This thread is for writing /k/ related stuff and the recommendation of books that are /k/ related>It's been unscientifically proven that a lack of (you)s for writers can lead depression, alcoholism, story abandonment, and an hero.>But it's so easy to make a difference in a writer's life. Just one (you) a day can make the difference between a happy writer and a writer on permanent hiatus.>Please, post now. Help make a writer's day.---------------------------------FEATURED WRITERS---------------------------------Anon sectionThis section host the list of stories that host the anon section, due its sheer size it has its own folder https://pastebin.com/80dBFum8 [trip/namefag missing due to autism, feel free to ask they're all pretty good anyway]>Link to Sticky: https://pastebin.com/BpLSpmMN>Last Thread: >>40082291
How do I explain a skilled gunfighter in modern times without falling back on >Muh vet>Muh ex cop>Muh gangster
>>40181769"Protag is litterally better than you" is underrated
>>40181769to be fair, they're pretty much the only ones getting into gunfights in the first place and normies don't really like learning about shit they'll never dobackup, a solid wall and (possibly) an above room temperature IQ can go a long way in surviving a shootout, but unless your character has any training or is a complete autist it's quite hard to explain maneuvering when a lot of people barely understand basic stuff like flankingit's probably better to define your character first and then shape the flow of the fight around it, as unbelievable as some real world events can be there's only so much you can pin on luck before you can smell the bullshitthen again, I'm not a writefag and I'm completely talking out of my ass so take it with a few pounds of salt
>>40181444Did anyone take a look at the new draft I made?
You faggots let the thread die reeeee. Now I have to go back to find what I missed.
>>40184313Don't blame us, blame the furfags who raided the board and pushed half the threads off.
>>40181769I've always believed that there are autists on /k/ who have larped as oper8ors for so long that they have the same level of combat skill as infantry out of basic, and perhaps even with an exercise or two under their belt. That should be enough to help them survive the first few firefights, and the rest would come with actual combat experience.
>>40184683Furfags raided the board? Sorry I missed that, they might have posted something worth adding to my collection.
>>40185211Thats brilliant, also checked
>>40181444Ar-7 just redirects back to the main pastebinMight want to fix that.
>>40185231Chug turpentine fucko
>>40185602I don't manage the pastebin though, I simply revived the thread since no one else bothered to when it got slid off page 10you'll have to tell Polybius when he shows up
Where did all the writefags go? Surely they'd have returned after the new year? Is it the lack of (you)s?On another note, suffering from writer's block. Usually, I only write when I'm inspired and have a clear vision of what I want to write, but lately, nothing of real passion has come out of my brain. Most of the time, whenever I do mundane stuff is when I'm at my most creative, but now I'm burnt out on creativity.
>>40186158Somebody made a New Year's wish to kill most of the writefags. There were too few survivors.
>>40181769I'm just throwing ideas but...Well educated(not liberal) modern farm raised conservative that went to college who took firearms training? That also takes part in militia training run by veterans maybe?
If you're here JTfag, here is a picture of a car for you to add to your library of compacts if you want.Former car I used to drive, a funny story behind this one. I'll write about it in the morning when I'm sober.
>>40187380i'm up for anything with 3 spoke rims>>40186158Is it the lack of (you)s?with 90% probablility, yes. and even then, im probably one of the higher (you) income writefags
>>40184683Fair point. >>40180061Enjoying this. Pls continue. You said this was an ARMA mod, do the modded weapons capture the sound and feel of actual Halo guns?
>>40186158Trying to find a new job and make a contract with my artist.>pic completely unrelated
>>40188370Currently working on third part. The mod for ARMA is OPTRE, or Operation: Trebuchet. IMO it captures Halo perfectly for the era its sit in, while also still being Arma.
>>40186158>Lack of (you)sIn all honesty it's actually been a factor for me...
Oh yeah, I'll be introducing a group that I'm basing loosely off the three percenters in this next draft.Think them if they were a semi-competent fighting force.
>>40181769fire superiority: even a retarded person can win a gunfight if they pull the trigger fast enough and keep the gun filled with ammunition, it's why they grouped men into giant lines in the muzzleloading days, somebody with an AR-15 will always be able to outfight three other somebodies with handguns (may not happen in every scenario, but the weapon itself is a force multiplier because of the volume of fire it can put out compared to handguns), skilled gunfighting is built on the ability to apply speed and accuracy to the core component of firepower
Alright, well, not gonna finish Part Three tonight.Working out my sleep schedule by staying up for 24 hours, not in a state to write. Also, gotta a tripcode. I think. If it worked right. I dunno, Im tired.
>>40186158>Is it the lack of (you)s?yes, plus lack of being mentioned innathread at all.
