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Welcome to Dadonequus! Where the premise is about a human brought to Equestria by Discord himself, in order to fulfill an ulterior motive. However, this can be adapted depending on what the writer has in mind!

Enjoy stories more in tune to the show!
We usually refrain from any lewd or edgy themes/tones. So come in and experience some of the greatest stories with some of the most apathetic readers on the board!

Are you a newfag? Below are pastebins of stories currently in the making with a synopsis on each one. See which one suits your interests and give it a read!

Any unactive greens can be found in the archive link with a library of stories.

Please feel free to comment, discuss, and give writers feedback! And don't be afraid to create art or start your own story!

All Stories / Archive:
Archive of stories:https://pastebin.com/RiguRjdM (embed)

Active Writers:
Elo (http://pastebin.com/u/Elohemian) – Two street urchins -Eris and Resonance- are taken by Discord to Equestria, where they shall fulfill their destinies.

JekyllorHyde (https://pastebin.com/u/JekyllorHyde) - A godlike-figure forces Discord to adopt short-fused Cyborg Anoncolt

Wand of Inferno (https://pastebin.com/u/Wand_of_inferno) - An unreformed Discord adopts a little Mexican colt named Alberto as part of his plan to take over the world

Zenco (https://pastebin.com/u/zenco1) - Discord decides to bring a dumb and perverted dude to be a secret agent... and a little colt as well.

Hoers (https://pastebin.com/u/Hoers)

Art: https://1drv.ms/f/s!AhXTgF2ur7iaa7pvcOXL_uMq17A

Anons who want to join our Discord channel, come shitpost and talk about vidya, motherfuckers: https://discord.gg/cMgnnJA

Last thread: >>33306124
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>>33424386
are there any stories where bringing a human to equestria backfires in the form of anon infecting the ponies with a disease that kills them? for example hydrocephalus or common cold, the black plague or something like that.
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>>33424525
Nope

>>33424386
Glad to be back!
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HI GUYS
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>>33424525
Wtf senpai
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Where's Wanda? Did he die in the oil explossion?
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>>33425583
No, I'm not retarded like those piojosos who wanted free oil
I'm gonna write tonight, I really want to update before weekend
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>>33425699
WANDA
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>>33425986
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Hey wassup
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>>33426556
Wassup anon
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>>33426556
Post more bats
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>>33427512
I've been wondering if I should add a bat to my story
The punchline here, of course, is that Alberto has a baseball bat always with him
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>>33427782
Maybe, post more bats tho
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Yo! Soo glad this thread is back! Man, I missed this place a lot.
Does Ben_Dover come around any more? I just wanted to say I loved his story. Great writing and characterization, plus little Anon is super cute!
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>>33428484
State thy name, stranger. You utter words that no one who exists dare vocalize or ponder.
ye. reboot coming soon. sadly to say it might not be quality on par with my last story. cant put in the same effort as i used to. oh well, give it a shot when i do.
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>>33428725
Woo! Glad to see you're alive. Heh, well at least it's the thought that counts but yeah, time can be a bitch. I guess the closest thing I had to a name was angler anon who was usually super drunk or super drunk and fishing while posting.
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>>33428725
WELL WELL LOOK WHO WE HAVE HERE
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>>33428725
>>33429806
>Morning bump
I bump ur mum
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>>33428725
BEN IT'S TIME TO WRITE
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>>33430850
leave me alone, old man! cant you see im writing excuses?
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>>33431424
WRITE
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GOODNIGHT EVERYONE
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>>33431424
GREEN WHEN BEN
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>>33428725
Happy to see you're still around, ben!
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AAAAAH
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>>33427782
WANDA
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Update soon, I swear
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Morning, update not that soon, can swear
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Hey ppl
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>>33437160
Hey cat dude
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>>33437160
Hey Hey people Elo here
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>>33437160
>>33438493
Yo, went to bed early after stretching. Got to get up and go fishing in the morning. Here's a cat.
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>>33436750
WANDA
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>>33438636
Fisher Anon, you are a legend. Now if only we could get Sunsetfag back...
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>>33438636
FISHER ANON WELCOME BACK
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>>33439385
>>33439928
Heh, thanks for the love.
Fishing was rough. We knew it was going to be cold, and we were prepared, but we weren't prepared for it to be soo cold that all you line, leader, and tippet would freeze immediately out of the water and the water was too cold to effectively melt it when it was back in. Basically you couldn't cast, manage line, or have good presentation for the fish so we called it.

