Putin isekai new chapter is outThis time is little more eventful, with lich, undead dragon and making army from saved slave childrenhttps://lhscan.net/read-the-ride-on-king-raw-chapter-7.html
The art for this series is so good.Is some of it CG? Sometimes I get that vibe, but it's not super obvious that I've noticed.
>>181697973Ok, so now he has a militia of child soldiers, when will he annex the kingdom?
>>181699221The mangaka is pretty established and already has a 50 volumes long series.https://www.mangaupdates.com/series.html?id=15194
>>181697973now that's what I call same face
>>181700825Fucking hell, the Minoru guy? I see it now but I wouldn't have guessed.
>>181697906for being a gimmick series, this one is surprisingly enjoyable
>>181697933Does Purchinov want to ride it?
>>181701688Wouldn't you want to ride an undead dragon so you can say you rode an undead dragon?But when is he going to ride the goldiggers and the lolibaba?
>>181701747>the lolibabaDude her mana's rotten.
>>181695822When did this get translated?
Is this the thread bros?
Tina is the most adorable thing, I wish I had a shorstack that cute with me.
I hate it when religion ruins yuri stories.
>>181705083This time it's communism as religion. And the bishop's name is Turbo Ultra Lesbo.
>>181704954I want to protect her smile (and tits).
>>181705211The girl just wants armor that fits her.
>>181703126>>181703082Where the hell do you read it?
>>181700789Do they have a warm water port?
>>181704954I'm looking forward to shortstack #2 as well.
>>181706112Vanilla Asanagi Doujins when
Ded, time to get isekai'd.
>>181707988How do we save /isekai/
>>181708461Every MC is now a FemMC, natural girls or genderbended guy. And forms a yuri harem. No balls futa is also acceptable as MC.
Sometimes I can't tell if those isekai are supposed to be parodies or not.
>>181709199>Weakest/worst class for adventurersHow the fuck are beast tamers bad?>Immediately overpowered at chapter 1Wow, definitely didn't see that one coming.>Bland, herbivore personality>Slimes can read books btw>Just happen to stumble upon a bunch of high tier spell books>Can cast spells that require more than your max mp pool>A dragon out of nowhere literally gets 1 shotted just as quick as it appearedThe list goes on and onThere's like zero effort in this thing
>>181700789>Ok, so now he has a militia of child soldiers, when will he annex the kingdom?Referendum first.
>>181705235wtf i'm a lesbian now
select your character
>>181710834>wtf i'm a lesbian nowAll men is lesbian...
God I wish that were me
>>181710442Elves can go and stay gone.
>>181712421gonna write an isekai about mass enslavement of elves, won't genocide them, i do like them
>>181712763>gonna write an isekai about mass enslavement of elves, won't genocide themI actually know one. In Russian.
>>181712894well then, only one thing for you to dotranslate, and post the linkbecause i am not going to add rusky to the list of languages i want to learn but i know that i wont
>>181712763You need to have at least one side chapter named, "Elf slave, what do?"
playboy updated again>>181711748>Check mangadex because it looks like a new chapter>Nothing in 2 months ugh
>>181713058>what do?mindbreak her into a lewd meat toilet
>>181713175>Nothing in 2 months>https://mangadex.org/chapter/488128/1?
>>181713030>well then, only one thing for you to dotranslate, and post the linkSorry, but i am bad in Russian >English translation :-) Only English > Russian.P.S. I wish to know japanese...
>>181713451Compared to bad jap mtl, how bad can it be?
>Hold on! I didn’t take a piss either…my pee pee! Where’s my pee pee!? Pee pee where are you!? I haven’t gotten to use it yet…why is it gone…Truly the greatest of all horrors is waking up and realizing that your penis is gone.
>>181713627Better, i guess.:-) But still bad. Also, too much work....Well, can discuss it with author, i guess. It is sold book series.P.S. Wafe of "Isekai" in Russia begins years ago, But here it is "Попаданцы", "those who appears there" in approximate translation.
>>181713403For some reason MD said it was already read.
Are there are isekai where MC s Kitsune/Kumiho/normal fox/whatever?Wuxia stories are okay too
>>181714529This series went really downhill once characters started to actually have dialogue
>https://dragon-quest.org/wiki/GadaboutMotherfucker, so that's why Playboy could class up to sage.
>>181714900Everything is a DQ reference, huh?
>>181715098It's a cultural icon for the Japanese so that's not really a surprise.
>>181715098Sometimes things are Wizardry references.
>>181700894what is this effect called?
Isekai Putin mind controlling a loli hag
>>181714686this was so cute and tender
>>181715803Give me the fucking sauce. I've seen that posted like 5 times now and no one gives me the sauce and I can't find it anywhere.
>>181697933>>181697906Lich will die (again) and Putin will ride the undead dragon until it wish it stay dead
>>181712763What the purpose of enslaving elves if they can't be raped?
>>181716679Well, they can be.
>>181715642That's quite the ahegao
Is it okay to put a slave in my isekai who's in her late 20s?
>>181717028It would be inappropriate not to.
>>181717028You are have good taste! Karurautsuurei is best!
>>181717147Anon you are drunk, go to bed.
>>181697906>Putin isekaiwait, what?
>>181717178It is her full name. With errors :-)Shortly - Karura, from Utawarerumono.
>Tanya is so happy about purging commies she goes overboard and makes the war intensifyThat's my businessman.
>>181717287Yeah but you are behaving kinda strange. You're creeping me out.
>>181717637Already a Tanya thread. Go post it there.
>>181718019No, I'm not going near those threads with a ten-foot pole.
>>181717637Is that the Prussian flag right in Moscow?
>>181718133Yeah, they planted them on just about every important place they could think of because Tanya really fucking hates the Reds and wanted to crush as much of their pride as possible.
>>181718180>Sacrificing notGermany's prospect of victory just to humiliate the commiesBased and redpilled
>>181719271>Heart shaped pupilsJesus fuck Arisa, how much of a slut are you?
>>181719342She really wanted the Satou D.
>>181719271How can people read this fucking sleeping pill
>>181715972Taimashi to akuma-chan
>>181719271Purple hair > Lizard > > > > Everyone else
What are you reading today?
>>181721268I wanted to write the first chapter of my own isekai, then the hard truth hit me that I'm a useless sack of shit and can't do anything.
>>181721444If you can't embrace the self-hate then how could ever write an isekai story?
>>181721444At least you're probably not as useless as Jahy
>>181721478At least there are people who would use jahy as onahole.
>>181721444of course you are a useless sack of shit, you never tryand when you do, you quit five minutes into itnow, if you want to be a useful sack of shit get to type that chapter, finish it, and type again, type until your fingers bleed and your keyboard is soaked with enough blood to hide the cum stains
>>181721444don't write a multi chapter novel. write a single chapter short story. even better if you can punch out a rough draft in a single sitting.I don't know about writing specifically but you don't get the full learning experience if you don't see something through to the end, no matter how short it is.
>>181721688It's just that all the interesting shit I want to write about happens later and I have to type a boring introduction for a world and characters that already exist in my head. By interesting shit I mean the waifus.
>>181721738Is this Chinese racial skill [copy paste]?
>>181721738the introductions are usually the most interesting part of a story, they're the hook that gets the reader invested in the rest. most anime/manga only need a few dozen lines dialogue from each girl before weeaboos are fighting over who's best girl.
>>181721913Yeah but think about writing it yourself. You pretty much know who your characters are supposed to be and what goal they have.
>>181702288i got that reference, translations when?
>>181721738Then write those parts and work backwards you can piece it together later on.
>>181722385I don't think I'm good enough to pull something like that off. I'd rather take my time with the boring shit and force my way through than write stuff out of order and possibly mess it up.
>>181721738If you're writing it for yourself then skimp during the introduction.