>>40187380Alright, story time.>Be coming home a long day at work as a "native" English teacher at an international school.>Stop by the market to pick up some beer.>As I drive out of the parking space, hear a metallic clang, followed by what sounds like a Harley Davidson idling.>Look around confused as to who would be riding a Harley in worst Korea.>Can't spot any motorcycles, not even a farm tractor that are common around the area.>Still confused, attempt to continuing driving.>Hear sounds of metal being dragged across concrete, while the Harley sound gets louder.>Wut>I stop the car, and it clicks in my head on what might have happened.>Exit, take a look under the car.>The mid pipe literally rusted away and broke at the joint, touching the asphalt. >Stand there for a good minute speechless, brain trying to comprehend that yes, this just happened.>Thankfully the market is within walking distance from my home.>Unfortunately it's the middle of winter and below freezing outside. Walking home and back is going to suck>Return to car with some metal wires.>Haphazardly "fix" the car by tying the dangling exhaust pipe as best best as I can.>Cautiously drive home avoiding potholes and tactically crawling the car over speed bumps.>Drink my beer laughing over what just happened that day.I'm so glad I don't drive that old pos car anymore. It was horrendously under powered having a 3-cylinder 600cc engine, combined with a shitty CVT transmission and a battery so small it would die if you left the headlight on for more than 10 minutes. Nothing against these types of cars, just this one was horribly designed.>>40188207What makes you so interested in such cars? If you don't mind me asking.
>>40194251Mig-25 a cute. No bully.
>>40193521The three spoke things? Probably that its usually quite uncommon, but sorta popular on saabs>been trying to find a specific set but im getting more and more convinced that they dont exist
>>40192598But who are (you)?
>>40195495an anon is noone
>>40195492Foxbat a precious, must be proteced and cuddled.>>40195666Nonsense! An Anon is everyone.
>>40134926Posted. Also just got back from work trip across Texas.
>>40196407You see any steers or meet any queers while you were there?
>>40196657Not many cattle, so that kinda narrows it down.
Smut idea: Memoirs of a range trap
>>40196767Memoirs of a Serial Killer: Removing the Range Trap menace
>>40181769Expansion on that idea: Fat neet whos borderline suicidal decided to go merc as an indirect means of playing russian roulette for moneys
>>40198695Is this a sign?
Posting a feeler/teaser soon.
>>40197011Sounds like an excuse not to do it irl but ok
>>40199907I'm gonna fap now.
>>40202411comfy and cute
>>40202532RIP Parks, I guess.I think this is good, but I have absolutely no experience with comics before they become, well, comics, so I can't really give good advice here. But I like it, so there's that.
>>40202411God I love Holo so much
>>40204568I'll be posting the full thing shortly.
>>40204973Is for Lawrence.
>>40206602I like this one a lot. NORAD doesn't get enough love anymore.
>>40200836You always post pages 3 and 4. Where the hell are pages 1 and 2?
>>40207591I don't think anyone ever made chapters 1 and 2. the story is in someone's pastebin, but I can't remember which.
>>40207811I wanna say JTfag, and I'm 95% sure chapters 1 and 2 were posted and cropped as well.
>>40207934>>40207811>>40207591is it this?
>>40203294Have some more
>>40208981How did you know I'm in the shower?
>>40209000There's more, but I dunno about the quality
>>40208981That's pushin it, mister.
>>40209040>>40208981>>40209060This pleases my spooder thx
>>40208474oh shit, I don't think i ever saw it in screencap form
lmaoing @ shitcago bump
>>40203986>>40204534Gripen a cute! No bully!
>>40186158I'm not a writefag but I lost my creativity years ago...
>>40211979Everyone has a little bit left in them. Even a tiny ember can grow into a wildfire. You just need to give it some encouragement. You can do it.
Is poly autodefensa?
You know what?I'm gonna write a 416 girls frontline smut.
>>40212801>butthurt-chan smuty tho
>>40212892M16A1, no one's interested in your high mileage meat curtains.
>>40213030>implying I even like AIDS1either way, with how salty you are I guess I can understand why you got your original idea
>>40213030>>40212892Just make them fuck each other, which will be half wrestling, wiiner gets to top etc.
>>40212508he's a federale
>>40212892She's all you need faggot
>>40214544>needing a German thot whose entire existence revolves around being anally devastated at her American cousins over some bullshit naming issuecope harder
>>40214870>waifuing a chestlet alcoholic asshole who betrays her team just like she will betray you instead of a qt big tittie yandere waifu who will always stay by your sideYour gay
>>40215462>yandereI don't like being stabbed in my sleep. Never stick your dick in crazy. It never ends well.
Arguing over AR-type dolls when MG dolls are infinitely superior.
>>40215692And besides, best T-doll derived from the Armalite platform is STAR or True Protagonist.
>>40215715I would shoot in her school, if you get what I'm saying
>>40212034I want to believe that's HW Bush.
>all these ARs and even an MGThere is only one correct answer.
>>40215462>if you don't like butthurt-chan, that means you like M16A(IDS)1
>>40215972I'm sorry. There's not enough slots for you.
>>40216307fuck you you piece of shit die die die die
>>40215972This, literal perfection and also my wife.>>40216307I hope you die.