Oh shit and >>33436750
Just started going back through your story this week :)
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>>33440670
welcom back fisher anon
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Wheres your contribution for fluttercord week?
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>>33441564
The what?
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Good night!
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>>33442027
all fluttercord fans made an event where they make a lot of fanart for entire week on tumblr, twitter and deviant art
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>>33443186
But why
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>>33443186
Odd.
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boop
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>>33443621
Because its the only main and ongoing ship that is going canon in s9
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boop
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Okay, so, I've been writing at a pace of 250/500 words per day
Wait until I see when it's my day off and I'll try to update as soon as they hit me
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>>33445962
WANDA
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>>33444741
Nah
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beep
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>>33444741
No, it's not going canon
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>>33444741
>2019
>Still thinking fluttershy is canon
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AAAH >>33445962
WANDAAAAA
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boof
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>>33424386
sauce on pic?
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>>33450507
That's Discord
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>>33452049
I want more Eris
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>>33452651
Ok, anon
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Boop
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>>33448911
How much you want to bet?
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>>33454169
Is not gonna happen m8
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>>33454169
I doubt is going to happen or even be acknowledge beyond a little tease.
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>Fluttercord
>Canon

And Cosmos became the new Flash Sentry.
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>>33452651
Here is, more Eris.
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Boop
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>>33456537
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>>33456950
MORE ERIS
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>>33456950
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>>33455223
But Andrea Libman said....
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>>33457426
That was a con and she was doing it for fun
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boop
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>>33457305
More of her
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>>33459444
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>>33459899
Eris, the nightmare knight.
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>>33460146
That would be a fun idea, actually.
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Hello!
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AAAAH
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>>33460477
Woah, if that happen, we will have Eris vs Eris, the turkey cousin
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>>33462804
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>>33462804
I would need to read that arc past the first issue.I do like the idea of Luna recruiting Eris for some major issue.
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bop
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You guys are starting to post too much Eris, is getting annoying
Where are the colts
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>>33464051
sorry, but, Eris is Eris.
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>>33464051
Eris a best
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>>33464362
That´s right, anon
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>>33465823
We must protecc her.
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>>33455816
Genderbender, with Eris and Cephelus.
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>>33424386
I hate this piece of shit and all god-like joker characters. they deserve nothing but torture.
>turns you into a hideous fat retard and leaves you that way
>normalfaggot: HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA11!!!
fuck you
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>>33467009
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>>33467049
don´t be mad for a cartoon.
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>>33467009
>No fun allowed
You are welcome to filter this general, anon
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>>33467009
Are you alright, anon? Do you need some help?
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Okay, I’ve got it! I’m just gonna need to borrow some of your stuff. Not much, just the mirror and paperclips. You okay with that?”
>Maybe that was a dumb question from your part as Cherrywood’s answer became obvious by just looking at her. She didn’t care, in fact, she looked rather annoyed.
>“We’re losing a lot of time with these dumb questions!” She snapped back at you. Her muzzle contracted as she pointed with her head towards the table, “Just pick what you need and hurry, okay?!”
>While her tone didn’t sit well with you, it’d be a stupid move to start another argument at this moment. You simply sighed and trotted past her.
“Whatever, man. I just wanna escape this place.”
>You ignored most of the school materials that were on the small table and quickly grabbed the objects that you had come for.
>Before going back to the door, you took a final glance at the small book titled “Ancient creatures of Equestria” that was lying among her stuff.
>The last thing that you expected from Cherrywood was for her to read books, much less one that actually fell within what you’d consider cool stuff.
>Maybe it wasn’t really hers and the book was for an assignment? Who knows, it ain’t like you actually wanted to know her more. Only thing you could do is to go back to your business and muster to yourself.
“Hope the castle’s library has a copy of this one. Can’t steal it while this weird girl is watching.”
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>>33467510
>After you trotted back to the door, you carefully placed the small pocket mirror and the orange paperclips on the floor. Then, you proceeded to give the doorknob a closer look.
>Not more than half-a-minute went by before you noticed that Cherrywood was uncomfortably close to you. Her entire attention was centered on what you were doing.
>At first you thought on being direct and tell her to go hug a cactus. However, you hated this girl with a burning passion, so a different idea crossed your mind.
>You leaned over and managed to snuggle against her chest. It was supposed to just be a quick thing so she could leave you alone, but… man, why she had to be so fluffy?
>The urge to continue snuggling that fluffiness was too powerful. Only reason why you stopped was because she pushed you away.
>Of course, Cherrywood was glaring and hissing at you, “What do you think you’re doing?!”
>With a little smirk on your face, you shrugged and raised an eyebrow.
“I dunno, man! I could ask you the same thing, y’know? You were so close to my face that I could smell your stinky breath!”
>“Oh, really?! Look who’s talking, Mr. Hobo smell!” Cherrywood barked back at you. Her face was slightly red with anger, “You stink harder than death fishes inside an open sewer! I’ve no idea if you’re too dumb to get this, but you need a bath! And you need it bad!”
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>>33467573
>Feeling deeply offended by her words, you immediately raised a hoof in protest.
“Hey! That’s…”
>Your comeback had to be stopped right after you decided to sniff yourself. She was absolutely right. You reeked so badly that it was a wonder how you didn’t notice it until now.
>Guess that’s to be expected when the closest thing you’ve had to a bath in the last couple weeks was the old canal’s water. Man, now you felt ashamed that Luna and Celestia had to endure your odor.
“Alright, I’m not gonna you’re right, but it ain’t like you’re wrong either. Let’s just say that… eh…”
>“That you stink worse than a wet manticore!” Cherrywood laughed a bit before pointing at you with her hoof, “At least is not as bad as your dumb mane! When was the last time you cut it… or washed it? Kind of looks like is alive or something! And your coat… I think is more mud than fur.”
