Would you get angry on me as on the author if I wrote pedo moment with the petting and sexual pleasure of the pedo guy? Basically the kid was acting under depression and did not really know what is going on, the pedo then told him that he just wanted use him for his own pleasure and nothing else, that he should grow up and face that this world is cruel shit.later they bacame buddies [this is fantasy and pedo is main character who is powerful being who is doing whatever he wants]
>>13639089I wouldn't get angry, I would probably rather feel embarassed at this blatant and unimaginative self-insert. I might even not call the cops, out of pity.
this scene happened after lot of bad events, lots of terror caused to main character [kid] and stuff I wonder honestly how people would possibly feel about that
I'm not trollingI just thought that this scene is so good and evil in simplest possible way, that firstly main character idolized the pedo guy, then it moved towards sexual zone and then his sad brain simply thought it will be good to massage his giant balls as he wanted [he was unaware of what is going on] he was acting under depression so he really did not thought about it, his brain forced him to do this convincing him that this is fun
I simply wonder if people are really too stupid to understand what is going in with the kid inside of his psycho chemistry
ahadon't tell me you had depression and that this is not possible because I base this on real life and real depression
>>13639167the pedo guy give no shit and is proud of himself because this is part of his characters, he has power so he must not be responsible or think about shit
Why does /lit/ have more posters unable to speak English than any other board?
I would get angry if you changed your IP just so you could bump your own thread like a faggot
>cumbrain writing about deviant fantasy is barely able to communicate in English
>>13639223I think a lot of people here do it intentionally to protest word fascism
>>13639301You may as well protest reality-fascism. Being able to communicate with certainty as to what we wish to communicate is just a bedrock of operating as a human being.
>>13639289>barely able to communicate in EnglishI know english well, you simply didn't had any proper grammar lessons, just like 90% of hamburgers
>>13639361I am not American, you stupid pedophile. Now go write your shitty book instead of bumping your own thread
>>13639366oh no no nobut on serious note, I'm trying to see what people think, I thought that there might happen huge outrage but maybe people would just get more attached to main character and stuffpedo guy is not good guy, he would kill you just because he is stronger
>>13639089Is English your third language or fourth? Whatever you write, do it in your native tongue. Your grammar is horrible.
>>13639403point it out kiddie
>>13639226Imagine being this fake
>>13639389He just sounds like “the judge” from blood meridian then, who is also a pedophile. Except in that book he isn’t a self insert where by the children he molests end up loving him
>>13639416but kid never learned what that meant, he eventually has forgotten completely about him
>incineroarWhy are all furfags obsessed with fucking kids
>>13639411Are you kidding? Would you get angry on [with] me as on [extra word] the author if I wrote [a] pedo moment with the [extra word] petting and sexual pleasure of the pedo guy? [barely coherent]Basically the kid was acting under [the influence of] depression and did not really know what is [was--tense shift] going on, [; comma splice] the pedo then told him that he just wanted [to] use him for his own pleasure and nothing else, that he should grow up and face that this world is cruel shit.[L]later they bacame buddies[this is fantasy and [the] pedo is [the] main character who is [a] powerful being who is doing whatever he wants][.]Your English is terrible.
>>13639445"on me" is the same thing, the is ok a is unneeded, as on is ok contextuallyI won't continue, you are shit, your language is piss easy and yet you don't know how to use it
>>13639458why it happens this way?>YOUR GRAMMAR OS BAD BAD YOU SPEAK ENGSHIT!??!?!!>points out small letter, lack of dot, lack of the or a/ansatan christ, you are so sad
>>13639458No, you ignorant twit, you don't understand the language. Your sentences are riddled with errors, and anyone telling you that your command of English is reasonable is lying to you.
>>13639499uh-oh nonbut you are living hamburger
>>13639530Your level of denial is impressive. Take care, idiot.
>>13639623fu fu fu fulike I ever caredBIRDCAGE~! <3
>>13639089I opened this thread to save the image and stumbled on your text get a life OP