>>40212508no im not, im fed but had the pleasure to work with them
>>40216307JD, I'm gassing you.
Look, I see /wfg/ is a pro Springfield thread, but I'm just putting it out there that PTRD is good too
>>40218395>mfw when I find russian accents really sexy>mfw that picturewhy can't she be real bros
>>40213185>Aids1That's a new one.Anyway, Soppo, M4A1... They're cinnamon rolls.Aids1 as you so eloquently referred to her, is a cunt toward 416, who, admittedly, has something to prove or something. >>40213255I don't like yuri.
>>40218478>>40218395CORRECT!God I want AN94. Something about demure shy girls... And then them flustering... Yeah, that gets me off.>AN94 flustering in russian accent.>Trying to gently gain just enough of her trust that she doesn't back away from you like some kind of monster.>Getting her to just barely be receptive enough to receive your affections as she blushes.
>>40218562>>40218478Don't get me started on slavic accents. It's 100% unf
>>40218562my heart cannot handle the feels
>>40218659Look up russian accent asmr if you're into that shit. It's so fucking relaxing.
>>40218681I uhh, have something of the sort available already. Its great.Also next story will be ZAT inspired, but without the Z's
>>40217639I thought autodefensa is a legitimate part of mexican government now? Or are they still vigilante?
>>40218733explain zat fur me
>>40218941Zombie army trilogy. Basically undead version of sniper elite. Kinda meh game, but Mission 3-1 has a completely unique and very interesting atmosphere to it, which I will try and capture and refine a little. I think it will be cool
>>40219034Thank you JTfag, very cool. Will there be testicle shots?
>>40218910still vigilante but the one on Michoacan got the closest thing to be "sanctioned" and by that i mean a good chunk of the most sane leaders got arrested
>>40218490She's got a short temper, but that cunt-y behavior stems from 416's lashing out from an inferiority complex.She needs to keep up the big-sister schtick with 416 as well and not just default to being a bitch to her whenever 416 starts acting weird.
>>40219093Uhh. I don't have any of the sort planned. I'm less interested in the game and more the atmosphere of that particular mission. That said, any game you can actually shoot Hitlers balls off is worth a play in my book
Will be posting the next draft shortly.
>>40219905kewl beans when lewdz of daughterfu
>>40220614Currently holding off on that arc due to lack of progress on the Parks arc.For now, I want to get this story moving forward before I go back to rewriting that side of things.
What scares you, /wfg/?>writing up 5+ posts and getting no (you)s>disinterest in your story>telling people you'd finish writing a story, but instead laze around because you're not inspired to and feel guilty for getting someone's hopes up.
>>40221311Dying alone and not finishing my work.This work is literally what's keeping me going along with a few other things.>fever dream blonde elf GF who told me I wasn't a bad person
>>40221311I know that exact feeling i've been trying top work on my shit, and make it an actually decent story but I only managed a couple paragraphs
>>40221311What scares me is trying to take a shit, but the shit is too hard and I can't push it out and then my intestines rupture
>>40208474Definitely that. Thank you, Anon.
>>40221365I wish I had waifus come to me in dreams.
>>40181769Miculek type, target shooter, paintballer, chairsofter lel,Nat Geo dioomsday level survivalist crazy who is competent and actually has OPSEC, crazed chemist with all sorts of smoke and sploddy things to use... combined with stealth/ ambush/ movement tactics gained from: Competition, books, vidya....? Whatever sounds least cringey, without also be boot lickery.
>>40186725Please, no Memelitian, not that anon, but I feel militia is worse than veteran status.
>>40225766but we all militamen faggot
>>40225745Multi-gun competition shooter seems like the most plausible to me. Or hardcore airsofter tbqh, as much as people think it's cringe, it does a much better job of teaching you useful paramilitary skills than just shooting on a static range. Shit like movement, teamwork and communication, which is honestly more important in a real combat scenario than pure shooting skill.
bump for qt gheists
>>40227950Not if you spell it with an H
>>40228236spelt thet wai en warhemmer 40k
Who here up for /realsongposting/ hours?https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nP-AAlZlCkM
>>40229235https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vy3KBgT1dRwAm I doin it right?
>>40219851>Shoot Hitler's balls off in a gameNew plan
>>40229925But am I doing it right? https://youtu.be/DZe3KNX5fLA
>>40221311>don't get many (you)s>ones i do get are asking about stories i've long run out of ideas for
>>40221311That I'll let all of my readers down by never finishing my story. That I'll continue to find reasons or excuses not to write and that I'll have my unfinished work hanging over my head forever.
>>40225766You do realize where you are don't you?
>>40231022ah, i see you too feel these feels
>>40225699Don't, you feel miserable when you wake up and reality hits you like a freight train.
>>40233074>A-10 chases them home and has her way with them.>>40233399Praise be to the holy RPG
Sorry I've been gone for a while. Christmas and all that. I'll be getting back into writing her in a bit.>furfags raided the boardCan someone explain this to me?
