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Tok Edition

Archives and other resources: https://pastebin.com/vrqYhnpu
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>>63391970
Whatever happened to that cyoa you made where you were in the middle of an explosion that tears a hole into other dimensions, and then a general asks you to make alliances with the other worlds on the other side of the portal
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>>63392154
I didn't make that CYOA, so I have no idea.
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>>63392136
Magic space war, it's NSFW.
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>>63386144
Extra lubricant.
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>>63391970
You’re probably my favorite cyoa creator tok.
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>>63392479
Stains, and will be awkward to explain away
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>>63392518
A lot of fun though. Don’t knock it till you try it.
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>>63392532
Why not use regular lubricant?
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Here's an Ace Combat-like CYOA I really love. Now go and reset this twisted game. Create a world with NO BOUNDARIES. Also, go very fast.
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>>63392538
That’s like saying if I had colored water, why wouldn’t I just buy a gatorade. One gets the job done a little better, but the other is going to be there either way.
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>>63391970
>Your Power
>Only own The Sandman

Um... yay?
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>>63392579
Point. Still is a dealbreaker, unless you're a hemophiliac.
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>>63392136
Here
>>>/trash/19884554
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>>63392568
>Create a world with NO BOUNDARIES
I just want to be happy
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>>63392609
Not necessarily. I just don’t mind a bit of blood.
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>>63392568
>Wingman
Firework
>#3
Shieldmaiden
>#4
Frosty

>Role
Strike
>Engine
Light
>Material
Titanium
>Size
Large
>wing shape
variable geometry
>wing size
Long
>subsystems
HUD: Rank 2
ECM: Rank 3
Autopilot: Rank 2
ECCM: Rank 1
Optics: Rank 3
Sensors: Rank 0
Stealth: Rank 1
Takeoff/Landing: Rank 1
>Weapons
Rotary Cannon (extra ammo)
Short-Range Missile
Large Guided Bomb
Countermeasures

>End stats
>Speed
5
>Mobility
5/3 (wings swept/straight)
>Stability
13/15 (wings swept/straight)
>Durability
17
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giant waifus are best waifus
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>>63392880
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Does anyone have the CYOA of some kind of battle where you have to pick between different factions to join that followed some legendary hero? They're was one faction that worshipped a statue of a fallen Titan, one was a legendary general, and one was the nameless hero or something like that.
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>>63392920
I know of it
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>>63392927
first forces of darkness, then guardians, then free agents
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>>63392931
fucksake
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>>63392982
done, go hog wild.
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>>63391970
anyone got a sauce on that Hound / Arya image, bottom row center column?
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>>63392996
Here ya go anon-kun

https://www.deviantart.com/roughyo/art/Arya-515352823
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>>63392938
>mysterious scottish old man is actually The End of the World after it achieved it's final form, going back and forth in space-time
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>>63392989
If you insist.
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>>63391970
>Your Magic
Okay, I choose this. You fucking asked for this, Tok. You unsealed this ancient evil: http://suptg.thisisnotatrueending.com/archive/26813598/

>Your You
Essence 2 Pyrian Fiend, Exalted. Irrelevant, I have everything I need to deal with any Shrek or non-Shrek threat.

>Your Power
I choose Ultra Comics, and use the power of being a self aware comic book character to escape to a better CYOA.
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Hello?
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>>63393738
chink moot fucked up again
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>>63392559
such a comfy cyoa, i just want to use it to make the magic faraway tree.
>tranquil woods
>rambling river
>signature feature
the faraway tree.
>connecting bridge
got get home you know
>lazy industry
my own magic shop.
>green power
water wheel
>phenomenal sights
cloud lands
or maybe santa's workshop with elven village?
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>>63391970
(You)
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>>63392568
Spd: 12
Sta: 8
Mob: 11
Dur: 10

Adv engine
Titanium
Compact
Delta
Moderate size
Hud III
Sensors II
Stealth IV
VTOL
4 x Rotary Cannons
2 x short range missiles
2 x counter measures
2 x Extra Ammo (1200)
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>>63393506
>still loses to counterspell
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>>63392164

I want to pick literally ALL OF THEM
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>>63392023
reboot when?

acheld said he wanted to make a different version focused on influence and subtlety iirc
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I see someone changed the name from my mandated one

time to abuse my discord powers on the poor anon
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>>63392071
Don't care, finish Princess
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>>63394682
I normally find the strange ones the cutest, but I'm deathly afraid of spiders.
As such, I believe Elle is the best choice. She's cute as a button too.
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>>63392620
Loli nazis are best faction
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>>63394456
It's unfair there's no mystery box challenge option thing to form an entire government jointly run by these fellas
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>>63394846
>Loli nazis
>Not Loli nazis/Magical girls alliance
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>>63394876
you do realise that would end in a fight somehow
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>>63394682
Not subtle enough, try harder.
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>>63394682
Taylor a best
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>>63394846
Nightmares are the ones you should help. They're the only ones that'll suffer if you don't pick them.
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CYOAs are dead.
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>>63397035
or they have evolved.
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>>63397070
The thread was dead for two and a half hours before I posted. Let that sink in.
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>>63394682
Elle.

I already deal with idiots, at least i know she can be taught how to work into society.
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>>63397070
aether is still fucking pathetic
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>>63397070
>>63397101


forgot i had my name on, ignore me.
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>>63392927
>Subordinate: The Black Queen
It's basically playing an RTS. You hivemind your army, and if you have flying troops, you even get to have a bird's eye view of the situation.
>Perk: Mobile Hive
I don't want to be stuck a hundred miles from the battlefield, or lose everything if we get overwhelmed in the field.
>Drawback: Picky Eaters
Kind of annoying, but mitigated by a mobile hive.
>Skill: Flying Insects
Gives me the full birds eye view, attacking from above is always good, and mobility is key.
>Reward:Plunder
May as well make that cash
>Artifact: Queen's Royal Jelly
More respect is good!
>Campsite: The Maw
I'm very certain that nobody would notice a few minor minions going missing...
>Nemesis: The Sphynx
If I'm gonna be an RTS general, I might as well be an unpredictable one.
>Role: Sergeant
Should be obvious why
>Allegiance:
Loyalist. The Black Queen gave me these powers, I'll use them to benefit us.
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>>63397070
>or they have evolved.
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>>63397191
>Shrinking to adapt

Do i need to bring out eternal adventure?
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>>63397214
well I'm bringing out eternal breakfast
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>>63397320
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>>63397214
Don't make me pull out Starry Knights!
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>>63397386
Yours is bigger......But it is also a PDF.
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>>63397394
He's posted it one page at a time before.
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>>63397450
oh shit..........