“What? Do you know how expensive that stuff gets...? Wait, that ain’t even the important part! I wanna know why the heck were you close to me?!”
>“Oh, yeah! That thing! Well, is because I was curious, you dummy!” Cherrywood shrugged, “Are you really, really, really sure that you can unlock that door?”
>This was the perfect chance to save some face. You puffed your chest out and adopted the coolest pose you could think of.
“What kind of question is that? Of course I can, man! I’ve actually escaped from places that are waaay tougher than this! I’m talking about stuff that would break someone like you!”
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>>33467582
>Cherrywood wasn’t impressed by this at all. She rolled her eyes and frowned a bit, “Oh, yeah?! Just try me, you dum-dum! If you could do it, then I can do it ten times better! No! TWENTY TIMES BETTER! I’ll show you what I’m made of!”
>That kind of attitude kinda reminded you of the company’s ponies, and the last thing you wanted was to deal with that stuff again.
>Instead of continuing with this, you shook your head and went back on inspecting the doorknob.
“Tch! Forget it, man. I’m sure you can take on the company and their stupid patrols that take your family away, or their weird tests, or their crappy orphanage in no time. Just shut up and lemme do my job.”
>You didn’t see her reaction, but it was clear that you had torpedoed Cherrywood’s mood, “Oh… I thought you were talking about an evil warlock’s fortress or something… I didn’t… was it that bad?”
“It’s a really long story, maybe another time. Listen, we’ve no idea what’s on the other side of this door, so why don’t you use that mirror to see if there’s any patrol… or anyone else around?”
>She tilted her head in slight confusion and picked up the pocket mirror, “Why do you always keep calling the guards like that? And why do you always talk so… funny?”
“Ain’t that obvious? I’m new around these parts, and I mean REALLY new. First day in Equestria and everything”
>“Well, there’s no “company” or whatever around here, and the big armored ponies are called guards, not patrols.” Cherrywood replied as she started to toy around her mirror, “And they don’t do any of those horrible things. I’m very, very sure of it!”
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>>33467585
Yeah, I’ve noticed that… same with how lame this doorknob is! Hah! I’m gonna get us outta here before anyone can know what happened!”
>You used the frog of your front hoof to firmly hold a paperclip while you used your teeth to bend it in a way that allowed it to be used as a lock-pick.
>The process was a bit tricky, but Eris had taught you everything about everything when it comes to this stuff, and you also had enough “field” experience on the subject.
>Once you were done with making the lock-picks, you turned to Cherrywood and smiled.
“These lock-picks are a frickin’ piece of art, I tell you! What about you? Did you see any patro- I mean guards doing their rounds around here?”
>Cherrywood shook her head and tossed the mirror, “Your stupid idea was dumb! I don’t even know how I was supposed to use the mirror to see beyond the door. I could hear like two guards near here, though.”
“Hear? What the heck are you talking… about?”
>You had to stop talking right there. What you were seeing was, to put it mildly, out of this frickin’ world.
“Whoa!”
>Seriously, your mind couldn’t even begin to comprehend how her fluffy, fluffy ears were constantly rotating like radars… but man, wasn’t this the coolest thing ever.
>In a bit of a dumb move, you tried to do the same stuff with your own ears. Only thing you managed to do was to hurt yourself a little bit. It sucked hard, man. You wanted radar-ears like those.
“How the heck is she doing that, man?”
>“Duh! I’m a bat pony, dumb-dumb! Did you think the ears were just for show?” Cherrywood quickly barked at you, “And on that note, shut up! I can barely hear those guards with all your dumb babbling!”
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>>33467588
I'm sorry for not posting in so long. I also hope you guys enjoy this little chapter.
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>>33467591
ELO
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>>33467591
This is what I was wanting more of Cherrywood and Resonance's autism
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>>33467588
Those two make up for a weird pair
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>>33467588
Damn rotatings ears. How do they work
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>>33467591
MORE BATS
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>>33470544
Eris the Bat-noodle.
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>>33470802
This could also be a fun idea to play with my story. Peacock Eris arrives to see Discord happily living with Fluttershy and draconequus Eris.
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>>33470898
You seriously adding characters from the comics?
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>>33470898
Maybe Cosmos will be better
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>>33467588
Rotating ears. How do they work?
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>>33471034
Cosmos is that psychotic ex-girlfriend and Turkey Eris is that auntie what nobody wants, only Discord.
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>>33470898
I already did twice in the previous version of the story
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>>33472178
I forgot to say, the comic villains I implemented were Radiant Hope and Accord, the thing is that I put them with my own twist.
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>>33472793
And each "kid" got to face one of these revamped villains right? Hope for PhD and Accord for Eris
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>>33472793
I really want a draconequus wars
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>>33473467
Who the fuck is the leftmost draconequus supposed to be?
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Boop
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>>33473467
What the fuck is that pink edgy draconequus?
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>>33473884
Cosmos, Accord and Turkey Eris.
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>>33475415
See? This is why I never take any characters from the comics and put them in my story
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>>33475415
Is Cosmos. Well, she isn´t confirmed like one, but, everbody said about that.
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>>33475415
Cosmos
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>>33475415
The one who made Fallout 76
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>>33476233
That's one of the worst designs I have seen in a long time.
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>>33476703
Cook was so serious when she said "Cosmos make Discord looks like Harley Quinn" literally Joker she is.
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>>33477132
I had to google Katie Cook to know what she has written
>Reflections arc
>The good, the bad and the ponies
This is gonna suck.
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Oh fuck, I forgot. I'll post more tomorrow.
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>>33476233
That's a really shitty draconequus
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boop
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>>33479231
Well, if she can prove what is a good villain or at least decent, she can defeat Princess Eris...
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>>33480106
Being a better villain than Turkey Eris is easy enough, though. I just read the nightmare knights comics and the only thing she states is "I like chances and chaos" but beyond owning a casino she doesn't really do much. It's not like she trapped Luna inside a giant roulete or a crazy poker game and steal her powers by winning the game. I liked the concept of initially wanting to auction Luna's powers but then wanting to keep them because of the chaotic possibilities they can bring... but once again, Turkey Eris doesn't do anything with those two concepts. We don't get to see this crazy ass auction house, nor do we see Turkey Eris ripping off the assistants by giving them diferent dreams, or her causing crazy dreams Satoshi Kon's style. This is my biggest issue not only with this new characters but the comics as a whole. You get these amazing ideas that aren't explored at all.
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>>33480383
Turkey Eris is a potential character with the right writer, like that idea of "enjoy with the luck, she is inside a bettor, she wants the risk of lose in exciting games, making her victory more enjoyable.

