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not the questions thread edition

previous: >>664455

Reminder!
This thread is for comments & critique on whatever project you’re working on / have completed.
QUESTIONS GO IN THE /questions/ GENERAL: >>>/3/questions/

List of free resources (textures, assets, etc.): https://pastebin.com/vU7P8Vmi
If you’d like to add more links, post them here: >>637415
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>>666975
Pokemon Character I am making customizable for some dude's mmo project
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REEEEEEE
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>>666992
Good shit anon, keep it up. And remember; only cucks use screen cap.
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another odd uncanny feeling again.
help
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>>667068
Michael Jackson before and after
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>>667068
You seem to be suffering from the same thing that some rookie drawers suffer from. You can't see what's in front of you.

Symbolism or some shit.

You look at your reference and your brain goes

>yo hol up imma model michael jackson

To fix this you need to grab a square or draw a box in photoshop and place it over a good photo of someone's face. Place it around the nose, eyes, whatever. Cover up everything else but the nose.
Then model the nose. Now screen cap your model and take it back in to photoshop and place it over the original image.

Turn the top layer's visibility on and off to see how the contours, arches and dips of your model don't line up with the image.

Look at the difference and try to model it again with these differences in mind.

Repeat till /3/ stops replying to your posts.
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>>666992
Holy fuck this guy
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WIP groza, the lighting in the mag was due to an edge loop, can i get some critiques going on?
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>>667106
For me everything looks as it should except the wooden part, which looks like plastic or fake wood. Also if im nitpicking the very front part of the weapon has that plastic-ish feeling as well, its like it has a different metal from the main body of the weapon. The rest looks fine
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>>667106
doesn't weapon usually have a barrel ?
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>>667114
It's a bullpup, so the barrel starts near the back rather than sticking out the front.
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>>667110
Looks like the front part is part of the foregrip that goes around the barrel. Odds are it's supposed to look like plastic or something different than metal.
I agree about the wood though, doesn't look very good. It also sticks out too much as far as contrast goes.
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>>667068
Get your forms right before subdividing. Also you don't need so many polys.
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little bit of work done on my demon guy.
>>667068
your mesh is to dense, if you try to modify your shapes with a mesh that dense you'll get ugly results, try duplicating your head, run a zremesher on the duplicate and then project the details from the high poly, divide zremeshed mesh and repeat until you have 5 suvdivisions or so, that way you can go back to your subdivision level 1 and modify your shapes more easily.
did another paint over on your head.
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>>667184
ugly paint over.
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>>667194
yeah i'm i know i kinda suck at drawing, but i'm just trying to help.
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Fiddling about with one of the older models.
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>>667194
Oh guys, its the "ITS UGLY GUY!" We missed you anon.
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Also this.
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Hey guys, how is my super saiyan cabba looking? He's a pretty strong guy.
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>>667086
thanks will do that.
>>667184
my subdivide is around 3-4 at max.
but anyways yes i have plenty of saved layers to go back just in case i fucked up like this one lol. thanks and saved.
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Now this is some fucking topology
>Have a DLP printer
>Want to print a battlemech from Mechwarrior Online
>take a game model's torso to prep for printing, hollow out and such
>separate by loose geometry
>the mech torso itself falls apart into 160 primitives
>go through major cylindrical parts to subdivide them for smoothness
>this shit doesnt sepearate
>why?
>the sides of the barrel are velded to the internal hole geometry, not the box mind you, the hole inside of it.

This is the actual shipped game lads. With a 5M$ kickstart and all.
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>>667249
Here's the mech torso itself.