>>63397191
SEE, DO YOU SEE WHAT WE COULD UNLEASH? DARE YOU SAY WE SHRINK?
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>>63397386
Do it, this is a shitty tok thread anyway. Drown it so we may start again.
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>>63392951
>>63392959
>>63392965

That's a vintage version, before skills were added.
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>>63392568
2nd Lt. Kayla "Fireworks" Weaver
2nd Lt. Sarah "Witch Hunter" Desmond
2nd Lt. Anastasiya "Shieldmaiden" Ivanov

>Aircraft Role
Multirole

Engine: Advanced Engine
Aircraft Material: Titanium
Aircraft Size: Compact
Wing Shape: Delta
Wing Size: Short

Final Stats - SPD: 12, STA:7, MOB:12, DUR:10

HUD: Rank 2
ECM: Rank 2
Autopilot: Rank 0
ECCM: Rank 2
Optics: Rank 1
Sensors: Rank 1
Stealth: Rank 0
Takeoff Landing: Rank 3

Armaments: Rotary Cannon, Short-Range Missile, ALR Missile, Small Unguided Bomb, Large Unguided Bomb, Countermeasures
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>>63392982

>Agent: The Thing out of Time
It's a mysterious ball of time travelling energy. Seems trustworthy to me.

>Perk: One step ahead.
In a battle, a second can mean the difference between life and death. I always have that second.

>Flaw: Living in the Moment
I'll work around it as best I can, maybe teaming up with a commander type to do the strategising so I can focus on the here and now.

>Skill: Double Team
The best possible person to watch my own back is me.

>>63392965

>Faction: Guardians
I think I'll enlist with the Good Guys. They seem evenly matched and all things being equal I'd like to try and do something good.

>Rewards: Power
I want to join up with the Guardians when this is done, I think they could make use of a time guy.

>Artifact: Shrine Fragment
In time I'll develop skills worthy of my speed.

>Starting Activity: Into the fray
No chance of me learning anything, time to live in the moment!

>Campsite: Generals
Hopefully I'll be able to team up with someone to do the thinking for me. As for assassins, I'll always be one step ahead.

>Theatre of Battle: Flanks
That's where my soon to be commander will be most useful so I expect I'll be stationed there. I'm sure my allies will appreciate someone with my talents.
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>>63397320
Sword Waifu Academy when
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>>63397191
>Regression
>Not knowing that loli kitsunes are the pinnacle of fluffy tail evolution
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>>63398148
>Fluff with bones instead of bounce under it
Delet!
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>Hug fluff
>Because fluff is smol but fluffy tails isn't you two can be perfectly wrapped in fluffiest embrace
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>>63398198
That would be all fine and dandy IF shortstacks weren't a thing.
CHECKMATE FLAT-CHESTERS!
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>Shitstacks
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How are you supposed to survive this CYOA?
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>>63398638
You were never alive to start with.
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>>63398635
Can you point me to the FMJ reference? I seem to have missed it.
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>>63398638
you git gud
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>>63398638
by being impossible to kill, of course.
>Eidolon

>Universal Interface
>Stripwave Nanogear
>Immortality Protocol
I'm not infiltrating people, I'm infiltrating machines. All machines. The pod I escaped from? Controlled by a fork of me. The alarm sounding? Fork. The coffeemaker immediately below the hole in the ground? Fork. Their guns, HUDs, and personal computers? Fork, fork, fork.
It's impossible to truly delete a virus nowadays, much less one with as much adaptability as me.
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did we ever get that art gallery
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>>63398638
>Mockingbird, Genetic Manipulation, Permanent Repairs, Influence Nanos

This guy's >>63399129 build would be my first choice but to avoid redundancy I'll be "the Thing". I'm not murder-happy but I'll definitely have some sacrificial forks keep jailers busy as I go into a growth fugue. Hopefully I can rig the microbiota in the environment and my gut into a slime mould analogue. If I'm caught and they don't properly sterilise the site (I'll have consumed evidence of my capabilities) they'll come together to form a rough copy, hopefully closer to escape.
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>>63399129
Wow. That's pretty gonzo. Sounds like you've got good odds of making it big.
As for me, I want to go out as a gee-whiz robo-beast like in those cheap SyFy flicks, but some practicality is needed to last longer than five minutes. Here's my build and gameplan:

>Panzer

>Universal Interface
>Lensing Field
>Fusion Core

My plan is to sneak through the facility, using well-timed invisibility bursts to sneak through security until the alert clears, and gather what information I can about the state of the facility and the outside world. Once I've gathered a reasonable amount of data, I'll plan my next move, whether it be escape, sabotage, distraction, joining the facility controllers, or something else.
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>>63398638
Panzer
>Fusion core
>Black skeleton
>Permanent repairs
I am just going to plug a huge laser cannon or something to myself and desintegrate anything that obstructs my path to escape if i fail i am just going to self destruct and take anything with me
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>>63398532
Is this scottishanon's first cyoa or something?
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>>63399932
Stop shilling yourself faggot
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We need to exterminate weeb shit.
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>>63400017
no
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I have no idea how to balance martials and casters when the latter is supposed to be more powerful than the former. Do I just scrap everything-martial and make it a pure magic cyoa instead?
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>>63399676
>>Abilities
>Teleportation
Wonder what's the limit on the definition of "solid ground". People's heads? Helicopters? What if I throw a rope and teleport on top of it, does it count as part of the ground if one end is connected to it? So many possibilities...
>Spring Loaded
I'm more inclined to use this to hop around like a grasshopper.
>Blade
I become the deadliest cartwheeler.
>Redundancy
Close-range combat leaves much to be desired in terms of safety.

My strategy will be to teleport and hop around the battlefield, slicing enemies as I strafe between them with my blade. Redundancy allows me to last longer in battle in case someone manages to land a hit or two on me.

>>Skills
>Hacking
I can finally dox retards on /pol/, build a gun even the /k/ ruski will have to admit the superiority of, and answer any "LONDON" question truthfully.
>Leadership
With this, our battle strength skyrockets with well-utilization.