And she can have a connection with Luna in the "Inferiority complex" with her familiar, Discord, because isn´t normal present yourself as someone superior to a specific person without anyone asking you.

the last thing is fanservice but, if she have the same appearance like R63 Discord when she born, her inferiority complex would be more extreme than Luna's, desperately changing her appearance to the one she currently has. A great tragicomedy.
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>>33480720
Last part can work indeed, but this is part of my point
>like that idea of "enjoy with the luck, she is inside a bettor, she wants the risk of lose in exciting games, making her victory more enjoyable.
There's really nothing like that in nightmare knights. Those key characters traits are said and somewhat implied with the casino but never really shown. It's wasted potential in the most frustrating way. This is partly why I had that idea later into the original version of my story to take the comics' villains and use them in the way in which I feel they would work best. Turkey Eris is definitely one of them.
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>>33480743
any thoughts about Captain Goodguy (the Discord from evil earth)?

With that character, i know what he was only a "joke" but, he would be a simplified example of the "Morrison´s earth 2" thing, what was about "in earth 2, the good things make bad things and bad things make good things" that mean what the good can never win in that world.

How works with Captain Goodguy? he more a Superhero, he is a spirit of chaos, the chaos of his world actually is the harmony of our world, his powers only works if he make chaos, that mean what he can do good thing in his world, but when he travel in another universe, his powers only can be used in the real concept of chaos, making a internal conflict about, "he always was a good person or is just a villain in his world?"
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>>33480777
That's another interesting concept that sadly was only used for a gag in the worst arc the comics have ever seen. It can make up for a reaffirmation of his heroic deeds or the guy going bonkers because he ended up liking that lack of restraint and the actual consequences that his magic produces.
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>>33467588