Said it once, said it a hundred times. Stop focusing on your plot gimmicks and focus on crafting interesting characters. The dialogues, development and plot will naturally form around good characters.
>>181722605Completely wrong. If this was true the isekai genre would be completely different.
>>181723198The most fondly remembered isekai stories are the character driven ones, not ones that only rely on their plot gimmick. These threads should be proof of that, 90% of discussions about series are about characters
>>181723316That's just shitty waifu-fagging from a bunch of autistic virgins.
>>181721268Bluesteel Blasphemer, http://ncode.syosetu.com/n5348dy/ a story about a necromancer that gets their love interest taken away and gets even, and this, https://ncode.syosetu.com/n3949bq/ found it, read the epilogue and decided I had to read the whole thing just because of that ending.
>>181723346no one reads mobsekai for the girls
>>181723346So, your audience?
>>181723346But what if my waifu is putin
>>181723473Then you have good taste. I applaud you vatnik.>>181723425I'm not a writer currently.>>181723423That's because fujos read it instead.
>>181723533no fujo reads mobsekai
>>181723632The anon you replied to is either misunderstanding various things extremely badly, or blowing hot air out his ass.
Someone picked up TS Reincarnation to the sub heroine. Can't wait to read the angry comments after this chapter.
>>181724125Fucking buggy laptop.*I haven't read this series yet, but this is the one, right? The one where the MC suddenly got raped by a dude confusing lust with love, and the translator dropped it in despair?
>>181724033>Can't wait to read the angry comments after this chapterMTL?
>>181724125To be fair I'd rape her too. Big poofy robes are my fetish.
>>181724160Yup, it is. The author has 3 straight chapters about Fio getting raped then it goes back to the "comedic" tone it had before
>>181721444>tfw wrote the start of my Isekai story>MC summoned along with half of an office supply store in the middle of the woods days from any other humanoid life>Story is pretty much just survival and the frustrating realization that everything is hard to do without the right tools>Afraid I'm going into too much detail for the story to be entertainingAlso feel like I need more suffering and strife, but not sure what kind I want. I can only use wild animals so much.
I AM THE ISEKAI
>>181724249I would too. White Mages are great.>>181724272Pretty disgusting, desu. anyone have an idea on how Japan received it? Rape can be a funny joke, despite what people say, but this doesn't sound anywhere close.
>>181721268i just found this one on RR where the MC goes back in time and strives to get fucking fitwe all gonna make it sister.
>>181724322loneliness, anxiety, disease, injuries, no shoes, cold, food poisoning etc
Get to work you chumps
Remember to be earnest and whole in your devotion.
>>181724322>office supply store>survival>without the right toolsIs this Isekai MacGyver? If it isn't, make it so.
>>181724531MAKING A BIG CATHEDRAL SO I CAN FUCK MY PATRON GODDESSMY NAME IS WILLIAM AND THAT'S MY DREAM.
>>181724577That's a pretty good dream to aspire to, really.
>>181724443I have all that, but again I feel like I'm going into too much detail. I honestly feel like I should time skip a bunch of it, but I wanted to have the MC spending time trying small amounts of the plants all around to see what he could actually eat, since it would also let him find a bunch of nasty poisons, which he'd have to suffer through.Lots of anxiety at missing all the comfort and entertainment of modern life, which is also the main motivator for his quest.Loneliness at first offset by all the work of survival, but eventually driving him out of the wilds to try to find people.But I have an issue with this. Did you know that even on top of a mountain that is 6000 feet high, you only get a line of sight of 100 miles, which makes actually finding anything quite difficult.But again, I'm wondering if this matters, but I really like realism, even unstated...
>>181724619Ayup, honest, even, shame the author got into a stump.
>>181724622What about awful painful shits?
>>181724548The point was actually that he'd have some access to the internet for a small period of time early on which he could use to print out a bunch of useful intel / watch videos. Also to have some tools, but not the right ones, and requiring a lot of work to get stuff out of it. Tough you get a surprising amount of good steel in a story like this, just for the rackings and display, turning it into anything usable would be a lot of work.
>>181724648That's actually not that much of an issue if there's not that much human or animal life around, plus it's a part of the "suffering through various poisonous foods to find what's eatable". One of the main weapons of my MC would be that knowledge of poisons with various effects, one of which certainly would be the bloody shits.
>>181724622find river > build raft (MUCH faster than walking) > reach coast > circle it until you find a port town. or die.if it's a tropical setting coconuts can keep you hydrated even without a river, but you still need to know which fruits are safe
>>181724644Really? Is that why there's no volume 5(6)? I was just thinking about how there's not much to do but prepare an army and kill the High King for good, unless they come up with some other god's conspiracy and implicate Will in it. Other than that, there's just those other dwarves that Al almost married into, and that half-elf waiting for Gus, or Gus's kids.
give your dude this and he's fine https://primitivetechnology.wordpress.com/
>>181724739aren't coconuts a natural laxative?
>>181724760Yep, you can check in his twitter, after the fight against vala he doesn't know where to take the story, quarkboy even told us to drop him a few comments back when vol5 was out, see if that cheers him a bit.
>>181724769if you drink a lot, yes, too much sodium. but hey, beggars can't be choosers
>>181724769Most plant liquids are, in large enough amounts. Maple water does it too. But honestly, eating any fruit in large amount also gives you the shits.>>181724765Yea stuff like this was going to be obliquely mentioned as a source of knowledge for a character who would otherwise have a hard time surviving by himself. But the stuff he makes still wouldn't result in comfortable living. Also honestly it's not that hard to make wattle and daub walls which would let you build something pretty well insulated and solid. I've done it IRL myself. Has he done any of that?Also my main love interest is a 6 and a half foot tall half orc maiden. But will that tickle anyone's fancy?
>>181724891it tickles mine, anyone with taste loves death by snu snu
Help a faggot out. I want to write an isekai where the MC gets some powers from a goddess. She's basically your onee-chan type with big udders, but how should she grant him powers? By giving him a kiss on the forehead or by dripping some unknown substance from her finger into his mouth while he kneels before her? Should the mc lick her finger clean?
>>181724983BLOOD OATH BROTHER
>>181724920Ok then, do I make the MC under 6', at 6', or over 6'? By the time he encounters her he'll be fairly muscular from his work, but not body-builder style regardless. I was thinking a bit shorter than her, but not massively so. Mainly I wanted him to "fit in" with a village full of those for period of time.
>>181724983Make the MC suck some milky tits, and have the goddess go>Ara ara, you are like a babygod, how I hate that phrase
>>1817250336', So he's not a total manlet but still not as big as a orc.
>>181724891will you go through how uncanny it is? a weird facial structure is enough to give most people the creeps, let alone a different species. Even robots made to look human look disturbing at best. do put heavy emphasis on that if you like realism
>>181725069You mean like this?
>>181725160Basically. Might be a bit too much if she's the ara ara onee-chan type, though.
>>181725204that's why milky tits are the best option
>>181725204Her flavortext says>Now listen up, 'cause this is serious... You're a good kid, and I want to give you a reward. Something special... Here, taste this wine. It's made with my own blood. Taste it, and we'll be bound together forever...
>>181725254Have her pour it from a height into the MC's mouth.
>>181725081Good, that's what I had in mind. Also picking spears as weapons, because easy to make, easy to wield, efficient. Both a long one for melee, and some thrown. Making MC pretty hopeless with ranged weapons due to bad eyesight and no glasses, so he focuses on short range power throws + poisons.Also some ideas about the magic system in this world which will be fairly unique, I hope. Basically no elemental magic. Everything has a "soul" that others can feel if close enough or attuned, it basically lets you have a vague feeling of what emotions others have. Mages mostly affect this, so mages would have magic that demoralize, instill fear, confusion, submissiveness, or buff with bravery, etc... Very powerful ones could affect whole armies with this.MC, being from Earth, has none of this, so he lacks that sense which everything in that world has, even animals, but he's also invisible to this sense, as he has no "soul". Which would make him immediately alien in a very unsettling manner to anyone that encounters him. MC doesn't know this is a thing in that world for a long time, which is what would let him survive in an area full of dangerous beasts that hunt prey they find with that sense.