>>Companions
>Fatima Hadid
Can fly, giving me someplace to teleport to aboveground: Check
Multiplies our operational versatility (flight): Check
The image of her using her abilities (carrying me on her back) is hilarious (and slightly fetishy): Check
Closet nerd: Check
Can bring in airstrikes: Check
Opens the door to Bomberman strategies: Check
Tries to understand her lover: Check
Harem route: Check
Doesn't mind either position: Check
Her nickname for me sounds like "Hubby": Check
Seriously, why would anyone not pick her?
>Zhou Hao-Han
I'm a simple man. I heard "enormous thigh muscles", and I instantly lost it.
We can do double lariats with our legs...

>>Equipment
>Weapon [All-purpose assault rifle]
I'm visualizing something that can shoot anything I feed into it. Something like The Sword of King Dakka from For Want Of A Paperclip.
>Utility Belt
Point and Click games taught me that these kinds of things can solve any situation.

>>Faction: The Global Defense Force
I can make changes in the laws here, bring back the electric chair for murderers.
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>>63400112
If people want to be the martial, let them be the martial.
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>>63400112
Why are casters "supposed" to be more powerful, exactly? Do explain.
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>>63400134
It's called common sense
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>>63400112
>when the latter is supposed to be more powerful than the former
*laughs in knight class*

fat load of good magic is going to do for you when some dude just turned you into a pulp before you can so much as utter a spell
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>>63398638
>Eidolon
>Genetic Manipulation
>Immortality Protocol
>Recombiant Module
This is now a horror movie.
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>>63400112
Give martials more companion slots and event choices, or something like that. More social customization. Casters lose out on life but reap the benefits of power.
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>>63400165
name a mage who can fight hercules
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>>63399720
>Hypnotist
>Workshop
>Alchemy Set, Magitek Primer
>Sectarians

Copies speed up production in the workshop considerably. My output has even grabbed the attention of Sect higher-ups. If I can arrange a one-on-one encounter I'll be a step closer to being given their secrets. If my alchemy is up to scratch I'll have a polymorph potion to mask my identity as I bail before initiation into the inner circle (I'm quite attached to my right hemisphere).
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>>63400171
Haahahaha, butthurt martial fatefaggot spotted. Not everyone adheres to your crap-tier writing and horrendous chuuni themes.
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>>63400211
you're just mad you don't have a sword
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>>63400211
>Not everyone adheres to your crap-tier writing and horrendous chuuni themes.
casterfags with the negative self awareness
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>>63400186
>b-b-b-but my favorite fiction says something different, y'know
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>>63400225
the virgin medea and the chad iskander
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>>63400112
You want balance? You have these options:
>Fantastic Martials
Can do super hero-level stuff. Think Wuxia. Martials are just not!casters that use their body and weapons instead of fireballs and spells.
>Mundane Casters
Can do weak-ass spells mostly. Think cantrips. The more powerful spells are akin to constructing a nuke: Time consuming, can go horribly wrong, super expensive, and takes a lot of skill.
>Counters
Much like EMPs are used to combat otherwise unstoppable robots, anti-magic can be used to combat otherwise unstoppable casters. How anti-magic is defined is up to you. You can make it a magic nullifier (equipment or ability), or a school of anti-magic techniques (wizard threw lightning? Use a lightning rod).
>Scrap martials as a player option
The best way to not have people bitch about how their favorite option is underpowered is to not include it in the first place. You'll get one, maybe two autists that just chase you down to the ends of the earth (like the moral-paladin did to Rosanon after cyo/u/ academy), but it's still better than the alternative.
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>>63400211
Caster v martials is often as autistic in the oppsite direction. The balance varies by setting, there's no "should" unless you decide there is.
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>>63400112
Make them *martial*, not *mundane*. Maybe they can swing their sword so hard they slice things fifteen feet away from them, or are sneaky enough they can steal spells.
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>>63400186
>Hercules
>Demigod
>Literal magic
>Martial
>laff.jpg
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>>63400255
give a single instance where hercules uses spells

go on, im waiting
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>>63400261
>Demigod
>Literally half-divine figure
>Not magic
>chortle.jpg
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>>63400267
>uses his strength, skills and nothing else
>not martial
>this is your brain on casterfags.png
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Casters *should* be more powerful than Martials
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>>63400267
>Implying martials can't be magic as well
See >>63400249
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>>63400282
>Half god
>Using strength, skills and nothing else
>Except for that sweet magical genetics
>kek.jpg
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>>63400300
youre just wrong, but its an admirable attempt
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>>63400319
>Except for that sweet magical genetics
>so his strength
Im glad you agree hes a martial!
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>>63400335
>magical martial
>true martial
Pick One.
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>>63400225
This. It's funny how casters complain about wish-fulfillment and "not realistic" considering what they want.
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>>63400346
>b-but if I define martial wrong I might have a point
kek

a martial is a martial
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>>63400323
Nah, see, what matters is that Casters *should* be more powerful than Martials. Physical prowess grounded in reality needs not compare to something that's innately unreal, and can do anything.
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All you martial/wizard faggots need to go fuck off back to the discord where you can suck each others dicks. Especially you gil. Go back to watching your greek wrestling cyclopses.
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>>63400361
>Martial who uses magic
>"What a fucking failure"
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>>63400319
In that case, do we count anyone who ever got hit by magic or buffed by magic to be a caster?
That would mean that everyone in the world is a caster, yet you made some more powerful than others for no reason. That means your balancing sucks, not "martials".
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>>63400371
Oh, piss off you insufferable faggot. Make a cyoa about martials being cucked by mages if you care so much. This discussion is irrelevant.
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martials and mages should be as strong as the setting requires them to be
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>>63400112
why are you like this?
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You guys literally can't not take bait
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I too am of the opinion that a martial using magic is a huge bitch. But it's the only actual way for them to even stand a chance against magic-users, so whatever.
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>>63400413
It's true :(
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>>63400413
it's literally the same guys arguing about it again, they even use the same pics
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https://imgur.com/a/JW4fE3w#0MSDYhx
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>>63400371
>Physical prowess grounded in reality
| see you dont know what you are talking about

