
>>120232731I thought that guy's voice sounded familiar, and sure enough it's because he's the singer in Legendary Shack Shakers, a group Zach had done animation for a couple years ago. Wonder if Wilkes and Zach are friends, or if it's just a case of simple quid-pro-quo.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J9V2RcUXyHQ
>>120267048Good catch, I also thought the voice was familiar but stopped thinking about it after the group in the credits wasn't named "Legendary Shack Shakers"
>>120232834Vampires, Leprechauns, Mummies, Gremlins, and the Jersey Devil?That animal from the ice age too I guess.
>>120267048the way the crew talks so chummy to each other, I am going to incline on friends
>>120232618Anything related to kid stuff like anime, video games, cartoons and etc need warnings in the beginning now so dumb people won't sue YT.
>>120267690>the way the crew talks so chummy to each other Where can I see this? Also SAUCE for that drawing?
Welp this was a fun thread.
>>120267817Like a good chunk of BW art, it's a delivery to a request.
>>120267856also whoops forgot to answer. just look around their twitter accounts. I am not going to dig through their account for specific posts
>>120267878Ah, okay. Good Lord those BW requests are glorious
>>120267925Knock yourself out. or go to rule34https://the-collection.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=buffalo_wing&pid=0
So according to a leddit thread, people are losing their shit because BW's name is Buffalo Wing? I can't find any source of info out there, even on the kickstarter, showing her name is supposed to be Buffalo Wing. Even if it is, the VA is an american indian and gives no fucks so why are a bunch of white crybabies getting upset about it?
>>120268510It was supposed to be Buffalo Wing before crybabies in 2016 or so got upset about it. That's the weird thing, we already had this controversy lol
>>120268510it's only a small subsection of twitter and they already getting backlash. people telling them to shut the fuck up. It's a bunch of teenagers trying to being "morally superior"
>>120268549Like I said, at least, people had enough of it.check the quote retweetshttps://twitter.com/actualcomickit/status/1349136894769160196
>>120266931Glad to see my old drawing again. Here's a new sketch.
>>120269157Well, you came very late. I think you have a deviantart or NG from what I remember
>>120268579>68 quote tweets>nothing to see herehuh?
>>120269224weird, I am seeing them. then again I have an account so maybe that effects things>>120269157oh never mind, found your twitter