>>181725285That's not from my story, that's from the card I posted.
what's the status on the native niggers?
>>181725155>will you go through how uncanny it is?Kinda. My world would have no humans, but all the fantasy species would be closer to humans than normally, so to anything else he'd look like a weird halfbreed of other things.
>>181709155>average height>170cmWHEN WILL THEY LEARN
>>181724983She makes him drink yellowish holy water from some plateThen something about her essence empowering him and that he can always ask for more later on
>>181725456Never. They will never learn.
>>181725494Wouldn't it be better to make him drink the holy water directly from the source?
>>181725291I'm guessing magic has zero relation with however the mc came to that world
>>181724577One of my favorite love epiphany moments in LNs.>I thought back, trying to figure out when this had started. It was probably... right at the beginning. Ever since the time we first met.> I had lived an indistinct life and died an indistinct death. She guided me, a sniveling, moaning mess of regret and self-reproach, and silently showed me the path. Each time my knees shook and gave way and I could no longer walk, she turned around and waited patiently for me, the flame of her lantern shining a light on the dark road forward. Back then, I didn’t know her face or anything else about her. And that memory was now a part of my previous life, and all in a haze. I couldn’t even remember unless I came here. But ever since then...>“I have always loved you.”
>>181725556Right, he comes to that world as a complete fluke, and realizes right away that there is absolutely no way back, since he's actually a "copy" of himself in our world.
>>181725541That's for later onLoyalty given cheaply isn't as satisfying
Katakana is so confusing. What's a peshito?
>>181725706Nevermind, its pet
>>181724465Chapter 12 SOON probably Saturday evening. https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/21816/lucid
>>181725602His devotion to gracefeel is just so genuine, pure even, mighty powerful stuff.
>>181725541Why is it so hot to let a weak girl dominate you? There's just something extremely alluring to willingly give someone else control without them taking it by force.
>>181724983She sounds like a total slut. A demi-god character I wrote when I was basically going through chuunibyou in high school took the form and persona of an eternal JK. The first time she blessed the MC, she played coy and had him close his eyes before giving him an innocent peck on the lips. Although, I like to think what happened next was fairly original on my point of view.
>>181725500>In that way, she pounded her massive chest.Ok, I am preorder-ing it.
>>181725969Manga in a week as well.
>>181725602>>181725782Source? Sounds cool.
>>181726237Faraway Paladin, all volumes are on nyaa and goddess.
>>181697906>>181697933This is some legitimately impressive art.
>>181726321The girls always look strangely out of place in it.
>>181700789Not if fantasy NATO cocksblock him.
>34 chapters in >no actual smutHey now RR, what's that tag doing there if there's NO DICK IN THE PUSSY
>>181727313try literotica? Are there isekai stories there to begin with?I'll check tomorrow.
>>181727482Might as well, already digged the bottom of the barrel.
I've been reading Last Boss, and the MC's name really irritates me. The seven heroes, luminaries and 12 stars all have astrological names, but Ruphas doesn't fit the trend. However some translations call her Lufasu or something like that, which seems like engrish Lucifer, which would fit. But the author has managed to explain all the names and mythology, including the alternate name for Capricorn, so it doesn't seem like he would make such a stupid mistake. Can some raw reader tell me if Ruphas is correct, or if the author/translator messed her name up?
Hot dang 3 days until we get a new MoL chapter lads.
>>181727625I'm ready for things to go catastrophically wrong before they get better. Prepare for cliffhangers.
>>181727661As long no one i like bites the dust, shit can go sideways for all i care desu.Also goddamn cliffhangers, nobody really knows how to make em.
>>181727546rufus is latin for red, so it's probably just a reference to her character's color scheme
>>181727546Ruphas translates as the red, a colour associated with heroes, wisdom and sacrifice, beauty and wealth. All of them are attributes of Ruphas.
>>181727546>However some translations call her Lufasu or something like that, which seems like engrish Lucifer, which would fitI always considered it a weird Japanese anagram. Like Louise Cypher, or maybe something closer to Mukuro = Kuromu.
>>181721738You don't need an infodump. The human brain likes puzzles. Having to figure out what the world is like is half the fun in many series with the other half being exploring the world. Make your little series bible and then sprinkle the details throughout the chapters themselves.Then get called a hack making it up as you go along.
Is it good? I read the manga and it's quite okay.https://www.novelupdates.com/series/black-summoner/
>>181724891>not a 6 and a half year old half orc maiden
>>181728388Its pretty good, doesn't really pick up until way past where the TL is at now though.
>>181724125He has predatory eyes. Looking down at me.The beast has yet to make a move though.Alto looking into me,I felt really ashamed, like the woman part of me was licked.Though this should be restrained. He brought his face down to my crotch. I reflectively tried to close my legs, however my legs were easily opened.There is a massive difference in muscular strength.Exposing my privates to Alto.Allowing him to play with my genitals.He started relentlessly enjoy my taste with his tongue.I did not think it was uncomfortable so far.In fact,I think it feels a bit pleasant.My feelings were only about the fear of what would happen after, and the shame/awkwardness about having him between my legs.Before long,the main event started to begin.Saliva and some kind of liquid coated my vagina.My waist was grasped by him and held me there, I couldn’t move it was like being held by a machine. Then something I felt was around my genitals,it was being lined up to it.Ouch,uuu. Something just teared.My back jumped due to the pain.He kept me in place as I could feel it entering me and he continued pushing it inside and tearing my hymen.The movement was finally starting to move.However Alto wasn’t moving.I am the only one moving up and down.Fidgeting cause of the pain.He held me in his arms and shifted my position. Alto was lower my waist while still holding me. He continued moving me many times.Moving on this guys thing, gradually moving me up and down,the motion started producing swelling and my tense continued.He looked down at me emotionless as I was pretty much a masturbation sleeve moving up and down teasing.
>>181727893>Name?Цикл "Как по заказу" Плотникова
Are you guys ready for more Kim today?
I'm bored and need something to write in between my main isekai so things don't get stale.Thinking I'll write a smut isekai, with MC becoming a monster of some kind, and deciding to Re:Monster the new world.Question is, what would be a good monster to pick, that isn't generally "the strongest thing around", like a dragon or minotaur, but is still rather threatening?
>>181729288Japanese style Kobold.
>>181729288Make him an orc but the mc is beta as fuck and starts going crazy trying to suppress his rape instinct
how to get an account on madokami
Any good isekai VNs besides eternity sword series?
>>181729288Some sort of chimera. Large cat's powerful forelimbs (for feline penile barbs), goose wings for flight (disposable corkscrew duck rapist penis), wolf head (contributing a dog knot to our penis), horse hind legs (for length), and a bull's body (for virility). Slap all those things together and it is pretty fucking threatening.
>>181729479>not a horse head
>>181729505Wolf head is more threatening than a horse head. Horse hind legs are more practical. Unless you want to minmax and go for giraffe legs, but now the chimera looks like a clown.
>>181727546All I know is that her last name is very similar to a demon duke.
>>181729288Depends what you want to do with him. Is it going to be something with evolutions into higher grade monsters, in which case it's best to have an idea of what you want him to end up as, or is he going to be the same monster the whole time. If you do the former it better take forever for him to achieve even the most basic of upgrades because 5 chapters between asspull powerups is why I drop shit
>>181729449Yumina the Ethereal is pretty fun
>>181729049>ПлотниковаHuh. Tried his 'cobweb of light' before and shit was somehow absolutely crazy and extremely boring at the same time.
