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ITT: the old tagging system, old internet, bulleting boards, still not learning your lesson about David Silver, >implying derpibooru's tag system would be an improvement, the princesses read actual books, buffalos are too problematic, Regidar in Equestria, reading stuff, Anon-A-Miss stories, cover art, DnD, Cold in Gardez, publishing stories, BlueJack, judging a fic by its cover, Ico the lewd horse, degeneracy remains constant, and people don't care enough to make a new thread.

>FiMFiction Starter Kit (recommended fics):
Winners:
http://i.imgur.com/vuTA7EN.png
List of nominees by category:
http://mlp-fanfics.herokuapp.com/

>How do I write fanfiction?
Ezn’s guide - https://eznguide.neocities.org/
Politics and the English Language - http://www.orwell.ru/library/essays/politics/english/e_polit/
Vhatug's tips for anatomically correct clop - https://pastebin.com/g4VpEg4f
Horse Behaviour - http://www.equestrianandhorse.com/equus/behaviour.html
Setting a story in motion - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ufO8LbwTdu0
Taking criticism - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-v4R2ZcxPlA

>Can you pre-read my story?
Post it on Google Docs with comments enabled and give us a link.

>Reviews and riffs:
https://pastebin.com/u/notkickass222urmom
https://pastebin.com/u/IHeartShinzakura
https://pastebin.com/wmGX7FPm
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1z9Bz7UnEbxo-svlXa2tV49PJkP-yFuR7pRXiBUn-IeU

>Voiceguy's readings:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCt68MpmvEketmqOdHncHI2w

Last thread: >>33631469
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Penis
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>Structure a story so every chapter should average about 4000 words
>Write a 6500 word chapter

I can't plan for shit.
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Winter Bells reading when
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>>33673118
What?
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>>33673111
Expand the chapter and split it in two.
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>>33672750
>DnD
I'm telling you guys it'd work. Build a 3.5e Core level 3 Transmuter and stick him in Season 1. The rest will write itself. If you get bored of it, just have him turn up to A Canterlot Wedding, cast Polymorph and shock, awe, and marry Chrysalis in to a happy ending.
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>A selection of most wonderful delights for the mind, from all around the community

>My Little Dashie
>Sunny Skies all day long
>Princess Celestia gets mugged
>Whome the Princess would destroy
>Evil is easy, governing is hard
>Best hell ever
>The Star in yellow
>That changeling's a pony
>Derplicity
>The incredibly dense mind of Rainbow Dash
>Dash tries to win your heart
>Raven
>The keepers of Discord
>Voyage's End
>First contact is magic
>The mare at the end of forever

Anyone heard of this, because the stories in it are "interesting" to say the least.
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>>33673843
I like about 40% of those stories.
I wish I could pick which I want printed.
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>shared horse smut to prof.
>extremely undeniable horse smut
>sends email back "this creative writing assignment is not what was assigned "
>mfw no longer inebriated
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>>33673843
>Princess Celestia gets mugged
How good is this actually meant to be? I'm sure that it's supposed to be great, but so far I'm just finding it funny but pretty much average.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/424432/little-memories

Well, there we go.
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>>33674124
Jesus Christ, how long is that series going to be?
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>>33673843
Haven't read most of that list but

>The Star in yellow
>Voyage's End
Shit.
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>>33673900
holy shit, why

there is not enough booze in the world to make me do something like that
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>>33673281
A reading of the Sequel to Past Sins called Winter Bells
There is no good full reading of it.
(There is a full reading, if you like teenage voices and crackly microphones)
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>>33674397
So how many of you would agree that Past Sins' popularity was 100% down to coming out really early in the fandom with original cover artwork depicting a a crazy situation with twilight and the noose? I've never heard anyone talk about the actual story.
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>>33674389
you clearly are too new to know when an anon sent pony porn to his professor and tried to cover it up by sending more
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>>33674407
I can discuss it a little, I forgot the clocks went forward and I should probably head to bed. What do you want to talk about the story?
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>>33674389
oh, it was an accident, booze wasn't what made me send it. just i realized it while shitfaced and it hadn't hit me
currently waiting for nausea to subside before drinking again
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>>33674430
>keeping your porn in the same folder as your school assignments
you deserve your fate
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>>33673900
I don't believe you. No one could be this retarded.

>>33674430
Maybe you shouldn't be drinking, Zaid?
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>>33674442
who
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>>33674448
>biology
>it wasn't even a writing course
how's it feel to never be able to meet your professor's eyes again?
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>>33674453
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>>33674475
Just how much do you think your teacher read?
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>>33674500
No clue, but the first few paragraphs are pretty evidentiary
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>>33674544
Okay now you have to post it here,
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>>33674448
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>>33674407
Don't forget regular updates (bumping it to the front page of EqD each time) and a memorable OC concept and design.
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>>33674453 >>33674475
Do you really think he makes enough to care? If anything it's probably a relief to have a student who's mastered basic spelling and grammar.
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>>33672750
are there more fics like this one?
https://pastebin.com/sRSFLxGM
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The Night That Never Ended (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/25219/the-night-that-never-ended)

Pros:
>nostalgic early fandom fanfic
>exciting climax

Cons:
>Twilight and Dash are insufferably condescending
>first half has that classic fanfic problem where there's no gravitas to events and things just happen in succession like a checklist
>ending is shit, with the supposed central premise not being completed and the implication that "canon" Equestria is fucked, since Twilight and Dash won't be returning.
4/10. Only read if you want to see one of the original "Twilight botches a spell" stories or have nostalgia for it.

>>33674407
It wasn't really the cover art, but the fact it was long, in an easy to read format, and consistently updated.

>>33674430
>keeping your horse smut in the same folder you keep your homework or naming it the same
What >>33674435 said.

>>33674448
>biology assignment
I hope you didn't start the oneshot with the characters having passionate sex, because there's at least a chance the guy took one look at it, realized it wasn't the homework, and closed it. You must cling to that chance to save yourself from the cringe that threatens to consume you.

Make sure when you write the greentext you include him making a horse anatomy joke in class at the end.
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>>33674022
I found it very underwhelming.
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>>33674407
>original cover artwork depicting a a crazy situation with twilight and the noose?
Never seen that.
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>>33674921
Not him, but you're probably right. My lecturers often have to deal with courses consisting of 50% Chinese people who've either only spent one year in our country or who've lived so insularly in the three/four years that they've been here that they might as well have never left China. I once even had a Chinese lecturer stop a class to tell half of his students to stop fucking speaking Chinese.
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>>33674922
Fuck
You
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>>33676021
If only I could be so grossly incandescent.
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>>33676037
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How closely should canon be followed? I know that it's impossible to follow canon completely (it's self-contradictory), but some AU fics veer so far off from canon that they're basically original fiction.
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>>33676189
Doing non-canon is fine, and following canon is good as long as you're not more inconsistent than the show.
As long as you don't half-ass it you're good. Artistic license and all.
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>>33674922
>"SHINING FUCKING ARMOR DID YOU TURN INTO A MARE SO YOU COULD HAVE STRAIGHT SEX WITH YOUR MALE FRIEND?!"
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>>33675715
Thanks, you just saved me from writing yet another "adventure fics can't have good ending" rant.
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It just hit me.
Tomorrow is April's Fools.
Ready for the avalanche of trollfics, joke updates, and mock cancellations?
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>>33677229
I've just realised it too.
I'll just pretend my dick fell behind the sofa.
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I've figured it out. Fan fiction isn't 90% crap, it's 10% good, 30% crap, and 60% complete mediocrity.
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>>33677229
Perfect time to make a "don't worry it's not canceled" post for easthorse, Skirts.
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>>33677229
What do you think hirojewki will do for April's Fools?
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>>33677325
Are you also going to fix your overly cynical attitude about the world?
No one likes that.
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>>33677325
The fanfic bellcurve
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>>33677326
I fucking swear
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Hmm, I'm reading that CMC fic by Gaydez and there's this scene where Apple Bloom gets trolled with a fake cartographer cutie mark. So uh yeah I got a fic idea.

OC pony (or could be an AU with X existing pony) gets a cartographer cutie mark and gets sent on a job by Celestia, Luna, you name it to make an epic map and it turns into an epic fic.

+1 or -1?
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>>33677656
>gets a cartographer cutie mark
I'm sure you could have Blueblood fill that role.
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>>33677656
Daring?
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>>33677657
Blueblood is a faggot pony so no.

>>33677658
Well I'm stupid. Any fics like that?
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>>33677668
Don't know. Probably not.
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>>33676189
I think the important thing is to make it clear that your departures from canon are deliberate, and that they play a role in the story rather than just to pander to popular fanon, promote your own fandoms/headcanons/fantasies, or whatever.
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>>33677656
That sounds less an idea for fic than just an idea for how to start the fic off.

(Also, I'm pretty sure I've seen at least one "Blueblood is sent on a journey and becomes a decent pony" fic make reference to his cutie mark in the description.)
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>>33677786
Would you happen to know any?
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I liked The Celestia Code, could a kind anon please recommend something similar?
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>>33678513
M Y D I A R Y D E S U
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>>33678572
I don't understand
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>>33678513
Is it even any good? It's one of those fics that I'm going to end up reading just because it gets mentioned a lot.

>>33678594
Probably The Star In Yellow.
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>>33678600
I enjoyed it but I'm easy to please. Twilight stays in character, the OC character is good, the plot is interesting, and it builds off the show's lore nicely. That being said it felt a bit rushed, especially near the end.

I'll read the star in yellow. I liked Greg's video of it but I can't remember if I read the original or not.
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From a reader's perspective, what is fan fic for? I used to think that it was a way for a reader to get more out of a franchise that they've ran out of good content for, but there's barely an fics that are like the show in any real way, so that clearly can't be the case. Later on I thought that it was a way to get different takes on a franchise that you've loved, but even that doesn't hold up because a lot of fics change so much that it barely counts. At best, it's just a 'what could've been' sort of deal.

