Post your recent work! I will be responding to every post with critique. Everyone must give at least one critique. Go!
>>370682Ok, I’ll bite.Here’s a bunch of homemade TTRPG adventure hook cards I’ve made to give away at Gen Con as a calling card to demonstrate my prepress/production background, GD, and illustration.Critique of your post: the lighting on the woman is significantly different from the dude on the right that it’s a distraction.
>>370686Edit: packs of cards.
>>370686>critiqueeverything looks good to me
>>370700I like the motion on the wind up.
The cover of a book I just finished. It's rough, and It's my first time doing anything like this, but I like how it turned out.
>>370781learn about antialiasing
Here is my latest practice, tried to make it A E S T H E T I C as possible, but i think i fucked up.
>>370700This looks really nice. The colors came through perfect.>>370686Wow how long did all that take you and did you get any opportunities after? Good stuff>>370781I love the black and yellow one of my favorite combos. This image is really striking but you might want to add more detail depending on what you're trying to convey>>370790I like it. Would look better with a different background color like gray or bluePic related I made this yesterday for shits and giggles
>>370805who are you to give advice your work is well below par, in fact its awful
>>370805(>>370686 here) about 2 weeks on and off, couple casual hours a night. As for whether or not they’ll yield, I don’t know! Gen Con starts on Thursday.
I made this to practice after having not made anything whatsoever for like a year, and depending on feedback, im considering putting it into a portfolio to try to find work in the field.>>370781 i really enjoy the placement of the doorway and door in the whole image, however if it were up to me the door would have a tiny bit more detail (minimal hinges, knob, etc.)>>370805if your goal was to give me nightmares, you've succeeded
how could I improve this (made in ms paint)not bait
>>370805it be cool if you gave him a blunt
>>370813it looks pretty solid
Apparently you cant save images on the store through mobile. Here is one I did recently.
One more piece to blow you away.Thoughts?
>>370700I love the smearing paint and the motion blur in this one. The whole thing had enough detail to tell who it is and yet enough editing to make it look like it goes on a baseball card.Did you use Illustrator or PS?
>>370821Shadow should be a bit darker and slightly transparent if you can make it that way, especially since the image will be in sunlight. Also the shading on Gondola can definitely go for some smoothing. Overall very entertaining would buy if Teepublic wasn’t a fucking scam
>>370822This is the worst thing I’ve ever seen!Thanks!
>>370815put this on the clip for +5 bonus style pointsso when these 5 are added to the 64 points this already had, your pic's gonna have a total of 69 points, which, in turn, will unlock the "Pussy Smasher Deluxe" achievement
>>370825Teepublic is a scam? Please elaborate. I use this and Redbubble.
>>370686>Ok, I’ll bite.reddit
>>370682terrible>>370686you know these are good, why have you even put it in this thread for noobs>>370781this is a terrible copy of a famous movie poster (cant remember which one)>>370790your use of sort edges is ridiculous, how can you get something so basic so wrong>>370805back to /r/ for you >>370815dont pretend this isn't bait>>370821meh. shadow to short, what is that border on the shadow all about>>370822playing with filters till you think something looks good isnt skill, also back to /r/ for you>>370830maybe you are this bad
>>370831My gf uses it and it’s just a shame to see so little of the money made from the sale go to the artists (red bubble is infinitely worse though)
sorry for the edgy name
i made this too
>>370790This is boring and lame and boring again with ugly colours>muh ashtechic cringe>looook it’s the worlds most boring gril XD sitting in a single colour XD U suck
>>370866>>370867fuuuuuck this suck dick soooo much.Están dlv, bro.
>>370867>>370866Wtf is this eye vomit
>>370813>horizontally scaled copy in the footer>light sans for small print recommended
>>370848>this is a terrible copy of a famous movie poster (cant remember which one)I was thinking Lost Highway but it might actually be this one which was a campaign for road safety.
>>370821Try making the shadow darker and longer so that it's almost bleeding off of the front of the t-shirt as it's laid flat, but make turn it into a black and white gradient with a multiply blending mode (if Illustrator. If Photoshop, just make the shadow black to transparent) so it fades into the solid background.
>>370682Logo, type, and color scheme for my thesis project.We're branding a not-for-profit restaurant that employs refugees, former homeless, etc. and uses proceeds from paying customers to feed those who typically can't afford a nice meal
>>370885not a fan.I see what you were trying to do with the m's in common, but it just doesn't read well or look good. also why is there a wave there? what does that have to do with the brand? Since "Common" and "Good" share a few letters, maybe you can look into a solution where the two words shared some letters, as it'd be a relevant visual metaphor since the brand is essentially about sharing/giving back to the less fortunate.I like Cooper for this project because its warm, welcoming and humble, much like the brand is. I'd probably get rid of Walsheim bold because its weight is too close to the weight of Cooper Medium which may lead to hierarchy issues and just stick with Walsheim regular.I think your colors are fine; clean and welcoming.