but still, this is quaint

>>63400388
>uses magic
but he doesent

he is supernatural- but he doesent use magic

>>63400413
its fun!
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>>63400413
It's literally just Gil being his regular retarded self. I thought we concluded he was an enormous retard threads ago. Move along.
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>>63400477
either you vastly over-estimate how much I post or you really do think im the boogieman

either way im flattered
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>>63400474
>half god
>not magic
>this is what martials think
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>>63400489
>everything supernatural is a caster
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>>63400485
You're the easiest person to spot, to be quite frank.
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>>63400515
probably, but that just makes it even more embarrassing when people fail
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>>63400508
That's not even remotely what he was getting at. You're willingly being an idiot now.
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>>63400508
>you have to be a caster to be magical
>half magical
>half human
>not magical
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>>63400534
"hercules is a caster because he is supernatural" is LITERALLY his argument
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>>63400558
>everything magical is a caster
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>>63400563
Hercules is -literally- half deity. He's not a caster, but he damn well used magic in his daily excursions of physical capability, from holding up the sky to slaying the lion. Christ.
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>Regurgitating the same autistic casters vs martials arguments

This is why we can't have nice things.

Speaking of, when's Holdfast getting an update?
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>>63400579
christmas, at least.

Whoo hoo, something to actually look forward to on 4chan! go team!
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>>63400578
>but he damn well used magic
no, he used his strength

he is supernatural, but that does not mean that he uses spells
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>>63400601
Divine, magical strength. Not spells. There's no way in hell you're going to convince me Hercules strength was mundane. Like, you're just not. I think we're done here.
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>>63400612
>Divine, magical strength
>supernatural strength*

we know what magical strength is, its the ointment Jason gets to fight the Dragontooth Warriors, its now what hercules has
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>>63400601
>supernatural =/= magic
Oh fuck off

Nobody said he used spells, theyre saying he has magical strength
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>>63400632
Are you honestly going into semantics now. Good lord.
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>>63400112
Ehh, sure. Or just don't have balance, but at least let me look like a bad ass fucking knight in shining Armour so i can save a princess or two. Or maybe some orphans.

I just wanna be a hero man.
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>>63400653
>now
this was semantics from the moment someone claimed that hercules wasnt a martial because he was supernatural

>>63400637
>he has magical strength
he has strength. there are plenty of demigods in greek mythology with nothing to show in the way of exceptional strength

hercules is strong because he is strong, its why hes head and shoulders above everyone else- mortal or demigod
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>>63400684
Appropriate.
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Honestly should've just stopped here >>63400246
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>>63400699
Hercules is strong being he's the fucking son of Zeus. He's a goddamn Demigod. There's nothing mundane about it. You're arguing he's a martial, yes he is, but he's not the kind most /tg/-goers think of when they think of it.
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>>63400726
Depends on the setting. Among the gods, he's the martiallest martial that ever martialled.
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>>63400737
>Depends on the setting
Sure, if you want to have a mythological debate totally outside the current discussion.
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>>63400726
>but he's not the kind most /tg/-goers think of when they think of it.
I wont argue with that

but thats because they are retarded and assume that martial = mundane, when literally no-one of note in mythology was mundane (obvious hyperbole, but you get the point)

>hes strong because hes a demigod
hes stronger than every other demigod too, the dude beats up fucking death
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>>63400684
I can almost guarantee this general would be better off had he just stopped posting.
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>>63400750
Most caster settings have literally everyone infused with some amount of magic, so arguing that him containing magic makes him "magical" is in bad faith..
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>>63400770
If you want to cite an individual who surpassed mundane limits whilst being mundane themselves, you best go find someone other than Hercules, someone such as Beowulf.
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>>63400814
I get what you mean, but you also need to consider they hyperbole.

Dropping through an hours worth of seawater to cut off a witches head by himself? with no difficulty or reprecussion?
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>>63400813
Not even him, but god blooded = magical

Kind of retarded not to assume
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>>63399685
The very same.
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>>63400814
Beowulf is the reason I added the clause after "literally no one of note in mythology is mundane"

theres some others (siegfried, some of the KoTRT and so on)

>>63400845
he was underwater for like a week AFAIK
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>>63400813

Most caster settings have borked physics. Fighters jumping ten meters and slaying war Mammoths with their fists is still considered "mundane" in said worlds. Being a half-divine hero? Not very mundane.
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>>63400855
mores my point, the storyteller was exaggerating or his legend was that big. you can't really take his story seriously as a mundane man unless you admit some shit was exaggerated. not that that is a bad thing, but for this discussion it should be noted.
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>>63400884
>you can't really take his story seriously
its mythology, why not?

hes mundane and still ripped a giants arms of and shit- thats how mythology works
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>>63400855
>"literally no one of note in mythology is mundane"

Unless, they're, you know, entirely human, use no magic, and just do plain heroic things. Human. Hercules wasn't completely human. Beowulf was.
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>>63400903
hence the clause, something I mentioned both in the "original post" and the one you replied to

you have mundane regular humans, but there is a far larger abundance of people that are magical in some way or another
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the only thing martial cucks can whip out at this point is 'muh mythology' lul
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>>63392951
Would be nice to see the updated version posted.
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>>63400937
>a-all they have is the basis of the very basis of the fantasy genre itself and the greatest storytelling tradition in the history of man
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>>63400901
ehh, i suppose you are right but in context of the "discussion" if he was in any other part of the world he would be hailed as a god blooded. thats what i was pointing to.

still cool stories though.

>>63400937
so? least it's winding down. it's a dumb argument anyway where the only way to win is to not play.

or just play paladin.
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>>63400937
Just goes to show that Casters SHOULD be more powerful than Martials
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>>63400970
>if he was in any other part of the world he would be hailed as a god blooded
possibly, but he wasnt- he was just a regular dude
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>>63401007
i already agreed with you. shame he was a barbarian though.
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>>63401018
I mean, is it?

the dude went and beat monsters to death- and that was underwater and with a handicap of a cursed sword
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>>63401033
Is for me, personal taste says that my ideal hero is a Arthurian knight of the round table without the betrayals.
Stout defenders of the faith and people, honorable and diligent to a fault. I got brought up with stories like that, so they became my favorites.