>You remained as a silent observant for as long as her fluffy ears continued rotating. Not only because that never stopped being awesome as heck. The whole thing turned out to be weirdly hypnotic too.
>After a couple minutes, Cherrywood’s fluffy, fluffy ears suddenly went back to their original position. Then, she let out a groan and kicked the floor, “Argh! This has to be a bad joke! It just has to!”
“Lemme guess. Things just went from bad to total trash fire.”
>“It’s even worse than that!” Cherrywood sighed, “Those two guards aren’t there for show. My mom told them to stay there and keep an eye in case we decided to do what we’re doing right now.”
“So what? I can just open that door and then use something to distract them while we sneak past them. It’s basic stuff, man!”
>Cherrywood angrily shook her head and rubbed her temples, “I know! That’s not the problem, you big dummy!”
“C’mon, man! Gimme a break, here! I dunno if you’ve noticed, but I don’t exactly have super hearing like you do!”
>Defeated and frustrated, Cherrywood banged her forehead against the door, “My mom told almost every guard and staff pony in the ENTIRE castle to do the same! ARGH! I should’ve seen this one coming! Of course my mom would do something like this!”
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>>33481152
“No kidding! That lady really knows her job! And we’re gonna outclass her! Maybe… Say, we’re just talking about patro-. I mean, the guards inside the castle, right? That means those cool gardens must be safe, right?”
>Cherrywood shrugged. The lack of any will was clear on her face, “I don’t know, maybe…”
“What do you mean, maybe?! C’mon, man! I don’t wanna spend the rest of my day locked up inside this room and I bet you don’t wanna either! I say it’s at least worth a shot!”
>She raised an eyebrow and rolled her eyes, “I know that! Do you think I like to lose?! But is not like we can just go through the front doors like a couple of spaz! Use your brain for once! Anypony with two eyes would see us way before we opened them!”
“I never said we should do that, genius! You know this place, right? There has to be other way to reach the gardens! Something like a window that ain’t too high and not too far from here”
>Cherrywood backed away from the door and went deep into thought. After some moments of silence, her face lightened up, “And there is! We can make a run for the royal dining room!”
>An escape plan which end goal was to reach a dining room, huh? This certainly brought uncomfortable memories of the orphanage and Scrappy.
>Discord gave you his word that Scrappy would be fine and you trusted him. There was no fear of Scrappy being in danger from the company. It’s just that you wanted to see that little guy again and apologize.
>However, that would obviously have to wait. The main concern right now was to escape from this room. That’s where your focus should be and you were sure that Scrappy and Eris would tell you the same
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>>33481155
>It was time to put your mind back into the game. To come back to reality and do this, especially since Cherrywood was starting to look at you funny.
“Okay, this is gonna be a dumb question but I want us to be in the same signal here. This royal dining-whatever… is it safe from guards and all that?”
>Cherrywood nodded with regained enthusiasm, “Yeah! The guards almost never go there, and it’s very close from here, AND it has doors that lead straight to the back gardens! It’s perfect!”
“Yeah, man! We gotta work on what we’re gonna do once we reach the gardens, though. I’m sure some guard we’ll see us if we just stand there doing nothing.”
>Cherrywood frowned a bit and lightly smacked your shoulder, “Duh! Of course I know that! That’s why I already have that one covered, dumb-dumb! We’ll just hide inside the hedge maze!”
>You stood silent and in complete disbelief for a couple seconds. This was something that your brain had to go over multiple times in order to process it.
“This castle has a frickin’ outdoors maze?! Are you for real?”
>She simply shrugged and laughed at your reaction, “Kekeke! Yes! It’s in the middle of the back gardens, past the collection of ugly statues and its ginormous!”
“And you’re telling me that we’ll be safe there”
>Looking a bit annoyed, Cherrywood nodded once again, “Nopony ever uses it… except for that one time when a bunch of dumb tourists got lost and the guards had to cut holes in the grass walls to find them… but other than that, it’s like a giant ghost-town”.
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>>33481158
“I’ve no idea why anyone would spend bits on something like that, but sounds good to me. Now we just gotta get to that place. I’m gonna unlock this door, so I’ll need you to use that cool super hearing and tell me if those guards are coming.”
>As her ears started to rotate, Cherrywood started to look a bit confused, “Yeah, and how do you plan to do that with a bunch of bent paperclips?”
“I thought your mom would’ve told you about lock-picking. Y’know, with her being a super guard or whatever. Just… lemme do my stuff and you do yours.”
>Using your mouth, you placed once of lock-picks inside the door’s keyhole and made sure it was firmly inserted, this one would be your “lever”
>Once that was complete, you repeated the same process in order to put the second lock-pick on top. This one would be used to push the pins of the keyhole.
>You then started using your teeth to move the upper lock-pick across the keyhole’s pins. As for the “lever”, you used your chin and slight twists of your neck to turn it every time you pushed the right pin.
>It was tricky and incredibly tedious, but after a few tries you eventually got the door unlocked with a satisfactory “click” sound.
>With a huge smile on your face, you hid the lock-picks inside your mane. Then, you turned to Cherrywood and whispered.
“Job here’s done. How are things with our guard friends?”
>“Those two haven’t moved…” Cherrywood whispered back, “They’re just talking about dumb stuff like the castle’s maids and something about a white goose”.
“What the heck does that…? Who cares?! If they ain’t moving then we’re gonna need something to distract them!”
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>>33481159
>You slightly and silently opened the door to take a peek outside. While you couldn’t see the guards from this angle, you noticed the flower pots and large windows that this large hallway had.
>After closing the door, you started to look for any object inside the room that could be of use. Of course, your attention ended up landing on all of Cherrywood’s stuff again.
>The first idea that came to your mind was to throw her lunchbox across the hallway or maybe use it to break a window. That’d make enough noise to grab those guys’ attention.
>Nah! That was a very, very stupid idea. Guards will go on high alert once they pick up the lunch box and realize about the escape. You’d need to think on a different approach.
>Luckily, you had already thought on a sorta plan B. As much as you hated using books for anything else than reading, you could throw one at a flower pot.
>Just like with the lunchbox, this would cause a big enough ruckus to get those suckers’ busy. It was far from perfect, but you doubted that any of them knew what books were in this room.
>You dashed to the drawers and used your mouth to grab the thickest books you could find. Then, you dashed back to the door and placed your hoof on the doorknob.
>Before making the final move, you spat out the book and gave Cherrywood a super serious look.
“Hope you’re ready because this is it! We’ll have to gallop like crazy once I open this door and…”
>Cherrywood smacked your shoulder and barked back, “Stop with your dumb babbling and just do it! Oh, and try to keep up with me, okay?! I’m not going to slow down for a big, dumb turtle like you!”
“Man, back in the slums I could outrun any patrol that came my way! Think you can…! Bleh! Who cares?! Let’s get this over with!”
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>>33481174
I'm gonna cut this as it's own chapter. Mostly because I feel bad for leaving the pastebin without updates for so long. Here's the link for y'all: https://pastebin.com/PaysjGX1