>>181729569If you were going to get raped by a kobold (dog-head), orc, centaur, fairy (celtic), griffon, or my chimera dong, which one would you fear getting raped by the most?The chimera, of course. The chimera is the sublimation of man's imagination, and greatest fears. Its form is chaotic, but horrifyingly efficient. The original chimera was a lion, a goat, and a snake slapped into one. We can go beyond that, like a sick joke taken too far.
>>181729652Actually, "Паутина Света" best fic i read.
>>181729323What, so a not-werewolf goblinoid?>>181729336An orc was actually my first idea (after deciding Dragons and Minotaurs were too naturally strong to fake any kind of challenge), so that's on the table.Him wanting to fight with his insatiable desire to rape and breed with any humanoid could make for a neat plot point.>>181729377Now that's a pretty broad category on its own.Which kind did you have in mind exactly?>>181729366Some form of Centaur doesn't sound bad.>>181729479Chimera are an interesting idea to go with.Not entirely sold on the idea tho.>>181729688>I was reincarnated as a knot
>>181729836Good for you.>>181729929>>I was reincarnated as a knotPerfect.
>>181729929https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fairy#ChangelingsIt'd be interesting reading about a false human raping humans and replacing their children.
>>181729929Oh god, I didn't expect the chimera idea to be considered, I was joking for the most part. I just saw the word "Re:Monster" and went, "well, if you want to get fucked and have the ability to modify your body (limited skill-taking), a chimera could probably do it."
>>181730005Literal cuckolding huh.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cuckoo#Brood_parasitism
>needed a literal Putin Isekai to get an MC who thinks slavery is bad and doesn't just leave them collaredWell okay
>>181730005Ah, a changeling could be a fun idea.Well, the fairies idea has me thinking I could go full animism or something, becoming the soul of some item or idol with an associated fairy. Well, I'll keep the idea in mind.>>181730064Well that's fine.Looking it over, I did think a monster that could assimilate other beasts might be horrifying, but I wasn't sure of how I'd go about telling that kind of story as anything other than pure horror.
>>181729049>there is an entire section dedicated to LitRPG on that one Russian book sharing site>I feel really uncomfortable reading that shit in my native language and settle for unedited one chapter a month JP-to-KR/CN-to-EN translations instead
does anyone know the exact name of the trope where they simply refer to something they're keeping secret from the reader as "that"we must do "that"I must use "that" techniqueit's time for "that"
>>181729975>Good for you.Yes, of course.>>181730370>>there is an entire section dedicated to LitRPG on that one Russian book sharing siteI know. Most of them not good. Well, as most of books at all.
>>181730370Also, "Web of Light" not LitRPG.
>>181730443I noticed cinemasins likes to use "the pronoun game" to denote that sort of shit. Otherwise I don't really hear about it.
>>181730443Oh, it's "that" trope
>>181730443I mostly know it as the pronoun game.TvTropes seems to call it Pronoun Trouble.
>>181730608the problem is that that refers to concealing gender, but the thing i'm talking about are when they're referring to things like strategies, techniques and objects
https://twitter.com/arii7777/status/1070664702781349888This is a pretty funny thread, the guy is one of the judges for an isekai writing competition in Japan.>I read 20 consecutive novel abstracts where the story starts with the protagonist being hit by a truck or a train and waking up in a different world.
>>181731497In their defense. Getting killed by a truck or train in Japan is a legit form of death.
I need new isekai material to read. (Preferably illustrated)
>>181729288Alraune. Tentacles + Aroma therapy.
>>181721268Devil's evolution catalog AKA the story of a fat chink nerd becoming a queen bee for demonkind.
>>181732743Yeah. It was an unusable idea.
>>181733553What?The problem I find when trying to write anIsekai is that: case 1: the hero has some meaningful power and the story becomes wish fulfillmentcase 2: the hero is powerless and the story becomes horror.
>>181729288So noted what people said so far.Being supremely indecisive, I'll leave things to the magical post count.1-7 is Kobold to Alraune (in order they were suggested)For 8-9 I picked a couple random monsters. (Giant & Golem)What if it's 0? I'll just isekai myself.
>>181721444You're talking like writing isekai requires any effort in the first place
>>181734221... I think lovedoll golems were in the pornomancer guide book, but otherwise, it would be tough to do anything very lewd with say, an iron golem.
>>181721268Against the Gods, my first Chink web novel.Never knew how much I'll like it.
Libra is love, Libra is life
>>181734438Yeah, wasn't sure about how I'd go with golems, but figured it was more of a weird kind of earth spirit that could craft parts to attach to itself and become very complex over time.Well, guess I'm going with a kobold, so it's fine.
>>181735306A mud golem that works as a portable bath ... could be lewd.An anthropomorphized puppy as MC ...perhaps he is raised in the countryside by a foxwoman, and learns magic from her?
Alright lads. You get isekai’d and you get a choice of two elements. One from the Dark or Light element, and one from Fire/Water/Earth/Lightning/Wind. Which do you pick?
>>181735558Dark and Wind.>Stand in front of you in the shadows>Use wind attack to hit you from behind.Nothing personal.
>>181735558Light and water. I’ll have the most OP healing powers and became a Paladin for the Church. I’ll become the Messiah.
>>181735558dark and lightningi just want to force lightning shit
>>181735558Why would anyone choose anything other than Wind? You can fucking fly with it. What can you do with fire and lightning besides incinerate shit? Earth might be okay if you can literally move the ground and make trees and shit but id still take Wind. Water is redundant if you choose light since they’re both healing elements.
>>181735643Seconded; I want power to not die, not power to kill others.
>>181735712>What can you do with fire and lightning besides incinerate shitunlimited power
>>181735712Electromagnetism powers are way fucking better than Wind.
>>181735736should invest more in defense and mobility then
>>181733630Did the MC ever manage to fertilize frans eggs?
>>181735558None of you picked dark and fire. Shameful. If you're gonna have elemental powers, might as well go for the max chuuni.
>>181735538Sounds good, yeah.Figured being reborn is part of some reward from a kobold goddess for saving her Earthling offspring (a clueless dog wandering into traffic), but his Kobold parents end up abandoning him due to not having enough food for the winter. Passing Kitsune finds herself in need of an assistant, and figures a kobold would make a suitable helper.Things go from there.
>>181735558Fire and Water.I'll become the literal embodiment of /out/ with my ultimate ability to start campfire with ease and get water that isn't contaminated with germs.
>>181736351You'd probably still die because you lack a good amount of brain cells.
>>181736256If the kobold pack and the kitsune share territory, it might be more appropriate for him to be offered up to her as formal tribute.
Man, Libra is hardcore in many ways.
>>181735712>You can fly>What can lightning do?Strike you with lightning as you fly.
>>181736706PURGE ALL THE WHITE WINGS
>>181735712You can theoretically turn yourself into light particles with light magic and essentially teleport. Way better than flying.
>>181736896>AllThat would kill Virgo.
>>181736595My concern is, if the kitsune is his mother-figure, the transition to /ss/ could be jarring, whereas servant to student to /ss/ has less squick.Traditional rivals of the fox are raven, bear, and cat, so our hero could learn swordsmanship from a tengu, farming from a bear, and thief skillz from a cat.
>>181737097PURGE EVERYONE WHO WOULD STAND IN RUPHAS-SAMA'S WAY
>>181737008>turn yourself into light particlesSee, when you ask people to define their powerset with one of 5-7 generic elements, you end up with limitless possibilities if you don't predefine the setting for each element.Water element; what does it do? Does it let you just move around water? What about solutions of water? How dilute does the water have to be before you can't control it anymore? Some settings include "Healing" in Water magic, so is that possible? What can and can't it heal? If it can cure disease, can it cause it? If it can manipulate biology, can it thus allow someone to increase their muscular power? Can I literally turn into water and back, or does the turning back require Human Element?etc etc…
>>181725124That's a lot of wew lad worthy material right there.