>>40233662what's there to explain? some faggot flooded the board with furry pics and it took the jannies a couple of hours to pull their dicks out of each other's asshole and actually do their job, and that's assuming they didn't do it themselves for shits and gigglesI'm honestly more surprised about anons making a big deal out of it
Just think. One day 4chan-ers will raid 4chan.What a future.
>>40233810>One day>futureboy do I have some news for you
>>40233799It's probably good that people aren't making a big deal out of it. That's what the degenerate subhumans want, so we shouldn't give it to them. Don't feed the trolls kids.
https://youtu.be/SsuYtETPx5sJust a little something to listen to, maybe it'll inspire someone. (I have a bet or two on just WHO, but you know.)
>>40231277I'm sturdier than I look.
>>40233405Your pic reminded me of something...
>>40181444What does /k/ like to read? Looking for a new book to read innawoods
>>40237720a book ABOUT innawoods? or just FOR innawoods?Few suggestions>Roadside picnic>Unintended consequences (basically boomer siege. Join your local middle aged militia group! 1996! Day of the shakeweight!)>You don't lose 'till you quit trying>Weapons of choice.>Without Warning>The guns of the south>World war:in the ballance, by Harry Turtledove (Aliens invade after WWII)
>>40237938Something you think is interesting. Haven't read a book in a few months, it will be read when I am camping in a few weeks
>>40237938A few nonfiction suggestions.Hans von Luck's "Panzer Commander." My first and currently only experience with German WWII memoirs, and a fascinating read.Michael Durant and Steven Hartov's "The Nightstalkers." Because the guys who fly our special forces to the objective don't get enough love. One of my top 5 books of any genre.Max Hastings "the Korean War." Only just started this one, but I'm liking his ability to cover the broader strokes and the average soldier's experience, plus bonus points for lesser-known war.
I'm at a constant loss as to how to start Don's arc. So far there's a few ideas I've got rolling around in my head.I've gone through at least three writes and rewrites with the daughterfu story but I'm at a total loss as to where I would start his story in conjunction with the main line.
>>40239947I'll be posting a collection of Don's arc that I've been writing over the past three months. It all seems to flow decently.
I wrote something, my first story. Probably shit but there you go. https://pastebin.com/u/Datmando
I FINALLY FIGURED OUT DON'S ARC GUYS!https://pastebin.com/ndLVUVpAAlso, ULF update as promised.https://pastebin.com/QdHvJsp5
>>40241105>thrown in the not-gulag for stabbing a guy>calls them snowflakes
>>40241105>in not-gulag for stabbing people to "demonstrate the flaws of anarchism">kills skinwalkers with Doomguy(girl?)>replaced the house plans with an autistic design for the lulz>put in cell 88>meet up with Russian buddy Ivan>Russian buddy is immortal>meet explosives crazed totally-not-meguminYour Like Michigan but even more autistic. That has merit.
>>40241127Don's arc looks good. Just enough mystery for me to want to read more without being confusing or irritating. I'll read ULF either later today or tomorrow and offer my thoughts on that when I do.
>>40245234Apologies in advance for the obvious mistakes.
I've been away for a few months.Has Barrett-senpai posted any more updates?
>>40241105lol xd hahaha so randum xd uwu memes
>>40246051this pls, and poly can you maybe pls add a recently updated section to the OP
A short excerpt of a Red Dawn Reboot.https://youtu.be/Kq6WRUWOlfo?list=PL04241B5BECB628602nd Lt. Brian Williams leaned into the M60’s commander’s hatch as he fought the corded microphone of the radio. The command section leaned against the numerous oak and hemlock trees that dotted the intersection.>“Captain, you’re coming in broken and unreadable, say again!” 2LT Williams swore as he handed the mic back to the Tank Commander. “Thank you, Staff Sergeant, for loaning us your radio.”>“Williams! What’d the Captain say?” said a gruff voice from behind him.Turning to face his friend, Sergeant First Class Ryan Gordon, 2LT Williams replied, “Jack shit. All I heard was static. I don’t know what the fuck we’re supposed to be doing. For all we know, the Reds are already in Montana.” Williams leapt down from the tank, SFC Gordon handed him his M16A2 as he landed.>“What do you think we should do then?” SFC Gordon said, adjusting the belt of 7.62x51 around his neck. “You wanna wait here? For the Reds to come to us?”>“No. I don’t want to sit on my ass, but I can’t do shit unless I get word from the Captain. I sure as hell don’t want to be the guy responsible for letting the Reds punch through our lines.” 2LT Williams checked his watch. “Look, if we can’t raise the Capt’n in another ten minutes, we’ll send one of the humvees to the front to figure out what’s going on.”>“In the meantime, get Squad One to shut the fuck up. I can hear them from here.” 2LT Williams ordered, walking over the radio operator.>“Understood.” SFC Gordon jogged across the road, where Sergeant Elias’s Rifle Squad were hidden in the bushes. Halfway across, SFC Gordon saw SGT Elias in a dead sprint towards him, his helmet-mounted AN/PRR-9 radio in hand.>“Gordon! Get this to the Lieutenant, now!” Elias shouted frantically.