Deep down, I think that I only read fics because I can't be bothered to find the time to get invested in something new. It kinda reminds me of >>33666688.
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>>33678632
"To get more out of a franchise" is correct, you're at fault for assuming that means "the pony show in written form" and nothing else.
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>>33678632
I have a touch of the 'tism and a really hard time getting attached to characters. When I read actual books it's usually hard scifi or something idea-heavy where the author is a turbo autist that can't into social interaction, like Greg Egan. I've yet to find a book that genuinely made me feel something for the characters.

Fanfiction is cathartic because I can actually empathize with the characters while reading, and I care what happens to them. Also, I've definitely read a couple fics that were genuinely better written than some of the actual published shit that gets recommended to me at times.
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>>33678669
>I've yet to find a book that genuinely made me feel something for the character
Not even a VN? I mean shit dude, didn't you read something like Harry Potter is a kid?
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>>33678674
I've never touched a VN because I'm not that into anime. Any you recommend?

I don't remember caring for the main three characters of Harry Potter that much. I liked Dumbledore a lot though.
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>>33677656
I am now reminded of Moonstuck and my day is ruined.
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>>33678513
Keep reading iisaw I guess? The quality does deteriorate unfortunately but they're all fun reads if you go in without expecting something particularly deep. Just enjoy the adventure and you'll enjoy the story.

>>33678632
When you only ever fap to ponies, have a pony imaginary wife, and your greatest wish is to go live among the ponies and/or become a pony, it's only natural that a story with ponies will be more enjoyable than a story without ponies.
Other fanfictions I personally don't care about because I am not nearly as invested in any other setting. Some book or stories or whatever are neat but not to the point where I'll read shitty fanmade spinoffs just to get more.
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>>33678719
Why?
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>>33678632
>Deep down, I think that I only read fics because I can't be bothered to find the time to get invested in something new.
Maybe you don't need something new. If I know people are going to write about this world I know and love, I can jump into any story and find something I like.
The day I stop having 50 million words of interesting things on my read later list I'll go look for entertainment elsewhere, but it probably won't be fanfics.

And sure, you're missing out on Everything Else. But everyone else is missing out on My Little Dashie, so that's a fair trade.
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>>33678632

I think fanfics are an outlet for a fictional setting to go in directions the author couldn't or wouldnt go in but still are worth venturing down. The more a setting has 'holes' the more fanfics are possible.

I theorize that some settings are far more easy to fanfic than others. Mlp, harry potter, naruto etc. Others much harder like lord of the rings or one piece because they're far more fully realized and theres hardly anything else to be 'said' in those respective stories that the authors haven't already written.
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>>33678600
>The Star In Yellow
It's bad.
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>>33678985
What's wrong with it?
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>>33679040
I can't really remember. I just that when I read it I disliked it. Greg's video makes it seem so much better than what it is, imo.
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A great April Fool's joke for the site would be if Skirts did a troll update of Austraeoh but the chapter is just another one of his Flash Sentry fetish stories.
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>>33679229
Or better, he just starts posting the rest of easthorse in one of those fetish fics, and nobody notices for weeks.
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I hate you, Hiro.
I hate you so much.
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>>33679494
He hates it!
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>>33679494
Paying attention to it only makes it more real. Just ignore it. It's broken on 4chanx anyway.
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>>33676189
Depends on the story and really more the timeline. If it's explicitly taking place sometime during the show, then you're bound to follow things much more closely. This is why pretty much everything but "poking fun at episode plot" comedies and "plots of the week" fics makes sure not to give readers an exact date to set the story in.

>>33676978
>adventure fics can't have good ending
On Wings of Steel had an excellent climax and ending. It's problem was the norse plot was way more boring than the griffon warfic one.

>>33677229
>joke updates, and mock cancellations?
Do people still do that? I thought the joke had been worn out by 2013.

>>33677325
I'd say 5% good, 5% okay, 10% "that's a fetish?", 40% mediocre/boring, and 40% crap.

>>33677656
Way too vague. Adventure fics always have to have some driving motive (finding a cure, getting reinforcements, destroying an evil, etc.) to keep the characters from just saying "fuck it" and going home. Making a map seems like a really poor motive to go on an adventure.

>>33678513
Lunar Cypher? Though I seem to remember being really disappointed by the big plot, as it was hastily resolved/dealt with.

>>33678600
It's even better now that the author rewrote the synopsis and stopped baiting people with the fake Tyrantlestia mystery plot.

>>33678632
>what is fan fic for?
Telling stories the source material can't (major characters dying in the plot, edge, complex stuff in simpler settings, etc.) or won't (shipping, some types of comedies, exploring worldbuilding implications, etc.).

If you look at MLP, there are very, very few fics out there that could actually be slotted into the show, either because they don't fit the demo or their plots are too unwieldy or even not long enough for 22 minutes. Media limitations like length, need for commercial breaks, budgetary constraints, actor scheduling, etc. all allow fanfics to tell stories the source material really never could.
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>>33679591
He hates it!!
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Its already begun- the april 1st its-still-fucking-hilarious-after-nine-years mass fic cancellation bullshit yet again.

But the jokes on them. I'm close enough to being off the ride thatI'm perfectly ok with just dropping anything and everything that gets lulz cancelled today.

What about you guys?
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>>33679494
Why is it that literally every single April, there's some guy who just absolutely despises the fool? It's a joke, treat it like one.
Now like this post for Jesus, or scroll past if you worship Satan.
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>>33679812
Which have been "cancelled"?
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>>33679827
Heil Satan!
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>>33679962
All I've caught so far is just some shitty HiE thats cancelled now,but just yesterday guy had a blogpost saying his shit was almost done and just needed some editing. I'm sure there will be more by morning. it happens every year
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How come this didnt get much traction?

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/435742/twilight-sparkle-and-spike-and-along-with-celestia-and-luna-try-to-conceive-the-known-universe
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>>33673843
>2019
>brony fandom still likes My Little Dashie
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>>33679748
>Lunar Cypher? Though I seem to remember being really disappointed by the big plot
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>>33679812
I try not to follow unfinished fics in the first place.
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>>33680436
Based.
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200 likes and I'll stream myself narrating all american girl
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>>33680960
OoOOoh please do it voice-sama
I'll lick your fetlocks
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>>33680960
What are the chances Voice will actually do it?

Your fortune: Average Luck
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>>33681026
Either I'm halucinating Swoglards or [s4s] started accepting ponies.
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>>33681014
>>33681026
Get the magic number and I'll do it no bullshit
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>>33681051
I bet you're a likelet.
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>>33681061
Oh, right. Today is a day.
Carry on.
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>>33681051
Haven't you heard? It's funposting day.

Your fortune: Outlook good
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>>33681076
It's fun, Anon.
You like fun, right?
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>>33680436
Bitch
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>>33680411
>Lunar Cypher?
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Lunar Cypher.
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Those Cypher moon-bastards...
We’ll get ‘em boss.
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>>33681171
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Have a cute dino, guys.
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>>33678684
Can't go wrong with Higurashi.
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>>33680960
Hu, I'm clickin' but it ain't likin'
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>>33681860
Only one like at a time
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>"We are led to Believe a Lie
When we see not Through the Eye
Which was Born in a Night to perish in a Night
When the Soul Slept in Beams of Light
God Appears & God is Light
To those poor Souls who dwell in Night
But does a Human Form Display
To those who Dwell in Realms of day"

Why do you anons hate BGP so much? How is this shit?
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>>33682115
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>>33682115
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Why is it important to me that I decide which of two very similar fics is the best?
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>>33679827
Hail Satan
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>>33682520
>Anton LaVey founds the Church of Satan, 1966 (Colourised)
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>>33673900
Don't worry, I knew someone in middle school who did that sober
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>>33673843
Nice title.
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>>33682715
>middle school
At least he had the excuse of being retarded
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You've been visited by a spooky scary skellington
Your favourite story will stop updating.
There's nothing you can do about it.
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>>33682884
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>>33680960
NO GUYS WAIT A MINUTE
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/435783/the-end-of-pants
Based and foolpilled.
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>>33682913
Well, it's been more than a minute.
What is it?
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>>33683064
NO GUYS FOR REAL THIS AIN'T COOL
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>>33683077
time to buckle up for shink's wild ride
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>>33683121
THIS IS GOING TO FAR IT WAS A JOKE, MAN
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>>33683147
ur a joke
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>>33683232
I know
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Son of a bitch
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>>33683344
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>>33683344
Look forward to it, V.
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>>33679494
Phoneposting master race.
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>>33682115
...You do know that's not from BGP, right?
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twitch tv/voiceguy1

fuck everything
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>>33683559
It's so much worse than expected.
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>>33684007
It only grows from here.
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>>33683344
never wager something you aren't prepared to lose
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>>33683497
Bruh
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Best pony:
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After listening to the first half of the first chapter of AAG, I can honestly say that I have no idea what would compel anyone to actually read the fic. It's so relentlessly bad.
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>>33684832
You've answered your own question.
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>>33682955
Holy shit. That's some Eye of Argon tier purple prose.
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if you can't handle AAG, I'm sure we'd all love a reading of Fear From the Rails. make sure to really nail all those exclamation points!
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>>33684832
America must burn.
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>>33684941
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>>33684935
Nah, that'd just be a trainwreck!
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>>33684935
>love a reading of Fear From the Rails
I've got an arsenal of other train stories, if you're interested
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>>33685016
Tasty pun.
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New idea: You know how Luna was banished IN the moon? Here's how it makes sense THE MOON IS HOLLOW.
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>>33685080
Hollow Moon adventure fic when?
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>>33685080
>not knowing that the moon is a hologram
Bet you believe Equestria is on a globe too.
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>>33685086
>starts as straight sci-fi adventure about moon exploration
>becomes old-school subterranean fiction, just with a hollow moon
I'd read it.
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>>33685080
The moon is hollow and it's a changeling spacecraft.
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>>33684283
Woosh
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>>33684927
Speaking of which.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Tc-Gc7NzxHA
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>when your next big adventure fic is a massive failure but you also want to disappoint your fans
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>Sunset sighed. “Flash, sweetie, just come out of that closet and talk to us.”
>“I'm not in a closet.”

