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>>65156851NO NO NO. Having more than one waifu is NTR and I WILL NOT stand for it.
>>65156851>me and my lordDoes no one know proper grammar anymore?
>>65156836Danae a cute.Olesya a bestEdelmira a okay. None of the Hell options excite me, but Taaveti is too creepy and leaving Iines alone would make me feel guilty.I'll be trying for Heaven most of the time.
>>65156859> Not posting the whole thing.
>>65156851This was the best thing to post. Praise Allah(swt)
>>65156975This is disgusting
>>65156987Don't they go to hell for getting pwned by an infidel without being able to fight back?
>>65156994It's by the same author.
>>65156996You're thinking of Vikings.
>>65156996Well at least one attempted to tackle.
>>65157010I wasn't, but I am now.
>>65157054I really like this one, though I do think it has some ballance issues. Beards are OP.
>>65157025Why the name?
>>65151808>>65151885Thanks for the in depth feedback anon. Like I said, I tried to take inspiration from a few other CYOA's that nailed the comfy vibe better, but it didn't quite work out.I really do think there's the heart of a good idea in Docklands. I'll take another look at it at some point and see what I can do.
>>65157121I don't think so.>>65157054Redhead Halfblood VikingFull Body BeardMight Rating +6Beard of GloryStatic ChargeBushyness 1FreyaSigridKatlaRape Level +110 might3 bushiness7 rape levelLightning ResistLightning AttackShield+20 Beard of Glory Elf Forest +70/+20/+10Craftworld +90/+50/+10Drow Cave +40/+30/+10Total=350First I fuck some elves, then I get to go anywhere I want.
>>65157277>>65152035That's a segment of "Endless Ocean: The End." I don't want to mess with your headcannon, but it's how I imagined the endings panning out. Read it if you want.>>65152050I wrote Endless Ocean, which apparently did a better job of being a comfy setting. There's definately some crossover in style.>>65153145Again, great feedback. Urban unease is the gold standard of comfydark to be sure. What surprises me is that Catacombs is a more threatening setting in my opinion and yet was generally more favourably recieved. I'm not quite sure why. I'd say the Docklands has more going for it as a home than the Werf.Not sure what I can do about the Waifus, that's not really my area of expertise. I don't remember there being much in the way of Waifus in village though, and that was comfy af.>>65155925I'm glad you see them that wayBelieve it or not anons, I have even more OC in the works. The next one's a little more light hearted. Hopefully It'll go down a bit better.Watch this space.
>>65157333>I don't remember there being much in the way of Waifus in village thoughThere were at least three, immediately to mind comes the lonely monster.
>>65157333I feel like Catacombs is way more threatening than Docklands, but Catacombs wasn't about being comfy.... was it?I mean, if it were up to me, I surely also wouldn't want to live in the Catacombs, given the choice.
DWARF CYOA WHEN?
>>65157751when you make it!! xd
DWARF OC FRESH OFF THE PRESSES! GET IT WHILE ITS HOT
>>65158678>Dwarf DwarfWhy would you literally be anything else?
The zombie apocalypse superpowers CYOA was the last interesting CYOA, I'm disappointed in you guys.
>>65156980Dire Pegasus (Strong Bond)Power: HighToughness: LowSpeed: HighIntelligence: MiddleWhisperThe Grand JoustCyrus- My mount is a natural predator of his, and dirty moves are nothing compared to real strategy.Grom- Our gameplans are polar opposite, which means victory will likely go to the man who strikes first. If worse comes to worst, I can have my mount tear his apart whilst I occupy his own arms.Tessil- She will probably prove the most challenging of my opponents. If I cannot gank her quickly, I will likely have to lead that bull on a merry chase until it runs out of steam. Maybe Whisper can foul up its works somehow.Raktor- Almost a free win. That pterosaur doesn't look like the fastest beast, and when he comes for me, my spear will reach him first.I'll take a magic cuirass as my reward. It's the heaviest part of most armors anyway.
>>65158813Hey someone remembers me! yay!
>>65157054I choose to be the little girl (male)
>>65158637>SacrificeDearly Held Companion>DesireGlory>Human FormAspect of Virtue>Apostolic IncarnationDemonic - Titan>Apostolic AbilitiesPartial Incarnation, Enhanced Regeneration, Embodyment of Wrath, Corrupting Presence, Inspiring Presence>Abyssal AbilitiesCausal Sight, Illusory Projection>Apostle SpawnSection - Motif Bearing>ShortcomingsThe Struggler, Foe of the Inhumans
>>65158813>what is docklands
>>65159779A currently flawed cyoa with potential
>>65159991It’s honesrl fine. Most cyoas have their flaws and it seems about baseline for Scot’s normal work. Not as good as some, a bit better than others. People were only vocal because he made the mistake of expressing doubt and then asking for advice.
>>65160200>Criticism is badGo back.
>>65160239Criticism is bad when it’s bad criticism, yeah. There was some decent advice and feedback, but don’t pretend like the autism parade has much to offer an author outside of subjectively mewling for things they want.