It's a shame so few CYOA's fit the bill for shit like that. eternal adventure is one that i know of.
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>>63401093
thats fair enough
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>>63401150
Martials btfo
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>>63401129
What do you consider the ideal fairy tale hero then Anon?

the longer we talk the less likely the shitshow starts again
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>>63400473
Master (50,0)
Night Stood Still - Wild Cards Mode (800, 850) Replacing Atrum

Female Adult
Unassuming, Attractive, Frail

Priest (800, 900)

Quantity: D
Quality: C+ (770, 900)

Origin: Water
Element: Ensnare

Healing (705, 900)

Martial Arts, Fire Arms proficiency, Explosives handling (465, 900)

Residence: Hotel (435, 900)

Follower (400, 900)

Church Agent
Friendly, Philosophical, Vigorous (340, 900)

Mystic Eyes of Reversion (140, 900)

Mystic Code -> Combat & Clothing (40,900)
>Clerics robe that provides defense to both physical and magical attacks

Follower (5, 900)
Church Agent
Friendly, Philosophical, Comedic (15,900)

Servant: Da Vinci (15, 250)
Homeland Fame (15, 50)

Summoned #1 (15,0)

Da vinci is probably DTF even without camaraderie so it's not that important a buy. Rins the most likely candidate for an alliance (since shes not aware of her gay feelings) but sakura's passive aggressiveness does allow for an opening. I could just kidnap Sakura some time after she hands off rider to shinji and seduce her. the next step would be to go and beat Shinji up. With a subpar master and a little bit of prep-time we can hold rider long enough for me to throw shinjis stupid book in the toilet. With either of the tohsaka sisters backing me up, berserker should be no problem. 12 labors vs Uomo Universalis and bellaphon and/or too many swords probably works out in my favor.

I don't know how I'll take on AUO but hopefully I'll have achieved a threesome with rin and sakura before then.
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>>63401181
Arthur or the like is probably the best for a fairy tale, Hercules is pretty good, but its a different style of heroism

the Arthurian knights are products of virtue ethics, while the greek heroes are more about classical heroism

Hercules doesent work as a fairy tale hero, but hes a great hero
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>>63397035
Thread was made by tok, I almost missed it myself due to the filter.
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>>63401217
>hercules
even with dirty anus and worms helping you, da vinci isnt suited to fighting him

Herc can literally take Bellerophon and Uomo and keep on trucking
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>It's a ye old 'Five Races' CYOA, oh great
>Elves are the best users of magic, everyone else sucks
>Why even be a non-elf Mage if you're just going to suck at it
>Better be a knight instead
>Dwarves and Orcs are the best at it
>Look through builds in the archives, they're barely human because humans suck
>There's no hard cap limit, so non-humans will always be better

Why do CYOAs do this
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>>63401253
But Uomo scales with the strength of the opponent?

Does davinci even use her NP in the actual f/go story? Cause otherwise I'm going to assume it can take atleast 2 or 3 lives off him
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>>63401300
>Does davinci even use her NP in the actual f/go story?
I think she tried it on Lancelot in Camelot
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>>63401297
>It's a ye old 'Five Races' CYOA, oh great
>elf
>dwarf
>human
>orc
whats the fifth?

also, what CYOA?
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>>63401181
I'm fond of tricksters myself. They still need straight men to be effective so knights in shining armour are appreciated.
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>>63401324
Midget Halflings most likely.
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>>63401297
because it's tropes at that point. But if none humans will always be better who cares? It's not a PVP one is it? so just go with what makes you happy. if none of it does, don't play.

And the usual drawback of none humans is ostracisation
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>>63401297
It means the author sucks and/or is a hack. Even in the tropiest of trope settings, AKA D&D, you don't have a race outdoing another.
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>>63400165
>magic
>in fiction
>common sense
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>>63401395
>all races should be balanced
hack writing 101 right here
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>>63401403
Please stop, it was winding down.
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>>63401395
That's because DnD is one of those 'HUMANITY FUCK YEAH' settings. Be it Forgotten Realms, Dragonlance, or Mystara.
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>>63401333
of course, classic loki is funny when compared with thor. like when mjolnir was taken by giants and he had to dress up as freya.
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>>63401410
Races aren't "balanced" in D&D, they receive starting bonuses. Everyone is free to pursue their own path. A level 20th elf Wizard isn't necessarily edging out the level 20th human Wizard.
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>>63401253
If rins helping that means archers probably there too. So herc is losing half his lives at least.
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>>63401410
>Race balance
>D&D

Anon... Orcs are physically stronger than humans, Dwarves make better industry, Elves are innately in-tune with magic. Yet, in the end, even the well-rounded Humans produce the finest knights, the greatest of technological innovations, and the most influential and powerful of wizards.
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>>63401474
>at least
you mean possibly, Archer gets bodied by saber within seconds- and saber gets ragdolled by Berzerker like shes nothing

but anyways, 5/6 +1/2 from Umo +1 from Bellerophon =at most 9, which means Herc still wins
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>>63401491
yes, because "muh jack of all trades" and "muh racial drawbacks"
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>>63401511
Archer was jobbing to saber because MUH WAIFU

We see what it looks like when he's not holding back in sparks liner high. With two servants backing him up he could probably take more than six lives.
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Antimage CYOA when?
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>>63401538
>We see what it looks like when he's not holding back
when Cu kicks him all over the place

his last stand in FSN is very much the best of his abilities
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>>63401561
wrong shitposting anon
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>>63401528
It's called human ambition and ingenuity. It's been a thing since forever. Ever wondered why, lore-wise, humans barely into their fifties surpass elves centuries into their craft?
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>>63401150
Best part is how it showcases the skill monkey's superiority
>So stealthy he doesn't appear in any WANTED poster, and most other posters
>So creative with his skills, he can replicate caster spells and martial might
>So majestic, he's the party face
>Also the only one that can throw a party
>In both senses, yes
>Party is a roving band of thugs without him
>Party are respectable adventurers with him
>Can finish entire questlines without a drop of blood spilled
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>>63401491
Because Humans are flexible. It is their imagination that sets them apart from the others. Do you think any of the others would look at a caw and go 'I'm going to suck its teat like a new born, and then I'm going to take this milk and sit it until it grows moldy and see what it tastes like'? Humans are unbelievably weird.
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>>63401580
>Ever wondered why, lore-wise, humans barely into their fifties surpass elves centuries into their craft?
because dnd is badly written trash?
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>>63401565
All he was doing was waiting for medea to get distracted. If he wanted to make a real effort at killing cu he would have invoked UBW
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>>63401610
Are you perhaps just saying that because you're biased in favor of elves and think they should be the best at magic? Because that's not trash writing, that's an opinion.
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>>63401580
Remember when Elves were vengeful tree spirits?
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>>63401613
>he would have invoked UBW
he would have died mid chant, not to mention that even with UBW he cant so much as touch Cu
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>>63397191
Source?
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>>63401645
I don't think protection from arrows actually works against stuff with serious conceptual weight. Otherwise cu would have actually killed Gil instead of just fighting for 12 hours
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>>63401682
>Otherwise cu would have actually killed Gil instead of just fighting for 12 hours
Gil has the counter to Cu- Enkidu, a melee binding which allows him to negate PFA

EMIYA has nothing of the sort
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>>63401645
it's anime, talkings a free action
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>>63401716
im pretty sure theres bad ends where shirou dies while talking
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>>63400579
I'm working on it.