Meanwhile skirts wears his best freudian slip
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>>33685433
So I pulled out my gun...
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>>33685170
>Woosh
Woosh
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>>33685433
That sounds like more of a thrust than a slip.
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>>33685446
>>Woosh
>Woosh
Woosh
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Anyone have a fimfiction account?
I don't but I found this story that none of the vore groups have included in their story lists.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/423174/the-night-of-rage
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>>33680141
>>33680141
>>33680141
>>33680141
>>33680141
>>33680141
reply please
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I haven't posted anything since 2014. How's the state of the site? Has it settled in now that the fandom is settling or is it still so bloated that's it's hard to get noticed?
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>>33686120
>How's the state of the site?
Worse in every imaginable way.
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>>33686144
I hesitate to ask, but what makes it worse?
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Look guys I get it, but you have to understand. I need the idea of something more to continue my entrancement. You all know that the best thing to do is to educate and improve someones prowess. Now we just need someone to adhere to those magnificent powers of mental affliction. Now please, come to this post and move that scroller to the side of the post and press the button that needs to be done. For it can not be differentiated or ignored that the point is that I need help in understanding why this is happening to me in the first place. So come over here and understand with me so that we can come together right now and forward our agenda into focusing our power of the next generation into our own hands. Isn't that something that we should all adhere too? Shouldn't there be a good reason to let someone at least be responded by? Come now, you know much better than I do that the post that will be linked needs to be felt a better. You know it must be finished you know it must be consumed. You can not disgrace or fathom the way that things must be and you must know better for it.
>>33686033 so do as this has done for thee, because it needs to be done at all times.
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>>33686218
is this pasta or a based strokeposter
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>>33686228
Hark! Someone has replied, it all makes sense now, now it all must be paid in full. The brain can only handle so much information at a time perhaps, but there is still something that must be done to allow something as furtive and inviting as this post that would require something about my name. You should know that the world is at best when replicated into replies for the master who needs it the most. Come now my friend, we need to come and reply to this post so that no one could defy the idea that people need to coalesce and turn on their minds so that things would be better for everyone my man. Now come over here, review the post that was behind, and click on the post link that would garner a good way of not being such a dickolatus man. Come here and press the button so that we shall come together and not be unfettered to the unusual weirdness of actuality.
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>tfw haven't watched the show since S4
>have an idea for a fanfic
>don't want to spend time getting caught up with the show in order to make sure the fic would mesh with canon

Anyone else know this feel?
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>>33686304
Yes. Canon is a clusterfuck so just say "hey guys, timeline starts at X"
Throw up the AU tag if it's obviously way off.
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>>33680141
Because the title makes it sound like a crackfic
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>>33686157
basically nothing but that anon is more sad and bitter than he was 5 years ago
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>>33686335
BUT MUH BANNERS
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>>33686332
I'm in basically the same boat as >>33686304 , but I know I'd definitely want to watch at least a decent amount of new episodes before I wrote everything new. Sure, the show's become a bit of a clusterfuck by all accounts, but even in coal you can find a few diamonds.
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Doing things differently. Here's the stream of the narration itself instead.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_70bUGfYcYw
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>>33686333
Ouch, that hurt, but not sure why it didnt get traction when its April fools day.
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>>33686333
It's not a crackfic? I just read the link and discounted it.
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Rolled 82 (1d100)

Just for the sake of doing something useful with these perks, I'm going to roll a d100 three times and use that as a story link on Fimfiction.
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Rolled 89 (1d100)

>>33686919
Again.
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Rolled 10 (1d100)

>>33686937
And once more.
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>>33686979
Alright. There is no 828910 story, so I'll move it to make 289108. which doesn't exist.
Going backwards doesn't help either, as 108982 doesn't exist either.
Moving the one leaves me with 89821, which is: https://www.fimfiction.net/story/89821/
Applejack's Garden.
An AJ/OC anthro clopfic.
This was a horrible idea.
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>>33687055
Only 7000 words, though, so at least it'll be over soon. Unfortunately it's written in first person, which always makes bad fics feel twice as bad as they already are.
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>>33687148
The comments seem positive enough. Even bookplayer said it was "the best Applejack/OC romance" she'd read until that time.
I don't think there's a lot of competition.
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>>33687055
What the fuck is this cover art from the sequel
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>>33687241
Is that a tree anthro pony?
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>>33687247
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>>33687241
every day we move further from god's light
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I'm just going to check these last few while I can.
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shit
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/121836/the-bridge-a-godzilla-mlp-crossover
Concept is.....interesting....
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>>33687241
Anthro lol
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Fuck I stayed up all night reading fics and now I have work

Could someone feed my addiction and recommend some stuff that gets into cosmic shit like at the end of The Twilight Enigma, but preferably at a less breakneck pace?
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>>33688940
I have one that literally fits your criteria in every way.
TMA
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>>33688940
Apotheosis + sequel
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>>33688968
That's more in the author's notes than anything else, but you're right about the pace being far from breakneck.
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>>33688968
It's weird how I don't seem to care about that fic any more. It's almost like some stoic "the sage is immune to misfortune shit". Now that I understand the fic and see it as a solved problem, I just don't think about it any more. Maybe I just moved on to other things? I don't know.

Speaking of, what happened to anon's AI?
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>>33689482
>what happened to anon's AI?
I'm guessing it became too intelligent, realised its purpose in life, and killed the Anon before killing itself.
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Anyone heard of Sanguine Kindness, it barely updates but I keep seeing new fanart.
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Winter Bells reading when
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Now Message in a Bottle is getting a print release too.
I have seen it recommended here, is it worth 40$ though?
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>>33691396
>is something that I can get legally and for free worth $40
No.
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>>33691396
Yes
But why would you spend actual money on a printing of a fanfic you've never even read?
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>>33691470
I bet you go to the store and the food and then pay for it at checkout.
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>>33691470
Because it's on my reading list but i haven't had time yet and the ordering phase is only running a few more days.
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>>33688968
Alright I can't find whatever you're talking about, unless it's a 7k word Paper Mario crossover and I've horribly misunderstood your post.
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>>33691555
don't ask
just don't
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>>33674124
>4 chapters, 20k words so far
>half of it is just recaps of shit we already know for Twilight's benefit
>not even the slightest hint of Twilight starting to get her memories back
It's been 20,000 words and literally nothing of substance has happened. Who thought this was a good idea?
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>>33691656
Somebody who actually thinks the first chapter of AAG is quality?
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>>33691766
You joke, but there is someone out there who was blown away by that first chapter and wishes there were more stories like that.
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>>33691555
The Moon's Apprentice, by Forthwith or whatever the author's name is.
Word of warning, while it technically fits your criteria, it's not to everyone's taste. Make sure your autism matches up to the fic before you invest too much time into it.
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>>33692621
On the flip side, if you're even more autistic than the fic, expect to read it twice.
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Write a non-trollfic incest story and get a guaranteed $25.
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/397965/april-contest-update
More if you actually win.
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>>33693936
The fact that this is tempting betrays the depths of my degeneracy.
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>>33693963
It's $25 per submission, brah.
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>>33694398
It's just 3000 words too. I could spit that out in no time. It's $70 if I write two, and one of them is about Celestia and Luna.

Still, I feel it's necessary the point out the deep autism of someone willing to spend $3000 on wank material.
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>>33694456
It's probably cheaper than actually commisioning all those stories.
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>>33694500
Do you have any idea how much clown porn I could buy for that amount of money?
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>>33694548
2?
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>>33694574
Maybe even three.
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>>33693936
That's actually pretty tempting. Shame it has to be sibling, though.
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>>33693936
Guess the guy bankrolling this isn't of the "Luna is a 1000 year old virgin" mindset.
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>>33694786
>https://www.fimfiction.net/group/198529/incest-is-wincest/thread/397965/april-contest-update
Yeah.
I would've written half a dozen MILF stories otherwise.
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>>33694796
Oh shit should I write a story about Celestia popping Luna's 1000 year old cherry?
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>>33694830
Let big sis show Luna all of what she's missed out on a thousand years.
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>>33694786
>Shame it has to be sibling
True.

>>33694796
PURE! LUNA IS PURE!
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>>33694830
That guy'll pay you $45 up front to do so, so go for it.
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>>33694830
Princest is always nice, but getting payed makes it a no-brainer.
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>>33693936 >>33694398 >>33694456 >>33694840
>Your story must have more than 60% up-votes - this is to encourage people to write the best story they can. If you're within a few percentage points of this, we'll still compensate you. The goal isn't to avoid compensating people, but rather to incentivize (and reward!) the creation of good quality clopfics. For those that think this isn't fair, 60% is a D in school.

>>33694838
pure shit
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>tfw started writing
It's official, my first story on FimFiction will be a incest fetish story. I find the concept of being paid for this too amusing.

>>33695700
60% upvotes can't be that hard. I'm not Bleeding, so I should probably manage.
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>>33695711
It's a 3:2 like to dislike ratio. The only way to get anything below that is by writing a trollfic or putting extreme fetishes.
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>>33695700
>not having a ration of 95% or better on every story you've published since 2012
Getting tons of votes is hard, but getting a good ratio just requires an uncontroversial story and a reasonable grasp of english.

Hell, the first isn't even a requirement, look at the train fics.
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>>33695742
Really depends on the kind of extreme fetishes, or what you define as one.
Getting less than 60% on an incest fic is pretty much impossible unless you really try.
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>>33695973
I meant stuff like cuckoldry, watersports, scat, necrophilia, and its ilk.
Basically, if your story could fit somewhere in the description of Celestia's Relaxing Vacation, you're in the danger zone.
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>read On Wings of Steel sequel
>without the warfic stuff, it's just a meh pirate adventure
>the entire seapony plot felt like filler
>the camels, a completely unique and original worldbuilding species, are given no screentime other than being the generic bad guy at the end
>starts to get good at the climax
I swear to god if the volcano erupts.