>>65160327he did got decent advice and feedback right? Then he would not had been to be able to get if people were unable to criticise cyoas
>>65160378No one said criticism is bad to start with, just that expressing doubt and asking for such makes anons more vocal. Not sure where you’re coming up with the whole “can’t criticize at all” bit. Presumably your social inadequacy?
>>65160406don't come at me with the ''lol u birgin'' shit you did come off as one of those no criticisism allowed cyoao is perfect
>>65160420>it’s finebecomes>it’s perfect >you seem socially ineptbecomes>you’re a virgin>a lot of criticism isn’t usefulbecomes>all criticism is bad Please, do go on. You seem to be able to create quite the narrative yourself.
>>65160462>what is metaphor?
>>65160498Metaphornouna figure of speech in which a word or phrase is applied to an object or action to which it is not literally applicable.Google is your friend
>>65160569Shut up, shill
>>65160648Relax it was just a joke frend
>all these waifu cyoas>in the end all I really want is a pretty girl who will stay true to me, gets my humor and likes me despite knowing all my quirks and flawsSeriously she could be baren, vegan and muslim and I'd still be happy
>>65160660I'm not your friend pal.
>>65160797So go outside
>>65160854Does your mommy give you a Good Boy Point for correcting grammar?How many more till you can get a blowy-joey
>>65160797>she could be muslimThey don't marry non-muslims.Though this does remind me of that /pol/-post from a guy claiming he pretended to be muslim, and all the benefits it got him, primary of which was immunity to SJWs.
>>65160949You mean when the sjws sperged about something that had nothing offensive to muslims in it? and never even specified what even was offensive when asked?
>>65160949Ah yes, just like catholics would never marry non-catholics.
>>65160949My aunt is a muslim and my uncle isn't (she's not very devout though).
>>65160875You know what happens outside?WarsFaminesMass ShootingsAt least if I get shot at home the killer is dead too
>>65160797Here you go!
>>65160978From my experience actual practicing Catholics don't. People who just call themselves Catholics and barely practice the sacraments don't count just as muslins who just claim to be muslin and don't follow their religion don't count either.
>>65160949I remember that one.He even got a marriage offer from one of the old dudes. Offered him his daughter.Almost had me fooled.
>>65161051I think even that Anon would retract his previous statement when faced with what might just be the dullest CYOA in the history of CYOAs. Each page following the stuttering narrator as she presents assorted options which are indistinguishable from the others. Aside from the low quality imagery, Tok’s only consistency has been a lack of excitement and ineffective use of special effects, all to make magic unmagical, to make action seem inert.Perhaps the die was cast when he vetoed the idea of any Anon remaking his CYOA in a better way; he made sure it would never be mistaken for a work of art that meant anything to anybody, just a ridiculous (You) generation machine. Tok’s CYOAs might be anti-SJW (or not), but it’s certainly the anti-fun series in its refusal of wonder, beauty and excitement. No one wants to face that fact. Now, thankfully, they no longer have to.>a-at least his other CYOAs were good though r-right"No!"The writing is dreadful; the art was terrible. As I read, I noticed that every time he starts a new CYOA, Tok inserts his shitty stuttering waifu in there.I began marking on the back of an envelope every time she stuttered. I stopped only after I had marked the envelope several dozen times. I was incredulous. Tok’s mind is so governed by shitty porn and dead memes that he has no other style of writing. Later I read a lavish, loving review of Tok’s CYOAs by some Anon. He wrote something to the effect of, "If these kids are reading Tok’s CYOAs at 11 or 12, then when they get older they will go on to read Italics." And he was quite right. He was not being ironic. When you read Tok’s CYOAs you are, in fact, trained to read Italics.
>>65161051Holy shit thats great, I guess I'd go for the bimbo zynthia
>>65161051Do you get off on the idea of anons masturbating to your waifu?Also Christmas Cake Zynthia
>>65161122>mfw my favorite cyoa isn't even on the listThis just makes me sad.
>>65161051Many of the negative things are good. Why do you have such shit taste.
>>65161051Reminder that taking hypno lets you collect as many "suggestible" ones as you can, since the canonical limit is only how many you can manage.
>>65161122>it's that shitposter againI know how it feels to be starved from attention and the cravings for big fat juicy (You)s, anon. Even if your post is low effort shitposting, I'll give you a (You), because I'm a merciful and understanding god.
>>65161122>Those top tiersAll mediocre at best, and only Urban Unease is what I'd consider remotely good (generic writing, meaningless as a CYOA as a whole). The rest are all one-and-done, and easily forgettable.
>>65161284Luna wolfs both for looks and personality
>>65161284Gib ultramarine gf>>65161324It's b8
>>65161351If they’re stupid enough to have that opinion, they’re stupid enough to bite any bait
>>65161122Jesus all this little girl bickeringalso what is the criteria for a cyoa ranking besides the posters opinion?
>>65161376How many (you)s it'll generate.
>>65161376Depends on catagory i feel. But as a rule of thumb, how many times you can post it before it goes stale, Replayability, how difficult it is to find the broken options, how fun it is overall.
>>65161376The only ranking that matters is my own.