This is going to bite her back for sure.
>>181737117>if the kitsune is his mother-figureKitsune could still raise him as a servant/student, even if he was given as a tributary offering. She could already have other household kobold servants from other offerings that do most of the child rearing as nannies, and MC just has an unusual amount of mana so she takes him on as a student>learn swordsmanship from a tengu, farming from a bear, and thief skillz from a cat.Doesn't sound like a bad idea.
>>181697933No chechnia symbols on the lich?
>>181737313is that shaggy?
>>181724531Paladin gonna breed with his goddess? I never knew I wanted that fetish.
>>181727546Speaking of Last Boss - We Dark Souls nao.
>>181737753>YFW you just moved from low-level noob area and A Wild Last Boss Appeared!
>>181737823>Can't take the final boss at SL1 with a +0 weapon and precious few itemsGit gud
Should a dragonborn and kitsune be able to produce offspring? And if so should the kitsune lay an egg or produce a child normally? Asking for writing isekai
>>181737823Those guys are wetter than the Amazon rainforest now.
>>181737976Dragonborn can interbreed with anything.They produce an egg by crafting a jeweled necklace that is to be worn by their partner, and then that jewel gradually grows into the egg.
>>181724531She was much cuter in the books. This one doesn't even look as pretty as William's Elf Bro.
New Otome Mob WN chapter. Took this from the person who posted last thread. Claire continues her beauty treatment side business in the capital with her meat avatar to great success. Middle age women now flock there because they need to put effort in to their appearance. Livia and Anjie get a coupon by chance and show up, making her panic that she's going to get caught. So she resolves to make them even sexier to Leon's tastes. She also plans on giving Marie a makeover to make her more attractive to Leon because she still want those old human genes to breed like Luxon used to.Meanwhile, trap fuckboy from the 3rd game collects enough money to become a real girl. Claire is in a hurry to finish the process before Leon gets back to school.And lastly, mentioned in the last chapter, we got confirmation that demihuman love slaves are no longer allowed in the academy since Leon's older sister's catboy betrayed them all to the Republic. This means all those girls suddenly realize just how rare human men are when they can't go home to elf dick every night.Also the AI's meat puppet body is a tall and slender woman with a chest that's neither big or small, intelligent looking with glasses and long black hair. So basically Bayonetta. Hopefully Luxon forces Claire to make it a body, one that's tailored to Leon's taste.
>>181697906search mangadex for putinfind political memoir of a japanese spy/diplomat during the soviet breakup with art by Junji Itoit's actually pretty interestingsome japanese ambassador guy saved about 10,000 jewish lives by issuing transit visas during ww2
>>181738251https://mangadex.org/title/21537/rasputin-the-patriotHnG have some great series
>>181737753>>181737823kekWN also updated too, nice.
>>181730443MESSIAH, WE NEED TO BUILD A DEFENSIBLE STRUCTURE QUICKLY, WHAT DO WE DO?Why don't you use those earth magicians over there? You can make walls and a moat literally by magic. YOU MEAN EARTH MAGIC, WIDELY CONSIDERED COMPLETELY USELESS FOR THE BATTLEFIELD, COULD BE USED TO MAKE EARTHEN FORTS? INCREDIBLE, NO ONE IN OUR HISTORY COULD HAVE EVER COME UP WITH SUCH A PLAN, YOU TRULY ARE THE MESSIAH!
A Libra chapter. Nice.
>>181738251Go look up Ride On King if you want to experience the adventures of comrade Purshcinov.
>>181737753>>181737823This is obviously a scripted loss event. Git gud Yuusha-sama.
>>181737753Reminds me of the T-Rex right outside the first city in FF12, thing is docile as fuck unless you go out of your way to trigger it, then it mauls you. It can also be made into the strongest mob in the game if you feed it wolves in the area.
>>181738421I'm still reading Wortenia in spite of the Ryoma cocksucking getting increasingly hilarious as the story goes on.
>>181738714Oh shit that one levels up?
>>181738549Fluffy sheep is still the best grill.
oh hey, that boss character from a few chapters ago that killed hundreds of your comrades is now a sinless cute girl that only wants MC's dick.
>>181738777Yeah, you just have to drag wolves towards it and it'll use Cannibalize on them.
>First chapter of Isekai>Starts with a Male MC>He almost gets anally raped.Based.
>>181738822Dark elf knights are my fetish.
>>181738822Hey, it's a war. Killing goes both ways.
>>181738872>level 300 rabbits
>>181738872>that translationJesus christ, what the fuck?
>>181738963This is survival of the fittest. You either evolve or die.The rabbit choose to evolve.
>>181738988Be not upset. The qality of the translation has no adverse effect on this story whatsoever.
>>181739090I doubt that.
>>181739132>sell them as slevesis that a hybrid between slave and cocksleeve?
>>181739329>AsanagiAre you blind? Look into their eyes. Those are not Asanagi girls.
>>181739132Funny how the first chapter translated by the french team is legible, and the second one's translated by a group that can't even fucking spell "SCANS" correctly in their group name.
>>181737364Thinking further about it, "Bears are an ancient and proud warrior race, led by a hereditary theocracy." So he could learn priest skills from a bear, as well as monastic practices like gardening.
>>181724406Sorry but I am isekai.
this whole abomination is like reading a train colliding with a dumpster fire.
>>181739420I visited the site with the abysmal translations and I regret nothing.
>>181739685i'm only reading it to watch how far his meltdown goes at this point.
Alright, here's a short bit I got so far.Figured if they're basically little anthropomorphic dogs, their development would sorta mirror dogs?https://ghostbin.com/paste/aqhjx
>>181735242>Haren Seeking Protagonist tag>no Harem tag>Rape Victim Becomes Lover tag>no Rape tag>Reverse Rape tag tho
>>181739685I agree, potionloli kind of sucks. Jewloli Mitsuha shares a lot of the flaws, but it is way better.
>>181739685>The translator started adding those huge infodump notes because people on mangadex were complaining about the translation quality and asking dumb questions that had already been answered in previous chaptersGod damn that's so funny to me.
>>181740252to be fair, the answer to a lot of those questions boils down to the protagonist being an idiot.
>>181740538and the author being a hack
>>181741086>>181740538That's the funniest part, the translator's reaction is basically "NO YOU DON'T UNDERSTAND AUTHOR-SENSEI'S BRILLIANCE HERE IS MY LONG WINDED EXPLANATION REEEEEE".
Miko MCs are surprisingly rare in isekai.
>>181741328There are stories of Miko being called up to heaven, but they tend to be romances and not adventure stories.
>>181739420Oh, this seriesthe mc goes all I JUST WANT TO LIVE A QUIET LIFE and the moment he sees a noble, he starts dropping nukes on bandits and fixes their entire magic system and it was really dumb and I couldn't be arsed to read more
>>181741772I want a series which the MC conquers the world with the power of their modern japanese knowledge
>>181743037 What is Isekai Mahou?
>>181724983I never understood the authors who specifically have the god or goddess giving the MCs cheats and powers and reincarnating them like why? I admit I've enjoyed insurmountable trashy isekai but this cliche trope has always been such a turn off for some reason I don't know. Maybe for me just the pure tenni and tensei feel more natural?
>>181730443>Does not fuck the twins even though they want it>Fucks a random maid insteadHoly shit MC what the fuck are you doing?