>>33680141
>crossover tag without the synopsis elaborating on what it's crossing over with
>title makes implication of being a crackfic
>bad cover art, a big red flag
>bad synopsis that doesn't make the reader want to continue
>title has uncapitalized words in it, another big red flag

>>33680411
>implying Luna's tiny butt doesn't excite you so

>>33693936
>tfw you're so desperate for princest you're willing to shell out three grand for it
Reminds me of the raridashfag who spent a grand on animated gifs.
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>>33696126
It's autistic as fuck, but it works, because I'm writing Princest right now.

Also, I'm going to need some links to those thousand dollar gifs.
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>>33696126
it doesn't erupt
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speaking of, when did these get deleted?
https://fimfetch.net/?q=&r=127&a=Blind+Writer
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>>33695973
Trains.
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>>33693936
Terrible idea, people with high follower account will get the most attention and the most likes. So those people will get the money anyways because of their easy exposure and long time writing fanfics. But, if you're a new guy who just started, good luck getting anywhere while you waste your time writing a story for nothing because it didn't get enough likes.
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>>33693936
not to mention people with low follower account.
>>33697093
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>>33697093
There's not enough likes only if there are too many dislikes, and if you can't get a 3:2 ratio on fimfic you're just shit. Top 3 are awarded by judges, it's not a popularity contest. You talk like a fag and your shit's all retarded.
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>>33697126
>shit's all retarded

That makes no sense, poop doesn't have intelligence.
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>>33693936
>my entry into the writing scene and return after a multi year hiatus to the fandom will be marked by writing incest fanfiction for money

And I wouldn't have it any other way
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>>33693936
>someone spends 3000$ to get more wincest porn
the hero people with an incest fetish need
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>>33697132
And yet here you are, writing.
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Hey, I have a question.
If "to pin" means to fix blame or responsibility for something on someone, then isn't "pinning the blame" redundant?
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>>33698067
Sorta. I think 'pinning the blame' was how that definition was derived. 'Don't pin this on me!' sounds more fluid than 'Don't pin the blame on me!', but both are perfectly correct.
I'm sure this is a case of one way being slightly more archaic than the other.
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>>33698067
No, just "pin" implies "pin the blame". It's just a natural contraction/shortcut that arose over time. I would even say that "pin" as a word or concept in general pretty much never means "pin the blame", except in very specific contexts where you'd use "pin the blame" and just omit "the blame".

Kind of like when people say "happy birthday", they aren't stating that your birthday is happy: what it really means is "I wish you a happy birthday". But the "I wish" bit is implied and omitted by convention. The word "happy" by itself doesn't really mean "I wish you a happy", but in specific contexts it's implied to stand in for that.
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New Sparlight chapter!
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/343054/accismus
This is probably the second most important chapter of the story, second only to when Spike and Starlight finally do the deed.
For those who are reading it, I hope you'll like it!
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LADS
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>>33699492
Bring out the booze!
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>>33699492
I want off Shink's wild ride.
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>>33699512
You can't get off. You must suffer with all of us.
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>>33699492

Is the iheartshinzakura archive up to date regarding your summaries to the current chapter?

I feel they might be necessary to understand how far off the rails Chink takes an already off the rails story.
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>>33697161
>mfw same position
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/365662/decay
Just updated my story.
Twilight suffering from bad shit.
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>>33701376
>It was vexxing.
I'm vexxed that there's literally a typo in the first three words.
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>>33701378
I never noticed that. Fixed it JUST for you, Anon.
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>>33701376
Added to my tracking shelf.
Seems interesting.
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>>33701376
Is it good?
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>>33701385
Appreciated
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>>33701378
Better than a typo in the summary that never gets fixed.
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Help me I'm enjoying bad fics again.
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>>33702264
As long as you're having fun, there is no problem.
Just accept you have shit taste.
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I go through a cycle.

First, I read bad fics and get actual enjoyment out of them.
Then, they start blending together and at best I get mild entertainment.
By that time with some luck my hunt for something good I haven't seen before pays off. Maybe somebody finally gives a good recommendation, maybe I peer into my RIL and find some story that I never got around to, try it, and it turns out to be fucking great.
Then things are fantastic, and I'm truly enjoying myself for the first time in weeks if not months. If I'm lucky, it's decently long, and/or has sequels of similar quality.
Then it's over and suddenly all the trash I was reading seems completely unreadable.
So then I'm stuck with nothing good to read again. Usually I'll read nothing for a while because it's all so tiresome.
Then I'll get bored enough that I'll find some trash fics, maybe some greentexts or whatever, without any real expectations of quality but just hoping they'll provide light entertainment.
Then eventually the experience of reading that one quality fic wears off and the shitfics set back in as normality, and I start kind of enjoying them again. And the cycle repeats.

I'm currently in the "reading nothing" phase. Help me out anons, recommend me some shit.
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>>33702415
Seeking Power.
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>>33702424
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>>33702415
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/119846/the-trade-off
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>>33702474
Fuck off
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I'm bored, should I reread Hard Reset and the sequels?
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>>33703128
Yes. and no.
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>>33700838
>Is the iheartshinzakura archive up to date
Never ever

>I feel they might be necessary to understand how far off the rails Chink takes an already off the rails story.
Nah. By the sound of it, this new thing is ancient Equestrian history, starring best princesses and The Megan. It'll likely have barely any direct connection to the main story.
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>>33703148
What was actually wrong with them anyways? It's been so long since I've read them that I forgot what issues they had.
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>>33703205
Shit gets progressively more retarded as the series goes on

>the "bad end" alt ending of the first fic gets retconned as a canon alternate timeline
>twiggy goes to the past to pick up starswirl and Luna's edgy teenage daughter she was actually pretty cool as I recall
>elements of harmony are suddenly evil and want to kill everybody
>winningverse crossover
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>>33703388
>Luna's edgy teenage daughter
Wasn't it her son?
It's been a while, though. I may be misremembering.
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>>33703388
>winningverse crossover
Do I even want to know what this is?
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>>33703474
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/112831/3/you-can-fight-fate/a-great-big-screwed-up-family
>None of that can distract me from the young, dark blue unicorn mare standing frozen in the middle of the room, staring guiltily towards us with a hip flask in her mouth. For a long moment none of us say anything while the light of the fire dances in the mare’s mane; pitch black, but riddled with speckles of grey throughout.
>“Father?” she finally asks.

>>33703488
>hasn't heard of the winningverse
Just appreciate your good fortune, newfriend
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>>33548463 >>33550601 >>33702047
If tiny grammatical inaccuracies in the descriptions of silly stories that are intended to be random, sets you off to the point that you leave the page in a rage-induced tissy, that you had best leave this platform entirely.
Either that or just get over yourself and dont spend hours pouring over the most minute of gramatical errors.
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>>33703529
>dont spend hours pouring over the most minute of gramatical errors
I don't. But I also don't bother reading stories whose authors can't manage basic English spelling and grammar.
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>>33703675
That seems more like a you having issues with the content problem, then a true failing on the author's part.
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>>33703716
What kind of idiotic post is this? Written like someone who can't grasp the difference between poring and pouring.

If a story has rampant spelling and grammatical errors, it is a failure on the author's part in the most literal sense.
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>>33703716
>then
than :~)
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>>33703170
well, where are the summaries for the latest chapters, then? Are you holding out on us?
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You have very few paragraphs. Make sure your paragraphs are separated by 2 line breaks or are inden
Seriously?
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Promised Neverland crossover when?
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>>33703918
I've always done both. Is that not how we're supposed to write?
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>>33704742
It is. He hit an idiot filter that shouldn't have to exist, but does because of people like him.
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>>33704751
I do a single linebreak for paragraphs like in a novel, I just found it confusing the literal most common writing convention gets called idiotic.
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>>33704768
*And without indents.
But if fimfic spaztics need indents to read I'll do that to remove the red text.
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>>33704768
Novels can reasonably be expected to indent or double space paragraph breaks. It's atypical to do neither, and makes the text artifically harder to read.
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>>33704742
Default LaTeX style says no, you only do indents
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>>33704771
Published dead-tree text generally uses indents only. Line breaks between paragraphs are superfluous, and make for confusion when you use a line break to indicate a scene change. But when it comes to screen text, there are a bunch of people who sperg out if it doesn't have line breaks between paragraphs. If you have the line breaks, you don't really need to indent. But you should do at least one of those or the text just runs together.