>>40247322Without a word, SFC Gordon snatched the radio from Elias’s outstretched hand and took off.…>“Williams! Williams! Get up here!” shouted the Tank Commander from his cupola, radio mic in hand. “Transmission from Major Watson!”2LT Williams clambered up the side of the M60 at olympic speeds, snatching the radio mic from the Tank Commander.>[...units are to fall back to Pine Valley. Soviet motorized infantry have punched through the Tacoma defensive line. Watson, out. May God save us.]>“What do we do, Lieutenant? Retreat?” the Tank Commander asked the 2LT.>“Williams! Williams!!”2LT Williams looked around for the Sergeant First Class, spotting him with radio-in-hand as he burst through the bushes.>“We got Reds pushing through the town! Elias caught it on his squad’s freq, Motorized rifle platoon, with BMP and T-62 support; they just punched through Johnson’s platoon!” SFC Gordon shouted. “What are your orders?!”>“Shit! It’s too late to retreat now. Order everyone to dig in and prepare for combat!”...>“I want Squad One and Three to dig whatever foxholes they can behind the road. Spread the Weapons Squad between the two, but I want an M60 here, in front of the tank. I want Squad Two to go ahead and find a good ambush to hit those BTRs before the Reds can dismount.” 2LT Williams ordered as his radio operator began relaying orders to the other squads, “As soon as Squad Two engages the enemy, I want them to pop smoke and get their asses back here. I want all squads to hold their fire until they can see their stinking communist faces!”2LT Williams turns to the Tank Commander.>“Staff Sergeant, I want you to hold fire until you see a T-62A. The moment you have a guaranteed shot on one, you take it. When you do, you have free reign to engage at your leisure.”
>>40247333>“Got it.” The Tank Commander ducked inside the turret, relaying the information to his crew.>“Gordon! I want you here, by the tank! Set up your ‘60 right here!” the 2LT ordered.>“You are not allowed to die until you’ve killed twenty of those Commies! You hear me?!?!” 2LT Williams shouted over the platoon radio.…Before long, Squad Two could hear the rumble of a BTR’s diesel engine, with more and more slowly growing louder. It wasn’t long until the fast-moving convoy of BTRs came into sight. The first two BTRs had their infantry riding aboard the back of the armored vehicle, whereas the last two vehicles were slick and smooth, their infantry most likely riding inside.~~~I don't know if I'll continue this. To be honest, I kinda got burnt out halfway through, and I don't know if you guys will enjoy a half-hearted story. I know I probably wouldn't. If there's interest, I guess I could write some more or at least finish this scene.>BTR-80s get hit by man-portable M72 LAWs.>Soviets don't know whether to shit or go blind.>Infantry pop smoke and sprint back under suppressive fire from the three M60s, tracers flying inches overhead.>T-62A rolls forward through the smoke and gets beaned by an APCBC round from the M60A1.>Soviet infantry spread out and go prone, return fire.>M60A1 loads WP and roasts some commies with "smokescreen">Soviet GP-25 grenades start tearing up one of the rifle-sqauds.>The 2LT orders the M60A1 to move to support.>Soviet Mi-28 arrives as the M60A1 is out in the open.>The tank commander heroically returns fire with the pintle-mounted .50>Drives the helicopter away, but not before it fires an ATGM and knocks out the tank, cooking it off.>More soviet reinforcements arrives, more BTRs wipe out another rifle squad.>SFC Gordon dies from a soviet bayonet, after his M60 jams. Pulls a grenade, taking the commie with him.>Platoon is wiped out, only the command squad left.cont.
>>40247426>2LT grabs a LAW, radio operator is shot.>2LT is the last remaining. As the BTR rolls forward with the advancing Soviet infantry, he fires the LAW.>Soviet infantry unload into him.>2LT Williams' rifle division successfully slows an entire Soviet mechanized regiment.>2LT is posthumously promoted to Captain and awarded the Silver Star.>Soviets report they destroyed three rifle companies.
>>40247524I thought it was nice little piece but if you're feeling uninspired it may be better to leave it as is
Oh, and I forgot to mention that Ise/k/ai's update is nearly done. Still haven't written any of Anon's alternate story yet, but expect claymores, napalm, flamethrowers, WP mortars innawoods to remove knife-ear. But maybe save knife ear. Maybe.And I've got another story coming. >A/k/ademyIf any of you remember Doki Doki Marksmanship Club, it's in a similar vein to that, except without the dokis.Have some teasers.>AK Gyarus>Machinegun rich girls>Gucci AR-15 Hime-sama that bullies the girl who can only afford a PSA-kit AR>snobby HK girls>Preppy FN chicks.>the girl who always wears a GP-5 and always has an SKS and/or nugget within arm's reach. Also carries nugget food in her pockets.Maybe I'll write this in a screenplay. Want to try my hand at a SoL romcom ala tsurezure children.