It basically has no topolody, just intersecting primitives clipped one through another.
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>>667215
wtf are those muscles? go read a book you dork
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Its mysterious on step... is another elf.
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>>667284
Stop existing immediately.
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>>666975
Stressful first half of February, but our studio finally upgraded to LW2019.
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>>667250
>no topology

Why would you post a wireframe then?
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>>667284
Senpai, teach us the way
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>>667284
even his knees are erect
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>>667291
i guess he wanted to prove that theyre not one object?
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Everything I do is lewd! help!
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>>667289
Why is upgrading a program a stressful time for a studio? I thought it would be a simple process?
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>>667332
Genuinely good composition.
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>>667284
Weirdest elf i ev... is a vulkan.
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>>667344
u'r killing me
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i'm just gonna leave this guy right here.
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>>667344
Holy shit you're that Russian guy that makes Unity assets.
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>>667332
Lindo as fuck.
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Some more work on >>663774 finally. Finished up the body and limbs, now working on the head, face and hair.
I gotta be honest, I'm not really sure how to go about making the hair, at all. I've tried a few different things, but I just don't really understand how to go about making a shape like it.
I've tried sculpting it, which is what I assumed I'd have to do, but nothing I did really helped. I tried starting with a sphere and going from there, but it didn't work. I'll be honest I've never really dived into the sculpting tools much, so I'm out of my element trying to do things with it.
If anyone has some advice, I'll greatly appreciate it. I just don't know how to start with a shape like that.
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>>667344
Live long and prosp... IT´S DRACULA
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>>667433
boring
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>>667433
>>667435
You two are boring.
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>>667452
>>667435
>>667433

you three are boring af
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im going to model this bitch, wish me luck /3/
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>>667459
forgot image
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Beginner here, I never did a human before I'm trying to do it and attempt to rig it
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>>667460
good luck to you then.
And don't üpst images of a ripped model. /3/ would notice what's fake and real work.
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>>667433
Bleh,bleh, bl... OH, it´s... no, it´s really a Dracula.
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She now has some of the main armor, need to add something on her arms and perhaps legs. Next step after that is to make her wings.. feathered wings, and after that cover 60% of her body in feathers.
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sir billy is getting hungry what will he be served?
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>>667500
Poorly rendered Donuts is the only food available here.
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>>667501
nom nom
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>>667500
>>667507
That SSS is a bit strong. Also, either make your creases deeper/separate areas like the fingers, or try to fake it with an AO node blended with material colour.
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>>667507
This looks like my neighbor. I think he would support the current 45 but not me. I wonder what meal he is expecting?
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>>667509
thanks, il use your advice tomorow
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>>667200
>>667207
what kind of game are you making again, and are you looking for a coder?
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>>667509
>or try to fake it with an AO node blended with material colour.
lmao, love dumb people.
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>>667250
it was made in another program like a cad or something then script converted to meshed 3d, I bet.
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>>667500
I like how scary it is. Makes me feel like a tactile fever hallucination.
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a pose/def test
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Doing the hair next.
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working on redoing my bedroom as my first non donut
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still very much wip.
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>>667585
I gotta say playing around with shaders is really fun
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>>667588
greats you can make simple maps for roughness and color, something you can easily do on substance and not the retarded mess youre doing right now.
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>>667594
I didn't say I was good at it I just said it was fun
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>>667600
i did't say anything about your skills lol i implied doing texturing work on blender is fucking dumb when you can easily do it on substance. youre literally only fucking around with the pasting textures on these surfaces and show shiny they are, but you have a shit ton of maps already because blender has no system for masking ids like substance does.
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>>667580
is this for a porn game or animation?
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>>667601
Yeah I'd really like to get it at some point but $150 is a lot harder of a sell than free when I still suck
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>>667604
just get a student license
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>>667500
fancy dining
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>>667607
forgot picture
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>>667585
>>667587
My fellow archviz brothers! I am still not even close to where I want to be but am getting there slooooooooowly
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>>667611
The interior so far
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>>667602
a loli porn game, hopefully
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>>667537
Yup. Looking for a coder. The idea I am mulling over is like Aliens franchise bashed into a 3D FTL (would require RNG stuff for a roguelike) where you try to exist as a transport company in a space filled with various stuff from space pirates to The Thing-like and xenomorph-like aliens that convert your crew to gain numbers. And there is sex somewhere along the way.
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>>667615
boring as fuck concept, almost fell asleep reading that
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please god kill me
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>>667619
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>>667619
I love life. I love yellow flowers. Puppies: bring 'em.
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>>667619
neutral