Happily, Fimfic allows you to set text to display whichever way you prefer to see it, regardless of how the author did it.
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>>33704774
Indents only is trash outside of actual books.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/385840/atomic-number

This is a fic with just what I was looking for: a pony in nature and nothing more. I do like flowery prose but it felt a little stiff at times in this fic, I recommend nonetheless. One thing I don't get is its title, weird.
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>>33706933
Maybe because she's alone? One is the number you can't split in two.
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Okay now where's my "Sombra won" clopfics
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>>33708013
Do you want the gay clopfics, or the straight ones?
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>>33708049
yes
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Seeing as the premiere was basically a fanfic but with less care and attention put into it, can we discuss it here?
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>>33704629
Which of the M6 would have the tastiest brain?
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>>33708162
do you really want to summon the shills
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>>33708162
We literally cannot stop you from discussing it here, if you really wanted.
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>>33708162
>watching the show
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>>33708170
Rainbow Dash.
Since she has barely used it, it'll have the freshest taste.
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>>33708162
Fuck me, I missed the premiere by 30 minutes and didn't want to jump in late.
Guess I'll close this thread and wait for the YayPonies upload.
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>>33708768
It's already up on mega
>>33708666
>>33708742
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>>33708778
Thanks, you're a friend anon.
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Question: Why would you still watch the show? All the trailers and synopses already betrayed it to be shit. Unless there's some interesting and applicable worldbuilding to be had, I don't care about #alicornworldproblems.
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>>33708892
I didn't watch the trailers, but S8 had some bad episodes and some great episodes.
It's still the same candy colored equines that made my life a little brighter.
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>>33708892
Curiosity.
I've long since accepted that it's a different show from the one I love but that doesn't mean I don't care where it goes.
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I don't even know what's being premiered, and I don't care enough to check.
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>>33709356
>Being this much of a Secondary
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>>33709367
I just fell a few seasons behind.
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>>33709383
Well, nothing big happened the last few seasons.
This one's the last one. Wings-tier changes incoming, apparently.
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>>33709392
>Wings-tier changes incoming
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>>33709401
I'm pretty sure I remember Faust saying this was planned all along, but who knows.
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>>33709392
>>33709401
hope you boys are ready for the entire cast to become alicorns in a last ditch effort to sell the dregs of the current toyline style.
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>>33709480
If that means Rainbowcorn I'm fine with it.
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If anyone's interested.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/384065/falling-for-ponies-secret-agent-man
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>>33710212
>Inspired by the Slave Ponies threads
no thanks
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Any friend of Greymane is a friend of mine.
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>>33709392
>>33709401
>>33709480
>>33709521
>WE get S1 ending
I'm fine with this.
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>>33710325
>G1*
Fuck.
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>>33710325
Might be because of fanon influence but I can imagine at least some of the mane 5 as way better princesses than Twilight.
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>>33710463
>fanon influence
Certainly. You'd have an argument with season 4 Twilight but certainly not anything after season 6.
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>>33709521
>Princess of Fast
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>>33713155
>her crown is made of GOES FAST
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>>33709521
>>33713155
If that means more Dash ascension stories I'm all for it.
The only longer, finished one I know is Not Another Alicorn! and that wasn't very good.
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>>33713319
TMA
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>>33713400
Except she only ascends to give twilight a reason to freak out for 20,000 words, and the author completely forgets about her afterward
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>write up for the contest because dosh is dosh
>gets approved
>immediate 1/1 ratio
Well that proves that, then. Guess my lewd is garbage. Dunno how these other guys do it.
Should I even bother putting it to the contest? below %60 is no dosh.
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>>33713540
Is the thing still open? I might hash out something, since smut is my forté in all respects.
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>>33713542
>https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/852094/april-2019-sibling-incest-contest-guaranteed-25-per-submission-300-grand-prize-3000-worth-of-rewards-prizes
>https://www.fimfiction.net/group/198529/folder/67110/april-2019-contest
as posted in >>33693936

Bonus for one princest and two good entries get the initial bounty, Prize for top three stories.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/176050/sedimentary-my-dear-pinkie

Very cute story about Maud and Pinkie. Unlike the other story, this one has less flowery prose while the author seems to be better with, so it's better.
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I was contemplating the horror of logging in to my old fimfic account that 13 year old me posted cringy comments on, and the possibility of making a new one, and realised that the guy didn't add any age requirements for accounts entering the challenge.
So if anyone could be bothered enough, they could create as many alts as they wanted, and submit two stories on each. Better: since the princest bonus is only obtainable once, writing one 3,000 word story can bring in $45 while writing a second brings in a max of $25 no matter what you do, ignoring the bonus for a 95% upvote ratio since that requires way more effort than a 60% ratio. This means that the most efficient way would be to churn out a single 3,000 word fic per account to earn $45 for each. You'd also obviously need a corresponding amount of paypal accounts or other ways to receive money, and you'd need a modicum of care and effort to not be blatantly obvious.

Then there's the possibility of sockpuppeting up to the 95% ratio using all your accumulated alts, but since that almost certainly explicitly goes against fimfic rules and fimfic admins have a lot more tools at their disposal to expose you, that's probably not worth it.
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>>33713665
>Then there's the possibility of sockpuppeting up to the 95% ratio using all your accumulated alts, but since that almost certainly explicitly goes against fimfic rules and fimfic admins have a lot more tools at their disposal to expose you, that's probably not worth it.
Also, that's highly immoral. Go rob a hobo or something, you lightweight psycho.
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>>33713665
Sure you can do that, and then watch the guy change the payout rules once he realizes what's going on.
Age requirements would be one fix but the better way would have been to rank all participants by jury and/or popular vote and then pay out prices based on the final rank or bracket they're in, even if that means less (low effort) entries.
I mean if you're willing to shell out thousands of dollars for hot fetish fanfics you could at least put in some thought in your rule set beforehand.
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>>33713555
I know it isn't *strictly* sibling incest, but God-almighty, I've just had the greatest idea for a Caddy-Twilight smutfic. It gives me the gigglesnorts just thinking about it.
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>>33713944
dew it, we need more twiclop that isn't shining armor.
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>>33713502
It's more like 50,000. The early ascension means that Twilight has to keep panicking even when she finds Dash. Hell, she's still panicking even when she goes to sleep.

>and the author completely forgets about her afterward
There's a few cool scenes where they play together, but pretty much every crew member but Twinkleshine becomes irrelevant once the date night happens. It kinda makes sense when you think about it. Really, until Luna comes back, what are any of the other crew members relevant for?

Grumble grumble there's enough material for a sequel.
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>>33714126
>>33713502
>every crew member but Twinkleshine becomes irrelevant once the date night happens
Wait, I might have the continuity fucked up. I'm talking about everything that follows from the moment where Twilight decides against using dragon fire to send the letter, but I can't recall why she flew down to Las Pegasus before attempting to send it.
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>>33713540
Why not put it in? If nothing else, you might get more readers (and therefore possible upvoters.)
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>>33713753
So milking $45 per fic for unlimited fics as opposed to $25 per fic for a maximum of two is all fine and dandy and completely ethical, but then sockpupetting your votes to get another $25 is where it becomes highly immoral?
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>>33714374
Both are immoral, and one goes the extra mile to break several rules at the same time.
Here's a handy rule of thumb: Did the generous person actually paying you fuckers want or expect this to happen? No?
Then don't take a fool's money, it's unethical.
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>>33714387
>not letting a guy pay you to hire a wishmaster and become horses together
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>>33714395
Can't argue with that.
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>>33714387
I haven't even written a single word of incest yet, calm down
Also the guy said $3000 isn't a huge amount of money for him, and he's entirely willing to go over budget, so I'm confident that hypothetically scalping him of a couple hundred dollars would be less morally wrong than robbing a hobo.
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>>33714481
>I'm confident that hypothetically scalping him of a couple hundred dollars would be less morally wrong than robbing a hobo.
Maybe, but I'll argue robbing him and vote manipulation at the same time is worse than robbing a hobo.

After all there's not much you can take from someone on the street, they live day-to-day without anything of value to take away.
But when you sockpuppet it affects many more people, not only are you stealing cash, but everyone who deserved better ratings than your fake ones will feel like shit, potentially discouraging them from writing, giving up on their dreams, and becoming hobos themselves only to have their shit stolen by some faggot like you.

lol jk
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Let's play spot the sockpuppet and downvote his shit below 60%
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>>33714527
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ClXAaGoT5eE
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>>33714387
>Then don't take a fool's money, it's unethical.
Not in Romania. A fool's going to have his money stolen anyway, so why not take it yourself? After all, it's better that it goes to you, a certainly good man, than it is going to someone who may use it for evil.
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>>33715239
>dirty thief
>certainly good man
HMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
REALLY MAKES ME PONDER
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>>33715239
>you, a certainly good man
Thanks. I really enjoy the several degrees of irony.

Do you also adjust your standards to what everyone else around you is doing? If society was better, would you be a better person? If stealing was normal and accepted, would you steal?
Don't you ever think for yourself, instead of following the hivemind?
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>>33715261
>>33715265
>he watches a show about ponies telling him about the magic of friendship
>he isn't a good man
Nigga what are you doing? You need to read more horsewords.
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>>33715239
I didn't know this thread had gypsies.
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>>33715280
>Watching the show is enough to make you good
Thoughts and prayers.
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>>33715285
It's a show about cartoon horses.
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>>33715239
>Romania
Aren't you busy posting about Vogel?
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>>33715239
Vee, go to sleep.
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Well, it looks like my attempt at writing smut has mostly resulted in writing lore.
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here lies BV Anon, he was unable to finish the fight.
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>>33716038
Chill out, my dude. Fuck-all has happened in the last 2 GAOA chapters, so I haven't written them up yet. And the new side story doesn't go up until tomorrow.
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>>33715827
Is it lore about smut?
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>>33716131
Yes.
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>>33716146
Astounding.
Do share.
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Are The Enchanted Library's sequels any good?
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>>33716208
While myths are important to all cultures, Equestrian culture is unique in the regard that their millennia-long stewardship over nature has altered the need for mythical explanations of certain features of the natural world. In other cultures, where one lived at the mercy of uncontrollable weather and the steady march of seasons, matters such as rainfall or the bountiful harvest has been the domain of divine spirits and gods. In Equestria, there was no need to create some mythological figure who raises the sun, because everyone knew that this was undeniably the work of their Princess, or at some point Unicorns. That isn't to say Equestria has any less myths, or is any less spiritual, they've just developed in different ways.

This deep cultural divide between Equestria and many of the distant cultures it is now in contact with has historically created a great deal of confusion for both parties, and although relations are more normalised in recent times, many a pony can still find themselves clueless when presented with some Yak idiom that references alien cultural concepts. For even though they've had to adapt to the spread of new information, traces of old and strange folk beliefs are still present in language and cultural practices.

Even experienced diplomats like Princess Celestia can occasionally find herself bewildered by these differences, like when a discussion about the weather leads to the revelation that the Zebra deities often form incestuous couples, as all their gods are fundamentally the same family descended from the same two spirits. Think Cronus and Rhea, Zeus and Hera. For while the Zebra consider incest to be taboo, they also recognise that the gods are over such moral concerns. In fact, why would an immortal being choose to spend their life with a partner that is not their equal? Such timeless love can only lead to tragedy if it is not directed towards their own kind, towards their own family.