>>181743443It's generally just an explanation for "Why am I in this other world? Why do I have this cheat?"Of course, most stories just leave it at that, and don't have any explanation for WHY the god(dess) would bother with explicitly reincarnating you, beyond "Oops, I made a mistake. Here's some compensation." Put like that, I guess it feels like a rich businessman's limo accidentally bumping into you, and apologizing by giving you a billion dollars.I do have a few instances where a god meets with the MC before reincarnating/transferring, but in those cases it's because the god is some kind of trickster playing with human lives, or it's a whole chosen one thing, where the god picks out some heroes to go do some hero-ing. Not much better, but I feel that gives the god being there more value than just "Woopsy. As an apology, go do whatever you want in my garden."
>Enemy demoness is much stronger than him>Runs away immediately to train>Leaving the town to its doom
>>181743682If the town dies it can be rebuiltIf the hero dies the world is doomed, he's getting back to his hyperbolic time chamber.
>>181743682I want to see this girl. She's wearing some interesting cloths.
>>181743682Oh, that one. I remember translations being posted here, was it ever properly scanlated anywhere? And what was the name?
>>181743682Well, if the town was doomed even he stayed, running away is entirely sensible option>>181743814https://mangadex.org/title/31942/kono-yuusha-ga-ore-tueee-kuse-ni-shinchou-sugiru/comments/ lolI tried searching before but despite anon saying that he's cleaning the raws, I couldn't find him releasing it anywherehttps://www.boredomsociety.xyz/reader/22/1 here's someone doing it, I guess it could be the anon but it's a little different so idk
>Come for Putin isekai>Thread derailed into isekai generalEvery fucking time
>>181744120well sorry but we have to wander around like a band of gypsies to avoid mods
>>181744070>yet another series drowning in scanlator dramaLovely.
>>181744120>derailedWithout us the thread would be dead.
>>181744120Every isekai thread belong to us.
>>181745332>Not all your isekai thread are belong to usONE JOB
>Tina continues being a miracle of the universeIt should be illegal to be this cute.
>>181746316He did good by ditching those two thots and captain asshole.
>>181746422At least dad sword has Fran and is getting used for proper sword stuff, like making curry and tucking his wielder into bed.
>>181746526>Oh I haven't checked that one in a while, let's take a look on NU>recommendations>He, who was an authentic Vending Machine maniac, died from a traffic accident while protecting a vending machine. He, who had expected that his life was finished, woke up in a lake shore surrounded by abundant nature. He didn’t understand what had happened to himself. He only knew that he had become a vending machine. How the fuck do they come up with this shit
>>181747062I'll admit it was amusing for a while, but the novelty wears off. It's nice he can talk (limited to automatic responses like "Welcome", "You won a free drink", "Insufficient change", etc), but after a while he becomes a changeling vending machine of sorts, able to convert his body into whatever substance he wants at will. Same applies to the products he peddles.
>>181746316Where can I find a Tina?
>>181747321>As she hugged me, they bounced. Every time she jumped, this shortstack’s deadly weapons slapped against my stomach. Please stop, I’ll really die this time.IMAGINE
>I indirectly supplied Claire-sama with the concept of Japanese democracy to help her with understanding.Rei, no, stop, bad Rei, bad.
>>181747262so he eventually turns human?
>>181746422Source? Gettin no results.
>Dylan's Jester skills are even more potent as a Great SageToo OP pls nerf.
>>181747768Sages are pretty damn overpowered in DQ so it makes sense he'd be overpowered as one.
it's fucking friday, TNE when?
>With an icy, emotionless, mask-like face, the automatic doll continued observation from the sky. In case of emergency, the physical data, facial features, and habits of everyone were saved in her memory.Slow down Libra.
>>181747699No. For example, he converts his vending machine body into card board, and his products into propane or helium or something. After floating over the dungeon boss's head, he changes his body and products into the heaviest substances possible, and turns that motherfucker into part of the statistic of people killed by vending machines. Although I stopped reading around ch30, I don't think he has.
>>181747939same kim time, same kim channel
>“I got sucked up into the light of Dylan-san’s dance, then the fireball went wooooosh, and then everything got turned into a big mess, but it was really pretty!”Hnnnnng
>>181740082Added a "Next Chapter" link at the bottom.Ch2 is mostly exposition, I guess. Wanted to get out a Ch3, but I'm sleepy now.The chapter divisions are kinda arbitrary tho.
>>181748109What novel is this?
Oh god, another tirade on "being a homo ain't wrong" in IFV.
>>181748498Well, they wrong, obviously.
>>181748498I'll take that over the "another lesbian falls for Rei arc" we're about to enter. Seriously, where the fuck are they all coming from? How the fuck did Rei not remember at least the other lesbians in the game?
>>181748595Mega Lesbo was a footnote but Manaria's case is pretty weird.
>>181748595it really doesn't make sense that she wouldn't remember the lesbian characters in a game she obsessed over, especially that princess who is the childhood friend of her waifu claire.
>>181748638>>181748779I could maybe understand forgetting the priestess girl being one, but Manaria is the strongest person in the setting and has a good relationship with Claire.
How many pages this author makes a day?
>>181748638Manaria was a footnote, all that was written about Lily was that she had a secret. Which makes me wonder if the otome game wasn't meant to receive a yuri spinoff.
>>181724531Saihate Paladin is quite a soulful isekai.>>181697906Ride-on King Putin is moe.>lich riding an undead dragonThat princess noble from the city should give up, can she even up the stakes when Putin already has to face so many high-level opponents even before he reached the centaurs?
>>181749176>Manaria was a footnote>Now that we’re on this topic, I remembered her setting from the setting materials.Manaria-sama in the game fell in love with the protagonist.>That’s why Manaria-sama supported her.Since I had a poor impression of Manaria-sama in this world, it completely slipped my mind.Doesn't sound like a footnote to me.
>>181749691I guess it depends on what's the metaphorical footnote is. I'd say a profile in setting materials qualify as one.
>>181749992It's hard to tell because Rei literally only cared/cares about Claire, to the detriment of everything else.
>>181738251are there any Isekai or genuine series about spies and espionage?I know there are plenty of assassins but what about intelligence seeking?
Fucking TV Licence dogs are even in my isekai manga.
>>181750205Wait, is Sahyuk the one writing the shitty WN?
>>181750205Finally, now the threads will be back to speed.Gonna miss the late night RR talk tho.
>boss reads isekaiboss ITT
>>181750727Is this an edit or are they really fighting over a tv license
>>181750205I missed you lads. Didn't expect him to find out that boss killed his parents this fast
>—Meow~It's been a while we'd seen Hayang
>>181749303>don't talk to me or my children ever again.jpg
>>181750727Is this an UK isekai?
>>181750791while it definitely sounds like it could be her self insert OC, i'd have to wonder why she'd be wasting time writing a WN
>>181751024Seems like its getting the writer a ton of easy TP.
>>181751024>i'd have to wonder why she'd be wasting time writing a WNWhy not? it is money.
>The banshee’s curse led to death unless treated immediately. It wasn’t just a singular death, but a true death.>This curse prevented Players from leaving the Tower and caused them to slowly suffer for up to three months before dying.>Being able to revive didn’t mean anything. The curse wasn’t lifted upon death and even followed Players to their respawn locations.i might get hopeful if i didn't already know nayun's wild ride never ends
>Yoo Yeonha bit her lips. Then, she moved her swing once again.>Kiik, kiik.>Her swing swayed, the wind blew, and leaves fell. Time passed until she was ready again…>“…Um.”>“Yeah?”>Yoo Yeonha looked at me and asked.>“Have you heard of the Chameleon Troupe?”Can't wait for her to literally cough blood on Hajin as she forces herself to recant everything .
>>181725500Who would you trust with saving the world more, a smooth criminal and his two precious, lethal weapon carrying cinnamon buns or a wannabe chad and two thots he's not even fucking?