>>667620
evil

>>667623
good
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>>667624
a good modeler has no time to make cute names
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>>667625
thats like saying a good blacksmith has no time to keep their shop clean, that makes no sense
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>>667626
>that makes no sense
exactly that analogy makes no sense.
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>>667618
>boring as fuck concept, almost fell asleep reading that
Sorry. I know. I have a few projects I am working on but that one is made just because I love the Alien Covenant aesthetics (dim screens on the bridge) for some comfy feels. The part about the corporation is here and there. The most important part is surviving with your crew. So when I feel like it, I go back to this one. I just need to reel in my scope creep. But the fact that I hope to make money and jobs is something I have in mind. The concept of this game is pretty boring but space comfyness is key.
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>>667615
>>667632
To me actually sounds pretty nice anon, do you have a website, fb page or something?
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i am like 10% done making an ikea swivel lamp please someone turn my autism off
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>>667499
show edgeloops please
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>>667606
Don't you have to be a student?
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>>667656
all you need is a student email, which you can make easily with fake credentials. use that email for substance and screenshot the credentials when they ask you for a picture and then youre done. also works for all autodesk apps and the license is renewable
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>>667657
They will accept any random ass @gmail.com as your "student email"

Autodesk licenses are literally just given away for free
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sounds like substance is on the menu boys
and fireflies, lots of fireflies
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>Using blender
>Inset face
>Extrude face on the inside
>Fiddle around
>Messed something up
>Ctrl + Z
>CRASHED without warning.

Fuckin' L. BTW, this is a simple low-poly baja/trophy truck I'm working on. Why does the inset face prone to crash?
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Using Blender 2.8:
Last week we finished a cluster of instrument panels for NCC-Viking. Turns out we had to go back and separate each panel and clean up the orientations so we can snap linked copies anywhere needed.

Well folks, I mean faggos, we are gutting the bridge. Tonight we are working on basic stuff like getting the colors and values something a bit more brighter. Like in ancient Greek theater they performed their plays in the broad light of day so that spectators could clearly see, and understand the message.

From here on out it is artistic license. All right, good night and fuck off.
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>>667643
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCsv9mHnd5B2_sAeXrNtI0cA - For now it is just a tutorial channel but you can expect more stuff after the summer ends - gameplay and other stuff.
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>>667661
you still need it for substance
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this is starting to take fucking ages to render

>>667669
neat

>>667612
pretty nice
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>>667614
>loli
gtfo you pedo scum
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>>667702
as long as it's legal and not 3dpd i don't see a problem, Moralfag.
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>>667702

Fuck off moralfag.
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>>667725
>>667732
Pedo enablers get the rope
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>>667810
Learn some damn anatomy. Fucked up shoulders, missing elbows, weird flat hands, clavicles are all just wrong, pelvis is structured incorrect, hell, I can bet you messed up the thorax too but you decided to hide it with unnecessarily massive tits.
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>>667811
Thanks for telling
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>>667811
>weird flat hands
I'll try to fix the others however I'm not sure how to go about this one.
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>>667812
>>667814
If you're serious about it, I'd say to redo it from the start. Find some anatomy resources, I believe /ic/ has some, if not I highly recommend Anatomy for Sculptors for a very good overview of everything. Should be able to find a PDF online quite easily. You don't have to do a fully realistic body, learn how to simplify, exaggerate, stylize. Keeping form is the most important though. Now go on and create your ideal waifu that not only looks good to you but to others too.
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>>667815
>redo it from the start.
Argh. Kinda reluctant, since this was my first time so it took me a long while to reach there.
I'll consider it though.
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>>667479
Human form.
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>>667830
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>>667830
ew
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>>667830
You wish.
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>>667830
Perfection
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>>667810
Flatten the face abit
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Top of the mornin' to ya from the desk of Starfleet.

The TOS flight panel will not match the new instrument panels on the bridge stations.. so: "what 2 do?" I've considered this problem for the last few days pouring over reference material and I believe converting the TOS flight panel to look similar to the Space Shuttle Enterprise flight panel.

Okay- if there are any <i><b>adults</b></i> on this thread then I guess that means I will see you in eight years. No, but really. I think this is worth it and I feel I have the experience to knock this out quickly.