>>65161464I wish tok would go and stay go
>>65161431>how many times you can post it before it goes stale, Replayability, how difficult it is to find the broken options, how fun it is overall.That guy had the ship cyoa, salvage, and small town hero as high their over stuff like hunter, Eternal rising, and hero academy. Not to knock on any of those cyoas, but if you are taking replayability, brokenness, or repostability into question, those would definitely not be the order they are laid out in.
>>65159277>powers5 - tier 1 biological integration. Planarian regeneration3 - time lock3 - time reset3 - danger sense1 - peak strength1 - clean1 - sustenance1 - stamina5 - copy + paste7 - black hole2 - inventory>perks3 - cannibalize. time lock, copy + paste6 - two birds one stone>day of awakeningyear one>enemies+3 - local warlord+5 - infestation+5 - stalker+3 - mutation glowing eyes, demon tail, small horns>survivorsall of themTime lock needs 10 cannibalize upgrades to become permanent via lasting longer than a day, while being cast once per day. Until that point, danger sense allows it to be used in small bursts to avoid damage, and time reset + regeneration can heal any damage that makes it through. Eating zombie brains and hearts gives constant low level upgrades. Hopefully there are cooking recipes to make this more tasty. Combat against normal zombies shouldn't be too difficult given the local warlord's forces as support. Stalker and other empowered enemies are dealt with by using myself as bait, then becoming invulnerable right before an attack lands and using black hole to destroyer everything but the head. The various survivors will probably have negative reactions given my demonic appearance and penchant for eating brains. I doubt they'll be friendly until after the point where their help is useful.After time lock becomes permanent, the focus shifts to rebuilding civilization by turning into a super genius that can endlessly duplicate their creations. The warlord can be killed at this point. Seriously, two birds one stone is OP given enough brains. 400 zombies make you the smartest human to ever live. 2000 make you into a walking singularity. cyoa errors -biological integration tier 1 references a duration, but the description of the power has none. -cannibalize there is no point to picking a category, since only one ability is bought per 3 points anyway
>>65161464The risk far outweighs the reward.
>>65161499It’s a fucking troll image, Jesus
>>65161492You will become his Zynthia, to keep him occupied in his basement, and fulfill all of his fantasies. You'll be hunted down and killed as soon as you turn into a witch. Killing Tok, or torturing him is a surefire way to instantly turn into a witch.
>>65161499if by "made in heaven" you mean the ship one, I do rank it over hero's academy and hunter. Bit iffy on eternal rising though, a bit of conflicting thoughts.Ties that bind however is certainly better [in my opinion].I suppose without saying "anon likes" as a measure of ranking then we will likely only get flawed products.I do remember that one of the authors, maybe SDA, had a spreadsheet of criteria they used to grade cyoa's
>>65161564Wow that cat is a fucking dick
>>65161575Not made in heaven, the ship cyoa. this one. Which is pretty decent, granted, but it's definitely not better than Hunter.I don't think Made in heaven even got onto the list.
>>65161464I wish all anons of /tg/, /trash/, and those that were there for the original cyoa /d/ threads would be allowed into the cyoa afterlife, complete with a comprehensive AI that allows everyone to create whatever cyoa they want in the main hub world.I offer this cyoa in exchange.
>>65161564>>65161492Kyubey never actually twists the wish, though - he extracts a massive price for it, but it's granted at least roughly as you intend.
>>65161639I mean it's not even the best spaceship Cyoa out there.
>>65161651Yeah that anon is being retarded.
>>65161643An AI research firm of your choice receives a $1M donation.Also you have cancer.
>>65161643So close to getting Shenron. I'm sorry cyoa/g/ I've failed all of you.>>65161674Give it to deepmind I guess.
>>65161674Trying to avoid the horrible pain you're in via suicide makes it so you can't enter cyoa heaven.
>>65161639Ehh, its comfy I suppose, but looking over the Image in question I notice that it is only half a troll image. A lot of personal preference also could account for such, since monster hunter is a very mechanics heavy game and has a few avid players, yet it is set below hunter, a comparatively simple but more fluffy experience. I also notice a trend of complexity in mechanics [for the most part] earning themselves a lower place than the 'easier' ones. Mildly interested as to why Ultimate god is shit tier, unless they dislike power fantasy of the highest order.
>>65160997She's lucky, most girls that pull that get attacked by their families.
>>65161464I wish i was transported to one of the nicer Culture GSV's.
>>65161464I wish Zynthia was real!
>>65161717I'm not going to suicide. I'd like to stay alive as possible. Only something like extreme torture or defense of another could make me do it I think.
>>65161874>extreme torturei.e. cancer
>>65161839She's from Kazakhstan and I think they are closer to Russians than arabs.
>>65161848Congrats, she is. Until midnight, then she disintegrates into nothingness.Enjoy knowing that you are the cause of your waifu's death.
>>65161882I was thinking more along the lines of someone brutally torturing me with cruel instruments and continuously beating me and stuff like that. Cancer might feel like hell, but that doesn't mean it actually is hell. There are much worse ways to go. Furthermore if I'm in so much pain and in such a weakened state I probably wouldn't even have the energy to off myself.