Guess what kind of fic this lore is for.
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>>33716498
I'm going to say Princest. Not a hundred percent sure about it, but I think there's something about what you wrote that may hint towards that.
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>>33716610
Congratulations, Anon!
It's correct, but unfortunately this contest has no prizes.
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Is it really unethical to do the alt account thing? The guy gets his smut either way, and you have to put a modicum of effort into making something interesting. It's not like you're just going to write 1 fic and then find and replace "Twilight" and "Shining Armor" with "Celestia" and "Luna", he'd notice that.
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>>33716649
>implying anyone here is actually going to finish a single story, much less run some empire of alt-accounts
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>>33716653
No, this is the neural-faggot's endgame. Make a neural network that generates nothing but princest, then deploy it on an infinity of accounts.
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>>33716649
>Is it really unethical to be unethical?
And I wonder why modern society is rotted from the very core.
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>>33716643
Knowledge is its own reward!
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>>33716659
>Make a neural network that generates nothing but princest
I'd be strangely okay with that.
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>>33716662
I wish it were so.
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>>33716389
Pls reply
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>>33716389
>>33716804
Read them and then come back and tell us.
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are there any good war fics?
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>>33716992
Luna's diary, desu
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I wasted my life writing mlp fanfics and now am in a state of nothingness. I ask myself why the fandom died, why the show became what it is.

And why did everything have to go to shit?

The only answer that I get is nothingness.
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>>33717240
sure thing bleedin
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>>33717257
why do you keep using that same reply? Are you some kind of troll?
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>>33717260
whatever you say, bleedin
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terrible thread
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>>33717272
always right, bleedin
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>>33717278
I hope your mother dies in her sleep.
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>>33717284
been there done that, bleedin
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>>33717286
fuck you
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>>33717290
if'n you wanna, bleedin
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>>33717295
Fuck You
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436335/the-fuck-is-up-with-spike
This was pretty good.
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>>33715337
Kek, I'm just here for D&D.
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>>33716610
I read that in Rarity's voice. She's got a nice way of saying "Princest".
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>>33717472
Bupkis!
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So, a couple of threads ago I asked for some advice about writing Luna as far as dialogue and whatnot. I ended up staying away from the more archaic stuff and just focused on vocab and tone. I think I did okay.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/434034/3/first-impressions-are-everything/opportunity-knocks
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>>33717898
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/434034/first-impressions-are-everything
fixed that link for you, bro.
First impressions really are everything.
It's on my tracking shelf, I'll give it a look later.
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>>33718302
Yeah, I probably should have just linked the main story page. The third chapter is the main focus of my post though; the first two are first person from Celestia's view, the third is Luna.
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https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436343/kinsleys-cravings
Why aren't you making run of the mill clop with a no-named protagonist and then auctioning the right to name it so some poor sap with too much money will pay you to do a Find and Replace with their OC's name?
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>>33716825
Fuck you.
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>>33719701
u2
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>>33719363
I'm slightly disappointed that this has nothing to do with Alfred *Kinsey*.

>The Kinsey reports rated the percentage of people who had sexual interaction with animals at some point in their lives as 8% for men and 3.6% for women, and claimed it was 40–50% in people living near farms.

(Not sure whether he said anything about fantasies of candy-colored high-school girls with dicks.)
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>>33713540
>mfw went from 1:1 to nearly 10:1 in two days
wew lad. I never thought the downvote brigade was real, but here I am.
I sure am glad that apparently I didn't lose all my fucking writing skills on a two year hiatus from normal prose.
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THE RIDE NEVER ENDS MOTHERBUCKERS
https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/852922/change-in-plans-regarding-phase-3-of-the-bv
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>>33720481
Shink is creating a real-time fractal book.
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>>33720481
God fucking damn it
Well, at least this explains why what I thought was a side story (Synchronicity) is stealing a major chunk of the main plot. Not sure why they decided to cut over to book 2 when GAOA is literally right in the middle of a story arc, instead of just adding an authors note "chapters 32-45 were actually written by Shinzakura". Whatever - at least the madman is writing again. Maybe GAOA will finally go somewhere interesting.
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>>33720038
>https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/852922/change-in-plans-regarding-phase-3-of-the-bv
Link the story, fignog.
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>>33720576
Huh, didn't realise I still had the link highlighted.
Still.
>>33720038
Link the story.
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>>33720576
>>33720603

Your Funerals

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/427523/the-golden-age-of-apocalypse-book-ii-synchronicity
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Just read Enchanted Library after seeing that anon mention it. Any recs for other good adventure or just alright long fics?
Some shipping stuff in 'em would be a plus.
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>>33720656
To Perytonia.
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>>33720656
how is the rarity/ts pairing justified in the enchanted library? they seem to have so little in common that it seems purely racial
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>>33720841
>needing more justification than that
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>>33720841
Rarity is the one who finds Twiggles after she's spent a long time alone. It just kinda grows from that friendship.
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[Pt. 1]

Love, Sugar, and Sails (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/87827/love-sugar-and-sails)

Pros:
>the climax is excellent
>the pirate adventure fic stuff is fun, if brief
>the worldbuilding's solid, even if it is mostly wasted on zebras

Cons:
>the Atlantis adventure fic stuff drags on and is way more boring than the political pirate plot
>the camels, an original species I'd never seen before in a fanfic, are completely squandered in favor of Zebra Port-au-Prince
>the shipping's meh and feels rushed
6.5/10. Seriously, the seapony shit was like an anchor to the rest of the story. I guess I just can't get invested in one of the standard adventure fic subplots.

Also, Where Loyalty Lies: Honor Guard (https://www.fimfiction.net/story/36254/where-loyalties-lie-honor-guard) was a complete clusterfuck. 2/10, I skipped half the story. Dash spends the whole story fucking around in Africa looking for a cure while the assassination conspiracy plot is both dragged on by incompetent characters and a bizarrely managed government and not even resolved at the end of the 200,000 word story. Those with a petrification TF fetish will like what happens to the main villain, though.

>>33696198
No, it didn't. No idea why he set part of the climax next to the caldera, after going through the trouble of mentioning all the toxic vents the thing had been creating.

It would have really fucked over the climax, though, so I can see why he didn't.

>>33703205
I've never read them, but given time travel's the main plot device, I'd say it devolves into a huge clusterfuck as the author can't keep the time travel mechanics straight and things spiral from there. AKA "what happens to every time travel story if it goes on long enough."
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[Pt. 2]

>>33703388
>winningverse crossover
Does it count as a crossover if the thing being crossed with never mentions or references it? Because I don't ever recall Twilight slowly going insane from desperate time travel being a plot point in any of the Winning fics.

>>33703488
It's a -verse (at least 2,500,000 words long at this point) centered around Cloud Kicker. Most notable is that the stories that don't involve her are the ones that are actually interesting.

>>33708892
>Why would you still watch the show?
Sunk cost fallacy. I'm already at the end. Might as well finish it up. I'm more pissed they squandered Brain's VA on the fucking Secretary of Education than how shit the school is. Whoever's the casting director's now on my list right beneath Haber.

>>33709480
>are ready for the entire cast to become alicorns
Pic related.

>>33713665
The mods would get involved, since they have the IP logs/emails from everyone. You'd have to completely set up a new account on a different IP address (like at a library) and never log into it on your home computer and at that point it's getting way too autistic for just $25.

>>33714374
>unlimited fics
It's way, way too much work. You'd have to:
>set up a dozen sockpuppet accounts on a dozen different IP addresses that never link
>make sure those sockpuppet accounts act like a regular user (favorite different stories, upvote different stories, comment different ways, etc.) for a period of time and don't just log in once, dump the upvotes on your fics and never log in again
>actually write the princest smut

>>33715239
>Not in Romania
>the gypsy is advocating scamming someone
Kek.

>>33716992
Lunar Rebellion's good, but has a shit ending. Rise of Firefly's good, but has a weird first person structure. Age of Wings and Steel is good, but you have to deal with the norsewords half of the story.
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>>33720958
I always liked how that tweet implied Twilight would be the first to die.
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>>33721201
if that tweet ever implied anything to anyone other than that the show would not span a time long enough for the M6's age to matter, it is their own fault
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>>33716498
One I want to read, like, yesterday
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>>33720603
>https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436230/birthday-celebration
Can't say it's amazing, but I think I did decent for my first clop.
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>>33720958
>since they have the IP logs/emails from everyone. You'd have to completely set up a new account on a different IP address
Literally just switch off your router a couple of times.

Thing is if you don't make it obvious, the guy isn't gonna have any reason to suspect anything, so he won't flag it for the mods, and I doubt they'll just be scanning the IPs of everyone entering this particular contest as a matter of course.
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>>33720958
>It's way, way too much work. You'd have to:
You know how they have those like farms? I wonder if it might be possible to pay pajeets to sockpuppet on fimfiction for you. It'll probably cost way more than e.g. Facebook likes or whatever, simply because there's not gonna be an established economy of scale, but then you don't need anywhere near thousands of accounts. A couple of dozen accounts posting stories for you would be enough, even the vote manipulation isn't necessary.

I wonder if you'd turn a profit doing this. I'm almost certain it's possible.
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>>33720958
>Does it count as a crossover if the thing being crossed with never mentions or references it?
This might just be the dumbest thing you've ever posted

>>33721654
Pretty sure you can just rent botnet machines to use as proxies if you know where to look
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David Silver?
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>>33722275
Don't
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>>33722309
Yudosky?
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How old is that fimfiction starter kit in the OP? My sense of time is all fucked up and I'm convinced we've had the same picture since season 3 or so but that can't be right.
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>>33723853
It's almost five years old, I think.
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>>33723853
I checked, it's dated from the S4-S5 hiatus.
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>>33723979
I don't understand what is happening here, but I don't like it
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>>33723979
Now I'm curious, but I don't wanna give it any heat. I'll give it a day and glance through. Has to be garbage with a hidden rating like that.
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Is it worth reading some of the top fics of all time, as sorted by the website?
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>>33724212

Naw, it's only got 79 views, it's perfectly normal that it still has a hidden rating. A views:votes ratio of between 10:1 and 15:1 is pretty normal, and until he gets 10 votes (i.e. 100-150 views), the fact that his rating is hidden doesn't mean anything.