Have a good night, anons!
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>>33481176
ELO
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>>33481176
>Cliffhanger
Goddamn it elo
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>>33481174
Damn Resonance is also an angsty fucker
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>>33481176
MORE PLEASE
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>>33481174
Resonance was a little trickster, wasn't he?
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>>33481176
I adore their dynamic so far those two have a lot of chemistry
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Good night!
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>>33484838
Yeah they work together very well
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Boof
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>>33481176
Green when tho
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AAAH
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comics fucking suck. Fuck you IDW
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>>33488205
they have creative liberty, but they can´t use it for better executed ideas... only ocs and edgy thing (Chrisallys killing a cat)
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>>33476233
The only reason i will read is are possible discoshy teasing
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>>33489312
would be so funny if Cosmos actually is Discord´s mother or just a digievolution of Princess Eris after Nightmare Knights events...
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>>33488205
The best MLP comics are usually the ones that are about SoL or just the first arc with Chrysalis. Other than that they're pretty much miss.
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>>33489323
I just want Cosmos wanting to force Discord into becoming her lover while Fluttershy gets jealous and angry
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>>33489838
Cosmos will resurrect the "waifu thief" meme.
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>>33490314
Cosmos will be just generic evil
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>>33490918
that´s sadly right... she is just a star thief.
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>>33491115
>Star thief
Wat
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>>33491650
she robbed a constelation of stars in the plot of her arc in the incoming IDW comics...
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>>33491838
Plot twist- she did it to impress Discord
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>>33491838
That's fucking lame
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Boop
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>>33491838
Can't wait for it
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>>33491942
Would be so funny if is for that.
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>>33467582
I like this idea of Resonance being a dirty, crusty, festering street rat. Just a ball of muck dragging along, becoming the Canterlot Ooze from beyond Tartarus.

Also, sorry for taking long on the reboot, but assignments, exams, and projects are being a bitch and draining my energy. I got a good idea of what I wanna do and how to approach, but no promise it'll be good or better than last time.
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>>33494132
So he's a 90's teen?
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boop
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Moar of Eris, this design is underrated.
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Newfag here. How do I read them?
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>>33495380
Read Elo's story since is the most active one. Super good too. Erf's story is finished but is super long. Wand of Inferno is also active but not as often.
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>>33495305
This is more underrated.
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>>33495643
I like this bettee
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Boop
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>>33495305
Not a fan of this one
>>33495643
I like it except for the skulls.

>>33456950
This is top Eris
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>>33497604
Do you don´t like Lady Eris because is too old?
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>>33497638
Nah, it has more to do with her facial features. She looks exactly like Discord. Make her face with more fine features and I'd love it.
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>>33497748
ohh, understand.
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>>33497748
And, which another underrated eris design do you like?
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When a Erisverse?