This has been your S T A R F L E E T U P D A T E
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>>667850
Dude, >>667207 here. I am a trekkie. Do you need faces? That looks pretty cool.
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>>667855
uh no, not from you lmao.

your dog shite
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>>667855
You (Anon),

What we really need is a fucking miracle and another hit off this pipe. Some good Rock doesn't hurt.

Man (Anon (that's you)), actually, you do good work there. And to be honest, I really appreciate the nice attention you put into puffing up those nipples. I'm trying not to be a pervert here but that is nice work overall. I'm looking at the pic you referenced >>667207 and that is a good skill level.

Something compelled you this far, good hair sculpt, good features, it is really pretty good. What drove you to this level?
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>>667850

be carefuly the production company which owns the StarTreck rights is a fucking shitbag, which kills all fan based models or cartoons. they even killed fucking second life clubs.
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>>667874
Thank you Anon. Fortunately, they have not taken all of our rights yet, expression is still intact. For the most part.

Using the flight stick controls to scale this diagram to the set.
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>>667871
Thank you very much anon. Glad you like it.
>Something compelled you this far, good hair sculpt, good features, it is really pretty good. What drove you to this level?
I always wanted more out of gaming and movies. I felt like I would do a better job in some things or at least improve on the existing formulas. My brain is just swirling with ideas all the time and I often just have to go to sleep because my head hurts if I don't start drawing or doing something creative. I used to consider that a bad thing but I managed to overcome that and now I am just going at it as much as time allows. Also I know I can do a lot better since I see a lot of people being way better than me. But I also know that I wasn't born with the ability to draw. I always loved art and stuff and it began in with 80's cartoons and toys. I actually used to make playdough armor on my Masters and Gi-Joes imitating movies like Mad Max and The Predator. I also couldn't always get what I wanted so I had to draw it or make it and play with that. Co I guess that is where my creative drive began.
Also, although I want a fan ST game, >>667874 anon is right. You really have to be careful so they don't get a whiff of it. Keep it on the down low and people involved on a tight leash until you release a stable version so that it is too late for them to stop the spread. Just an idea. I am still very sad about what happened to the KOTOR fan remake.
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>>667878
So I started out drawing, went to painting then the Internet came along. Was running hacked ZBrush, Maya, 3D viz until Blender 2.4.

So this is a little embarrassing but I'm not doing this for a game, I'm doing it for ... church comics ... God, I can't believe I said that. But I got it figured out. I think. Somethings GOT TO GIVE!!

Those bastards! Okay - of course we could use your work. Down low if you know what I mean. Because if any one found out I was doing this for the church it would ruin my reputation as a bad ass.

I've got some previous work done, made some headway, established ourselves as the Dark Prophet and all, but man keep up the good work. If you believe in Nature, in Karma and Rock and Roll, then things will click into place. For all us worms. Peace Brother. Catch you on the flip and keep it up. One thin at a time, I must finish this set.
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Starfleet out. Thanks. Off to my job.
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>>667883
Cool beginnings. I just wish I found how good ZBrush was before. Don't be embarrassed, I am agnostic so it is totally fine. Hope you post here more often. I will. Who knows what can happen.
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>>667855
Holy fuck BTFO, he's fairly decent man have you seen >>667830
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small progress today. need to figure out a node setup for cloth
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>>667830
Ignore modelling, You need to improve your art. I recommend /ic/
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made the mistake of not posting in the wip section but can anyone offer advice about thread related
>>667917
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>>667924
to clarify
>so im currently working on a transforming robot but im getting very antsy over some parts and how the hell am i supposed to hook up machinery to the shell in a believable way. i have to top of this shell pretty much done
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>>667931
heres all the pieces unhidden
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>>667933
and here's what im referencing
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>>667934
What a mess..... It's okay, I'm a janitor.