How would you guys feel about a light novel that follows a special police team in an alternate history where Germany won the war? It would be set in the late 1950s on the Autobahn and in various locations in the eastern colonies. It would feature flashy uniforms, BMW 507 pursuit cars, HK33 esque STG56s in 7.92 "Improved Kurz", Walther P5s, early body armor, etc. It'd also feature all hand drawn art in the style of Ryoichi Ikegami (perhaps a an illustration/page per 20 pages because I'm lazy). Giv feedback plz
>>40249400>BMW 507i literally couldn't care for the rest of that sentence, fucking do it. Do it now
>>40249440In a black and green police scheme of course.
>>40249464wouldn't it be green and white? I'm pretty sure old german police cars were green and white. Or is this changed for this alternate history?
>>40249519Changing it to black and green. I think it would fit the theme better as the Orpo is basically an extension of the SS.
>>40249579Ah, okay. Baddies with a 300SL as a getaway maybe? I'm pretty hype at any rate
>>40249713>Baddies with a 300SL as a getaway maybe?Yes, or early Ferrari 250 GTs.
>>40249400How do you get around the fact that krautistan will inevitably either run out of oil or get nuked into a radioactive cinder?There's alternate history, and then there's pure fantasy. Germany winning the war falls solidly into the latter category.
>>40249782>Germany winning the war falls solidly into the latter category.In the alternate history, Wendell Willkie narrowly wins the US elections in 1940 and anti war sentiments are much stronger in the US. Japan accepts Proposal B in mid-November, agreeing to withdraw from the Pacific in return securing oil imports. Japan decides to pursue the Soviet Union with Nazi Germany. Germany is able to secure the Baku oil fields in 1942, crippling Soviet industry. The Soviet Union also suffers as the Lend Lease program does not occur. The Soviet Union and Germany sign a peace treaty in late 1944 after they're effectively pushed well into the Urals.
>>40249860*In mid-November of 1941. Jesus Christ.
>>40249860this means germany never crosses the channel, right? Or no? What about france?
>>40249400DO IT NOW
>>40249860>anti war sentiments are much stronger in the USPearl Harbor changes that though, not FDR. And even if the Japanese don't attack Pearl Harbor, the US isn't just going to stop trading with Britain. Which means that the krauts have to allow the US to continue feeding the Brits, or they are forced to either declare war or sink American vessels without a declaration of war, and you get the same thing that brought the US into WWI. 1940's America is not going to tolerate another power sinking their ships.>Japan decides to pursue the Soviet UnionWould never happen. I know some generals in the Imperial Army wanted to, but the Imperial Navy and the government as a whole would never have allowed it. The USSR gave Japan an extremely bloody nose at Khalkhyn Gol, and the Japanese were so unwilling to risk war with Russia that they actively avoided sinking American ships they thought might be headed for Russia. >Germany is able to secure the Baku oil fieldsHow exactly? Scorched earth has been Russia's strategy since the beginning of time. If they think they're about to lose the oil fields, they're going to smash all the equipment and set the oil on fire. Russians would literally rather destroy their entire country than let someone else have it. >The Soviet Union and Germany sign a peace treatyThis, like most attempts to make germany win, requires Hitler to not be Hitler. He was absolutely obsessed with destroying the Soviet Union. It also requires Stalin to not be Stalin. >>40249959>this means germany never crosses the channel, right?They never could have. Fears of Germany crossing the channel were propaganda generated by the British government to maintain support for the war. Germany invading Britain requires both the Royal Navy and Royal Air Force to magically disappear.
>>40250018Addendum: the notion of Germany and Japan cooperating in any meaningful way is silly on its face. Their alliance was extremely tenuous at best, they had totally different goals, and they both thought eachother were subhumans. The only thing they actually had in common was enemies, specifically the US and the British Empire.
>>40250074and the notion that a gun turns into a girl and one can fuck it is silly on its face. Where do you think you are?
>>40249860>Germany is able to secure the Baku oil fields in 1942, crippling Soviet industryYou realize that Russia has many more oilfields, right? Most of which are east of the Urals.
>>40250106I'm glad you've conceded my point that Germany winning is a fantasy on par with geist stories.
>>40250139the point is "Don't take it seriously". Dude's trying to make a story. We know germany lost the war, hence the "Alternate" bit
>>40250184All I was looking for was an acknowledgement that it was utterly impossible. I got no problem with fantasies (even autistic, cringeworthy ones) as long as people understand that they're fantasies.