With Chaos (rule 63 of rule 63 Discord)
Raycord´s Eris
Princess Eris
Actual Eris
Adult Eris
And Captain GoodGirl
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>>33498825
>Captain Goodgirl
My sides
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Boop
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>>33499215
Captain Goodgirl >>>> Carol Danvers
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boop
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>>33500146
Hmmm. Maybe
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>>33500689
Maybe? is a fact, everbody are better than Carol Danvers.
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>>33500734
She's a fun character in MvCI tho
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>>33500796
She isn´t really bad except in the comics... she is a meme after Civil War 2.
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>>33501142
Civil War 2 was a fucking meme in itself. Never should have happened.
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>>33501842
Just blame Bendis, but yeah, Carol never will be the same after that event...
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>>33501933
Just imagine if Bendis started writing the MLP comics.
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>>33502317
Good things
>He will use more of the lore to make epic stories
>More use of Discord/The princess/etc.
>Maybe more draconequus for a event.

Bad Things
>so long and repetitive dialogues
>Twilight is replaced with a narcisist zebra (and kills starlight only to have that zebra)
>Everbody are changelings
>Kills the previosly deplevoment of the characters
>Create a villain more powerful than Discord without reasons.
>Makes Celestia a jerk.
>Makes Spike gay for fault of a mind game of Discord/Starlight.
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Well I don't know what is going on, I really don't, I haven't had time to lurk or bump since night work at the hotel has been hell
And... okay, maybe I'm playing vidya too much.
I got saturday as day off so I'll try to update that day, if my proof-reader is avaliable.
Also, what's up with all the eris posting? Serves me right to skip Eris story since I only read it for Res
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>>33502444
He wouldn't be that far-off from the real MLP comics now that you think about it. Just imagine, Bendis would waste several pages on the mane 6 or whoever the main characters for his mess of an arc are eating and doing nothing just like many of the regular issues are structured. Celestia would be an incompetent ruler, only fixated on her own personal gains in spite of what happened to her kingdom, just like the IDW writers managed to do (by accident, but still) in the reflections arc and to a lesser degree in other arcs like Accord and the return of Sombra. Mane 6's flaws would be taken to their logical extremes, Twilight in particular would suffer from this the most to the point where she would be plain idiotic and/or incompetent, just like it happened in the good, the bad and the pony. Lots of dialogue and stupid, lofty monologues which we have had, like that absolutely stupid conversation between Starburst and Styngian. If anything, Bendis would only continue the comics' current quality (That is to say, bad) and simply add over-the-top, padded and pretentious stuff but not really changing the overall picture much.
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Good night!
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Boop
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>>33502621
So... Bendis is Jeremy White and Katie Cook...
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>>33504278
Other way around. Jeremy White and Katie Cook are spawns of Bendis
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>>33504421
Bendis isn´t a man, he is a hivemind, a god, beware with the God Bendis!
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>>33505064
Beware of his chubby reach. For the Bendis knows no limit to the amount of his dialogue
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boop
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Boop
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Captan Goodgirl writen by Morrison and the next run writen by Bendis
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>>33507386
We need to take it even further. Captain Goodgirl written by Grant Morrison with art by Mike Mignola and Simon Bisley. Then that run gets cancelled 3 issues in and gets rebooted by Bendis with art by Fosgitt and Katie Cook. Oh, boy, I'm seething just by thinking about it.
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>>33507605
Actually, with Morrison will be 12 numbers and is the most surrealist thing of all, punching all the gods of all religions, arrest equestria because they´re drunk, multiverse, Multiversal vampire Turkey Eris vs Captain Goodgirl, the death and ressurection of Captain Goodgirl and a parody to Alan Moore.

After that, Bendis is the next writer, making non-canon the Morrison´s run and replace Captain Goodgirl with a zebra or make Captain Goodgirl the most despreciable creature of all.
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>>33507903
It's gonna be the second one. Remember Bendis loves to take characters' flaws to their logical extreme. Then he will introduce a universe ending threat that seems cool in paper but never really explores it.
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>>33508260
I don´t know who will be worst, Bendis or Mark Millar, the last one will take Captain Goodgirl in 2 forms, a good homage to Superman or an edgy godness of chaos trying to be a heroin but she isn´t worst than the rest of her patners..
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boop
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>>33508325
>Mark Millar
He's the comic writer equivalent of a casino roulette. You can land on some 10/10 materials that would transcend the MLP franchise and become an all-time classic, or you could get a jumbled mess of a story.
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>>33509741
Captain Goodgirl: Ultimatum