Best route: model the goddamn shape closed, in transit mode. Keep the seams on it for now, just model the best goddamn closed position you can. Tweak it, sleep with it, take it for a walk. Then when your ready to break into it you might find some more solutions.
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>>667937
So just model rudamentary limbs, rig it and tweak the limbs to something more sensible?
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>>667938
Negative Cesar.
Start from the other direction because all your machinery will be based on the best goddamn close position. Get that done then you will have the foundation for the parts and limbs.
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>>667939
well the closed shell is pretty much done, a mirror modifier makes it look whole
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>>667939
also you freaked me out but then i learned blender's file path is on the top of the program
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>>667940
You need a fairly detailed mesh for your operation.
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>>667942
detailed? its supposed to be like an eggshell, perfectly smooth
unless you mean the other side of the shell in which limbs hook on?
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>>667943
You can make it low poly if you want. I would personally prefer a nice smooth surface with good edge loops.
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>>667944
ah so really cut and bevel it
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>>667945
I'm really hoping you just play with it tonight and report back. I won't be here tomorrow night, though.
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i got this, a subsurf mod to really up that poly count
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and this is what it looks like solid
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>>667950
problem is im terrified of working with all those verts if i apply the modifier
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>>667950
I thought that's what you were after. A few ways to proceed from here. A lot of ways to proceed from here.
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>>667955
to be honest it was, but again, i didnt want to get too crazy with the verts or else ill drive myself mad slicing it up
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>>667954
Make a copy of this and hide it away. Then fuck with it all you want.
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ok i got another issue, you see i was gonna make it so the middle pieces seen earlier would pop forward, thus bringing the two outer pieces of the shell together for more manageable dimensions rather than being super wide. but problem is thanks to the subdivide all these loops are curved so its difficult for me to decide where to cut.
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>>667958
That's why you made a copy. Have fun with it. Keep your mouse busy.
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>>667958
>>667959
Move this shit to the questions thread.
I realize since it's wip and your working on it, it technically belongs, but at this point you're better of containing it to the questions since it's no longer about critique and more of "How should I do this?" and not "What do you think? Where can it be improved?"
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>>667960
Move yourself to the questions thread, bro.
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>>667959
>>667958
this is why you dont model in blender, and use max instead.
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why are there two threads for functionally the same purpose:
>provide feedback to improve a model
the only reason im here is because someone ree'd at me for asking what i should do to continue my model
and now im being ree'd that im asking questions instead of solely asking for critique? i thought that went hand in hand
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>>667965
>absolute state of /3/
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>>667965
Hey, general-san (i.e. OP of both this and /questions) here, read your posts and you ought to have posted in the /questions/ general. The moment you're asking anything, especially a "how to", it goes right into /questions/. And no, the generals are functionally different and distinct, just read the OP texts, which should be clear enough in describing their purposes. If they were the same, this thread wouldn't have been "not the questions thread edition". Please, you (and that anon that pointed you here) should lurk more before posting.
Cheers, and welcome to the no-fun zone of 4channel. :^)
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>>667961
I don't think you belong here either. You just popped up with incoherent posts, that switch thoughts mid sentence in broken English, and seem to have no clue about how things work here.
I'm quite sure you're some 50+ year old boomer, which is fine, but generally it's accepted practice to lurk before posting to get a feel for how things are conducted before you just burst onto the scene and expect everyone to welcome you with open arms. That way people don't disrupt the "fragile" state of the board and start another 30+ argument because a namefag can't be bothered to learn the board culture.

Honestly, you're probably better off starting a blog for your work, judging by the way you've been posting. Either that, or just observe for a while, and take things slow.
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Not sure why I'm wasting so much time making clothes for a Warcraft Gnome other than I wanted to see how my character would look like in biker leathers.
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>>667915
Hey mate, so first off your lighting is shit; you can do a night time render if you want but people typically don't because natural lighting from a window tends to be a lot more pleasing, if you do want to stick to night time it still needs to be a lot more brighter, look at image attached for ref, more contrast, more exposed, more blue.

now the models: they aren't great. fairly low quality I imagaian you made them yourself, and that's fine but you need to spend more time on them and their textures. The wall is actually hideous, either massively lower the bump or just remove it and use a defuse paint texture.

composition, the camera is very uninteresting, you have something going with the mirror and the table if you but something on the green mat as a: focus, you don't have any when you look at this image your eye just wanders not really looking at anything in particular, this is partly because of the composition but mainly because you don't have a hero model or anything

Colour palette, yours is all over the place. You have reds oranges whites greens nono of it goes together. You're probably making your bedroom or something but since your remaking it may as well make it looks pleasing to the eye, for simplicity stick to a colour temperature, use a professional photograph you like, or just use the ref I posted as a guide.