>>40250018>How exactly?Most of the petroleum and industrial centers were captured during Case Blue with little to no damage. >this means germany never crosses the channel, right?No I don't plan on having them attack the United Kingdom.>>40250125The oilfields around Baku comprised 72% of total Soviet oil production. The oil at Baku was easy to reach, while other sites within the Soviet Union required deep drilling. Don't worry I did a little bit of research before coming up with this. http://karbuz.blogspot.com/2006/10/oil-logistics-lesson-from-wwii-3.html>>40250074>they both thought eachother were subhumansok retardGlad the thread was blown up over a fictional story I wanted to write. >>40250210>as long as people understand that they're fantasies.I just wanted to write autistic Nazi car chases, not have a debate on whether Germany could've actually won the war or not. Jesus Christ.
>>40250210Maybe the US doesn't wanna be in the war, maybe Japan didnt attack, maybe stalin fucked up even more. Yes, all thi sdidn't happen, but it's fun as a thought excercise. And makes for a good story, maybe. We will see!
>>40250219>The oilfields around Baku comprised 72% of total Soviet oil production. The oil at Baku was easy to reach, while other sites within the Soviet Union required deep drillingYes, obviously you rely on the easy to reach stuff when you can because it's cheaper. Doesn't mean they wouldn't have been able to access the other stuff.
>>40250219>I just wanted to write autistic Nazi car chases, not have a debate on whether Germany could've actually won the war or not>get asked question>make argument>get pushback>i-it was just a prank brosasuga wehraboo
>>40250267I would argue that they would not be able to ramp up production fast enough to meet demand but I digresse. Do you think my story is interesting enough to warrant writing? >>40250295>it was just a prank broAre you gonna respond to what I said or strawman me instead? Or, rather, would you be interesting in reading the story I proposed?
How in the holy mother of fuck do I write post-apocalyptic /k/ fiction without quoting from Fallout, Mad Max, Metro 2033, Escape from New York, or anything like that? I've been creating character sheets for a story I want to write about post-Yellowstone eruption America but every story idea I come up with seems unoriginal. I already created flags for two of the factions and everything but it all seems like it's been done to death before.
>>40250308just steal all the ideas that fit if you can because having fun is more important than being original
>>40250346>having fun is more important than being originalthisalso, mad max is fucking awesome, any inspiration from there is good
>>40250308Take bits and pieces here and there, and combine it into something original. Taking inspiration from stuff doesn't mean you're blatantly copying. Most people won't even realize. Don't sweat it, man.
>>40250308Mind if we see some of those faction flags and character sheets? I’m interested
>>40250308Why quote from them when you can write your own version?Also >caring about originality when you're having funMy story is literally a noir-style cross between Logan and Strike Back.
>>40250210you are such a faggot
>>40250414Sure thing. This is the faction sheet for the villains of the story. The time period for this story isn't specific aside from being somewhere in the late 90s and early 2000s(Sort of like Half Life 1). Try to ignore the typos.
>>40250625This one is the hero faction. More disorganized of a faction comprised of mostly former civilian gun owners and stuff. I'm big into metal so I thought using some of the aesthetics from the 80s bands would blend well with the apocalyptic setting.>>40250346>>40250382>>40250463Thanks for the encouragement. I don't know when I'll get around to writing this as college is starting back up soon, but I'll post it if I do
>>40250648Were you one of the Ashlands writers?
>>40186158I wrote my story near the beginning of /wfg/, the Howa one to be specific. I took a break and came back to see the geist concept is now out of fashion.It was the main appeal for this thread to me. Now it's basically gone.
>>40250219mate, just go ahead with your story, it seems pretty promising.don't bother with the 'germany always loses' crowd, they can't be convinced otherwise
>>40251189Waffengeists will be out of fashion around the same time the sun goes out!
>>40250210>>40250295it's retards like you who cause writers to stop writing just so they don't have to deal with you.
>>40251189>the geist concept is now out of fashion.there are still some of us who write geist stuff, though I haven't posted anything in a while.
>>40250371Oh boy then do I have a story for you
>>40249782Way to be a Fucking retard it's a hypothetical
>>40250306It's cool. I'm solidly anti wheraboo and know Germany would never win in our time line -- but that is not the fucking point
>>40247524>>40247614I second this anon. You're at your best when your heart's in whatever you're writing, so save yourself for inspiration.
>>40247615A/k/ademy sounds fucking neat. I'd like to see that when you've got it.Also, knife-ear should only be saved for breeding.
>>40249400That sounds like something I want. Impossibility of German victory aside, I have a fetish for oppressive police units. And HK33s.
>>40250018Hey, I think this anon's on to something. Who could have run the Nazis besides Hitler? Any ideas?
>>40250382Fucking this. Don't lean to heavily on any particular work, or it will look lazy or like fan wank. But if you steal bits of other people's good ideas, you can create something beautiful and unique that's (sorta) all your own.
>>40250625>bad guy in chief is literally obsessed with the Nazi aesthetic>designs and army that goes full right wing death squad>late '90s early '00sI'm in.
>>40250648>sks gatlings>all that metal/punk aestheticAutisticlly beautiful.