>>65161916nah senpai thats the blue fairynot the fairy godmotherShit is perminate
>>65161883Kazakhstan was the birthplace of Indo-Europeans (ancestors of Europeans, Iranians, and Indians) but they got invaded by Mongols and Turks and now they're mixed, it's basically a nation of hapas. Religiously they're a bunch of unaffiliated Muslims, who typically get lumped in with Sunnis.
>>65161848I wish you'd kill yourself but not all dreams are meant to come true.
>>65161938Yeah, but she'd require Tok to come to mature as part of the lesson involved.
>>65161950pretty dam sure Iran is where indo europeans come from. It litterally means ayrian and where the light skined people of india are from
>>65161916>Congrats, she is. Until midnight, then she disintegrates into nothingness.>Enjoy knowing that you are the cause of your waifu's death.B-but then she comes back, right? A-and try to find me using only a glass dildo to identify the real Tok by measuring which ass it f-fits, right? A-a-and then when she fins me we live happily ever after, right?!
>>65161961So she'd require him to understand why whoring her out is a bad thing or some shit?Tok is doomed.
>>65161848Find a gf, and she'll gladly cosplay as Hex Maniac for you
>>65161971Current theories are in Central Asia, and most people think it's in Kazakhstan near the Aral Sea. But it's important to remember that the Indo-Europeans were horse nomads (and were either the first people to domesticate horses, or the people whose domestication of horses spread it to the rest of Eurasia,) and probably ranged all throughout the steppe and adjacent areas, rather than being stationary and settled. The thinking is that the Indo-Europeans essentially decided to migrate in three directions from their homeland, West, East, and South. Those migrating West occupied first Asia Minor and possibly the North Levant, then proceeded to occupy all of Europe. There was some mixing with natives (thought to be of Semitic descent) but not a lot, the area was sparsely inhabited at the time. The ones going East would go on to create the rich kingdom of Sogdia, which was in modern Uzbekistan, Kyrgyzstan, and western Xinjiang. They met considerable population by natives and failed to conquer them, eventually being mixed both peacefully and nomadic invasion. These guys are mostly where those 'blonde Chinese' you hear about come from. Finally, the guys who went South first settled in Iran, where their experience was similar to the one who went to Asia Minor and Europe. From there, they headed East again, occupying Afghanistan and Pakistan, and into India. The successfully conquered the natives here and set themselves up as an overclass. Slow mixing over eons eventually gave rise to the modern Indo-Aryan peoples, who range significantly in how Aryan that is, but average out around 60/40 or so Aryan/Native.
>>65162073>Does not know the tragedy that inspired Zynthia
>>65161464I wanna be a cute unaging (little) magical girl
>>65161643Could you post Made In Heaven? I want to make a build for it and maybe do a writefagging snippet.
>>65162182Congratulations. You won the jackpot.I hope you enjoy the rest of your very short life.
>>65162182You get to be the little girl until you turn into a reality destroying abomination. The abomination is explicitly not a little girl.
So I'm trying to find a CYOA, or at least it's name so I can hunt it down. Unfortunately I don't remember much about it. I think it came out late last year or early this year, one of the companion choices was an android named Eve and if you selected her you could transfer you consciousness into an android body called Adam and the two of you could pilot a giant robot. That's all I can remember about it, I can't even recall the overall premise. I don't have much hope of anyone knowing what I'm talking about with so little information but I figured I'd ask.
>>65162232I know the one you mean, the premise was you died, got ai'd and now have to pilot a mecha
>>65158678>seven dwarfs dwarfI think I already have this power.Don't remember picking despair, though.
roll with me anons. roll roll roll. ryoa are the best. actually, we should remove all non-ryoa cyoas. oh yes.
>>65162248That sounds like what I'm looking for.
>>65162248Give me a title man
>>65162320Don't know it man, Sorry.
>>65162167This should unironically be made into a movie.
Any cyoas that successfully triggered redditors like pic related?
>>65162344Do you know any other details about it? Something to narrow it down even further?
>>65162391Oh no. The big bad 4chan did a thing.
>>65162220>The abomination is explicitly not a little girlThat's why one goes to destroy reality
>>65162232Vitae Ex Machina
>>65162391Why don't you go there to find some, dear muhsikretclub friend
>>65162420It had a number of options for beign a robo body, either a "sex doll" model that grew out of being one, a "soldier model"..>>65162502Hey look.
>>65162391This? I mean it's kind of too silly to be offended by.
>>65162391>>65156975 would probably do the trick if someone cared enough to post it.
>>65162391That one cyoa where you kill babies and drink them
>>65162569Is reddit as autistic about NTR as we are?
>>65162586Only one way to find out.
>>65162586Woman cheating on a man, no. Man cheating on a woman? Gotta send out that virtue signal.
>>65162391That one cyoa where you get forcefully cucked
>>65162391This was posted on the nsfw subreddit. Many were offended, somehow.
Scottishanon here. I've looked over the feedback for Docklands and drafted some stuff for an update. Like I said I wasn't entirely satisfied with it and the comments have helped me zero in on what can be done to fix it. I've got a busy-ish couple of days coming up, but I'll work on it where I can.One last thing I wanted feedback on: I have ideas for more features/residents/events for the update. Is the thing too long already or would you appreciate more content?