>>370887Thanks for the feedback.Original plan was to use an angular wave to resemble linked arms, with the four peaks representing the four pillars of the charity: to feed, to educate, to provide employment, and to bring together the community (pic related). My partner and I agreed the rounded wave might look better.Thanks for the suggestion with interlinking the letters though, I'll definitely try that out
wipgotta clean up edges, maybe better font/color
>>370898no anti aliasing reminds me of ridge racer, which is a good thing. i'd push that
>>370877That’s actually really good advice, thank you anon
>>370686how is gen con nowadays? been there a long time ago and that's when magic was taking off and it was literally MTG... looks good though best of luck!
>>370682Just a tip. Use curves in PS to after turning to black and white so you can match the colors if both pictures if the originals are colored
rate my logo :^)
Just a fake Instagram post I made for a challenge from an advertising agency.Winning art wins a job hiring.
>>370925The abstraction is so surreal.Great job mashing random shapes together into a logo, what is that supposed to represent?
>>370885At first I thought that said “Coon Good”Seriously though if that stylized m isn’t an absolute necessity I’d recommend ditching for another style like >>370887 said
I made a poster to promote an amateur jazz festival at my university
>>370946is that super Nintendo rainbow road>>370926SEXTA
>>370960anyone know what font this is?
>>370965did you actually do that? or just use the cutout filter?
>>370965>>370967I'm not trying to belittle you if you did just use it, but rather if you actually made it, I would be curious how.
>>370972>>370967no Im working on the High Speed Ring one, but I'm styling it after vintage tourism/motorsports posters
How could I make this look more manly /gd/?It's supposed to be for a transportation company that deals in trucks, but the client wants a redesign. How do I make it more tough and manly?>>370813The fade from the space circle looks kinda off considering the overall style. Maybe try a stroke, or something (maybe a window??).I think it would help if the girl had something to sit on. Also maybe add a feather, those cuts are a bit sketchy.The text should also be less sharp an more textured if you're going for that aesthetic.Overall the idea is pretty good, but I wouldn't put it in a portfolio as it is right now.>>370925I doesn't really convey anything, it just looks like random shapes.>>370926The drop shadow on the subtitle should be closer to the text, other than that, pretty good.>>370965This looks awesome, I'd put some shadow underneath the tent and bring he top text a bit more down so it has some breathing room
Please don't be rude
>>371241Uh.>>371446Ribbon and sugar cane kinda looks like suicide material, and your purple glittering thingy looks like a puprle turd, I get your sky idea but it also can be seen as "hey the lil nibba hang himself well, welcome to heaven pal" kind of vibe. Overall it's okayish.>>371481Generic af and you didnt even try to work on the flower, so yeah are you one of those that just follow trendy/easy PS tuts then called himself a GD ?
>>370682>>370781Try different colors, actually a nice idea but needs some tuning
>>370686too hard to shoot it dead on so it can actually be seen eh?>>370866boring composition>>370867also boring, no relationship between teh elements>>370885come back when you get some original ideas with colour, layout, type>>370925muddled and unfocused. here's a gift: "contrast".
>>371509this has too much shit in it and in result and has lost intended visual hierarchy.just show body of the instrument as a clear, flat shape, in text do not emphasize the 'joke' too much or at all ..and put logo tiny af in the corner so viewer would have to look for it.
>>371487>>371481Actually graduated as a GD few months ago. Also what's posted here are work done as a student's. And yes those are based on trendy/easy tutorial but hey , what can I say , it's what people often ask for. Also the flower picture quality was Mehh , not much to be done with it IMO.Have another one anon , thanks for the input.
>>370682dont desecrate holy 1+1pac with that little whore. fucking faggot.
I don't want to insult you but do they look like you would keep the card your self? They almost look like they belong in a child's game. There is really nothing that is jumping out at me saying this is an important card that I need to keep. It's just an istant reaction.
>>371567i think you are deluded to your own talentbasically you're fucking terribleplease don't make your own thread of this crap
>>371493>complaining about a photo on 4chan>>370686 here- no, it’s not hard at all. I just didn’t want to put in the effort to take one for a share thread where we’re all generally assholes.
>>370682I like how the subjects in the photo work with the black-and-white picture style to create this sort of mish-mash of meanings that could be taken in the viewer's perspective. 10/10 best design.
What the fuck has happened to this board.
>>370898Pretty cool but you really gott change the colour of the fonts, just generally leave the mint green out i think>>370926I mean this just seems so uninspired by anything. just feels cheap to me.>>370946this was obviously fun to make but i don't know its almost a little too much, in the end i like it though
>>370867>>370866leave this style to people who can actually do it well like david rudnickthis is something i did the other day as some sort of creative vent because my job in graphic design makes me want to kill myself
just made this for a buddy's bowling team.
Hussle The great
I've never done any GD stuff before, zero experience. Any ideas how I could make this look more nostalgic or wistful or something to that effect? Or if a re-design is suggested what should I do? >>371874Very cool>>370813I like this a lot>>370781Also very cool, I'm not in any position to judge.>>370830Blyat
>>372087Same guy, I may just be a big retard but please excuse how fucking large it is when you click it. No idea why it's like that.