>>40185602noted>>40246051he actually did>>40246765recently updated section is a tad much of work did it on the beggining of the thread and it was eh>>40249400do it faggot, this sounds like i would read the shit out of this>>40250210you must be such a fun person>>40251189most writers have finished their geist stories or are busy as shit with life, not so much like going out of fashion it made a comeback with new writers due to that GFL game
>>40251021Surprisingly no, but the concept did strike a chord with me when I did read a few of the threads. Was actually partially worried that what I came up with would be a ripoff of the Ashlands threads>>40253039>>40253062I'm glad you like it so far, here's the last main big faction I had planned. I modified it from an existing /k/ loadout thread image I had made(hence the typos about them using MG3s in the helicopter).
>>40250625But if most areas they control prosper, why do they need to be brainwashed? It just doesn't make sense.
>>40253489I'd argue that prosperity isn't enough to stop people from complaining about an authoritarian government. Brainwashing ensures that they will serve the government unquestioningly.Also, for the evulz.
>>40253420I was gonna bitch about using the stryker, but then I looked it up and saw it entered service in '02. So I like it. Also, nice use of the older flag design to signify the loss of much of the country.
How would /k/ like a man romancing his gun story?
>>40252141its lowres phone dude again, hows it going my easily angered friend
>>40254880Plot twist, no geists are involved.
>>40254931>>40254968Will do.>>40254996I'm jumping between "Cyberpunk AI sight waifu" and some other ideas.
>>40254923>lowres>implying there's an actual reason to put screens with HD -resolution on smartphones
>>40255014*FullHD I mean, 720p can handle 1080p just fine on TV -size screens, since smartphone screens are a fraction of the size of a TV screen I see no reason why a FullHD -screen or better would be necessary on a smartphone
>>40253216Please tell me it's archived somewhere. I've been following his work since early 2016.
>>40253068It's being worked on after I get done with current story
>>40255456different anon, are you referring to Barrett's stuff? it's binned
>>40255528Barrett's stuff, yeah. I saw his last update where Panni visits O'Connell in the hospital. Has he updated since then and the Pastebin hasn't been updated?
I Tell ya hwat. Trips decides what I do next, go.
>>40256250shove gun up pooper and post pics here
>>40254880Very much. Hasn’t been any for a while.
>>40256250write erotic geist story
>>40256250geist story about G11
>>40256616Rolling for this
>>40256250Give us a story about a crazy guy who kills people because his waifu tells him to.
>>40256250A lewd geist story in the style of Dr. Seuss.
>>40257428>>40257489a combination of this and this
For the final time:https://www.strawpoll.me/17214688Sorry for the lack of writing, had a lot of rl stuff to deal withJust FYI I'll actually write a lewd story if you guys really want it, just give me some time, I'm not good at writing lewd things
>>40254880bruh, you don't even need to askthe answer is always yes
>>40259269>I'm not good at writing lewd thingsthen... don't?
>>40256250romancing tank waffengeists
>>40259380haven't we had that?
>>40259376Sorry, phrasing, I'm not good at writing lewd things quickly
>>40259438not much compared to all the gun geists(i'm just a tank guy)
>>40211491>Over there....>Like heroes into the sunset they marched>Their duty fulfilled they go back>Over there...https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B6hRDS3LvQQ
>>40258180for the love of God someone do this
>>40256250Write that literal self insert AN94 GFL story that you promised me!
Get this whore to 310 already so i can make a new thread. Poly is off doin big boy shit and asked me to cover. expect my usual loving witticism, you fuckin degenerates.
>>40263347you going to ever update the bin for the Stargate/Star Wars -crossover fanfic?
would the geist of a tank be called a panzergeist?
>>40263417it'd be a straight lie if i said i had any idea what you're talkin about
and now we wait for the thread to hit page 8 or so
>>402634481) go to your pastebin2) look for "Hanssen" (two "S"es)
>>40263448>>40263475you know, this one? https://pastebin.com/34G4Qehc you binned it to a point & then stopped
>>40263475I'm also gonna need where the hell the new stuff is posted. This is the first I've been in thread in months as i have gotten lazier. I say poly does all the work and that isn't a joke. he just keeps me in the sticky because he refuses to let me not take some credit for archiving.
>>40263500>where the hell the new stuff is posted.aside from desuarchive, nowhere, that's kind of the reason I'm asking because Desuarchive's search remains broken
i'll see if i have hanssens info on my archiver email or anywhere else. if i don't we may be SOL. if i do, i'lll harass him for a copy of what he has.
>>40263417>>40263448>>40263475>>40263494>>40263500>>40263520I'll re-re-repost the missing parts in the next thread
was that you self posting askin me where it was or did the powers of summoning work again?
would anyone believe me if I said it's the latter?
its worked before.>inb4 wfg discord denial summoning again
>>40263923>>40263923>>40263923>>40263923>>40263923 New bread
>>40263429"caretaker" if we go by JT cannon
>>40263962I'm not sure i want to do it exactly like he did, though I do like the idea that they can appear independently from the tank and control it. I'm gonna start writing.
>>40263429i like panzergeist