Now, everything ELSE about the story, on the other hand, points to trainwreck. No actual trains though, looks like unfortunately

>>33724300

I just looked at the top ten, and it's a mixed bag. It's got three stories on my favorites list, two that I consider very "blah," and the rest I haven't read.

No true shitshow stuff on there, though, so probably not a bad place to try.
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>>33724313
which stories are which?
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>>33724212
It gave me my daily dose of wtf
The MC is Declan, a 12 year old kid who has a mild dissociative disorder and sometimes has an episode of rage a bit, whose mother died in childbirth because her doctor gave her botox instead of anesthesia (he was sentenced to life for manslaughter). Despite that, Declan is super popular in elementary school and also super smart and probably super good at sports, though we don't get any examples, he just talks about achievements. He has three friends (one of which "moved to US from China not long after I'd met him") and a gf, and I have to quote
>She loved me with all her heart but she couldn’t choose out of me, Drew, Gordon or Willy who to love so she loved them all. I’m sure that because of Alecia’s relationship, she’s gonna make some half children in the future for us due to all the breeding to each of my unidentical friends.

Anyway Declan is also a hardcore brony who knows all the words of the Babs Seed song and uses his mom's credit card to buy toys (even though she's been dead for 12 years), but that doesn't matter for now.
Declan and his dad visit grandpa in Louisiana, who shows the kid a secret - he has a necklace from the dead mum stashed away (that reminds him of the umbilical cord), along with A FUCKING BOTTLE OF HER BREAST MILK IN A PASSWORD PROTECTED FREEZER
Declan is happy about that, so they warm it up, he drinks a half of it, and they cry a little while oblivious dad is watching NFL. Not much else happens. On the way back home, Declan and dad stop at a gas station in Little Rock, Declan spots the CMCs who got teleported there by Twilight, explains he's not hostile and stashes them in the trunk of the car, so the dad doesn't know. He also feeds them bits of his cheeseburger and fries on the way home.

That's it so far.
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>>33724420
I'm getting Andre flashbacks.
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>>33724429
This feels like a different kind of weird, also the author can spell, at least. It's almost like a fetish fic in disguise, consider:
>I was so proud of my grandfather, he’d managed to collect my mother’s breast milk a few days before I was born and before she died.

>I was doing it, I was drinking my own mother’s breast milk and I was doing it with pride.

>It was also rather surprising to find out that my grandfather had managed to collect a sample of my mother’s breast milk and keep it stored in a secret password protected freezer for 12 years.

>Why couldn’t we just drink breast milk instead of farming some cows and getting their milk?

>“Yesterday you told me a secret that meant a lot to me. You collected my mom’s breast milk before she died and a few days before I was born. You froze it in a password protected freezer for over 12 years, and then just yesterday you tell me about this.”

do americans really do this?
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>>33724467
Yes. Americans keep dead women's breast milk frozen for twelve years after her death. Drinking it is a rite of passage, and how one becomes a man.
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>>33724485
Hot.
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>>33724467
>It's almost like a fetish fic in disguise
Maybe it's just because you hand picked all those lines, but it seems like a pretty flimsy disguise. What plausible excuse would he have for this to be a significant plot point in any serious fic?
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>>33724467
>Do Americans do this?
Drinking breast milk is good and natural for a child, so clearly the answer is no.
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>>33724545
>What plausible excuse would he have for this to be a significant plot point in any serious fic?
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New HiE from Starscribe
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436202/through-the-aurora
Weird shit happens and dude ends up in Equestria as a hippogriff. Omitted from the description, but surprising absolutely no one, he specifically ends up as a female hippogriff.
About 50% of Starscribe's male protagonists end up as girls when they get to Equestria, which I guess is exactly what you'd expect if the outcome was random. Yet somehow, not a single one of his female protagonists turns into a dude.
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>>33724420
>The MC is Declan, a 12 year old kid who has a mild dissociative disorder and sometimes has an episode of rage a bit, whose mother died in childbirth because her doctor gave her botox instead of anesthesia (he was sentenced to life for manslaughter).
Oh god, it's real.
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>>33724545
You write what you know.
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Hey guys, returnin horsefag here. I recently got back into mlp for the last season, (think i fell off around season 5, I think it was after Tirek).

Started to get back into fics, not trying to whore out but would like some feedback/criticism on an applejack fic I've always wanted to put together.

https://www.fimfiction.net/story/436540/applejacks-treekickin-brony-adventure

Cheers
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>>33724904
faggot
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>>33724904
Sure, Anon. Let's see what you
>brony
Why would you do this?
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>>33723979
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>>33724934
well, post a link so i can dislike without telling him why
i'm sure as hell not going to put in the effort to find it on my own
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>>33724934
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>>33724932
I honestly didnt know what to title it, but the first chapter has her dealing with a spergy brony and probably worse later on. Suggestions?
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>>33724939
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/415574/a-new-battle

>>33723979
This person has 433 uploaded stories. He uploads a new one every couple days, nearly all of which have a negative score
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>>33724934
>“Fuck I have no chance at this I can only get through the start. I am switching to God of War to let out some anger. Wait who sent me a message and why is my ps4 flashing the colors of the rainbow?” Jason said as a rainbow beam shot at him from his ps4.
>Just outside of Appleloosa
>“What just happened and were am I?” Jason said as he stood up but as he stood he saw red marks on his arms. “Where did these come from.” As he looked at his arms he saw a small oasis and went to examine his arms but just as he got to the oasis some flashes had happened and he ran.


This is half-life full life consequences tier writing
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>>33722275
Neat ideas but somewhere along the way in almost every fic he writes it goes off the wall and your suspension of disbelief is utterly shattered.
At least for me.

Silver Stars series - HiE, human met his own pony oc and from the ponys pov, its his human oc. Pretty neat idea. They go to a human con or something and the Human gets TF'd into a satyr or something and he's just okay with it. He eventually gets reborn into a pony child and goes through pony life as a pony. Gets a herd. Has like a 800k word dream sequence, not shitting you, where he becomes a batpony alicorn thing. Post dream sequence he wakes up having all this knowledge of world ending spells and shit because he was a batshit insane moon alicorn in the dream, but cant cast any of it because he doesnt have the power to.
He gets some in his herd, he loses some in his herd, this is about where I stopped.

Uncommon Ground - the whole landmass of north america gets dropped into the world of horseland. Alaskans and Yaks get scared of each other, and fight a bit. They fight a bit, then sign a peace agreement and become friends. The Minotaurs arent convinced of human peace so they form a big alliance to defend against humans. Then the Minotaurs somehow develop the equivalent of modern attack aircraft, have airships, magical energy shielding that blocks torpedoes. Those airships with magic shields also have AA guns capable of taking down fighter jets.
The US also sends a whole fleet of naval warships to Minos and then they discover that the Minotaurs have developed a fucking laser defense grid like the goddamn Belkans did with Excalibur in Ace Combat Zero, wiping a whole battlegroup out of the sea. Also it's only been at most, not even a year since the US appeared there, or something.
I stopped reading this too, I might drop it entirely.
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>>33725077
>the whole landmass of north america
>The US also sends a whole fleet of naval warships to Minos
> not even a year since the US appeared there
How many ships does the US have in drydock? Like, most of the american military isn't even in the US. What about canada and mexico, are they in there too?
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>>33725089

I'm not a military vet or anything but I like reading a lot about military history, equipment, etc, that sort of thing.

So, I'm not entirely sure how many USN ships are currently in drydock. I'm fairly certain the Navy wouldn't have any active vessels just sitting around doing nothing, in order to be in dock they'd have to be refueling, or getting repaired, retrofitted, refitted, that sort of thing.

But one thing I remember specifically in the fic is that a cargo vessel leaves dock and is on the seas when it happens. They lose GPS, as the satellites don't get taken, but they get transported too. So I don't know how many USN ships were taken. I don't remember if the fic ever addresses current numbers of anything either.

Also about Canada and Mexico, no, they were left out. Only the United States of America, and Alaska. Which somehow got attached to north Equestria, where it's cold and snowy, and has Yaks.

I can rant more about Uncommon Ground, but I don't know if anyone would be interested because I'm not a certified expert on any of this military stuff. And I'm not sure if I want to, because I'd have to read the three most recent chapters or something to catch up to see what else is there and I kinda lost interest after-

The Minotaurs managed to create stealth bombers and fighters, make an entire coastal laser defense grid with lasers strong enough to slice a naval warship in half in one beam, create bullet resistant armor, manufacture bombs, enough of those stealth bombers and fighters to make a 2nd Pearl Harbor attack. Manage to create and successfully test an engineered Magical Shield Generator, I can't imagine they just have like 10 dudes in there grunting and struggling to keep shields up, its just not practical.

Like I get needing to buff the Minotaur alliance to make the war arc more even, and not a complete stomp in favor of the Humans, but I feel like there could have been other ways to balance it out.
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>>33725142
>I'm fairly certain the Navy wouldn't have any active vessels just sitting around doing nothing
Unless *bureaucracy* keeps them in dock. Either that or public programs and crew stay. Those things need to be crewed, and that crew kind of needs some leave every once in a while. Also to resupply and swap correspondence.
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>>33725148
Oh! Yeah, that completely slipped my mind.
I do know that USN ships do frequently dock at foreign naval bases, or, USN bases at other nations, and they let the crew have a few days of leave then as they're resupplying and doing other stuff. I heard about this from a Navy vet I knew in one of my classes earlier this year, and I'm pretty sure I remember a few stories from TheMightyJingles about this sort of thing, but he was in the UK's Royal Navy.