>>65162755More content is always needed.
>>65162755More content is good
>>65162586it's their fetish.
>>65162755CONTENT FOR THE CONTENT GOD
>>65162755More is more
This is the only good general on this god forsaken website any more. Keep on keeping on, /cyoag/.
>>65162807and (you)s for his post
>>65161122That pasta always gets me laughing for some reason
>>65161999Sadly not. this is grim derp hard science setting
>>65162502Is there any reason not to pick Angel in this CYOA? It feels like unless you really, really want to be an aircraft carrier or something like that, there's really no reason why you wouldn't pick Angel. It's the equivalent of three favours rolled into one option, and the specific favour attached to it also essentially covers the humanoid body options.
>>65162464We should ban the website. Just to be safe.
>>65163110I like being a "nothin' personal kid" on wings and with an invisibility cloak.
>>65163110The robot form isn't very cool.
>>65162391>Any cyoas that successfully triggered redditors like pic related?Nemesis really triggered Reddit, but to be fair Nemesis triggered quite a few anons on 4Chan too when it was released. But for very different reasons.
>>65163244What do you mean by not cool? You are a flying mech with top of the line specs and an inbuilt telekinesis module. How much cooler can it get?
>>65163285>Grouping us in with tok....
>>65162755More is always good. I’m curious, since I missed the original feedback and have enjoyed your other works, what made you leave out the lower power level stuff present in other works? I get that using the ole tattoo trick might eventually get old, even if I personally dig it, but this really seemed like the sort of setting that could benefit from upgrading you a bit
>>65163295It's in copy pasta and bait you maroon
>>65163110>Is there any reason not to pick Angel in this CYOA?Not really, the only downside, if you can call it that, is that you are pretty much obligated to take Angelica as your Waifu.
>>65163292It looks dumb
>>65163285>all those downvoteskek
>>65163454Atmosphere is always the primary focus of my work. The setting is usually the star of the piece. A lot of people don't notice it but there aren't any character enhancements in Endless Ocean as well. You get some in night ride but they're not any real use to you outside that specific scenario.This is one of the things that's getting added in the update: Some Docklands specific buffs that'll help you get along but provide no benefit outside the setting.I understand the appeal of power ups, but the idea of a creepy comfydark dockland to make a home in feels a little undermined by giving the PC superpowers. That's just my take.Catacombs and Cloud Forest are supposed to be more directly dangerous settings. All the hazards in the docklands are either avoidable without too much issue or are inconveniences rather than death sentences. I hope that answers your question.
I miss SDA.
>missing Stupid Dumb AssholePleb
>>65163596it's DSA you dumbass
>>65163110You have to take more missions. But I don't see as a serious problem.Still, when the CYOA was first postes I guess the majority of people didn't pick Angel. I also don't understand, for me it was the obvious and natural choice.
>>65163652it's actually SAD
>>65163721actually it's A(i)DS
>>65163460>implying I'm not memeing back.woowwaa thank you for pointing out the obvious there, it's a joke
>>65163110>>65163664The body both makes daily life impossible, no more videogames and anime for you, and is feminine. Only anons who accept being nothing more than a combat tool will take anything beyond the Zero, and only a very small subset of the people who want to be a giant machine want to be a feminine one instead of a Paladin, all the people who want to be girls are going Sim-X. So it has an absolutely miniscule audience, since the only way to keep the human conveniences is to use a favor that everyone is probably spending on the Backup Drive.
>He's now thinking about getting married and having childrenWe didn't deserve him, lads.
>>65163871It'll be hilarious when he finds her with Jamal.
>>65163864Look at the Adam option anon...
No devil may cry cyoa?
>>65163901>Look at the Adam option anon...>>65163864>the only way to keep the human conveniences is to use a favor that everyone is probably spending on the Backup Drive
>>65163924If you choose enough missions you get an extra favor
>>65163917>No devil may cry cyoas?Devils never cry.
>>65163937Most people didn't like their odds.
>>65163954This is really again just the matter of "With angel you have to take more missions".And even if you didn't WANT to take more missions for taking more missions alone, Angel still gives you more freedom of what missions to choose, since (specially with the Adam body) you can choose any of the missions avalible. Also, the easier missions, specially the ones that you get to pilot Angel, should be pretty easier.I understand that some people might prefer to still not take so many missions - but seems a very weak reason to me. Most people who didn't pick Angel when it was released that talked about it, seemed to prefer other options because they wanted a more versatile mecha body. (Something that I also think it's strange).
>>65163917I considered it, but thought better of it. Same with my Castlevania rough draft. Both came off as really derivative and wank-y.
>>65162481Awesome, thanks a bunch. The build itself with the writefagging is fuckhuge so I'll post a pastebin for it. Sorry for the shitty plot.https://pastebin.com/Fj3VhZMu
>>65164024I like being invisible, anon. Pair that with flight, and I'll take that over any dumb robo-thot.
>>65163954>Most people didn't like their odds.Why? You basically become the protagonist (or deuteragonist) of a shonen anime. I can't see anything other than the Top Secret Missions being a challenge to someone who took both Angel and Adam, and since you have to work for High Command there are more then enough other missions available.