Why not Jeff Lemire? he can write a deep story, but she now have a family with problems meanwhile a secret group wants the power of Captain Goodgirl...
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>>33509951
>Captain Goodgirl: Ultimatum
Just imagine the ultimatum event happening in the MLP comics.
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Good morning!
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Boop
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Or a Captain Goodgirl writen by Frank Miller
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>>33511585
That would be grim but incredibly fucking good
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>>33512337
If Frank makes Plastic Man the most creppy character in powers, having a unlimited power, imagine Captain Goodgirl with the powers what she have,
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>>33512348
I can only imagine a combination of his version plastic man and robocop all rolled into one. It'd be glorious.
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>>33512518
Punk Captain Goodgirl or Punk Darling.
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Be Captain Goodgirl or better be Shadowpunk, a necromantic heroin...
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>>33512594
Punk Goodgirl
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>>33513258
or Captain Punkgirl
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>>33513335
Now that's a better name for a Miller story that takes Eris as the protag.
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boop
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AAAAAAH
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This is kind of fun, want to go on an adventure with Discord?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UjQJKfG_p2o
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Shadowpunk vs Captain Goodgirl: Dawn of the Noodles.
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>>33515349
I pray that Q isn't ruined in Discovery
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>>33517154
Who will be the new Q?
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>>33518080
Would be funny if the new Q is a female Q...
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>>33518080
Bendis
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>>33519788
Mr Mxyzptlk and Bendis are bald and annoying to Superman... make sense what Q now will be Bendis.
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THe show is ending. Last season to make Discoshy canon.
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>>33519941
Nah
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>>33519941
Plot twist: Discord actually have a girlfriend besides of his relationship with Flutters, he know what Flutters isn´t interesed in him.

And that girlfriend is a draconequus or a strange creature of his dimension (he don´t see the ugliness, like Namor)
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Any predictions about a hypothetical G5 Discord?

i thought what he is no longer one character, now are 2 chaotic brothers, a male one and a female one, less poweful than Discord but together can be like the G4 Discord.

And if the have successful with the fandom, only they can return one of them to don´t have the Discord´s problem about "we must search a form to don´t make him the deus ex machina".
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>>33521521
They will probably NERF him so he woudnt be able to resolve everything with magic. They might also change his voice actor to make him younger, although De Lancie will probably not refuse if they ask him as he is desperate for roles in anything.
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>>33521541
Yeah, is possible just nerf Discord, but if they choose the chaotic brother one, the writers can have more dinamic interactions and maybe drama if the writers choose to redeem one of the 2 brothers.

And about the design of the brothers, is very possible than they don´t have an asymmetric look, instead, their designs distribute parts of Discord to be more symmetrical to be more easy making toys and be a good homage to Discord.

And if Discord appear in that series besides the existence of the 2 brothers, is like a more old Discord with the voice of De Lancie...

The voices of the brothers maybe could not be from famous actors to have more time and don´t pay so much for these actors.
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>>33521521
He probably won't be in
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>>33522574
Don´t broke the hopes, anon.
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>>33522587
Celestia and Luna aren't gonna be in either, senpai
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>>33523849
Poor of they... Not so much time in screen in G4 and now, they will disappear...
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>>33524431
Yep
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do we know who is gonna be in charge of writing G5?
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>>33525384
No
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>>33525384
McCarthy is the Faust of G5
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>>33525956
Just... don´t put Tirek here if she put Discord in the series...
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bump
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Would be funny if Princess Eris appear in the S9 but like a villain from a Discord´s episode and don´t a principal antagonist of season, and Discord makes a joke of the Noodle Eris to mocking Princess Eris...
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G5 was pushed to 2021
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>>33527156
Has any character from the comics ever made it to MLP?
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>>33528225
The character from Legends of friendship, they appear before in the comics than in the serie
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>>33528225
Major villains? Not yet
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Booo
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>>33527572
source
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>>33530432
The next MLP movie which we know is the G5 opener was announced for 2021 at the Hasbro's toy convention
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>>33530695
So S9 is the last for FiM and then we get one year hiatus.
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Boop
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>>33528642
Who?
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New chapter is on its way. Most of it is completed and I'm editing to be readable
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>>33532703
Great!
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What if Discord and Sombra both compete to be Eris' legal father?
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>>33533593
why would sombra want eris as his daughter?
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Post more Eris
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>>33534055
Why not? A powerful noodle like a child of a cruel king will became the most dangerous creature of all time
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>>33534699
That could be a fun story
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If she is real in the series...
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>>33536028
No that design is bad
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>>33536430
But is the most probable to happen... well, with some fixes, but, this will be...
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>>33536696
Plz no
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>>33536879
Even Andy knows which Eris´ design is the better.
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>>33537021
I fucking love this



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