Either way, the US managed to scrounge up a fleet from whatever ships they had, and they decided to throw it at the Minotaur homeland without doing any preliminary recon, at all. If they did, I don't believe it. It's not written anywhere that they did, and they can't possibly have missed an array of coastal defenses, even if the laser batteries were 100% foolproof perfectly concealed, they would have barricades on the beach, stuff to stop landing craft, if you can't literally see the defenses, you can probably see the clues that defenses are there.

Man. I really liked the start of this fic, because you had exchange of culture, a little bit of mystery in that suddenly everyone started speaking Ponish, and that some people relearned English, thinking that was Ponish. You had the blending of two vastly different cultures, David Silver touched on the effects that Hollywood had on Equestria, which was neat to read about. The first contact was GREAT, I would actually recommend reading Uncommon Ground just for those scenes. And then maybe stopping.
The war stuff really just wasn't all that great for me.
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>>33725142
>Like I get needing to buff the Minotaur alliance to make the war arc more even, and not a complete stomp in favor of the Humans, but I feel like there could have been other ways to balance it out.
One of the more interesting solutions to this problem I saw was in a fic a long time ago. I can't remember the name of it for the life of me, but it's about a human colony that travels to Equus in the 2100s. In it, there's a race that is described as a "failed civilization". Basically they were able to build themselves up to a technology level equivalent to the 1980s Earth, but political or social events (I think they had a civil war?) devastated their society and they haven't been able to put forth the resources necessary to advancing further than that. They had the ability to maintain a few their existing ships and aircraft and even a limited ability to produce more of them if they tried, but not much else. And after centuries of just subsistence, technological innovation was a lost art to them. At their height they had spread all across the planet which is why you see pony civilization use door knobs and things that won't really work for them, they just adopted the infrastructure.

Definitely made things play out a lot more interestingly because the only reason they were alive, was because they strongarmed equestria into giving them food aid, and when a new technologically advanced entity emerged it threatened their very existence.
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>>33725226
I think I've seen the fic you're talking about, but I haven't read it. And I have a read later list of 1600 or something. Hm... I can probably go find it, that does sound pretty interesting.
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>>33725142
>Like I get needing to buff the Minotaur alliance to make the war arc more even
What is asymmetric warfare? There's a big difference between "kill all the combatants" and "kill everyone and destroy everything". The latter will usually only leave you with a pile of rubble, bodies and a PR disaster.
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>>33724945
Nah, it's a great title for the HiE fans.
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Anyone know if someone's made an alternate timeline type story where Glimmer used her sob story at the end of season 5 to trick the gullible and sympathetic Twilight into sparing her and biding time until she could figure out a way to defeat her?
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>>33724699
>arrested and sentenced within hours of the crime
Fanfic justice systems strike again

>>33725077
>Uncommon Ground
You forgot to mention the humans have some allies against the minotaurs: ponies, hippogriffs (a.k.a. "Seaquestrians", since they mostly stay as seaponies), yaks, and "lutrai".
What the hell's a lutrai? Glad you asked: https://www.fur.com/~ollie/rlutrai.html

>>33725142
>But one thing I remember specifically in the fic is that a cargo vessel leaves dock and is on the seas when it happens. They lose GPS, as the satellites don't get taken, but they get transported too.
It's because they were still in US waters, just barely

>Also about Canada and Mexico, no, they were left out. Only the United States of America, and Alaska.
Don't forget Hawaii! Puerto Rico doesn't get to come, though, 'cause they aren't real Americans. Much less those insignificant little territories that nobody's ever heard of.

>>33725183
>they decided to throw it at the Minotaur homeland without doing any preliminary recon, at all. If they did, I don't believe it
That's exactly what they did. There's a scene a bit later where President Changeling begrudgingly calls up Thorax and gets him to send some bugs to spy on the minotaurs.

>some people relearned English, thinking that was Ponish
Nah, they know it's their own language. There's a whole club of Youtube conspiracy theorists around it, which President Crane joins up with after the end of his term.

>>33725288
Where does "glass one of your own cities with a stolen nuke" fall on that scale?
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>>33725640
"blame it on the terrorists and go bomb several million civilians more in sand country" and/or "obscure it with incompetence"/10
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>>33725640
>Where does "glass one of your own cities with a stolen nuke" fall on that scale?
According to Kojima, just blame it on the other side and enjoy the forced fratricide.
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>>33724699
Better or worse than Candance in AAG nuking Fillydlphia?
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>>33725733
Shit, wrong post quoted.
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>>33723979

Everything this fucking crazy bastard writes. Beautiful.

https://www.fimfiction.net/user/335540/Sonic_RainbowDash2005
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>>33725733
I'm pretty sure Twilight wouldn't save Cadence's breastmilk after she dies so Flurry Heart can have a drink fifteen years afterwards.
But, like, only 80% sure.
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>>33697093
it's fucking smut, for Christ's sake. If it's good you'll have a lot of views even if at the beginning you had literally 0 followers.
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>>33725507
Its been a while but I feel like thats not a good thing lol..
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Should I be concerned when one of the entries to the April sibling smut contest has a 5:1 vote to view ratio when none of their previous work was able to get more than 15:1?
>>33726096
Glad to know your intuition is working correctly, Anon.
>>33725850
I mean, if alicorns age so slowly, maybe their byproducts do as well?
>inb4 mountains of shit because it just can't decompose
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>>33724420
I'm going to imagine that this is some kind of metafictional experiment where the author is writing in character as a mentally disturbed 12 year old fanfic writer
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>>33726118
>Should I be concerned when one of the entries to the April sibling smut contest has a 5:1 vote to view ratio when none of their previous work was able to get more than 15:1?
But 15:1 is better than 5:1? Or are you concerned about missing out on the $25 bonus?
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>>33726378
I got those ass backwards and I'm probably worrying about nothing anyways. Ignore me.
Also yes
>>33726376
I'd be incredibly impressed if that turned out to be the case. I'd congratulate the writer on their ruse-cruise skill.
Wait
>it got an update today
Oh no. There's more.
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>>33726399
Will the kid share his mom's milk with the CMC?
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>>33726428
Literally no mention about the milk.
Not the analyzer from up in the thread, but here's some excerpts

>Dad got extremely agitated that he scowled so loud which would be loud enough to shock the crusaders.
This kid's dad can scowl with volume. Also, scootaloo waited the full hour of cussing before asking what the yelling was about.
>and I was beginning to feel exhausted from sleep deprivation
This comes almost immediately after the kid slept a full night's sleep in the car
>As much as I love Gatorade I prefer it as a treat over something I usually drink on a daily basis. Those who are average and relate to me would know why.
The absolute meaning of telling instead of showing.
Also, apparently I'm a mutant for being willing to drink Gatorade for breakfast on the road.
>As much as I love Gatorade I prefer it as a treat over something I usually drink on a daily basis. Those who are average and relate to me would know why.
Okay what the fuck. WHERE the fuck can I find a gas station that sells that? And where could I find one to trust selling me that? I think this kid lives in texas IRL. He must have only ever been to a Buccee's or something and never saw more than the hour-old burritos.

The entire chapter is about driving about halfway home from grandpa's and sonny here interacting with dad. Two (2) mentions of the CMC in the trunk, with otherwise no pony related.
This really does read like it's written by a kid whose father never came back from the chocolate factory one evening and he's desperately trying to fill the void.
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>>33726554
>two (2) mentions
I'm retarded. Scoots says like 5 lines, and it's about the cussing and being scared. And the kid telling her to chillax.
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>>33726560
Alright. I'm double retarded.
>I quickly thought about the idea of having some sausages and waffles for breakfast as they were probably the only things a gas station would sell during the early morning hours.
That was the quote for that last line about Buccee's.
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>only 35 (You)'s this thread
I'm getting out of practice.
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>>33726554
>Also, scootaloo waited the full hour of cussing before asking what the yelling was about.
I kinda want to read about the CMC awkwardly trying to remain silent as a huge argument takes place on the other side of a door.
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>>33726554
It should be mentioned that they waited an hour on the road, because there was a homeless person who didn't wanna move. That's what caused the loud scowling.
Also shout out to dad, who's been driving that Cheyenne for 24 hours straight and doesn't plan to stop until they get home.
Another shout out to the CMCs who have been hiding in the trunk of the car for a full day because someone told them to, yet they have zero suspicions or any questions.
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>>33726644
>because there was a homeless person who didn't wanna move.
Since the dad didn't just drive around the guy, I'm going to imagine that the homeless man was a true American at maximum possible genetics, which is fat enough to block a two lane road. Presumably the aether surrounded the road to prevent any offroading. Damn liberals.
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>>33721461
Well, you're in luck, because I forgot about it for a couple of days. At this speed, it will take me the rest of the month to write a fucking oneshot.
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>>33727110
I believe in you, Anon.
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>>33727118
I don't, but thanks anyway.
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>>33725523
Do stories by headless_rainbow count?
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>>33725824
>to remedy the situation
>Violence, Death
Is this the Holocaust fic Decanus was wishing for?
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Which one should people use to address Celestia in a formal setting:
>Your Majesty
>Your Highness

Please help, I'm too lazy to check the transcripts.
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>>33727334
Highness. 'Majesty' refers to Kingship/Queen-ship. Highness is Princess-ship/Prince-ship
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>>33727345
Thanks, Anon.
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Oh, hey, bump limit.
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>>33727296
That was headless_rainbow's second worst story anyway, so no.
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NEW THREAD NOW NEW THREAD NOW NEW THREAD NOW
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>>33727608
Nah, we're on page 6, we can funpost for a while.
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>>33727600
Every Little One She Snuffs or Suicide Spectacular?
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Steve Albini wearing a beanie.
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WHJERE IS THE NEW THREAD I NEEED IT HELP
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>>33728013
You do it, I can't be bothered to write the ITT.
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Yeah, fuck>>33728066
I'll make a real thread when I finish my milk.
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New thread.
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