Good luck man
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>>667971
pic related.
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>>668016
I appreciate the input, I'll do my best to focus on those areas and see how I can improve today. also yeah it is my bedroom and yes I did make the models. They actually aren't really uh.. textured. I'm just separating the different colored parts of the mesh and giving them different materials. as for the composition I really actually wasn't focusing on it right now because I've kinda been leaving my camera in the same spot while I get everything modeled so I can make a time lapse of renders from start to finish to show my progress, but I will take what you said into account when I do start on my final pass for the render. Also the wall would probably be horrendous because its litterally a noise texture node plugged into the displacement with the scale turned way up lmao. Kind of going for that paint wheel bumpiness look without putting in the effort, but as it appears to be very noticeable I will stop being a lazy ass about it. Thanks again
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still working on it but it's coming along and kinda unsettling, for the most part just working on environments
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Office building
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Greetings again. Using the Space Shuttle Enterprise's flight panel as our reference we have laid the foundation for the NCC-Vikings new and improved retro as shit flight panel. This is going to be fun. This is what modeling is all about.

Unfortunately, my presence is required on the other side of the galaxy, but don't despair because Starfleet is always tuned in.

Catch you on the flip - Starfleet out.
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>>668068
shut the fuck up weirdo and that wire frame looks retarded
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>>668069
Ten year olds sure think they can talk.
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>>668070
I think the wireframe looks fine but you are being a weirdo.
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>>668074
>>668069
Honestly, at this point it's a good thing he's namefagging.
Makes it easy to just filter him.
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>>668069
Why would he be a weirdo?
>>668080
Why can you still see him then?
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Trying to practice face modeling from photo reference
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>>668109
is good.
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>>668122
I appreciate that anon, my first four were pretty terrible
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>>668109
software?
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>>668109
yeah youre doing fine for now, are you using free form tools/sculpting tools to push the mesh? i hope youre not just doing it the hard way
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>>668131
C4D because like the UI/UX

>>668132
Nah, I'm big on poly modelling manually because I hate myself and I don't have depth perception IRL which makes sculpting a Sisyphean Task
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>>667954
If you are doing subdivision modeling, you don't apply the modifier until the very end, and even then just for one subdivision, so you get an all quads mesh. Making the surfaces smooth is the job of the render engine. You want it as low poly as you want, so your modeling is easier -- think of the vertices as just control points for the end smooth surface.
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>>668144
>I'm big on poly modelling
I am too but youre doing it wrong if youre not using sculpting tools. You dont have to do anything fancy. You just use the push and pull tool to shape youre mesh and you can smooth/relax it.

Pic related is a face i poly modeled and used sculpting tools to push, pull and smooth the mesh. you're going to have hard time making adjustments with just selecting vertices and edges.
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>>668150
>to shape youre mesh
meant to use your*
sculpting isn't doing anything fancy compared to poly modeling, sculpting only moves the vertices It doesn't touch edges or faces. thats how you can sculpt low poly objects too.
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Because i've been lazy it took awhile.
Models done now.
https://sketchfab.com/3d-models/kaguya-shinomiya-0bb705c9c5e6412c8abb09156dfc3537

If i make a chika fujiwara model id be probably flocked. Guess ill make it in my "free time" too.
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>>667830
Bat form.
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worked on the nose
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so this is pretty much one half of the whole mech, but with dowels for limbs instead of... you know... actual fucking machinery like what >>668193
has going on at the back of his jet. but this right now serves as a basis for how this thing will be rigged. the outer shoulder and arm plates will be moved to the front of the middle plates, while the outer plates of the leg will become thigh plates and the middle plate will become the shin/foot.
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>>668247
hidden the main body to show a clearer view of the limbs
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>>668149
shid i wish i saw this comment earlier
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>>668170
anon you had one job.
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>>668170
I want to praise you for the being the first anon finish his project. Still, it seems to me that the leg proportion is wrong. In my opinion if I had x-ray eyes, I would see that under her clothes, her torso is larger than her legs. The knee is definitly indicating it.
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>>668170
The character is really boring, but your topology is fantastic.

Well done, but I would love to see something more visually interesting from you.



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