I just killed your cousin.

Sorry. :(
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>>63401610
>hates dnd
>makes cyoa that's basically dnd
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>>63401873
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>>63401769
do you think I can arrange a threesome before I die atleast
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>>63401891
you know im right
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>>63401917
arranging a threesome when Rider and Rin are involved isnt hard

you could have a bloody five-way
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>>63397070
>everything you touch quickly decays
>wear a glove

I don't think this author understands the concept of touching
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>>63401677
Towako Ichi but these two pages are only ones
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>>63401947
I know that I shouldnt make fun of you too much, picking on the mentally handicapped and all
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>Wear glove
>Rots in your hand
>bacteria dies so you also don't have to wash your hands
at least you don't have to clean your mistakes
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>>63401917
Rin, Saber, and Rider are all up for threesomes, Sakura isn't. Or at least Sakura is the one that would need convincing. Medea could be convinced if you got to her before she fell for the teacher, and Illya is probably easier to convince than Sakura. Or at least it's probably easier to get Illya to go from liking you to threesomes, than from how she start out to just liking you.
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>>63401297
But I take humans most of the time. They always have more skills.
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>>63402111
My nigger. Everyone calls me boring but I don't care
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>>63402060
>Medea could be convinced if you got to her before she fell for the teacher
only if you happen to be saber and act in a very specific way
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>>63402151
Just saying that it's not possible to get her into a threesome, without getting to her early. It might be possible to do it if you aren't saber, but have saber, or at least a saber.
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>>63402330
>or at least a saber.
nah, it has to be seibah, or at least saber lily, it takes more than just a saberface afterall
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>>63401580
>Ever wondered why, lore-wise, humans barely into their fifties surpass elves centuries into their craft?
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Why are martial fags so annoying
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>>63398638
thought the file said rogue princess and got hype.
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>>63401580
a mental trait that is not present in most of humanity is not the best of ways to make humanity good though
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>>63392938
>the King of the Wastes
>Dirty fighting
>Loose cannons
>Suicide Attackers

>Dominion
>Recruiter's Favour
>Wasteland Caravan
>The Nameless Hero
>Infiltrator
>Individualist

The idea is I use my most unruly troops as a distraction while I lead the ones I can count on on the mission.
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>>63400065
>>63399932

Oi, you ain't Textanon. I'm Textanon, and I'm procrastinating on the waifu gallery by working on a Text-Only CYOA while doing chores

I'll shill whoever made this cyoa though. Maybe I'll make one with a similar premise someday. I like what they did with it, just have some other ideas.
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>>63402739
>Oi, you ain't Textanon
never claimed to be
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>>63402833
That's... Actually a good point. Someone else implied you were. My bad.
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>>63402993
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Congrats on shitting up yet another thread. Small wonder authors don't want to post OC with all you spewing feces all over the place from both ends.
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>>63403045
speak for yourself, there is currently a 300 post thread dedicated to cyoa with minimal shitposting

it just isnt this one
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>>63403045
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>>63403067
That's exactly what I mean. The Yu-gi-oh thread isn't infested by the autistic retards here.
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>>63403067
Your cyoa stinks faggot
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>>63403118
Idiot. Should probably raise the posting age to 21 for you.
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>>63403126
and yet it got the (you)'s
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>>63403045
>DiscordGilfag suddenly appears
>Thread Quality suddenly drops

I wouldn't be surprised if he was the one behind this
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>>63403145
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I blame this on the fact the thread was made by Tok.
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>>63403157
Gil is an insufferable mess and everybody hates him, news at eleven.
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>>63403177
For once this can't be blamed on the cuckold swede since this thread was doing decently until the Discord fag came here
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>>63403157
>>63403179
Feels a bit awkward seeing him slowly get hated on.
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>>63403157
do you remember the shitstorm in this thread? that was me anon! do you remember the last shitstorm? that was me anon! do you remember that time your hot-pocket fell on the floor and you couldnt even bend over far enough to pick it up? that was me anon!

I am the cause of every bad thing that has happened in your recent memory, my shitposting genius knows no bounds!

>>63403179
shucks anon youll make me blush
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>>63403217
No, you're just easy to spot and every time someone brings up martials vs casters, antimagic, F/SN, etc, you're always there trashing a thread with your excruciatingly opinionated ramblings.
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>>63403204

>this thread was doing decently until the Discord fag came
so here? >>63394215
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>>63403231
I am what you faggots deserve, I never start the shitstorm- I simply bite
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>>63403157
His issue is that he doesn't shut up and can't conceive of opposing viewpoints. He's also really, well, dumb.
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>>63403261
>and can't conceive of opposing viewpoints
I understand they exist, they just happen to be wrong
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>>63403045
I actually don't want to post it until after the holidays because I know it'll be ignored what with all the other bigshot authors (and Tok) putting their deadlines there.
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>>63403261
The laughable thing is if you had asked me who this fag was a week ago I would have asked who you were even talking about. He is basically Tok with a different name
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>>63403287
Don't let other people's timelines define your own.

If you think it's ready and you want to share it, by all means do so. Quality will stand on its own merit.