>>181752351Tina was so stupidly cute this chapter.
>>181739470Bear Skills:Fishing Beekeeping Gardening Forestry Animal Husbandry: ChickensPrayer Knowledge: the godsWeapon Skill: Axe (One handed + 2 handed)Swimming DIsmantling Prey
>>181752351>a smooth criminalTina are you okay? Tina are you okay? Are you okay Tina?
>>181752377I want to see her dancing in the manga
>>181752351I love shortstacks, but how bad is the self-insert MC cocksucking in this story?
>>181752867He's pretty fun, I like his schtick.
>>181752867So far it's Tina gushing waterfalls and everyone being "YOOO, BRO, HAVEN'T SEEN YOU IN A LONG TIME".
>>181750974NHK requires a license too, apparently.https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/NHK#License_fee
>>181752963>>181752959I'll take your word for it and give it a read. I held off since there seems to be a DQ reference I could barely understand in the title, and having never played a DQ game in my life, I was wondering how much I'd miss because of that.
>>181744070who did the TL in this thread?https://boards.fireden.net/a/thread/180873791/#180873791
>>181753181his name appears to be Anonymous, maybe try googling for it?
>>181753181did the guy typesetting ever finish?
>>181753162It's not too heavy on the DQ. The main thing is that the jester/gadabout becoming a Sage is a DQ reference.
>>181752867It's really hard to write him off as a self-insert cocksucking adventure since he's earned his status and he even hates the fact that he automatically acts like Austin Powers since it alienates him from the opposite sex when they have any self respect.
>>181753791He also hates how it leads on more naive girls, which is what he's worried is happening to Tina.
>>181747742witch printing office
>>181754001>>181753791So why's he do it?
>>181754485Because he can't control it. A side effect of the Jester job class.
>>181754485It's a passive class skill. He can't actually turn it off.
>>181754485Because the job system forces certain behaviour on you automatically. He's a jester/playboy so he flirts with women and performs tricks against his will.
>>181754485Quirk of his class, he literally can't help but showboat and flirt with women even in battle, it still persists even after his switch.
Rei startled the witch.
>>181754596>You will never be literally magically compelled to act in a way that covers you in short big tiddy bitchesGee I wish I had his problems.
>>181755105She's getting dragged off to Claire's rape dungeon after this.
>>181755172I dunno, having to hang around the cunts in his old party wouldn't be fun
>>181748241"memories in tact"< memories intactposition I held in this "live" < life
You know, looking at it, I wonder how Leon remembered how to speak Japanese. Considering how much of his second life he pretty much didn't use it.
>>181755292I haven't read it yet, but it sounds like the cunts in his old party clearly didn't like him much, wasn't he booted or something?
>>181755632I don't know man, forgetting your mother language is not easy
>>181750727>accidently goes into the dungeon and immediatly tries to sell tv subscriptions to a random orclel
>>181755919They don't sell something, they enforce the pseudio-tax of an assumed amenity.
>>181750727is that the one with a white slime?
>>181735558Dark and lightning, give me that edge.
>>181756126Fire and Dark is the edge combo, Dark and Lightning is just the shonen protag with mysterious path combo ala Rimuru.
>>181735558Light and Lightning. Electromagnetism shall be mine!
>>181755632I doubt he could do a fluent conversation but it's way easier to understand something than speak it
>An Active Hunter in Hokkaido has Been Thrown into a Different World
>>181755671The king called upon the Adventure's Guild to dispatch their mightiest members on an expedition to suppress the demon lord. The guild answered, "and how will you be paying?"The king said; "We will praise the survivors as heroes!"So he got what he paid for; 2 narcissists, a zealot, and a jester who actually thought the mission was important and didn't need money.
>>181756867I'm not the anon you replied to, but you got a laugh out of me. Guess I owe the series a look.
>>181756856I always get the strong urge to just translate one chapter for a laugh when I see absurd premises like these.
>>181756971The series starts just after that mission failed.
>>181757061and then you like it and get stuck translating more series than you can manage
>>181757202I think I'd get tired of giving the protagonist a thick redneck accent after one chapter, but it'd be a good one off gag.
>Nicole gets to see Yuuri>We don't see YuuriI feel cheated
>>181721444I started writing my own isekai.kinda wish it wasn't shit, the MC get's hit by the bus he was waiting to board, and capital-G God sends him to deal with stopping the goddesses He appointed to run some planet from getting hit with a coup attempt -- they aren't terribly powerful in the grand scheme of things, being neither omnipotent nor omnipowerful, but they are doing a good job, beyond the growing cult trying to dethrone them and take their placeGod Himself is lazy as shit, but from his perspective, it doesn't matter when something gets done, just that it gets done, so He sends people on adventures like this all the time to do jobs like this for Him.it's got issues, I need to actually scope out the scale and level of what powers the cast has, it's got unfortunate isekai "MMO" mechanics because I was really lazy when I started it, the MC's main partner is this clockwork-cyborg birdman and the MC's all over getting cyborg parts but I really need to figure out how the setting should workas it stands now, most people only use small augmentations for work, or so they can cast more, or health reasons and society is maybe a bit too modern (like, they're city-states, and the bit between cities is full of monsters and shit, but the cities themselves are fairly large and suitably defended) for an adventure seriesthe only story I've been working on that seems any good is a magical girl seriesand that copies Ojamajo Doremi really hard (the general "examination" structure in Doremi set the stage for how the main fights were spaced out, the way their spells work is largely identical to in Doremi, etc, etc) but isn't full of good life lessons like Doremi was and it's not nearly as down-to-earthadmittedly, it's also the one I've had the most concrete plan with -- I only really figured out where I was heading with my isekai story like a week ago, and I really think I need to rethink and rewrite huge chunks of what's happening
>>181721444I don't know why the write fags here have so little confidence. if some soulless, shovelware isekai can get a following through a shitty translation I don't see why an earnest attempt from an amateur can't do the same.
>>181756856does he keep the gun
>>181756856those ears are way too big
>>181735558what do light and dark even do? It seems that they're just elements you can slap any power you feel like on
>>181758543What have you got against knife ears?
>>181758330Word honestly most anons are nice and give good feedback.
>>181758578Dark is usually debuffs, sometimes Shadow or Phantasm.Light is healing, divination, sometimes illusion, sometimes UV burn rays.
>>181758640They killed cute magical girls.
>>181758640Out of all of the fantasy girls you could want elves are the absolute worst.
>>181759573I'd rather an elf than a zombie.
>>181760245Elves can't give you neckstump reverse blowjobs.
>>181760245Just think of all the perverse lewd things you could do to a zombie that no other girl could survive.
>>181760282A dullahan could produce similar results without the mess. Just give me a nice fit monster girl to bridal carry me or to rub my penis on her abs.
>>181760351Dullahan's like 75% zombie anyway.
what do you think about isekai protag with seemingly useless power that turned to be OP? like actually worthless shit like can make delicious food in 5 minutes, can dig holes or can give a good night sleep
>>181761785>digging holes is a useless power.What did he mean by this?
>>181761785>digging holes is a useless power
>>181761989>>181761958>seemingly useless power that turned to be OP
>>181761958IIRC, he had the power to dig holes and was maligned for it, so then dug a hot spring and became a spa manager. Coincidentally, an ancient dragon was sealed in the ground he dug through, and he killed it with his well, then bathed in it's blood, becoming mighty.
>>181760351>artist actually draws monter girls with monstrous features
>>181761785>>181761958>>181761989I've seen a couple novels where digging / the ability to make pitfalls is considered a shit ability.Of course this is due to retarded reasons and the pitfall one even evolves into a black hole by overlapping pitfalls.