>>65164166>I like being invisible, anonNo option lets you do that. No, not even the Ghost upgrade, thermal-optic camouflage just makes you immune to thermal sensors, people can still see you with their eyes.
>>65164166Angel can (almost) fly too. Altough I guess it can't become invisible. But really, ignore Angelica, ignore even that you would still have an humanoid body, Angel's abilities seems to vastly compensate flying better and becoming invisible.
>>65164205No, of a mecha anime. Have you ever watched one of those? Even a super robot show (and it's definitely super robot considering your fledgling access to 'space magic') is extremely deadly. More often than not, the protagonist and/or his waifu fucking dies.
>>65164324>Have you ever watched one of those?The only mecha anime I ever watched all the way through was G Gundam. I was so traumatized by such a best girl losing that I swore off the whole genre. I mean, I'm used to best girl not winning, but there should be limits to how best you can be and not win.
>>65164389Then take my word for it, you're going to die against the good doctor. That or Angelica will.
>>65164389Best girl can never win because then all the waifufags would be cucked.
>>65164413Part of me believes this is why the Xenoblade guy always creates best girls who get cucked, like Melia and Nia.
>>65164324>>65164412Would you rather live in a world with the same threats with our without the super robot?Even if your chances of survival might be low, the other options seems lower still.And you don't NEED to fight against the doctor any more than any other build needs - the difference is that you CAN.Also, that is what Backup Drive is for
>>65164427>MeliaThat was fucking criminal i am platinum mad about it
>>65164412But nobody died in G Gundam.Except Master Asia.And Kyoji.And Not-Kyoji.And... okay a fair number of people died, but the protagonist and his waifu (both the shit one [okay, Rain isn't that bad in a vasccum, but she has to be taken in context of a comparison with Allenby] he chose and the better one he SHOULD have chose) made it through just fine, aside from some demonic possession that they got over in the end.
>>65164464It'd be someone else problem.>>65164495Rules have exceptions, but there's a reason that they're a rule.
>>65164486>implying she didn't get with dunban and make super dragon hero babiesshulk was just a phase
you guys are such fucking nerds oh my god
>>65156836Who's the author for this one?
>>65164511Yeah but G Gundam is my only experience with Mecha Anime, and seeing as it's an open CYOA with no established pass or fail conditions, I'm gonna say I'll be fine in my Adam body taking Angel and Angelica and doing cool Super Robot things.
>>65164538Zodiac Brides Guy / ZBGIf you didn't recognize immediatly, you might want to see his folder on the MEGA, since almost all his CYOAs start with the same narrator
>>65164531maybe, but she deserved to win the shulk bowl after everything that happened.
>>65164270Not literally invisible, but I may as well be.>>65164277The Ghost and Blackwing suits my preferred playstyle: go quiet and sabotage, or drop a nuke and say bye bye.
>>65164427>NiaAt least she still exists
>>65164641You get her two halves in a harem, that's better than the combined product.
>>65162502Shouldn't it be Angelo instead of Adam? That fits the naming scheme better. Angel, Angelica, Angelo.
>>65164655Should have got all three
>>65163917I would really rather not have autism the cyoa
>>65163949But they can fill your dark soul with liiiiight
>>65164767You’re about half a decade too late for that dude
>>65164511>It'd be someone else problem.You can have the same attitude choosing Angel, letting someone with a Paladin try to defeat the doctor. (Although you are not suppose to even know about the doctor at this point).Still, what if they fail? Then it's your problem and you barely have any means of fighting back.But I admit that there are some merit in letting the most useful resources to other people if you feel you are not up to the task, somebody with Angel has more chance of beating the doctor than someone with a Paladin, and there is only one Angel.>>65164660I guess you are right.Maybe because it would be weird to have the same name as your waifu?Or maybe because Angel/Angelica are born from code, and you were "born" human...?
Reddit OC.Hard-Mode: don't pick Ruby and apply it to Beri
>>65164914>Or maybe because Angel/Angelica are born from code, and you were "born" human...?
>>65161464just let me be healthy and mentally well again
>>65165064>sapphire makes people loyal to the author, not the user of the ringliterally the cuck option
>>65165222The author of the story i assume?
>>65165064>Build EmeraldI made a build for almost every cyoa in the pastebin. Come at me, duckers!
To everyone who wants to create CYOA with powers, read this:https://coppermind.net/wiki/Sanderson%27s_Laws_of_Magic
>>65165064>tfw hate jewelry and would probably just sell it to someone for cash on ebay.Why is jewelry picked as a catalyst for this stuff? It's so small and easy to misplace, not to mention wearing that kind of stuff looks stupid. Only women should wear jewelry, and even most girls can't pull it off, excluding (some) necklaces.Reddit cyoas are trash.
>>65165191Congratulations, you're healthy as a horse and scheduled for a trippy dream quest tonight.
>>65165618I was not aware that hobos had access to internet
>>65165687He's got a point, the only jewelry it's acceptable for men to wear unless they're a wigger or something is a wristwatch.
>>65165687You must not live in a big city, hobos are all over the public libraries jerking off to porn.