Looking forward to playing yours, gentle anon.
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>>63403261
He literally just turned eighteen. He's still effectively a kid. Give him a break.
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>>63403314
the funny thing here is that I havent been very active for most of this week
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>>63403332
That explains so much. A discordfag that just turned 18, Only thing is missing is his reddit account and his youtube channel
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>>63403204
My point is the thread was inherently cursed from the start, even if it didn't start bad.
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>>63403372
you say that like I havent been in this general for years already
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>>63403314
I am ashamed to say that I find more distaste in this Gil guy than Tok.
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>>63402151
saber is just enough of her type to get past her repressed feelings but that doesn't mean she wouldn't like other types of girls
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>Equated to Tok
RIP Gilposter. That's the worst insult you can give to an author.
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>>63403436
Saber is the only girl she seems to like, shes the perfect package of personality and looks
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>>63403466
are you kidding? this is great

I have apparently usurped THE shitposter without so much as trying
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>>63403332
So he's literally just a pure fucking shitter then
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>>63403217
>Remember that time that girl was blowing you barry but stopped right before you came, that was me barry, me!
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>>63403252
Stupid is as stupid does. Don't be part of the problem, be a solution
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>>63403550
I give people what they deserve
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>he's acting tough
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>>63403388
>Checked
Your double doubles of truth tells no lies and only of wisdom.

>>63403419
Remember when Tok was being really retarded and then when he left and came back he tried to say that it was all an epic troll instead of just learning from his mistakes and growing up? That's the exact same thing this newfag is trying to do

>>63403584
And its hilarious.
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proposal to call the next thread clean your own adventure or caliber your own adventure
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>>63403315
Holdfastanon, is that you?
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>>63403584
Gil is adorable, ain't he
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>>63403613
coo yu oh ad-ture thog.
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>>63403568
So you're retarded and have zero self control. Gotcha.
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>>63403568
Yeah, no, stop pretending like you're some hot shot. Jesus.
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>>63403568
Do you understand just how fucking autistic you are?
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>Instead of learning from Tok's mistakes he is following exactly in his foot steps

How long until he announces he is leave to the discord forever or to reddit?
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>>63392398
Where's Honey Crisp? You wouldn't even have to change the name up, that one just works.
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>>63403690
I am what the thread deserves me to be, I dont start any shitposting- I just join in

>>63403740
enough to browse /cyoag/

>>63403745
you arent so lucky anon
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>>63403568
>shits his pants
>"dude, that's not what grown people do"
>I-It's the shit you deserve

Basically you
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He is turning into Tok at a faster pace right before our eyes
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>>63403791
Oh god just stop. You fucked up and made yourself out to be an utter moronic ass, now suck it up and deal with it.
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>>63403825
I havent even started shilling yet anon
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>>63403825
Nooo gil noooo!
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You guys are finally realizing how awful he is? Excuse me while I laugh after half year of holding it in.
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>>63403944
>You guys are finally realizing how awful he is?
kinda seconding this

its not like ive changed at any point
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>>63403961
Yes you're awful. I've always known how awful you are. Seeing people turn on you is a godly fucking feel.
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It's funny how the people that claim whoever started and continued shitposting is Gil, then proceed to shitpost harder.
>inb4 t.Gil
Please have a moment of introspection. For all I know, this was all Tokie trying to shift all the hate that's usually directed at him to another target, plus some idiots that fell for it.
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>>63403974
so youre an early fan of mine?
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>>63403614
Yes. Is my prose that obvious? :)

But seriously, if you have something that you feel is good, post it and let's take it for a spin.
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>>63399676
Abilities
>Electricity
>Plasma
>Nitrogen
>Blade
>Telekinesis
>Flight
The blade is a last resort, I'm staying mid-long range controlling the battlefield.

Skills
>Leadership
>Speechcraft

Companions
>Chad Thunder
For the sweet sweet absorb energy bomb dual tech
>Tanya Sudakova

Equipment
>Supersuit
>Armor

Conditions
>Inhuman
Faction
>Guardians of Earth
Considering my condition joining a faction is probably my best bet at not getting lynched/chased out of town. The defence force might give me more legitimacy but I dunno if it fits the showy Chad
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>>63403976
>Please have a moment of introspection. For all I know, this was all Tokie trying to shift all the hate that's usually directed at him to another target, plus some idiots that fell for it.

I compared gilfag to Tok because he is acting just like Tok did and instead of learning from it he is doubling down on being a retard just like Tok did
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>>63403976
How's the taste of Gil's dick, anon?
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>>63404079
>instead of learning from it he is doubling down
of course I am, why should I hold myself to a higher standard than the rest of you do?
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>>63404057
"Gentleanon" gave it away. nobody else is that nice or uses such prose. others may be civil but never things like "gentle"
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>>63402739
>whoever made this cyoa though
Ayy that's me. I always meant to update it, intending to expand on the jobs, assistants and worlds. Never got around to do it.

Tell me what you liked and maybe suggestions or other stuff.
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>>63404172
Yeah. People here can be such cunts that the nice ones stand out as weird.
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>>63404203
all the more reason to like an author. you have your gils and toks, then you have your holdfasts and berris.

I know what i prefer.
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>>63404057
Update when my dude?
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>>63404253
I should hate Berri, as I dislike cutsey animu shit, but I cannot bring myself to. Must be that Berri charm.
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>>63404378
I should hate Italics, as I dislike that illiterate chuuni shit, but I cannot bring myself to. Must be that Italics charm.
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>>63404415
I should hate my body, as i dislike the shit it makes me go through, but i just cannot bring myself to. Must be that Body charm.
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>>63404176
I liked the variety of jobs from taking a major role in it like the hero and villain positions, to more maintenance jobs like keeping artifacts locked away in between legendary moments, ensuring the dragons don't wage total war on humanity, and being a guardian of time (because of course a hero is gonna fuck up the timeline at some point).

The 'waifus' I didn't like too much, even just picking one as a genuine assistant instead of romantic interest was difficult. Would have liked an option to just go without.

Would also have liked an expansion on the different roles, and possible abilities or companions that are unique to each one. Maybe a way for all the employees to hang out together in a pocket dimension away from the world?