>>181761785Try naming actually worthless shit. Your abilities you listed are practical. A worthless ability would be like the ability to see through eyelids. Or Lex Luthor's ability from Smallville, which prevents him from growing hair completely. It's stupid shit like people underestimating the good shit that pisses me off. Smartphone isekai pisses me off with how it paraded "useless" magic at the start. Like fuck, those spells are basic concepts that can be applied to multiple situations. Fuck.
>>181761785>can make delicious food in 5 minutes, can dig holes or can give a good night sleepwhich series is this referring to?
>>181762200It's more like he's taking ques from Kenkou Cross's Monster Girl Encyclopedia, isn't it? Or draw
>>181762308>Or draw*Or drawing the girls outright.
>>181762259Any ability can be shit if restrictions and limitations are proper placed. But yeah rarely is there truly just a shit base ability that doesn't somehow turn into a god-tier OP one.
>>181762308This, and KC's monstergirls are hit and miss. Some look great, others look like bad cosplay with oversized animal-themed booties and mittens.
>>181762200Sometimes god gives us small miracles.
>>181761785The shit you listed is actually useful. That's pretty common as well, the MC having a 'useless' power, but he's actually OP. It would be both more interesting and more creative if the MC had an actually useless power and instead had to use his brain to win.
>I only have a low level healing ability>but I can cheat to make it incredibly powerful>by using my healing ability and reversing the polarity I can un-heal, creating a powerful destructive magic ability!>By healing the air molecules above me I reduce their CO2 content and make them less dense, creating an updraft that enables me to fly!>by healing the 4th dimension I can rewind time, and during the process I can heal my memories so they aren't affected by the rewind, effectively allowing me to travel time backwards with healing magic!
>>181762627>By healing the air molecules above me I reduce their CO2 content and make them less denseif you 'healed' CO2 into O2 and C, the pressure drop would some theoretical amount and a rain of coal powder
>>181762712Maybe I heal-punch your fucking face over the internet for being a damn party pooper if you keep that shit up.
>>181762259Usefulness is in the eye of the beholder. It's hard to strike a balance between useless but incredible. And then there's utility vs combat utility.
>>181761958Everyone knows that the power to dig is worthless without the ability to also sing.https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HI0x0KYChq4
>>181761785If the isekai protag is actually helpless, then you have a horror story. If he has a useful ability, then why was he not enslaved by his summoner? If the summoner is a good person, why are they abducting children and forcing them to fight in war? So the story goes that the summoner is wicked but also stupid, and the protag escapes by concealing his power, deliberately or otherwise.
>>181762627The only acceptable OP healing abuse for me is to overheal someone to the point they develop cancer, tumors, or bone protrusions.>>181762797It's like what Nasu said in an early interview of Fate/Stay Night. A power becomes more powerful and simple if you boil it down to a concept. Digging isn't OP by any means, but if you take the concept of digging, or the ability to dig through any substance, it becomes mighty.
I'll make next thread once this one hits page 6 and up
>>181762627>That fucking healer revenge porn ln/mangaIt was so aggressively bad that I'm actually mad I read so many chapters.
Isekai cheat power but its the ability of having a plan.
>>181762968read it for the porn porn, not for the revenge porn, maybe that makes it more... palatable
Isekai cheat power but its the ability to finish writing a story.
>>181762968Daifuku Jewsushi? Yeah, that one's shit. I prefer The Wrong Way to Use Healing Magic, since it mostly only turns the MC's MP into extra HP and stamina.>>181763038So, basically having Batman conceptualized into a skill that tells you what to do, like Satou's info/decision-making skills.
>>181762903Almost posted this instead. Good taste, anon.
This has to be a fucking parody. It's so fucking bad holy shit.
>>181763165It's a manga being scanlated by a group that can't spell "scans" in their fucking group name.
>>181763165If you have to ask, chances are it isn't
>>181763263I'm not talking about the translation the whole fucking manga is a piece of condensed aids.
>>181763165Why would a fucking gamer know that the magic contruction formula is wrong? He wasn't a magician, just some fucking dork jesus.
>>181763165If the book is incorrect because someone's manipulating information, I can barely tolerate that. But if it's because magic theory and understanding is faulty, and the people that published it are just dumbasses, it's probably just bad. I really hate it when a person with no understanding of magic suddenly becomes an expert. Even Satou from Death March and Rimuru from Slime has to do periodic experiments to see the limits of their abilities.>>181763263Translation has nothing to do with the story being trash. Just look at the Potion loli debacle.
>>181763301because its the game he played
>>181763301It's been ages since I read it but I think the magic in the game wasn't "I cast fireball" but instead the players constructed their spells using the rules to build a rune or some such and the same system is in use in the isekai
>>181763301The game made you figure out the formulas and then in typical japanese fashion everyone hid the information they figured out from each other.
I'm still waiting for the isekai where the MC actually behaves like an actual person who played video games. Like not giving a shit about lore, running around in underwear while spamming train emotes and blocking the entrance of buildings with his mount.
>>181763331Just because I played Dragon's Dogma doesn't mean I know how to cast magic outside pressing the key on my keyboard that's mapped to the magic spell. >>181763363>>181763358That's RETARDEEEED. And even so, players would just be using predefined patterns designed by the devs, how would they have knowledge of the underlying magical system?>>181763319>>181763292And the translation is fittingly aids to match.
>>181763331Still bullshit unless it's his max level INT is somehow providing that intellectual bulk, but the MC of that story is not even max level, as he still gains EXP. Even then, that excuse is full of shit. Also, even if you knew all the spell names in Final Fantasy, if you got sent into Ivalice, you'd be hard-pressed to know how actual magic works. Magic doesn't exist in our world, so how could we ever know anything about it without some bullshit cheat or excuse?
>>181763411The MC says it best.>Fuck the so called specifications
>>181763319I think the novel made a point that the 'developer' of the book got into shit about his spells being garbageBut here's a thing, the girl's problem with magic that MC solves is that she can't cast spells and the reason for that is that she's actually a fucking awful mage and has no mana probably should focus on something elseBut MC fixes it by making the spells more efficientExcept she's still fucking awful as mage, it's just now there's bunch of spells that require almost no manaMaybe this gets addressed in the story, I couldn't be arsed to read it any more, I'm guessing now
>>181763411It is retarded, but they still made a super autistic magic system. Many people just used some templates everyone figured out while MC clearly had way too much time on his hands.
>>181763411>>181763460why are you so focused on this single thing that actually is sensible in this garbage series?It's literally the same system in the isekai as it was in the gameAnd even if it has been just "Fireball!" in the game, if the devs had written about how the magic system works in the lore and explained the runes in-depth, it would be easy to put into practice once isekai'ed
>>181763641After you've explained, it's actually tolerable to an extent, but the idea that you could create a spell by smashing a bunch of random letters and numbers together is insulting.
>>181763705That's basically magic formulae for enchanting or invoking
>>181763791It's more of a code than a formula, imo. That's what makes it insulting. You can work on a formula. This shit had to be randomly input, and positive results recorded. It's like trying to brute force a bank vault's combination. Retarded.I'm only on ch2 though, so maybe my opinion will change in the next hour.
>>181764195>maybe this pile of horse shit will taste better the more I eat it
>>181764302Right? But I gotta know what I'm talking about to make a proper, educated opinion of why it's shit. No winning. I already eat shit like Death March and Realist Hero, and consume newer, shittier isekai everyday, so it won't kill me, just piss me off.
>>181764400My biggest gripe with death march is that's it's 4/5ths fucking eating.
>>181764461Thats a first
>>181764456I can agree the Miracle Chef shit is annoying, but dang, if the only way to get good food was to make it myself, I'd do it too.>>181764493The space between what and the is there, but there's no space between the and fuck. This kind of shit pisses me off.