>>65161848She will be, and she will be just as you expected her to be. But only if you prove yourself brave, honest, and unselfish, so that you may become a real boy.Only then will this wish you wished upon a star become true.
>>65165687I'm not a hobo. I just irrationally hate jewelry. I think I've maybe seen only one man who could pull off earrings, and like three guys who could pull off necklaces. No one can pull off rings though.
>>65165618You're only using it once on yourself, then you can throw it away.
>>65165765>Can pull off earrings>But not ringsHow does that even work?
>>65165782Wait, I don't have to wear it to receive the effects? Well I'll be damned. I'm still selling it once I attune it to me though.
>>65165765What are wedding rings?
>>65165852>marriage is gayFound the gay
>>65165765The destined modern LotR protagonist, won't sucumb to magic rings perversions because they are too gay for him, better destroyed in a volcano
>>65165816Rings are just trash. There are stories of people losing their fingers because they wear that crap. Just give me a magic crystal orb over a ring and I'll be happy.>>65165831wedding rings weren't even invented until pretty recently. Why should I have to buy and wear rings just to prove my love to someone? I can prove it in a million other ways. My love isn't something to show off to the world, it's something to show to one person, and that's the person I love.>>65165887Exactly. Rings deserve to be melted and smelted into something more useful.
>>65165871Oh yes why don't I get (((married))) and buy a (((wedding cake))) and a (((wedding dress))). You need to break the conditioning.
>>65165702Cufflinks, and tie bars. Though I guess tie bars can be pretty faggy.
>>65165908>wedding rings weren't even invented until pretty recentlyIf by recently you mean compared to the wheel, then sure, they're recent.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wedding_ring#History>It is commonly believed that the first examples of wedding rings were found in ancient Egypt. Relics dating to 6,000 years ago
>>65165908>wedding rings weren't even invented until pretty recentlyNo you are thinking about diamond rings being used for weddings anons
I know I gotta stop complaining about how much a slog making a cyoa sometimes is, but aaaaa
>>65165971Was that something only the rich did or was it something even the poorest farmer on the nile would give to his wife? Even if that is the case, that's just in egypt, I believe they didn't have wedding rings in America early on during the countries creation.
>>65164427Poor Melia. She deserved to win. So hard.
>>65165986what CYOA are you working on?
>>65165986whats your trouble, image finding? writing?
>>65165911Cakes taste good and dresses are pretty i see nothing wrong with it
>>65166007posted a tease once, I don't want to toot my own horn, especially when it's my first and will most likely be pretty mediocre.But I'm going to finish, damn it!>>65166009>writingNah, that took me a couple hours to do the first day.Putting the actual CYOA together in paint, aranging, finding the specific art I want for a particular trait while maintaining a genre balance, etcThat's what's driving me mad. I'll do it, in the end, but I'm afraid I'll have to end up breaking a few of the internal rules I set for art
>>65166060Also it's a lot like this:
gonna start a cyoa from scratchplease expect it for early june
>>65166087You have one week, better start fast anon.
>>65165998https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wedding_ring#ChristianRings don't have to be of precious material. Iron rings are fine too. Hell, you can find straw rings if you look hard enough.
>>65166074This is why you name and keep your images organized
>>65165908crystal orbs are pretty gay though. you're not gay are you, anon?
>>65165959>Cufflinks, and tie barsHow fucking rich are you, anon?
>>65166160How is a crystal orb gay in any way? You can't scry without one.
>>65166180crystal orbs are for new-age hippies, wiccans and old witch ladies.
>>65166115I still wouldn't wear it. Again why should I show off my love to the world? The only person that should see my love is the one I end up with. I could show her my love in a million other ways than by wearing a ring. I mean wearing a ring doesn't even mean anything devotion wise. So many people cheat on their spouse despite the fact that they have wedding rings symbolizing their devotion towards one another. It's an empty symbol that means nothing. Actions speak louder than objects.>>65166160Crystal orbs aren't gay at all. I mean a ton of monsters have a giant shiny crystal orb embedded in their face as a weak spot, and those monsters can be really hype to face. Even if it was gay, it's way less gay than wearing a ring (or even worse, wearing a ring on a necklace which is only something a top-tier cuck would do.)
>>65166060Yeah i know that feel. Finding appropriate art was the most frustrating part in making a cyoa for me
>>65166180Use a bowl and water anon.
>>65166248>waterDon't be a pussy. Use the blood of your enemies.
>>65166248Come on nigga, you and i both know that doesn't work
>>65166225The point of the ring is to tell everyone else that you're claimed. Removing it signifies that you don't care for people to know anymore.
>>65161464Turn this Filipino girl into my sex slave genie
>>65166225You think any girl would be satisfied with you if you didn't marry her or get her a ring? You think women actually care about all the 'little things'? I don't know what world you live in, but it ought to be amusing when reality slams you in the face.
>>65166289Yeah, but never having one is different.>>65166302I am prepared to be a wizard if it comes down to it. Real magic comes not from rings, but from inside the very depths of your soul. Let the flames of chaos ignite your spirit, and let forth grand energy to smite the very ground with which others stand on.