Also a bit more detail on how the respective immortalities work. Like the time guy is immortal, and the hero and villain reincarnate, but what does the reincarnation entail? Do they remember things from past iterations? Is the dragon negotiator job immortal too?
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>>63404428
I should hate you all, as I dislike unoriginal posting, but I cannot bring myself to. Must be that Anon charm.
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>>63404428
Can relate
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>>63404473
I should love god, as i wish to go to heaven, but i cannot bring myself to. Must be that despairing lack of faith.
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>>63404532
I think you mean Satan's charm.
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>>63404088
Like imaginary gold.
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>>63404564
I think you mean humanity's inability to plan ahead.
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>>63404532
Hell isn't so bad anon
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>>63403004
>Take Emissary
>Get dissected and experimented on by elves until your magic is extracted, your body then promptly discarded
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>>63404616
I think you mean crippling human weakness, in that i only want to go to heaven than consider loving god because he is my creator.

>>63404618
fire, brimstone, cold, pain, anguish or just seperation from my soul. all seem bad.
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>>63404282
I'm mostly done with finals. I plan to really knock out quite a bit of work on Holdfast this weekend.

I spent a few hours today aggressively retooling the end of Chapter One, setting up a mystery or two, baiting the proverbial hook. I should have a decently meaty Chapter Two beta for consumption and feedback by Christmas if not before, though I won't promise that all of Chapter Two will be done by that time.

All of Chapter Two will probably be another four pages. The first four were 20k words if I recall correctly, so building up the next part to an equal standard of depth and quality will create time.

I appreciate your patience and everyone else's. And may I share that I'm loving all the OC I'm seeing lately. You're all heroes in my book.

With love and kindness, have a great day/afternoon/night.
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>>63404656
Good dental plan though.
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>>63404699
having them torn out and replaced to be torn out seems to just hurt more.

But speaking of hell, lets show my own personal one.
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>>63404715


>>63404688
You have all the patience in the world if you deliver before two years pass, then even the most faithful start to doubt.
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>>63404649
nobody said elves are nice
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>>63404688
If his fiction is half as good as his manners, he'll be the next Tolkien. Is this CYOA any good? Haven't heard of it.
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>>63404656
>seperation from my soul
Didn't we go over this just a little bit ago? That's not what the word means. You can't be separated from yourself. You can be separated from your body, but it's not like you'll be there forever, nor like Jehovah is really your best bet.
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>>63404656
>i only want to go to heaven than consider loving god because he is my creator
Why do you think god offers heaven? It's the bait. Worship god for heaven long enough, and you'll eventually start worshiping god for god.
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>>63404772
I think i mean separation from god according to christians. I'm tired, sorry for any mistakes made here, but hell is just supposed to be seperate from god's grace/light.

Dante came along and gave us hellfire and brimstone


>>63404775
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>>63404757
Doesn't excuse them for being douches.
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>>63404464
In a grander scheme I tried to make most jobs convey the idea that magic and free will is a terrible combination. All the problems just get shoved down the line. Create mass destruction or destroy the world? Call the druid. Timeloops and paradoxes? Call the Time Warden.

Obviously the whole idea was just a silly concept combining the work life with magic narrated by a tired, snarky wizard with wise-guy commentary.

The assistants were an unnecessary contribution, but for humor's sake I included them. I wondered what people would put up with for the sake of a pretty face. Yes, in fact they are all terrible in their own right.

Yennifer (Neutral) is a typical wizard with no sense of right or wrong. Who gets lazy because magic can do anything.
Cristi (Strong Submissive) is a succubus who wants to suck you dry.
Brighid (Subtle Dominant) wants to own you.
Lucille (Switch) is a diva who will claim your achievements for herself.
Demeter (Submissive) is a whimsical tricksy fairy.
Morgana (Dominant) wants to take over your job.

I really liked your feedback. Your wishes for expanding aren't unreasonable. But let's talk some more another time (tomorrow maybe?). I have to sleep now.
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>>63404715
>>63404735
>>63404751
>>63404775
>>63404799


>Betrayed
>Fantasy world [+300]
>The forgotten [+200]
points for writing, i shall take because fuck the "write for points" rule [+50]

>Regeneration [-125]
>Life hunt [-150]
>Absorption [-150]
>Temporal manipulation [-125]
>Telekinesis [-50]
>Extreme force [-100]
>Durability [-100]
>spacial distortion [-125]
>Psycokinesis [-125]
>Weapon mastery [-100] [blades]
>Imbued weapon [-50] [Curved blade
>Endurance [-50]

>Complications
Ultimate end [+300]
chosen one [+200]
Betrayal of the heart [+150]
Murder hobo's [+50]

My nemesis, my love, my betrayer........Oh you shall slay me, yes you shall, but before you do i will repay the world for all the sins it has committed against me. I don't want to continue like this, so i will force you to kill me, i will make you end my existance. No hell for me, only oblivion.
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>>63404799
Dante's Inferno is also meaningless, because I recall the people in his rendition of hell were incapable of actual thought or consideration of their circumstances so that they couldn't escape.
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>>63404868
doesn't mean that the image hasn't stuck. What if the big guy upstairs got ideas?
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new thread soon?
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I'd really rather the general just die
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>>63404992
tough.

>>63404238
>>63404238
>>63404238
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>>63405010
You're only prolonging our suffering.
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>>63405021
It is only through suffering that humans learn how to fix their problems. Otherwise they'd just fade away or sit on their asses forever.
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>>63392989
>Agent: The Great Stone Gods
They've got no ball in this war, and I can easily piggyback off of a cult into something else if I need too
>Perk: Wrath of Momoko
Nothing like being able to inspire fighting spirit with my mere presence
>Flaw: Just a Pawn
As long as I provide more power than I use, I am an asset. If I can make myself indispensable in any small way, than I am not in danger.
>Skill: Power of Uoke
Weakening enemies is always useful, especially with no limits. The turning them to dust is just a bonus
>>63392944
>Side: The Forces of Darkness
Seems like it's an easier place to start a blood cult.
>Reward: Conquest
With the masters I've chosen, I'm going to need a way out. Another world should be a fine start.
>Artifact: Worldender's Prophecy
Stacking fate in my favor would be very nice, thank you very much. Should help with the shady backroom politics
>Camp: The Maw
An endless source of followers and sacrifices? Just what this new cult leader is looking for!
>Nemesis: The Glorious Galleon
Pairs well with my entropy vision, and helps to keep magic off my ass
>Role: Sergeant
>Political Stance: Neutralist
I'm just here to commit blood sacrifices man
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>>63402657
>Take Three
Night Key
Flask
Candle

Mundane I know, but I like mundane utility like this, plus if I've got this guys notes on his life work it'll help to replicate if I can observe the spacial related stuff.



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