>>65166302>he cares about what women wanthahaha fag
>>65161564shut the fuck up tok
>>65166302Ah, also just so you know, marriage itself is actually fine. I have nothing against marriage, but I'm not getting a ring.
>>65161464I wish to be an invincible skeleton that retains all consciousness and feeling, able to travel to whatever dimension or place I want with a mere thought, never to be constrained or controlled against my will, and to have infinite memory but not to suffer because of it.
>>65166592Your contribution to stopping the heat death of the universe is appreciated, anon. Enjoy your skeleton body for the brief life remaining to you.
>>65166388What's that supposed to mean?
>>65166702It means that you should eat a granade for thinking pain.net is acceptable
>>65166808Now, on the surface this seems like a shitty phoneposter failing to type. But what if we go DEEPER?Granade seems to be a family name. Pain.net actually exists. Thus, this anon is trying to convince people to be cannibal web developers.
>>65166808I'm just going to admit I was wrong when I typed paint, I'm actually using gimp, but when called out I decided to double down on the paint explanation.You got me. >>65166869>hus, this anon is trying to convince people to be cannibal web developers.But what if we were all already cannibal cyoa developers?Eating the scraps of other discarded, forgotten cyoas, ideas, and authors to gain the power to put out our own cyoa?
>>65167128>crabThe cycle is now complete.
>>65165986Man, I added three whole images to my CYOA!I'm pooped!
>>65167249does it have waifus?
>>65167289Kinda? It has the option to have ONLY waifus, or to have no waifus at all. Player choice.
>>65165986Yeah it is tiresome if you try to meet a deadline, or you've been working on it long, and just want to finish up.
cyoa for this vibe?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vBd6jo8KI3c
Thread's dying, everyone migrate to the old one at your leisure: >>65148183
>>65167597Why not? It's page 7, the old thread has a bit to go to the bump limit, so there's no need to get a new one started.
>>65167561Huh. I never noticed linked threads count deleted posts.
>>65167597It's called conservation anon. With an attitude like that we might one day run out of new threads forever
>>65167657Liberal Chinese propagandaDRILL BABY DRILL
>>65167657>we might one day run out of new threads foreverNo, see, that's not a failure state, that's a challenge. Are we autistic enough dudes to use up threads forever before everyone dies from climate change or an AI wipes us out like the squishy meatbags we are? It'll be tough, but I have faith we can accomplish it.
>>65167616>>65167657I thought the thread was already ded sorry
Italics here. I'm going to do my best to put out some short OC soon.
>>65167962Magi Bloodlines when?
>>65167969Not anytime soon, but I did finish gathering the companion characters. 99 different Magi companions will appear in the cyoa.>>65167970No bless you.
>>65167996what's gonna be the OC?witches n inquisition extension?
>>65168010>what's gonna be the OC?>witches n inquisition extension?A short adventure cyoa that is inspired by Ico, Shadow of the Colossues, and LoZ: Twilight Princess about wandering through a decaying land in hopes of gaining a wish.
>>65168044>>65168044>LoZ: Twilight PrincessI hope it has waifus
>>65165646Not that anon, but aren't horses generally pretty unhealthy? Certainly less healthy than the average human.
>>65168068>>65168068>>65168068go hog wild
>>65168053It has female characters, but it also has a lot more male characters.
>>65168074Anon see >>65167561
>>65165554Basically>Don't make magic boring or forget that it's there
>>65166264Oops. I think I did it wrong. It's not working.
>>65167996>99 companionsyou madman, words are not enough
>>65168213Just add more blood.
>>65163285Reddit is right. If people are going to turn this hobby into their job, then we need to raise its status. Otherwise those workers are just poor people earning shit pay to talk about escapism. To improve the status of cyoa workers, we need to get rid of cyoa makers and users. Preferably in the most performative way possible. Then we can get some investors, and we won't need to worry about having actual consumers or a community. That way we can have all the disadvantages of commercialization, without any of the benefit.
>>65168336That sounds like cyoa communism.
>>65168336>>65168395All i know is it sounds bad for poland
>>65161464Rollin, hoping for Genie, if only so I can have Robin Williams back in some form. And my wish is that I am able to enter and exit the world of any form of fictional media at will, either as one of the characters that exists in that fictional world or as myself.
>>65168771YES! My second wish would be the ability to shapeshift into anything I want, gaining the powers and abilities of the things I turn into.My third wish would depend on whether or not he's guaranteed to be freed by Aladdin in his future. If yes, then it'd be for Genie to be able to come with me as a companion on any adventure I go on. If not, then I wish for him to be free.
>>65161464I wish to have a double major in biochem and mathematics with all the learning and education + experiences one would get along the way when I wake up tomorrow
>>65161464I wish to have my foreskin regrown fully
>>65161464I wish to have my ideal body to my desires
>>65161464I wish to have a genie
>>65169330You get a set of surprisingly easy to understand textbooks on those subjects, as well as a list of reputable communities for each skill level.>>65169379Your skin gets multiplied three times, for a total of four skin regrown fully.>>65169497It falls out of your car in public.Good luck convincing everyone you didn't just kill an Aphrodite-slash-Adonis.>>65169507It's a massive asshole.